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(Katon/raiton: Ikkyou) - Fire/lighting style: Suprise
Type: Attack
Range: Short - long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: +1 rank
Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning. In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:
1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.
2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.
The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.
I changed this from lightning to fire style. I figured that was alls that was wrong with it?
~Approved~ Although, keep in mind that chakra lightning is not the same as natural lightning, therefore, I removed the whole 54,000 degrees Fahrenheit part
I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.
(Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.
Staff abilities:
Indestructable
(Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains one rank when doing so and can go up to mid range.
(Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
Bisento can dispel a Raiton jutsu up to B-Rank once per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff as it was a sword originally that was forged into the staff but only to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)
Resctrictions:
-All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
-When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
-While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't use genjutsu as their chakra will be continuously channeled into the staff when holding it, and so the user can't focus their chakra into the opponent to create the genjutsu as they would normally do.
-To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
-The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.
Removed the hair jutsu useage/bonus
Only adds one rank to peakock wind formation instead of 2
Reworded the bit about using kenjutsu
Explained why i can't use gen (not sure if it counts)
~Approved~ Removed the Doton part. That's just silly. And I changed it to 1 B-rank and 1 A-rank.
(Bukku of Zetsubou: Bundan 1 – Fuu no Matsuro) Book of despair: Chapter 1 – Seal of Fate
Type:Attack
Rank: Gen = A, Seal = A, Fire = forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: gen = 30, seal = 30, fire = 50
Damage: 100
Description: This is the first sealing spell of the Book of despair, written by the dark lord himself. The book of despair is one of 4 books containing ninjutsu “spells” said to be written by the dark lord himself. The book was found many years ago after being lost for thousands of years and is the only one of its kind. The user will always carry this book. The blank pages of the book have the seals on the for fuuin jutsu, to save the user having to carry scrolls. If they are not carrying it, they will have it sealed within a special seal on their hand or glove if they are wearing one. If the book needs to be summoning it will be a part of this jutsu and will cost 10 chakra. Once the book has been summoned the user will break the seal (B rank) on the book opening it to its first spell, the Seal of Fate. There are 3 stages of this seal.
Stage 1: Upon breaking the seal to release this jutsu, the user will chant the ancient words written on the page.
“Let the darkness of hell burn yours soul for eternity”
Upon doing so, the words of this “spell” will cast genjutsu upon anyone within range of this jutsu who can hear it. The illusion spreads around the field of the night, darkness and a red moon. As it does, dark flames erupt from the ground in a square formation mid-range around the user. This gives off the presences of evil that would send chills down a man’s spine. As the illusion is created, the targets will see hands, like those of zombies, come out of the ground grabbing their legs holding them in place. As this genjutsu is a distraction for the second layer of the jutsu. (This genjutsu is A ranked when it comes to breaking it and it spreads across the field pretty fast)
Stage 2: As the dark flames of the illusion spread around the field, kanji formula spread across the floor beneath the flames making a circle of kanji formula all around the user, creating one giant seal on the floor. This can’t be seen as it’s hidden within the genjutsu, which is hard for people to tell that they are in. If the user is in the air the kanji formula will be written in the air, making a sealing circle that stops a person from going underground. If the ground is destroyed the seal remains until broken. (The seal written is A ranked and acts in sync with the genjutsu. If the genjutsu is broken, the sealing circle will still continue but can be seen).
Stage 3: The genjutsu will have been cast distracting the opponent as the seal is set up ready to release the seal of fate. All the kanji formula around the field will light up as a pentagram forms under the targets within the circle so that they are standing on one of the lines. The user will activate the seal by closing the book saying:
“Release, Seal of Fate”
As they do, the seal will release spiralling black flames from all the seals in the pentagram. The users won’t be standing on any of the lines, but all his targets will be. These flames will shoot up long range into the air burning all in their path, leaving nothing but the seal of the dark lord burnt into the ground. The circle of flames is as shown in the image below with the user stood in the middle.
Note: This jutsu takes up 3 of the users jutsu in one turn.
Note: The jutsu can be ended at any time. Each stage takes up one of the user’s jutsu per turn, so if the user ends the jutsu before stage 3, they can still use one more jutsu ect.
Note: The genjutsu is A rank. The seal formed on the floor is A rank. The fire released is forbidden ranked.
Note: The black flames are just normal fire, but the blackness of them is to represent evil in the jutsu.
Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: If the 3rd stage is released, the will feel the heat of the flames himself, though he may not touch the fire, the heat given off is unbelieveably hot and so his skin will still be burnt. As it is, the user will be unable to use any form of taijutsu for 2 turns due to the sourness of his skin and won’t be able to use S ranks or above in his next turn.
Note: The genjutsu spreads around like the first Hokage’s infinity darkness jutsu, and about the same speed, along with the circle of kanji formula.
Note: The 3rd stage can be released at any point, but isn’t as effective as it would be when the full pentagram forms as less area is covered with the jutsu.
Note: The seal itself isn’t forbidden ranked, the fire released from it is, the seal holding the fire is A ranked. Like how jiraiya’s sealing method could hold amaterasu.
Note: No fuuin in the next turn.
Note: The user can't use any other elements while this is active apart from fire. But he can't use the fire in the same turn, because the 3 stages take up the 3 jutsu per turn, unless the user doesn't release the seal in the same turn
~Leaving for Scorps or Emperor~
~ First pick a single rank, then we'll look at this again ~
Well gen isn't my thing so not bothered about first cj xd(Genjutsu: Heki Riariti) Illusion Technique: False Reality
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: S- rank
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a more advanced version of the false darkness genjutsu. The false darkness creates a black illusion taking away one of your senses, sight. This jutsu blocks all 5 senses of the person bound in the genjutsu. The target/targets will not be able to hear anything, alls they will see is blackness, they wont be able to smell anything, they wont be able to taste anything (like this will make a difference? xd) and they wont be able to feel anything when they go to touch it. This technique was perfected to go with the silence homocide jutsu. This jutsu only stops the feel of touch, not the feel of pain. This is used by the user performing one handseals releasing their chakra into the area around them up to mid range.
Note: Useable once
Note: Anyone within mid range can be caught in this illusion
Note: The user of this technique can't use any other jutsu while it is active (doesn't apply to additional bodies/clones)
Note: This lasts for up to 3 turns
Note: Can't use genjutsu for 2 turns after this
Note: Can't use S ranks in the same turn as this (even with clones)
Note: Clones can't use this jutsu.
~Declined~ Overpowered
(Raiton: Ikkyou) - Lightning style: Suprise
Type: Attack
Range: Short - long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: +1 rank
Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning itself (30,000 °C (54,000 °F)). In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:
1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.
2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.
The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.
~Declined~ Pervy, why is this a Lightning Release technique?
I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.
(Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.
Staff abilities:
Indestructable
(Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains two ranks when doing so and can go up to mid range.
(Hari Jizou) - Underworld Guardian Spikes (B rank nin) gains two ranks when the users is holding the staff and the hair will wrap around the staff handle too. When the user has the staff in hand or on their back, the jutsu doesn't require handseals.
(Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
Bisento can dispel a Raiton or Doton jutsu up to B-Rank 2 times per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton/Doton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton/Doton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff, to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)
Resctrictions:
-All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
-When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
-While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't channel Genjutsu.
-To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
-The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.
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~Declined~ Some of the restrictions don't make sense. Why would you be unable to use Genjutsu? The weapon has too many abilities, as well. And 2 ranks to Peacock Whirlwind Formation? Seriously?
Dropping:
(Igneel's atae) - Igneel's Gift
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra cost: N/a
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Long ago, when Natsu was young and Igneel found him, Igneel gave this special scalf to Natsu. At the time Natsu didn't understand why, but now it's all he has left of his "Father". This scarf has several Kanji seals and formulas said to have been written by a Fire Dragon. Although the full extent of the scarfs power is still unknown, it has been shown that fire techniques used by someone wearing the scarf are slightly more powerful, bigger and faster. The scarf passively feeds on the users chakra to create an aura of fire chakra around him that reduces incoming fire by one rank. The users fire jutsu increase in size and gain +10 damage. Not only this, but the Scalf gives Natsu the determination to fight so that he can meet Igneel again and make him proud, much like Jiraiyas determination. This will increase his will power and will be able to continue to fight even while in pain, such as losing an arm. Natsu always wears this scalf.
Note: The aura reduces only the damage of Katon techniques, not elemental combinations with fire or fire related CE's or KG.
(Katon/raiton: Ikkyou) - Fire/lighting style: Suprise
Type: Attack
Range: Short - long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: +1 rank
Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning. In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:
1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.
2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.
The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.
I changed this from lightning to fire style. I figured that was alls that was wrong with it?
~Approved~ Although, keep in mind that chakra lightning is not the same as natural lightning, therefore, I removed the whole 54,000 degrees Fahrenheit part
I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.
(Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.
Staff abilities:
Indestructable
(Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains one rank when doing so and can go up to mid range.
(Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
Bisento can dispel a Raiton jutsu up to B-Rank once per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff as it was a sword originally that was forged into the staff but only to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)
Resctrictions:
-All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
-When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
-While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't use genjutsu as their chakra will be continuously channeled into the staff when holding it, and so the user can't focus their chakra into the opponent to create the genjutsu as they would normally do.
-To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
-The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.
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Removed the hair jutsu useage/bonus
Only adds one rank to peakock wind formation instead of 2
Reworded the bit about using kenjutsu
Explained why i can't use gen (not sure if it counts)
~Approved~ Removed the Doton part. That's just silly. And I changed it to 1 B-rank and 1 A-rank.
(Bukku of Zetsubou: Bundan 1 – Fuu no Matsuro) Book of despair: Chapter 1 – Seal of Fate
Type:Attack
Rank: Gen = A, Seal = A, Fire = forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: gen = 30, seal = 30, fire = 50
Damage: 100
Description: This is the first sealing spell of the Book of despair, written by the dark lord himself. The book of despair is one of 4 books containing ninjutsu “spells” said to be written by the dark lord himself. The book was found many years ago after being lost for thousands of years and is the only one of its kind. The user will always carry this book. The blank pages of the book have the seals on the for fuuin jutsu, to save the user having to carry scrolls. If they are not carrying it, they will have it sealed within a special seal on their hand or glove if they are wearing one. If the book needs to be summoning it will be a part of this jutsu and will cost 10 chakra. Once the book has been summoned the user will break the seal (B rank) on the book opening it to its first spell, the Seal of Fate. There are 3 stages of this seal.
Stage 1: Upon breaking the seal to release this jutsu, the user will chant the ancient words written on the page.
“Let the darkness of hell burn yours soul for eternity”
Upon doing so, the words of this “spell” will cast genjutsu upon anyone within range of this jutsu who can hear it. The illusion spreads around the field of the night, darkness and a red moon. As it does, dark flames erupt from the ground in a square formation mid-range around the user. This gives off the presences of evil that would send chills down a man’s spine. As the illusion is created, the targets will see hands, like those of zombies, come out of the ground grabbing their legs holding them in place. As this genjutsu is a distraction for the second layer of the jutsu. (This genjutsu is A ranked when it comes to breaking it and it spreads across the field pretty fast)
Stage 2: As the dark flames of the illusion spread around the field, kanji formula spread across the floor beneath the flames making a circle of kanji formula all around the user, creating one giant seal on the floor. This can’t be seen as it’s hidden within the genjutsu, which is hard for people to tell that they are in. If the user is in the air the kanji formula will be written in the air, making a sealing circle that stops a person from going underground. If the ground is destroyed the seal remains until broken. (The seal written is A ranked and acts in sync with the genjutsu. If the genjutsu is broken, the sealing circle will still continue but can be seen).
Stage 3: The genjutsu will have been cast distracting the opponent as the seal is set up ready to release the seal of fate. All the kanji formula around the field will light up as a pentagram forms under the targets within the circle so that they are standing on one of the lines. The user will activate the seal by closing the book saying:
“Release, Seal of Fate”
As they do, the seal will release spiralling black flames from all the seals in the pentagram. The users won’t be standing on any of the lines, but all his targets will be. These flames will shoot up long range into the air burning all in their path, leaving nothing but the seal of the dark lord burnt into the ground. The circle of flames is as shown in the image below with the user stood in the middle.
Note: This jutsu takes up 3 of the users jutsu in one turn.
Note: The jutsu can be ended at any time. Each stage takes up one of the user’s jutsu per turn, so if the user ends the jutsu before stage 3, they can still use one more jutsu ect.
Note: The genjutsu is A rank. The seal formed on the floor is A rank. The fire released is forbidden ranked.
Note: The black flames are just normal fire, but the blackness of them is to represent evil in the jutsu.
Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: If the 3rd stage is released, the will feel the heat of the flames himself, though he may not touch the fire, the heat given off is unbelieveably hot and so his skin will still be burnt. As it is, the user will be unable to use any form of taijutsu for 2 turns due to the sourness of his skin and won’t be able to use S ranks or above in his next turn.
Note: The genjutsu spreads around like the first Hokage’s infinity darkness jutsu, and about the same speed, along with the circle of kanji formula.
Note: The 3rd stage can be released at any point, but isn’t as effective as it would be when the full pentagram forms as less area is covered with the jutsu.
Note: The seal itself isn’t forbidden ranked, the fire released from it is, the seal holding the fire is A ranked. Like how jiraiya’s sealing method could hold amaterasu.
Note: No fuuin in the next turn.
Note: The user can't use any other elements while this is active apart from fire. But he can't use the fire in the same turn, because the 3 stages take up the 3 jutsu per turn, unless the user doesn't release the seal in the same turn
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~Leaving for Scorps or Emperor~
~ First pick a single rank, then we'll look at this again ~
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