Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Submitting a new Summoning Contract
If Approved, I would be dropping:
Summoning Animal: Blue Ringed Octopus
Scroll Owner: Jacob Moore
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
General Description: The blue ringed octopi reside in the coral reefs within the vast and relatively unexplored eastern seas of the Ninja World. Blue Ringed Octopi are recognized as one of the most venomous marine animals in the world, with their venom being potent enough to kill a human. They are known to produce a powerful neurotoxin known as tetrodotoxin, which is produced by bacteria in the salivary glands. Tetrodotoxin blocks sodium channels, causing motor paralysis and respiratory arrest within minutes of exposure, leading to cardiac arrest due to a lack of oxygen. The blue ringed octopi reside in the coral reefs within the vast and relatively unexplored eastern seas of the Ninja World.
Summon General Abilities: Lining each of their eight arms are powerful suction cups (240 per arm, 1,920 suckers in total) that they generally use to move along the sea floor or other hard surfaces, as well as pry open shell fish. Their suckers are even strong enough to open up tightly closed jars. As the rank of the summoning increases along with overall size of the octopus itself, this ability will operate on a higher scale-While smaller octopi would prove capable of dealing minor, superficial damage to a human, one could imagine that the large ones would prove capable of dealing far more damage. Their many arms and powerful suckers, along with the powerful neurotoxin allow them to effectively catch and subdue their prey.
The Toads seen in the series, these octopi can reach sizes that are significantly bigger than normal. The size of the octopi can range from no smaller than a watermelon to as big as the Toads on Myobokuzan.
~Leaving for Scorps~
±± Declined ±± Ace has the octopus contract
(Katon:Guren)Fire Release: Crimson Lotus Flower
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user alters their stance to hold their arm behind them while pushing their fire chakra into it while also drawing on the surrounding heat giving it a faint golden and orange glow and the slight outline of a claw. After the jutsu is primed the user will swing their arm in an upward fashion releasing a wave of flames that cleave the ground as it goes along. The wave of flames is 10 feet wide. As it cleaves the ground it breaks apart the earth tossing around smaller rocks and minerals and other debris making it even harder to escape unscathed. Because of this, it makes it seem as if the waves of fire are "exploding" outwards, as shredded crystal minerals formed from the rapid heating of the earth fly towards an opponent. After the fire passes over the earth, it leaves glowing red gashes and cracks in the earth from the intense heat making it impossible to grow plants in those areas of the earth.
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Cannot be used two turns consecutively
~Approved~ Nice and simple, well done.
I removed the second wave of flames, the part about the embers, as well as the A Rank only next turn restriction.
(Kuchoiyse no Jutsu: Elgar) Peregrine Falcon Summoning Technique: Elgar
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Elgar is a medium sized falcon capable of comfortably carrying a single passenger on his back. Similar to Gamatatsu, Elgar is capable of altering the size of his body so that it does not serve as a nuisance when not in battle. After reducing his size, Elgar stands as tall as any other ordinary falcon. Being naturally lazy and nonchalant he is often reluctant to be summoned. Despite his naturally lazy outlook on life, Elgar remains one of the fastest of his species. Twice per battle, Elgar can move at speeds that would surprise even a Sannin in close range-taking the moment to either move towards the offensive, or to take evasive action and avoid an attack that might under normal circumstances be unavoidable. Elgar has a lightning element affinity.
*Lasts for five turns
*Can only be summoned once
~Declined~ Although you did describe it to some extent, I'm going to ask that you describe it further in terms of how fast he can travel with a better comparison and that twice per battle needs to count as one of your techniques per turn. Also, you are being too vague on the lightning affinity, up to what rank lightning can he use?
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Summoning Animal: Blue Ringed Octopus
Scroll Owner: Jacob Moore
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
General Description: The blue ringed octopi reside in the coral reefs within the vast and relatively unexplored eastern seas of the Ninja World. Blue Ringed Octopi are recognized as one of the most venomous marine animals in the world, with their venom being potent enough to kill a human. They are known to produce a powerful neurotoxin known as tetrodotoxin, which is produced by bacteria in the salivary glands. Tetrodotoxin blocks sodium channels, causing motor paralysis and respiratory arrest within minutes of exposure, leading to cardiac arrest due to a lack of oxygen. The blue ringed octopi reside in the coral reefs within the vast and relatively unexplored eastern seas of the Ninja World.
Summon General Abilities: Lining each of their eight arms are powerful suction cups (240 per arm, 1,920 suckers in total) that they generally use to move along the sea floor or other hard surfaces, as well as pry open shell fish. Their suckers are even strong enough to open up tightly closed jars. As the rank of the summoning increases along with overall size of the octopus itself, this ability will operate on a higher scale-While smaller octopi would prove capable of dealing minor, superficial damage to a human, one could imagine that the large ones would prove capable of dealing far more damage. Their many arms and powerful suckers, along with the powerful neurotoxin allow them to effectively catch and subdue their prey.
The Toads seen in the series, these octopi can reach sizes that are significantly bigger than normal. The size of the octopi can range from no smaller than a watermelon to as big as the Toads on Myobokuzan.
~Leaving for Scorps~
±± Declined ±± Ace has the octopus contract
Resubmitting(Katon:Guren)Fire Release:Crimson Lotus Flower
Rank: A
Type:Offense
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user alters their stance to hold their arm behind them while pushing their fire chakra into it while also drawing on the surrounding heat giving it a faint golden and orange glow and the slight outline of a claw. After the jutsu is primed the user will swing their arm in an upward fashion cleaving the ground next to them before expeling a wave of fire, they will then swing again at any angle of their choice and expel the rest of the built up fire chakra in a second wave of fire. The waves of flame are 10 feet wide that travels out to the edge of Mid range before fading into embers. If used on the ground the fire will cleave and gash the earth as it goes along. As it cleaves the ground it breaks apart the earth tossing around smaller rocks and minerals and other debris making it even harder to escape unscathed. Because of this, it makes it seem as if the waves of fire are "exploding" outwards, as shredded crystal minerals formed from the rapid heating of the earth fly towards an opponent. After the fire passes over the earth, it leaves glowing red gashes and cracks in the earth from the intense heat making it impossible to grow plants in those areas of the earth.
~Can only be used two times per battle
~Cannot be used two turns consecutively.
~Can only use A Rank and below fire next turn.
~Declined~ If the wave travels to the edge of mid-range and then turns into embers, it means the embers travel into long range, so why is this technique up to mid range? Yes the wave goes up to mid range but the effects of the attack are still reaching up to long.
(Katon:Guren)Fire Release: Crimson Lotus Flower
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user alters their stance to hold their arm behind them while pushing their fire chakra into it while also drawing on the surrounding heat giving it a faint golden and orange glow and the slight outline of a claw. After the jutsu is primed the user will swing their arm in an upward fashion releasing a wave of flames that cleave the ground as it goes along. The wave of flames is 10 feet wide. As it cleaves the ground it breaks apart the earth tossing around smaller rocks and minerals and other debris making it even harder to escape unscathed. Because of this, it makes it seem as if the waves of fire are "exploding" outwards, as shredded crystal minerals formed from the rapid heating of the earth fly towards an opponent. After the fire passes over the earth, it leaves glowing red gashes and cracks in the earth from the intense heat making it impossible to grow plants in those areas of the earth.
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Cannot be used two turns consecutively
~Approved~ Nice and simple, well done.
I removed the second wave of flames, the part about the embers, as well as the A Rank only next turn restriction.
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(Kuchoiyse no Jutsu: Elgar) Peregrine Falcon Summoning Technique: Elgar
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Elgar is a medium sized falcon capable of comfortably carrying a single passenger on his back. Similar to Gamatatsu, Elgar is capable of altering the size of his body so that it does not serve as a nuisance when not in battle. After reducing his size, Elgar stands as tall as any other ordinary falcon. Being naturally lazy and nonchalant he is often reluctant to be summoned. Despite his naturally lazy outlook on life, Elgar remains one of the fastest of his species. Twice per battle, Elgar can move at speeds that would surprise even a Sannin in close range-taking the moment to either move towards the offensive, or to take evasive action and avoid an attack that might under normal circumstances be unavoidable. Elgar has a lightning element affinity.
*Lasts for five turns
*Can only be summoned once
~Declined~ Although you did describe it to some extent, I'm going to ask that you describe it further in terms of how fast he can travel with a better comparison and that twice per battle needs to count as one of your techniques per turn. Also, you are being too vague on the lightning affinity, up to what rank lightning can he use?
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