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[Howard]

(Kyuchirose: Toriyama) - Summoning: Toriyama
Type: Summoning
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: Toriyama is an extremely small kite small enough to fit into the palm of a person's hand. To summon him the user need only perform the seal of confrontation. He can do very little inside of battle but is great for recon and surveillance. Most times he is just summoned for comedic relief or to reference an inside joke. He can be on the field indefinitely as he has no actual abilities and is akin to a kite summoned through the basic summoning jutsu.

(Kyuchirose: Toriyama) - Summoning: Toriyama
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+40 for offensive attack using copies)
Description: Toriyama is an extremely small kite small enough to fit into the palm of a person's hand. To summon him the user need only perform the seal of confrontation and draw some form of blood from his body. He can do very little offensively inside of battle but is great for recon and surveillance both due to his small size and his one and only ability. Most times he is just summoned for comedic relief or to reference an inside joke. He can be on the field indefinitely and has only one useful ability. He can create chakra based copies of himself that look like masses of blue chakra in his shape nearly a perfect silhouette of his small bird like form. They appear as what seem to be spirit animals/birds resembling Toriyama in every way only somewhat translucent/semi transparent being somewhat bluish.
These copies can be controlled by him and like shadow clones are connected to him in the same way when he disperses one or it is forcefully dispersed Toriyama gains all of the knowledge it has accumulated as well as the ability to create a new copy of himself. These copies can do very little outside of ramming into an opponent and causing a mild chakra explosion that can cause mild damage such as small lacerations, cuts, bruises and mild friction burns. Toriyama can only have three copies in play at any time however they can be anywhere as long as Toriyama himself is safe. If his concentration is broken he's dispersed or forced to move from his spot the copies disperse. While active Toriyama can share his vision, hearing and sense of touch with the copies seeing, hearing and feeling what they see, hear and feel but this takes immense concentration and while doing so Toriyama cannot relay the information or speak until he breaks this concentration thus losing the ability to see, hear and feel what the copies do for a short period of time. Toriyama can create and maintain a mental link to the summoner and can speak however doing so breaks his concentration nullifying the ability to see, hear and feel the copies during the time that he is speaking both mentally and physically to someone. This doesn't negate the ability to create and maintain the copies though and is a passive ability that doesn't count towards jutsu usage. Another ability the copies have is that it can take refuge inside the summoner's body or an allies body much to the same extent as chakra because that's what it is a mass of chakra.
This works a lot like what Minato did with Naruto the chakra lays dormant inside the summoner or ally until it is activated when this is done the chakra either releases returning to Toriyama thus alerting him to all of the information it has gather or creates a disturbance to the summoner's or allies chakra. This disturbance is enough to break low ranking genjutsu B rank and below. The chakra is activated either by Toriyama, the summoner/ally or a genjutsu that is set in place. Toriyama can do it mentally, the summoner or ally can do it by performing the seal of confrontation and a genjutsu put in place will activate it automatically without a trigger from Toriyama or the summoner/ally.
Notes:
-Can create and maintain three copies and can use the ability twice however creating the copies counts as a jutsu
-Can use the ability to see, hear and feel what the copies do three times per battle but must wait two turns between each use. This ability can last for two full turns allowing Toriyama to gather a vast amount of information in that time.

 

[Goetia]

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Djemdakara | Djem So
Type: Kenjutsu
Background: Millenia before the current age of the ninja world, and only decades before the arrival of Ōtsutsuki Kaguya, there was no chakra. Due to such a lack of chakra, men and women who fought had to rely on their fists or weapons. During this era, many who wielded weapons had no idea how to use them. A group of practitioners of the art of Kenjutsu, whose names were lost in history, practiced mainly defensive styles of sword combat. Knowing that being mainly defensive would only prolong the inevitable, and that keeping on a strictly defensive fighting style would only needlessly prolong fighting, the group attempted to find ways to be able to bypass the offensive limitations created by their mainly defensive style, and create a sword style which would allow for more offensive capability. Years later after embarking on this endeavour, the sword style known as Djem So, The Perseverance Style, was born. Djem So was designed to use an opponent's attack against them, and there was much emphasis on immediately striking back after a blow. Although some ninja felt that Djem So encouraged aggression and domination, that sentiment did not stop many ninja from practicing the form. Djem So, due to its practice by countless ninja, later became known also as Form V.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

Djem So, also known as Form V, was characterised by its power attacks and defense immediately followed by a counter-strike. Utilizing a combination of blocks and parries, a Djem So user maintained a proper foundation of defense against both ranged and melee attacks. Where the problem lied in the more traditional ways of sword combat, with an overly passive defensive style and a lack of offensive capability, Djem So addressed this problem. While a more defensive sword combatant would maintain a very passive defense, Djem So was not as passive. Immediately after defending against an opponent's strike, a Djem So stylist followed with an attack of their own, bringing the force of the opponent's own blow against them and seeking to dominate the duel. Djem So placed a heavy focus on brute strength and pure power, with wide, powerful strikes and parries followed immediately by a counterattack. Unlike many other styles of sword combat, Djem So required the user not only to counterattack, but also to press the assault, combining large strength with powerful blade combinations to overpower and overwhelm an opponent's defenses. Djem So's sheer power, when combined with physical strength and a careful mind, was capable of defeating even the most defensive of sword styles. The Djem So attack stance consisted of holding the lightsaber above the head, angled back and down at an approximately forty-five degree angle. The characteristic Djem So attack was dubbed the "Falling Avalanche," an overhand power blow that crashed down upon an opponent with exceptional force. Djem So users also employed a tactic known as the "Fluid Riposte," which involved a smooth transition from parrying an attack to a counterstrike. However, where Djem So made up for the lack of offensive capability that was seen in other forms of sword combat, Djem So was known for having a lack of mobility.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
~Can only be taught to those who have mastered Kenjutsu and Taijutsu.

Basic outline so far.

I need to add more stuff, make it unique. Make it so that there is stuff that cannot be done in just freeform Ken.

 

[Nebula]

Summoning Animal: Shrike
Scroll Owner: Valhalen
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Shrikes are medium sized song birds which are normally gray with white plumage. They possess curved beaks reflective of their predatory nature. Shrikes are known for their unique feeding habits which involve lifting and forcibly impaling prey over spikes or branches so that they may tear the flesh into smaller pieces. This also serves as a cache that the shrike may come back to later. Doing so allows shrikes to later eat normally poisonous prey after leaving it out for the toxins to degrade.

 

[Vegeta]

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(Nanto Seiken) - South Dipper Holy Fist
Type: FutonSuitonGenjutsuTaijutsu
Background: The Nanto Seiken style is named after the Chinese asterism Nanto Roku Sei (literally, South Dipper Six Stars), a portion of Sagittarius known as the Milk Dipper in the West. Nanto Seiken, along with Hokuto Shinken, are the two most powerful assassination styles in Chinese martial arts. It follows a different principle from Hokuto Shinken, in which it has the power to destroy an enemy's body from the outside through powerful stabbing and slicing techniques, as opposed to Hokuto Shinken's use of the body's Keiraku Hikō to destroy the enemy from within. The organization structure of Nanto Seiken is said to be 108 sects of Nanto Seiken. The six strongest Nanto masters were called the Nanto Roku Seiken (Six Holy Fists of South Dipper), who correspond to the six stars in the Nanto Roku Sei constellation. In ancient times, these six masters each guarded one of six gates of the Moon Emperor's palace. The strongest of all masters being Souther, who practiced Nanto Hōō Ken (South Dipper Imperial Phoenix Fist). Its successor is born under the Star of Leadership (Shōsei). Souther was the Village Hidden under the Moon's polar opposite to Kenshiro and his Hokuto Shinken style, the virtual Yin to his Yang. It was said when the North Star moved, so did the South Star and the Heaven's themselves. Similar to Hokuto Shinken, this style used by Souther is taught in the ways of Isshi Sōden, meaning there can be only one master and one successor. The student must kill his master in order to complete his training. Eventually the Fists of the North and South Stars would cross paths, and the battle that ensued would leave Souther defeated by a Compassionate fist strike, Kenshiro using his brother's own technique thru Muso Tensei on him to lesson his pain before death. Souther, stating that he doesn't need Kenshiro's compassion, stabs himself in the chest with wind infused fingers, refusing to die by Hokuto. Though he died, his style lived on with his student whom never had the chance to finish him off, and was incorporated at Nanto Seikon's school into a new form of Nanto Seiken that could exist in the Ninja world of today...

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Nanto Seiken is now broken down into several forms:

Nanto Suichō Ken (南斗水鳥拳, South Dipper Waterfowl Fist): A Fluid style. Its movements are compared to a graceful water bird, however, its destructive power is without equal and can slaughter enemies with its devastating slicing techniques. Using blades of suiton chakra formed on the finger tips or feet for slicing abilities. Its successor is born under the Star of Justice (Gisei)
Nanto Koshū Ken (南斗孤鷲拳, South Dipper Lone Eagle Fist): This style focuses on powerful punches and kicks which assault the enemy sometimes using futon chakra and powerful taijutsu strikes, and the only illusionary arts taught in Nanto Seiken, Phantasmal Fists. Its successor is born under the Star of Martyrdom (Junsei).
Nanto Hōō Ken (南斗鳳凰拳, South Dipper Imperial Phoenix Fist): This freeform style typically has no stances and instead focuses on incredible speed and power. However, there is one stance which is only assumed when facing a worthy opponent. Is adept at destroying enemies with open hand attacks using futon chakra incorporated in the strikes which stab the enemy or slice them to death, and the ultimate stance of Nanto: Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance can be used, allowing one to use The Wings of Nanto. Its successor is born under the Star of Leadership (Shōsei)


Example Techniques:

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(Nanto Seiken: Koshū Ken Genjutsu- Yuugen Sho) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Lone Eagle Fist Illusionary Arts- Phantasmal Fists
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user begins by molding chakra and sending it into an opponent's system, putting both hands palms out facing the enemy. They will then begin to circle both hands outwards like making a sideways 8 as the user disappears from view, only the encircling hands remain as the background goes black and more hands appear encircling the area 360* horizontally around the target. In reality, the user swiftly maneuvers to behind the enemy, molding Futon chakra to the hands and strikes, thrusting with both hands together like a blade hard enough to pierce bone.

~Notes~
-Must have mastered Nanto Seiken arts
-No other Genjutsu this turn or the next
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-reference-

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(Nanto Seiken: Nanto Hōō Ken - Tensho Juuji Ho) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Imperial Phoenix Fist - Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance
Rank: A
Type: Supplemental/Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: When a formidable opponent appears, this stance less style's basis is discarded, and the Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance can be performed. The user starts by putting both arms straight outwards to the sides, palms pointing outwards as he gathers his wind chakra thru out his body. Thru proper chakra control and manipulation, The wind chakra can be controlled to cover the hands and feet in slicing blades of wind that can be used to attack in cqc, or can be whipped upwards quickly launching them forwards in a vertical line of slicing wind up to mid range. Furthermore, entering this stance allows one to access the Wings of Nanto. By focusing and using chakra control, wind chakra can be accumulated to the entire back regain and released from the body in a surge, allowing one to travel from one range to another at 2x's speed (ie; short-mid, mid-long) from the burst of wind, however, doing so will end this jutsu immediately and cannot be performed to go upwards, just straight forwards..

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Must master Nanto Seiken arts
-Can only be used 1x per battle
-Can only use Wind jutsu A rank and below while using, as well as Tai/Kenjutsu
-Last 3 turns unless Wings of Nanto is used
-No other Nanto Seiken techniques while this is in use and also for 1 turn after use, and slower reflexes for 1 turn
-reference-

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(Nanto Seiken: Suichō Ken - Gisei sutā no Taron) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Waterfowl Fist - Talons of the Justice Star
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the Bird seal and molding water chakra within, the user will manipulate the chakra to their fists, particularly their 4 fingers on each hand, creating 6 inch blades of visible water coming from the tip of each finger, that are focused and razor sharp.

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Must master Nanto Seiken arts
-The blades cannot be thrown
-Cannot mold other chakra while using due to having to concentrate Suiton chakra to the blades

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have Futon, Suiton, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu completed to learn
-User gains heightened reflexes and reaction time because of training in Nanto Seiken as compared to a standard Strong Fist Taijutsu user
-Must be at least Kage rank to train in Nanato Seiken arts

Declined, there is literally nothing to work with here, you don't even describe the three stances fully, just what chakra they use nor do you go into detail about these illusions the second stance is capable of. The first stance is just using blades of water to attack with, done before. The second and third stances are just different application of fuuton taijutsu, still done before.

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(Nanto Seiken) - South Dipper Holy Fist
Type: FutonSuitonGenjutsuTaijutsu
Background: The Nanto Seiken style is named after the Chinese asterism Nanto Roku Sei (literally, South Dipper Six Stars), a portion of Sagittarius known as the Milk Dipper in the West. Nanto Seiken, along with Hokuto Shinken, are the two most powerful assassination styles in Chinese martial arts. It follows a different principle from Hokuto Shinken, in which it has the power to destroy an enemy's body from the outside through powerful stabbing and slicing techniques, as opposed to Hokuto Shinken's use of the body's Keiraku Hikō to destroy the enemy from within. The organization structure of Nanto Seiken is said to be 108 sects of Nanto Seiken. The six strongest Nanto masters were called the Nanto Roku Seiken (Six Holy Fists of South Dipper), who correspond to the six stars in the Nanto Roku Sei constellation. In ancient times, these six masters each guarded one of six gates of the Moon Emperor's palace. The strongest of all masters being Souther, who practiced Nanto Hōō Ken (South Dipper Imperial Phoenix Fist). Its successor is born under the Star of Leadership (Shōsei). Souther was the Village Hidden under the Moon's polar opposite to Kenshiro and his Hokuto Shinken style, the virtual Yin to his Yang. It was said when the North Star moved, so did the South Star and the Heaven's themselves. Similar to Hokuto Shinken, this style used by Souther is taught in the ways of Isshi Sōden, meaning there can be only one master and one successor. The student must kill his master in order to complete his training. Eventually the Fists of the North and South Stars would cross paths, and the battle that ensued would leave Souther defeated by a Compassionate fist strike, Kenshiro using his brother's own technique thru Muso Tensei on him to lesson his pain before death. Souther, stating that he doesn't need Kenshiro's compassion, stabs himself in the chest with wind infused fingers, refusing to die by Hokuto. Though he died, his style lived on with his student whom never had the chance to finish him off, and was incorporated at Nanto Seikon's school into a new form of Nanto Seiken that could exist in the Ninja world of today...

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Nanto Seiken is now broken down into several forms:

Nanto Suichō Ken (南斗水鳥拳, South Dipper Waterfowl Fist): A Fluid style. Its movements are compared to a graceful water bird, however, its destructive power is without equal and can slaughter enemies with its devastating slicing techniques. Using blades of suiton chakra formed on the finger tips for slicing abilities, this style uses open handed and open fingered strikes resembling Tiger claw style strikes, with fluid motions while attacking similar to drunken fist (but not). Its successor is born under the Star of Justice (Gisei)

Nanto Koshū Ken (南斗孤鷲拳, South Dipper Lone Eagle Fist): This style focuses on powerful open double handed piercing strikes and slicing kicks which assault the enemy using futon chakra and powerful taijutsu strikes using the hands open but fingers together like a blade and the sides of the feet like chopping blades, and the only illusionary arts taught in Nanto Seiken, Phantasmal Fists (Described below in example techniques). While this style has one strike at the end of Phantasmal Fists that is a hand strike, it is mainly a kicking style. Its successor is born under the Star of Martyrdom (Junsei).

Nanto Hōō Ken (南斗鳳凰拳, South Dipper Imperial Phoenix Fist): This freeform style typically has no stances and instead focuses on incredible speed and power. However, there is one stance which is only assumed when facing a worthy opponent. Is adept at destroying enemies with open hand attacks with the fingers together like blades using futon chakra incorporated in the strikes which stab the enemy or slice them to death (Strikes are performed with both hands at once ie; both hands crossing left to right, right to left, then performing a double back handed slash like an X), and the ultimate stance of Nanto: Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance can be used, allowing one to use The Wings of Nanto. Its successor is born under the Star of Leadership (Shōsei)


Example Techniques:

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(Nanto Seiken: Koshū Ken Genjutsu- Yuugen Sho) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Lone Eagle Fist Illusionary Arts- Phantasmal Fists
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user begins by molding chakra and sending it into an opponent's system, putting both hands palms out facing the enemy. They will then begin to circle both hands outwards like making a sideways 8 as the user disappears from view, only the encircling hands remain as the background goes black and more hands appear encircling the area 360* horizontally around the target. In reality, the user swiftly maneuvers to behind the enemy, molding Futon chakra to the hands and strikes, thrusting with both hands together like a blade hard enough to pierce bone.

~Notes~
-Must have mastered Nanto Seiken arts
-No other Genjutsu this turn or the next
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-reference-

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-New technique added-
(Nanto Seiken: Koshū Ken Roku Sei Hakuroken - Rekkyaku Kuubu) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Lone Eagle Six Stars White Herron Fist - Cataclysmic Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A counter-counter strike. When a high strike by the user is blocked and countered, the user, while reacting to the counter attack, does a backwards handspring concentrating a slicing blade of wind to their foot, slicing vertically into the opponent. the user continues gathering wind chakra thru out their body, releasing it clockwise around themselves as they pivot off their planted foot with their other foot raised high in a slicing attack, resembling a miniature tornado.

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Must master Nanto Seiken arts to use
-reference-

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(Nanto Seiken: Nanto Hōō Ken - Tensho Juuji Ho) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Imperial Phoenix Fist - Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance
Rank: A
Type: Supplemental/Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: When a formidable opponent appears, this stance less style's basis is discarded, and the Heaven's Soaring Cross Phoenix Stance can be performed. The user starts by putting both arms straight outwards to the sides, palms pointing outwards as he gathers his wind chakra thru out his body. Thru proper chakra control and manipulation, The wind chakra can be controlled to cover the hands in slicing blades of wind that can be used to attack with this style (double handed slicing strikes) in cqc, or can be whipped upwards quickly launching the chakra forwards in a vertical line of slicing wind up to mid range. Furthermore, entering this stance allows one to access the Wings of Nanto. By focusing and using chakra control, wind chakra can be accumulated to the entire back regain and released from the body in a surge, allowing one to travel from one range to another at 2x's speed (ie; short-mid, mid-long) from the burst of wind, however, doing so will end this jutsu immediately and cannot be performed to go upwards, just straight forwards in the direction the user is facing, and also suffers immediate drawbacks upon use (listed in notes).

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Must master Nanto Seiken arts
-Can only be used 1x per battle
-Can only use Wind jutsu A rank and below while using, as well as Tai/Kenjutsu
-Last 2 turns unless Wings of Nanto is used
-No other Nanto Seiken techniques while this is in use and also for 1 turn after use, and slower reflexes by 1/2 for 1 turn after it ends
-reference-

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(Nanto Seiken: Suichō Ken - Gisei sutā no Taron) - South Dipper Holy Fist: Waterfowl Fist - Talons of the Justice Star
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Bird seal and molding water chakra within, the user will manipulate the chakra to their fists, particularly their 4 fingers on each hand, creating 1 inch blades of visible water coming from the tip of each finger, that are focused and razor sharp. The user will dash at the opponent doing a series of Tiger claw type slashes, and can combine other taijutsu strikes into the attack.

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Must master Nanto Seiken arts
-The blades cannot be thrown
-Cannot mold other chakra while using due to having to concentrate Suiton chakra to the blades, but can use Taijutsu
-reference- (Notes:Clearly the effects he achieves in the video would differ in our RP ie; their head wouldn't be sliced into pieces as the blades cannot pierce that deep)

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Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have Futon, Suiton, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu completed to learn
-User gains heightened reflexes and reaction time because of training in Nanto Seiken as compared to a standard Strong Fist Taijutsu user
-Must be at least Kage rank to train in Nanato Seiken arts
-Only one style of Nanto Shinken can be used at once, and the user must wait one turn after using to use Nanto Seiken techniques
-Cannot use Wings of Nanto until mastering Nanto Seiken arts
-Must know all Nanto Seiken related techniques to be considered a master in the style


That's what I went with, hopefully I didnt nerf or op it too much

 

[Nebula]

(Raiton: Kurushimi no Eda) - Lightning Release: Branches of Suffering
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers raiton chakra in the ground underneath the target and makes a motion with his hand, lifting up. This brings about several sharp branches consisting of dense bright white raiton chakra to emerge up from the ground piercing through the target's body all over and pinning them up in the air as the branches rise farther to resemble a dead tree. This technique paralyzes the targeted areas and splits up into more spears of lightning as it pierces through the target. It is up to the user how large the tree becomes and it may even become large enough to capture a bird up in the sky or a giant summon such as Gamabunta.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

 

[Shinta]

Fūton: Torie - (Wind Release: Saving Grace)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A/S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user begins by rapidly charging and releasing a full-body surge of rotating wind from all over their body that then expands outwards to short-range. This is done by charging their chakra and releasing it with the motion of extending their arms and legs in the star position (Arms outstretched to the side, legs outstretched and spaced outside shoulder width), the end result is that the user will be able to suddenly halt their directional momentum and hover momentarily using the spinning of the wind. This is particularly useful if one has been sent flying in the air and wants to regain a sense of control, by performing this jutsu they will be able to stop the uncontrolled movement and hover for a brief moment to give them enough time to assess their position. As a secondary application of the jutsu, the any jutsu that would normally cover the opponent would be pushed off and away from the user, so long as they are able to move their limbs. An example of this would be to prevent a massive amount of fire from burning the user, by creating a spinning current of wind that deflects the flame around the user, respecting the elemental advantages/disadvantages of course. It will also deflect solid object away from the user up to and including A-ranks (S-rank for specialist in wind) as well as people. Those who specialise or have a natural wind affinity will be able to create an S-rank version of this jutsu, other users will only be able to create an A-rank version. However, the momentum halting ability is not strengthened or weakened by the rank.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta.
- Can only be used four times a match.
- For the rank increase, Wind must be listed as either primary (one seal for jutsu) or secondary speciality (Faster seals), else they will only be able to use the A-rank applications.

Not sure what I reasonable usage limit is for S-ranks any more >__< Anyway, been a while since I made customs so constructive criticism is much appreciated xD

Might think up some more soon-ish.

Suraidingu Gōriki Senpū - (Sliding Great Whirlwind)
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 60
Description: The user first steps towards their target, dropping to their knees while leaning back against the ground while their left hand used to catch their fall. This motion is to duck under a kick/punch/slash of the opponent in order to leave them open or can be a simple way to get in close to proceed with the attack. At the very moment the user catches their fall, they will perform a swift snap-kick with there right foot aimed at the opponents head. This kick would make contact at the point after the opponents countered attack should have hit for maximum effect. The user then pushes their weight off their left hand and rotates their upper body which is still parallel to the ground, acting as a pivot point to gain spinning momentum for which they will follow up the first kick with a second spinning kick to the back of the opponents head, this time using there left foot. Carrying the momentum through, the user then completed another rotation after placing there left foot on the ground, using it as an anchor to make a final kick this time with their right heel that smashes into the opponent's sending them hurtling short-range away from the user. Due to each kick being aimed at the targets head, it will induce great pain and will leave them possibly dazed from the sequence of kicks.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta
- Can only be used five times a match
- Instead of starting off on their left hand, the user can switch sides and start on their right hand instead, to change the side the kicks come from. For example, instead of starting with a right kick, left kick, right kick; the user may opt to land on their right hand, left kick, right kick, left kick instead.


This one may be a little harder to understand as I saw it in a movie I just watched .__.

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May have misread how he did it since it happens kinda fast.

 

[evilshade]

I have a question. Can we use/ make sound jutsu or not?

 

[Pekoms]

You may make sound customs, so long as you have learned Sound Release.​

 

[Leathercandle]

Derflinger
Type:Weapon/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 To activate effect
Damage: n/a
Description:Derflinger is a sword forged and used six thousand years ago by a human girl called "Sasha the Elf". The sword takes a very minimal amount of chakra from the user (in numbers, not even "1" chakra, so it doesn't actually effect the user in the rp) to see if it is its master. The sword will weigh hundreds of tons if it is not the same chakra as it's master. Derflinger was forges with a special kind of chakra called "Void Chakra" which all the users have died out thousands of years ago. This Void Chakra allows the sword to be able to think. The thoughts of the sword and user are connected, so Derflinger can notify the user of danger if it needs to. Derflinger loses complete "vision" after mid range, which means it cannot notify the user what is happening farther than mid range.
-Can only be used by bios of Leathercandle
-Because of the strong metal it was forged out of, Derflinger is indestructible except if in contact with forbidden attacks
-To be clear, Derflinger doesn't have sensory abilities, it can just see like what a human can see
-Activating Derflinger counts as one of the three moves which can be used per turn



What do you people think, too op? Also can this be made if I dont have A rank in kenjutsu? I might add an attack with this as well. Thoughts?

 

[Shinta]

Mentioning Void chakra will get ot declined, since void is a custom element and you can't make up forms of chakra. The weighs x-amount unless the owner is holding it, crosses into fuuinjutsu; meaning you'd need fuuin training. See sensor weapons have a small chance of approval, same as sentient weapons and swords. So a sentient sword with the ability to see has little chance of being approved sorry, mainly for the initial reasons I have above.

 

[Nebula]

(Getsuga Jūjishō) - Moon Fang Cross-Shaped Piercer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40 (per projectile)
Damage: 60-80 (per projectile)
Description: Much like the Samurai sabre technique, the user channels their chakra into their two swords and absorbs it into the blades. They will then execute two intersecting cuts through the air sending two dense crescent blades of chakra flying in the shape of a cross.
-Each projectile is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra charge.
-Must have learned samurai sabre.

 

[Vegeta]

(Getsuga Jūjishō) - Moon Fang Cross-Shaped Piercer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40 (per projectile)
Damage: 60-80 (per projectile)
Description: Much like the Samurai sabre technique, the user channels their chakra into their two swords and absorbs it into the blades. They will then execute two intersecting cuts through the air sending two dense crescent blades of chakra flying in the shape of a cross.
-Each projectile is capable of countering ninjutsu of equal rank due to the chakra charge.
-Must have learned samurai sabre.

its cool, but the part about countering chakra. raw chakra is weak by one rank to elemental chakra

 

[Leathercandle]

Mentioning Void chakra will get ot declined, since void is a custom element and you can't make up forms of chakra. The weighs x-amount unless the owner is holding it, crosses into fuuinjutsu; meaning you'd need fuuin training. See sensor weapons have a small chance of approval, same as sentient weapons and swords. So a sentient sword with the ability to see has little chance of being approved sorry, mainly for the initial reasons I have above.

Alright, thanks for the info. So you said "little chance", which means if I edit the fuuin and void stuff theres a small chance of approval?

 

[Nebula]

@Vegeta

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(Samurai Guntou no Jutsu) Samurai Sabre Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is unique to samurai, which employs the concept of chakra flow techniques similar to the flying sparrow and Kusanagi: Chidori katana. Through the use of chakra flow the user channels their chakra through their swords his extends the reach and the cutting ability of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction as shown from how it destroyed a stone pillar. The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation, as they can form their chakra blades into giant buzz saws, broad swords, spiked shafts, and axes. This ability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage, and surprise attacks as needed.(The technique is capable of countering Ninjutsu of A rank and below due to the chakra charge technique).
Note: Can only be taught and used by a Samurai Bio

@Candle

If you put the weapon at S-rank then I think that means it will survive S-rank and below jutsu. For the sensing ability you would have to describe it by saying it has normal 360° vision up to mid range and say whether it communicates vocally or something else. You also need to state the weapon's appearance like what type of sword is it anyway?. Instead of the void history stuff you should say that some warrior's soul is sealed in it.

 

[Shinta]

Alright, thanks for the info. So you said "little chance", which means if I edit the fuuin and void stuff theres a small chance of approval?

Then you have a useless, overdone sentient sword. O__O'

 

[Leathercandle]

@Vegeta

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(Samurai Guntou no Jutsu) Samurai Sabre Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is unique to samurai, which employs the concept of chakra flow techniques similar to the flying sparrow and Kusanagi: Chidori katana. Through the use of chakra flow the user channels their chakra through their swords his extends the reach and the cutting ability of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction as shown from how it destroyed a stone pillar. The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation, as they can form their chakra blades into giant buzz saws, broad swords, spiked shafts, and axes. This ability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage, and surprise attacks as needed.(The technique is capable of countering Ninjutsu of A rank and below due to the chakra charge technique).
Note: Can only be taught and used by a Samurai Bio

@Candle

If you put the weapon at S-rank then I think that means it will survive S-rank and below jutsu. For the sensing ability you would have to describe it by saying it has normal 360° vision up to mid range and say whether it communicates vocally or something else. You also need to state the weapon's appearance like what type of sword is it anyway?. Instead of the void history stuff you should say that some warrior's soul is sealed in it.

Good ideas thanks!

Then you have a useless, overdone sentient sword. O__O'

Well I said I might add attacks to it, I just need to get to the rank of the elements used in the attack O___O'

 

[Shinta]

Also, saying it is indestructible up to F-rank, implies you would try to use the sword to,block attacks in it's unaltered form. Just say indestructible and it's fine.

 

[Leathercandle]

Also, saying it is indestructible up to F-rank, implies you would try to use the sword to,block attacks in it's unaltered form. Just say indestructible and it's fine.

Alright, thanks

 

[Vegeta]

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(Hokuto Shinken) - Big Dipper God Fist
Type:RaitonFutonTaijutsu
Background:During Ancient times there was a secret art passed down by an clan unknown to most of the Ninja world. That clan was the Hokuto clan of the Hidden Moon. The main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination. For 1800 years, 1 successor per generation would chose the most worthy of his students to receive the title of "Fist of the Northstar". Due to the deadliness of it's original form, Hokuto Shinken could only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who were not chosen to inherit the succession were to renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed rendering their jutsu useless. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart. This rule would lead to the demise of all the Hokuto clan except one...the one who would be chosen by Ryuken, the previous successor and his adoptive father, as the true Fist of the Northstar! His name was Kenshiro, the youngest of the Hokuto brothers. After Ryuken chose Kenshiro as his successor, he was slain by Raoh in a fit of jealous rage, a feat made possible by chance; he suffered a stroke at the moment he was about to seal Raoh's fist. Roah left bent on taking the title from Kenshiro by force, but not before Ryuken spoke to Raoh of Hokuto's Ultimate form, Musō Tensei, an ability Ryuken, laughing in the face of death, said was unattainable by Raoh, his great ambition stopping him from ever knowing true sorrow.
Now aware of Roah's true intention's and with a blood lust for vengeance, Ken seeks out Raoh to avenge their father. During the course of battle, the pain of loss of friend and foe alike took a toll on Kenshiro, and the deep sorrow that he bared eventually awakened the state of Musō Tensei, and a revelation of the style's future form. This shook Raoh to the core, experiencing the sensation of fear for the first time as he remembers Ryuken's dying words to him. After an hour of fighting, Raoh had fallen. Kenshiro, now battered and bloody, drops to one knee next to Raoh, who smiles at Kenshiro and expresses his regret for killing their father, and that he knew Kenshiro was truly worthy now. As Roah, the only person Ken truly considered a friend died, he decided that the bloody cycle created by Hokuto Shinken's "1 successor per generation" rule must be changed.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Kenshiro spent years developing a new style of Hokuto Shinken. The new style called for attacking straight thru others' attacks, taking collateral damage in order to successfully land a blow (Must enter Musō Tensei). By hardening ones mind and spirit thru Musō Tensei, he is able to take attacks that would have stopped his attacks from landing in stride, continuing his attack like nothing had happened, though, when the battle was over and the adrenaline rush stops, the user would feel every attack that landed on them (described below in Muso Tensei). Kenshiro changed the style from being almost invulnerable to attacks, to simply being mentally tough enough to fight thru lower ranked attacks despite being attacked simultaneously, as well as implementing his knowledge of Futon and Raiton chakra into attacks achieving the same piercing/paralyzing effects of the original style. The user must enter Musō Tensei to use the abilities of Hokuto Shinken

Example Techniques:

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(Hokuto Shinken - Musō Tensei) Big Dipper God Fist - Nil-Thought Rebirth
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: A mixture of the total style of Hokuto Shinken and the catalyst to the new Hokuto style. It is said that the strongest thing in this world is nothingness. Mastering that nothingness to gather souls, that is Musō Tensei. The user begins by performing The Heaven breaking stance, clearing his mind while molding their chakra, allowing the user is to enter the Nil-Thought Rebirth. Considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shinken, Musō Tensei is learn-able only by one who has known infinite sadness, to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades who's secrets have been carved into his soul by the sadness of battle, helping them to achieve a conscious state of "nothingness", making them appear emotionless and impervious to physical attacks (C rank and below with-in reason), though the damage will still be taken, the user can battle thru the pain as if they were never attacked (Though attacks to vital points would still kill/severe limbs/etc;). In addition, one gains heightened reflexes for a short period, and can, on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry an incoming attack (with-in reason)
~Notes~
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Because of the connection to the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, customs created by others and taught to the user gain a +10 damage, customs created by the user do not gain the bonus
-Dodging or parrying follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu 1 turn sooner if used and can only be performed once per battle
-The user will be unaffected by outside distractions making his reflexes increase for for the duration of Musō Tensei, allowing him to react at the level of a 2 tomoe Sharingan
-Effects last 3 turns
-After effects wear off, the user will feel the effects from whatever attacks occurred to them while in the state of Musō Tensei
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shinken
-Cannot use Hokuto Shinken for 3 turns after this ends

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(Hokuto Shinken - Himitsu no Jutsu: Tenha Kassatsu) Big Dipper God Fist - Secret Technique: Heaven's Impalement
Type:Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate defenses of Hokuto Shinken , Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from the brink of peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing wind chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of wind chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy, sending them flying backwards
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down

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(Hokuto Shinken - Zange no Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist - Fist of Penitence
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After gathering raiton chakra to the fists, the user will swing both fists horizontally towards each other with the thumbs out, connecting the thumbs with the targets temples, conducting the raiton chakra from both fist into the target's head, brain, and body seriously shocking them and stunning them for 1 turn, and given the right circumstances, critical damage could occur.
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Only usable 3 times per battle
-immobilizes and stuns for 1 turn

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(Hokuto Shinken - Hokuto dōbutsu aigo Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist: - North Star Humane Fist
Rank: B
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Toki, Kenshiro's pacifist brother, defined the highest pleasure as the absence of suffering and pleasure itself as "freedom from pain in the body and freedom from turmoil in the soul" and thus created the North Star Humane Fist jutsu. The pleasure center is the set of brain structures, predominantly the nucleus accumbens, which will produce great pleasure when stimulated electrically. By performing the Tiger seal, the user will send a small amount of their Raiton chakra into the targets brain, particularly the pleasure center, allowing the enemy to "Experience Heaven before death", alleviating any pain.

~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Must be taught by -Vegeta

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have completed Wind, Lightning, and Taijutsu to train in Hokuto Shinken
-User gains heightened reflexes and reaction time when using Hokuto Shinken when compared to a regular Strong Fist taijutsu user
-Must enter a state of Musō Tensei to use Hokuto Shinken
-After Musō Tensei ends, the user will suffer slower reaction time for 1 turn
-Must be Kage rank or higher to learn and must be taught all techniques to be considered a Master at Hokuto Shinken

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✦ Declined, OPed and has been done before, notably in the usage of Sixth Sense and Willpower of NB Tai ✦

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(Hokuto Shinken) - Big Dipper God Fist
Type:RaitonFutonTaijutsu
Background:During Ancient times there was a secret art passed down by an clan unknown to most of the Ninja world. That clan was the Hokuto clan of the Hidden Moon. The main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination. For 1800 years, 1 successor per generation would chose the most worthy of his students to receive the title of "Fist of the Northstar". Due to the deadliness of it's original form, Hokuto Shinken could only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who were not chosen to inherit the succession were to renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed rendering their jutsu useless. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart. This rule would lead to the demise of all the Hokuto clan except one...the one who would be chosen by Ryuken, the previous successor and his adoptive father, as the true Fist of the Northstar! His name was Kenshiro, the youngest of the Hokuto brothers. After Ryuken chose Kenshiro as his successor, he was slain by Raoh in a fit of jealous rage, a feat made possible by chance; he suffered a stroke at the moment he was about to seal Raoh's fist. Roah left bent on taking the title from Kenshiro by force, but not before Ryuken spoke to Raoh of Hokuto's Ultimate form, Musō Tensei, an ability Ryuken, laughing in the face of death, said was unattainable by Raoh, his great ambition stopping him from ever knowing true sorrow.
Now aware of Roah's true intention's and with a blood lust for vengeance, Ken seeks out Raoh to avenge their father.During the course of battle, the pain of loss of friend and foe alike took a toll on Kenshiro, and the deep sorrow that he bared eventually awakened the state of Musō Tensei, and a revelation of the style's future form. This shook Raoh to the core, experiencing the sensation of fear for the first time as he remembers Ryuken's dying words to him. After an hour of fighting, Raoh had fallen. Kenshiro, now battered and bloody, drops to one knee next to Raoh, who smiles at Kenshiro and expresses his regret for killing their father, and that he knew Kenshiro was truly worthy now. As Roah, the only person Ken truly considered a friend died, he decided that the bloody cycle created by Hokuto Shinken's "1 successor per generation" rule must be changed.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The main components of Hokuto Shinken are usage of taijutsu, futon and raiton to achieve piercing and paralyzing effects thru precise striking, as well as focusing to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and friends thru the usage of Musō Tensei, giving a boost to CJ's taught to the user while Musō Tensei is active.

Example Techniques:

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(Hokuto Shinken - Musō Tensei) Big Dipper God Fist - Nil-Thought Rebirth
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: It is said that the strongest thing in this world is nothingness. Mastering that nothingness to gather souls to help in battle, that is Musō Tensei. The user begins by performing The Heaven breaking stance, clearing his mind while molding their chakra, allowing the user is to enter the Nil-Thought Rebirth. Considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shinken, Musō Tensei is learn-able only by one who has known infinite sadness, focusing to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades who's secrets have been carved into his soul by the sadness of battle,(ie; their techniques learned by the user), and can, on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry one incoming attack (with-in reason)
~Notes~
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Because of the connection to the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, customs created by others and taught to the user gain a +10 damage, customs created by the user do not gain the bonus
-Dodging or parrying follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu 1 turn sooner if used and can only be performed once per battle
-Effects last 3 turns
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shinken
-Cannot use Hokuto Shinken for 2 turns after this ends

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Tenma No Kamae: The Heaven breaking stance form:

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(Hokuto Shinken - Himitsu no Jutsu: Tenha Kassatsu) Big Dipper God Fist - Secret Technique: Heaven's Impalement
Type:Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate defenses of Hokuto Shinken , Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from the brink of peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing wind chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of wind chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy, sending them flying backwards
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down

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(Hokuto Shinken - Zange no Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist - Fist of Penitence
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After gathering raiton chakra to the fists, the user will swing both fists horizontally towards each other with the thumbs out, connecting the thumbs with the targets temples, conducting the raiton chakra from both fist into the target's head, brain, and body seriously shocking them and stunning them for 1 turn, and given the right circumstances, critical damage could occur.
~Notes~
-Must have started Hokuto Shinken
-Only usable 3 times per battle
-immobilizes and stuns for 1 turn

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(Hokuto Shinken - Hokuto dōbutsu aigo Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist: - North Star Humane Fist
Rank: C
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Toki, Kenshiro's pacifist brother, defined the highest pleasure as the absence of suffering and pleasure itself as "freedom from pain in the body and freedom from turmoil in the soul" and thus created the North Star Humane Fist jutsu. The pleasure center is the set of brain structures, predominantly the nucleus accumbens, which will produce great pleasure when stimulated electrically. By performing the Tiger seal, the user will send a small amount of their Raiton chakra into the targets brain, particularly the pleasure center, allowing the enemy to "Experience Heaven before death", alleviating any pain.

~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Must be taught by -Vegeta

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have completed Wind, Lightning, and Taijutsu to train in Hokuto Shinken
-User gains heightened reflexes and reaction time when using Hokuto Shinken when compared to a regular Strong Fist taijutsu user
-Must be Kage rank or higher to learn and must be taught all techniques to be considered a Master at Hokuto Shinken

 

[Nebula]

(Ninjutsu: Sutandingu Obēshon) - Ninja arts: Standing Ovation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user snaps his fingers and creates a blue, cuboid barrier around the head of his opponent. Bringing the palms of his hands together, the practitioner emits a shockwave of chakra from them. When the wave hits his opponent, the barrier turns red before falling away, decapitating the victim in the process. This technique can be used against multiple opponents at once.

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