[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Kamishiro]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

~Resubmitting
(Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user summon two giant crows They both have the same size as Gamabunta one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
❖ Must sign the crow contract.
❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

~ Left for Scorps ~

±± Declined ±± 2 Crows the size of gamabunta? LOL! Yeah...and i'm santa. Make this reasonable or its DNR on the next submission

~Resubmitting :

(Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as Pein's bird one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
❖ Must sign the crow contract.
❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.
~Declined~ Didn't I tell you to keep it A-rank like 7 submissions ago? Change the rank. The size should be fine.

[Hyotoun :Washi] - Ice Release : Eagle
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:The user gathers a decent amount of his Ice chakra.Afterwards he releases his ice chakra from his body the he use shape manipulation to turn the Ice chakra to multiple ice eagles that fly through the air to strike the user's opponents from all directions.
❖ Can only be used 3 times

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±± Approved ±±

Updating old cjs.


[Hyotoun :Washi] - Ice Release : Eagle
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:The user gathers a decent amount of his Ice chakra.Afterwards he releases his ice chakra from his body the he use shape manipulation to turn the Ice chakra to multiple ice eagles that fly through the air to strike the user's opponents from all directions.
❖ Can only be used 3 times

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~Approved~

Just increasing it's range

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[Genjutsu: Zennou Kibou] - Illusion Technique : The Almighty Trick
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing a lightning blast/technique the user uses his chakra that is already infused with the lightning technique to change it's color properties causing the lightning technique's color to change into all the colors causing the opponent to be tricked by the Lightning technique forcing him to watch the technique without making any defend against it due to it's colors beauty.
❖ Only effect on C-ranked lightning techniques and above.
~Declined~ What? Do Not Resubmit

 

[Mephistopheles]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Lightning Style: Overload (Raiton: Raikata, literally means excess lightning)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/a
Description: Overload is a precision type lightning release technique created as an alternate way of performing genjutsu. The human brain when exposed to a given frequency of brainwaves hallucinates, using precise chakra control and lightning mastery the user creates these waves and overloads the targets head with these. This does not propose any threat to the target but otherwise causes the brain to lose functionality due to hallucination. Controlling the density of these the user is able to create the desired illusions without the threat of the opponent breaking free using conventional methods while the waves themselves are generally undetectable. The drawback however is the variety the general method could provide (i.e depriving the target of his senses, hallucination can create illusion but is incapable of that).

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
Demon’s Graveyard (Akuma no hakachi)
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using Mephistopheles’ ability to summon more weapons, the user pushes the sword in the ground and release shockwaves of chakra underground to spread chakra across the field. Mephistopheles then starts to glow blue and within seconds weapons of all sorts erupt around the entire field impaling everyone except the areas the user wants untouched. In case the target(s) survive(s) the user can then take out the sword, with a little concentrate and pointing the sword at the area where all the weapons will burst out in concussion spread the weapons across the field.
- The summoned weapon cannot be controlled via telekinesis or possess the ability to attract lightning.
-Usable thrice in battle.
-Using the chakra, one is able to control where the swords erupt
(They are normal weapons with no use but to impale the opponent, it’s just metal this time)

~ Who or what is Mephistopheles ? Link me to either your bio if its him or quote your CW if that's it ~

I knew I forgot something -_-'

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Soul Reapers collection (Shinigami no kaishuu)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Soul reapers collection is set of swords, spears and axes, the primary weapon is a sword named Mephistopheles which retains the weapons most abilities. The set is a Caelum family treasure and thus can only be used by the current head of the family (being Leaf), anyone else to wield it is instantly electrocuted. To indicate the swords abilities are in effect, the sword turns the user’s eyes to red from blue. To ensure the users ease, he only needs to keep the Mephistopheles with him at all times, other weapons can be summoned at any time in the battle with a single swing of the sword which materializes a weapon from thin air and can then be launched via telekinesis (though the ability is limited to launching to only weapons that are part of the set).
Contents:
Mephistopheles: Weapon appears to be a falchion fashioned with an engine at the hilt, this is the primary weapon. Its abilities include: Being infused with lightning release(effectively allowing it to cut through tough surfaces unless the surface is hardened with chakra) and thus being able to cancel out other jutsu of Earth and lightning nature (Up to B rank) and other technique (Up to C rank). Summoning other weapons of the set and controlling them via telekinesis.
Other weapons: includes Single handed and both handed swords both double edged and single edged, Spear and javelins and battle axes. Up to 6 weapons can be used at a time (including Mephistopheles) and each weapon can attracts a unique value of voltage which user decides while summoning them (it cannot however attract an opponent’s jutsu as it is literally impossible to calculate the lightning technique’s volts in midst of battle)
Note: Can only be used by Leaf.
Note: Only the sets weapons can be used with telekinesis and requires Mephistopheles to be in users hands.
Note: Weapons don’t attract opponents lightning jutsu.
Note: Other restrictions are stated in the description to keep it clean.

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Demon’s Graveyard (Akuma no hakachi)
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using Mephistopheles’ ability to summon more weapons, the user pushes the sword in the ground and release shockwaves of chakra underground to spread chakra across the field. Mephistopheles then starts to glow blue and within seconds weapons of all sorts erupt around the entire field impaling everyone except the areas the user wants untouched. In case the target(s) survive(s) the user can then take out the sword, with a little concentrate and pointing the sword at the area where all the weapons will burst out in concussion spread the weapons across the field.
- The summoned weapon cannot be controlled via telekinesis or possess the ability to attract lightning.
- Usable thrice in battle.
- Using the chakra, one is able to control where the swords erupt
(They are normal weapons with no use but to impale the opponent, it’s just metal this time)


±± Declined ±± You need to reword the bolded part to explain it better

 

[Necron]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Adorenarin Shokku) Lighting release: Adrenaline Shock
Type: Suplementary
Rank: Forbiden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 50 to the user
Description: The user generates unfocused raiton chakra around his palm, and then brutally touches the left side of his chest (where the heart is). This shoks the user, and his heart beats faster, creating an adrenaline rush from the shok. Then, all the sences of the user become sharper, and his speed is moderatelly increased for 3 turns (+ 3 in the speed chart). Can only be used twice per battle, but the user will die the second time, if he has not defeated the opponet in the following 3 turns.

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. F-Rank without restrictions and without it actually being an F-Rank and yet copying existing techniques....nope.


(Raiton: Rai no Doriru) Lighting release: Lighting Drill
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: By performing 3 hand seals, the user generates lighting chakra betwin his palms, and then rotates the chakra, like a drill. The head of the drill works as a compass when underground (using the ground's magnetic field), and is automaticaly directed to the largest living being underground, as it will be emiting the largest magnetic field. It is ideal to dig holes as well as attack people that hide underground, using the "hide like a mole jutsu". The automatic redirection of the jutsu works only underground
Notes:
-I allow everyone in Kumogakure to use this, if it gets approved...
-If the user is a Raiton specialist, he can perform this jutsu with only the Ox hand seal.

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. A technique all kumo users can use is a village custom and those can only be submitted by Kages of the villages. Also, Similar technique exists.


(Raiton: Rai no Tsume) Lighting release: Lighting Claw
Type: Offensive / Suplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (if used to attack)
Description: By performing 5 hand seals, the user focuses a great amound of lighting around his/her hand, and extends it, shaping it into a lighting chakra claw. The claw can be used to grab things, and has a very strong grip. Can be extended till mid range. Active for 2 turns.
Notes:
-A Raiton Specialist can perform this jutsu with only the Ox hand seal.


±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Similar techniques exist.

 

[Reborn]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

~Resubmission~

Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims experience the sensation a huge gust of wind mixed with dust as if their opponent is using a wind technique. The resulting seensation will block their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and see their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both victims will then feel a strong impulse and instinct to fight which causes them ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, as if they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
~Since this jutsu has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
~Can be used 3 times in a match
~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

~ How ? Because you're treading dangerously on mental manipulation here ~

~Resubmission~

Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims experience the sensation a huge gust of wind mixed with dust as if their opponent is using a wind technique. The resulting seensation will block their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and see their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, as if they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
~Since this jutsu has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
~Can be used 3 times in a match
~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

±± Declined ±± This is an S-Rank illusion and thus needs appropriate restrictions. Its too powerful for an A-Rank. Also, what will happen if you use it against only one opponent? what if the opponent has clones? how will it work. This should only work against multiple enemies...as in different shinobi


Genjutsu: Kyuumin Shobatsu(Illusionary Technique: Dormant Punishment)
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel their chakra into their opponent's chakra via the Rat seal. The user's chakra will then remain dormant until the victim uses a technique B-rank or above. The resulting amount of chakra needed will cause the user's chakra to activate like a switch to cause the affects of the illusion. As the victim begins to channel their chakra for the technique they use, they will see several spiked chains shoot up and restrain them, wrapping all around their body and dragging them to the ground. The chains will gradually become tighter and tighter and the victim will feel the spikes of the chains sinking deeper into their bodies and also the lack of air from being restricted. Eventually, after so much tension, the victims will fall unconscious.
~This technique remains dormant for 3 turns only
~The technique (if activated) will render one's opponent unconscious after 2 turns.
~Can be used 3 times per battle

±± Approved ±±


Magen: Shini Yuragi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Mind Tremor Technique)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is a technique meant to cause temporary confusion and also to have lingering affects on one's opponent after the illusion is released. The user will make the Dragon → Hare seals to initiate the illusion. Once cast, the victim will experience their vision to blur and appear to be as if it were being shaken and spun around in a very chaotic manor. The victim's chakra will be disrupted in their brain to a point where the damage causes a slight tremor in their brain, which will also result in a severe headache. The headache mixed in with the vision distortion will cause the victim to be very unbalanced while trapped in this illusion and also makes it difficult for them to focus while affected by this technique.
~Can only be used twice per battle
~The inability for the victim to focus completely due to the severe headache and vision equilibrium distortion means they can't focus on techniques above B-ranked while in the state of this technique.
~This technique lasts 2 turns, after the second turn, the victim will succumb to vomiting as the stress becomes too much of them, the inducing of vomit will be the breaking factor.
~After being released from the illusion, the victim sustains a level of impaired balance and distortion for the same amount of time as they were were affected by the technique.
~The user of this technique can't use genjutsu for the next 3 turns after this jutsu is cast.
~The user cannot use any other genjutsu while this technique is active nor can he use techniques above A-rank


±± Declined ±± As it stands its oped. Look at what i bolded. Basically, even if the opponent releases the technique he is still affected. Thats immediate decline. Also, don't you feel A-Rank for this one is more appropriate? I would prefer to use it more times than to have it more powerful. But that is personal "taste".

 

[Rand al'Thor]

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Yaku Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Ra || Summoning Technique: Ra
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll from his back and wipes his/her blood on one of the hands, performs the necessary handseals Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground and slams the hand on the ground summoning Ra ,the Lord of all yaks.Ra is a gigantic yak, slightly larger than Gamabunta.He will only answer the summons of those who it respects.though he cannot speak it has the ability to communicate telepathically with the summoner.His powers of destruction are second to none and it crushes everything when it runs.

Abilities:
-capable of using any Doton attacks upto S-rank which the user knows.
-Because of his size and strength he is immune to basic ninja weapons and Water attacks upto A-rank
-Can be summoned anywhere between short to mid range of the summoner

Restrictions:
-Can only use up to S-Rank techniques
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can stay in the field upto 4 turns
-Must have signed the Yak contract
-Only Apollonius can teach this

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±± Declined ±± Remove what i bolded and reduce his size. Gamabunta is 100 meters tall...a Yak bigger than it encompasses the field from short to long range. How on earth do you expect to fight using a summon that large?

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

3rd submission this 7 day period

(Arrogante)- Great Skull Emperor
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (to summon)
Damage points: +10 to kenjutsu
Description: Arrogante is a large, double-headed battle axe with a pair of rounded blades and a slit-eye pendant in the middle of its focal point. Despite it being roughly the same size as himself, the 2nd Mizukage wields this weapon with a single hand relatively easily due to his great strength obtained from his Hozuki style training. The Mizukage has been able to combine his water style with the axe and flow water chakra to the slit-eye pendant enabling him to use different techniques with it. This axe can easily cut through steel and most earth based techniques (B rank and below)
-Can only be wielded by characters with great physical strength (lifting several hundred pounds or more)
-Only allowed to be uses by Professor Sarutobi and those he allows.

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~Declined~ Remove the kenjutsu enhancement considering that is soley for swords. You need to include that cutting B rank and below earth techniques counts as one of the user's three jutsu. Also bare in mind that each custom weapon can only have one special jutsu made for it.
The water styles I mentioned I was going to submit as separate jutsu if approved.

(Arrogante)- Great Skull Emperor
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (to summon)
Damage points:
Description: Arrogante is a large, double-headed battle axe with a pair of rounded blades and a slit-eye pendant in the middle of its focal point. Despite it being roughly the same size as himself, the 2nd Mizukage wields this weapon with a single hand relatively easily due to his great strength obtained from his Hozuki style training. This axe can easily cut through steel and most earth based techniques (A rank and below)
-Can only be wielded by characters with great physical strength (lifting several hundred pounds or more)
-Cutting through earth A rank and below counts as a move.
-Only allowed to be uses by Professor Sarutobi and those he allows.

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Increased the cutting rank to A since its the only thing it can do. Removed the bonus damage and mention of water techniques.


±± Declined ±± Ok, so you can use this to cut a plateau in half? How? Lets be honest, plenty of weapons with the same abilities out there. What makes this one special besides that fact that its a double edge axe? Why not make it able to user water based abilities?

 

[~Depp~]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Tappu)- Toop
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (If summoned)
Damage: n/a
Description: Toop is a wood puppet that has iron bands, around its body, waists, and forearms along with having four arms. Toops body is connected by jointed screws, that allow the body to unscrew all parts of its self. Toop has a top like cone which it spins on to move along the ground very fast, the cones underside (the bottom layer that is seen) has a small 3cm blade that wraps around the cone and creates a drill out of the top. The top can be detached and used as another puppet. Each of Toop's arms contain 2 bundles of senbon, in the upper arm and forearm. While Toop's head also contains 6 smoke bombs, which release them through his mouth. Toop's body is also able pull its arms, waist, and head into its body and be used as drill able to break through the thickest of Earth.
- Toop's original legs being separated from the waist screw, count as using another puppet.
- Smoke bombs can be used 1 time per turn.
- Senbon can only be released 2 times per turn.
- All joints mentioned to detach, detach very quickly.
- Able to transform into a drill two times per turn.

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~Declined~ You need to specify up to what rank earth it can drill and make it count as one of the user's three jutsu. And next time make sure you bold the changes or I will forced decline the entire submission for not following the rules.
I reworded the Description, and added a restriction.

(Tappu)- Toop
Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (If summoned)
Damage: n/a
Description: Toop is a wood puppet that has iron bands, around its body, waists, and forearms along with having four arms. Toops body is connected by jointed screws, that allow the body to unscrew all parts of its self. Toop has a top like cone which it spins on to move along the ground very fast, the cones underside (the bottom layer that is seen) has a small 3cm blade that wraps around the cone and creates a drill out of the top. The top can be detached and used as another puppet. Each of Toop's arms contain 2 bundles of senbon, in the upper arm and forearm. While Toop's head also contains 6 smoke bombs, which release them through his mouth. Toop's body is also able pull its arms, waist, and head into its body and be used as drill able to break through the thickest of Earth up to B-rank.
- Toop's original legs being separated from the waist screw, count as using another puppet.
- Smoke bombs can be used 1 time per turn.
- Senbon can only be released 2 times per turn.
- All joints mentioned to detach, detach very quickly.
- Able to transform into a drill two times per turn.
- Using the drill counts as one of the users 3 jutsus.

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±± Declined ±± what legs? doesn't it stand on top of a drill?

 

[Alternative]

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(Janku Ningyō no Shūgō) - Collection of Junk Puppets
Rank: S
Type: Puppet
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description:
• The Collection of Junk Puppets are a wide array of three puppets, all designed from scrap metal and other materials. The collection are held in a scroll with three markings within it which hold the puppets in seals. They each have their own abilities which hold them above other puppets, and are designed to work together in unison. They all stand at roughly 2.5 meters tall and must all be summoned together. The puppets themselves are designed to take powerful hits, and cannot be destroyed by any jutsu of A-Rank or lower. However the materials are impervious to earth techniques and cannot be destroyed by those means.

• The first of the puppets is Junk Warrior, a standardized puppet which looks most like a human than the others and is of a primarily blue and grey color. Junk Warrior is capable of extending it's arms out to mid-range in front of himself and latch onto objects like a grappling hook. It's also capable of using any Taijutsu which the user knows up to A-Rank.
• The second is Junk Archer and looks similarly to the Junk Warrior. Archer is orange in colour and is equipped with a bow and arrow. It holds special arrows with rope attached to the end of them and are coated in a flammable liquid. This can be set alight through a small flamethrower mechanism held within it's bow.
• The third is Junk Gardna and is the most defensive of them all. The Gardna is green in colour and is larger than the previous two. The puppet is capable of releasing a "Chakra Shield" technique of A-Rank. Alongside this, it's capable of becoming an "infinite defense" shielding the user from any fire and wind based techniques of S-Rank and lower.​

Notes:
• Each of the puppet's unique abilities (excluding taijutsu, chakra shield) can be used once a match.
• This counts as three seperate puppets towards the limit.
• The puppet's abilities count as a move.
• The puppets must be summoned into battle via summoning scroll.
• The collection can only be on the field for 5 turns. Any more and they rust being unable to move. Through this they still count towards the puppet limit and cannot be placed back into their scroll.
• These puppets are vulnerable to water jutsu, that any of A-Rank or higher will rust them immediately into not being useable at all.

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(Junk Gardna)

±± Declined ±± So basically, they are immune to Earth, can be used to stop Fire and Wind up to S-Rank and they can only be stopped by water? The resistance part is a bit too much. You need to tone it down.


(Kugutsu: Shi no Otoshiana) - Puppetry Technique: Death Trap
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
• The user will place a special scroll containing several puppet parts with sharp and rustic blades face down on the floor and perform the basic summoning hand seals, in which will summon these parts underground, dormant. When the user is ready, they will connect chakra threads to these parts and raise them from the ground like a small forest in front of them, impaling the target. This has a wide range, covering a near 180 degree radius in front of them. Not all the parts are sharp, so they can be used as blunt weapons or stepping stones for a skilled shinobi.
Notes:
• Can only be used twice per match, with a four turn wait after using it (stored in seperate scrolls)
• This technique counts towards the puppet limit when used.
• Cannot be reversed summoned into the scroll after using it.


±± Declined ±± If the parts are underground how do you attach the threads to them? Chakra threads last time i saw couldn't insert themselves inside the ground...

 

[McKnockout]

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(Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user performs three handseals (Tiger -> Hare -> Ram) and concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). The bubbles can only be created at a minimum distance of 10 meters from the opponent. Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will (which would require the user to perform an additional handseal). That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building; with the radius of each explosion to be roughly several metres. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain (due to the high amount of mental concentration required in order to perform and maintain such precise charka control).
*Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage.
*Note: No S rank or above wind techniques the same and next 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
~Declined~ You still did not clearly specify the explosion range of the bubbles, "Several meters" is too vague. As far as restriction goes you pretty much sugar coated them. You and I both know 25 damage to the user in our RP is nothing, neither is stating that mental concentration. If you can't utilize techniques above S rank for three turns after usage, why did you include that last note of not being able to perform S rank or above wind techniques for the next two turns when you weren't going to be able to either way?Sugar coating isn't going to work on such ranked techniques.

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(Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user performs three handseals (Tiger -> Hare -> Ram) and concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). The bubbles can only be created at a minimum distance of 10 meters from the opponent. Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will (which would require the user to perform an additional handseal). That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building; with the radius of each explosion to be roughly five metres. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain (due to the high amount of mental concentration required in order to perform and maintain such precise charka control).
*Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
*Note: Can only use up to A-rank wind in the same turn.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage and can not use wind jutsu above S-rank for the rest of the match.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

±± Declined ±± Its still oped and its becoming more and more like a Bubble Release technique, even if you describe it as being a Wind technique. Also lets be honest...5 meters around each bubble vs 24 bubbles = ... OP. One more try. Then its DNR


New:
(Futon/Doton: Wakusei Sougishiki) - Wind/Earth Release: Planetary Awakening
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs two handseals (Ram -> Tiger) and concentrates his Doton chakra into the ground up to mid range from him, creating 9 extremely dense and heavy spheres of dark earth to suddenly rise up/erupt from the ground all around the user; uplifting a large amount of dust in the process. With an additional handseal, the user will then proceed to coat each dense sphere with a layer of concentrated wind which begins to rotate rapidly around each sphere itself allowing the spheres to levitate/fly and be able to be manipulated/maneuvered swiftly in the air - that is, this layer of wind makes the spheres aerodynamic as well as being able to deal sharp/slashing damage to any nearby targets. This layer of wind also protects the spheres from lightning, dissipating any incoming lightning harmlessly along the surface of the layer of wind. If fire happens to hit the spheres, unless the fire is S-rank or higher, the spheres maintain their form and allow the fire to merge with them forming fiery spheres of dense earth. If the fire is put out, the spheres return to their wind form. With the layer of wind formed when the user performs the additional handseal, the user can focus the spheres to be propelled towards the target(s) at great speeds in chosen directions. These dense and heavy spheres are easily capable of smashing bones and, if not properly defended, even death.
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
*Note: Must wait three turns to use again.
*Note: Can not use earth techniques above S-rank for two turns afterwards.
*Note: Can not use wind techniques above S-rank for two turns afterwards.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

±± Declined ±± This is the same as my divine obelisks of protection. I can't believe you actually submitted something similar to a technique i did once again. First the genjutsu and the weapon and now this? I'm going to leave a warning, a serious one this time. Next time i'll be force to ban you from this thread permanently.


(Katon: Tenkuu Inmetsu) - Fire Release: Celestial Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates a large amount of Katon chakra throughout his body and by using their mastery of chakra control and Katon Release, the user suddenly releases a huge burst of fire which radiates out from his body in a series of rings (radiates horizontally out, a cylinder of fire the height of the user). However, these rings of fire radiate only out to short range from the user from which the series of rings/cylinder suddenly bursts/extends upwards towards the sky, creating a huge fireball to form above the user which proceeds to travel upwards at great speed towards the heavens. Then at the peak of its ascent, the huge fireball suddenly explodes dispersing/scattering countless smaller-sized fireballs i.e. exploding and sending a rain of fireballs to descend and scatter at and around the target leaving large, molten craters on impact with the earth.
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
*Note: Must wait three turns to use again.
*Note: Can not use fire techniques above S-rank for two turns afterwards.
*Note: The user is also hurt if caught in the rain of fireballs.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout


±± Declined ±± I want you to add a note you can't use this to enable the use of Kirin.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

futon kaze : wind style wind wheel
Type: offensive/supp
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will make 3 hand seals and form a wheel of wind around themselves. Using this wheel the user can travel towards their enemy and then get out of it throwing it at their enemy or throw it from a distance. The wind wheel is cable of cutting threw A rank earth and while the user is inside the wheel can defend against weapons.
Note: can only be used 3 times per match
Note: can’t use any jutsu while inside the wheel.

~ First, fix the Japanese name. Second, how fast is the wheel ? Third, number of uses should be reduced. ~

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futon kaze hoi-ru : wind style: wind wheel
Type: offensive/supp
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will make 3 hand seals and form a wheel of wind around themselves. Using this wheel the user can travel towards their enemy and then get out of it throwing it at their enemy or throw it from a distance. The wind wheel is cable of cutting threw A rank earth and while the user is inside the wheel can defend against weapons.
Note: can only be used 2 times per match
Note: can’t use any jutsu while inside the wheel.
note: Goes fast enough to knock away incoming weapons and doesn't increase the users speed the wheel being able to move the user around does not increase his speed. And throwing it it goes as fast as a normal weapon goes when thrown ( the same speed as lets say a kunai.)

±± Approved ±±

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butai modo-o ( elements mode)
Type: supp/defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make 5 hand seals and sit down to meditate when the user opens his eyes they will be glowing as well as any tattoos on their body. The user will stand up And breathe fire and move it around himself in a ring and will repeat the process with water making a ring of water followed up by a ring of small rocks. And then the user will finish up by making a sphere of air around him allowing him to levitate into the air. The user will be able to manipulate the element rings up to mid range but can't use ninjutsu while the mode is active.
Note: the wind sphere can protect user from up to s rank fire.
Note: mode takes 2 turn to complete
note: lasts for 3 turns
Note: After use user won't be able to use any wind,fire,water,earth ninjutsu above b rank for 2 turns.
Note: activating jutsu counts as two jutsu
Note: can only be used twice.
note: after deactivation user must wait 3 turns before using it again.
note: after used 2 times user can't use water,wind,fire or earth ninjutsu above C rank for 2 turns


±± Declined ±± =_= do i even need to say it? Don't resubmit.

 

[shadedcrow]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Paper Bound- kami genkai
Type:Supplementary
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu makes a chain of chakra infused paper that the user weaves around there target.The chain then themselves connect the target to ambient objects, (rocks, trees, other people). These chains are breakable if you use a strong cutting jutsu(Rank A and above).

Note: Only one chain is created per use of this jutsu and can only be used by a Konan bio.

±± Declined ±± A C-Rank that can only be broken by A-Rank and above? Without restrictions?


Paper Dragon- Kami Doragon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user releases a large amount of chakra infused paper that moves upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user throws explosive kunai and explosive tags bullets at the target. Then finishes by forming the mass of paper into a dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.

Note: Can only be used by Konan bios, and no other paper techniques may be used this turn, the user of this technique may only use lower ranking techniques for the next two turns.

±± Declined ±± The restriction i bolded means that after using this you can only use B-Ranks of anything for 2 turns... Its not very good for you, is it?


Paper Bag- Kami Hyou
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will send sheets of paper that wrap around target body parts covering them immobilizing/disabling specific parts of the body. Parts of the body that are attack are cut by the chakra infused paper.

Note:This jutsu can only be used by Konan bios


±± Declined ±± Cannon technique. Submit a cannon technique again and i'l, be forced to ban you from the thread.

 

[Icemyster]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast, along with lowering the power of high energy particles by cooling the molecules that would be reacting(reducing the speed of the molecules that produce heat), reducing fire and lightning jutsu by one rank.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once
*can only be used by Ice users

±± Declined ±± Severely OP


(Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals.
*jutsu's effects last two turns
*only usable once per battle

±± Declined ±± Description makes it seem Oped. Explain this better please.


(Hyouton: ki-shinshou) Ice Release : Energy Transfer
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range:Short
Chakra :30
Damage :60
Description : The ice user quickly charges ice chakra into his or her body, and releases it through contact with a person or object (things like kunai would absorb it and freeze/cool upon contact with something) or in the case of a human contact, heat would be rapidly pulled from the person, causing painful numbing and stiffness of the affected area.
*Can only be used by Hyouton users
*can only be used four times
*When used with a kunai, it must make contact with another object to cause anything


±± Declined ±± OPed... Tbh i don't know if you fully understand the implications and possible uses of something like this.

 

[Kwalker394]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Raiton: Dendou Hora Ryouiki (Lightning Style: Electric Mine Field)
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: E
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 5 Chakra
Damage: N/A (10 Damage if stepped on)
Description:
The user concentrates on his Raiton chakra. The user then molds his chakra and channel it to his mouth while squishing it into small flatly round pellets. The user then spits out the small lighting pellets (about 30) to the ground in a wide area (8ft-13ft). When the opponent steps on the pellets they will send off a electrical signal through the air as well as shocking the opponent. These pellets are rather small and are usually unnoticeable to the naked eye. When these pellets go off Kenesu can sense the electrical signal in the air by using his Raiton chakra within him to locate the enemy.
~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used 2 times in battle
~May also cause Kenesu damage as well if stepped on

±± Declined ±± Elemental techniques are, by definition D-Ranks and above. Also, this isn't very usefull so i don't think its a good thing to have this. Either way you need to upt its rank.



Raiton: Sennin No Benso (Lightning Style: Mage of Defense)
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
While the user channels his Raiton chakra he does 5 hand seals Monkey-Ox-Snake-Boar-Dragon after which the user releases the Raiton chakra from his body in front of him and forms it into a dense, Lighting mage. The dense lighting is compacted so that nothing can get through it, not even air. This Lighting mage can block any lighting B and below, A water and below and C earth and below but is extremely weak to Fire and Wind attacks. This Lightning mage can also deflect weapons as well as enemy hand to hand (tai) attacks.
~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~This jutsu last 3 turns
~A rank Lighting will cancel this jutsu, C rank and above Fire and wind attacks will also cancel out this jutsu.
~Can only be used 1 time in battle
~Cannot use any B or A rank Lighting for 3 turns

±± Declined ±± So many elemental familiars out there. This one however, is very overpowered and you don't even respect the elemental table of strengths and weaknesses. Lightning is strong to Earth, Neutral to Water... A A-Rank lightning would stop up to a S-Rank Earth... Your defens part makes literally no sense.

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Summoning Animal: Black-throated Robin
Scroll Owner: Kwalker394
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background:
is a species of bird in the Muscicapidae family. Its genus name is derived from the Ancient Greek words poikilos "little" and dryas "dryad", and the species name albonotata is derived from the Latin words albus "white" and notata "marked".
Measuring 18 to 19 cm (7–8 in), the Black-throated Robin has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.

~ Scorps ~

±± Approved ±±

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^Summoning tattoo ^​

Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akuma (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Akuma)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Akuma The King of Robins. Akuma is about 1/2 the size of Gamabunta. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Akuma is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Abilities:
~Akuma can speak English but he can also communicate to his summoner by telepathic means.
~Akuma can fly with the summoner on him
~Akuma can also do a synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu with his summoner
~Capable of using Fuuton and Katon up to C Rank
~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any D rank attacks by flapping his wings.

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Kwalker394 can only teach how to summon Akuma
~Each jutsu counts toward the summoner's 3 moves
~synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu counts as 2 moves of the summoners 3 move limit
~Riding Akuma counts as a move
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~Can stay in the fight up to 4 turns

±± Declined ±± A 50 meter tall bird is hardly an A-Rank summon. Summons can only use one element and can use it up to S-Rank and without the need for hand seals. And take the english part. He talks, its enough. And obviously he can fly with you on his back...he's 50 meters tall...he can fly with a bus on his back. (50 meters because gamabunta is roughly 100...)


Raiton: Dendou Hora Ryouiki (Lightning Style: Electric Mine Field)
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: N/A (10 Damage if stepped on)
Description:
The user concentrates on his Raiton chakra. The user then molds his chakra and channel it to his mouth while squishing it into small flatly round pellets. The user then spits out the small lighting pellets (about 30) to the ground in a wide area (8ft-13ft). When the opponent steps on the pellets they will send off a electrical signal through the air as well as shocking the opponent. These pellets are rather small and are usually unnoticeable to the naked eye. When these pellets go off the user can sense the electrical signal in the air by using his Raiton chakra within him/her to locate the enemy. This jutsu is very useful due to the fact that the user can locate the enemy in a split second and counter the opponent unsuspectingly or to set up a ambush for the unsuspecting enemy.
~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~May also cause the user damage as well if stepped on
~Sensing only happens if the user is within mid-range of the pellets.

±± Approved ±± Edited rank and added note


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[Uchiha Jinchuuriki]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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(Ranton: Kamehameha | かめはめ波)-Storm Release: Turtle Devastation Wave
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: A storm release user begins to gather an enormous amount of ranton chakra into the palms of their hands. The user then brings his hand together and holds them back behind themselves, preparing the attack. When the attack is condensed with enough ranton chakra, the user will spring there hands toward the opponent and let loose a single focus beam of ranton chakra. The beam flies incredibly fast, due to the beams of electricity that flow like water being a property of ranton, and the chakra being forcefully pushed out towards the opponent. The beam leaves devastating damage and is definitely a kill shot if it makes direct contact.
-Can only be taught by myself, Uchiha Jinchuuriki
-Due to the large amount of ranton chakra used, the user cannot use ranton, raiton, or suiton jutsu the next turn
-Can only be used 3 times per battle

Declined.. kill shot.. really?

(Kuchiyose: Kyo Shou) Summoning: Lord Shou
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 each turn summoned)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Shou is Swift Lord of the Storm Release. He is the brother of Daiki, Lord of all swifts, and he is also related to Isamu, Swift Lord of the Seas. He wears metal talon claws over his actual talons on his legs, and the talon claws are made from a special metal that can be infused with chakra increasing the damage dealt from taijutsu talon scratches by +10. He is also very big an sturdy, being able to take on any C-rank techniques and not disperse, barely being disturbed. Shou posses Storm Release, expelling the chakra from his mouth, and he can use Storm Release techniques up to S rank, although if he goes to S-rank he cannot use and Ranton the next turn, so he typically sticks to A-rank attacks. Shou has navy blue and grey wings, resembling a storm, and stands at 3/4 the size of Gamabunta. He in incredibly agile and mobile in the skies, as all Swifts are.

-This Summoning can only be summoned for 3-turns and can fly for all 3 turns
-This Summoning can only be summoned by someone with the Swift Contract.
-this Summoning can be summoned once per battle.
-Can use S-rank Ranton only once per battle but it requires no Ranton from Shou next turn. No such penalty with A-ranks

Declined explain how bird uses taijutsu? curious i am.

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Storm Release: Turtle Devastation Wave
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: A storm release user begins to gather an enormous amount of ranton chakra into the palms of their hands. The user then brings his hand together and holds them back behind themselves, preparing the attack as it radiates a blue aura due to the large amount of storm chakra. When the attack is condensed with enough ranton chakra, the user will spring there hands toward the opponent and let loose a single focus beam of ranton chakra. The beam flies incredibly fast, due to the beams of electricity that flow like water being a property of ranton, and the chakra being forcefully pushed out towards the opponent.
-Can only be taught by Uchiha Jinchuuriki
-Due to the large amount of ranton chakra used, the user cannot use ranton, raiton, or suiton jutsu the next turn
-Can only be used 3 times per battle

±± Declined ±± similar technique exist.


(Kuchiyose: Kyo Shou) Summoning: Lord Shou
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 each turn summoned)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Shou is Swift Lord of the Storm Release. He is the brother of Daiki, Lord of all swifts, and he is also related to Isamu, Swift Lord of the Seas. He wears a light metal armor over his wings, and the armor can protect him against elemental attacks up to B rank before it breaks. Shou posses Storm Release, expelling the chakra from his mouth, and he can use Storm Release techniques up to S rank, although if he goes to S-rank he cannot use and Ranton the next turn, so he typically sticks to A-rank attacks. Shou has navy blue and grey wings, resembling a storm, and stands at 1/2 the size of Gamabunta. He in incredibly agile and mobile in the skies, as all Swifts are.

-This Summoning can only be summoned for 3-turns and can fly for all 3 turns
-This Summoning can only be summoned by someone with the Swift Contract.
-this Summoning can be summoned once per battle.
-Can use S-rank Ranton only once per battle but it requires that Shou cannot use ranton next turn. No such penalty with A-ranks
-Armor protects up to B rank elemental attacks

±± Declined ±± No KG summons


Raiton: Kurotsuba no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Black Spit Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Darui gather black lightning chakra, claps his hands together and spits out a small spear of black lightning that goes racing to wherever he aims it. The spear is 1 foot long and a third of a foot around so it isn't very big. Upon colliding with an object, however, due to the large amount of compressed chakra, the spear will explode into a mass of black lightning.
-Can only be taught by Uchiha Jinchuuriki
-No A rank or above Raiton techs the next turn
-Can only be used 3 times per battle

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±± Declined ±± similar technique exists. As far as we know, black lightning is no different than normal lightning except in the color. So, this is basically the same as cannon techniques that shoot spears from the mouth.

 

[Migualon J.J.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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(since it is in the old CJ thread i can't quote)

i did bold changed parts


I am Updating my Caliburn xd


(Caliburn) - Caliburn

Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+20 to transform it)
Damage Points: 0
Describtion: This weapon was forged by Archangel Michael originally as Katana for Migualon J.J. when he created and mastered Style Of Tekken so that he wouldn't have to enter that state while being still able to use special Tekken techniques. But than Michael made a "mistake" when forging it and it became unstabble in it´s form. Michael and Migualon were making a lot of tests on it and than they noticed that it can change form into different weapons when infused with chakra. This weapon has 4 different forms, which are Katana, Sword, Staff (possible to use shape manipulation to make spike on 1 end of it), Shield and Spear (as 1 form).


All 4 Forms:

Katana

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Sword

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Staff (just that staff )

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Spear And Shield (shield can only protect from weapons)

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*Can only be wielded by Migualon J.J. and those who mastered Style Of Tekken and obtained ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~´s permission*
*Transformation into different form counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn*
*It cannot be broken [if in form of Spear And Shield, the shield breaks, than it goes into Staff form with spear (shield can be broken by any jutsu of C-rank and higher)]*
*The user is able to use Tekken techniques when wielding this weapon without activating Style Of Tekken*
*It´s power can be increased with Normal, Wind, and Lightning Chakra (just like Sasuke increases power of his katana), it too can have Fire Chakra infused with it, in that case it is surrounded by flames which can be extuingiushed by even D-rank Water Jutsu (in this case it looks like on the picture with Katana)*

±± Approved ±±




Buzzard Style: Wind Peace

Rank:B-A
Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:20-30
Damage:40-60
Description: Apon touching the forehead of a buzzard of B or A-rank, the user takes on their special ability to manipulate their primary element wind. Upon activation, an unnoticible stream of wind revolves around the user. The user can manipulate this wind in anyway he/she sees fit (within short range) without having to move at all. Another granted ability is a increase in movement being able to jump as high as mid-range and moving as fast as someone a rank above them. The drawback is that the user can only perform wind techniques while active and the buzzard used for this will disappear without being able to be brought back.

Notes:
*Last as long as the buzzard summoned is able to stay on the field.
*Any act of agression while active counts towards the jutsu per turn limit (attacking or defending)
*Can only use wind jutsu while active and this can be the medium for wind ninjutsu.
*Only usable by those who signed Buzzard Summoning contract


±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

 

[Goddess]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton|Niyubihou)-Lightning Technique|Two Finger Cannon
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the user focuses his/her chakra into the tips of their index and middle finger. The user then thrusts their arm forward while simultaneously release the chakra sending a blot of lightning straight into the opponent.
(Can only be taught be Karin)
(Can be used 3 times per battle)
Resembles this:

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±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist

(Jiton:Mibae Hara)-Magnetism Release:Attraction Field
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: the user places their hands on the ground and pump the entire field with chakra. Then the user converts the chakra into a magnetic force making anything that is metal stick to the ground and extremely hard to lift up due to the strong magnetic force. The ground has a north magnetic pole like the earth so if a South magentic charged pole metal were to make contact it would be repelled or just float on the surface.
(Can only be taught be Karin)
(magnetic properties of the ground lasts 3 turns)
(Can be used 2 times per battle)

±± Declined ±± A very similar lightning technique exists.


(Jiton: Nibai Magunetchikku Satsu)-Magnetism Release: Double Magnetic Murder
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user jumps in the air and summons 2 very large windmill shuriken with hidden explosive tags on them. Then he/she charges both magnetically charges the Kunai and throw them at the opponent. The user can control the flight path of the windmill shuriken. Finally the shuriken come to either side of the opponent then slices them horizontally. The user makes one handseal to activate the explosive tags detonating the windmill shuriken leaving a large crater. Also the blown up shuriken pieces are shot out at high speeds in 360 degrees. This may potentially hurt the user if they are in range.
(Can only be taught be Karin)
(Can be used 3 times per battle)
(No Magnetism Release Next turn)


±± Declined ±± Were does the kunai come from?

 

[Axle]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Twin Black Steel Swords - (Tsuin Kuroi Hagane Heika)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: These 2 black swords were forged by a man in Konoha around 20 years ago. These blades were made with pure black steel, these swords are so heavy that only the user (who has been using the swords for a while) are able to pick it them up and use them. Because of how heavy the swords are, when they are swung downward, they are faster than regular blades but are slower when are swung any other way. Because they are made of black steel, it is extremely hard to break them, the only way to break them is by a S-rank, the user can block the attack with the swords cutting the damage of the attack in half but the swords break. These swords are used as lightning rods and all lightning attacks are drawn to them and because of the rubber grips on the handles, the user is not shocked by them. If one of the swords are thrown, they go at very high speeds but can only be thrown up to 10 yards away. After the user has swung these swords for 3 turns, the user's muscles get use to the weight (like lifting weights) and are now stronger. The user is now able to break boulders with their fists. These swords are also able to cut through B-rank and below ninjutsu attacks


±± Declined ±± Restrictions? Limits? It lacks of all that. I can't take an S-Rank lightning and expect not to harm you. Work this out better.

 

[Sasuke Sarutobi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: Ame Arashi) – Water Release: Rain Storm
Rank: B-A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25-30
Damage Points: 40-60
Description: The user concentrates a large amount of water chakra into their hands (or feet) sending multiple balls of water at the target (up to four) which upon hitting the opponent is sufficient enough to knock him unconscious and even break bone. This jutsu is relatively simple and it is possible for the user to hide shurikens/projectiles inside the barrage of water balls for a secondary surprise attack.
Note: Requires no water source.
Note: Can only create up to four balls.
Note: A-rank version usable three times per battle.
Note: If A-rank version is used, must wait at least 1 turn to use again.
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke Sarutobi.

(Suiton: Kame Tate) – Water Release: Turtle Shield
Rank: B-A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25-30
Damage Points: 40-60
Description: The user concentrates a large amount of water chakra into their hands (or feet) as they perform a single handseal (Dog) and then proceeds to strike them onto the ground, creating a medium-sized body of water (roughly twice the size of the user himself), in the shape of a turtle shell/shield, to rise up near the user and protect the user. However, this is no ordinary shield, it is composed of rather adhesive and viscous water akin to that of Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field which means that this shield is capable of entrapping an opponent. This jutsu also forms relatively quick due to its simplicity (basically a wall of sticky water).
Note: Requires no water source.
Note: A-rank version usable three times per battle.
Note: If A-rank version is used, must wait at least 1 turn to use again.
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke Sarutobi.

±± Both Declined ±± Reasons for them being double ranked?


Proof of Contract Signing & Contract Approval:

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Update~
Summoning Animal: Civet
Scroll Holder: DopeyDwarf
Other Users who have signed contract: Sasuke Sarutobi
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Kabigon, Samson.

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General Description: A civet is a medium-sized carnivorous animal adapted to living in grasslands, woodlands, savannas, sub-deserts, forest edges, and mountains. Civets are cunning-looking animals quite intelligent among the carnivora, with studies indicating that their social intelligence is on par with some primate species. They are capable of producing a musk highly valued as a fragrance and stabilizing agent for perfume. Both male and female civets produce the strong-smelling secretion, which is produced by the civet's perineal glands. Their fur varies from yellowish to dark brown to gold-ish to beige-white, depending on the species.

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(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kabigon) – Civet Summoning Technique: Kabigon

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Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Kabigon is a huge brown civet about the same size as Gamahiro, well known among the Civets for being one of the biggest and heaviest of their kind. He carries a sword on his back that is proportionate to his size and has fur that is unusually thick and dense giving him quite a sturdy defence against attacks; this thick fur coupled with his huge body gives Kabigon a great natural defence, allowing him capable of withstanding attacks up to A-rank. The summoner is able to summon Kabigon to appear in the air and once per battle, Kabigon can destroy one earth-based jutsu (only up to S-rank) by slamming his body (or body part) with extreme force. Kabigon has no elemental affinity and hence can not use elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be summoned twice, lasting two turns each time.
Note: Can only withstand A-rank and below jutsus.
Note: Kabigon can block up to 3 jutsus before dispersing (A-rank and under).
Note: Kabigon can use up to A-rank ninjutsu.
Note: Must have mastered ninjutsu.
Note: Must have mastered Basic 5 elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
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(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Samson) – Civet Summoning Technique: Samson

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Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user summons Samson, a dark-yellow adolescent civet roughly the size of an average human. He is a very energetic, flamboyant and exuberant pup very well known among the civets for his devious nature and excessive pranking. Samson is a master of the Transformation Technique allowing him to transform into anything he chooses; however in the midst of battle, Samson takes preference in transforming into offensive weapons such as swords, large shurikens or even spears – all of which are made of a special alloy however it is possible to break it if sufficient force is used. These weapons are able to be wielded by the summoner; however, the weapon uses a great deal of chakra and puts a strain of 10 chakra points on the user each turn he is used. Samson is also capable of using all ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu the user knows up to A-rank although he can not use any elemental ninjutsu. The summoner can summon Samson to the field in his transformed state but only short range from the user.
Note: Can only be summoned twice, lasting two turns each time.
Note: Samson can only use up to A-rank ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu.
Note: Samson can not use any elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Each of Samson’s transformations on the battlefield, count as a jutsu of the user.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
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(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Theta) – Civet Summoning Technique: Theta
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Theta is a relatively young, brown Civet about the same size as Gamakichi who exhibits bright silver markings around his eyes and mouth. He is a very fast and agile Civet characteristic of his natural affinity for wind (Theta is capable of using wind jutsus up to A-rank). He wields a wide range of weapons such as chokutōs, fans, katanas and sickles which he grasps and swirls around in his paws, mouth and tail infusing them with his wind chakra. Despite his affinity for wind, he prefers to use taijutsu and weapons play while in combat and also has good hearing and a keen sense of smell allowing him to track targets much more effectively even when he is unable to see the target.
Note: Can only be summoned twice.
Note: Remains on the field for only four turns.
Note: Must wait two turns to summon again.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke Sarutobi.
Note: His jutsu count towards the users move count.


±± Declined ±± This is the same as a Marten summon already submitted. Word by word... I've warned members about ripping. When caught, the results are severe.

 

[Feen]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Tetsubuin no Miwakeru) - Iron Staff of Recognization
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: (-5) when attracting
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very heavy iron staff that is 2 meters long. It is a strong, flexible staff. Once it is held it will recognize the users chakara and if the staff is dropped the user can emit chakara from the palm of his hand and the staff will straighten up and come flying into the users hand. It can break through B rank earth techniques while its being attracted to the users hand.

~User must be at least C rank taijutsu to wield this heavy weapon.


±± Declined ±± How is a metal staff flexible?

 

[Luther]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Note: Caliburn the global moderator overturned scorps decision to ban me for 2 cycles in this thread,proof can be gotten from caliburn or from my conversation with him.

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(Korosu) Slay

Type: Weapon

Rank: Forbidden

Range : Supplementary

Chakra cost:50

Damage points: 90 [-10 to the user for each turn]

Description: The slay was said to have been forged more than a thousand years ago long before konoha or the hidden villages were established it was first seen some time after the senju was formed and when harashima senju was merely born. It was rumored that even the sage of six paths had great recognition and respect for the strength and power of the sword, though that is yet to be truly accepted. The sword true beginning come from a line of hatred and pain it was said that thousand of years ago, in what we now know as the village of the iron or kumokagure there once lived a Shinobi called Gennosuke he was a ninja who was skilled in ninja arts by day and was a good blacksmith by night he was a victim of war and had experience death, pain and hardship ,he had lost all his sibling to the war and had no will to live again so he decided to commit suicide and leave this world however before doing that he like any man wanted to leave a mark which before he died .So he used his excellent skills in the ninja arts and blacksmithing to form the famous sword called slayer or shortly known as SLAY it was a sword which length was 4.4 feet and weight was said to have exceeded 47 kilograms due to several ninja skills and building materials such as titanium and diamond embedded in the weapon. The sword is indestructible and can not be broken nor destroyed. It also contains porcelain which Is a material fused with metals to protect against high heating and melting temperatures. It has the unique ability of allowing the user to mix his chakra with the sword but unlike any other katana or sword when the slay is used in a fight against the opponent upon strikes small chakra leaves the sword into the opponent Making the opponent share some chakra of the user and thus making it ear to unrealistic to hide from the opponent or launch surprise jutsu. The sword is capable of cutting, slashing, slicing and withstanding basic elemental and Ninjutsu attacks up to s rank. It can easily cut normal katana ,Rocks, Steel in half. However Like every jutsu or weapon it has its drawbacks and this one is that of a high risk which is due to the sword sharing or requiring chakra from the user to work the sword over time drains the user chakra and damages him .The sword can only be wielded by the sword wielder and know one else if anyone tries to pick it up it will emit a glowing like fire across the weapon so thus if the opponent where to touch it he will be burnt to death. The sword shares chakra signs and patterns with the user due to the continuous usage of the sword by the wielder. Thus can tell the wielder from a fake, this also means the sword can be thrown at any direction north or south but must return and still go back to the user he does this by using or marking the user chakra and using as a path to travel.

Note: Must need thunderbolt permission to use
Note: Must have mastered Ninjutsu
Note: The sword last for 3 turns
Note :The sword can only be used once a battle.
Note: For each turn the user wields the sword it is -10 Damage points .
Note: Slashing and cutting jutsu in half count as a move.
Note: Can only use 2 jutsu the next round after the sword is deactivated.

±± Leaving for someone else ±±
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(Ninjutsu sutairu: Bodisurippu)Ninjutsu style:Body Slip

Type: Offensive

Range: Mid

Chakra cost:50

Damage points:- 30 To the opponent

Description: This technique or jutsu is done by the user exchanging and combing physical and structural characteristic and also chakra of the user with the matter to make about the body slippers. Upon impending or incoming jutsu (Ninjutsu or element) Attacks or matter such as sand etc The user focuses on his chakra and channels it on his palms he then uses it to touch to the matter and add his chakra and body in it merging himself with it as if his was soluble and can absorb and combine himself with others this other can be any ninjutsu or element attacks .(Definition: Matter is anything that has mass and occupy space.)

Can only be used once a battle

Must have mastered Ninjutsu

Can not use 3 jutsu the next turn an only use 2.

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

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Summoning Animal: Fennecs Fox

Scroll Owner:Thunderbolt

Other Users who have signed contract: N/A

Summoning Boss if existing:N.A

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

Description and Background: The fennec fox (Vulpes zerda) is a small nocturnal fox found in the Sahara of North Africa. Its most distinctive feature is its unusually large ears. The species name zerda has a Greek origin that refers to its habitat. The fennec is the smallest species of canid in the world; coat, ears and kidney functions have adapted to a high-temperature, low-water, desert environment. In addition, its hearing is sensitive enough to hear prey moving underground. It mainly eats insects, small mammals, and birds.

The fennec has a life span of up to 14 years in captivity. Its main predators are the African varieties of eagle owl. Families of fennecs dig out dens in sand for habitation and protection, which can be as large as 120 m2 (1,292 sq ft) and adjoin the dens of other families. Precise population figures are not known but are estimated from the frequency of sightings; these indicate that the animal is currently not threatened by extinction. Knowledge of social interactions is limited to information gathered from captive animals. The species is usually assigned to the genus Vulpes; however, this is debated due to differences between the fennec fox and other fox species. The fennec's fur is prized by the indigenous peoples of North Africa, and in some parts of the world, the animal is considered an exotic pet


±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Fox contract would collide with cannon universe.