I know you like your Bleach customs but... be sure to do a search of the CJ thread to make sure it hasn't been submitted or tried yet. Search Moon Fang or it's japanese name... Getsuoga Tensho I think. Bleach customs have been tried and done many times before so the main characters signature attack may not be the easiest to get approved.Dang it would have been so cool.
Might as well try with this one I guess.
(Kuroi Getsuga) - Black Moon Fang
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Short for the omnidirectional attack)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is an enhanced version of the Samurai sabre technique where having acquired better control, the user gathers a large amount of very dense heavy black colored chakra with a red outline around their sword. The user executes a slash to send a huge crescent blade of the chakra through the air in a great menacing wave. What makes this unique is that the user may give the projectile a spin while executing the cut so that it may swerve around and change directions in mid flight. The user may execute a very large horizontal slash to turn it into a very long crescent blade wrapping around and surrounding the user in a ring to fly outwards away from the user in all directions on the horizontal plane up to long range. The user may also stab their sword into the ground to unleash a destructive surge of chakra in an omnidirectional short range attack. Doing so grants the user protection from all directions including from below by engulfing the user in a wave of chakra blasting all around momentarily.
-Is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra surge technique.
-Must know the Samurai Sabre technique
So I should change my elie bio to scorch instead of yuki?
Yeah do that.
(Tonfāburasutā: Reboryūshonzu) - Tonfa Blasters: Rave-olutionElie now is a scorch user U__U
too op I think, but it seems so awesome.(Ninjutsu: Sutandingu Obēshon) - Ninja arts: Standing Ovation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user snaps his fingers and creates a blue, cuboid barrier around the head of his opponent. Bringing the palms of his hands together, the practitioner emits a shockwave of chakra from them. When the wave hits his opponent, the barrier turns red before falling away, decapitating the victim in the process. This technique can be used against multiple opponents at once.
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This is an amazing custom, I like it a lot(Hopu no Hogo) – Hope’s Guardian
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 50 (+30 to reform limbs) (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (-30 to self)
Description: Hope’s Guardian is one of Konan’s most powerful Paper Ninjutsu techniques. It is perhaps her most heavily guarded secret and her final resort of a weapon. Applying the basic principles of Paper Ninjutsu Konan releases numerous sheets of paper from her body. Instead of swarming the target or forming a separate creation the paper instead forms around Konan’s body. The paper forms very quickly and rapidly forms a new body around Konan. Once the formation is complete the Hope’s Guardian becomes Konan’s new temporary body that she manipulates with her chakra. The body of Hope’s Guardian is much larger than a human body. It is 15 meters tall from feet to head. Its wingspan is roughly 15 meters as well from the edge of one wing to the other. On its back is a massive sword composed of paper formed from the ninjutsu as well. The sword has can reach up to the edge of mid-range and is incredibly powerful. However, unlike normal swords, this sword relies solely on blunt damage as it is composed of paper. As such the sword specializes in smashing and breaking through targets instead of cutting through them. While in this form the Hope’s Guardian is weak to the normal weaknesses of Paper Ninjutsu – oil, water, and wind. It is however strong to lightning and is able to withstand extremely powerful lightning attacks. The body of Hope’s Guardian provides an A-Rank defense against attacks that it is neutral. Against lightning techniques Hope’s Guardian can defend against Forbidden ranked lightning techniques (double strength). While in this form Konan’s body is in the chest of the Hope’s Guardian buried deep within paper. However, she has a hollow space in the chest in order to breathe as normal. If the Hope’s Guardian is ever damaged it can spend a move to reform that body part costing the user one of their moves per turn. Hope’s Guardian’s sword has S-Rank blunt physical damage as well. While in this form Konan’s is only able to use Paper Ninjutsu and must maintain the Hope’s Guardian as well. Additionally, while in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is able to release numerous explosive tags from the hands as projectiles. This paper tag move is considered an A-Rank technique and can release multiple tags at once. While in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is only able to use 2 moves per turn. The sword attack costs a move per turn as well. The technique will last for 5 turns at which the user can deactivate it at will or wait until it times out. If the user does choose to deactivate it at will they can manipulate the paper that is released from the body to fly toward the opponent is an enormous barrage of paper tags that can slice through flesh and, for an additional 40 chakra, detonate in a massive explosion.
Note: Lasts for 5 turns and can be deactivated at will or wait until it times out.
Note: When deactivated or times out the user will be left exhausted and will only be able to mold chakra for techniques A-Rank and lower.
Note: The Hope’s Guardian reforming ability costs one move of the user’s three and 30 chakra.
Note: The sword attack costs the user one of the five moves per turn.
Note: Konan may only use Paper Ninjutsu in this form and must spend a move per turn to maintain it.
Note: Upon deactivation the user can send all scattered paper at their target. This counts as an S-Rank attack and does cost a move to use. For an additional move and 40 more chakra the user can detonate the paper tags and create a massive explosion.
Removed A-rank stuff and added bold.(Getsuga Jūjishō) - Moon Fang Cross-Shaped Piercer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40 (per each of the two projectiles)
Damage: 60-80 (per each of the two projectiles)
Description: Much like the Samurai sabre technique, the user channels their chakra into their two swords and absorbs it into the blades. They will then execute two intersecting cuts through the air sending two dense crescent blades of chakra flying in the shape of a cross.
-Each projectile is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra charge.
-Must have learned samurai sabre.
✦ Declined, restrictions?? ✦
(Suiton: Nenchaku shokushu no kōhai) - Water release: Ravage of Adhesive Tentacles(Suiton: Nenchaku shokushu no kōhai)-Water release: Ravage of Adhesive Tentacles
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10 to activate them again)
Damage: 60
Description: User of the technique would upon focusing chakra within one of their feet,stump it on the ground as to release the said chakra. By releasing this chakra they'd create a wave of tentacles to erupt in all directions, damaging and slowing down all nearby enemy units. These tentacles would erupt 360 degrees up to mid range around the user. Tentacles which are formed with this technique are made actually of sticky adhesive water similar to the one used in technique (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field and thus give ability to inhibit a person's mobility. Tentacles can reach up to 4 meters in height and user can control their movement by making hand gestures. Because of ability to control movement of tentacles user can easily take a hold of the target and similar. Once tentacles are destroyed or user stops controlling them they'd disperse on the ground as to make movement on it almost impossible. User can also use tentacles as to defend from incoming attacks. If opponent doesn't get rid of adhesive water on the ground user can once again activate tentacles by loosing 10 chakra points) in next 4 moves span.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
Note: Tentacles can be reactivated if adhesive water was left on the ground in 4 moves span.
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☼ Declined ☼
Where is the damage coming from? It sounds like these tentacles just restrict movements. And when the tentacles are reformed, are those still equivalent to A-rank?
Leach already existI'm thinking about making a leech CSC, except instead of sucking blood, they suck chakra. Are any rules against stuff like that?
Vegeta approves this message(Shinkei Pinchi) - Nerve Pinch
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique deals with targeting the weakest part of the Trapezius muscle which runs from the base of the head to the top of the shoulders above the shoulder blades. The user will concentrate chakra into his fingers strengthing them as he grips the side or base of the neck hard. While doing so he transfers a visible pulse of chakra in the form of a slicing blade from the tips of his fingers into the opponents neck or shoulder blade area. What this accomplishes is severing the upper Trapezius nerve/muscle causing pain, weakness, numbness and paralysis in the upper body, arms, shoulders and spine area. The opponent's arm and shoulder will be limp and numb hard to move and when forcibly moved will cause a deep stinging pain that radiates up the arm and down the back. This has enough power to bring an untrained and unskilled shinobi to heel especially if preformed with both hands upon both sides of the muscle simultaneously.
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(Kai Gyorai) - Chi Torpedo
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by being in motion this can be anything from a full on sprint to a simple step forward. As the user is in motion he catapults himself from the ground in an extreme spinning motion towards the target using his raw leg strength and a massive amount of chakra to torpedo himself forward colliding with anything in his path. As he does so the user releases chakra from every area of his body creating a dense aura that engulfs him as he spins toward the opponent at a fast pace. If the user is able to strike an opponent directly he would do so headfirst with the top of his head reinforced heavily by the use of chakra and the dense aura that surrounds him.
With the momentum of this technique the user is able to move from mid range to short range at a quicker pace being a bit faster then what he can do running full sprint towards someone. This allows him to create and exploit an opening in mid range or exploit an opening in short range and push the opponent back while doing moderate damage to him. The attack itself has enough force behind it to knock an opponent away up to five meters while also breaking bones such as the ribs and bruising muscles and internal organs leaving the opponent somewhat weakened by the attack.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle
Has a 2 turn cd
No other S rank taijutsu in the same turn
Remember to put katon: fire release on there. Well not sure if that's a requirement so whatever.Box of Chaos: Flaming Destruction (Kaosu no bokkusu: Furēmingu hakai)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user claps their hands together to start. They send a large amount of katon chakra into the ground (they dont have to be touching the ground) which then very quickly creates a cube around the opponent made of flames. The cube is 5 meters by 5 meters. The cube (obviously because it is a cube) covers all sides around the opponent, including a layer 1 centimeter under the surface of the earth. Next the user gives a mental command and rounds of shuriken made of fire from the cube start to fire. The box continuously gets smaller and smaller to cover up any open holes which the shuiken made when they were launched. The shuriken can be launched at random or the user can aim them. The fire in this technique is fused with enough chakra to make it slightly translucent, allowing people to see what is happening inside but of the flip side allows the opponent to see outside. If the opponent runs through the flames their entire body will suffer a 3rd degree burn. Each shuriken will feel like a 1st degree burn.
-Can only be taught by leathercandle
So it's an actual bow then? For chakra and damage you can just put it as 10-40 and 20-80.Bow of Light (Name will chance)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: The amount of chakra is based on the rank (D=10, C=15 ,B=20, A=30, S=40)
Damage: Based on rank (D=20, C=30, B=40, A=60, S=80)
Description: The bow, white as snow, does not require arrows, instead, the bow will gather the user chakra and mold it into the shape of an triangle with a small angle and then the user will draw the bow and shoot the arrow, the power of the arrow is based on the amount of chakra the user puts in.
Notes:
-Can only be used by DarthPenance
-For S-ranks the bow will overheat with the chakra output and will not be able to be used for 2 turns, and it's usable only twice per battle.
I know it's too basic guys, but what do you think
So it's an actual bow then? For chakra and damage you can just put it as 10-40 and 20-80.
I can't think of anything else for it as an abilityIsn't this basically what Mathias has?