[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[~Yubel~]

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(Nain Mirimeitoru) Nine Millimeter
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden(OP)
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 1000
Description: The person brings out a gun called nine millitmeter or as i like to call it "Nine-mil" you focus chakra in the gun and condense it into a bullet shotting it at someone, the bullet shot travels at 999999999/ per second which is faster then the speed of light. Thanks to its speed it can pierce the body but leave a huge whole which only burns bigger due to the immense friction from the penetration and eventually eradicates the person out of existence. The gun can be loaded with an infinite amount of bullets.
Basically if you have it, you´re like a god, if someone have this weapon it don´t matter how strong you are ONE-SHOT U DIE!! While the person is holding the gun you get put under a genjutsu where your life flashes before your eyes which is why they call this weapon "The Flashback".

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(Hijutsu: Himo Hando) Secret technique: Pimp hand
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: All ranges
Damage: 80 for males but 0 to females - it´s actually healthy for girls
Description: The male when angered takes out his fappage hand and focus all his chakra into it while picturing the subject he is targeting. The user then proceed to swing his arm and hip for support as he deals a loud and hard slap to the subject, as the male connects with a chin or bodypart, the chakra in his hand flies into the person and if used on a male then he dies but used on a female and she will submit to the users will from that point.
If further then short-range then the user focus the chakra to mold a large chakra hand that can reach mid/long range.
The chakra hand will be twice the size of gamabunta but has no weight to it at all.

±± All Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. Next time i'll ban you from this thread forever. Consider this disciplinary action a warning.

 

[Jokey]

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Re-submitting the following;

(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders. After putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one ranks weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

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Deleted the blink of an eye part.


±± Declined ±± No elemental boosting weapons. The suit is a weapon, even if supplementary

(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders. After putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one rank weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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can wield this suit
Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

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~Declined~ Pretty sure Scorps said no element boosting weapons. You didn't even change anything in the description.

 

[Rokusho..]

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(Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the opponent where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages . But in reality , the user gathers chakra into his legs to increase his speed for a brief moment and his fists to increase his striking power momentarily for one clean corkscrew blow to the opponent's chest which knocks the breath out of the opponent , causing the opponent to breathe heavily and unable to catch his breath for a brief moment , leaving him open to a follow-up attack .

-Genjutsu is of S-rank
-Pattern of the way the user moves while using this jutsu is up to the user
-No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by Rokusho

~Approved~

Updating . . .

(Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the target where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages and that the target himself is moving at turtle speed , ruining his ability to perceive the actual motion of the user and his ability to react accordingly . In reality , the target's muscles are being restricted to a certain extent by the genjutsu to avoid resistance from the target while being able to close in for a taijutsu attack . To the user , the target will seem to be moving in slow-motion and the user has to follow up with Taijutsu and nothing else .

-No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by Rokusho
~Approved~

( Joukai no Kado ) - Heaven's Gate
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A ( +20 to power up techniques )
Damage: N/A ( +15 to Taijutsu and Ninjutsu )
Description: This gloves were passed down from master to pupil for many generations , it's true origins are unknown . All that is known about it is that the gloves are fitted with a unique gem that intensifies the purity and density of chakra that is channeled into it , the chakra is then stored within the crystal and can be used to power up techniques which requires the use of hands . Another way of utilizing the chakra stored within the gem is to use it for propulsion by releasing a burst of the condensed chakra through the palm , allowing for extreme mobility and maneuverability .

- The gloves requires huge amounts of chakra which drains the user's stamina fairly quickly ( Only when the gem on it is put to use )
- Propulsion can only be used 5 times
- Can only be used by Rokusho..
~Declined~ The propulsion note is a bit vague. Elaborate on it, in which way you can maneuver, and how fast you can move. Also, decrease the number of times you can be propelled. 5 is too much. Lastly, how long do these gloves last?

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Tell me if there are any areas which can be editted to make it more approvable ^_^ .

 

[-Yard-]

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Signed snake contract.

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(Kuchiyose: Shuiro) Summoning: Scarlet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: +10 To fire jutsu (-10 For the bite)
Description: The user will make two handseals (Tiger - Boar) and summon "Scarlet" onto their shoulder. Scarlet is a small very kind and friendly snake that's about the size of a human hand, she has a fire affinity, but due to her size she doesn't have much chakra and can only perform C rank fire jutsus that don't require seals. She can speak, and her voice however is soft and quiet, the opposite of what you would expect from a snake. She's usually used for relaying information. She has an actual more useful ability however, which is that due to her fire affinity, she can bite the user, and send her fire chakra through her fangs as if it were venom, and constantly inject the user with fire chakra, increasing their fire jutsu by +10 for a short amount of time. Her bite causes slight pain for that turn only, before it settles, it's only painful enough to break B rank genjutsu in the turn bitten.

Note: The increase to fire jutsu lasts for 4 turns.
Note: Scarlet stays on the field for 5 turns.
Note: The fire ability can only be used once per battle.
Note: Scarlet can be summoned only once per battle.
Note: Her bite can break the user from B rank Genjutsu.

~ Declined. Enough with the elemental boosts. ~

Signed snake contract.

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(Kuchiyose: Shuiro) Summoning: Scarlet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: (-15 For the bite)
Description: The user will make two handseals (Tiger - Boar) and summon "Scarlet" onto their shoulder. Despite her appearance with her large 3 inch long fangs, Scarlet is a grey, small very kind and friendly snake that's about the size of a human hand, She doesn't have much chakra and can't perform Jutsus, similar to how others in Naruto who have chakra but can't control it like Lee. She can speak, and her voice however is soft and quiet, the opposite of what you would expect from a snake. She's usually used for relaying information. She has an actual more useful ability however, which is that, with her abnormally large, sharp fangs she can bite the user/tear slightly through flesh to break him/her from genjutsu of A rank for the first 4 turns of battle. After which her gums will be in too much pain to do it any further, due to her small size, her gums can't support much pressure, such as tearing through flesh and biting excessively.

Note: She can stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: Must have signed the snake contract to use.
Note: Can be summoned twice per battle.
Note: On the 2nd turned summoned, she cannot use her fangs to break the user from genjutsu.
Note: She cannot tell if the user is under genjutsu automatically, but she can take into account obvious signs of how the users acting that they may be under genjutsu.


Removed the elemental boost, Removed the ability to use fire jutsu, added more damage to the bite to make more sense for A rank genjutsu, Increased the restrictions all to make up for the A rank genjutsu I added and the ability to summon her twice but as her just being a normal snake the second time with no further ability. Simply because I think it could make things more interesting with dialogue in battle. I'd like to make the 2nd time summoning her to have no turn limitation for that purpose, but this will do xD.

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(Jeet Kune Do: Doragon's Kei) Jeet Kune Do: Dragon's Thorn
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: Deriving from the destructive force of a kick from Bruce Lee. The user will send a kick to the chest of the opponent with enough force behind it to crack the opponents chest slightly, making it so that the opponents arms are slower due to pain. This would make the opponents arms slower due to the pain they will feel by moving their arms due to their cracked chest. It can halfen the speed of the opponents arms. After the first kick to the chest, any other kick afterwards will reduce the speed of their opponents arms by 10%, until finally, the opponent can't move their arms anymore due to pain. Once the kick is executed, it will also knock the air from the opponents lungs, immobilizing them for a few seconds. The kick it'self will send the opponent away by 5 meters, allowing the opponent to catch their breath before needing to defend the user again.

Note: Must be a Jeet Kune Do master to perform this.
Note: People or masses with great density and muscle mass won't be affected as much or affected at all. Examples: Bee, 3rd and 4th raikage.



(Hebi Boushi Renzus) Snake Eye Lenses
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make a single handseal and mold a lens over their eyes made from chakra. These lenses give the users eyes the appearance of snake eyes. The lens coat the users eyes with chakra creating a barrier over the users eyes which can block foreign chakra from accessing the users eyes, thus making the user immune to visual genjutsu, however, the user limits themselves as well by not being able to perform visual genjutsu either. The lens also shield the users eyes from dust, water drops and also protects the user from bright lights that could easily blind the average ninja. This works by the pupils of the lens filter the light that hits the eyes, allowing only enough light that the users eyes can handle to actually pass through to let them see, ensuring that they aren't hit with a massive amount of light that blinds them. Similar to how sunglasses work, except instead of making what the user sees darker, it simply filters the amount of light the eyes receive through chakra manipulation.

Note: Lasts 4 turns.
Note: This can be used 2x per battle.
Note: Must have the snake contract.


±± All Declined ±± As said tons of times before, no formatting on submissions besides bolding the title and the changes on resubmissions.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kakushigoto Doton: Dai Li Douin ) Secret Earth Release: Dai Li Agents
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user infuses his chakra into the ground and creates advanced earth clones styled after the user (although their appearance can be altered to the user's will)
These advanced clones can use Earth release up to A rank and Taijutsu up to B rank. They are very strong and durable physically due to being made of stone.
These clones are unique creations and hold 3 secret techniques. They can fire their fingertips as C rank earth bullets (short only). They can fire their entire hands as B rank projectiles at high speed up to Mid range, if the hands touch a human they can be used to clamp down (if it hits their hand it can cover their hand in a sealed ball of stone for example). If the clone is within short-mid range of the released hands they can pull the earth hands back towards them, dragging the enemy towards them as well. And finally they can create A rank chains of earth from their sleeves that can attach to the enemy's limbs that reaches up to mid.
-Can only have/create up to 2 clones out at once.
-Can't use for 5 turns between use.
-Can't use more than one of their 3 techniques on the same turn and each technique counts towards the user's 3 moves per turn.
-As long as the Dai Li are in contact with earth such as a rocky terrain or mountain they can draw upon the earth to repair minor damage twice per clone.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

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Kakushigoto Genjutsu: Tsuchi Kingu Yuuchi) Secret Illusion Technique: The Earth King's Invitation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user makes 4 hand seals and sends a large amount of chakra into the brain of their enemy that lays dormant until the user triggers the illusion by saying the target name and the phrase "The Earth King has invited you to Lake Laogai". As the illusion activates the Target replys "I am honored to accept his invitation." as the chakra controls the higher brain functions of the target to put them in a trance like state for 4 turns. While entranced, the targets will follow the user's command as long as it does not directly threaten their lives. During the trance the enemy will believe they are relaxing at a lake, their mind clear of violent thoughts.
-Once per enemy, 3 per battle.
-Must wait at least one turn between creation and trigger
-Must have mastered Genjutsu.
-User can't use Genjutsu or ninjutsu for 5 turns after triggering the illusion.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

(Genjutsu: Heki Kaku )Illusionary technique: False Victory
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/ Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user makes a single hand seal and sends his chakra into an enemy's chakra system that lays dormant until triggered. When the user and enemy are in short range the user manipulates the chakra to induce the illusion of the enemy's next attack landing when in reality they have been paralyzed before finishing the attack. In the illusion they see their technique play out perfectly and see the user dead (or knocked out if not using a fatal attack) in front of them. The 2nd part of this technique can be done very quickly.
-Twice per battle
-No A rank or above genjutsu for 3 turns after use.
-Must be taught by Professor Sarutobi.

No DNRs please :T_T: if turn numbers or ranks need adjusted or extra restrictions feel free to change/add them if either of these are close to approval, any questions VM me


±± All Declined ±± Don't resubmit. First one falls under the "elemental clone type" which is banned aside from CE versions. Second one falls under the mind controlling thing with genjutsu which is also DNR. And the last one makes little to no sense. Also, we don't vm anyone about anything and you don't have the right to tell us if we should DNR or not something.

 

[Melizzle]

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(Genjutsu) Nenshou Oni: Burning Devil
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: When Kimi flashes her golden oni tattoo at her opponent, they instantly fall into a genjutsu where they get the sensation that their body has burst into flames. The panic causes them to lose control of their body interupting anything they were doing. After 1 turn the stress and sensation will break the genjutsu if they have not already released themselves.The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
~Taught by Melizzle
~usuable by Kimi
~Usuable twice per battle
~Declined~ Remove the bolded; Its been said, time and time again that genjutsu does not allow you to control how someone will react physically unless its sharingan genjutsu. Also, remove the word "instant" and include hand seals to cast it.
(Genjutsu) Touketsu Oni: Frozen Devil
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: When Kana flashes her blue oni tattoo the opponent will instantly fall into an illusion where they are frozen in a block of ice with their apendages spread. They are completely frozen unable to move to make hand seals.The hot ice burns the body and numbs the body as well. The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
~Taught by Melizzle
~Usuable by Kana
~Usuable once per battle
~Declined~ Remove the word instant and include some hand seals.
(Genjutsu) Hinketsushou: Anemia
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: The user holds their hand out to the opponent triggering the technique. The opponent falls into a genjutsu where they see the user fly quickly towards them. As soon as the user's illusion reaches the opponent's body, or the opponent attacks the illusion, the illusion burst into blood. Then liquid forms 3 bloddy humanoid figures next to the opponent. Immediately when formed, they bite the opponent. The opponent becomes drowsy as if they've lost a lot of blood, decreasing their attack and reaction time by 50%. For example if the user is Kage rank, they will become Jounin rank and be able to use the appropriate speed tables, jutsu, etc. of the reduced rank.
~Taught by Melizzle
~Lasts 2 turns
~Able to take effect once per battle
~No genjutsu for 2 turns when attempted
~Declined~ Do not resubmit.

(Genjutsu) Nenshou Oni: Burning Devil
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description: When Kimi flashes her golden oni tattoo at her opponent, they fall into a genjutsu where they get the sensation that their body has burst into flames. The feeling of their entire flesh likely causes them to lose control of their body interrupting anything they were doing, but does not have to. After 1 turn the stress and sensation will break the genjutsu if they have not already released themselves.The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
~Taught by Melizzle
~Usable by Kimi
~Usable twice per battle

±± Approved ±± Editted. This was a B-rank from the start.


Changed "instantly" to quickly and added hand seals to cast. Changed the bold phrase to say that the victim would likely go into panic/be interrupted from their actions, but not have to.

(Genjutsu) Touketsu Oni: Frozen Devil
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: When Kana flashes her blue oni tattoo the opponent and casts a couple hand seals, the opponent will quickly fall into an illusion where they are frozen in a block of ice with their appendages spread. They are completely frozen unable to move to make hand seals.The hot ice burns the body and numbs the body as well. The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
~Taught by Melizzle
~Usable by Kana
~Usable once per battle

Changed "instantly" to "quickly" and added some hand seals.


±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. Too much.

 

[Selendrile]

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(Ninpo: Chisana Shuriken no Jutsu) - Ninja Art: Small Shuriken Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will throw a projectile towards the enemy, and will then use his chakra to rapidly decrease the projectile's size. The size can be reduced down to the size of a marble. However, with the size being decreased, the damage done by the projectile is also dramatically decreased. This technique is based upon the less advanced version, "Ninja Art: Giant Shuriken Technique."
*Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile

±± Approved ±±


(Ninpo: Giso)- Ninja Art: Disguise
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to mask the presence of a technique simply by controlling how light reflects off the object. Similar to the Hiding in Camouflage Technique, this technique gives the user the ability to use his chakra to essentially make an object invisible. The user, after performing a technique, or throwing a weapon, will extend his chakra tightly, and completely around the released object after a short sequence of two hand seals. For example, if the user throws a kunai, he will form a tight layer of chakra around the kunai, controlling the reflections of light. This is turn, would make the kunai "invisible" while the kunai continues on towards the opponent. The amount of chakra used depends on the object that is being turned invisible. However, large scale techniques such as "Pressure Damage" are simply too large for the user to cover completely in chakra. This technique works most effectively on techniques that have a mostly constant, unchanging shape. The object must be covered in chakra before it leaves short range from the user, but the cloaking effect can last up to long range.
*Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
*Note: Usable three times per battle
*Note: No ninjutsu above A-rank the same, or following turn


±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit.

 

[Icemyster]

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(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once
*can only be used by Ice users

Removed the lowering of fire and lightning jutsu.

(Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals. (this justu works by affecting the labyrinth of the ear, which is a series of fluid filled channels that send signals of balance to the brain, by vibrating the fluid in them, it disorients a person's sense of balance, causing coordination issues with opponents)
*jutsu's effects last two turns
*only usable once per battle


52 bachi-roppou(52 Pick-up)
Rank-S
Type-Weapon
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The weapon 52 pick up, is a set of 52 thinly pounded, sharp rectangular iron cards.
The user carries them in a small pouch that allows easy access to them.
These cards are used by means of normal throwing (like a kunai) or chakra manipulation of either wind, or magnetism chakra. Using wind chakra, the cards gain cutting strength and speed, while when used with magnetism they may be freely manipulated in mid-air.

Feel free to make edits as you see fit ^_^

sorry I didnt read earlier :/


±± All Declined ±± If i read this correctly, this is a resubmission. On resubmissions you are required to quote the original submission and bold all changes. Look at what i bolded...

 

[Yugure]

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(Fuuton: Eāfan'neru) Wind Release: Wind Funnel
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
After performing a single handseal, the user creates a small funnel of air, trough which items can be thrown, by a shadow clone or team mate, to increase their speed. Due to the pressure inside the funnel, small items such as kunai and shuriken can speed up to almost the speed of sound, making it almost impossible to dodge in short and mid range.

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±± Declined ±± Speed of sound? why not speed of light while you're at it? Make it reasonable please.


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( Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Suzume-ō Jack) Summoning Jutsu: Sparrow King Jack
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
After the user bites his thumb and smears blood across his tattoo, he places his hands on the ground to summon Jack, the King of the Sparrows. Jack is giant sparrow, about 12 feet high, and while he is on the field, it costs his summoner only half of his chakra on Fuuton attacks. The summoner is able to fly on his back

Note:
-Stays in the battle for 4 turns
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Jack cannot be harmed by any Fuuton-Attacks below B-Rank
-Must have summoned Sparrow Contract

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±± Declined ±± why would your summon allow your techniques to cost less chakra? Also, why is this Long range? What size is he? What can he do exactly?

 

[BlacKing]

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Ototon: Kuno no Oto (Sound Release: The Sound of Kunai)
Type:Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: +1 per kunai
Description: The user channels their chakra into kunai. Their chakra then acts as a solid wall of sound wave barrier between the force of gravity that immediately surrounds the kunai as they travel towards the desired location, allowing the kunai to travel at the speed of sound.
*Travels at 315 Speed.

~ Declined. As I said. Sound is unaffected by gravity, but that does not mean it can negate it. ~

Ototon: Attōtekina Obujekuto (Sound Release: Resounding Object)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: +10 Damage to object
Description: Taking in the same principle as "The Sound of Kunai", the user channels their chakra into an object and performs a hanseal. Their chakra then acts as a Solid Wall of sound wave barrier between the force of gravity that immediately surrounds the object as it travels towards the desired location, allowing the object to travel at the speed of sound.
*Travels at 395 Speed.

~ Same as above. ~

Ototon: Boryūmukontorōru - Kon'ya Wa Tōku· Hādo (Sound Release: Volume Control - Pump up the Volume)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (Only if increase in sound)
Description: The user, after producing sound waves, will move one of their hands in such away that it appears as if they are decreasing or increasing the sound of a speaker (Clockwise to increase; Counterclockwise to decrease). Doing this allows the user to change the decibel of any sound waves produced so that it becomes either extremely loud and deafens the opponent or extremely soft to where the target could no longer hear it. Increasing the sound can cause the opponent's eardrums to blow, causing extreme pain and deafness.

~ Interesting. Needs some restrictions. ~

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~Leaving for Emperor.

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Ototon: Boryūmukontorōru - Kon'ya Wa Tōku· Hādo (Sound Release: Volume Control - Pump up the Volume)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Only if increase in sound)
Description: The user, after producing sound waves (Either naturally or by a technique), will move one of their hands in such away that it appears as if they are decreasing or increasing the sound of a speaker (Clockwise to increase; Counterclockwise to decrease). Doing this allows the user to change the decibel of any sound waves produced so that it becomes either extremely loud and deafens the opponent or extremely soft to where the target could no longer hear it. Increasing the sound can cause the opponent's eardrums to blow, causing extreme pain and deafness.
Note: Can only Change the Volume 3x a battle
Note: Can only be used with Sound Techniques A Ranked and Below.
Note: Opponent(s) goes deaf for one turn.
Note: Opponent(s) suffer from bleeding of the ears and throbbing pain for 2 turns after deafness dissipates.
~Approved~ I made a little change.

I increased rank to add restriction Notes......I've never seen a B Ranked Tech with restrictions and I figured these would be suitable. If you deem it still B Ranked worthy, please change it back if you dont mind. Thanks. ^_^

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Ototon: Kyōmei sonikkubūmu (Sound Release: Resonating Sonic Boom)
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user charges sound chakra into each of their arms while stretching their arms out wide. They then simultaneously swing both arms inwards across their chest sending forth two bursts of sound waves from their arms. One of the sound Waves resonate at a pitch and frequency to shatter any object into pieces before it comes into contact with the two sound waves. The first sound wave will dissipate as soon as the object in question shatters. The Second sound wave emits a loud noise that will shatter the eardrums of anyone in hearing distance other than the user causing extreme pain and forcing them to raise their hands to their ears to block the pain.
Note: This technique happens extremely quickly.
Note: The first sound wave can only shatter anything other than Fire/Lightning/Wind as long as it has a physical mass (Works against Earth/Water/Metals/Crystals/Ice/Lava/etc) of S Rank and below.
Note: Can only be used once ever 3 turns.
~Declined~ It's a bit too strong for an A-rank technique. I would suggest changing the first wave's shattering capability to anything physical of A-rank and below. S rank is too much.

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Ototon: Anata No Komaku O Fukitobasu (Sound Release: Blowing Your Eardrum)
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: (Enough Pain to cause bleeding and get out of S Ranked Genjutsu)
Description: The user, when placed under a Genjutsu, commits the ultimate sacrifice a sound user could and charges Sound Chakra into both of their eardrums. With a forceful push, they cause their eardrums to pop extremely loud, instantly releasing them from the Genjutsu. The pain caused by this leaves the user feeling rather unbalanced, however the constant residual pain in their ears allows them to become resistant to Genjutsu. The hearing of the opponent will be gone throughout the remainder of the battle, however the feeling of unbalance lessens as the battle draws on.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Causes 50 damage user
Note: No Sound jutsu above A Ranked for 3 turns.
~Approved~

 

[Kwalker394]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akuma (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Akuma)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Akuma The King of Robins. Akuma is about 1/2 the size of Gamabunta. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Akuma is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Abilities:
~Akuma can speak English but he can also communicate to his summoner by telepathic means.
~Akuma can fly with the summoner on him
~Akuma can also do a synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu with his summoner
~Capable of using Fuuton and Katon up to C Rank
~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any D rank attacks by flapping his wings.

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Kwalker394 can only teach how to summon Akuma
~Each jutsu counts toward the summoner's 3 moves
~synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu counts as 2 moves of the summoners 3 move limit
~Riding Akuma counts as a move
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~Can stay in the fight up to 4 turns

±± Declined ±± A 50 meter tall bird is hardly an A-Rank summon. Summons can only use one element and can use it up to S-Rank and without the need for hand seals. And take the english part. He talks, its enough. And obviously he can fly with you on his back...he's 50 meters tall...he can fly with a bus on his back. (50 meters because gamabunta is roughly 100...)


Raiton: Dendou Hora Ryouiki (Lightning Style: Electric Mine Field)
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: N/A (10 Damage if stepped on)
Description:
The user concentrates on his Raiton chakra. The user then molds his chakra and channel it to his mouth while squishing it into small flatly round pellets. The user then spits out the small lighting pellets (about 30) to the ground in a wide area (8ft-13ft). When the opponent steps on the pellets they will send off a electrical signal through the air as well as shocking the opponent. These pellets are rather small and are usually unnoticeable to the naked eye. When these pellets go off the user can sense the electrical signal in the air by using his Raiton chakra within him/her to locate the enemy. This jutsu is very useful due to the fact that the user can locate the enemy in a split second and counter the opponent unsuspectingly or to set up a ambush for the unsuspecting enemy.
~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~May also cause the user damage as well if stepped on
~Sensing only happens if the user is within mid-range of the pellets.

±± Approved ±± Edited rank and added note


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Raiton/Katon: Nenshou Kimochi(Lightning/Fire Style: Burning Sensation)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user channels and molds his Raiton and Katon chakra at the same time to his hands. The user then sends both chakra to the out side of his hand forming a thin layer around his palm consisting of Raiton and Katon chakra. Once this is done if the user touches the enemy the touched area is then burned and shocked. The burned and shocked area isnt life threatening but the sensation still is felt enough to distract the opponent. The Katon chakra is for burns and discomfort, and the Raiton is also for discomfort but also the stinging sensation and slight shock to the 1st layer of nerves of the area touched. If the area is not cooled down quick enough it will lead to 1st degree burns of that area. If the user grabs on to the enemy and the enemy dosnt get away quick enough it can cause 2nd-3rd degree burns.

~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used once during battle
~Counts as 2 moves
~The burning sensation last for 3 turns (if not treated sooner)
~Medical care can treat the wounded area also Water jutsus (D rank or higher or any source of water) can also treat it to cool down the area
~If the user's hand is forced back at him with the jutsu still active it can harm the user the same way as the enemy

±± Declined ±± You can't mold two elemental chakras at the same time unless you have yin/yang mastery


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Capable of using Fuuton
~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

±± Declined ±± This is not a D-rank summon and he can use fuuton up to what rank?


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
~Can use Fuuton

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

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±± Declined ±± a B-rank summon can only use Up to B-Rank techniques.

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Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akuma (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Akuma)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Akuma The King of Robins. Akuma is about 60 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Akuma is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Abilities:
~Akuma can speak
~Akuma can also do a synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu with his summoner
~Capable of using Fuuton up to A rank
~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any D rank attacks by flapping his wings.

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Kwalker394 can only teach how to summon Akuma
~Each jutsu counts toward the summoner's 3 moves
~synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu counts as 2 moves of the summoners 3 move limit
~Riding Akuma counts as a move
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~Can stay in the fight up to 4 turns

Took out: (~Akuma can fly with the summoner on him), (English but he can also communicate to his summoner by telepathic means.)

±± Declined ±± Read what i wrote. Its 60 meters tall.... ITS TOO BIG for an A-Rank summon. Also, its too big in general. Make him smaller. Also, i never said to take out the part were he can fly with you on his back.


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Capable of using Fuuton up to C rank
~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

±± Approved ±±


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
~Can use Fuuton up to B rank

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

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±± Declined ±± If he's a bird, how can he hold and use a sword?

 

[Better]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Kyouseki kabe)- Lightning Release: Polarity Wall
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20*
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user rises their hand in front of them and creates an shield of electrical energy to protect himself from most forms of harm. The shield is completely transparent except for the outer part of the shield which emits blue or red electricity. The shield is around 2 inches thick and is circular shaped. The size is completely up to the user, however the max size is thrice the size of the user. The user can do anything while using the shield except attack , which includes moving, jumping, gliding, climbing and grinding making it useful to use in enemy-infested areas. It can be set so blocked damaged chakra is absorbed.

Note: Can only be used thrice a battle
Note: Can only block up to A-ranks(Can only defend against B-ranks)
Note: The shield last two turns max
Note: -10 per turn still active*
Note: Can only be taught by Better

(Raiton: Rai katana)- Lightning Release: Electric Blades
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:This technique channels a large high concentration of electricity to the user's hands. The amount of energy is so great that it becomes visible. This forms blades of pure energy around each of their hands in, and they cause massive amounts of damage when used as a melee attack. Once the technique is completed, the user(if not in short-range already) charges forward and thrusts the blades into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal. The user can also slam their hands on the ground with this active cause all the lightning to surge through the ground. They are one-use weapons and must be re-triggered every time they are used. In order to re-activate them it cost 30 chakra. They will also be deactivated with time if not used.

Note: Can only be taught by Better


±± Both Declined ±± Don't resubmit. First one was done countless times before, second one already exists also.

 

[Lysander]

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(Futunomitama no Turugi ) Antiquity
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Antiquity is a red sword.This sword is small in size only half a meter in length.The sword itself has been passed down from generation to generation with each unlocking new abilities in the sword.The first ability to the sword is the ability to mold you chakra into the sword and extend the length and the power of the sword.There are multiple levels to the sword.
-The first level is only chakra covering the sword but has the power to slice through a rank earth and water.
-The second level has the strength to cut through a rank lighting only and the red shield covers half of the user on which the sword is held and can block b rank attacks within reason.
-The third version is 3 meters long and can cut through fire.
-The last version is the strongest one of them all and can cut through a rank water,earth and lightning.
-Can only be used be Lysander
-One switching between levels it counts as one of the three moves and switching between levels has a cool down of one turn

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The first one looks like this but without the face and the user is holding the sword and there is no chakra coming from anywhere but the sword:

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The second level to the sword is this but yet again without the face and is one meter in length like the first one.

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~ Declined. Why not just submit it at its peak power -.- ~

(Futunomitama no Turugi ) Antiquity
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Antiquity is a red sword.This sword is small in size only half a meter in length.The sword itself has been passed down from generation to generation with each unlocking new abilities in the sword.The first ability to the sword is the ability to mold you chakra into the sword and extend the length and the power of the sword.There are multiple levels to the sword.The sword is made out of a special material which can combine with the users chakra to mould into a shield.


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Level 2
The user will release their chakra into the sword to unlock the second level. The second level surrounds the blade extending it, making it able to cut through A rank lightning jutsu and below. The second level also creates a red shield around the users arm capable of blocking B rank attacks and below that aren't bigger than the shield.
Note: Activating level 2 counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turns and costs 15 chakra for every turn active
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Level 3
The user will release more chakra into their sword to unlock the 3rd level. This differs from the level 2 as more chakra is focussed into the blade and not is focussed on defence. This is a more advanced useage of shape manipulation making the blade razor sharp. When this is active, the user can cut through A rank water, A rank earth and A rank lightning.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Lasts up to 3 turns
Note: While this level is active, it counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn
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I could not bold the changes as you told me to remove them.
±± Leaving for Emperor but this seems like an over complication of something quite simple... ±±
~ Exactly. Why this obsession with levels ? ~


Elemental rotation (soshi jiten)
Type: Attack/Deffence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage points:60
Description: The user will focus one of the five basic elements into their staff. The they will begin spinning their staff, like a helecipter blade in front of them at great speeds releasing their elemental chakra. Fire/water/wind element will create a fire/water/wind shield. If lightning or earth chakra they create a dense sheild infront of the user, the earth style rotation will defect all solid objects, where as the lighting will destroy all earth that is coming at the user.
-Only usable three times.
-Only usable every two turns.
-Only usable by Lysander and those who are taught it.

±± Declined ±± I will only accept this if you have a Staff CW


Earth impact wave (yochi shindou shuuha)
Type: Attack/Deffence
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user with hold their staff vertically, with both hands together in the middle of the staff. They will then in a swift motion raise their staff up above their head, focussing their earth chakra, then slam the staff down on the ground releasing their earth chakra, causing a small crater to form around the user sending a wave of earth 1.5 meters high in directions.As the staff is slammed down, a small shockwave is released around the user as the chakra is released into the ground This can be used to counter taijutsu and other close combat attacks.
-Only usable four times.
-Only usable by Lysander and those taught.


±± Declined ±± Same as above

 

[Korra.]

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(Hachi no hakai ) Bee's Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will call forth there bees and have them engulf the enemy inside a cloud of Bees. The bees will use their stingers to drain the opponent's chakra making them weak the longer they have the bees stinging them.
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan.

(Hachi no tatsumaki )-Tornado of Bees
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will have their bees surround the enemy in a tornado like shape. Some of the bees will go after the opponent striking them while the other bees shoot out their stingers at the enemy from different directions and angles.
Note: Usable 4 times a battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan

(Shūen no mure )Swarm of Demise
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will generate a swarm of thousand of bees that will cover the entire sky. The bees will then shoot out their stingers from above with great speed than swarm down taking out any remaining enemies that survive the stingers.
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be part of the Kamizuru
Note: Usable 3 times a battle

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±± All Declined ±± Having a kamizuru bio doesn't mean you can make techniques that are basically Aburame techniques. You can summon bees... Its different.

Resubmitting the first one for now Scorps said I could here

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(Hachi no hakai ) Bee's Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will call forth there bees and have them engulf the enemy inside a cloud of Bees. The bees will use their stingers to drain the opponent's chakra making them weak the longer they have the bees stinging them.
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan.

±± Approved ±±


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Name: (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Ōra baai shinigami)Reaper Scythe Arts: Aura of the Grim Reaper
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra: 20
Type:Supplementary
Description: When the battle starts the user will channel their chakra through the body and calm their mind. This will enhance the user reaction and allow them to perform Reaper Scythe Arts jutsus easier and faster. This will also let the user use their scythes with more flexibility and faster. Being that this is the aura of the Grim Reaper the user's eyes will turn completely black until this is deactivated and the emotions will be killed of temporary giving them the fearness of a grim reaper.

±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. This has nothing to do with your CFS and it makes not sense. Also, this is very similar to the concept behind elder teachings, six sense.


Reaper Scythe Arts:Reaper's Judgement (Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami no hantei )
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user holds their scythe with hands and channel a large amount of chakra to the blade of the scythe. The chakra envelpe the blade and streteches out into a crescent moon shape with an eye in the middle.
-Only used twice per battle
-Can cut through B rank and below Earth Elemental jutsus.
-This jutsu last four turns and must wait two turns
Note:Can only be taught by ~Korra~
Note:Must be activated at the start of the battle.
Note::Lasts for 8 turns when activated.
Note: Need to learn the Reaper Scythe Arts
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±± Declined ±± Why is this Long range if you are just engulfing your scythe and making it larger?

 

[Wesobi]

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Jinton: Surikesu | Dust Release: Erase
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the horse hand seal and creates a small cone of Dust Release on his index-finger tip, that is aimed at his opponent. The user then releases it, sending a slim conical beam at the opponent. The beam is not bigger than his finger. Like all Jinton attacks, the speed of this attack is significantly high and can go through most things with relative ease.
Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can only be used by a Mu/Onoki bio
Note: Can be used twice
Note: The user can not use Wind, Fire, Earth or Jinton techniques in the same turn.
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-Declined- Why make a strong element even more OP? And "can go through most thing" isn't an acceptable capability description.

Fuuin Genkotsu: Koara no Nemuri | Sealing Fist: Slumber of the Koala
Type: supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: /
Description: The user will focus his chakra into his palms and on his fingertips. The kanji for “Push” will appear on each palm. Once the user engages combat and hits opponent in a certain place (for example hand, foot or stomach), he “pushes” the chakra out of the said limb or organ, but also puts a barrier on that place, making it impossible for chakra to circulate in the affected area for 2 turns. This is different from Gentle Fist techniques as Gentle Fist techniques hit the tenketsus, and disable the chakra flow, while this techniques pushes out the chakra and makes it impossible for the chakra to push through the barrier placed on it. The user can also use this to “push” natural energy out of the opponents body, causing Sage Mode users to forcibly and prematurely leave sage mode, even if they are able to collect it through other means as they barrier makes it impossible for the sage chakra to circulate.
Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Can’t use taijutsu (a.k.a. Strong Fist, Gentle Fist, EIG, etc), fuuinjutsu or Fuuin Genkotsu in the same round or the next
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-Declined- OP


0:12 and ongoing is an example


Fuuton: Ketsugō-tai Sōseiji No Setsuna | Wind Style: Juncture of the Siamese Twin
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user punch forward and release a blast of Wind. While the blast of wind travels towards the opponent, the user performs the Horse hand seal, and the wind splits up in two, and then comes back together, letting it avoid any incoming jutsu that would block it. This, however is a double edged blade as it requires impeccable timing so that the user does not get hit by the attack that was sent out to block it in the first place.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: The user can either split the wind in the turn used or in his next turn, if the wind has not hit the opponent yet or if he has enough time to split it
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Each individual blade of wind is A-rank, and the moment at which they once again combine forms the technique's S-rank power.
Note: Can not use above S-rank in the same turn, nor can the user use wind in the same turn or the next.
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-Approved-

Note for the last jutsu: Roku approved a lightning variety of this one, hence why I am submitting a similar one for each element.

 

[LionDemon]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: Buru no hane) Water Release: Blue Wing
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra:20 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description: This sword can be used to slash flames apart with Suiton chakra. It extrudes Suiton chakra around it, making it superior to Katon chakra, and if it hits/ hurts them, the Katon chakra will be weakened. If the user slams the blade into ground, the ground will soak, become wet. The original owner of this sword is Aruko Sarutobi, and only he can use it.

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~Declined~ Far too generic. How is this different from any other water sword?

(Suiton: Buru no hane) Water Release: Blue Wing
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra:20 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description: This sword can be used to slash flames apart with Suiton chakra. It extrudes Suiton chakra around it, making it superior to Katon chakra, and if it hits/ hurts them, the Katon chakra will be weakened. If the user slams the blade into ground, the ground will soak, become wet. It can be extruded with chakra, making it longer and wider xd anytime. The original owner of this sword is Aruko Sarutobi, and only he can use it.


±± Declined ±± Yeah....you didn't edit anything nor did you even read what the checker wrote. This is nothing that can be approved in such a generic manner and its nothing that hasn't been done before multiple times before. Don't resubmit. Also, i suggest that you look around the thread to get a feel of how to properly submit a technique.

 

[Sharingdork]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Genjutsu: Matenrō (Illusion Technique: Skyscraper)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, after perform five hanseals, casts an illusion upon the intended target. The illusion makes the target believe the ground beneath them has exploded, and the brute force has shot them up into the darkness of space. Then, the target will see four belts appear from nowhere and bind them in place, which binds them in reality as well. Then a demonic toad-like creature will appear from the darkness and torture the bound target.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Can only be used three times a battle
~Paralysis lasts until the end of the turn this jutsu is used

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Genjutsu: Yotta Kasumi (Illusion Technique: Drunken Haze)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, after engaging in hand-to-hand combat with the target, applies a Genjutsu through the sense of touch which causes the target to begin to see multiple copies of the user, like an after image or the E-rank Clone Jutsu. The copies of the user follow the user's movements perfectly, (like playing the same movie on different screens and starting them all seconds apart), confusing the target as to which is the real user, and which is the real one to block.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Only one "copy" can be create per use of the jutsu
~This jutsu can stack, allowing the user to create up to three "copies" of themselves
~Each copy lasts for two turns after it's made

Fuuton: Animâ (Wind Style: Anima)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra into the sky above the battlefield, and create a large, fast spinning air current in the clouds, which draws in clouds to give the appearance of a thunderstorm. Because of the fast-moving air currents, in the middle of the clouds is a gaping hole. The air currents then begin to move at F-5 tornado speed while staying high in the sky, dragging objects (and people) from the ground into the clouds. By utilizing the same principle as the Tree Climbing Excersize, one can remain planted on the ground.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts until the end of the opponents next turn
~Can only be used three times a battle

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±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers

Seeing as they were declined for being outside of the weekly markers, I'm resubmitting them to actually be looked at without changing anything.
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Genjutsu: Matenrō (Illusion Technique: Skyscraper)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, after perform five hanseals, casts an illusion upon the intended target. The illusion makes the target believe the ground beneath them has exploded, and the brute force has shot them up into the darkness of space. Then, the target will see four belts appear from nowhere and bind them in place, which binds them in reality as well. Then a demonic toad-like creature will appear from the darkness and torture the bound target.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Can only be used three times a battle
~Paralysis lasts until the end of the turn this jutsu is used

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±± Declined ±± Its a genjutsu....so how does it bind the opponent in reality? Also, this is an A-Rank gen, not an S-Rank. Take the word "paralysis" out. You don't paralyze your enemy, you make him feel as if he's bound and impossible to move.


Fuuton: Animâ (Wind Style: Anima)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra into the sky above the battlefield, and create a large, fast spinning air current in the clouds, which draws in clouds to give the appearance of a thunderstorm. Because of the fast-moving air currents, in the middle of the clouds is a gaping hole. The air currents then begin to move at F-5 tornado speed while staying high in the sky, dragging objects (and people) from the ground into the clouds. By utilizing the same principle as the Tree Climbing Excersize, one can remain planted on the ground.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts until the end of the opponents next turn
~Can only be used three times a battle

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±± Declined ±± Similar technique exist.


New:

Genjutsu: Fuantei (Illusion Technique: Unsteadiness)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Tayuya plays a high C sharp on her flute, which when hear by her target, triggers the genjutsu. This genjutsu affects the Cerebellum, and by stopping impulses from leaving this part of the brain, effectivly takes away all of the target's balance, making them unable to stand on their own.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Can only be used by a biography with a flute
~Can only be used three times per battle
~Lasts until the end of the target's next turn

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±± Leaving for Emperor or Roku ±±
~ A Genjutsu doesn't actually stop all impulses from the cerebellum, it only makes the brain think so. Also, all impulses is too generic, the cerebellum has other functions too. ~

 

[Kuro Tamashi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Boseki (Tombstone)
Type: Weapon (Sword)
Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
Range: Close/Mid
Chakra: 0
Damage:
Description: Boseki was forged by Kuro Tamash in hopes of having a personal companion Boseki is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy.

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~Boseki can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

~ ...It's a weapon ? Because the description looks like its a puppet. ~
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Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponet causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponet to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attck the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponet cn see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confussion. This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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Boseki Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 0
Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the oppent uses chidori for example the Boseki can not absorb it). This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).

~ Get Boseki aproved first. ~

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Boseki Buredo (Tombstone the Blade)
Type: Weapon (Sword)
Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
Range: Close/Mid
Chakra: 0
Damage:
Description: Boseki Buredo is a sword thatwas forged by Kuro Tamashi in hopes of increasing his skill as a shinobi. Since he was born in the mist he was aware.of the power that the seven swordsmen held. He himself wanted a sword that could be considered for the acceptance if such organization. So he forged Boseki. Boseki Buredo is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki Buredo has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki Buredo was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy. This sword was made for use by only Kuro Tamashi, due to his size and the size of the sword he can use it with ease.

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~Boseki Buredo can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki Buredo after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

edit if need. ^^

Consider these only if above custom weapon gets approved.

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Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponent causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponent to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attack the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponent can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion.

~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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Boseki Buredo Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 0
Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki Buredo can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki Buredo is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki Buredo can not absorb it).

~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).


±± All Declined ±± First step to make something approvable... FOLLOW CORRECT TEMPLATE. Read the first post of this thread and look at what i bolded.

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
Type: Supp
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: n/a
Description: The user summons servile hagfish which make a clone of the summoner out of hagfish, once the clone is physically touched (By an opponent or physical object) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are, trapping the opponent where they hit the clone. The clone is only able to do simple things such as ninjutsu.
- Normal clone rules apply.
- The slime is released as the opponet makes contact with the clone.

±± Declined ±± Nope, i can't allow a clone that can use ninjutsu, specially without a rank limitation. This needs to be a Taijutsu only clone. Also, slime will be b-rank max and only trap something in direct contact.

(Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
Type: Supp
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: n/a
Description: The user summons several hagfish which make a clone of the summoner out of hagfish, once the clone is physically touched (By an opponent or physical object) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are, trapping the opponent where they hit the clone. The clone is only able to do simple things such as free style Taijutsu (not Taijutsu techs).
- Normal clone rules apply.
- The sticky slime is released as the opponent makes contact with the clone.

±± Approved ±±


(Futon: Kiri Sentou)- Wind Release: Drilling Fists
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+5 for the fracture caused)
Description: The user focuses wind chakra through their arm, then release it and forms a twister-like air current around his arm. Then once the user punches the twister acts as a drill capable of breaking through A rank earth, if the opponent is hit by the twister they're body will sustain a major fracture to the area hit.
- Can never be used twice in the same post
- Cannot use another wind jutsu for two jutsus after.

±± Declined ±± similar technique exists


(Doton: Ookami Hora)- Earth Release: Wolf Cave
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will make two handseals focusing their earth chakra into their foot where they the slam their foot on the ground and create a giant wolf head out of the earth behind the opponent, the head emerges from the earth and closes its jaws on the opponent.
- Can be used 4 times per battle


±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists.

 

[~Anubis~]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Re-Submitted
Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
Rank:B
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind vectors(hand shaped) that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and the slash leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
Note
-can be used twice in a battle-
-user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
-cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated-
-can be use/taught by anubis only-
~Declined~ Chakra cost is way off. And "while this is activated?" How long does this technique last, exactly?

Re-Submitting again
Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
Rank:B
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind vectors(hand shaped) that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and the slash leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
Note
-can be used twice in a battle-
-user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
-cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated and last only for 5min approx-
-can be use/taught by anubis only-

±± Declined ±± 5 minutes? Yes, because our RP counts time through minutes and hours. Makes plenty of sense... =_= Just in case you don't understand my point, time in the RP is measure in TURNS. Also, vectors...what are those? because the name can mean so many things... You should explain a bit better.


Earth Style Barrier:great earth dome destruction (Doton kekkai:kyousei doro domu kujo)
Rank:A
Range: short-mid
chakra cost:20(+10 while collapsing the dome)
damage cost:40
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user overturns the earth, causing it to rise up around his opponent(s).After the opponents are trapped under the dome the user does snake hand seal and collapse the dome turning the ground as it was before the dome was created crushing the opponent inside .
Note:
-can be used twice in battle-
-can be use /taught by anubis only-


±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. If you submit a blunt copy of a cannon technique again, you will be punished by being banned for 2 submission cycles of this thread.