[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Kamishiro]

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[Genjutsu: Tetsugaku Itonami] - Illusionary Arts: The Philosophy of Life
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Genjutsu: Tetsugaku Itonami is a very unique Genjutsu technique amongest all the genjutsu techniques. The technique resides in to two parts. The first part which is the literally part and the second part which is the illusionary part. In the process of performing the technique, the user starts off by talking about philosophy in order to make his opponent ready for the technique. After finishing the user's philosophic speech making his opponent ready to be inserted into the illusion, the user focuses his chakra into the opponent's nervous system in his mind making his philosophic spheech turns into lots and lots of doubts which would be an aftereffect of the speech. Some are why is he doing this? Why is he even fighting and what is valuable about this life? And some are why is he even in this life? Why is he fighting in this life? And why would he try to waste another life in this world? The doubts that is to insert into the opponent's mind all depends on the user's words as each word would insert a different doubt into the opponent's mind. With all of this doubts within the opponent's head, the opponent's mind wouldn't be able to take it and therefore would stop working after three turns of being fallen into this technique which would cause the opponent to faint unless he somehow releases himself out of it.

Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro
Note: After being trapped within the technique for one turn, the opponent would have a headache that would bother him a lot and after being trapped within the technique for two turns the opponent would have a major headache which would force him to perform nothing more than two techniques a turn
Note: Cannot perform any Genjutsu technique higher than A-rank while being active
Note: Lasts 3 turns after which the opponent would faint unless de-activated by the user or escaping from by the opponent

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 Declined  DNR. This is not an illusion. You cannot control your opponents mind with normal Genjutsu. You set upon his senses an illusion to which he is free to react in aany way. You cannot control how he reacts. Where one person might be affected by this "philosophical" speech, another might even laugh it and ridicule it.

[Genjutsu: Tamaranai Dan'atsu] - Illusionary Arts: Unbearable Pressure
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: While performing a technique that requires so much focus and would put pressure on the person such as Raikiri, Chidori, any variation of Rasengan or any other technique that would put pressure on the opponent, the user puts his chakra into the opponent's nervous system in the opponent's mind putting the opponent trapped in an illusion. This illusion is different than most of the other illusions, it won't cause the opponent to see something happening and in the reality it isn't or any sort of that. This illusion will cause the opponent to feel pain in the organ he uses the technique through ( the hand in Rasengan and Raikiri and Chidori's case). This pain isn't realistic though, the illusion the user casts would causes the opponent to believe that the cause of this pain is that they misused the technique or did something wrong which caused them not to be able to control the technique completely and therefore the pressure the technique causes effected their organ. This pain causes the user not to be able to use this hand (incase it is a technique that uses the hand as host for handseals or throwing objects or doing any techniques through the center of their organ (the palm in the hand's case) as long as the technique is active.

Note: No other genjutsu technique while this technique is active on the opponent
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro

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 Declined  The idea is cool and it hasn't been done before but the whole "pressure" reference, doesn't make a single shred of sense.

[Genjutsu: Chuumitsu Kiri] - Illusionary Arts: Thick Mist
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Meanwhile the user in an area that possesses a mist or some sort of a water vapor (such as Kirigakure) or after creating a mist using "(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu" (made by the opponent or the user) The user uses that to his side and casts a genjutsu on the opponent(s) causing them to feel that the mist is so thick that they cannot breathe efficiently as they used to breathe, not only that but they feel that due to the fact that they cannot breathe as efficient as they used to their pressure gets lowered causing them to have a headache alongside with sweating heavily due to their pressure being lowered. This however would just affect the opponent with his speed as long as his eye sight in case that he doesn't have any Dojutsu that would allow him to see through the mist (such as Byakugan). This however doesn't mean that they won't see well, they will just see things blured in front of their eye as long as having put so much attention in order to see correctly in the mist (not blured).

Note: Effects of the technique remains active as long as the jutsu active
Note: Remains as long as the mist exists
Note: The user speed will be divided by two (speed chart wise)
Note: Cannot use any genjutsu higher than C-rank as long as the jutsu is active
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle

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 Declined  DNR. Done before.

 

[Vayne]

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(Sword Arts/Lightning: Solar Drive) - Kenjutsu/Raiton: Taiyou Zenshin*
Type: Offensive
Rank: B*
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A simple technique in which the user focuses lightning chakra into his sword causing it glow, thus producing a blinding light, as the opponent is blinded the user strikes down the opponent with a strong sword slash.
-Usable 4 times.
-User is also blinded from the light.
-The blinding effect is similar to that of*(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar.

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 Declined  DNR. Already exists.

(Water Release: Calling of Demons) - Suiton: Tenshoku Aki*
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S*
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique requires the user to be in direct contact with a surface, once that contact has been established the technique begins; the user must apply chakra to his feet in order to stick to the ground, then he/she will go through a series of 18 hand seals, as the final hand seal(tiger) is performed, water would begin to rise from the ground, this happens due to the user spreading their chakra into the earth and raising the water from the earth to the surface.
-The amount of water summoned is 8 meters maximum, the water would gush upwards, but since the user has applied chakra to his feet and has stuck to the ground, he will not be sent 'flying' with the water into the sky, this does not mean that the user won't drown of he doesn't get out in a logical time.
-Ussr will sustain damage to himself(30) if the amount of water summoned exceeds his height, this is due to the water gushing at a fast rate.
-If used on a barren land(Suna/Iwa) then only 5 meters maximum of water can be summoned.
-The water summoned would be imbedded with the user chakra, the chakra will remain present for 2 turns, this also means that Sensors/Sharingan/Byakugan/etc would have more difficulty in finding the user if he is in the wate.
-Usable 2 times.
-2 turn interval must separate the usage.
-Must have water training complete and be of Kage rank(chakra control better, concentration better, etc) to use.

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 Declined  This doesn't make sense and you already have tons of ways to do what you want with this. But honestly, it doesn't make sense.

 

[-Albel-]

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(Katon: Katon Rasen Kiri) Fire Release: Fire Spiral Drill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will begin by jumping into the air while channeling his katon chakra into both of his feet causing flames to appear around them, while also spinning around at great speeds at the same time. As the user spins around in the air the wind from the spinning and the spinning motion itself causes the flames around the user's feet to not only grow in size, but also spin around the user causing it to take on the form of a fiery drill. The fiery drill surrounds half of the user's body, where the tip of the fiery drill starts at the feet and ends at the user's mid-section. Once the flaming drill has been formed, the user will then come crashing down on top of his enemy. The force of the impact when hit will cause the opponent to come crashing down onto the ground while the flames themselves will severely burn the opponent to where they will suffer from 3rd degree burns all over their body.
~Note: Can only be taught by Albel Nox
~Note: Can only be used twice.
~Note: Must wait two turns before using again.
~Note: No fire jutsus can be used in the following turn.

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 Declined  Similar to existing techniques.

(Katon: Ittō Kasō) Fire release: Single Blade Cremation
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(+40 to user)
Description:Ittō Kasō is a forbidden offensive technique where the practitioner can only activate the jutsu by using either of his arms as a catalyst. The user will begin by performing two hand-seals where he will then start channeling 60 percent of his katon chakra into either his left or right arm and begin compressing it. As the user compresses it he will grab a hold of his opponent with the arm that is being used as the catalyst, and as he grabs his enemy, cracks will start forming on the arm releasing a bright, red, glowing light. The moment the arm starts to crack the user will release the compressed fire chakra in the arm out onto the opponent where it will rise up as a large pillar of fire in the shape of the tip of a blade that incinerates the enemy instantly. Since the user is grabbing hold of his opponent when the blast is released, his own arm will be incinerated in the process along with him being blown backwards from the force of the jutsu.

Restrictions:
- Due to using so much chakra to perform this jutsu, the user will be extremely exhausted afterwards.
- No fire jutsus are to be used in the same turn as this.
- The user will lose his ability to use fire jutsus for the rest of the battle.
- Can only be used once.
- The user will lose the arm that is being used as the catalyst along with suffering from minor burns over his body from the heat of the blast.

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 Declined  DNR. This was done before.

(Katon: Infernal Kangoku) Fire Style: Infernal Prison
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make Ox > Tiger hand-seals and begin channeling his fire chakra through out his body where he will then release it into the ground beneath the target. A circular pyroglyphic symbol will appear on the ground below the opponent, where four large pillars of fire will rise up from four smaller circles located on the pyroglyph. Each fire pillar will rise up at an angle and connect together above the target forming a fiery pyramid that traps them inside. Upon being trapped inside, the heat from the pillars will begin burning the opponents skin.
Note: Can only be taught by Albel Nox.
Note: Can be used twice.
Note: The fire prison lasts for two turns.
Note: Must wait one turn after the pillar has ended before using again.
Note: Can not use any fire jutsus above A rank while this jutsu is active.

Watch 2:32-2:36 to see what it looks like.


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 Approved 

 

[Shinta]

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(Doton: Yottsu chō shizen ken no jutsu) Earth Release: Four Supernatural Fists Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Charging their Doton chakra into their back, the user will use there chakra to 'grow' two extra arms from their shoulder blades. These arms are slightly longer than the users original arms in such a way that all four wrists are in line when holding there arms out in front of them. These arms can be used in a multitude of ways as they are controlled by the user as if they were their normal arms, they also become incorporated into the users chakra network, using them to support Kenjutsu, Taijutsu and even Ninjutsu. These arms can be used to perform hand seals for elemental jutsu as well. These arms give; a +10 damage boost to all kenjutsu attacks if they are used to support the hands in the swing or action with the sword; they also give a +10 damage boost to all taijutsu punches by adding an extra fist to each hit; and finally these arms can create rasengan and remove the need for shadow clones when using (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Spiralling Sphere by using the arms to add the necessary rotation to the rasengan.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can only be used four times,
- The arms remain for three turns or until the user cancels the jutsu,
- As the earth chakra is only requires to initially create the arms, incorporating them temporarily into the users chakra network, the user is able to perform all jutsu as per normal with the exceptions of full body lightning jutsu.

X-Approved-X Well done. Though since you didn't stated anything regarding hand seals, do not use it in that manner either.

Made it Earth based, re-worded to reflect this and added a restriction. Also made it A-rank.

Approved parent tech above.

(Doton: Roku chō shizen ken no jutsu) Earth Release: Six Supernatural Fists Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Charging their Doton chakra into their back and armpits, the user will use there chakra to 'grow' four extra arms from their shoulder blades and from their sides just under their normal arms. The back arms are slightly longer than the users original arms in such a way that the users normal wrists are in line with the back arms wrists when holding them out in front of them. The arms grown from the side of the body, are the same length as the users normal arms. These arms can be used in a multitude of ways as they are controlled by the user as if they were their normal arms, they also become incorporated into the users chakra network, using them to support Kenjutsu, Taijutsu and even Ninjutsu. These arms can be used to perform hand seals for other jutsu in the event the normal arms become occupied. These arms give; a +20 damage boost to all kenjutsu attacks if they are used to support the hands in the swing or action with the sword; they also give a +30 damage boost to all taijutsu punches by adding two extra fists to each hit; and finally these arms can create rasengan and remove the need for shadow clones when using (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Spiralling Sphere by using the arms to add the necessary rotation to the rasengan.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can only be used twice,
- The arms remain for two turns or until the user cancels the jutsu and they cannot be formed on successive turns,
- As the earth chakra is only requires to initially create the arms, incorporating them temporarily into the users chakra network, the user is able to perform all jutsu as per normal with the exceptions of full body lightning jutsu,
- The parent jutsu (Doton: Yottsu Chō Shizen Ken no Jutsu) cannot be used on the following turn this jutsu is deactivated/cancelled nor can this jutsu be activated while the parent jutsu is in effect,
- No S-rank lightning jutsu can be used while these arms are active.

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 Declined  DNR.

Tsuyo-sa no Yama - (Mountain of Strength)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Tsuyo-sa no Yama is a specially designed ring designed to serve as an extra reservoir of chakra, stored in the perfect Emerals embedded within the chakra resonating metal. Etched onto the surface of the Emerald, is the Symbol of the Hidden Rain Village (||||), which serves as the seal to both release and store chakra within the ring. The ring can hold 200 points of chakra for the explicit use of replenishing the bearers chakra, by releasing 40 points per turn into the users chakra network once per turn. Besides this 200 points of chakra, the ring has a greater reserve of chakra that can be used to boost the rank of any jutsu (with the exceptions of Taijutsu, Genjutsu and non chakra based Kenjutsu) up to B-rank by one rank, three times per match which is only applicable to one jutsu every second turn. If the user wishes, this same rank-boosting reservoir can boost the range of a short-range genjutsu up to Mid-range three times per match, applicable only to one jutsu every second turn. The rank boosting and Genjutsu boosting abilities can only be done three times in total, meaning that the bearer can boost a ninjutsu rank twice and boost the range of a genjutsu once, making sure the cool-down periods are still adhered to. The chakra reservoir of the ring, is completely seperated from the user chakra network with the exception of a brief moment when the bearer taps into the reserve, meaning that the rings chakra can break the user out of genjutsu up to A-rank, if they are in a proper mental state to focus on the release of the rings chakra. As an additional ability the bearer can store up to 20 points of chakra per turn into the ring, to replenish the 200 point reservoir which can then again be accessed again after the minimal 40 points has been stored.
Notes:
- Only Shinta and those allowed to by him, can wield this ring.
- Must know Fuuinjutsu to access the chakra reserves and store more chakra within.
- No more than 200 points of chakra can be stored in the ring.
- The reservoir can be accessed so long as chakra is present within, however the boosting abilities can only be used three times a match.
- Only the bearers chakra can be infused into the ring.

I have no CW of my own to drop.

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

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(Kuchiyose: Denkou Kouhi ) ~ Summoning: Lightning Queen
Type: Summoning
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the fierce Leopon known as the Lightning Queen, Hime. Hime is the most beautiful of all the Leopons. She is the only female part of the TriGuardian (Consists of 3 of the toughest Leopons) which serve to protect the King. Hime's mane is made out of strong hair with a constant white-blue glow. The glowing hair signify her life force and determination. Hime although strong physically, her true strength is in her speed and Lightning techniques. Hime's speed surpasses all the Leopons and can run at extremely high speeds. Hime has some Leopon Art techniques that is unique to Hime herself. Hime is nearly the size of a lion, with a thin and muscular body, but her legs are shorter, like a leopard's.

~Can only be summoned by those signed to the contract and with my permission
~Lasts 3 turns
~Can be summoned once, and lasts 4 turns in battle
~Can do up to B-rank cannon Lightning techniques

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±± Declined ±± Why is this long range? Also, "lasts 3 turns" and then "can be summoned once and lasts 4 turns in battle"? review the techniques you submit.

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(Kuchiyose: Denkou Kouhi ) ~ Summoning: Lightning Queen
Type: Summoning
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the fierce Leopon known as the Lightning Queen, Hime. Hime is the most beautiful of all the Leopons. She is the only female part of the TriGuardian (Consists of 3 of the toughest Leopons) which serve to protect the King. Hime's mane is made out of strong hair with a constant white-blue glow. The glowing hair signify her life force and determination. Hime although strong physically, her true strength is in her speed and Lightning techniques. Hime's speed surpasses all the Leopons and can run at high speeds. Hime has some Leopon Art techniques that is unique to Hime herself. Hime is nearly the size of a lion, with a thin and muscular body, but her legs are shorter, like a leopard's.

~Can only be summoned by those signed to the contract and with my permission
~Lasts 4 turns
~Can be summoned once
~Can do up to B-rank cannon Lightning techniques

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 Approved 

 

[Necron]

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( Magen: Raite ) - Demonic Illusion: Lighting Hand
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary, offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (due to stress on mind)
Description: The user makes one handseal, and fades away in the background leaving a small after image for the blink of an eye. This will make the opponent think the user moved with high speed. Then the opponent will see a hand emerging from their heart. On the hand, there are random sparks appearing, as if it was coated with lighting. The pain and shock will leave the opponent fall to the ground, and counter attack behind, thinking the opponent is still there. Then, the user will be free to strike the opponent's back.
-Can only be used once every 4 turns.
-Cannot use any high level genjutsu (A-rank or above) for the next turn
-Must have mastered genjutsu, and be a specialist in it

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 Declined  Last restriction is a filler. Remove it. Also, you need to explain in detail what you're doing in reality while this illusion is under effect and also what is happening to the target in reality while its under its effects. Also, reword the description slightly. Look at the part I colored. Needs rewording to make sense.

(Jigoku e no tabi) - A trip to hell
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Range: mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a double layered genjutsu, consisted of 2 A-rank genjutsu. At first, the opponent will suddenly realize his whole body is warped by explosive tags, which make him unable to move. The user will seemingly perform a single hand seal, and the tags will explode, making the opponent feel a lot of pain. This will wake them up from the first layer of the genjutsu, putting them in the second layer, were they will see that they just died, and went to hell. Depending on the sin they are more practicing in life, they will see a different version of hell, with a different punishment. For example, for wrath, they will be tortured by thousands of clones of the most annoying persons they knew in life, for envy, they will be bound in a cell, and see everything they desired far far away, etc... The mental pain from this genjutsu will slowly drive them mad after one turn, and if they ever go back in reality, they will need one turn to go back to their senses, being unable to move or use jutsu in the meanwhile. In reality, after the explosion, they fall down with their eyes open, and drooling is falling from their mouth.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Cannot use genjutsu above C-rank for 3 turns after using this due to the complexity of the genjutsu.
-Must be Kage rank or above
-Must have mastered genjutsu

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 Declined  DNR.

(Seishin no tsuihō) - Banishing of the spirit
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: Used by the Kurama clan to suppress their second personality, just before they become mad. This will however leave them weak for one turn, and unable to use genjutsu above C-rank or Ninjutsu above B-rank. They will restrict the chakra of the other personality to a single limb, and will loose control of it for 3 turns. All ties with the other personality will be cut off during those 3 turns. Can also be used on other bios that have a second personality or foreign chakra, such as jinchuriki or members of the Necura clan, to cut off their ties to that personality (but must be used on close range), and stoping their invulnerability to genjutsu.
-Can only be used once every 10 turns
-User will be weakened by using this, even if it is on an other party.

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[Method]

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Raiton: Eraba reta Geitsu|Lightning Release: Chosen Gates
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user performs 4 handseals and places both hands against the ground, as he does this 4 gates made of lightning originally emerge from the ground 2 of which stand on both sides of the opponent & 1 behind, they are all mid range from the opponent(7 meters), the 4th is formed within a 4 meter radius of the user(The user's gate). When all 4 gates are fully formed they all connect by a chakra wire which travels underground & meets in the middle of the gates location. The user is able to use the gate in each type of way:
Offensive - Each gate being made up of Lightning chakra have the ability to shoot out as large claws & strike the opponent into the ground/Mid Air, severely burning on contacting & paralyzing them, this can be done simultaneously & is treated as a S Rank or separately & each claw is treated as a B Rank they move at a fast pace but can easily be followed without the use of a Doujutsu.
Defensive - The user can create the gates anywhere within a radius of 5 meters & in any formation, each gate is treated as a B Rank gate & can be used to a similar effect of the Rashamon gates & if used in a row the blockade is treated as an S Rank.
Supplementary - The user is able to target Lightning jutsu(A Rank & below) toward the gate placed within their radius & has it travel through the gate & along the chakra wire & has a choice of which gate the jutsu emerges from.
In any of these forms the gates separately are treated as B Rank Gates & when used together are treated as an S Rank, they each are 3 meters high & 2 meters in width. If 1 gate has been dispelled the rest are still functional, the user is able to change the location of any gate by having it draw back into the ground & emerge at the desired area. The gates do block off either person's vision when placed between the two opponents.
- Only Lightning chakra can travel through the gates/wires.
- The user's gate will dispel if they step out of the 4 meter radius
- Lasts 4 turns
- Can only be used twice with a gap of 3 turns after the first use
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-Declined- Too OP, it's many techniques crammed in one.

Raiton: Eraba reta Geitsu|Lightning Release: Chosen Gates
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:-
Description: The user performs 4 handseals and places both hands against the ground, as he does this 4 gates made of lightning originally emerge from the ground 2 of which stand on both sides of the opponent & 1 behind, they are all mid range from the opponent(7 meters), the 4th is formed within a 4 meter radius of the user(The user's gate). When all 4 gates are fully formed they all connect by a chakra wire which travels underground & meets in the middle of the gates location. The user is able to target Lightning jutsu(A Rank & below) toward the gate placed within their radius & has it travel through the gate & along the chakra wire & has a choice of which gate the jutsu emerges from.
The gates separately are treated as B Rank Gates, they are each 3 meters high & 2 meters in width. If 1 gate has been dispelled the rest are still functional, the user is able to change the location of any gate by having it draw back into the ground & emerge at the desired area. The gates do block off either person's vision when placed between the two opponents.
- Only Lightning chakra can travel through the gates/wires.
- The user's gate will dispel if they step out of the 4 meter radius
- Lasts 4 turns
- Can only be used twice with a gap of 3 turns after the first use
(Kept to Supplementary usage only)

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 Declined  DNR.

Taion | Body Heat
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user builds up & stores a large amount of Katon chakra within themself, having the chakra run throughout the body just under the skin. The user's skin begins heating up letting off a slight glow as a wave of heat is shot out around the user. On contact with the user, the opponent burns the affected limb & is left with black scorched marks rendering the area momentarily useless, the user can grab onto an object & if grips the target for afew seconds, is able to burn into it. Due to storing the chakra rather than conitnuously feeding it, it takes 1 turn to activate & during that turn only Fire jutsu are usable, Once it activates the user is still able to use other elements but only B rank or below to not disturb the stored chakra.
- One turn to activate, only allowing fire jutsu during this period
- Only usable once
- Lasts 3 turns
- B Rank or below while active

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 Declined  DNR. Collides with existing customs.

Shikotsumyaku:Hashōfū |Dead Bone Pulse: Lockjaw
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: When biting into an opponent or dense object, the user, gaining a firm grip is able to lock their jaws into the target due to a controlled spasm performed by the user. Due to Kaguya bones being stronger than normal, the target is unable to release themselves from the grip unless the user chooses too.

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[Gaara]

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Binshou Suna Wana | Quick Sand Trap
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description: Gaara begins by sending sand into the ground. Then this sand churns the earth grinding the particles and forming a sand trap. As soon as the enemy steps onto the ground area where the sand has been churned and setup. The top layer of earth crumbles and reveals a quicksand pit capable of sucking a pretty decent size summon into it. The sandpit pulls opponents down much faster than a normal quicksand pit would. This attack can be used in conjunction with sand coffin to crush the enemy once trapped inside. The pit can only be noticed ahead of time by those with a active Dōjutsu.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Cannot be used in the same turn twice.
-Can only be used by Gaara bio.
-Can only be taught by Gaara.


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 Declined  Wrong chakra info. Wrong name.

Suna Ken Dansu | Sand Blade Dance
Type: Offensive/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Gaara utilizing all the sand he is carrying, to form and condense into 100 half mooned blades. Which spin around himself like a tornado, this can be used to defend but is more effective as an attack. The 100 sand blades are each measuring in 1 foot blades and the rotation speed of these blades is measurable to that of the hyuuga clans palm rotation. The large scale of this attack is capable of seriously wounding a large summon such as gamabunta.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be used by a sand bio.
-Can only be taught by Gaara.
-No sand jutsu's in the same turn.

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 Declined  OPed. Wrong name. To large of a scale. Very generically described. Needs definition. Needs restrictions. Don't add filler restrictions. Obviously it needs a sand bio...its a sand technique.

 

[Kuroh]

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(Mugenjin) | Unlimited Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Shishio's sword was created by a master swordsmith named Arai Shakku. Its self-sharpening serrated edge flaked away in a regular pattern as it was used and it had become soaked in the flesh and body fat of the victims he had killed over the years. As a result he is able to execute fire-oriented techniques using the oils as fuel. If shishio strikes someone with the sword, the opponent will get burned and slashed, more than compensating for the weakness of his serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one.

Abilities

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- Ichi no Hiken: Homura Dama (壱の秘剣 焔霊 lit. "First Secret Sword: Burning Soul"): This is the technique Shishio likes the most. Using friction to ignite the human fats that have soaked into his sword over time, this serves to distract the opponent from his swings. The result is being simultaneously burned and slashed, more than compensating for the weakness of his serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one.

- Ni no Hiken: Guren Kaina (弐の秘剣 紅蓮腕 lit. "Second Secret Sword: Crimson Lotus Arm"): Shishio fills his gauntlets with gunpowder, and ignites them with the sparks caused by the Mugenjin (The sword). Thus it results in an explosion. Guren Kaina yields a lot of force and is usually performed while his opponent is at close range, preferably in his grip. It can backfire, however.

- Because of the human oil on the sword, Shishio is able to send chakra into the sword and perform a swing (it can be horizontal or vertical) and release a C-rank flame in the form of a sword from his sword that travels really fast. The flame can travel to mid range and long range.

Restrictions

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- If I release the C-rank flame, I can't use fire jutsu on the same turn.
- Can only be used by a Shishio Makoto bio.
- If I don't have a Shishio Makoto bio, I can't use this wepaon.
- The C-rank flame can only be used two times per battle.

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-Declined- Chakra infusable swords are not allowed, you were doing good though until that part about the explosion and sending chakra into the sword.

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Removed everything about sending chakra into the sword and removed the explosion.

(Mugenjin) | Unlimited Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Shishio's sword was created by a master swordsmith named Arai Shakku. Its self-sharpening serrated edge flaked away in a regular pattern as it was used and it had become soaked in the flesh and body fat of the victims he had killed over the years. As a result he is able to execute fire-oriented techniques using the oils as fuel. If shishio strikes someone with the sword, the opponent will get burned and slashed, more than compensating for the weakness of his serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one. Using friction to ignite the human fats that have soaked into his sword over time, this serves to distract the opponent from his swings. The result is being simultaneously burned and slashed, more than compensating for the weakness of his serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one.

Restrictions
- Can only be used by a Shishio Makoto bio.
- Can only be used by Kuroh.

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 Declined  Oils? what oils? Body fat doesn't "ignite" or behave as you describe unless tremendous temperature is applied. The sword is basically a hot sword. A sword infused with Fire chakra. And that has been done many times before. Its nothing new. DNR.

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(Ninjutsu: Subarashī Tasuke Te) Ninja arts: Great helping hand
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user sends a lot of chakra to one of his hands and then performs four hand seals. This allows the user to manifest a wispy, lavender gel-like hand, made of chakra which the user can use to take hold of any part of the opponents body and various objects, regardless of whether it has a solid form or not. He can generate such an ability from the palm of his hand, very matching of its physical form. Using this ability's unique pull factor, the user can literally "grab" the matter within the area, "pulling" onto it. For example, if the opponent has summoned a flying animal the user can use this jutsu to grab the animal by the legs, or whatever area they wish thus pulling the user to the summon. The user could also grab the object and throw it towards the opponent. Also this jutsu is strong enough to break earth techniques such as walls etc. The user can use this to escape any attack as long there is something in the area which the user could grab.
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Can only be used two times per battle.
Can only be thought by Kuroh.
Cannot use Ninjutsu techniques on the same turn as well as the next turn.

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 Declined  Blue parts need to removed or explained. How does this interact with intangible things? Without physical form? And why or how does this break walls? Also, how can you lift things heavier than you further from you? how do you anchor yourself? does weight not matter for this? Long range is too much btw.

(Katon: Te No Kasai) - Fire style: Hand of fire
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Mid- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs three hand seals and channels chakra into his hands. This allows to user to manifest a Fire hand which he/she releases towards the opponent. The flame shaped as a hand travels towards the opponent with great speed, once the hand makes contact with the opponent it grabs the opponent and it burns him to death. One can also make the flame explode on impact.
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Can only be used three times per battle
Can only be thought by Kuroh

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 Declined  Is this simply a fire impact/projectile shaped as a hand? or does it behave like the other technique you submitted above? grab? does it have physical tangibility?

 

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(Doton: Bai Bai) - Earth Release: Bye Bye
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user channels his earth chakra into ground beneath his opponent. Once ready the user slams his foot onto the ground causing the area around the opponent to drop at a fast rate. The area that drops is roughly two meters wide allowing little movement to form. Once the opponent is dropped. The user performs the Boar handseal causing several spikes of earth to erupt from the side of walls skewering the opponent in multiple places.

Note

Can only be taught by Hiruzen1



Doton: Marui Marui) - Earth Release: Round and Round
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user channels his earth chakra into the ground beneath the opponent, allowing him to manipulate the earth that they are standing on to spin at a fast rate causing dizziness if they don't jump off the spinning earth. The main purpose of this jutsu is to simply put the opponent off.

Note

Can only be taught by Hiruzen1

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[Erzo]

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( Tenkū No Uragiri ) - Heavenly Betrayal
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Tenkū No Uragiri is a simple combination of genjutsu and Kenjutsu which works in a similar way to '( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow', in the way that the sword is used as a means of activating the genjutsu before the actual strike. This jutsu requires the user to perform a gesture with his/her sword/axe/any other weapon in hand whilst releasing their chakra into the opponents brain, catching them in this genjutsu in which the opponent would suddenly feel a strong gust of wind blow from users side as the user bursts off in an arc to his left (opponents right) at an almost unnoticeable speed, aiming to attack the opponents right side by performing a simple thrust. The initial 'gust' of wind the opponent thinks they feel from the genjutsu causes them to feel a loss of balance, not enough to make them fall but lose their footing as they're feeling the pressure of the wind against their chest. In reality, the moment the genjutsu is initiated, the user would channel chakra into his/her Katana and perform a series of strikes in the locations they desire. The weapon used to initiate this genjutsu can be a custom weapon or an ordinary sword.
~ Can only be used 3 times
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ No Genjutsu or Kenjutsu higher than S-rank next turn.

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 Declined  Oped. And what gesture specifically? under defined and highly exploitable once you really analyze what this can do.

( Tenkū No Uragiri ) - Heavenly Betrayal
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Tenkū No Uragiri is a simple combination of genjutsu and Kenjutsu which works in a similar way to '( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow', in the way that the sword is used as a means of activating the genjutsu before the actual strike. This jutsu requires the user to perform a gesture which involves positioning the Katana or whatever weapon is being used diagonally, with his/her sword/axe/any other weapon in hand whilst releasing their chakra into the opponents brain, catching them in this genjutsu in which the opponent would suddenly feel a strong gust of wind blow from users side as the user bursts off in an arc to his left (opponents right) at an almost unnoticeable speed, aiming to attack the opponents right side by performing a simple thrust. The initial 'gust' of wind the opponent thinks they feel from the genjutsu causes them to feel a loss of balance, not enough to make them fall but lose their footing as they're feeling the pressure of the wind against their chest. In reality, the moment the genjutsu is initiated, the user would channel chakra into his/her Katana and perform a series of strikes in the locations they desire. The weapon used to initiate this genjutsu can be a custom weapon or an ordinary sword.
~ Can only be used 3 times
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ No Genjutsu or Kenjutsu higher than S-rank next turn.

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 Declined  And how exactly does an enemy without sensing or doujutsu deal with this without having his head chopped off in one clear swipe?

Summoning Animal: Slow Loris
Scroll Owner: Erzo
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: King Loris
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

Description and Background:
Slow Lorises have a round head, narrow snout, large eyes, and a variety of distinctive colouration patterns that are species-dependent. Their arms and legs are nearly equal in length, and their trunk is long, allowing them to twist and extend to nearby branches. The hands and feet of slow lorises have several adaptations that give them a pincer-like grip and enable them to grasp branches for long periods of time. Slow lorises have a toxic bite, a trait rare among mammals and unique to lorisid primates. The toxin is produced by licking a gland on their arm, and the secretion mixes with its saliva to activate it. Their toxic bite is a deterrent to predators, and the toxin is also applied to the fur during grooming as a form of protection for their infants. The toxin is able to knock an opponent/summon unconscious if directly bitten by a Slow Loris.

Moreover, their large eyes are able to induce a fear based attack extremely similar to the D-ranked Temporary Body Paralysis Technique, however, unlike the technique, it's able to temporarily bind both humans and animals. The binding can be broken by both a surge of chakra greater than B-rank, or pain enough to be able to release someone from a B-ranked genjutsu, however, boss summons are immune to this specific attack.

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 Pending  Why are you resubmitting it here? taking ownership of a contract isn't done in this thread. Also, the things you wish to add are an absolute no. Summons can have generic traits yes, but nothing like a no move cost ability...that all have... No. No on such abilities. If you want them you need to submit them as techniques.

( Suiton: Kurenjingu) - Water Style: Cleansing
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The human body has an extremely high percentage of water, Cleansing is a jutsu which uses that point to its advantage when the body becomes poisoned or irregular due to a technique which damages internally rather than externally. The user must first realize his/her body is contaminated, they would then manipulate the chakra within their body and cause it to forcefully circulate through their every pore, taking along with it anything impure and unnatural, returning the body to its natural/earlier state. Moreover, this jutsu can also affect the user's pH levels, should they be altered, using the chakra infused water to return the persons pH back to 7 (which is pure water), regardless of the state at which it was before.
~ Can only be used 3 times
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ No water jutsus higher than S-rank next turn
~ After using once, must wait a turn before using this jutsu again

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 Declined  DNR. This is a medical skill.

 

[Baldy]

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Batoidea Jutsu: Kakuu Heki | Batoidea Arts: Electrostatic Surge
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user draws blood and then continues to slides the blood across their summoning tattoo so as to summon eight identical rays around the opponent in a octogonal formation. These Rays specialize in an immensely potent and powerful variation of Active Electrolocation, which produces a field that directly interferes with the opponents nerves. Shinobi two ranks below the user will find performing even hand seals to be an immensely difficult task, while those of equal or higher rank will suffer from a state of slowed movement, reduced reaction times and sluggish bodily movements. On being summoned, these rays continually dart and whiz around the opponent, following them if need be. The rapid sometimes orbital movements of the rays causes for countless minute non-damaging sparks of electricity to materialize over the opponent's body, giving them a strong electrostatic charge which is oppositely charged to that of ordinary lightning. As a result, whilst the opponent is surrounded by the rays, raiton jutsu become incredibly difficult to dodge and Raiton jutsu used by the opponent often suffer from the habit of discharging back into the opponents body, shocking them, or perhaps doing worse depending on the nature and power of the technique. Due their speed, these rays can be incredibly difficult to escape from. Alternatively, the user can simply summon the Rays so as to ‘sniff’ out and surround the opponent, making them exceptionally useful for finding hidden enemies due their abilities.

Note:
- These Rays disappear when either killed, or three turns pass.
- Each time a ray is killed the technique becomes weaker. Once at least five of these Rays are killed the technique ends.
- Can only be used twice per battle
- No Ray jutsu can be performed by the user for the rest of the turn.
- A ray can summon these Rays simply through the use of chakra and a high pitched call.
- Must have signed the Ray Contract

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 Declined  Overpowered.

(Futon: Shutsuga awa no hosoku)- Entrapment of the Budding Bubbles
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Through the focus of chakra in a particular area anywhere within range, the user can cause the air currents around that area to start spiraling purposefully, creating ripples and small gusts in the air as they do so, as well as throwing off anything within it’s confinement off balance. The small gusts of air also prevent, per say, escape, as bubbles of air, which appear small, but are really rotating spheres of wind, like Rasengans, emerge from the air currents, multiplying rapidly out of one another. The bubbles join together, to form a more massive confinement, the many spheres of wind enlarging and connecting with many of the bubbles. The bubbles, made of slicing wind, prevent escape from the confinements of the bubbles. The bubbles soon force the opponent through the permeable membrane of all the spheres, through the rapidity of the currents produced by the rotation of the spheres, drawing them in, trapped in seemingly an overlarge Rasengan. The air currents inside swirl extremely quickly, causing slicing cuts to the opponent without hesitation, decapitating them in time. The bubbles multiply extremely fast, and it takes mere seconds for the opponent to be killed once this technique is performed. Due to the rotational property of the spheres, it can generate currents strong enough to draw in substances such as water, mud, or fire, to be mixed and infused with the spheres of wind themselves, though it can only draw in substances as strong or weaker than itself, and things like lightning and air currents are dissipated, acting against the spheres of wind. In other words, water, mud, or fire can enhance the strength of the wind while others, like lightning and air currents act against the spheres of wind.

Notes:
~Can only be used 2x per battle
~No Wind techniques above S-rank for the rest of and the next turn

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 Declined  Oped. Undefined. Similar in some aspects to individual techniques but all mashed in together. Wrong name. DNR.

(Shikotsumyaku: Ōkī karamatsu no dansu)- Dance of the Greater Larch
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Simply put, an advanced and greater version of the original Dance of the Larch. To initiate this, the user simply inputs more chakra into the manipulation of his bones. Through sending a surge of chakra throughout his body, the user would manipulate the bones in his body, to, at a greater speed than the original version, protrude out, and emerge from the user’s body, in any way the user wishes to. Due to it being an advanced version, the bones can also be shaped differently, from small blunt knobs to sharp piercing knives. Particularly useful in close combat, the bones can be used to impale and trap close combat attacks, and ultimately harm the opponent. With this enhanced version though, the bones are detachable from the body if the user chooses to use it as such. The user can shoot the bones out from his body, wherever it protrudes, and the bones are able to impale and kill if it connects. The bones can reach up to Mid-range. This advanced version provides a greater defence and offence for the bones.

Notes:
~ Can only be used 3x per battle

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 Declined  Why is this S-Rank and why is this written "through sending a surge of chakra throughout his body"? Doesn't make sense since you're manipulating your bones... Not your whole body nor does this qualify as a burst technique. Its also under restricted for an S-Rank and lacks definition on key aspects such as size of the "bones protruding", how long they last, etc. There is a reason as to why the original technique isn't in such a great scale: making it bigger than what it originally is = you not moving about. The amount of bones and their increased size would prevent you from moving. And if you are simply making this a stronger version than the original one just "because", then its a DNR. Either bring something new to the plate or don't resubmit.

 

[-Cobalt-]

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Change: The Weapon Without a Face | Hensen: Buki Nashide Omote
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Change, The Weapon Without a Face is not a normal weapon. It is a weapon without permanent shape, always warping from form to form. This weapon is made of chakra imbued and chakra sensitive metal which is very easily bent and reformed making it fit for creating things such as a whip for example. The wielder of this tool can make it turn into basically anything they wish just by imagining it. It cannot however copy powerful weapons and their abilities (7SM both cannon and custom) or other custom weapons. It can however copy their looks but never their abilities. The user can even use his own imagination to design a completely new form of weapon (while keeping it realistic, no guns, technology etc.). This makes this weapon extremely versatile. Even though it is a light metal it is undestructible by any kind of matter, energy, force or chakra. The weapon has three main "stances" so to say.

Stance of the Tiger | Sutansu No Tora: The stance of the tiger is the weapons offensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create offensive weapons and these include but are not limited to swords, axes, claws, hammers, spears etc. The user can basically create any meelee weapon he desires (no projectiles).

Stance of the Turtle | Sutansu No Kame: The stance of the turtle is the weapons defensive stance, and activating it allows the user to create defensive tools and these include and are limited to shields and armors. The shields and armors can block only one S-rank jutsu of any kind (even genjutsu) once per battle. After using this defense, the user can use only A-rank and below techniques for the following two turns and is limited to only two techniques per move.

Stance of the Ape | Sutansu No Saru: The stance of the monkey is the weapons supplementary stance, and activating it allows the user to create supplementary tools and these include and are not limited to grappling hooks, foot spikes. Using the stance of the ape the user can create everyday items and use them however he seems fit.

Restrictions and abilities:
-Each ability of the weapon counts towards the users 3 moves per turn.
-Switching between stances counts as a move and only one stance can be active at a time.
-The defensive properties of the Turtle Stance can be used once per battle and the user can use only up to two A-rank and below techniques per move for the following 2 turns. After using the defensive technique, cannot change stances for 2 turns as well.
-Cannot copy abilities of other weapons, only its looks.
-Undestructible and unwieldable by anyone else but -Cobalt-.
-When a stance is activated, changing the form of the weapon does not cost a move but is done through description.
-Upon the start of the battle, "Stance of the Tiger" is activated passively unless stated otherwise.

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 Declined  Nice idea but...how does the weapon present itself in its original, untransformed form? A ring? an orb? a sword? what? Also, defend from genjutsu...how? You do realize you can't actually perceive a genjutsu is coming and thus you are unable to actually use something to defend from it? And you still didn't explain how this is achieved. It can defend from anything S-Rank...how? I mean, what about size? or techniques that happen all around you? or techniques you can't see or perceive? I mean, saying a shield can defend from anything up to S-Rank regardless is not very smart as its an obvious decline. When you claim a defense on a weapon you need to explain how you achieve such defend. is it a seal? a disruptive effect of the weapon? what?

 

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♰ (Akumaitosen)- Devils Threading Wire ♰
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The Devils Threads is a weapon that was made by an old semstress and her husband a black smith, they both worked on the Devils Threads for many years only to have it stolen from them, by -Tauburn-. The Devils Threads are wrapped around the users wrists and fingers under the users gloves or around the gloves, the thread are very flexable and cant be broken from use of any other weapons. The Devils Threads is a shape tranformation weapon, given enough chakra will harden into a solid sheild like shape, or a weapon of any kind, even into indiviual stradess that will bind the opponent. The threads are only able to channel Fire and Lightning chakra thoughout the thread, if any other element is used the threads wont even respond to the users chakra. The threads themselves are made out of a thin chakra absorbing metal, that will give shape to the users will, The threads also have silk braided into the chakra absorbing metal threads, giving the thread a greenish tint from the silk.

C -Rank - 20 chakra/30 damage: Will create shapes out of the threads to make a strong defence/offence againist attacks, while giving the threads shape for a extended amount of time.

B -Rank - 25 chakra/40 damage: The user will channel chakra into the threads and munipulate them into a weapons shape Meaning the weapon will have the same weight of a weapon and the same sharpness of a weapon.

A -Rank - 30 chakra/ N/A damage: The user will release chakra into the threads, then control the threads to wrap around the opponents body restraining him. (Arms, legs, neck, wrists, figers, and ankles.)

S -Rank - 40 chakra/80 damage: The user will channel lighting or fire chakra through out the Devils Threads and use them to attack the enemy. Lightning will hit the opponent and give them a numb feeling for 30 secs, while if the user channels fire chakra throughout the thread the opponent will receive critical burns if hit by the thread.

>- The weapons techniques count towards the jutsu per turn
>- Can only be used by -Tauburn-.
>- Can only be used once per turn.
>- The threads can only be used 3 times for the techniques above A-Rank.
>- The threads are always connected to the user and will not be usable if said connection is severed.

(Tenrai ryu setsudanki)- Divine Dragon Guillotine
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description: The Dragon Guillotine is a weapon made up of seventy two blades that are located on the users back made of an indestructible metal, the blades are reactant to the users chakra moving at the users will as independent limbs. The seventy two blades appear as wings coming from the users back, made up of more chakra absorbing metals. Each of the blades is attached to one another by a thin chakra absorbing metal wire which pull and push the blades while each of the blades is a separate blade they are all connected by the wire. The Dragon Guillotine is able to act separate and in unison with one another, able to be used while they are loose able to be used as a whip like weapon or a single blade, even able to release a small number of the blades from the tips of the wings and they return. The Dragon Guillotine while attached to the users back is able to allow the user to sense the opponents chakra, locating them on the field at all times with great accuracy. The wings can reach to the furthest part of mid range with ease. The wings are also able to release the users elemental affinity from the seventy two blades just by swinging the blades at the opponent.
= Only able to release four total blades from the tips of the wings, per move.
= Having the blades return once released takes 1 post.
= The sensing lasts for four turns once activated, then takes another two turns before it will allow the user to sense again.
= The elemental affinity use can only release a C – S rank jutsu, and is only able to be released via the wings once per turn.

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♰ (Juuji-teiru)- Cross Tail ♰
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description: The Cross Tail can be used both offensively and defensively, takes the form of black fingerless leather gloves with thin razor sharp wire thread connected to free spinning pulleys that are covered by metal plates with openings all over them to allow the use of the wires, which can be used in various ways to attack, defend against, or immobilize opponents. The wires can change into various forms to create a parameter, which can be used to detect enemies who cross through them. They can also be used to wrap around and attack his enemies, or be formed into a melee weapon which the user can use, such as a spear that can be used to impale enemies. The wires can also be wrapped around the users body as armor. The weapons he forms can be disassembled at will, such as stabbing a foe when its in the form of a spear and then disassembling it inside of their bodies to target internal organs, and can be easily tied to other objects, such as knifes, to control their course in flight when thrown, thus taking his enemy by surprise.
= Cross Tail has hundreds of miles of wire.
= Cross Tail is completely indestructible.
= Once per turn the user is able to release Katon or Raiton chakra through the wires giving burns or to paralyze the opponent.
= Wires taking form can only be used 2 times per turn without costing a jutsu once they are used the next start counting as jutsus.

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 Declined  I don't understand this weapon and it has tons of things that I will never approve: hundreds of miles or wire which is indestructible, your hands become indestructible, it somehow grants you detention for whatever reason it may be, these wires can be formed into weapons, again god knows why... And the concept is basically taking the Dark Threads from a Kakuzu bio (the main idea) and making it into a "metal" (I assume its metal...) weapon. DNR.

(Bakuton: Hayaibakudan)- Blast Style: Quick Bomb
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: A blast user will use a Doton jutsu followed by this tech which will channel unfocused doton and some raiton chakra into the earth just used, infusing a bomb within an earth jutsu. The unfocused chakra takes no action until the earth has been meet by an opposing force causing the doton jutsu to explode and draw attention and cause +10 to the Doton used within.
= Usable 5 times per fight.

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 Declined  Soo...Bakuton doesn't work like that... I mean...you explode stuff on contact but only Deidara was shown to be able to do so on command through "timed" explosions. This doesn't make much sense to me in the way its worded. Also, can't your opponent simply defend from the earth before the bomb is placed? what is the bomb made of? the moment you'd infuse earth and transform it into a bakuton technique, the earth technique would end. I mean, can you do 2 techniques before your opponent does one? how? if its +10 to a doton technique then why does it do 30 damage? and why is it short range? how would this work with for example swamp of the underworld? It has tons of holes in the explanation.

 

[Superlative]

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(Katon: Mandoragora) Fire Release: Mandragora –
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: As a more advanced form of the Ash Pile Burning technique, the user will begin by accumulating chakra in their lungs and exhaling an enormous and extremely hot cloud of ash (around 1000°C). The cloud travels both through the air as well as along the ground, and can even travel along water. Additionally, unlike its counterpart, this ash cloud travels with incredible speed (tens of meters per second). As part of it hugs the ground, because of its size and rapid speed, the cloud carries with it large, course boulders and other rock fragments while an extremely hot ash plume lofts above t because of the turbulence between the flow and the overlying air, admixes and heats cold atmospheric air causing expansion and convection. The moving boulders within the smoke cloud serve to destroy trees, buildings and any other infrastructure in its path. Also, the hot gases present and their high speeds make them particularly lethal, as they will incinerate living organisms near instantaneously. When the ash cloud interacts with large amounts of water, it turns into an excessive amount of mud composed of a slurry of ash, rocky debris and scalding hot water. The mud flow is equally as destructive as the ash cloud itself, travelling just as fast as well as leveling anything in its path.

*This technique can only be used twice per battle.
*The user cannot use Katon in the following turn.
*The user must wait three turns in between usages of this technique.

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 Declined  Ridiculously oped. Remove the real temperature, the speed is simply embarrasing. The technique is too exploitable. I was tempted to dNR but lets see what you do...

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(Katon: Mandoragora) Fire Release: Mandragora –
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: As a more advanced form of the Ash Pile Burning technique, the user will begin by performing five handseals and spewing an enormous, dense stream of hot ash, which covers an expansive range as well. The cloud travels both through the air as well as along the ground, and can even travel along the water. As part of it hugs the ground, the cloud carries with it large, course boulders and other rock fragments. All the while a hot ash plume lofts above because of the turbulence between the flow and the overlying air. This ash admixes with and heats cold atmospheric air, causing expansion and convection. As the ash travels, the moving boulders within the cloud will destroy trees, buildings and any other infrastructure in its path while the hot gases present incinerate living organisms near instantaneously. Additionally, this technique can be used in conjunction with suiton jutsu. When the ash cloud interacts with large amounts of water, it turns into turns into a wave of slurry composed of ash, rocky debris and scalding hot water. The slurry flow is equally as destructive as the ash cloud itself, leveling anything in its path.

*This technique can only be used three times per battle.
*The user cannot use Katon in the following turn.
*The user must wait three turns in between usages of this technique.

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 Declined  Yeah. Still too oped. Too big a scale, to big a technique, to big an effect. I mean, an ash cloud taking rock off the ground or mixing itself with water into a hot slurry? Those are all effects akin Lava release's piroclastic abilities. Also, just a clarification: Ash on itself in naturoverse is not hot unless otherwise stated that its hot ash. Otherwise, its simply "smoke" which can be ignited like in Asuma's technique. So, your assumption that because its ash its hot and burns a person "in a flash" is wrong. One more go then its DNR.

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(Fuuton/Doton/Katon: Tengumaru) Wind/Earth/Fire Release: Long-Nosed Goblin
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will begin by performing three handseals in order to release their futon chakra into the surrounding air and create narrow pathways of air that extend towards or around the target. These ‘pathways’ are not violent; They just subtly manipulate wind direction. With the performance of an additional, final handseal, the user will add doton chakra and imbue small, silicate minerals into the subtle winds. Afterwards, the user will snap their fingers, generating a spark of fire when their fingers rub together. The resultant flame will travel along the narrow pathways of air because of the earthy particles and dust in the air. Dusts have a very large surface area compared to their mass. Since burning can only occur at the surface of a solid or liquid, where it can react with oxygen, this causes dusts to be much more flammable than bulk materials. This greatly increased surface area allows the material to burn much faster, and the extremely small mass of each particle allows it to catch on fire with much less energy than the bulk material, as there is no heat loss to conduction within the material. As a result, the generated explosions are nearly spontaneous and hard to detect. The user is capable of manipulating the concentration of earthy particles in the air to produce different reactions with the flame. The first variation of this technique involves concentrating more dust into the air in order to generate large explosive attacks. The second variation involves concentrating less dust into the air in order to generate smaller, pinpoint flame based attacks, e.g. shooting fire projectiles or simply generating flames of various sizes and igniting flammable material. This technique can be used to simultaneously strike multiple areas, though only one variation of flame can be used per use of this technique. Despite the somewhat lengthy description, the process of executing this jutsu is actually very quick.

*This technique can only be used four times per battle.
*The user can only use one other technique in the same turn.
*The user must wait at least two turns in between usages of this technique.

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 Declined  DNR

(Raiton: Minazuki) Lightning Release: Flesh Drops’ Gorge -
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 [-20 to the user]
Description: The user will begin by channeling chakra to both of their hands, drawing seven circles made of lightning in the air in front of them. Once they’re drawn, the lightning from the circles are blasted forward in the form of large, thundering, circular blasts of lightning energy. As they get farther away from the user, the rings of lightning chakra expand to massive sizes, bombarding the target with a barrage of raging lightning shock waves that possess incredible destructive force. As the lightning travels, it causes extensive damage, carving out the surface of the earth and leveling the infrastructure of the battlefield as they move along. The shockwaves are meant to easily defeat a boss level summon, and are just as easily capable of combating and overpowering doton jutsu of the same rank.

*This technique can only be used once per battle.
*The user cannot use ration in the same nor the following two turns.
*The user cannot use any jutsu above S Rank in the following turn.

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 Declined  Nothing that hasn't been done before. Its simply a forbidden rank lightning blast, albeit with a bit more flare and a different deploy method which in itself doesn't change what it is.

 

[neilson]

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Fuuton oshui wind push
Type: supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short- Mid range
Chakra 20
Damage N/A
Description the user will first start to build their fuuton chakra and then release it towards their opponent; the user will focus on the fuuton chakra as it fuses with the natural air that's around the opponent the user will then shape manipulate the air causing it to surround the opponent also making the air thin enough that's its unnoticeable as it surrounds the opponent, with this done the user can push the opponent with the swing of his arm in the direction he wants his opponent to be pushed, by making the air he had previously surrounded around his opponent to instantly build up at one point around the opponent and release a powerful wind able to push the opponent. The build up of all the infused air can be made from behind, up, down, left, right,or front of the opponent.
NOTES
-can only be used six times per battle
-cannot use higher ranked wind jutsu during the turn this technique is used
-can also be used or an object or a relatively small summon
-cannot be used on a summoning that's too big (gamabunta size)
-can only be taught by Neilson

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 Declined  Incorrect name. Done before. DNR.

Genjutsu Sakasa seken raishuu illusion technique inverted world attack.
Type:supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra 30(- 20 per turn active)
Damage N/A
Description the user will first build a lot his chakra and then release it towards the target, then the user will form the ox-boar-tiger hand seals while focusing the released chakra to heavily disrupt the chakra flow in the brain of the opponent and affect all senses, once the genjutsu is cast it would seem to the opponent that nothing has changed cause everything would still be the same, the user hasn't moved from.his precious spot when casting the genjutsu and the terrain hadn't changed therefore the opponent wouldn't instantly know he is in a genjutsu, in reality the user will swiftly rush behind the opponent, in the genjutsu when the user attacks either from front in reality he attacks from behind, causing the opponent to feel the attack from his back, but see the. Attack from his front and defend as he see's the same goes from attacking from any other angle. When attacked from up in the genjutsu in reality the user attacks from down. In other words all attacks are inverted in this genjutsu. Leaving the opponent confused when he feels the attack from a different angle.
NOTES
-in this genjutsu all the user attacks are inverted, cause in reality the user stands at the back of the target/opponent at all times while this technique is active,when the user attacks the target from behind in reality, in the genjutsu the target/opponent will see the user doing the same attack but instead of the back the target/opponent will see the attack from the front.
-all the opponent attacks/counters are useless being that in reality the user of the genjutsu is behind him at all times in other words the user of the genjutsu is at the opposite direction of all attacks from the opponent. Also making the opponent to waste chakra
-the user cannot use any elemental jutsu while this jutsu is active.
-the user can only use kenjutsu(ones that doesn't require chakra) or taijutsu once this genjutsu us active, due to much focus required for this genjutsu to be active, any elemental jutsu usage would disrupt focus therefore dispelling this genjutsu. In other words no chakra consumption techniques can be used.
-this jutsu can be active for 2 turns only and can be used one per battle.
-can only be taught by Neilson

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 Declined  DNR. Already exists.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

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(Magen: Kasuka Jintai) Demonic Illusion: Weak Human Body
Type: Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will focus their chakra into an enemy's chakra system and induce an illusion where the opponent will at first start hearing small cracking and popping sounds as they move and after the time it takes to make 10 hand seals (no specialty) they will hear several more, much louder sounds and fall to the ground, the illusion making them believe the bones in their legs have broken. After another short while, about the time it takes for another 10 seals they will hear several more loud cracks and feel as if their arms have broken leaving them in large amounts of pain (pain building as the illusion proceeds) and finding it almost impossible to move their limbs. Ninja with immense mental or physical resistance such as MS users and EIG masters will be able to resist the illusion more effectively due to being closely linked to their body/mind
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-No other Genjutsu above B rank same turn or turn after.
-Twice per battle.

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 Declined  Over weekly limit of submissions. You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for the next cycle.

 

[Gutsy]

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(Tenpi-Faia Ke-pu) – Sunfire Cloak
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This black cloak is a very unique construction of special fibers and special metal. This cloak is not only designed to cover the user’s body and face, and conceal their movements, it is also created with a unique ability; it can “catch” fire. The cloak itself was created with a very unique fiber material which is incredible durable and strong, essentially making the cloak able to resist and prevent the user from catching fire, due to the cloak being constructed with the unique and tightly made fiber which literally suffocates the fire, by taking out all the oxygen which fuels the fire, and essentially extinguishing the fire. The tightly made fiber material also makes it more difficult for regular weapons such as kunai and shuriken to cut through the cloak itself. Besides the cloak being constructed of such a unique fiber, it has thin square symbols all around it; these are all thin lines of special metal which has been specially made for the purpose of absorbing heat. This makes the cloak able to gather a large amount of heat, whereas the thin lines of aluminum will begin to glow a bright yellow color, and due to the super heat on the outside of the cloak, it will when coming into contact with an opponent be able to deliver third degree burns to the area which it touches. In worst case scenarios, the super-heated cloak can deliver a devastating blow in the form of setting the opponent on fire when it touches them, though the cloak has to be fully heated to do so.
Note: The Cloak is indestructible
Note: The small fiber glass is capable of absorbing the heat comparable to an A-rank fire technique
Note: The Cloak itself is capable of suffocating a fire technique equal to that of C-rank
Note: When the cloak is super-heated it will when coming into contact with a water technique of equal to B-rank or below, turn the entire water source into a cloud of steam
Note: The super-heated cloak gives the user a distinct advantage within taijutsu, as his cloak will hurt the opponent when they touch it.
Note: The absorption of a fire technique counts towards the users 3 moves
Note: Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya

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 Declined  And indestructible fire cloak? >_> How can a cloak be a weapon? Tempted to DNR this...

(Fuuton: Ba-Charu Shuukan) –Wind Release: Virtual Imprisonment
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will release their wind chakra into the air surrounding the opponent or themselves. The chakra will be blended in with the surrounding air, creating a dome of wind which flows calmly around the user or the opponent. The wind is barely noticeable in the right conditions, and the wind will when coming into contact with a solid object begin to spin violently around thrusting it away from itself, meaning if it is created around the opponent and he casts an earth technique which flies through the air, it will be thrown right back towards him. Also if a fire technique comes into contact with the wind, the entire dome will turn into a dome of fire which turns the inside of the dome into an oven.
Note: The dome of wind is maintained for 2 turns, unless being breached
Note: The dome can stand an attack of any basic elemental technique of up to A-rank
Note: Any fire technique will have the effect of turning the dome into an oven
Note: Can only be used trice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiy

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 Declined  Description makes little sense...its a technique that just happens to be there all around and automatically pushes enemy techniques backwards... Makes little sense for me. Reword it. Perhaps it becomes clearer. And I don't see why this needs to be somthing you activate and is kept active during a set time and not something you use after your enemy used something. However, in this last aspect, it will become = to existing wind techniques.


(Doton: Nechinechi Kouki) – Earth Release: Sticky Ropes
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will send their chakra into the ground surrounding the opponent, turning the surrounding area into a sticky mud type of earth, which he will then manipulate to shoot out ropes from all around the opponent, wrapping several mud ropes around the opponent holding him in place while also pulling him down towards the ground forcing him into kneeling down while a mud rope is around his throat trying to strangle him while holding him in place. Due to the ropes being wrapped around him and all his limbs, he is unable to perform any hand seals.
Note: Can only be performed trice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

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 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

 

[Kerrah]

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(Doton: Tsuchi Kitai) - Earth Release: Earth Throttle
Rank: C
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (+10 to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, with their chakra and begins to harness proportions of ''Earthy-particles'' within themselves, and releasing it out from their body; this could either be done as a single full-body wave or through more specific body parts. Once emitted outwards, the particles will begin to envelop around that specific body part(s) and act as a concealment technique, hiding the user from the enemy, expanding up to short range from the user. However, the power behind this technique also lies within the usage of one's Earth mastery; since this portion of Earth are shaped like particles and won't pose straight-forward damage, they can still be used to aid the user in non-damaging ways (e.g. adding injury to a wound/cut, damaging the opponents vision, creating distortion of noises to conceal noises coming from the user)

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 Declined  Yeah, you don't explain what it really is or how it achieves what you describe. why would earthy particles, be that what it may be (god knows...), around a limb, conceal it? If this adds damage, why does it not cause damage? What do you want with this? Because right now, its just a set of phrases with no real explanation, purpose or reasoning behind it.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

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my approved cfs;

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Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin: Fuzaketa Petenshi | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Playful Trickster
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A less wild, yet more tactical version of hair strengthening; The user will emit quantities of hair from his body which coiling it around a specified body parts or, if he wishes, his entire body turning him into a ball of hair. Changing the properties of the hair, the user will be able to at incoming blockades in close combat, to have the hair allow him to slide past, as it was a piece of soap slipping through one’s hands, the blockade and proceed it’s original path unhindered. This would essentially, within reason, allow the user to slide past certain attacks without getting in physical contact, or hindered in his path, as well as avoiding certain attacks. The changing of properties of the hair, can however also take place, by reversing the proccess, thus making it 'lethal' following the restrictions and limitations of the style - Such as making them sharp.

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 Approved 

Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin: Futagohige Keibu | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Twinbeard Collum
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Twinbeard Collum have two uses, first being where the user will forcefully manipulate his body hair, and emit two indentical collums of plaited hair from desired body part(Or use an already existing source). The user can manipulate these as he wishes, however its main use is to entrap the opponent, by entrapping him in between the two collums. Second use, is to further manipulate the two existing sources of hair, the user will forcefully overload the capacity of chakra within the collums causing an outward explosion of compressed chakra carrying the same destructive power as a landmine.

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 Declined  Restrictions? Exploding hair?

I wish to update an old technique of mine approved here;

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(Plungepool Tornado)

(Suiton/Doton: Tobikomigouben Gufuu) Water Release/Earth Release: Plungepool Tornado
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will by making a gesture, create a spiralling vortex of water anywhere on the battlefield. Quickly, as the spinning water materlizes, the user will infuse it with their earth chakra. The result would be an humongous tornado shape of water with rocks and boulders in due the infusion the earth chakra, though due to the high speed rotation of the tornado, it would look like a giant mud spiral.
~ Can only be used once
~ Unable to use above A-rank the following turn(Clones excluded.)
~ 20 Damage to the user itself

Tweaked the name and notes(Removing unneccesarry punctuations.), nerfed the restriction as I personally considered it quite harsh despite the poweress of the technique. Tweaked the description and range.

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 Declined  Wrong chakra and damage info. Forbidden ranks always do damage to yourself and that is not simply "does 20 damage to the user". Why are clones excluded? Gesture? In today's level of techniques, such a technique requires a few handseals at least and because it has 2 elemental chakras used in 2 different steps, it actually consumes 2 moves from your 3 per turn move set.