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Dang it would have been so cool.

Might as well try with this one I guess.

(Kuroi Getsuga) - Black Moon Fang
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Short for the omnidirectional attack)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is an enhanced version of the Samurai sabre technique where having acquired better control, the user gathers a large amount of very dense heavy black colored chakra with a red outline around their sword. The user executes a slash to send a huge crescent blade of the chakra through the air in a great menacing wave. What makes this unique is that the user may give the projectile a spin while executing the cut so that it may swerve around and change directions in mid flight. The user may execute a very large horizontal slash to turn it into a very long crescent blade wrapping around and surrounding the user in a ring to fly outwards away from the user in all directions on the horizontal plane up to long range. The user may also stab their sword into the ground to unleash a destructive surge of chakra in an omnidirectional short range attack. Doing so grants the user protection from all directions including from below by engulfing the user in a wave of chakra blasting all around momentarily.
-Is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra surge technique.
-Must know the Samurai Sabre technique
 
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Dang it would have been so cool.

Might as well try with this one I guess.

(Kuroi Getsuga) - Black Moon Fang
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Short for the omnidirectional attack)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is an enhanced version of the Samurai sabre technique where having acquired better control, the user gathers a large amount of very dense heavy black colored chakra with a red outline around their sword. The user executes a slash to send a huge crescent blade of the chakra through the air in a great menacing wave. What makes this unique is that the user may give the projectile a spin while executing the cut so that it may swerve around and change directions in mid flight. The user may execute a very large horizontal slash to turn it into a very long crescent blade wrapping around and surrounding the user in a ring to fly outwards away from the user in all directions on the horizontal plane up to long range. The user may also stab their sword into the ground to unleash a destructive surge of chakra in an omnidirectional short range attack. Doing so grants the user protection from all directions including from below by engulfing the user in a wave of chakra blasting all around momentarily.
-Is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra surge technique.
-Must know the Samurai Sabre technique
I know you like your Bleach customs but... be sure to do a search of the CJ thread to make sure it hasn't been submitted or tried yet. Search Moon Fang or it's japanese name... Getsuoga Tensho I think. Bleach customs have been tried and done many times before so the main characters signature attack may not be the easiest to get approved.
I also don't know too much about Samurai, but you need to be sure that your chakra manipulation is not higher than that of a Samurai can achieve, otherwise it's a ninjutsu and would be Declined.
 

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So I should change my elie bio to scorch instead of yuki?
Yeah do that.
Elie now is a scorch user U__U
(Tonfāburasutā: Reboryūshonzu) - Tonfa Blasters: Rave-olution
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (20 when striking)
Damage Points: 80 (40 when striking)
Description: Rave-olution is a pair of hollowed out Tonfa with the ability to compress and release the user's scorch chakra into blasts and fair sized spheres that resemble bullet like constructs similar to those created by Scorch Release: Extremely Steaming Murder. Each Tonfa can create two bullet like constructs that can be shot out toward an opponent at short - mid range when shot off one by one each of these bullets are S rank if two are shot off simultaneously they are each A rank and so on if all four are shot off in one turn each count as roughly a B rank attack. This only counts as one jutsu no matter how many of the bullets the user shoots off in a single turn but due to the reduced power per bullet this evens out. These bullets have enough heat and force to evaporate jutsu two ranks stronger then themselves allowing the user to easily overpower a water user and can also cause deep internal burns if direct contact is made.
The second ability is to create small blast like explosions that emanate from the Tonfa themselves when striking an opponent the Tonfa release a mass of scorch chakra creating a blast of scorch flames that travel through whatever the user is striking causing superficial burns as bad as second degree and evaporating any moisture it comes into contact with. This can leave an opponent in a weakened state due to the removed moisture and cause their skin to peel, crack and turn black due to being charred. This is roughly B rank in power and can be used once per turn allowing for the user to pull off three reinforced strikes with the tonfa before they need a one turn cd. These Tonfa cannot be broken and can also be summoned if not with the user at the start of a battle.
Notes:
-Can only fire off four sphere like bullets their power being reduced by the number
-Can only use the explosive ability once per turn allowing for three strikes (power shared between them) before a one turn cd is needed
 

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(Hopu no Hogo) – Hope’s Guardian
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 50 (+30 to reform limbs) (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (-30 to self)
Description: Hope’s Guardian is one of Konan’s most powerful Paper Ninjutsu techniques. It is perhaps her most heavily guarded secret and her final resort of a weapon. Applying the basic principles of Paper Ninjutsu Konan releases numerous sheets of paper from her body. Instead of swarming the target or forming a separate creation the paper instead forms around Konan’s body. The paper forms very quickly and rapidly forms a new body around Konan. Once the formation is complete the Hope’s Guardian becomes Konan’s new temporary body that she manipulates with her chakra. The body of Hope’s Guardian is much larger than a human body. It is 15 meters tall from feet to head. Its wingspan is roughly 15 meters as well from the edge of one wing to the other. On its back is a massive sword composed of paper formed from the ninjutsu as well. The sword has can reach up to the edge of mid-range and is incredibly powerful. However, unlike normal swords, this sword relies solely on blunt damage as it is composed of paper. As such the sword specializes in smashing and breaking through targets instead of cutting through them. While in this form the Hope’s Guardian is weak to the normal weaknesses of Paper Ninjutsu – oil, water, and wind. It is however strong to lightning and is able to withstand extremely powerful lightning attacks. The body of Hope’s Guardian provides an A-Rank defense against attacks that it is neutral. Against lightning techniques Hope’s Guardian can defend against Forbidden ranked lightning techniques (double strength). While in this form Konan’s body is in the chest of the Hope’s Guardian buried deep within paper. However, she has a hollow space in the chest in order to breathe as normal. If the Hope’s Guardian is ever damaged it can spend a move to reform that body part costing the user one of their moves per turn. Hope’s Guardian’s sword has S-Rank blunt physical damage as well. While in this form Konan’s is only able to use Paper Ninjutsu and must maintain the Hope’s Guardian as well. Additionally, while in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is able to release numerous explosive tags from the hands as projectiles. This paper tag move is considered an A-Rank technique and can release multiple tags at once. While in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is only able to use 2 moves per turn. The sword attack costs a move per turn as well. The technique will last for 5 turns at which the user can deactivate it at will or wait until it times out. If the user does choose to deactivate it at will they can manipulate the paper that is released from the body to fly toward the opponent is an enormous barrage of paper tags that can slice through flesh and, for an additional 40 chakra, detonate in a massive explosion.

Note: Lasts for 5 turns and can be deactivated at will or wait until it times out.
Note: When deactivated or times out the user will be left exhausted and will only be able to mold chakra for techniques A-Rank and lower.
Note: The Hope’s Guardian reforming ability costs one move of the user’s three and 30 chakra.
Note: The sword attack costs the user one of the five moves per turn.
Note: Konan may only use Paper Ninjutsu in this form and must spend a move per turn to maintain it.
Note: Upon deactivation the user can send all scattered paper at their target. This counts as an S-Rank attack and does cost a move to use. For an additional move and 40 more chakra the user can detonate the paper tags and create a massive explosion.
 
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(Ninjutsu: Sutandingu Obēshon) - Ninja arts: Standing Ovation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user snaps his fingers and creates a blue, cuboid barrier around the head of his opponent. Bringing the palms of his hands together, the practitioner emits a shockwave of chakra from them. When the wave hits his opponent, the barrier turns red before falling away, decapitating the victim in the process. This technique can be used against multiple opponents at once.
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too op I think, but it seems so awesome.
(Hopu no Hogo) – Hope’s Guardian
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 50 (+30 to reform limbs) (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (-30 to self)
Description: Hope’s Guardian is one of Konan’s most powerful Paper Ninjutsu techniques. It is perhaps her most heavily guarded secret and her final resort of a weapon. Applying the basic principles of Paper Ninjutsu Konan releases numerous sheets of paper from her body. Instead of swarming the target or forming a separate creation the paper instead forms around Konan’s body. The paper forms very quickly and rapidly forms a new body around Konan. Once the formation is complete the Hope’s Guardian becomes Konan’s new temporary body that she manipulates with her chakra. The body of Hope’s Guardian is much larger than a human body. It is 15 meters tall from feet to head. Its wingspan is roughly 15 meters as well from the edge of one wing to the other. On its back is a massive sword composed of paper formed from the ninjutsu as well. The sword has can reach up to the edge of mid-range and is incredibly powerful. However, unlike normal swords, this sword relies solely on blunt damage as it is composed of paper. As such the sword specializes in smashing and breaking through targets instead of cutting through them. While in this form the Hope’s Guardian is weak to the normal weaknesses of Paper Ninjutsu – oil, water, and wind. It is however strong to lightning and is able to withstand extremely powerful lightning attacks. The body of Hope’s Guardian provides an A-Rank defense against attacks that it is neutral. Against lightning techniques Hope’s Guardian can defend against Forbidden ranked lightning techniques (double strength). While in this form Konan’s body is in the chest of the Hope’s Guardian buried deep within paper. However, she has a hollow space in the chest in order to breathe as normal. If the Hope’s Guardian is ever damaged it can spend a move to reform that body part costing the user one of their moves per turn. Hope’s Guardian’s sword has S-Rank blunt physical damage as well. While in this form Konan’s is only able to use Paper Ninjutsu and must maintain the Hope’s Guardian as well. Additionally, while in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is able to release numerous explosive tags from the hands as projectiles. This paper tag move is considered an A-Rank technique and can release multiple tags at once. While in the Hope’s Guardian Konan is only able to use 2 moves per turn. The sword attack costs a move per turn as well. The technique will last for 5 turns at which the user can deactivate it at will or wait until it times out. If the user does choose to deactivate it at will they can manipulate the paper that is released from the body to fly toward the opponent is an enormous barrage of paper tags that can slice through flesh and, for an additional 40 chakra, detonate in a massive explosion.

Note: Lasts for 5 turns and can be deactivated at will or wait until it times out.
Note: When deactivated or times out the user will be left exhausted and will only be able to mold chakra for techniques A-Rank and lower.
Note: The Hope’s Guardian reforming ability costs one move of the user’s three and 30 chakra.
Note: The sword attack costs the user one of the five moves per turn.
Note: Konan may only use Paper Ninjutsu in this form and must spend a move per turn to maintain it.
Note: Upon deactivation the user can send all scattered paper at their target. This counts as an S-Rank attack and does cost a move to use. For an additional move and 40 more chakra the user can detonate the paper tags and create a massive explosion.
This is an amazing custom, I like it a lot
 

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(Barousutoraiki) - Burrowstrike
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+20 if explosive tags are used)
Description: The jutsu itself is used against solid forms. This being said, unless an object, person and similar has a form the jutsu has no use. Konan will release up to 4 thin and sharp paper sheets that are infused with her chakra whilst at the same time changing the way light is reflected upon them. By doing this, she would be capable of hidding presence of these paper sheets untill they hit the intendent target. However, the use of the jutsu is not to cut through the object but rather movement of paper sheet stops once it manages to penetrate through the object and is faced with it from all sides. This is when the actual jutsu begins, with a performance of a single seal Konan is capable of making a single sheet multiple into thousends that are going to completely shatter body of the target from the inside out. Now, once the paper sheet has penetrated through the body of the target, Konan is capable of keeping it there up to two turns before it looses its effect.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Akasha
Note: Can only be used by Konan
 

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(Getsuga Jūjishō) - Moon Fang Cross-Shaped Piercer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40 (per each of the two projectiles)
Damage: 60-80 (per each of the two projectiles)
Description: Much like the Samurai sabre technique, the user channels their chakra into their two swords and absorbs it into the blades. They will then execute two intersecting cuts through the air sending two dense crescent blades of chakra flying in the shape of a cross.
-Each projectile is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra charge.
-Must have learned samurai sabre.

✦ Declined, restrictions?? ✦
Removed A-rank stuff and added bold.




(Getsuga Jūjishō) - Moon Fang Cross-Shaped Piercer
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (per each of the two projectiles)
Damage: 80 (per each of the two projectiles)
Description: Much like the Samurai sabre technique, the user channels their chakra into their two swords and absorbs it into the blades. They will then execute two intersecting cuts through the air sending two dense crescent blades of chakra flying in the shape of a cross.
-Each projectile is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra charge.
-Must have learned samurai sabre.
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.

(Gokōjin) - Halo Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is a dual-sword battō-jutsu technique. During execution, both swords are drawn at an incredible speed, unleashing a strike with enough power to burst an adversary to shreds.
-Iaido
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.

(Bushidō: Reiatsu) - Way of the warrior: Spiritual Pressure
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 while active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user gives off a great and oppressive presence towards the opponent while releasing chakra. This causes the opponent to hesitate and give weaker attacks.
-Opponent's attacks deal -20 damage adding up to a minimum of 0 damage.
-Usable once per battle
-Lasts 4 turns
-Samurai

(Kinto'un) - Flying Nimbus
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Flying Nimbus is a small cluster of clouds which has the ability to fly. it's just big enough to carry one or two people around at high speeds. It always remains up in the sky above the user until its use is required, at which point the cloud will swoop down for the user to hop on. The user cammands it through a mental link and Flying Nimbus grants the user flight without having to spend any chakra.
-May be used to dodge up to A-rank ninjutsu through high speed maneuvering twice per battle.

(Kuzuryūsen) - Nine-Headed Dragon Flash
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User dashes towards his opponent at high speed; he draws his sword and strikes at nine different spots on the opponent so quickly that all nine strikes appear to happen simultaneously. The user follows through and stops a few steps behind his opponent.
-Iaido
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.

(Ryūkansen) - Dragon Coiling Flash
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User dashes towards his opponent at high speed and side steps to avoid a narrow attack. The user moves past the opponent in a flash. In doing so, one spins in a full circle, adding momentum and centrifugal force to the strength of the sword swing, which is then aimed at either the opponent's back or the back of the neck.
-Iaido
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.
 
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(Katon: Rimōto kōzan) - Fire Release: Remote Mine
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: User of this technique will release heated ash into the ground below and around enemy, effecting a radius of up to 5 meters. This ash will stay dormant in the ground up to two turns before it automatically gets activated. However, with a performance of a single seal user is capable of activing the ash. Upon activation, ash would burst whilst inside the ground and thus forming a crater of great proportion. Everything within it will also be effected by shaking of the ground because of the explosion. This shaking would be so strong that it would be capable of making opponent completely lose balance. Now, because of the positioning of the ash, if the pressure was to be made onto the ground where it was, either by using a jutsu directed towards the ground, releasing chakra in the ground where it was or jumping on it, the explosion would take place.

Note: Can only be taught by Akasha

(Suiton: Nenchaku shokushu no kōhai)-Water release: Ravage of Adhesive Tentacles
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10 to activate them again)
Damage: 60
Description: User of the technique would upon focusing chakra within one of their feet,stump it on the ground as to release the said chakra. By releasing this chakra they'd create a wave of tentacles to erupt in all directions, damaging and slowing down all nearby enemy units. These tentacles would erupt 360 degrees up to mid range around the user. Tentacles which are formed with this technique are made actually of sticky adhesive water similar to the one used in technique (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field and thus give ability to inhibit a person's mobility. Tentacles can reach up to 4 meters in height and user can control their movement by making hand gestures. Because of ability to control movement of tentacles user can easily take a hold of the target and similar. Once tentacles are destroyed or user stops controlling them they'd disperse on the ground as to make movement on it almost impossible. User can also use tentacles as to defend from incoming attacks. If opponent doesn't get rid of adhesive water on the ground user can once again activate tentacles by loosing 10 chakra points) in next 4 moves span.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
Note: Tentacles can be reactivated if adhesive water was left on the ground in 4 moves span.
[video=youtube;BZBsiD9wuWQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BZBsiD9wuWQ[/video]

☼ Declined ☼

Where is the damage coming from? It sounds like these tentacles just restrict movements. And when the tentacles are reformed, are those still equivalent to A-rank?
(Suiton: Nenchaku shokushu no kōhai) - Water release: Ravage of Adhesive Tentacles
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10 to activate them again)
Damage: 60
Description: User of the technique would upon focusing chakra within one of their feet,stump it on the ground as to release the said chakra. By releasing this chakra they'd create a wave of tentacles to erupt in all directions, damaging and slowing down all nearby enemy units. These tentacles would erupt 360 degrees up to mid range around the user. Tentacles which are formed with this technique are made actually of sticky adhesive water similar to the one used in technique (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field and thus give ability to inhibit a person's mobility. Tentacles can reach up to 4 meters in height and user can control their movement by making hand gestures. Because of ability to control movement of tentacles user can easily take a hold of the target and similar. Tentacles can also make damage to the opponent by whipping them before actually taking hold of them. Once tentacles are destroyed or user stops controlling them they'd disperse on the ground as to make movement on it almost impossible. User can also use tentacles as to defend from incoming attacks. If opponent doesn't get rid of adhesive water on the ground user can once again activate tentacles by loosing 10 chakra points) in next 4 moves span. Upon reformance, tentacles would be one rank lower.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Tentacles can be reactivated if adhesive water was left on the ground in 4 moves span.
Note: Can form up to eight tentacles
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
 
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Shinsoku Battōjutsu | Godspeed Sword Drawing Arts

Type: Iaido

Background:

Shinsoku Battōjutsu (Godspeed Craft of Drawing Out The Sword) is an ancient sword drawing style designed to allow a user to avoid an attack at the last moment and then to draw his sword and attack in the shortest amount of time possible. Practitioners of this style require great stamina and endurance since the proper use of its techniques require that the user cannot hold back. Shinsoku Battōjutsu is known by very few people in history due to the fact that it has only been passed on from master to apprentice for fourteen generations, with each apprentice taking the life and special mantle of his master as well as the name Hiko Seijūrō. That is because once the student has mastered all but the final technique it's revealed that teaching it required the teacher to die at the blade of the student in the process, after which the student replaced him as the next master.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

The basic core of this fighting style is that; through mastery of a user's body language and chakra, a user will feign a certain action and then suddenly act in conflict with his chakra to make a different move at the last moment without any sign of preparation to throw off a false reality. Using chakra requires that the user use his body and spirit to will the chakra to perform an action. The user performs the first action, such as an attack or movement, and puts his whole soul into it. The initial action is so convincing, even to the user, that when the user switches to another action the chakra will linger and manifest into an illusory clone that continues the initial action while the user momentarily fades from the opponent's consciousness and then appears again to make his attack.

Example Techniques:

(Shinsoku: Hiten Mugen Zan) - Godspeed: Flying Heaven Infinity Slash
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user substitutes himself with an illusory clone while he himself uses high speed movement to disappear and then reappear behind the opponent to draw his sword and execute a very powerful slash. The clone illusion only lasts a moment, for the user to complete his attack.
-Does not count against the clone limit
-Usable once per battle

Additional effects and Restrictions:
 
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(Shinkei Pinchi) - Nerve Pinch
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique deals with targeting the weakest part of the Trapezius muscle which runs from the base of the head to the top of the shoulders above the shoulder blades. The user will concentrate chakra into his fingers strengthing them as he grips the side or base of the neck hard. While doing so he transfers a visible pulse of chakra in the form of a slicing blade from the tips of his fingers into the opponents neck or shoulder blade area. What this accomplishes is severing the upper Trapezius nerve/muscle causing pain, weakness, numbness and paralysis in the upper body, arms, shoulders and spine area. The opponent's arm and shoulder will be limp and numb hard to move and when forcibly moved will cause a deep stinging pain that radiates up the arm and down the back. This has enough power to bring an untrained and unskilled shinobi to heel especially if preformed with both hands upon both sides of the muscle simultaneously.



(Kai Gyorai) - Chi Torpedo
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by being in motion this can be anything from a full on sprint to a simple step forward. As the user is in motion he catapults himself from the ground in an extreme spinning motion towards the target using his raw leg strength and a massive amount of chakra to torpedo himself forward colliding with anything in his path. As he does so the user releases chakra from every area of his body creating a dense aura that engulfs him as he spins toward the opponent at a fast pace. If the user is able to strike an opponent directly he would do so headfirst with the top of his head reinforced heavily by the use of chakra and the dense aura that surrounds him.
With the momentum of this technique the user is able to move from mid range to short range at a quicker pace being a bit faster then what he can do running full sprint towards someone. This allows him to create and exploit an opening in mid range or exploit an opening in short range and push the opponent back while doing moderate damage to him. The attack itself has enough force behind it to knock an opponent away up to five meters while also breaking bones such as the ribs and bruising muscles and internal organs leaving the opponent somewhat weakened by the attack.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle
Has a 2 turn cd
No other S rank taijutsu in the same turn

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(Shinkei Pinchi) - Nerve Pinch
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique deals with targeting the weakest part of the Trapezius muscle which runs from the base of the head to the top of the shoulders above the shoulder blades. The user will concentrate chakra into his fingers strengthing them as he grips the side or base of the neck hard. While doing so he transfers a visible pulse of chakra in the form of a slicing blade from the tips of his fingers into the opponents neck or shoulder blade area. What this accomplishes is severing the upper Trapezius nerve/muscle causing pain, weakness, numbness and paralysis in the upper body, arms, shoulders and spine area. The opponent's arm and shoulder will be limp and numb hard to move and when forcibly moved will cause a deep stinging pain that radiates up the arm and down the back. This has enough power to bring an untrained and unskilled shinobi to heel especially if preformed with both hands upon both sides of the muscle simultaneously.



(Kai Gyorai) - Chi Torpedo
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by being in motion this can be anything from a full on sprint to a simple step forward. As the user is in motion he catapults himself from the ground in an extreme spinning motion towards the target using his raw leg strength and a massive amount of chakra to torpedo himself forward colliding with anything in his path. As he does so the user releases chakra from every area of his body creating a dense aura that engulfs him as he spins toward the opponent at a fast pace. If the user is able to strike an opponent directly he would do so headfirst with the top of his head reinforced heavily by the use of chakra and the dense aura that surrounds him.
With the momentum of this technique the user is able to move from mid range to short range at a quicker pace being a bit faster then what he can do running full sprint towards someone. This allows him to create and exploit an opening in mid range or exploit an opening in short range and push the opponent back while doing moderate damage to him. The attack itself has enough force behind it to knock an opponent away up to five meters while also breaking bones such as the ribs and bruising muscles and internal organs leaving the opponent somewhat weakened by the attack.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle
Has a 2 turn cd
No other S rank taijutsu in the same turn
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Box of Chaos: Flaming Destruction (Kaosu no bokkusu: Furēmingu hakai)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user claps their hands together to start. They send a large amount of katon chakra into the ground (they dont have to be touching the ground) which then very quickly creates a cube around the opponent made of flames. The cube is 5 meters by 5 meters. The cube (obviously because it is a cube) covers all sides around the opponent, including a layer 1 centimeter under the surface of the earth. Next the user gives a mental command and rounds of shuriken made of fire from the cube start to fire. The box continuously gets smaller and smaller to cover up any open holes which the shuiken made when they were launched. The shuriken can be launched at random or the user can aim them. The fire in this technique is fused with enough chakra to make it slightly translucent, allowing people to see what is happening inside but of the flip side allows the opponent to see outside. If the opponent runs through the flames their entire body will suffer a 3rd degree burn. Each shuriken will feel like a 1st degree burn.

-Can only be taught by leathercandle
 

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Box of Chaos: Flaming Destruction (Kaosu no bokkusu: Furēmingu hakai)
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user claps their hands together to start. They send a large amount of katon chakra into the ground (they dont have to be touching the ground) which then very quickly creates a cube around the opponent made of flames. The cube is 5 meters by 5 meters. The cube (obviously because it is a cube) covers all sides around the opponent, including a layer 1 centimeter under the surface of the earth. Next the user gives a mental command and rounds of shuriken made of fire from the cube start to fire. The box continuously gets smaller and smaller to cover up any open holes which the shuiken made when they were launched. The shuriken can be launched at random or the user can aim them. The fire in this technique is fused with enough chakra to make it slightly translucent, allowing people to see what is happening inside but of the flip side allows the opponent to see outside. If the opponent runs through the flames their entire body will suffer a 3rd degree burn. Each shuriken will feel like a 1st degree burn.

-Can only be taught by leathercandle
Remember to put katon: fire release on there. Well not sure if that's a requirement so whatever.

Looks cool.
 

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Bow of Light (Name will chance)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: The amount of chakra is based on the rank (D=10, C=15 ,B=20, A=30, S=40)
Damage: Based on rank (D=20, C=30, B=40, A=60, S=80)
Description: The bow, white as snow, does not require arrows, instead, the bow will gather the user chakra and mold it into the shape of an triangle with a small angle and then the user will draw the bow and shoot the arrow, the power of the arrow is based on the amount of chakra the user puts in.
Notes:
-Can only be used by DarthPenance
-For S-ranks the bow will overheat with the chakra output and will not be able to be used for 2 turns, and it's usable only twice per battle.
I know it's too basic guys, but what do you think
 

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Bow of Light (Name will chance)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: The amount of chakra is based on the rank (D=10, C=15 ,B=20, A=30, S=40)
Damage: Based on rank (D=20, C=30, B=40, A=60, S=80)
Description: The bow, white as snow, does not require arrows, instead, the bow will gather the user chakra and mold it into the shape of an triangle with a small angle and then the user will draw the bow and shoot the arrow, the power of the arrow is based on the amount of chakra the user puts in.
Notes:
-Can only be used by DarthPenance
-For S-ranks the bow will overheat with the chakra output and will not be able to be used for 2 turns, and it's usable only twice per battle.
I know it's too basic guys, but what do you think
So it's an actual bow then? For chakra and damage you can just put it as 10-40 and 20-80.
 
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