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Genjutsu: Jikan no Fukushū | Illusionary Arts: Time's Vengeance
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Using their chakra, the user will place their opponent in a Genjutsu. This directly affects the opponent's ability to process sensory information, with the user being able to freely control the speed of the opponent's brain processes.




Aight, so I know what I want to do with the technique. Put bluntly, I want to be able to control the opponent's perception of time. Just to throw them off balance really. Problem here is that I don't quite know how to explain how the opponent's mind is affected, and by how much I can affect their brain in terms that are easy to understand.
 

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Genjutsu: Jikan no Fukushū | Illusionary Arts: Time's Vengeance
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Using their chakra, the user will place their opponent in a Genjutsu. This directly affects the opponent's ability to process sensory information, with the user being able to freely control the speed of the opponent's brain processes.




Aight, so I know what I want to do with the technique. Put bluntly, I want to be able to control the opponent's perception of time. Just to throw them off balance really. Problem here is that I don't quite know how to explain how the opponent's mind is affected, and by how much I can affect their brain in terms that are easy to understand.
This will be declined -DNR- Vision has a custom exactly like this that's nearly been nerfed a bunch of times due to being OP.
 

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Genjutsu: Hyou no Senbon | Illusionary Arts: Ice Senbon
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Focusing their chakra into the opponents mind the user will manipulate their sense of sight and feel convincing them that the rain was turning into sharp ice senbon which when hitting anything would shatter .Causing the opponent to feel phantom pain harming them.When in reality the rain remains just that...rain

since i have now mastered genjutsu and do not have the rain training to make my ice jutsu (already tried i need rain cause its a rain/ice combination jutsu) i decided to make it into a genjutsu and make the actual one at a later date.
 

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Genjutsu: Hyou no Senbon | Illusionary Arts: Ice Senbon
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Focusing their chakra into the opponents mind the user will manipulate their sense of sight and feel convincing them that the rain was turning into sharp ice senbon which when hitting anything would shatter .Causing the opponent to feel phantom pain harming them.When in reality the rain remains just that...rain

since i have now mastered genjutsu and do not have the rain training to make my ice jutsu (already tried i need rain cause its a rain/ice combination jutsu) i decided to make it into a genjutsu and make the actual one at a later date.
I like it, its neat. Unless something like this has already been done, I don't see any issues with it being approved.
 

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(Ōkami saishū keitai) - Wolves final form
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A(-40 to Rotate)
Damage Points: N/A

Description: Ōkami saishū keitai is a giant war fan but unlike most war fans has blades on its edges. The core of the fan is made up of black and white titanium with Okami engraved in red. As the metal spreads to the sides it turns into a black and red tungsten carbide edge. The fan has a long hilt with a golden pommel with three wolves head's just above that to represent his original team. The fan is about 6ft tall and 2ft wide all together and is naturally attuned to the wind element.

Abilities: Due to its wind affinity the fan is naturally lighter than it appears in varying degrees. Users who don't have a wind specialty can't lift the weapon by normal means, primary wind specialty will have to use two hands to wield this weapon, and those with primary wind specialty can wield it with one relatively easy. When the user channels futon chakra into fans edges coating them with wind they begin to rotate at high speeds allowing for the fan to be used as a blade(S-Rank wind technique) but looses the ability to use fan specific jutsu as the fan would no longer be able to hold an air flow.

Notice:
~Can only rotate the edge if you have wind specialty
~Edge rotation count as a move
~Edges only rotate for 1 turn
~Can not use fan specific jutsu in same turn
~Can only be wielded by Keji

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Katon: Ittō Kasō | Fire Release: Single Blade Cremation
Type: Offensive
Rank: S - Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: There are two ways of using this technique. For the first use, the user will focus an incredible amount of chakra within their arm, forming a shroud of fire around the arm. Due to the heat, the user's arm will appear scorched and charred. At that point, the user will then fire a large beam from their arm with a diameter of 1 meter. The beam of fire is highly concentrated, and is capable of piercing solid objects with ease. Standing within just metres of the attack is enough to feel the extreme heat, which is enough to cause burns. Due to the intensity and power of the technique, it will cause considerable damage to the user's arm, and limit their ability to use their hand, and will cause slight exhaustion. The other way to use the technique is to gather all of the user's chakra and focus it. Then, the user will explosively release it as a gargantuan maelstrom of flames that is powerful enough to reduce targets to ash. Because of the power of the explosion itself and the heat, the user will suffer major burns all over his body, as he is at the epicenter of the technique. The explosion is large enough to take out targets the size of boss summonings and anything of similar size, and will leave a giant crater at the blast site.

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❋ The beam version of the technique is S - Rank in strength. The explosion version is Forbidden - Rank.
❋ Only Fire techniques up to A - Rank for 3 turns after using the beam.
❋ Only A - Rank Fire techniques for the remainder of the battle after using the explosion.
 
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(Dexyuerisutodo) - Way of Fencing
Type: Kenjutsu
Background: Fencing is a style of sword fighting brought over from a far away unknown continent. It involves the use of light one handed swords against lightly armored opponents. Fencing has evolved to be a gentleman's fighting style used in one on one duels using similar weapons as their opponent. A foreign and exotic style, it has made its way into the land of iron as a different form of kenjutsu.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style utilizes the qualities of light swords to be used differently than normal kenjutsu. Fencing techniques also sometimes include the pairing of daggers or buckler shields in accompaniment with the sabers and rapiers that are primarily used. The weapons used are very light enabling the application of more complex actions. The blades are also more flexible which can allow the user to whip the blade around an opponent's defense. Footwork plays an important role as balance and control are especially important when fighting similarly armed opponents. Practitioners use lunges and other moves to control distance and change the tempo of battle. Because the swords are so light practitioners mostly use precise thrusts to attack. The light swords require finesse and often deflect and divert attacks and use complicated attacks rather than meet things head on.

Example Techniques:

(Tosshin) - Lunge
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Med
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: User lunges directly forward propelled by their outstretched blade to thrust into their opponent. This attack covers a lot of ground and is meant as a gap closer to attack when the enemy's defense is open and they're on their heels.

(Kaeshi) - Parry Riposte
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:User directly blocks an attack with their blade and then promptly thrusts the blade forward in retaliation.
-Capable of blocking B- rank jutsu

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Practitioners gain reaction speed equal to two tomoe sharingan
-Practitioners are able to analyze opponents' Kenjutsu
 

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Summoning Animal: Springhare
Scroll Owner: Keji
Others who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning boss if existing: N/A
Other summoning animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: There are two types of Springhare left in the world and both belong to the genus Pedetes, the third has long been extinct. Though the species look alike at a casual glance, scientific study can easily determine which is which. The springhare can range anywhere from 35 cm to the size of a large toad summoning. The springhare resembles a small kangaroo (though unrelated) with well-developed hind legs, which allows the smallest to leap over 10m (30ft) in a single bound. It is for this ability that it gets its name.


The colour of this mammal varies from a reddish-brown to a pale grey, with a black tip on the tail. They have four toes on their hind feet with claws that look like small hoofs; these are wider than those found on the forefeet. They have a thick muscular neck supporting their short head. They also have large eyes, and their ears have a tragus that prevents sand from entering when they are digging. Springhares are mostly nocturnal but are occasionally active in the day. During the daytime, they live in tunnels that they dig. They plug the entrance of the hole with soil from the inside of the tunnel. It is easier for them to dig during the rainy season when the soil is wet. The springhare don't trust many outside species so getting them to allow a human to sign the contract is very difficult.

Abilities: Springhare summons are land based summoning's and because of their natural relation with earth are doton masters performing earth jutsu without hand seals but they are not limited to this one element.


They also perfected taijutsu to take advantage of their natural leg strength which allows them allows for greater maneuverability, jumps and kicks than toad summons. (Tai specialty and +10dmg to leg based tai)


As they live in burrows springhare are able to free form dig in both solid and wet ground.


The springhare also have a heightened sense of hearing, smell, and vision.
 

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Custom element Japanese name: kokei kuuki

Custom element English name: Solid Air

The element is based on: Doton + Suiton + Katon

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):


Aerogel is a synthetic porous ultralight material derived from a gel, in which the liquid component of the gel has been replaced with a gas. The result is a solid with extremely low density and low thermal conductivity. Nicknames include frozen smoke, solid smoke, solid air, or blue smoke owing to its translucent nature and the way light scatters in the material. It feels like fragile expanded polystyrene to the touch. The most common type of Aerogel is silica aerogel derived from silica. Aerogels can be made from a variety of chemical compounds, for example it can be doped with metal oxides to give it unique electrical properties.

How it works:

The user extracts sodium silicate (or required metals) found from the earth's crust and creates an aqueous acidic solution with it using suiton chakra. Then using katon chakra it is quickly dehydrated to the point where it becomes a hard silica xerogel. At this point the substance created would have to go through a slower process called supercritical heating to reach the state where it is called aerogel however using their mastery of katon chakra the user can use their katon chakra to delicately evaporate the liquid from it further and replace it with air without disturbing the solid structure that remains.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(kokei kuuki: haado no keisou yoroi) Solid Air: Hard Light Armor
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes three hand seals and creates aerogel which rises from the ground to engulf themselves all around with a slightly hazy yellow aerogel which forms itself into a thin layer of armor close to their body. The user is able to see and move freely while the armor protects them completely.
-Lasts 3 turns
-Usable twice
-Must be inactive for 2 turns before use
-Only Solid Air techniques may be used while active

(kokei kuuki: tenshi danmaku) Solid Air: Angel Barrage
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: 80 during initial use
Description: The user makes three hand seals and creates aerogel which rises from the ground and forms itself into wings attached to the user's back. The wings appear like an angel's wings and are rather large. Gathering air with the ultralight wings, the user is lifted swiftly into the air with wings wide open. After that the wings are flapped forward once, releasing a barrage of crystal shard like feathers at an opponent. After the barrage is unloaded the wings are simply used as wings for flight and may not be used to further attack or defend because they are in a fragile state.
-Lasts 5 turns
-Usable once
-Grants user flight
-May only use Solid Air techniques while active
Conditions to be able to use it:

Is weak to: Suiton + Doton + Techniques that get it wet

Water breaks down the Aerogel's structure when it is absorbed. If sufficient force is applied it will shatter like glass.

Is strong against: Katon + Raiton + Sound + Poison or Toxins

Aerogel possesses fantastic insulative properties. A thin layer is able to shield delicate objects from being destroyed from heat. It effectively resists electricity and it absorbs the sound energy from sound techniques. Aerogel is used to absorb harmful toxins and chemicals safely because of its porous nature.

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Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
 

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Technique Name: Elephant Gun
EXP: 20
Type: Speed
Rank: B
Description: Beast Boy shifts into the form of a Peregrine Falcon, either rushing forward at the opponent or rushing in a downward dive towards them at top speed. This speed is roughly two hundred and forty miles per hour, while doing this his Speed Attribute raises by fifteen before he shifts again into the form of a full grown Elephant weighting 13,000lbs or 6.5 tons. This means when he shifts his form a second time his body will be traveling at two hudred and forty miles per hour and his weight will be roughly six tons. The momentum is enough to crush most individuals and leave a short range crater in the ground, be it dirt or concrete while also causing a short range shockwave that will carry anything in the radius away 5 meters. This deals 60% of the user's modified Speed Attribute in the form of damage.

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Technique Name: Eldritch Blast
EXP: 5
Type: Energy
Rank: D
Description: Eldritch Blast, is Beast Boy's connection to the Red manifesting in it's most basic and raw form not granting the ability to transform. Instead of transformation abilities he manipulates the morphogenetic field calling upon it allowing him to control the Raw Red Energy. This control takes the form of pure blasts of the Red and other ways of manipulating raw Red power such as waves and bullets. Depending on the user's intentions this can cause damage to enemies or be used to heal allies and himself. This technique deals 20% of the Energy Attribute as damage or healing depending on if it's used on allies or enemies.


Technique Name: Envenom
EXP: 20
Type: Mutation
Rank: B
Description: Garfield uses his transformation abilities to add several additional glands into his body that produce toxins that he can secrete from his pores. This can be secreted from his fingers or toes to pool on his sharpened nails, as well as from his teeth like a snake or even from his mouth by way of actually spitting the venom or toxins at the opponent it can also simply be secreted like sweat to affect anyone who touches him. This complements his fighting style immensely since Drunken Monkey focuses heavily on finger jabs and slashes.

There are several toxins Garfield can produce each with their own specialized effects however he can only use a single toxin at any given time needing to post the technique to produce the toxin at that time. The toxins are as follows.

Batrachotoxin: Which is a potent cardiotoxic and neurotoxic produced by the Poison Dart Frog, the Pitohui which is a bird and Melyrid beetles. It is colorless and in layman's terms, what it does is bind to and irreversibly open the sodium channels of nerve cells such that they cannot reset. The neuron is no longer capable of 'firing' (sending messages) and this results in paralysis. It also causes heart arrhythmia, extrasystoles, ventricular fibrillation. The opponent notices this as irregular uncontrollable and oftentimes terrifying changes in heart-rate and an inability to calm the mind down. The paralysis lasts momentarily (1 turn) and would need to be continually applied to maintain for a substantial effect.

Carukia barnesi venom: Is a venom produced by the Carukia barnesi a species of Jellyfish as well as the Box Jellyfish. In simple terms it is a fear toxin that creates uncontrollable fear in the person affected by it. It creates a sense of "impending doom" that cannot simply be shaken off. Where Batrachotoxin aims for a physical manifestation of problems ie: the paralysis, Irukandji syndrome creates a mental one. It also causes severe headaches, backaches, muscle pains, chest and abdominal pain, nausea, sweating, and severe anxiety. This reduces the opponent's intelligence by 10 for 2 turns. It also makes rational thinking problematic as it forces most people into a flight or fight response.

Hemotoxin: The final venom he can produce is a hemotoxin which is produced by most venomous snakes namely vipers and pit vipers. It destroys red blood cells (that is, causes hemolysis), disrupts blood clotting, and causes organ degeneration and generalized tissue damage. What this toxin does is literally deteriorate the opponent's blood, muscle tissue and nerves over time creating immense pain while doing so. It is extremely painful, moreso then the other two, it's aim is to deal as much pain as possible and cause the opponent to take additional damage. When used with freeform or ranked attacks it adds an additional 25% damage to whatever modifier they are using. So for example if the modifier is 10% of the damage of the strength stat, it is boosted to 35% instead. This is due to the pain it causes and the deterioration of the opponent's body. If the skin is broken this will cause the opponent to bleed profusely stopping the blood from clotting which causes it's own problems.

Notes:
Can only use one toxin per use
Can only be used every 2 turns and the toxin the user is using lasts those 2 turns

Technique Name: Frenzied Regeneration
EXP: 20
Type: Mutation
Rank: B
Description: Frenzied Regeneration is an offshoot of his Core Ability meaning while using it he is able to begin the process of healing his wounds over time. His Core Ability itself already allows for the regrowth of removed limbs what this is, is an advanced form of that. It allows him to produce extra bodily tissue, blood, muscle, bone and sinew to replace that which was lost by an attack over a period of time. It also allows for bones to be mended and organs to be replaced. If superficial limbs were lost, arms, legs, fingers, toes etc they can be grown back. Small wounds tend to be healed after the intial activation process, larger wounds such as ruptured or missing organs would take longer to heal.
Note: Beast Boy heals 20% of his Durability Attribute for each turn this technique is active
Note: This technique can last 3 turns before needing to be reused to maintain if desired
 
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Technique Name: Poseidon, God of the Sea
EXP: 20
Type: Mutation
Rank: B
Description: A shapeshifter changes his DNA structure to that of a Royal Atlantean gaining an Atlantean Physiology. The Atlanteans are an offshoot of humanity that are biologically adapted to the deep ocean environment. Due to their DNA structure, this means the shapeshifter can breathe underwater, endure the pressures of the deep (among other adaptations), and can only spend a very limited time out of water (4 turns before reverting to their normal self however if in a moist enough environment the form can be held indefinitely.) He also possesses superhuman levels of strength, speed and durability (+5 to strength and speed +10 to durability) all by-products of his body being adapted to survive unprotected in the tremendous pressures of the ocean depths . Due to having the DNA structure of a Royal Atlantean the user isn't just a run of the mill Atlantean in simple terms this makes them a super-Atlantean and as such he has greater physical capabilities than does a typical Atlantean.

The shifter is able to thrive at depths of 36,000 feet underwater while having a resistance to both immense cold, and heat halving the damage and effectivity of those sort of techniques against the shifter while under the form of an Atlantean. If used by Beast Boy or another shapeshifter with some form of telepathy they gain a form of Marine Telepathy. They are able to communicate and command any form of sealife. The shifter is also able to control water to a limited degree creating torrents, pulses, and constructs that are able to deal 60% of their energy stat as damage.
Note: While under the effects of this transformation the user is only able to use terrestial animal based transformations Alien, or Mythic are too complex to augment this form
Note: Due to his innate connection to the Red, Beast Boy has a blueprint for any DNA structure that has ever or will ever live, a shapeshifter without this ability would need to be taught how to mimic the DNA structure to use the form
 

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Senbonzakura Kageyoshi
Type:Weapon/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40(-15 Per Defensive Maneuver)
Damage:N/A
Description: Senbonzakura is a specially crafted sword that has a pure white guard and finest blade of steel. The sword is extremely sharp so in close combat, Senbonzakura is deadly. Because Byakuya is a Wind specialist, he can use his wind chakra to enhance the blade to cut through Lightning and Wind jutsu A-Ranked and below. The sword also has the ability to perform Wind techniques that require a slashing or swiping movement A-Ranked and below.
Note:Only Byakuya K can wield this sword unless permission was given.
Note:The sword can only be wielded maximum of 3 turns and only once per battle.
 

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Senbonzakura Kageyoshi
Type:Weapon/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40(-15 Per Defensive Maneuver)
Damage:N/A
Description: Senbonzakura is a specially crafted sword that has a pure white guard and finest blade of steel. The sword is extremely sharp so in close combat, Senbonzakura is deadly. Because Byakuya is a Wind specialist, he can use his wind chakra to enhance the blade to cut through Lightning and Wind jutsu A-Ranked and below. The sword also has the ability to perform Wind techniques that require a slashing or swiping movement A-Ranked and below.
Note:Only Byakuya K can wield this sword unless permission was given.
Note:The sword can only be wielded maximum of 3 turns and only once per battle.
Needs something to make it more special to become a CW that will get approved. Basic things like "Cuts through techniques" or "Can use jutsu through them" tend to get declined. I'd try and go all out with the sword and make as much of Byakuya's bankai and sword abilities as possible. That's what I did with my CW, made as much of Sado's abilities as possible, it has La Muerta, the defensive properties, El Directo, and a completed enhanced form that allows for longer usage of it's abilities.

I'd try to do something like that with your weapon. Make it so you can use his Shikai and Bankai, though I think a lot of techniques are based on those already so you'll have to do it somewhat creatively.
 

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Needs something to make it more special to become a CW that will get approved. Basic things like "Cuts through techniques" or "Can use jutsu through them" tend to get declined. I'd try and go all out with the sword and make as much of Byakuya's bankai and sword abilities as possible. That's what I did with my CW, made as much of Sado's abilities as possible, it has La Muerta, the defensive properties, El Directo, and a completed enhanced form that allows for longer usage of it's abilities.

I'd try to do something like that with your weapon. Make it so you can use his Shikai and Bankai, though I think a lot of techniques are based on those already so you'll have to do it somewhat creatively.
Thanks so much. But do you think you can work with me on that? I can't figure out a way to add abilities to it without it getting OP or way off of the Narutoverse.
 

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Thanks so much. But do you think you can work with me on that? I can't figure out a way to add abilities to it without it getting OP or way off of the Narutoverse.
"Based heavily on the principles behind Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi is able to be manipulated remotely by infusing it with wind chakra and using that wind chakra to create bursts of wind from the sword that allows it to travel on it's own, attacking an opponent without directly holding the sword. It is able to levitate and move for three whole turns before needing to return to the user's hand to be recharged and this ability takes 30 chakra per charge. The sword at this point is infused with wind chakra and attacks with it act as B rank attacks dealing appropriate damage.
The sword's second and most prominent ability is the ability to break the sword itself down on a molecular level to a state where it is just a thousand small blade fragments being carried around by a heavy and continuous burst of wind that surrounds the cloud of debris. As a mass of a thousand tiny, slender blade fragments, the sword can be used to attack an opponent from afar or defend the user in short range by manipulating the pieces of the sword to act as a whole. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to resemble cherry blossom petals. The sword itself can only be in this state for two turns before returning to the user's hand and being recharged. This ability is A rank and takes appropriate chakra and deals appropriate damage for it's rank.
Returning to the user's hand happens passively and doesn't count as a jutsu however controlling the sword remotely does count as a jutsu upon activation and a jutsu per tun to keep maintained and continue using. However if the user does not move the sword in a turn it does not count as a jutsu, meaning it's a passive action to keep the sword hovering in a single spot."

Random crap off the top of my head and bits copied from the Wikia. No idea if anyone has anything similar already so might want to check into it before just using what I posted in your submission.

Obviously it'll need usage limits-... but I got bored.
 
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"Based heavily on the principles behind Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi is able to be manipulated remotely by infusing it with wind chakra and using that wind chakra to create bursts of wind from the sword that allows it to travel on it's own, attacking an opponent without directly holding the sword. It is able to levitate and move for three whole turns before needing to return to the user's hand to be recharged and this ability takes 30 chakra per charge. The sword at this point is infused with wind chakra and attacks with it act as B rank attacks dealing appropriate damage.
The sword's second and most prominent ability is the ability to break the sword itself down on a molecular level to a state where it is just a thousand small blade fragments being carried around by a heavy and continuous burst of wind that surrounds the cloud of debris. As a mass of a thousand tiny, slender blade fragments, the sword can be used to attack an opponent from afar or defend the user in short range by manipulating the pieces of the sword to act as a whole. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to resemble cherry blossom petals. The sword itself can only be in this state for two turns before returning to the user's hand and being recharged. This ability is A rank and takes appropriate chakra and deals appropriate damage for it's rank.
Returning to the user's hand happens passively and doesn't count as a jutsu however controlling the sword remotely does count as a jutsu upon activation and a jutsu per tun to keep maintained and continue using. However if the user does not move the sword in a turn it does not count as a jutsu, meaning it's a passive action to keep the sword hovering in a single spot."

Random crap off the top of my head and bits copied from the Wikia. No idea if anyone has anything similar already so might want to check into it before just using what I posted in your submission.

Obviously it'll need usage limits-... but I got bored.

I don't really understand the first part, but I do like the bankai incorporation.. I'll update it and post it right back.
 

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Senbonzakura Kageyoshi
Type:Weapon/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: Senbonzakura is a specially crafted sword that has a pure white guard and finest blade of steel. The sword is extremely sharp so in close combat, Senbonzakura is deadly. Because Byakuya is a Wind specialist, he can use his wind chakra to enhance the blade to cut through Lightning and Wind jutsu A-Ranked and below. The sword also has the ability to perform Wind techniques that require a slashing or swiping movement A-Ranked and below. However, the most prominent ability of this sword is that it is able to break the sword itself down on a molecular level to a state where it is just a thousand small blade fragments being carried around by a heavy and continuous burst of wind that surrounds the cloud of debris. As a mass of a thousand tiny, slender blade fragments, the sword can be used to attack an opponent from afar or defend the user in short range by manipulating the pieces of the sword to act as a whole. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to resemble cherry blossom petals. This ability is A rank and takes appropriate chakra and deals appropriate damage for it's rank. Each offensive or defensive maneuver Senbonzakura does will count as a jutsu. If used in this form, it can only last for two turns before have to return to sword form in the sheath and recharge for three turns.
Note:Only Byakuya K can wield this sword unless permission was given.
Note:In sword form, it can only be wielded for three turns and used once per battle.
Note:In cloud form, it can only be used for two turns and used once per battle.

How about now? Also, would the sword be manipulated with hands or no?
 

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I don't really understand the first part, but I do like the bankai incorporation.. I'll update it and post it right back.
First part was a basis for how you manipulate the rest.

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( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

You use a form of chakra, to manipulate the blade allowing you to levitate and control it but since you're doing it with wind, it needs a different way to do it, instead of the lightning that probably uses some form of maglev. Random crap off the top of my head was to use infused wind chakra to create bursts of wind that originate from the sword itself to move it and guide it through the air.

Senbonzakura Kageyoshi
Type:Weapon/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: Senbonzakura is a specially crafted sword that has a pure white guard and finest blade of steel. The sword is extremely sharp so in close combat, Senbonzakura is deadly. Because Byakuya is a Wind specialist, he can use his wind chakra to enhance the blade to cut through Lightning and Wind jutsu A-Ranked and below. The sword also has the ability to perform Wind techniques that require a slashing or swiping movement A-Ranked and below. However, the most prominent ability of this sword is that it is able to break the sword itself down on a molecular level to a state where it is just a thousand small blade fragments being carried around by a heavy and continuous burst of wind that surrounds the cloud of debris. As a mass of a thousand tiny, slender blade fragments, the sword can be used to attack an opponent from afar or defend the user in short range by manipulating the pieces of the sword to act as a whole. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to resemble cherry blossom petals. This ability is A rank and takes appropriate chakra and deals appropriate damage for it's rank. Each offensive or defensive maneuver Senbonzakura does will count as a jutsu. If used in this form, it can only last for two turns before have to return to sword form in the sheath and recharge for three turns.
Note:Only Byakuya K can wield this sword unless permission was given.
Note:In sword form, it can only be wielded for three turns and used once per battle.
Note:In cloud form, it can only be used for two turns and used once per battle.

How about now? Also, would the sword be manipulated with hands or no?
I'd remove that and replace it with something better. Every movement of the sword would count as a move, meaning if you attack with three sword slashes you've expended your three jutsu per turn already.

I'd say it takes a single jutsu slot per turn to use the sword/it's ability offensively if you choose to, like I had above. Meaning you could attack several times with it in one turn, and not expend more than a single jutsu slot, other wise any offensive or defensive action means any sword slash, offensive movement of your debris cloud or any defensive motion of the sword or debris cloud counts as a jutsu.

Just my 0.2¢ it's your jutsu.
 
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First part was a basis for how you manipulate the rest.

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( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

You use a form of chakra, to manipulate the blade allowing you to levitate and control it but since you're doing it with wind, it needs a different way to do it, instead of the lightning that probably uses some form of maglev. Random crap off the top of my head was to use infused wind chakra to create bursts of wind that originate from the sword itself to move it and guide it through the air.
We both posted at the same time so I couldn't see that xD. But I see...I think what I have should be fine, but I'm scared it might get declined for being OP
 
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