[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Professor Sarutobi]

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Archimedes
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (to summon)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Archimedes is a mechanical owl created by a skilled ninja and engineer from Amegakure years ago. The user is able to control the mechanical owl with a special chakra receiving circlet worn on their head allowing him to transfer chakra and receive mental messages through it. After spending years making this creation the ninja found he could remotely power it with his lightning chakra and even found a way for the owl to directly feed off the owner by attaching special machines to it's feet so that when Archimedes sits on their shoulder it can create a chakra link with the person's system and stay active as well as use it's abilities faster. When not sitting on the user's shoulder Archimedes must be occasionally given doses of lightning chakra to use it's special mechanics and abilities, normally done by the user condensing small amounts of lightning chakra and striking it's casing which then absorbs the chakra into it through special grounders and routers set through the body.
Archimedes is able to fly slightly faster then a normal owl. His metal casing is resistant to attacks B rank and below, able to survive B rank attacks while taking slight damage, 3 direct B ranks would disable him entirely as would one A rank or above. It's wings are designed with spring loaded mechanisms that allow Archimedes to shoot several golden feathers slightly smaller then kunai at the same speed as a normal thrown kunai, Using some of the lightning chakra powering the machine it can also coat the feathers in lightning to increase their piercing power and speed. Archimedes can also coat his talons or wings in lightning chakra to the same effect, increasing their piercing power to that of a B rank lightning jutsu. Archimedes's head is designed to be able to rotate a full 360 degrees as needed and it's eyes are cameras protected by silver plating except for the small area in the center that allows for it to see, the eyes can activate Night Vision if needed. Like a real owl, Archimedes vision is superb at picking out small details and movements.
-Stays active for 6 turns without using extra chakra taxing abilities or being fed more. Doesn't include Flying or Night Vision.
-Coating feathers/wings/talons in lightning reduces activity by one turn per use.
-C rank lightning techniques refill his batteries back to 6 turns. D ranks give an additional 2 turns.
-While sitting on the user's shoulder Archimedes can be commanded to clamp his talons down to break C rank and below genjutsu. If infused with lightning chakra the talons are able inflict enough pain to break B rank and below genjutsu.
-Only used by Professor Sarutobi.
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-Declined- What do you mean about the C-rank lightning techniques refill his batteries? is it capable of absorbing lightning techniques? and which ones exactly, ones created by the opponent? other than that it's good i suppose.

(Shoki ) Miasma
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will open a portal and absorb a large amount of Keigoku into their body and then release it from all of their chakra points as a thick, purple smoke-like cloud of chakra that covers up to mid range around him. If non-nekura bodies touch the chakra they receive intense pain in their brain that quickly disables their ability to focus and properly control themselves.
-Lasts for 4 turns.
-Can only use S rank and below ninjutsu while active.
-Can't use other Nekura techniques that are above A rank while active.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-Can only be used by Nekura bios
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-Declined- DNR, Nekura is a custom clan and techniques for custom clans are only made by the leader of the clan and submitted in the custom clans & groups jutsus.

Archimedes
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (to summon)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Archimedes is a mechanical owl created by a skilled ninja and engineer from Amegakure years ago. The user is able to control the mechanical owl with a special chakra receiving circlet worn on their head allowing him to transfer chakra and receive mental messages through it. After spending years making this creation the ninja found he could remotely power it with his lightning chakra and even found a way for the owl to directly feed off the owner by attaching special machines to it's feet so that when Archimedes sits on their shoulder it can create a chakra link with the person's system and stay active as well as use it's abilities faster. When not sitting on the user's shoulder Archimedes must be occasionally given doses of lightning chakra to use it's special mechanics and abilities, normally done by the user condensing small amounts of lightning chakra and striking it's casing which then absorbs the chakra into it through special grounders and routers set through the body.
Archimedes is able to fly slightly faster then a normal owl. His metal casing is resistant to attacks B rank and below, able to survive B rank attacks while taking slight damage, 3 direct B ranks would disable him entirely as would one A rank or above. It's wings are designed with spring loaded mechanisms that allow Archimedes to shoot several golden feathers slightly smaller then kunai at the same speed as a normal thrown kunai, Using some of the lightning chakra powering the machine it can also coat the feathers in lightning to increase their piercing power and speed. Archimedes can also coat his talons or wings in lightning chakra to the same effect, increasing their piercing power to that of a B rank lightning jutsu. Archimedes's head is designed to be able to rotate a full 360 degrees as needed and it's eyes are cameras protected by silver plating except for the small area in the center that allows for it to see, the eyes can activate Night Vision if needed. Like a real owl, Archimedes vision is superb at picking out small details and movements.
-Stays active for 6 turns without using extra chakra taxing abilities or being fed more. Doesn't include Flying or Night Vision.
-Coating feathers/wings/talons in lightning reduces activity by one turn per use.
-Able to absorb up toC rank lightning techniques from both enemy or user torefill his batteries back to 6 turns. D ranks give an additional 2 turns.
-While sitting on the user's shoulder Archimedes can be commanded to clamp his talons down to break C rank and below genjutsu. If infused with lightning chakra the talons are able inflict enough pain to break B rank and below genjutsu.
-Only used by Professor Sarutobi.

(If the only thing wrong with it is the absorbing an enemy's lightning jutsu feel free to edit it to just mine)

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 Pending  Don't break the blue rule... Though the issue for me with it is that its basically, for all intents and purposes, a puppet which you labeled as a CW and doesn't require chakra threads. Such mechanisms and chakra fueled devices are associated with Puppets and Puppet users. I find your weapon collides with that whole field. However, I'll allow it to be checked by a colleague of mine and I'll yield to his opinion.

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-Declined- So like Scorps just said, if you want this you can make it only useable by Puppet users, it's design is good, but a self sustaining mechanical owl is a bit too much, and remove the lightning absorption part if you choose to make it exclusive to puppet users.

( Suipo: Shinkirou) Water Art: Mirage
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will send out his water chakra into the air to manipulate the molecules of water to reflect light off of them to create a mirage to the user's will. This can range from thrown weapons to other ninja to large summoned creatures. The mirage will shimmer into existence instead of just appearing like a summon and the larger the mirage the more difficult it will be to create realistic versions of it. Normal sized ninja mirages will be able to look very convincing to most.


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 Declined  Wrong name. Done before. Its an A-Rank without any restrictions. DNR.

(Magen: Ichi ) Demonic Illusion: One
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user forms a tiger seal and induces their opponent into an illusion when they are walking or running, in the illusion the ground beneath one of their feet will suddenly explode like a land mine, the opponent will then experience intense pain feeling as if the bottom half of that leg has been blown off. In reality their body will act the same way as if their leg had been damaged (falling on their back, grabbing their leg, screaming) the immense mental stress on the mind and body will linger after the illusion ends causing it to be very hard to move quickly for the next two turns for the opponent.
-No other Genjutsu the same turn or two turns after.
-Once per battle.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

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 Declined  The "aftermath" damage is a bit too much considering this is an illusion. If the opponent actually doesn't receive real damage how does this technique reduce his abilities once it ends? Besides, make sure this genjutsu is basically the "explosion" and then it ends. Its just that. A momentary illusionary effect that serves to disrupt the running of your target and then its done.

 

[Shīnju]

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(Suiton:Gurētoōshan atsuryoku) Water Release : Great Ocean Pressure
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: 50 Chakra
Damage: 90 Damage
Description:The User bends down and places both there hand on the ground , Trapping the enemy into a giant water orb. After doing so the user slaps there palms together creating a little water orb inside there hand. Then the user opens there hand in the Bird/rooster handseal . After doing so the user can either flow suiton chakra into there palms while making the orb or do it after the orb is done. Now once they have started releasing the suiton chakra in there palms ,The User slowly closes there palms while still forming the handseal , Making the Giant orb the enemy is trapped in pressure higher and higher as if there going Thousands and thousands of feet below the oceans surface. Once the user closes his palms all the way the pressure is so dense in the giant orb that the enemy body is crushed completely all bones and organs crushed

Rooster handseal with Small Water Orb

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Giant Water Orb That Traps Enemy

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-No Other Water Jutsu for 5 turns after this is performed
-Can Only Be Used Once
-Can Only Be Taught By Clouds..
-User Must constantly flow suiton chakra in there hand in order to increase the pressure
-User Can only close there hands slow due to the amount of force there using

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 Declined  This is simply an overpowered version of already existing techniques.

 

[Korra.]

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Got my Lobster Contract back Here

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(Kchuysei:Crawdaunt) Summoning: Crawdaunt
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Crawdaunt is the king of lobster. He is as big as Gamabunta but his claws are red and his body is red and white. Crawdaunt can use up to S rank water release and if it requires hands signs the summoner can do the hand signs for him. He will allow the summoner to ride in his head. He swims at great speeds and use his claws to attack at enemies. The summoner can go in his mouth if he goes under water but this will count as a turn.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Lobster Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

Updating Him

(Kchuysei:Crawdaunt) Summoning: Crawdaunt
Type: Attack/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Crawdaunt is the king of lobster. He is as big as Gamabunta but his claws are red and his body is red and white. Crawdaunt can use up to S rank water release and he will allow the summoner to ride in his head. He swims at great speeds and use his claws to attack at enemies. The summoner can go in his mouth if he goes under water. Thanks to Crawdaunt having a hard lobster shell around his body he takes no damage to C rank jutsus and below.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
-Its moves count towards the users move count.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Lobster Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

Looks like this

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 Approved  although i still maintain that anything that size is virtually impossible to use in a normal fight in our RP.

( Robusutākōru) Lobster Call
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will do the Dragon sign and then slam their hand on the ground summoning a torrent of lobsters to come out the ground or any water source and rush towards the opponent swarming them and attacking them. The lobsters will claw the opponent and once they claw onto the opponent they will not simply let go.
Note: Must be taught by Korra
Note: Must have signed the Lobster contract
Note: Usable 4 times a battle.

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 Declined  Size of the lobsters? What happens tot hem? how many do you summon? Also, make no mistake...even if you say "they will not simply let go", if the target uses nagashi, they will let go.

 

[Abon]

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(Katon: Doragon Inferuno)Fire Style: Dragon’s Inferno
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user focuses massive amounts Katon chakra into the tips of their 5 fingers of their NON-dominant hand. The Katon chakra first starts out as 5 flames and is then formed into five small orbs at the tips of each finger. The user then grabs hold of their non-dominant hand’s wrist, and expels the massive amounts of chakra all at once; forming extremely intense streams of fire that are somewhat skinny and develop ferocious dragon heads at the end of them that roar as they are launched. The streams are launched at high speeds and have high seeking ability able to swiftly weave in and out of obstacles due to their skinny forms. Each one when connecting with a target explodes in fiery and large maelstrom enough to make a small crater.
-Can only be used once
-The five orbs singe the user’s fingers badly, and leave the hand in pain when used; the hand can’t be used to make handseals. Until 3 turns have passed
-The user is also left tired from the enormous chakra strain
-The dragons are connected to the user’s hand
- No Katon for 2 turns

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 Declined  Its simply a forbidden rank fire stream...done before. DNR.

(Fuuton: Torunedohorudo) Wind Style: Tornado Hold
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates their Fuuton chakra into a demon wind shuriken, while first weaving the rat hand seal. The user then throws the Windmill Shuriken high directly above the opponent, as it then spins rapidly and rotates horizontally it releases a tornado down upon the opponent. The tornadoes’ wind moves so fast and violent, that it makes it hard to breathe, move and even stand due to air pressure. Significantly inhibiting a single enemy’s movement.
-Can be used twice
-The primary way to destroy this technique is to destroy the Demon Wind Shuriken, but can be destroyed/avoided by other ways
-The windmill keeps spinning unless destroyed

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 Declined  Even if your "deployment" method is different, this is similar to existing techniques.

(Fuuton: Shataa Kyoosei) Wind Style: Shatter Force
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will concentrate their Fuuton chakra greatly on to their hand. Condensing the chakra and increasing the speed of the wind. The user keeps this up until the wind begins to softly howl. The user forms a strong and fierce wind onto their hand, the user then closes in on the opponent and swiftly jabs the opponent while simultaneously releasing all the condensed chakra at once. As a result the force is strong enough to violently shatter the bones of the opponent, while sending the opponent flying.
-Can only be used 3 times

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 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

 

[Howard]

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Parent Technique:

Katon: Saiha) Fire Release: Blazing Blade
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user begins by gathering up a fair amount of katon chakra letting it flow into a gauntlet and then manipulating it around a single area creating a visible flame almost a jet of fire that blasts out. He then compresses the katon chakra into a long thin blade that extends out from the gauntlet. It can be extended from nearly any part of the gauntlet and has both shape and form. It can easily cut through flesh creating deep searing wounds. The blade can be extended out to about the same size as a normal sword and can be used as an extension of the person's own self giving him a longer reach.
Notes:

-Can only be used three times per battle
-Can't use S rank katon the same turn this is used
-The blade can be held for as long as the user continues manipulating Katon Chakra
-While maintaining the blade, the user is unable to mold any other chakra than Fire and can't do handseals.​

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(Katon: Saiha Ba-suto) Fire Release: Blazing Blade Burst
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user begins by gathering up an enormous amount of katon chakra into each of their fists or feet. Along the same lines as it's parent technique (Katon: Saiha) Fire Release: Blazing Blade, the user manipulates the katon into dense blades, long and thin with a severe cutting potential almost like boomerangs. However instead of holding the katon chakra and continually feeding it the user releases the katon chakra with swift punching or kicking motions from these punching or kicking motions multiple fair sized blade like projectiles are formed and sent out. These can range in size from as small as a kunai to as long as a full length Claymore. They are able punch through dense earth (A rank and below), and when coming in contact with an opponent they can cause very deep searing wounds that cauterize themselves cutting off blood vessels and stopping blood flow. They can pierce deep enough to cause severe internal damage and can cut off whole limbs if the opponent is struck correctly. These projectiles cannot be controlled once released, but can be very useful in short - long range. Only five consecutive blades can be shot off, and after the blades make contact and cut through something they rebound hitting it again before exploding into a dense explosion of fire that can catch even solid earth on fire, the fire burns until it's put out by an opposing force.
Notes:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Can only create five (5) blades ranging in size from small to large per use
-Can't use A rank and above katon the same turn this is used, and only A rank and below katon the next turn (along with other chakra natures and such)
-The user cannot use handseals the same turn this jutsu is used due to the pain of the severe heat

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 Approved 


Parent technique:

(Gosunkugi) Living Spikes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (+10 for an additional turn)
Damage: N/A (+10 to a Taijutsu movement)
Description: While using his Sage Transformation ability, Jūgo can alter his body part covering a limb or appendage in dozens of three inch spike like bumps. The spikes themselves are very hard, and stiff enough to pierce regular unaltered human flesh. These spikes can therefor pierce flesh and cause additional lacerations and rather deep wounds nothing life threatening but enough to cause a decent amount of excess pain along with a taijutsu movement. These spikes can not exceed three inches and there can be no more then thirty small spike like growths.
-Can only be used by Jūgo
-Can be used thrice
-The spikes can last two turns but deplete chakra to be sustained.

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(Gosunkugi: Isshiki; Rokujou Harinezumi) Living Spikes: Style One; Angry Porcupine
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+15 to Taijutsu)
Description: While using his Sage Transformation ability, Jūgo can alter his entire body covering it in hundreds of six - twelve inch spike like growths. The spikes themselves are very hard, and stiff enough to pierce regular unaltered flesh, as well as altered (strengthened, hardened, or imbued with a chakra nature) flesh up to the rank of the technique itself. They can pierce deeply causing near fatal wounds, resembling those of sword strike. These spikes can be shot out in an omnidirectional burst, just like those of a porcupine reaching out to long range skewering anything they hit. They still contain latent Natural Energy, therefor even if they miss by a slight margin they can still cause slight gashes to the surface of the body about two - three inch lacerations but aren't fatal to the opponent. They can be imbued with a chakra nature as well gaining different properties. Raiton: Piercing, and numbing effects. Fuuton: Slicing and cutting properties, they are also the fastest of the natures moving at speeds barely traceable by the human eye, Katon: Burning, and cauterizing properties, enough to cause third degree burns these quill like growths will be hard to remove, almost impossible without severe pain as the wound seals up around the quill due to the severe heat.
Notes:
-Can be used twice
-Can only be used by Jūgo
-Can only be sustained for four turns unless the spikes are shot off
-The numbing effect from raiton imbued growths only last a turn
-No other Sage Transformation jutsu can be used this turn
-Only one nature can be imbued onto the quills per use

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 Declined  I was gonna edit and approve it but the edit would turn out to be severe. Its not an S-Rank technique. +15 to taijutsu...why? and I need you to make it clear its not stackable with anything else. The infusion of elements is a no go. Its organic spikes; part of his body...he can't do that and even if we could assume he could, such a technique already exists (infusing body spikes with elemental chakra to shoot towards the enemy). Also, the natural energy thing? No. It basically means that even if you dodge, you're hit...and thats a no go...specially because Jugo doesn't have cntrol over natural energy like Naruto has while in Sage Mode, meaning he cannot achieve that effect. He isn't a full Senjutsu user.


(Kyouran Dangan) Fury Bullet
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 60 (when used alone) (+40 to a Taijutsu movement when used in combination)
Description: In the anime it's been shown that Natural Energy can cause explosions this technique is based on that principle but to a much smaller scale then that of the technique shown in the anime. The user must have a means of sensing and absorbing ambient Natural Energy, instead of molding that Natural Energy with their own chakra to create Senjutsu chakra they force the Natural Energy out of their body and into an object or an opponent this sudden burst of Natural Energy creates small explosions of force like that shown in the anime only much weaker. It's enough to break a few bones and cause some internal damage like bruising of the heart and lungs through the force but isn't fatal on it's own. However it can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu to create stronger more focused damage with a punch or kick and can be great for causing crippling internal damage.
-Must be able to absorb Natural Energy
-Must have mastered taijutsu
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-No Senjutsu, Sage Transformation or Sage related techniques can be used in the same turn

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 Declined  Nice technique...but jugo can't use it. Do you have Sage Mode in another bio? If so, resubmit making clear notice that you can only use it while in Sage Mode. If not, don't resubmit without having access to Sage Mode.

 

[Venus]

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Fuuton: 天テンペスト Heavens Tempest
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: A-Rank
Description:
The user gathers fuuton chakra and channels it to their hands. They hold their hands before them like they're holding a small sphere. Continuing to force the chakra out causes a sphere to form, something that looks similar to a rasengan. The sphere is roughly the same size as a small basket ball in which the chakra is condensed unto. The sphere pulses like a heart and stays still, floating in the place it was created unless it is thrown away from the user directly after creation. This can be done in a matter of moments. Though this jutsu cannot be used as an attack, it does provide a defense of sorts. Upon contact with any type of jutsu may it be smothered by flames, pierce with lightning or merely touched by earth the sphere will explode. Depending on what element is surrounds this technique upon explosion depends on the effects of the aftermath.

• If engulfed by katon jutsu of lower rank, it will explode adding a +40 to said katon based jutsu.
• If hit or smothered by raiton based techniques of equal or lower rank, it will explode causing the raiton jutsu to erupt and scatter b-rank raiton senbon outwards in a violent manner.
• If struck by a fuuton jutsu of equal rank, it creates an S-Rank fuuton explosion
• If struck by suiton of equal or lower rank, the explosion causes a heavy mist the covers a good amount of the field [Mid Rank Distance] for one turn
• If struck by earth then it creates a mid distance dust cloud for one turn

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 Declined  No kanji

 

[Rayder]

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(Ranton: Kennon Ryuushutsu) - Storm Release: Solstice Stars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will cup their hands together whilst pointing it towards the sky, channeling their storm chakra into their hands as they do this. From their hands, they will quickly release a massive spiky spherical projectile of storm which will travel a certain distance into the sky above before splitting into countless bolts of Storm which branch out in every direction, the bolts guiding themselves towards any opponents within a ten meter radius of the user's position.

Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
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(Ranton: Kuro Kumo Doragon) - Storm Release: Black Clouds Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long (Made short range of the user with a long-range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will channel their Ranton chakra into every chakra point on their body to form a whirling vortex of black clouds and electricity around themselves. The black clouds are similar in composition to those created by Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave, and are electrically charged with storm chakra, giving them the appearance of black clouds with streaks of sky-blue energy coursing through it. As the black clouds swirl around the user's body, they quickly form into the shape of a dragon (similar in size to the Earth Dragon technique) before flying off and assaulting the enemy. Due to the way the technique encompasses raging black clouds as well as lightning, its ideal in countering techniques such as Wood Release: Advent of a World of Flowering Trees, since the lightning will destroy the trees in its path whilst the spiraling vortex of black clouds will disperse the pollen in the vicinity produced by the technique, preventing it from coming into contact with the user's body.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
Note: Cannot use other Storm techniques in the same turn nor above A-Rank in the next.
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 Approved  Editted. Added a restriction. S-Ranks always have additional restrictions other than limited use.


(Ranton: Kuro Ikazuchi no Yoroi) - Storm Release: Black Thunder Armour
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (-30 damage if contact with the opponent is made)
Description: The user will release their ranton chakra throughout every chakra point in their bodies to manifest a whirling armour of electrically-infused black clouds similar to the ones produced in Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave. These black clouds will instantly assume the shape of the user's body, whilst not making direct contact with them, but instead constantly circulating their bodies in a spiral-like motion. The Ranton armour grants the user a certain level of tolerance to fire-based elements as well as Earth based-ones, as the the moist black clouds will douse the flames before they reach the user's body whilst the surging electricity will serve the purpose of shattering earthen constructs which make contact with the armour. Furthermore, due to the constantly surging stream of storm coursing through the black clouds, anyone unfortunate enough to come into contact with the user will undergo a severe shock, leaving them paralyzed for one whole turn (full body paralysis). However, aside from these normal benefits, the raging armour of black clouds and storm bolts provides an ability unparalleled by all other elemental armours. The force generated by the whirling black clouds means any gas-based elements targeting/residing in the area of the user will be blown away, causing them to be dispersed and pushed away from the user's position, making sure they don't happen to inhale them. Not only that, but the inclusion of electricity in the black clouds also means that it will neutralize many gas-based elements entirely e.g. Fluorine Release or Carbon Release. A powerful enough wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away to forcefully deactivate the user's armour.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
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 Declined  How can you see if you are surrounded in black clouds? chakra cost per turn? The affection of nearby gases is something that would be more akin of wind release or wind based techniques, not storm release. I also think this should be A-Rank, not S-Rank. And to maintain it active you need to sacrifice or restrict something while you fuel chakra into it.

 

[OG Smoove]

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Arutā: Sheru dangan fōmu - Alter: Shell Bullet Form
Type: Weapon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 on activation (each fin is 10)
Damage: 10 (20 if I use a fin)
Description: An old family relic that has been passed down from generation to generation to the first male child of that generation which is said in prophecy that he the one to wield the Alter. The relic is a glove that is to be worn on the right hand of the wielder. To activate, the user must channel the necessary amount of chakra (60) to the glove. The glove then turns into the Alter and transforms the user right arm into a weapon. It first level is called "Shell Bullet". It covers the arm with protective metal armor, which is mostly golden in color but with orange and gray sections also, the user's right hand is divided into orange and red plating, with metallic claws for fingernails and creates three red curved fins of metal jutting out from his right shoulder blade that stores the chakra that was used to activate this weapon. The fins break apart & release the chakra that burst outwards to propel the user forward at great speed, increasing the power of his strikes, which I label them as Bullets.

Bullets: Each Bullet are the same and do the same thing. The order of which a fin is use starts from the bottom one to the top one. Once you use a fin, it be destroyed and the chakra will be channeled into the Alter which you can use to launch yourself at great speed towards your opponent. Your body wont be able to keep up with the Alter, so you will be above the ground by about five inches. Once your fist comes in contact with your target, you release the chakra the that was in the Alter towards your target. The result will be a powerful punch that will send your target back flying a few meters and crushing his/her rib cage and sternum.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used once per turn and three times in a battle.
-Its a tunnel vision attack which mean you can't change direction while you're doing the move.
-If you miss on your first attempt, the chakra that was in the Alter will be gone by then.

Notes:
-If your target is at long range(10+ meters) it takes four seconds for you to reach your target.
-Mid range, it takes two seconds.
-Close range, it takes one second.
-Because of the speed which you go at, you are able break through any B-Rank and below Earth jutsu(such as walls and domes etc.); and resist any B-Rank and below Fire jutsu. But as a result, you'll be slowed down by half speed.

Visual Aid of how the move and weapon looks like.

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Arutā: Kyūkyoku no Sheruburettofōmu - Alter: Ultimate Shell Bullet Form
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Long(for the SBB)
Chakra: 40 for the SBB (-10 for each turn he is using the propeller)
Damage: 80 for the SBB
Description: This is the second stage of the Alter. To reach to this stage the user must use up all three of his Bullets and then wait five turns for the Alter to automatically transform to its second stage. I
t now takes the appearance of a predominantly orange plating that now extends across half of the limb's length before segmenting in half. Four orange fins extend around the right-hand side of the user's face (towards his right eye), and a large golden propeller located where the three red fins used to be. This propeller grants the user flight by using chakra.
On his fist is a small aperture which can absorb the energy that Fire and Lightning exerts which is needed for his Shell Bullet Burst to work.

Energy Absorption: This ability does not absorb the whole jutsu but only absorb the energy it exerts. It only absorb the energy of Fire and Lightning techniques. This ability is relevant because the Shell Bullet Burst ability needs the energy of one of the two elements in order to be completed.

Propeller: This allows you to have the ability of flight. It last for the whole turn and can only be used three times in a battle.

Shell Bullet Burst(SBB): This move is just like the Shell Bullet but stronger because of energy from the Fire/Lightning jutsu. The user channels all of his collected energy and chakra into his orb, causing a blinding golden light to emit from his right hand, before throwing a punch at a target. The resulting strike releases all of the energy in one blast, extending well beyond the user's melee range (effective to at least dozens of meters) and retaining the golden luminence in the shape of a fist which is about half the size of Gai's Daytime Tiger. The blast of the punch is great enough to break every bone in the targets body and moderately burn his/her flesh.

Visual Aid:

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Restrictions/Notes:

-SBB can only be used once per battle.
-The propeller can only be used three times per battle and last for the whole turn.
-In order to absorb the energy of the Fire or Lightning justu, the user must be within five meters of the jutsu path or activation.
-After using the SBB the Alter returns to its glove form and you must wait 10 turns to activate it again at it's first stage.
-The user is unable to use ninjutsu and elemental ninjutsu for five turns and will be passed out for one turn.
-It takes a total of 2 seconds from long for the fist to reach the target.
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-Both Declined- You can only have one CW, the other one needs to be a technique based on your weapon, not two CW techniques ~_~"

Arutā: Sheru dangan fōmu - Alter: Shell Bullet Form
Type: Weapon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 on activation (each fin is 10)
Damage: 10 (20 if I use a fin)
Description: An old family relic that has been passed down from generation to generation to the first male child of that generation which is said in prophecy that he the one to wield the Alter. The relic is a glove that is to be worn on the right hand of the wielder. To activate, the user must channel the necessary amount of chakra (60) to the glove. The glove then turns into the Alter and transforms the user right arm into a weapon. It first level is called "Shell Bullet". It covers the arm with protective metal armor, which is mostly golden in color but with orange and gray sections also, the user's right hand is divided into orange and red plating, with metallic claws for fingernails and creates three red curved fins of metal jutting out from his right shoulder blade that stores the chakra that was used to activate this weapon. The fins break apart & release the chakra that burst outwards to propel the user forward at great speed, increasing the power of his strikes, which I label them as Bullets.

Bullets: Each Bullet are the same and do the same thing. The order of which a fin is use starts from the bottom one to the top one. Once you use a fin, it be destroyed and the chakra will be channeled into the Alter which you can use to launch yourself at great speed towards your opponent. Your body wont be able to keep up with the Alter, so you will be above the ground by about five inches. Once your fist comes in contact with your target, you release the chakra the that was in the Alter towards your target. The result will be a powerful punch that will send your target back flying a few meters and crushing his/her rib cage and sternum.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used once per turn and three times in a battle.
-Its a tunnel vision attack which mean you can't change direction while you're doing the move.
-If you miss on your first attempt, the chakra that was in the Alter will be gone by then.

Notes:
-If your target is at long range(10+ meters) it takes four seconds for you to reach your target.
-Mid range, it takes two seconds.
-Close range, it takes one second.
-Because of the speed which you go at, you are able break through any B-Rank and below Earth jutsu(such as walls and domes etc.); and resist any B-Rank and below Fire jutsu. But as a result, you'll be slowed down by half speed.

Visual Aid of how the move and weapon looks like.

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 Declined  this is already similar to existing weapons. Gauntlets, gloves, armed plated arms, etc. Yours brings nothing new. Also, don't use the HR code in your submissions please.

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(Hachi Trigram kōchiku eapāmu danmaku) Eight Trigrams Air Palm Barrage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Hyugas being known for their fluid movements and quick hand strikes, this technique was made to take advantage of those two elements. The user will jerk their arms back and forth at rapid speeds while at the same time releasing Air Palms repeatedly which can cause major internal damage to the target if hit directly.

-Can't use any Jyuken moves for the next turn.
-Can only be used by OG Smoove

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 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

 

[Strawberry]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Earth Release : Ascending and Descending Pellet Storm
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user place his / her hand on the ground, channelling their chakra underground to about half a meter under the desired target. Launching about 50 sharp pellet shaped earth pieces out of the ground which travel straight up to a height of 30 meters. Once launched the pellets can be controlled via chakra towards the intended target.

Restrictions:
- Can only be used twice in a battle
- Only 1 more doton that turn

Note:
- can only be taught by Strawberry ninja




Genjutsu: Strawberry Devouring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user make an ox handseal and points at the target channelling their chakra through. The victim beleaves that they are now a strawberry, with legs, hands and a face being very slowly eaten by a kid. The target is able to move but the kid will give chase. The jutsu does very little mental harm, nor does it paralyse the foe, but is rather meant to buy a few seconds of time, tamper with the foe to through their concentration off.


Restrictions:
-can only be used once per battle
- if victim does not dissipate the genjutsu it will finish on the third turn.

Note: Can only be taught by strawberry ninja



Earth Release: Exploding Pillar
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user place both hand on the ground, concentrating their chakra launching 2 pillars one from their right and from their left, each to an adjacent position of the intended target. Then using their chakra when the target is almost in between the 2 pillars, the user weakens the bond holding the outside of the pillars together , and shortens the length of the pillar, by absorbing it into the core of the pillar which jutes out releasing the weakened outer layer, like shrapnel form a grenade. intended to be used on an incoming target, cannot cover a far distance.

Restrictions:
- can only be used once per battle
- pillars cannot travel far distances
- if user moves their concentration with the pillars is broken and they cannot cause the core to expand thus no flying debris form the pillars.

Note:
- can only be taught by strawberry ninja

Note

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 All Declined  Invalid submissions. Read the first post of this thread before making a submission and be sure that it follows whats described there.

 

[Coyote]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Kihaku Jidaishisou Dothraki | Soul of the Dothraki
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Close - Short
Chakra: 80
Damage: 40
Description: Deep within the deserts of the Wind country, a group of nomads known as the Dothraki graze over the miles of sand for an unknown amount of generations. The leader of this clan of people is known as the Khal. He/she who carries such an honorable title carries an ancient sword from the first clansmen of this tribe. It's hilt is made of the unknown metals of the unforgiving desert, the blade - straight at the bottom then curves out and in like the high half moon. Made for slashing, hooking, and even the ability to puncture with accuracy. However, this blade is not of normal origin, it gives he/she whom wields the title of Khal, power of lingering wrath. The blades connects with the energy of the wielder, the mere soul of the wielder gains influence. Due to he close ties between blade and energy, when raised above the user it lets out a wave of chakra/energy that is able to block oncoming assaults. Yet, the power of influence goes beyond petty aggression. When used it gives the ability to have those against you and whom are with you different effects. In an a source of incursion is nearby, the power of the blade with use of the users chakra/energy is unleashes and cause those against the reign to bow in respect. For those whom follow willingly, the blade grants them strength. The Dothraki believe in obedience and trust in their leader and the blade sings of such triumphs of them, with a swing of the blade, the sword is surrounded by that of chakra/energy clansmen that can move off the blade and attack beyond the short range or add additional power to each swing. A blade of the people, of the tribe, of the Khal.

Restriction: The idea of this 'Custom Weapon' was for it to be used by my Kioyshi biography hence why I used chakra/energy. So, there forth if used with my Kiyoshi biography energy will be used rather then chakra.
Restriction: The ability known as 'Hail the Khal!' is only usable once per conflict & causes a target of equal rank or below to bow for a couple seconds (acting more of a stun rather than a spruce of obedience)
Restriction: The ability known as 'Those who follow!' is only usable once per conflict & causes up to other teammates an increase of +10 in their most sought after power (i.e. specialty that their biography holds, only for one element/KG/clan ability)
Restriction: 'Ask, thy shall receive!' ability also effects the welder as well but only for 2 turns while it affects teammates for 3 turns.
Restriction: The ability known as 'Under thy Wing!' is only usable once per conflict & stops an attack up to A-Rank of any kind.
Restriction: The ability known as 'The Proud Few!' is only usable twice per conflict & it has the ability to let out multiple chakra/energy clansmen to come from the sword and attack a target along with the user. It's a form of manipulation and can even stay on the sword itself and increase the range with either the clansmen fusing out of it with extended spears or staffs. With each swing allows for a clansmen to come from the sword and fight right along with the user.
Restriction: Only usable by Coyote's biography '

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 Declined  You cannot submit Custom Clan related things in this thread and this weapon is very very oped with very exploitable sentences. Still, if you want to pursuit such a route, you need to submit in the custom clan thread as one of your personal custom clan techniques if RokuNR the head of the clan agrees.

 

[Daemon]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

New CW replacing this one:

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(Revenge) Kyuushuu
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kyuushuu is a folding blade with intricate mechanisms. By squeezing the hilt of the blade, a large stainless steel blade forms and protrudes from it. The blade is thin and light making it easy to carry. The dimensions of the sword is about 55 cm long or 1.80 feet. This would classify it in the realm of the length of a normal Katana. Even tough the blade itself is thin, It is extremely durable and nearly indestructible. Located in the hilt of the sword is a mechanism that holds iron wire. The wire that is in the hilt is refined, thin and sharpened allowing the wire to be able to severe the flesh of enemies. The Wire is released when a button is pressed on the bottom of the hilt. A compartment opens causing the wire to shoot out from the hilt and wrap its self around the desired target set by the user. If the hilt of the sword is held incorrectly by the opponent, the wire will eject from the hilt and wrap itself around the enemies arm. Small gears in the Hilt start to turn constricting the wires more until they slice the opponent arm off into a dozen pieces. After this takes place, the wire then retract into the hilt of the blade and the compartment closes. The sword being able to fold in on its self into hilt eliminates the need for a sheathe and allows it to be stored easily or concealing in small places. Once per turn, chakra can be channeled through the wires to increased their destructive power. The chakra can coat the wires so that it can dull down their cutting power but increase its strength so that I can be able to form traps and even support a full grown man to save him from a free fall. The user may also choose to add enough chakra so that is can restrict a small summon like Gamaken. The Wires from the sword can only reach to short range (5m or 16 feet). While restricting summons or using it to attack the user,It counts as one move towards the 3 move limit. For the actual use of the blade, when used to cut the opponent is leaves light yet deep cuts that aren't visible to the naked eye. This is used for the illusion of silent and unseen assassinations and murder. Even though the cuts are light, It still has the cutting power of slicing through the body with great ease.
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-Can only be used by Daemon

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±± Pending ±± Leaving for someone else. I'm 90% sure this is similar to something made before.

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(Revenge) Kyuushuu
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kyuushuu is a folding blade with intricate mechanisms. By squeezing the hilt of the blade, a large stainless steel blade forms and protrudes from it. The blade is thin and light making it easy to carry. The dimensions of the sword is about 55 cm long or 1.80 feet. This would classify it in the realm of the length of a normal Katana. Even tough the blade itself is thin, It is extremely durable and nearly indestructible. Located in the hilt of the sword is a mechanism that holds iron wire. The wire that is in the hilt is refined, thin and sharpened allowing the wire to be able to severe the flesh of enemies. The Wire is released when a button is pressed on the bottom of the hilt. A compartment opens causing the wire to shoot out from the hilt and wrap its self around the desired target set by the user. If the hilt of the sword is held incorrectly by the opponent, the wire will eject from the hilt and wrap itself around the enemies arm. Small gears in the Hilt start to turn constricting the wires more until they slice the opponent arm off into a dozen pieces. After this takes place, the wire then retract into the hilt of the blade and the compartment closes. The sword being able to fold in on its self into hilt eliminates the need for a sheathe and allows it to be stored easily or concealing in small places. Once per turn, chakra can be channeled through the wires to increased their destructive power. The chakra can coat the wires so that it can dull down their cutting power but increase its strength so that I can be able to form traps and even support a full grown man to save him from a free fall. The user may also choose to add enough chakra so that is can restrict a small summon like Gamaken. The Wires from the sword can only reach to short range (5m or 16 feet). While restricting summons or using it to attack the user,It counts as one move towards the 3 move limit. For the actual use of the blade, when used to cut the opponent is leaves light yet deep cuts that aren't visible to the naked eye. This is used for the illusion of silent and unseen assassinations and murder. Even though the cuts are light, It still has the cutting power of slicing through the body with great ease.
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-Can only be used by Daemon
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-Declined- Ok i'm fine with it but a few things need to be explained, like for example how exactly if the opponent holds the hilt of the sword "in a bad way" the wires will shoot out, secondly, restricting a summon that's as big as Gamaken would require a substantial amount of wires, definitely won't be capable of storing it within a sword's hilt, so your only option for that is Fuuinjutsu.

(Amatsu Toride) Heavenly Fortress
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu) (+10 to taijutsu)
Description: *The ultimate defense and offense for a Saumrai. A Saumrai through years of experience has developed almost of things including their skills. But most of all their pride and courage is developed instantaneously. A Samurai's pride and courage are their most important thing. Without ones pride and courage, they become an empty shell of themselves. For Samurai chakra is directly connected to their sense of pride. As their pride grows, their chakra goes along with it.(The Pride is obtained obviously through victorious battles and training so when I say that chakra is directly connected to pride, I mean that increased chakra is because of learning and training.) After meditating for large periods of time, it frees up the mind and stresses on ones body. This allows advanced chakra control. After years of mastering this form of meditation the user can clear their mind in a matter of seconds yet it requires no movement. The Samurai forces a large amount of chakra out of his body into the air around him that is visible to the human eye. The chakra is compressed into a denser form and molded. The Samurai shapes this dense chaka into an aura around him shaped like a person. This figure has long flowing hair and stands tall above the user about 10 feet tall. This figure is made out of pure chakra and is see through but is not defined to the point where you can see its face. Arms are formed around the samurai in like a coddling position where 1 arm is protecting the user. The second arms holds a katana that is held at the side of figure(figure can be made without the katana). Even though this technique was created by Samurai it can easily be learned and used by a Shinobi also since that said Shinobi 9 times out of 10 has higher chakra manipulation abilities than a normal Samurai. This condensed form of chakra around the user doesn't slow them down anymore nor does it speed them up. In combat, the figure does the fighting for the user, the only role the samurai has is motion. All techniques that are used by the figure are amplified giving Kenjutsu techniques a 10+ damage stat bonus along with a +10 taijutsu. Being the ultimate defense for Samurai's, the figure can defend the user from S-rank or below physical techniques for elemental techniques only A-rank and below can be effectively defended against. However every hit the user takes full on force from an elemental attack reduces the turns this figure can stay up by 1 because even more a master Samurai it is difficult for them to continue to supplying chakra to it. Due to it only being able to handle S-rank physical attack this means that it can handle up to 80 damage. If the damage exceeds 80 damage the attack will pierce through the figure and hit the user. After deactivation, the Samurai is exhausted and all the things that were cleared from his/her come rushing back putting stress back on them. For this, they are weakened for period of time. (This technique is based off the Uchiha's Susano'o.)
-Can only be taught by Daemon.
-Can only be used once per battle
- Only lasts 4 turns. Can be shorted by a turn numerous times.(explained in jutsu itself)
-After deactivating, no S-rank or higher techniques for the next 2 turns.*

Note: Took out the sword stab in the ground and the samurai only restriction.
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(Amatsu Toride) Heavenly Fortress
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu) (+10 to taijutsu)
Description: *The ultimate defense and offense for a Saumrai. A Saumrai through years of experience has developed almost of things including their skills. But most of all their pride and courage is developed instantaneously. A Samurai's pride and courage are their most important thing. Without ones pride and courage, they become an empty shell of themselves. For Samurai chakra is directly connected to their sense of pride. As their pride grows, their chakra goes along with it.(The Pride is obtained obviously through victorious battles and training so when I say that chakra is directly connected to pride, I mean that increased chakra is because of learning and training.) After meditating for large periods of time, it frees up the mind and stresses on ones body. This allows advanced chakra control. After years of mastering this form of meditation the user can clear their mind in a matter of seconds yet it requires no movement. The Samurai forces a large amount of chakra out of his body into the air around him that is visible to the human eye. The chakra is compressed into a denser form and molded. The Samurai shapes this dense chaka into an aura around him shaped like a person. This figure has long flowing hair and stands tall above the user about 10 feet tall. This figure is made out of pure chakra and is see through but is not defined to the point where you can see its face. Arms are formed around the samurai in like a coddling position where 1 arm is protecting the user. The second arms holds a katana that is held at the side of figure(figure can be made without the katana). Even though this technique was created by Samurai it can easily be learned and used by a Shinobi also since that said Shinobi 9 times out of 10 has higher chakra manipulation abilities than a normal Samurai. This condensed form of chakra around the user doesn't slow them down anymore nor does it speed them up. In combat, the figure does the fighting for the user, the only role the samurai has is motion. All techniques that are used by the figure are amplified giving Kenjutsu techniques a 10+ damage stat bonus along with a +10 taijutsu. Being the ultimate defense for Samurai's, the figure can defend the user from S-rank or below physical techniques for elemental techniques only A-rank and below can be effectively defended against. However every hit the user takes full on force from an elemental attack reduces the turns this figure can stay up by 1 because even more a master Samurai it is difficult for them to continue to supplying chakra to it. Due to it only being able to handle S-rank physical attack this means that it can handle up to 80 damage. If the damage exceeds 80 damage the attack will pierce through the figure and hit the user. After deactivation, the Samurai is exhausted and all the things that were cleared from his/her come rushing back putting stress back on them. For this, they are weakened for period of time. (This technique is based off the Uchiha's Susano'o.)
-Can only be taught by Daemon.
-Can only be used once per battle
- Only lasts 4 turns. Can be shorted by a turn numerous times.(explained in jutsu itself)
-After deactivating, no S-rank or higher techniques for the next 4 turns.
- Also after deactivation, the user's jutsu will lose power by one rank for the next 2 turns.
- After deactivation, the user's speed will decrease by one level due to strain on chakra and body.

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 Pending  Leaving both to someone else. First one for me is still similar to something made before but i'm not 100% sure (90% though) and second one seems a bit too much though I prefer if someone else looks at it.

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[neilson]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

suiton:Kyodaina hebi ga mamoru to kōgeki no jutsu-water stlye: giant snake defends and attacks
Type:defensive/offensive
Rank:S
Chakra40
Damage80
Range:short-mid range
Despcriptionby making 3 hand seals and expelling built chakra, the user will create a long giant water snake out of a water source which will rush to the user and surround him by wrapping half of its long body and tail around the user and having the other half of its long body to the neck and head area above the user of this jutsu, the tail to half of the body of the snake that wraps around the user of this jutsu will defend against incoming attacks while rest of the snake to the head that is above will attack the opponent by crashing down on him with force able to leave a mild crater. The user of this jutsu is not in any form touching the giant water snake as the snake surrounds him.
Note:
-lasts for only the turn it was used and then disperse into water from which other water jutsu can be done from
-can only be used twice in battle
-must have water as a specialty in bio
-water source us required.
-if close to the water source the snake will get to the user without delay, if standing on a water source the snake is created immediately surrounding the user as it emerges from the water source. In other words must be close to a water source to use.
-cant perform any jutsu apart from water jutsu as the snake surrounds the user
-can only be taught by neilson
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-Declined- Similar to a cannon technique.

 

[Littlefinger.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Genjutsu: Setsudan | Illusion Technique: Mutilation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary | Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A(-80 from the stress of the mental torture)
Description: The user places an opponent in a genjutsu in which their skin/body cracks into what appears to be little shreds of flesh and is then blown away by a flowing breeze, hence removing a body part completely. This idea is gotten from the way the body part of someone resurrected via the Edo Tensei reforms after it has taken a hit. But in this genjutsu, instead of reforming, the body is being deformed. To add flair to the usage of this genjutsu, the user can effect selected parts of the opponent's body with it, thus rendering those body parts unuseable in reality. For instance, the user can, in the genjutsu, cause the opponent's arms to crack and be blown away/erased by the breeze, making them armless; but in reality, because of the mental torture of not having arms anymore, the opponent would be unable to use their arms as they would be numb, paralysed, lifeless. It can be used to affect the opponent's eyes, rendering them blind; their ears, rendering them deaf and so on.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Naizen.

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±± Declined ±± Too high level. Too powerful in its effects.

Genjutsu: Setsudan | Illusion Technique: Mutilation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A(-80 if used to affect a sensitive organ)
Description: The user does four hand seals and places a target in a high-level genjutsu. In this illusion, a particular part of the target's body cracks into what appears to be little shreds of flesh and is then blown away by a flowing breeze, hence removing a body part completely. This idea is gotten from the way the body part of someone resurrected via the Edo Tensei reforms after it has taken a hit. But in this genjutsu, instead of reforming, the body is being deformed. To add flair to the usage of this genjutsu, the user can effect selected parts of the opponent's body with it, thus rendering those body parts unuseable in reality. For instance, the user can, in the genjutsu, cause the opponent's arms to crack and be blown away/erased by the breeze, making them armless; but in reality, their arms become numb, paralysed, lifeless. It can be used to affect the opponent's eyes, rendering them blind; their ears, rendering them deaf and so on. Despite the fact that it has powerful effects, it is suitable for mental torture by affecting body parts like the limbs and 5 sense organs, etc. If it is used to affect highly sensitive body organs like the heart, brain, lungs, etc. The target will immediately be released from the genjutsu but will take the damage.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Naizen.

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 Declined 

Genjutsu: Nimurode no Tōwaku | Illusion Technique: Nimrod's Bewilderment
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs three handseals and casts an illusion on the opponent(s). In the illusion the user confuses at most three of the opponent's senses at the same time, hence creating a false image, sound, feel, taste or smell of an object or a technique which may differ from its true characteristics is in reality. Once this genjutsu has been cast, if for instance, the user sends a fire jutsu he/she can fool the opponent's mind into believing that what they see is lightning or what they hear is water or what they feel is cool breeze. This illusion only changes the characteristics of techniques of the same rank and below.
-Cannot affect more than 3 of the target's senses at the same time.
-Can only be used 4 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Naizen.

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 Declined  DNR. Collides with existing Genjutsu.

 

[Serpent]

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(Fuuinjutsu: Shoukyaku) - Sealing Technique: Incinerating Flash Barrier
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, and three shadow clones, that must have already been created, will surround the opponent in a square formation. They will then create a cubical barrier trapping the opponent within the barrier. The barrier will then flash brightly incinerating the opponents chakra supply. This will seal the opponents chakra making them unable to use Technique A-rank and above until the sealing method fades.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Requires a 4 turn cool down
-Sealing Method lasts 2 turns
-Can also be used by 4 Shadow Clones
-Can only be taught by Serpent
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-Declined- I was just about to approved it when i noticed, you forgot to edit the chakra cost after editing the rank, resubmit with the proper template info next time, also add that you have to have shadow clones present on the field.

(Raiton: Hebi Higyou) - Lightning Release: The Striking Serpent.
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: When an opponent makes a physical strike against the User, they will counter by blocking the strike with there arm, when the user and opponent make contact, a jolt of Raiton Chakra will shoot through the opponents nerves much like a tazor, this will cause the opponents mussels to tense up leaving them open for the user to make a strike against the opponents torso sending them flying backwards.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent.
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(Fuuinjutsu: Shoukyaku) - Sealing Technique: Incinerating Flash Barrier
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, and three shadow clones, that must have already been created, will surround the opponent in a square formation. They will then create a cubical barrier trapping the opponent within the barrier. The barrier will then flash brightly incinerating the opponents chakra supply. This will seal the opponents chakra making them unable to use Technique A-rank and above until the sealing method fades.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Requires a 4 turn cool down
-Sealing Method lasts 2 turns
-Can also be used by 4 Shadow Clones
-Can only be taught by Serpent

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 Declined  Ok the incinerating the opponents chakra supply part is irking me. This barrier would, from what I understand, drain the chakra of those inside (a certain amount per turn) which would prevent them from using above X-rank techniques while inside it. The barrier itself will be able to sustain up to X-rank attacks from both inside and outside. While inside, they should be immune from external techniques as anything that could be used to attack who is inside would break the barrier.

(Raiton: Hebi Higyou) - Lightning Release: The Striking Serpent.
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: When the user and opponent make contact, The user will quickly release a jolt of Raiton Chakra that will shoot through the opponents nerves much like a tazor, this will cause the opponents mussels to tense up leaving them open for the user to make a strike against the opponents torso sending them flying backwards.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

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 Declined  DNR. This is similar to at least 2 techniques I know off and this collides with other things as well.

 

[Shame]

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Zanka no tachi ) "long sword of the remnant flame")
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range:short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: this blade has a regular long sword length with a black charred look to it from being forged by an uchiha using the Amaterasu flame. This gives this blade a natural fire burning edge which is not visible and should always be sheathed when not in combat. Just like how Amaterasu has undying flames this blade upon being forged by Amaterasu has undying heat only. The sheath is made of a special material which blocks the burning edge of this sword. This sword is capable of leaving burns on an enemy wherever it cuts and will turn that area cut to a charred black look. This blade focuses extreme heat on the cutting edge of the blade and will not send off any flames or attacks. It is a blade strictly for close combat kenjutsu usage with the ability to burn anything it cuts, and gives off no actual heat from the blade itself but rather from the cut. It is a focused form of hyper heating a blade edge, can easily cut through anything

Restrictions: the burning cut effect can only be used 5 times during battle.
: ability can only be used twice per turn.
:this blade has self sustaining heat from being forged by the flames of Amaterasu.
Note-In no way does this blade use Amaterasu
Note- must be sheathed when not in use or chance of burning through myself.

~note: can only be used by kensei muguruma

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 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

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Elephant Summoning Technique: Ares (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ares)
Type: Summoning animal
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Snake hand seal to summon Ares. He is a giant elephant with an intimidating appearance.
He is about the size of Gamabunta with proportionate trunk & tusks to his body size which projects in front of his head. His trunk can reach up to short range in front of him when fully extended and can be used to grab objects or persons.
He has a hard spiked metal armor covering his head & face with spiked metal knee cups with several war wounds over his entire body.
Abilities:

• Ares is capable of using fire jutsus up to A rank without the need of hand seals using his mouth/trunk.
• Because of his heavy armored body, he can destroy small obstacles with ease and can break defenses up to B rank by dashing against them.
• When summoned he can intimidate other summoning animals which are smaller in size compared to him and can momentarily paralyze them with fear for one turn (passive ability).
• He is able to suck in objects and targets within the short range in front of his trunk's openings, which counts as user's move if used.
• His skin is dry & rough (which is a natural ability of elephants) and can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
  Note(s):
• Can only be summoned once per battle & must have signed Elephant contract to summon Ares.
• Can stay in the field for 4 turns once summoned.
• Can use fire jutsus up to A rank without the need of hand seals and each move counts as the user's move.
• Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range 4 times per battle and each time counts as one of user's move if used.
• Can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
• Can perform ordinary physical attacks using his trunk, tusks, legs at close range and can grab objects/persons with his trunk.
• Can talk.
• Can carry up to 3 people on his back.
• Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
• Gained ownership of Elephants contract:
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 Declined  I dislike such big summons because this is where it becomes illogical. ITs the same size as Gamabunta right? so its 100 meters tall...and his trunk only reaches short range, meaning its trunk is 5 meters long? Make him smaller. Or its virtually useless in battle. Also, no need to make this so complex. The "sucking" ability can't be made as that is a copy of Baku's, danzo's cannon summon, ability. Rest is fine.

Illusionary Arts: Hyper drive (Genjutsu: Haipa-doraibu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Ram -> Snake hand seals and casts an illusion on the opponent where the opponent perceives that suddenly his body and the surrounding are suddenly moving at a very fast rate like the speed of hyper-drive. This produces an enormous amount of sudden sensory outburst in the opponent's body which exerts enormous sensory burden on brain while the opponent's physical body cannot keep up with the amount of sensory input leaving the opponent heavily exhausted and he stumbles, falls on the ground in his stead and becomes paralyzed for one turn.
The opponent has in-coordination of his muscles of limbs and walks with an unsteady drunken-like gait in the next turn.
Note(s):

• The jutsu can only affect the opponent when he is in motion or has just started to move.
• No effect on opponents who are immobile.
• Can only be used 4 times per battle.
• Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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 Declined  This has been submitted before and declined and at least a similar application was once approved. DNR.

Sulfuras
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short (can be thrown up to mid range)
Chakra: N/A (40 when summoned via scroll)
Damage: N/A
Description: Sulfuras is the legendary war hammer made from the combination of various metals extracted from the molten lava from the volcano within the very depths of Iwagakure.

Sulfuras is a heavy hammer about 3 feet in length and contains several flame shaped designs all over its body. In spite of its heaviness, the user can handle it pretty much like handling a light weapon because of his continuous training with this hammer for a very long time.
Sulfuras has a hammer-head from which several sharp spikes project outwards symmetrically. The weight of the head end and the handle is exactly the same which allows the user to handle it with ease.

The head end of the hammer is primarily used for most of the attacks and the handle is covered with a thick insulated material for better grip. Though Sulfuras is primarily meant to be used for producing severe blunt damage, because of the several sharp symmetrical projections on its head it can also inflict penetrating damage (up to few centimeters) while during an attack and the penetration by the spikes on its head helps in converting the entirety of the blunt force generated into a tearing force on contact with the opponents.

Sulfuras is usually carried strapped to the user's back with the handle upwards so that it can be taken out relatively with ease in a combat.

Abilities:

• Sulfuras can be used a basic blunt weapon like an ordinary hammer but because of the spikes on its head, Sulfuras is also capable of producing penetrating injury along with blunt force injury which converts the blunt force attack into a tearing force when it comes in contact with the opponent's body.
• Sulfuras being made from a combination of metals obtained from the volcano naturally has high thermal storage capacity and it can be heated to higher temperatures quickly without itself becoming molten.
  [*]The Sulfuras is capable of storing and utilizing fire chakra and raw chakra from the user.
• The user can channel his fire chakra into the hammer head via the handle and can heat up the hammer head up to 300 degree Celsius. This makes the hammer head and part of the handle glow with a faint orange-yellow glow. This heated up hammer head can be used to attack the opponents to produce severe third degree burns on hit. The insulated handle of the hammer protects the user from thermal damage from handling the hot Sulfuras.
• While not channeling his fire chakra, the user can channel his raw chakra through Sulfuras and store it within the hammer head, which can be released rapidly from its head end just at the moment of its contact with the target to produce a blunt-penetrating damage which is equivalent to the damage caused by B rank taijutsu and can break down defenses up to B rank.
  This raw chakra channeled Sulfuras can also be hammered forcefully on to the ground which sends tremors, rises up dirt and causes several cracks to develop on the ground in front of it up to mid range into which the opponents may get get trapped.

Restrictions:

• Sulfuras is indestructible.
• Sulfuras can only be wielded by me (-Jiraiya-).
• The user can channel his fire chakra into Sulfuras up to 4 times per battle. The user channels his fire chakra which heats up the hammer head in the same turn and the heat lasts for another 2 turns without the need of continuous channeling of fire chakra.
• The channeling of fire chakra to heat up the hammer head in the initial turn counts as a move.
• The user can channel his raw chakra through Sulfuras and utilize it for attack only 5 times per battle and each attack utilizing raw chakra counts as user's move.
• The user cannot channel his fire chakra or raw chakra into Sulfuras in the same turn.
• The user cannot perform any hand seals while wielding Sulfuras but can use jutsus which require no hand seals.

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The Unlimited Blade | Mugenjin (無限刃)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (40 When summoned via scroll)
Damage: N/A
Description: The Mugenjin is one of the highly searched, legendary sword even among the great five nations which has taken a countless lives during the 2nd ninja war.

This legendary sword was said to be forged by the master sword smith Arai Shakku, the head of Takumi Village (Literally meaning "Village of Artisans") during the formation of 5 great nations using a secret alloy combination which made the sword near hard as diamond and conferred protection against corrosion by rust.

It was rumored that the Mugenjin was lost in the chaos of the 2nd great ninja war somewhere in the depths of the hidden grass village. This sword came into the possession of -Jiraiya- while he went a stealth mission to the hidden grass village where he accidentally discovered it in a hidden cave. Since then -Jiraiya- became the wielder of the Mugenjin.

Externally the Mugenjin appears as a regular sword of normal size with a bright lustrous blade and a deep dark purple hilt of higher insulation quality residing in a deep dark purple sheath. But on very close examination of the blade, one can see a fine serrated edge flaked away in a regular pattern, which has become soaked in the flesh and body fat of the victims it had cut/killed over the years.

Abilities:

• Each serration on the blade has a micro-pore leading to a blind end(of few millimeters) within the sword which acts by passive capillary action to store the oils/fats which comes in contact with blade.
• Further the serration itself can grab the fat particles from the opponents owing to friction.
• The wielder can also feed the sword with oil from externally by pouring it over the sword but the imbibing action/quality of the sword requires no special technique by the user as it is passive due to the capillary action of the micro-pores in the sword.
• As a result above special qualities, the wielder can ignite the imbibed fat/oils using his fire/lightning chakra or lightning sparks or fire jutsus from externally.
• The Mugenjin can be used as a normal sword when not using any special jutsus through it, but the oil/fat imbibing quality of the sword continues to work until the space in serrations and storage sacs are saturated as it is a passive quality of the sword due to capillary action and friction produced while coming in contact with the opponent's flesh.

Note:

• Can only be wielded by me(-Jiraiya-).
• The sword is indestructible.
• The user can incorporate combustible oils into the sword externally by pouring them over the sword from a storage container or through ninjutsus that produce oil.
• The harvested oil/fat can be ignited using fire chakra, fire jutsus, lightning sparks.

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 Declined  Ok the blue parts need definition. When heated, what power has his attack? You can store fire chakra in it? why and for what purpose? what is the rank of this shockwave-like effect you get when you hit the ground? what does it actually do and why would the opponent be trapped in it? its it a blunt or a penetrating impact on contact when used on an enemy?

 

[Enzup]

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(Kame Ninjutsu: Ao Bara) - Terrapin Arts: Green Rose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons 2 curved terrapin shells around his enemy, forming a sphere, such that the enemy is trapped inside it. The moment shells are summoned they starts secreting water from all the pores, filling the sphere with water and eventually leaving no space in it for breathing and hence enemy caught inside it may pass out if he don't deal with it in time. The size of the shells can vary as per the requirements but cannot exceed 10m in height (vertical diameter). Because of terrapin's natural granted defensive capabilities, the shells are of high strength and hence capable of taking one attack equal to its own rank.
Note: -It takes 2 complete turns for water to fill the sphere completely.
-Can be used by terrapins and people who have signed Terrapin contract.
-Usable by any one of them, and hence only once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

Changes made:
-Defined size of shells.
-Defined time period in which shell fills up completely.
-Other minute changes.
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(Kame Ninjutsu: Ao Bara) - Terrapin Arts: Green Rose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons 2 curved terrapin shells around his enemy, forming a sphere, such that the enemy is trapped inside it. The moment shells are summoned they starts secreting water from all the pores, filling the sphere with water and eventually leaving no space in it for breathing and hence enemy caught inside it may pass out if he don't deal with it in time. The size of the shells cannot vary and can only be used to trap human and as such they have a definite diameter of 2m. Because of terrapin's natural granted defensive capabilities, the shells are of high strength and hence capable of taking one attack equal to its own rank.
Note: -It takes 3 complete turns for water to fill the sphere completely.
-Can be used by terrapins and people who have signed Terrapin contract.
-Usable by any one of them, and hence only once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

Changes Made:
-Reduced rank.
-Restricted size to 2m.
-Increased time period to 3 turns from 2.

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 Declined  If this makes the opponent pass out, how does it not do damage? One more go and then DNR. Its been tumbling around the CJ thread long enough.

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(Genjutsu: Funuke) - Illusionary Arts: Coward
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (mental damage)
Description: This is a strong and powerful genjutsu technique where user makes direct eye contact with the opponent and fools his brain, causing the opponent to feel that an injection is injected at his back. The liquid from the injection seems to be so powerful that the opponent could simply feel it flowing and spreading in his body. And the effects seems to be even more disastrous as the moment the injection is stuck at the opponent's back, his reactions and reflexes drops down to zero, restricting him from making even the slightest of movement. The liquid also starts soaking the water from the body, starting from the eyes and ending to the feet. This causes dizziness and eventual blindness as no water is present in the eyes. Numbness thus caused makes the opponent fall unconscious.
Note: -No other genjutsu in previous and in same turn.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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 Declined  DNR.

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(Futon: Pluto) - Wind Release: Pluto
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (if someone comes in direct contact)
Description: This is an advanced and useful technique in which user concentrates his wind chakra onto his complete body, creating a thick and sharp layer of wind chakra. After a split second the layer de-attaches from the user and forms somewhat a thick hollow sphere which starts rotating at great rate around him, defending the user in close proximity and from other techniques and heavy projectiles. By making a single handseal user can stop this technique anytime he wishes.
Note: - No above S-rank wind in same turn.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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 Declined  DNR. Done before.

 

[Ryūjin]

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(Fūinjutsu: Jō Kōken) – Sealing Technique: Imperial Guardian
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is composed of a sealing formula that remains active until triggered, this sealing formula bears the Kanji letter of "ガ" or in literal meaning "guard" which is located on the user's upper arm. This sealing formula sends pulses of chakra within short range around the user and is triggered by a fast moving technique, basically a technique that can't be tracked by normal eye sight and requires at least a Sharingan or similar means to track, the pulses of chakra that's around the user detects the speed once the technique collides with the chakra that's around the user and the sealing formula glows suddenly, causing a barrier that surrounds the user to form and repel the incoming technique, leaving the user unharmed.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: Can guard against up to a S-rank technique once per usage.
Note: No Fūinjutsu techniques in the same turn.

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 Declined  The pulse part is beyond the scope of Fuuinjutsu and it collides with existing techniques. Zaitoichi taijutsu being one of them. You need to find another trigger for this seal. It also needs a range.

(Fūinjutsu: Sokuryoku Inmetsu) – Sealing Technique: Virtual Assessment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a simple yet effect sealing technique that's composed of a sealing formula of the Kanji letter "力" or in literal meaning "Speed" which is located on the user's right palm, in order for this to work, the user extends his hand forwards while opening his palm, releasing a sealing barrier that contains a mass of the user's chakra, this barrier affects anyone that moves at fast speeds that are not at all traceable with normal eyes, by using chakra as a medium, the barrier forcibly slows down the fast moving body drastically to the point where it becomes barely noticeable by normal eye sight by compressing large amounts of chakra around the bodies of the fast moving person, however, the downside of this technique is that the user can also be affected if he's moving at that speed, this is not a counter attack, but simply a forceful reduction of speed for both parties. This sealing barrier does not work on EIG users, due to the amount of immense chakra pressure released out of their bodies when activating the chakra gates, only works on bodies that move at speeds above the normal eyes tracking abilities.
Note: Can only be used thrice
Note: Lasts for 2 turns once used.
Note: No Fūinjutsu techniques while the barrier is active.

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 Declined  define bodies. Do you mean any physical, tangible body or do you mean ninjas?

(Fūinjutsu: Jō Kōken) – Sealing Technique: Imperial Guardian
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is composed of a sealing formula that remains active until triggered, this sealing formula bears the Kanji letter of "ガ" or in literal meaning "guard" which is located on the user's upper arm. This sealing formula erects an invisible barrier that's made around the user at all times but does not actually cost the user a move until it activates, the barrier works by detecting the chakra of a fast incoming technique and deflects it, causing it to dissipate and leave the user unharmed, the barrier's deflection ability is only triggered by a fast moving technique, basically a technique that can't be tracked by normal eye sight and requires at least a Sharingan or similar means to track, the barrier that's around the user detects the speed once the technique collides with the chakra released from the barrier that's around the user and the sealing formula glows suddenly, causing the barrier that surrounds the user to repel the incoming technique within short range of the user.
Note: Can only be trigger twice per battle.
Note: Can guard against up to an S-rank technique.
Note: The user can use it twice counting as two moves per turn and using +30 chakra with each usage to guard against a forbidden ranked technique, this can only be used once.
Note: No Fūinjutsu techniques in the same turn.

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 Approved 

(Fūinjutsu: Sokuryoku Inmetsu) – Sealing Technique: Virtual Assessment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a simple yet effect sealing technique that's composed of a sealing formula of the Kanji letter "力" or in literal meaning "Speed" which is located on the user's right palm, in order for this to work, the user extends his hand forwards while opening his palm, releasing a sealing barrier that contains a mass of the user's chakra, this barrier affects anyone that moves at fast speeds that are not at all traceable with normal eyes, by using chakra as a medium, the barrier forcibly slows down the fast moving body drastically to the point where it becomes barely noticeable by normal eye sight by compressing large amounts of chakra around the bodies of the fast moving person, however, the downside of this technique is that the user can also be affected if he's moving at that speed, this is not a counter attack, but simply a forceful reduction of speed for both parties. This sealing barrier does not work on EIG users, due to the amount of immense chakra pressure released out of their bodies when activating the chakra gates, only works on ninja bodies that move at speeds above the normal eyes tracking abilities.
Note: Can only be used Twice
Note: Lasts for 3 turns once activated.
Note: No Fūinjutsu techniques while the barrier is active.
Note: Barrier spans mid range around its target point and cannot be moved.

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(Senpō: Ryūjin no Doki) – Sage Art: Dragon God's Wrath
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: This is quite a deadly Fire release technique that's deemed forbidden even among Sage Mode users, the user performs a set of 5 handseals after gathering a substantial amount of natural chakra combined with Fire chakra, using natural chakra instead of the user's own chakra reserves so that the technique can achieve more powerful standards, the user gathers the chakra inside his throat and release the fire chakra out of his mouth while using shape manipulation to form the fire into a multitude of 3 full sized dragons of fire, these dragons head towards the opponent as chakra tracking missiles, tracking the opponent's chakra through the application of natural energy and heading towards the destination, the user can choose either to ram the dragons straight up against the target's structure/body, pushing through it, unlike most fire techniques, due to the condensation of natural energy, the dragons of fire assume a physical structure, being capable to punch through concrete with ease. The user can also choose to take use of the dragon's shape, causing the dragon's body to wrap around a certain structure or opponent to entrap them, each of these dragons has a size comparable to that of the Wood Release: Wood Dragon Technique. Use of this technique depletes the user of natural chakra, and exhausts his stamina, causing his speed to be cut in half, while not being able to perform Forbidden ranked techniques for a specific amount of time. Each Dragon can be manipulated and used individually once released for different purposes.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: Must have Sage Mode active, and have Fire Release as a main affinity.
Note: Reduces Sage Mode's duration by 2 turns.
Note: The user can't use any techniques above S-rank for 2 turns after using this technique.

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 Approved  Reduced the number because of their size.

 

[-Broly-]

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(Fuuinjutsu: Gobōsei) -Sealing arts: Pentagram Star
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will place a seal bearing the Kanji for "Absorb" on the ground. When this is done 5 large pillars will be summoned in long range that makes the shape of a 5 pointed star with chains going back and forth between the pillars, connecting them and making a pentagram in the center of it which will be were the user and the opponent will be at. The pentagram reaches into the edge of mid range all around and the chains all covered in kanji bearing the word "Absorb". As such, when within the radius of the pentagram the chains will activate with a purple glow and start siphoning away both of their chakra including the techniques they make, drawing the chakra into the chains like a magnet and making any technique above A rank unusable. The purple glow the chains exude are similar to the violet flame pillar technique because touching any of the chains before the technique is over or destroyed will cause the person touching it to be painfully engulfed in purple flames. This is made possible due to the chakra the technique has drained "fueling" it This technique can be destroyed easily by destroying 2 of the pillars with an A rank technique.
-Can only be used once per battle
-No fuuin above B rank the next turn
-Lasts 5 turns
-Can only be taught by Broly

X-Declined-X I dont think its within the seals ability to absorb chakra without any medium used.


Fuuinjutsu: Poseidon no gifuto Sealing Arts: Poseidon's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/a
Description: This seal utilizes one of the most basic functions of seals, which is to simply seal normal everyday things. This particular seal contains twice the amount of water as "Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave" creates and works like a gate. With the user's chakra controlling how much the gate opens. When the user wishes to create a water technique that needs a water source he will channel his chakra into the seal. The amount of chakra the user channels into the seal (eg 20 points of chakra for a B rank, 40 points for a S rank) controls how much water is available from it. Depending on the technique, the correct amount of water is made available from the seal and the technique that the user wishes to use will burst forth from the seal. The rest of the water will be "behind the gate" and thus can be used for future techniques. Since the water technique comes from the seal the user can place the seal wherever he wishes on his body.
- Once the seal is activated it doesn't need to be activated again for any other water technique
-Can be used 6 times for any water technique
-Can only be taught by Broly

X-Declined-X So you will be wasting additional chakra as well for Water techniques while you could simply use nature transformation which already comes with alot of the water techniques, why? Whats the exploit?. Basically a limitless supply of water, and sealed where? A scroll? Your body?

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(Fuuinjutsu: Gobōsei) -Sealing arts: Pentagram Star
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will place a seal bearing the Kanji for "Absorb" on the ground. When this is done 5 large pillars will be summoned in long range that makes the shape of a 5 pointed star with chains going back and forth between the pillars, connecting them and making a pentagram in the center of it which will be were the user and the opponent will be at. The pentagram reaches into the edge of mid range all around and the chains all covered in kanji bearing the word "Absorb". As such, when within the radius of the pentagram the chains will activate with a purple glow and start siphoning away both of their chakra including the techniques they make, drawing the chakra into the chains like a magnet and making any technique above A rank unusable,with the chains being the medium that is draining the chakra away. The purple glow the chains exude are similar to the violet flame pillar technique because touching any of the chains before the technique is over or destroyed will cause the person touching it to be painfully engulfed in purple flames. This is made possible due to the chakra the technique has drained "fueling" it. This technique can be destroyed easily by destroying 2 of the pillars with an A rank technique.
-Can only be used once per battle
-No fuuin above B rank the next turn
-Lasts 5 turns
-Can only be taught by Broly

Fuuinjutsu: Poseidon no gifuto Sealing Arts: Poseidon's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/a
Description: This seal utilizes one of the most basic functions of seals, which is to seal almost limitless amounts of an object into a small seal.. This particular seal is the size of a standard sealing tag and contains three times the amount of water as "Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave" creates and works like a gate. With the user's chakra controlling how much the gate opens. When the user wishes to create a water technique that needs a water source he will channel his chakra into the seal. The amount of chakra the user channels into the seal (eg 20 points of chakra for a B rank, 40 points for a S rank) controls how much water is available from it.Depending on the amount of chakra focused into the seal, it will release the needed amount of water for the desired technique and not a drop more. Since the user is molding his chakra in conjunction with the release of the water, it seems as if there is no time between the release of the water from the seal and the actual forming of the technique. The rest of the water will remain in the seal and thus can be used for future techniques.This seal lets the user use large water techniques that require a source when in a place where it would normally be impossible. Unlike techniques that create a water source, this doesn't give the opponent a water source to work with, thus making this seal a very good alternative for water source creating techniques. Since the user is only focusing his chakra into the seal so that it will leak the correct amount of water, the user isn't wasting excess chakra.
- Once the seal is activated it doesn't need to be activated again for any other water technique
-Can be used 6 times for any water technique
-Seal can either be worn on the hands or chest
-Can only be taught by Broly



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Fuuinjutsu/Raiton: Kureimoa-Sealing Arts/Lightning Release: Claymore
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make 2 handseals and place his hand on the ground, focusing his chakra into up to three spots of his choosing. When this is done seals containing lightning chakra will form over those locations with the kanji (ブーム) for boom, in a circle of 4 meter radius for each seal location. When a foreign chakra passes over one of these circles they will release an upwards pulse of lightning that will paralyze the target when hit by the lightning pulse. The lightning pulse will be quick and will briefly skew the opponents chakra system due to the sudden rush of foreign chakra that has pulsed through their tenketsu, preventing the use of S rank and above techniques from the target for 1 turn.
-Circles must be made at least 2 meters away from the opponent
-Circles can not be more than 4 meters away from each other
-Can only be taught by -Broly-
-Can only be used 3 times
-Upward pulse goes mid range upwards

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(Genjutsu: Oputikaru Secchakuzai) – Illusionary Technique: Optical Adhesive
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage:40 (During 1st turn after eyes closing) then reaches 80 (2nd Turn)
Description:The user places the opponent under a genjutsu where he makes the opponents brain think his/her eyes are dry which forces the opponents tear ducts to release a single tear in each eye. The second the opponent closes his/her eyes they will feel as if a watery adhesive has stuck their eyelids together keeping them closed. The adhesive will then heat up at a rapid rate scorching the front of the opponent’s eye which results in the opponent becoming blind for two turns after the ending of the genjutsu, due to shock and mental damage of the optic nerve. (While the opponent is experiencing the increasing heat/burning sensation, their optical nerve is what is actually taking strain. The delusional heat and apparent frontal optical pain is directionally proportional to the damage getting done to the optic nerve in the brain.) The damage and shock to the optic nerve reduces the amount of sight the user has. (If the genjutsu is broken after the heat has started the opponent will have very blurred vision for the next turn due to the damage done to the optic nerve.)

Note: The genjutsu ends after the opponents second turn of feeling the heated sensation.
Note: If the genjutsu ends the opponent will be blinded for two turns.
Note: The user must have mastered genjutsu in order to use this technique
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice in a battle
Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ndlovu
Note: No A and above genjutsu may be used in the turn after this genjutsu has been used.

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(Sono Katana Ni Seken) - The Sword of Two Worlds
Type: Weapon
Rank: S - Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+ N/A per turn, depending on the mastery of the wielder)
Damage: N/A
Description: The origin of the blade is uncertain, through the ages it was called a useless pretty sword by many who did not understand it and had no faith in it. It is made out of an extremely hard metal which is infused with small chakra utilising particles/minerals (Similar to the metal used in chakra blades,) It is lethally sharp, light and quite easy to handle. The chakra extracting alloy forces the blade to give off a luminescent white light (instead of the regular blue that is emitted when chakra is infused) when the user’s chakra is accessible to it. The blade instantly siphons chakra from the user the moment its hilt is connected with its owner chakra, which creates the chakra induced luminescent light to appear from the blade. The light that is emitted from the blade is not large but it illuminates enough for an opponent standing at a distance to think that the user is holding a sword that’s blade is made out of pure light. The user cannot control the siphoning rate of his chakra and cannot restrict the amount of light that is emitted by the blade. The blade manipulates the users chakra, to cast a C Rank illusion in the vicinity of three meters around the blade. Anyone who looks at the blade, whose chakra isn’t associated with it will have a short momentary lapse in duration judgement. Effects and events around the blade will seem slow, sluggish and delayed for three seconds whereas the ability of illusion lasts for only two seconds. The blade continuously siphons chakra for this effect to work but the ability cannot be harnessed by those who don’t have an adept knowledge and mastery of the illusionary arts. (Otherwise the level of chakra manipulation required would be uncontrolled and therefore the user would constantly cast himself under the illusion.) The blade eventually becomes familiar with its owner’s chakra signature and overtime its chakra consumption decreases as the two become more acquainted but, the constant consumption of chakra will never dissipate. The first withdrawal of the blade consumes the most chakra, withdrawal after that doesn’t consume chakra besides its constant usage cost. The sword acts as a basic sword for the first month of ownership and only resonates a weaker light that has no effect besides siphoning the users chakra.

Note: The Swords abilities only works after the first month of ownership
Note: The Sword can only be used correctly by those who have mastery of genjutsu
Note: The Swords large chakra cost happens only once the sword is withdrawn for the first time and doesn’t occur again for the duration of the battle.
Note: The sword is indestructible.
Note: The user of The Sword cannot be affected by the blades illusion if he or she has mastered genjutsu .
Note: The blades constant chakra consumption in relation to experience with the sword: ( 60 per turn if the user has had The Sword for 2 months,40 per turn if the user has had The Sword for 3 months, 30 per turn if the user has had The Sword for 4 months, 25 per turn if the user has had The Sword for 5 months and 20 per turn if the user has had The Sword for 5 months or longer.)
Note: The user has no control over the chakra siphoning rate when wielding the blade
Note: Only the blade illuminates not the hilt of the sword
Note: This sword can only be used by Ndlovu
Note: The sword looks like this

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(Hiru Biru: Kougen no Sange ) - Leech Style: Plateau of Penitence
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will form three hand seals then slam their hand on the ground summoning a large amount of small nin-leeches underground. The leeches stay a few centimetres below the surface underneath the opponent, whilst there they will create a large closely knit and filled circular formation that spans over an eight meter radius beneath the opponent with the opponent being at its epicentre. The leeches will stay centimetres underneath the opponent’s feet. The leeches will secrete their chakra, allowing it to flow onto each other creating constructive and destructive chakra interference with one another. The leeches formed chakra plate will be low enough to be undetected by the naked eye, but not too low preventing the opponent from performing jutsu’s that requires the ground as its medium. The releasing/secretion of their chakra interrupts/distorts; the chakra shape and manipulation required to form ground catalytic jutsus. (All nin-leeches have sensory abilities) Their sensory abilities allow the leeches to hone onto the opponent chakra allowing them to swiftly follow his/her movements while leaving no physical representation of their presence at all.

Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ndlovu
Note: The user must have signed the Leech contract
Note: Cannot use S – Rank and above leech jutsus for the next two turns
Note: This jutsu lasts 5 turns
Note: Dōjutsu users can see the leeches chakra patterns
Note: This jutsu can be turned into Leech underground with a handseal but the cost for leech underground is reduced by 20 because the leeches are already summoned, it also costs a move to do the conversion.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice in a battle

Reference for leech underground: (Hiru: Hiru Chika)-Leech Style: Leech Underground

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons 50-75 normal adult rl size leeches underground. The leeches are underground undetected except doujutsus and sensors. The leeches uses their heat and chakra sensing to find the opponent. The leeches pop up and attaches themselves to the opponent's legs. They suck on the opponent's chakra.
-Must have signed the Ninja Leech contract
-Leeches suck -15 from the opponent's chakra per turn
-Only used four times per battle

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