[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[SSW Imp]

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Sword Of the Bloody Mist
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short [Mid with extended arm]
Chakra Cost: N/A [ + 10 If added with Wind chakra]
Damage Points: +10 with fire shrouded
Description: The Sword of the Secretive Mist was crafted in the great Village of Kirigakure. It is still a mystery today of the creation of the sword. It was created hundreds of years ago, but was lost after being dropped off of a cliff and into the abyss of Kirigakure's lakes. After years of searching, the villagers eventually found the sword on top of the highest peak. It was an amazing sight as the sword stayed straight as the strong winds hit against it. This is how it received its name. The circles on the hilt allow the user to amplify the wind chakra and release it outward causing the rings of wind to shoot outward. This sword has seen countless battles and has seen all of the battles in death. The blade is about a meter and a third in length and its handle is about a fourth of a meter. It's hilt is two circles converged onto each other which gives the appearance of an infinity sign.

Can only be used by Kisamerox9

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Done countless times before and attempted countless times before.

Summoning Animal: Pegasus
Scroll Owner: Kisamerox9
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None right now
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None
Description and Background: Pegasus are winged divine horses usually depicted as white in color. They have been recorded in Ancient Greek history. They were a symbol of wisdom to the Greeks. These winged horses were used to bring warriors into battle. These animals were also depicted in emblems during World War 2. Although these creatures can fly, a human may be able to capture one of these, and train them to carry people. Although these creatures are not found regularly and are in fact very rare, there homes are usually in dark caves.
Although these creatures seem very majestic and magical, but they are only white horses with feathered wings. These creatures could fly as fast as they could run and were very hard to find. After some of the creatures were found they were breaded and used for summoning. Anyone with the summoning contract and a Pegasus tattoo can summon these animals.

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[Daemon]

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(Taijutsu: Zanzou ) -Fighting Technique: Afterimage
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user charges towards the enemy at full speed, but instead of colliding the user uses their raw speed to swing around the opponent to end up behind them without them knowing. There is a faint after image left in front of the user that would then disappear. This technique serves as the taijutsu equivalent to the substitution technique but this particular technique takes more time and training to master.
Restrictions:
-Can only be taught be Daemon
-can be used 3 times per battle.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. This was attempted many times before.

(Gohoshiyamakirite ) -5 Star Mountain Cutter
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: 120
Description: The user focuses 90% of their chakra into their sword. The chakra that is present in this sword is so overwhelming it manifests itself into a physical form showing a chakra protrusion all around the blade in the shape of star. The chakra in the sword his then forcibly condensed and packed together. Using the skill of chakra manipulation, The user refines and sharpens the tips of the star. The condensed chakra is then released in a large impact destroying the terrain underneath the user creating a small crater. The sudden release of chakra is channeled into the user as a rush of chakra that serves as a speed boost for later. The stance of the user is changed holding the sword over their head and a crouching position. The user than leans forward and releases the chakra absorbs from their body in a big burst of speed that propels the user forward with blinding speeds leaving a blur in their tracks. The user then appears in front of the opponent and does a vertical slash downward All the chakra in the blade is released letting out a large cutting force able to slice clean through a mountain, a bijuu, or slice directly through the earth leaving a mark.
How the attack looks when the chakra is release when hitting the enemy:

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How the cutting through the ground would look like (1:44)

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-Can only be taught be Daemon
-can be used 1 times per battle.
- No S-ranks for 2 turns

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±± Declined ±± Wrong damage info. 90% of your chakra? that is not 50 chakra points... Remove that nonsense. resubmit this after making it reasonable and i'll check it.

(Taijutsu: Zanzou ) -Fighting Technique: Thin Skin
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses a thin layer of chakra above of their skin through their pores. The chakra is connected to the users nervous system making that chakra extremely sensitive. This is used to detect and react faster to incoming attacks that travel through the air. For example, if a shinobi throws a kunai at the user and this skill is active, the kunai can be detected at close range due to the vibrations of it moving through the air which the chakra that is connected to the nervous system is sensitive enough to detect.
-Can only be taught be Daemon
-Lasts 5 turns.

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[Howard]

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(Sono Niiro Ontou Te) The Red Right Hand
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This weapon is mainly for defensive and offensive purposes in Short Range combat. It's a multi-plated arm guard that runs up the side of the wielder's arm leaving no visible skin it is form fitting to the arm thus able to block thrown objects such as Kunai and Shuriken quite easily but if they are connected to an Explosive tag of some sort the user must still deal with that as the Guard won't block the explosion or flash. The Guard surrounds the arm and is made of two special types of metal both are quite malleable and versitile the metal has a special propety; the metal is able absorb the wielder's chakra storing it then infusing their punches with the chakra much to the same extent Sakura and Tsunade do but the user doesn't need to focus on the chakra level like Sakura and Tsunade, the Arm Guard does it for the wielder maintaining chakra flow from the user to the Guard. The punches are enough to crack bones and bruise and batter the body. The stored chakra can also be focused into one massive punch deemed "La Muerte" in which the chakra gathers at the top of the arm guard in a mass of blueish chakra that powers down through the arm guard and into the wielder's punch/hand the chakra in no way forms a blast but absorbs into the Arm Guard and then into the user's hand. The punch is not so much driven by muscle power but by the chakra that is infused into the punch. The user must make contact with the opponent for the punch to effect the opponent if done so the punch is enough to shatter bones and bruise and bash internal organs. La Muerte is easily able to break multiple ribs in one shot and bruise and bash internal organs such as the lungs, heart, and stomach depending on where the punch lands if used properly this can make breathing much harder and put excess pressure on the internal organs making quick movements painful and in some cases almost impossible. La Muerte is comparable to an A rank attack as that is how much chakra is focused into the punch. The Arm Guard can also be used defensively to block Basic Taijutsu attacks up to B rank but can only be done 3 times per battle. La Muerte kind of resembles Jugo's CM punches in a way as well as Tsunade and Sakura's chakra infused punches. The blades on the guard are sharp enough to easily cut flesh and defend against sword strikes as well as kunai and other bladed weapons.
Notes:
-While activated the user cannot perform jutsu that require handseals
-La Muerte counts as a jutsu and can only be used 3 times never in the same turn
-Punches while wielding this weapon can easily break bones
-Blocking of Taijutsu attacks counts as a jutsu as only a jutsu can block a jutsu
-Can only be wielded by Howard
-Can be activated only once during the battle and deactivated once during the battle when deactivated the user can perform Hand Seals again
-Can only be activated for a span of 6 turns

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(Sono Niiro Ontou Te) The Red Right Hand and The Devil's Left
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (La Muerta) (+10 to punching techs excluding La Mueta)
Description: This weapon is mainly for defensive and offensive purposes in Short Range combat such as close range taijutsu. It's a set of multi-plated arm guards that run up the side of the wielder's arms leaving no visible skin. They are both form fitting thus able to block thrown objects such as Kunai and Shuriken quite easily but if they are connected to an Explosive tag of some sort the user must still deal with that as the Guard won't block the explosion or flash. The guards surround the wielder's arms and are made of two special types of metal both are quite malleable and versatile the metals have a special property; the metals are able absorb the wielder's chakra directly from his chakra reserves without his permission or consent storing it then infusing their punches with the chakra much to the same extent Sakura and Tsunade do but the user won't have to focus on the chakra level like Sakura and Tsunade, the Arm Guards do it for the wielder maintaining chakra flow from the user to the Guards. The punches are enough to crack bones and bruise and batter the body. The stored chakra can also be focused into one massive punch deemed "La Muerte" in which the chakra gathers at the finger tips and infuses into the wielder's punch/hand the chakra in no way forms a blast but absorbs into the part of the arm guard that covers the fingers and then into the user's hand. The punch is not so much driven by muscle power but by the chakra that is infused into the punch it can be accomplished with either fist. The user must make contact with the opponent however for the punch to effect the opponent if done so the punch is enough to shatter bones and bruise and bash internal organs. La Muerte is easily able to break multiple ribs in one shot and bruise and bash internal organs such as the lungs, heart, and stomach depending on where the punch lands if used properly this can make breathing much harder and put excess pressure on the internal organs making quick movements painful and in some cases almost impossible. La Muerte is comparable to an A rank attack as that is how much chakra is focused into the punch. The Arm Guard can also be used defensively to block Basic Taijutsu attacks up to B rank but can only be done 3 times per battle. La Muerte kind of resembles Jugo's CM punches in a way as well as Tsunade and Sakura's chakra infused punches. The blades on the guard are sharp enough to easily cut flesh and defend against sword strikes as well as kunai and other bladed weapons. They are both insulated and therefor make very bad conductors they can be imbued with a chakra nature however much like that of a sword or a kunai.

Finally the user can fully consent to the guards' absorption of his chakra, and instead of fighting against it let it devour vast amounts of chakra this lets the guards morph and twist taking over the user's body. The guard will extend taking over the user's upper body and shattering his mental state. At this point the user will grow mad with power unable to properly control himself relying completely on instinct. The guards begin to force chakra back into the user's body increasing his strength slightly (+5 to Taijutsu) and allowing him defense against most sword strikes and most taijutsu aimed at the upper body. This only lasts for 3 turns and after the user is completely exhausted unable to perform hand seals or use ninjutsu at all.

Notes:
-La Muerte counts as a jutsu and can only be used 3 times never in the same turn
-Punches while wielding this weapon can easily break bones
-Blocking of Taijutsu attacks counts as a jutsu as only a jutsu can block a jutsu
-Can only be wielded by Howard
-The guards can be activated only once during the battle and deactivated once during the battle
-Can only be activated for a span of 6 turns another 3 turns are added if the user then consents to the chakra absorption process. This can only be used once.
-The user will not be able to use hand seals or Ninjutsu for 3 turns after the deactivation of the final chakra absorbsion process and will lose 15 damage points to taijutsu (-15) and 15 damage points to Ninjutsu (-15) leaving him excessively vulnerable.

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±± Update Approved ±± Don't go too far with the strength boost and this sort of insulating abilities or "most Taijutsu or Sword attacks". Since you didn't rank it, it only stands for freeform. And the insulating abilities, again since you didn't rank it, won't amount to anything against lightning techniques.

 

[Xylon]

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X-New Cycle-X ​

Sorry for the delay everyone, studies have kept me occupied. The thread will remain open for another cycle while an issue i'm facing is resolved. For the current and next few cycles i would advise everyone to submit your CJ once and in their complete forms without having the need to edit your techniques.

As usual this cycle will last another 7 days. Starting now, Monday March 11 GMT+5 and ending Sunday March 17th.

Thank you for your patience ^^

 

[Priest]

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Katon: Giji Taiyou - Fire Style: False Sun
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: N/A(+20 per turn after the first turn)
Description: After waving 7 handseals, the user focus his chakra into the air several meters above as he superheats it, then he collects hot compressed gases into a spot in mid air until it forms a massive ball of blazing inferno. The user's uses the radiation from the sun impinging on gaseous matter, aerosols contained in the air, greenhouse gases and dust particle as source material. He simply mixes his katon chakra with them, collects them together, condenses and superheats them. A different variation of chibaku tensei as only gaseous substances are collected. This is smaller compared to the sun, however this causes the terrain to be extremely hot upto 100degrees therefore giving no room for ice to form. With this, cloud is unable to form.
++Last for 5 turns
++Useable only twice
++No S-rank fire while this is active
++though its fast but Takes two move for sun to completely form
++Causes burns to opponent which increases per turn if not countered
++Takes up two move's spot which the user can only use one more move in that turn
++User and his/her summons are not affected


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(Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-40 if splited)
Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of hard lustrous metal alloy of unknown nature but is as hard as diamond with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thin metallic spring that draws doton chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense earth as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure earth chakra (= to A-Rank) is fast and precise and can pierce through B-Rank earth but the arrows
are weak to Lightning.

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Abilities:
-the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
-because of the metallic composition of the bow, it is indestructible
-can fire up to 2 arrows at once but the power is halved for each arrow
-1 Arrow = A-Rank, 2 Arrows = Each arrow is B-Rank

Restrictions:
-can't wave handseals when wielding the bow
-Can't use elemental ninjutsus except earth when wielding the weapon
-Shooting the bow counts as one of the 3 moves per turn, regardless of shooting 2 arrows or only 1.
-Useable only 5 times per battle
-can only be wield and only listen to Mist01

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(Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-40 if splited)
Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of hard lustrous metal alloy of unknown nature but is as hard as diamond with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thin metallic spring that draws 3 different elemental chakras which are earth, water and fire from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of earth, water or fire as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure earth, water or fire chakra (= to A-Rank) is fast and precise and can pierce through B-Rank of its nature but the arrows
still follows their elemental weaknesses.

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Abilities:
-the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
-because of the metallic composition of the bow, it is indestructible
-can fire up to 2 arrow at once but the power is halved for each arrow
-1 Arrow = A-Rank, 2 Arrows = Each arrow is B-Rank

Earth
-The user focuses on his earth chakra and the bow responds to this by forming up to 2 arrows of earth as the user pulls it.
-the arrows are thick and has accient markings on their glossy body.
-An arrow can pierce through B-rank earth and 2 arrows can pierce through C-rank earth each

Water
-The user focuses on his water chakra and the bow responds to this by forming up to 2 arrows of water as the user pulls it.
-the arrows are dense and has blunt glowing body.
-An arrow can pierce through B-rank water and 2 arrows can pierce through C-rank water each.

Fire
-The user focuses on his Fire chakra and the bow responds to this by forming up to 2 arrows of fire as the user pulls it.
-the arrows are thick and has golden scripture markings on their fiery body.
-An arrow can pierce through B-rank fire and 2 arrows can pierce through C-rank fire each

Restrictions:
-can't wave handseals when wielding the bow
-Can't use elemental ninjutsus except earth, water or fire when wielding the weapon
-Shooting from the bow counts as one of the 3 moves per turn, regardless of shooting 2 arrows or only 1.
-each elemental version is useable only 5 times per battle making it useable 15 times in total
-only one elemental version can be used per turn
-can only be wield and only listen to Priest

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Katon: Weldingu Yubi - Fire Style: Welding Fingers
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 30(+5 per turn active)
Damage: 60
Description: An alternative fire release where the user kneads fire chakra into some or all of his ten fingers. He then realeases pressurized fire from the tip of the fingers. The flame has a 5m reach. This is released similarly to the way oxy-acetylene flame is released from a gas welding machine nozzle. The length of the fire can be reduced and increased at will while similarly to pressurised flame, it can cut through something as hard as steel. However elemental weakness is still valid for this.
-Useable 5 times per match
-Only Fire jutsus can be used while active
-Must be taught by Priest.

X-Pending-X Leaving for scorps

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[Negative Knight]

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(Kuro Ito Togatta Tsume) – Dark Threads Serrated Claws
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to Taijutsu attacks)
Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within both of his hands and releases threaded claws (from in between each of his fingers), creating three on each of his hands. Each of the claws are exactly one meter in length and about five centimeters in width. The threaded claws are extremely tightly woven together, making them extremely difficult to break/cut through. As a result of being tightly woven, the claws are also capable of deflecting small projectiles and clashing with swords. The claws themselves are extremely sharp and will slice through human flesh with relative ease. Once the claws pierce someone, the user can cause the individual threads (which make up the claws) to sporadically spike out in every direction, impaling the opponent in an innumerous amount of places.

Note: Lasts for Four Turns
Note: Can only be used Twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Only amplifies the damage of physical hits using the user’s hands

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(Kuro Ito Yajuu No Yoroi) – Dark Threads Lycan Armour
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to Taijutsu attacks)
Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within his entire body and causes a dense armour of dark threads to converge over him, enveloping him head to toe in an armour of spiked dark threads, causing him to resemble a werewolf. His armour of threads is extremely tightly woven together, making it capable of enduring powerful impact forces, clash with swords and deflect small projectiles such as kunai, shuriken, spears and bullets. Due to the full body armour of spiked threads, Kakuzu becomes capable of expelling tendrils from anywhere on his body which can reach up to mid range (10 meters), amplifying the damage of his physical hits and shooting needles of dark threads (five times the size of normal senbon) from anywhere on his body. The needles when shot will impale anything within short range of the user (5 meter radius). The technique also grants him a one meter long tail composed entirely of spiked threads which can be used for physical attacks and be freely manipulated as an additional limb.

Note: Lasts for Four Turns
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Shooting needles count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn

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±± Declined ±± This is pushing it a bit too much and escaping the bio's own feel and nature. Don't forget its a cannon bio.

Raizu| Vengeous
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Vengeous is a large sentient sword created by Kakuzu himself using his dark threads and the heart of a fallen foe. The sword itself is two meters in length (including the hilt) and is the same width as a compacted Samehada. The entirety of the sword is composed of spiky black threads, and the exterior is tightly weaved together into a dense structure, which is impossible to cut through by normal means. The hilt of the sword is constructed of pure obsidian and shape of the blade of itself looks much like a curved arrowhead with its tip resembling a crab’s pincer. The heart inside of the sword is located in the center of the blade and is fully functioning, resulting in Vengeous being considered both a living creature and a sentient ally to Kakuzu. As a result Vengeous is capable of acting of its own accord, rational thought and has a malicious personality inherited from Kakuzu. The sword itself can go weeks without nutrition and has a strict diet of blood which it ingests through its skin. The sword is usually carried around in a black and red scabbard, on the user’s back.

Abilities
-The sword is near impossible to break/cut through due to it’s tightly weaved exterior.

-The sword is capable of releasing dark threads as tendrils to restrict and ensnare the opponent. The tendrils are capable of extending up to five meters and can come from anywhere on the blade. These tendrils can pierce the opponent's body, prevent their mobility or even disarm them of their weapon.

The sword is capable of shooting out countless needles composed entirely of dark threads, which are about thirty centimeters in length and five times the width of a normal senbon. This will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn.

-The blade possess the ability to extend up to two meter spikes from everywhere on the blade or hilt at any time which are capable of skewering through the body of anyone they come into contact with.

-When damaged, the sword can repair itself by growing new layers of dark threads. This is taken further by the sword’s ability to shed the outer layers of its skin, with a new layer of threads growing in its place.

-The sword is capable of crawling, telepathically communicating with Kakuzu and acting of its own accord

Restrictions
-Can only be wielded for five turns per battle
-Kakuzu is unable to use the heart of this sword for "Heart Reaper"
-The sword possess no mouth and isn't capable of talking
-Must have a Kakuzu bio to wield the sword
-Vengeous is incapable of transferring chakra to the wielder
-The Sword can be killed

-Negative Knight is the only person capable of wielding this weapon. In response to anyone else who attempts to wield the blade, the sword erupts in a violent outburst, extending 10 meter spikes from everywhere on its body (including the hilt), severely impaling the unsuspecting wielder.

-The sword possess a symbiotic relationship with the wielder, draining them of chakra every turn to maintain itself

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±± Pending ±± I don't feel I would approve this ever but thats just my "feel" of it. I'll leave it to another mod.

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-Declined- I honestly love the idea and i will consider approving it if you worked well on the abilities a bit more, some need defining and all in general are broad, remove the telepathic stuff, last you say that the sword can be killed, but you say it can't be cut through or broken and when hurt will repair itself, so how can it be killed exactly? =_= i'll give you only one shot at this, and next time if i don't see everything i need i'll DNR it.

 

[Ciberr]

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(Kuchiyose: Sugoi Tiglon Hakaisha) Summoning Great Tiglon Destroyer.
Type: Offensive.
Rank: A ranked.
Range: Short-long.
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will clap his hands together and summon a giant Tiglion the size of the toad summoned when Food cart Destroyer is used. The Tiglion is summoned a few meters above the enemy crashing down ontop of his or her body.

-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have signed the Tiglion Contract.
-Cannot Have a Tiglion already summoned.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Similar to...you guessed it...food card destroyer... >_> Its actually exactly the same.

(Raiton: Raikou ridairekushon Justu) Lightning release: Lightning Redirection Justu
Type: Offensive-Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long (Used short range of the user with Long range range.)
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (Half of damage of absorbed tech original tech to user)
Description: While an incoming raiton attack of B-S ranked is fired at the user the user will extend his arm and fingertips or hand channeling the all the hostile raiton chakra into his/her system upon contact. Thus allowing the user to directing the lightning attack back at the opponent in the form of a sharp beam of fast moving lightning. The strength of the redirected justu is equal to the attack absorbed. The user can use one of his 3 moves to give the absorbed attack strength equal to a F ranked attack(90). If this is the case no raiton justu can be used for the next turn above A rank.

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This justu can only be used twice per battle.
The user will take damage equal to half of the hostile technique which is being redirected.
Must be taught by Ciberr.

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(Raiton: Assai Raikou Boruto) Lightning release: Crushing Lightning Bolt.
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will spin his or her arms into the air softly picking up negative electron charges in the air in seconds causing the local area to turn a light bright blue. The user will then bring his or her arms down towards his or her waist and then fire the lightning from his or her fingertips in the form of a fast moving crushing bolt of lightning that travels in a zig zag until it hits its target. Using this justu allows the user +5 to all raiton justu used over the next 2 turns due to the charging of electrons prior to firing the bolt of lightning.

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This justu can only be used 3 times a battle.
The +5 Effect of this Justu cannot be stacked.
Must be taught by Ciberr.

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[Luiz]

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If need, approved Parrot contract here:

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( Oumu no Jutsu: Hina Katsu ) Parrot Arts: Chick Bomb

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Allows the user to create a parrot chick made of chakra, though resembling a real parrot, which will detonate with the power of a normal paper bomb. These can be created up to mid range and thrown up to long range.
*Can have an added nature, for additional effects*
*One bomb per usage*

Based on Monkey Chase, I should make it more like a passive ability on the summoning description, but I guess this passive technique would work the same.

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( Oumu no Jutsu: Hina Katsu ) Parrot Arts: Chick Bomb

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Allows the user to create a parrot chick made of chakra, though resembling a real parrot, which will detonate with the power of a normal paper bomb. These can be created up to mid range and thrown up to long range.
*Can have an added nature, for additional effects*
*One bomb per usage*

Updating the contract (Link in the quote)

Summoning Animal: Parrots

Scroll Owner:

Luiz

Other Users who have signed contract:

Lili-Chwan

Summoning Boss if existing:

Iris Gloriosa

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Parrot Chicks
Average Parrots
Altorio Parrots
Zé Carioca
Vitória Régia
Saci Pererê
Saci Trique
Saci Saçurá
Lloyd, The Chicken
Carlão
Piu Piu
Nico
Rafael

Origin: Parrots are from a secret Rainforest, on top of a remote plateau, called the Altorio Forest.

General Description: Parrots are colourful and majestic birds, with a diverse pallet of colours and a wide range of shapes. They possess strong beaks and claws, and a are beautiful and agile in the air.

Summon General Abilities: The parrots of Altorio are very strong and fast. And average Parrot from Alto Rio is about the same size as a Lion, and is able to carry up to 2 people on their back without loosing any speed. They all can use chakra, though some have acquired unique abilities, such as Elemental Affinity or other Battle related skills. They are very energetic and warm, and speak in a very thick Portuguese accent.

As described in the Monkey Chase Technique, all birds have an innate sense of direction, guiding themselves through the magnetic field of the earth. In the technique, they use that skill and develop it further to use as highly advanced and efficient tracking method. To expand on that, while requiring the actual technique in order to memorize and track electromagnetic signatures across the globe, parrots have a passive ability to sense the signatures around themselves, within a certain limit. This allows them to sense an opponent around the field, or any other source of electromagnetic emission. The higher ranked the parrot, the longer the radius (Varying, roughly, between 50 meters (D ranks) to 1 km (S ranks). Bosses have generally up to 1,5km radius). Exceptions to these will be described in the individual descriptions of each specialized parrot.

Parrots are able to cast genjutsu on their opponent, but only up to 1 rank above the rank of the technique normally used to summon them to the field. They do this by either clicking their beaks, producing a characteristic sound personal to each parrot, or by flashing their colorful feathers. Exceptions to these will be described in the individual descriptions of each specialized parrot.

Summoning: The person who signs this contract is able to summon parrots from Altorio, and can also be summoned by parrots. In case of an unsuccessfully summoning, or the usage of a very small amount of chakra, the user calls forth a baby chick, without much use in a battle other than being very cute. The canon Summoning Jutsu calls forth common parrots, from average size or smaller, but with no special abilities other then a random small weapon. Using specific amounts of chakra, the user can summon special parrots, with special abilities, all up to the Boss. (Which will be submitted using the official template)

Note: Link to Monkey Chase in the quote


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±± All Pending ±± Like i told you, its best if you took ownership of this contract in your main.

 

[-Cerberus-]

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(Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Stinker

Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground to summon Stinker. Stinker is a green and black dragonfly that is too small to be ridden on. Stinker has the ability to release a colorless poison gas from his abdomen. If inhaled the opponents throat begins to swell, causing difficulty in breathing. They also begin to vomit, similar to a allergic reaction. The gas can reach up to long range. Stinker also has the ability to react to any gas or smoke in the air with his abdomen. Stinker sucks up any smoke or gas in the air, through his abdomen. If stinker sucks up any gas, he automatically, gets reversed summoned, along with the gas.
Note-
-Once summoned Stinker can stay on the field for 4 turns.
- Stinkers ability , uses of the the users jutsu slots-
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract

X-Declined-X Make the gas visible to naked eye

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(Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Stinker

Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground to summon Stinker. Stinker is a green and black dragonfly that is too small to be ridden on. Stinker has the ability to release a orange poison gas from his abdomen. If inhaled the opponents throat begins to swell, causing difficulty in breathing. They also begin to vomit, similar to a allergic reaction. The gas can reach up to long range. Stinker also has the ability to react to any gas or smoke in the air with his abdomen. Stinker sucks up any smoke or gas in the air, through his abdomen. If stinker sucks up any gas, he automatically, gets reversed summoned, along with the gas. The gas can easily be seen by the naked human eye.


Note-
-Once summoned Stinker can stay on the field for 4 turns.
- Stinkers ability , uses of the the users jutsu slots-
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract

X-Approved-X

 

[Gutsy]

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Midoriiro Ha Koutetsu | Green Leaf Armor
Type: Armor
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The Green Leaf Armor is a legendary armor created by Anthony Edward “Tony” Stark. This legendary armor consists of approximately over two million grain-of-sand-sized units, which has been shaped to have as large a surface as possible to optimize their effectiveness. These units that makes up this legendary armor is created with rare type of fiber, which has been tightly woven together to create the armor. Due to the armor being created with over 2 million units of fiber it gives the one who wears barely any restrictions to their movements. No one knows how this armor was created or where the abilities to create it came from. The fiber armor covers the entire user from top to toe, leaving no skin open. The armor around the hands are designed in such a way that you are capable of moving your entire hand and fingers making you capable of performing hand seals and moving freely. The helmet of this armor is created in such a way that it fits the wielder perfectly and only his eyes and mouth are revealed. This armor is perfectly designed to follow the smooth movements of the body, so it does not restrict movement or lower their reflexes. The fiber armor has been painted with a thin layer of gold and green colors. The purpose of the armor is to defend the user against the opponent like any other armor, due to it being constructed of a strong fiber; it is capable of resisting a powerful S-rank jutsu of any basic element, though after a powerful strike of this magnitude the armors defensive abilities will wear off. Besides the defensive purpose of the armor, it has another unique ability, which allows the user to create chakra projectiles, which are made out of pure chakra, which can be shot at the opponent while in combat. The user is capable of shooting out up to 50 chakra projectiles, which has the same strength as a regular kunai flying through the air with the same speed.
Note:
- The Armor can resist one S-rank jutsu
- The Armor is weak against Lightning & Fire
- The Armor can shoot up to 50 pure chakra projectiles

X-Declined-X Its unreasonable, why would the armour would defend you against S rank techniques? Its made of Fibers

(Suiton: Aegir Yuigon) Water Release: Aegir’s Will
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the Serpent – Ox – Tiger – Dragon hand seals, whereas the user will cause the water from the moisture in the air and surrounding water sources will be pulled towards the user to form a large stagnant sphere of water around the user with room for air in the center around the user. The user will then be capable of delivering punches of chakra to the layer of water, and the specific spot on the layer that has been punched will then release a high velocity spike of water in a straight line. These spikes that are being formed extend up to mid-range from the sphere.
Note:
- Can be used trice per battle
- Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
- Needs a water source

X-Declined-X Why does a supplementary technique has offensive and defensive potential as well damage points? They are supposed to be supportive.

(Suiton: Mizu-Suji no Metsubou) Water Release: Water String of Destruction
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: While pointing their index finger straight at the opponent, the user will gather a large amount of suiton chakra inside their finger. While doing so, the user will slowly begin to release their chakra forming it into an incredible thin line of water, similar to that of a thin wire. This thin line of water is controlled by the user’s movement of their finger, and the line is very durable. The user can use this very thin line of water to throw as a whip or entangle the opponent into this line and squeeze the air out of them while holding them in place.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

X-Declined-X Similar to a multitude of existing techniques.

 

[Alyx]

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(Shinfonīātsu: Maesutoro no tsūru)Symphony Arts: Tools of the Maestro
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S-Rank
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:Symphony Arts is a kenjustu style that involves the usage of special made Raipers that blades are made of a special metal that allows the user to play notes similar to a Xylophone with a special stick will infusing there chakra to emit special techniques when a specific sequence is played,the blade will then amplify the sounds of the metal to allow the techniques to activate.The upper part near the tip of the blade is higher in pitch,more in between the raiper the notes are more lower but are still high,while the area near the guard is much lower than the other two parts of the blade,this is achieved as the metal made in the raipers of Symphony Arts are made from different metals welded together in order to allow the effects.These raipers can be summoned via a scroll marked with a musical note with a raiper passing though it,or they can be carried with the user as the beginning of the match.These raipers appear normal but they are actually made with a special mechanism that allows needles of senbons to shoot out when a person how doesn't know the Symphony Arts.

-Can only be used twice if used to summon them but can only summon one raiper.
-Requires technique to be posted as a reference when having a Symphony Art Raiper at the starting of a match.

(Shinfonīātsu: Sāpentain no kōshō)Symphony Arts: Serpentine's Bite
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:n/a
Description:The user will take there raiper,tapping the blade with a small stick that is used for the Symphony Arts,tapping along the top twice,the middle once and three times on the end of the blade,casting a Genjutsu,where the target is listening to a cassette player with classical music playing,they are wearing headphones that is playing the songs at a high tempo making it hard for the target to hear the sounds around them,as they try to remove it the headphones would reshape into snakes and will attempt to bite the target if they continue to try and remove the headphones,while in reality the target is motionless and deaf till the effects of the technique wears off.

-Can only be used 2 times per battle
-Requires a raiper only found in Symphony Arts: Tools of the Maestro
-Can only be taught by Aoi.
-Affects lasts 1 turn,but the target is fully aware of what is going on but has cannot hear the people or objects around them.

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±± All Declined ±± this is a copy of existing abilities made by other members. Also, this would be a CFS if it could be done. DNR.

 

[Flash]

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(Suiton/Futon: Ashita ni kakeru hashi) Water/Wind Release: Bridge Over Troubled Water
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms the Snake handseal and manipulates his water/liquid chakra. By cooling the liquid to a certain degree (should not make it into ice (solid)) by changing the energy levels of the molecules which can be achieved by manipulating the chakra, he decreases the viscosity of the liquid so that it follows the principle of near superfluidity. This makes the liquid molecules less resistant to each other and thereby
increasing their speed. If mastered and practised properly, the user can make the movements of his liquid Justus (techniques), 3x times faster.
-Once used, works till the end of the battle.
-Can only be taught by Flash07

X-Declined-X Moves in to manipulation of elements other then water. PS: i know viscosity of water can be controled.




(Genjutsu: Jimen ni sore o moyasu) Illusion Arts: Burn It To The Ground
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs three handseals and transmits his chakra into the opponent's brain taking control over his five senses. The chakra stays dormant till the opponent comes in close range (or contact) with a metal (probably while taking out his ninja tools/weapons). And when he does that, he notices that there are paperbombs attached to the metal which goes off creating a large explosion and damages him to a great extend. The opponent feels his ears ringing due to the loud explosion, his vision gets hindered due to the fumes created by the explosion, he can also smell the gas created by the explosion. Now this is where the problem starts. The inhaled gas causes the opponent to first choke and then go breathless. He feels lack of oxygen reaching his brains and therefore, he feels like loosing conscious. In reality, the opponent is immobilised on the spot. But his confidence level drops down. His speed, reflexes and power gets reduced by one rank.

Note: The effects lasts for only 3 turns.
Note: No other genjutsu in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

X-Declined-X Damage Points are for?

Note: Took out all 'liquids' and have retained 'water'.


(Suiton/Futon: Ashita ni kakeru hashi) Water/Wind Release: Bridge Over Troubled Water
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms the Snake handseal and manipulates his water chakra. By cooling the water to a certain degree (should not make it into ice (solid)) by changing the energy levels of the molecules which can be achieved by manipulating the chakra, he decreases the viscosity of the liquid so that it follows the principle of near superfluidity. This makes the liquid molecules less resistant to each other and thereby
increasing their speed. If mastered and practised properly, the user can make the movements of his liquid Justus (techniques), 3x times faster.
-Once used, works till the end of the battle.
-Can only be taught by Flash07


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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing customs. DNR.

(Genjutsu: Jimen ni sore o moyasu) Illusion Arts: Burn It To The Ground
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs three handseals and transmits his chakra into the opponent's brain taking control over his five senses. The chakra stays dormant till the opponent comes in close range (or contact) with a metal (probably while taking out his ninja tools/weapons). And when he does that, he notices that there are paperbombs attached to the metal which goes off creating a large explosion and damages him to a great extend. The opponent feels his ears ringing due to the loud explosion, his vision gets hindered due to the fumes created by the explosion, he can also smell the gas created by the explosion. Now this is where the problem starts. The inhaled gas causes the opponent to first choke and then go breathless. He feels lack of oxygen reaching his brains and therefore, he feels like loosing conscious. In reality, the opponent is immobilised on the spot. But his confidence level drops down. His speed, reflexes and power gets reduced by one rank.

Note: The effects lasts for only 3 turns.
Note: The opponent takes a heavy damage due to the mental stress
Note: No other genjutsu in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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±± Declined ±± Virtually equal to 2 existing genjutsu. DNR.

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(Genjutsu: Saite) Illusion Arts: In Bloom
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Usually used on moving targets (even summonings), this genjutsu involves taking control of the opponent's 5 senses and making them immobilised and making them go through a terrible mental stress and pain. The user puts the opponents under genjutsu where they feel a semi-transparent dome surround them and their movements slow down and then suddenly stop as if the gravity of the earth were to decrease. As this happens, at the same time, the opponent suddenly feels himself being lifted into the air (in zero gravity). He feels himself suffocating due to the lack of oxygen. As his body is lifted, he looses control of his limbs and they get stretched all around, away from his body. The body gets stretched more, the more he tries to move his muscle, and thereby putting him in more agony. The lack of oxygen makes him feel dizzy and makes him loose consciousness.
In reality, the opponent stands there immobilised. The more physical pain he receives in the illusion, the same amount of pain is inflicted on his mind. The lack of oxygen (in the illusion) makes him weak hearted, a person who won't fight back effectively and he would give up by not fighting back. His reasoning power will decrease drastically.

-Can only be used twice in a battle.
-No other genjutsu in the same turn.
-Can only be taught by Flash07

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±± Declined ±± This is nothing new.

 

[Rayder]

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(Suiton: Mizukame)- Water release: Water urn
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: 30 damage
Description: The user creates an urn out of condensed water. The urn is made out of a vast quantity of water but is so compacted that it looks small in form and the urn is about the size of a human head. The user can break the urn by smashing it against a surface to unleash the large quantity of water or purposely shoot and control the water inside the urn.
~Can only be used twice

X-Declined-X Its similar to alot of existing techniques.

(Fuuton:toppyoushimonai mure) Wind Release: Crazed Flock
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description: The user pours a vast amount of Fuuton chakra into his arm and swings his arm in front of him in a wide motion. As the arm moves the chakra is released into a large amount of small birds which head to the opponent and making very small whirlwinds with each bird to cut the opponent.

X-Declined-X Tricky shape manipulation with a swing of an arm is unrealistic.

 

[Robot Boy]

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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Yuuen Bouhatei) - Summoning Technique: Grand Mole
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: n/a (60 Doton)
Description: After performing the necessary handsigns the user slams his hand on the ground to summon Grand. One of the strongest among the moles. Grand is 30 cm and wears green colored armor with spikes resembling drills. He can perform earth based techniques up to A-Rank with no handseals and as long as their is a source of ground to work with.

Restriction:
-Can only be called upon once per battle
-lasts for 3 turns.
-Must have signed the mole contract
-Requires a ground source
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(hanma gigei: nenshou hoi-ru) - Hammer Arts: Burning wheel
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses his katon chakra into the hammers head and the end of the grip. The user then, twirls and throws it at the target as its twirling, resembling a flamewheel. The target is then engulfed by the intense flames upon impact. The user can call back the hammer using their chakra after contact has been made.

Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang
-must have a hammer in bio
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(Hanma Gigei: Hanma Dyuo no Jutsu) - Hammer Arts: Hammer Duo Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After summoning Grand Mole, the user begins by launching the target into the air with their hammer. Afterwards, Grand jumps into the air and slams his target downward with his hammer, causing an explosion after the target makes contact with the ground.

Restrictions:
-Must have signed the Mole Contract
-Must have a hammer in bio
-Can only be taught by fang

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±± All Declined ±± Link to singing or owning the mole contract?

 

[BusinessManTeno]

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(Shakuton: jouchaku ryuushi yoroi) Scorch Style: Evaporating Ion Particle Armor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/a (-20 Each Turn To The User) (+10 to Wind Jutsus) (+10 to Fire Jutsus) (+15 to Scorch Jutsus)
Description: This is a armor where only the best of the best can master. The user will do 6 handseals then slap their hands together.. Scorch chakra that resembles the color and thickness of the scorch sun technique will form around the user. The user will gain a full body armor covering their whole body not leaving no opening, also through channeling their body in scorch chakra the heat of the scorch wont affect the user as much until the last turn of the armor activation. This armor does not protect the body from physical attacks but acts as the typical scorch, and drain water from anything that contains water in it, (Body, Water Jutsus, Wood, Etc) This armor also gains a boost to the user Wind, Fire, and Scorch jutsus.. This armor will also give anybody who comes in contact with the scorch armor a 3rd degree burn making them unable to use handseals for 1 turn. This armor comes with great risk. Due to the huge scale of chakra this armor consumes, the user suffers great fatigue once the armor wears out, also due to the heat causing slight fatigue.

:Note: Can only use once
:Note: Can ONLY use scorch, wind, and fire jutsus.
:Note: Last for 5 turns
:Note: Once used the user cant use scorch jutsus for 4 turns
:Note: The user can only do 2 moves for 2 turns after the armor wears off due to the user using alot of chakra

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±± Declined ±± some problems with this: Its oped, not nearly restricted enough, unreasonble boots, its too high ranked, it has been done before for virtually all elements in the past, including lightning which i believe was where you got he idea and it lasts way too long. However, even if you tone this down, taking into account the nature of scorch...it will be very hard if not impossible to be approved.

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(Genjutsu: ketsueki gyakujou) Illusionary Arts: Blood Frenzy
Type: Sup
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: This genjutsu is a fearful jutsu, and activates upon the opponent seeing blood. Once the opponent sees blood on the user, the opponent will see the user explode causing massive blood to splur everywhere causing Some of the blood to land on the opponents hand. Once the blood lands on the opponent hand, it starts to feels like corrosive acid, as it will then spread around the body within a matter of seconds covering the whole body in blood that feels like corrosive acid. The pain is causes so much mental stress to the body that the user is immobolize not being able to move in reality while in the genjutsu, his body starts to corrode away starting with the user hands, making the head the last
:Note: Cant use no genjutsu no more throughout the battle
:Note: Can only use once

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±± Declined ±± No long range genjutsu. Whats "sup" type? Why does this cause mental stress? why is the user immoble? why is this S-Rank? its at best a B-Rank. Re work this.

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(Katon:yakekoge) Fire Style: Pyroclasm
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Long
Chakra: 40
Damage:80
Description: The user will do 2 handseals and coat both their hands in fire chakra that turns into mini fireballs around the hands , due to the fire chakra around the user hands the fire does not harm the user. Once done the user will throw the fireballs into long range back to back at the same location. The fireballs will then merge into a huge fireball that erupts up to short range from its location causing massive destruction.
:Note: Cant use no fire jutsus for 2 turns
:Note: Can only use once

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±± Declined ±± I don't understand this...why is this S-Rank as well? seems simple and similar to other customs and cannons...what is special in this to make it s-Rank? and you need to explain this much better.

 

[Nathan]

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(Katon: Morekyuraa Kumikae) Steel Release: Molecular Re-composition
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
After forming the head seals Dragon → Tiger → clap hands together, the user can manipulate various metallic molecules in a metallic substance or structure in order to change its shape, mass, or density by channeling chakra into the molecules. Using this method, the user can increase the size of their weapons with increasing their mass, creating heavy objects with minuscule size, or even making metals liquid. The user can also drawn in metallic objects from a distance.

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X-Declined-X Too generic
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(Katon: Eien No Zōka-en No Hinotama) Fire Release: Fireball of Eternally Increase Flames
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user inhales a massive amount of air, then turns it into fire before quickly exhaling it in a thin stream with a tiny fireball at the end. As the fireball nears its target, flames jump violently from the stream, grabbing nearby oxygen molecules in the air to use as fuel before joining it again soon after, like a solar prominence. The flames jump out and gather more quickly and get much hotter as it travels, making this jutsu a long range one, as it grows in size and power with distance. If the fireball hits an object, its jumping flames will swirl around the object, engulfing it in flames. If the target is a person, the flames will engulf the person and feed off the oxygen surrounding them while the oxygen in their lungs will exit them due to the vacuum effect and lack of oxygen outside the body.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-battle.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

X-Approved-X

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(Katon: Eien No Moeru Inferuno Faiā Wa Supauto) Fire Release: Eternal Flaming Inferno Fire Spout
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After the user users Fire Release: Fireball of Eternally Increase Flames. The user performs the required hand seals. The user will make immense fire-stream turn upright and rotate clockwise, while making the flaming prominence rotate counter-clockwise, appearing as if the fire arms are continuously wrapping the fire-stream, while creating a jet-stream effect, further feeding the technique. The jumping flames leap out from bottom of the flaming prominence' and get sucked into the top of the fire funnel, creating a cloak of moving fire surrounding the vortex itself. After casting this jutsu, it will become self-sustaining, while growing hotter and faster.
Notes:
- Must have used Fire Release: Fireball of Eternally Increase Flames before using this.
- Can only be used once per match.
- Takes one turn to become self-sustaining.
- Self-sustaining only lasts one turn after this technique is used.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

X-Approved-X

 

[Gitanshu]

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Genjutsu doki sono ikimono - Illusionary Arts wrath of the animals
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80/60 (-40 to user if used to break free)
Description: The user either does the rat-tiger hand seal or simply looks into the eyes of the opponent to cast him under a genjutsu, In which user alters with the memory of the opponent regarding the terrain and makes him believe that they were fighting either in a jungle or over sea surface which is filled with wild carnivores animals/sharks respectively, then the opponent see a large cluster of animals coming out of the forest to attack him and the user as well, this is done so that the opponent things it is happening for real, as the opponent feel's that he is being taken down by wild animals he suffers from mental damage which further in the battle may slow down his reaction time etc, the user can also use this techniques upon himself while simultaneously affecting the opponent as well, user uses it on himself to break free from weak rank genjutsu [A rank and below], it works by disrupting the opponent's chakra with in the body of the user much like Kai although user still suffers a minimal damage but using it in such a manner will weaken the over all effect of this jutsu on the opponent and the jutsu will be de-ranked from a S rank to an A rank jutsu and accordingly the damage cause will also be altered.

-If the opponent does not break the genjutsu within 1 turn, then he will take the mental damage from this jutsu which in turn will break him free of the genjutsu but will result in paralysis in the following turn due to mental trauma and slow reflexes for the rest of the battle.
-If the opponent is affected by the weak version of the gen {A rank} then he is not paralyzed but he still need's to deal with slow reflexes due to to strain that is if he is not able to break free from it.
-Useable 2 times
-No Genjutsu in the same turn it is used
-If user uses it on himself, he will have slow reflexes for the following turn.
-Can only be taught by -Gitanshu-.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Just no...

 

[XZA]

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(Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

Rank: A
Type: Weopan
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
The ability of the blade is to act as a medium for the use of A Generic genjutsu. This can be used on multiple people at once. Once the opponent looks at the sword, the user can hallucinate all sorts of things such as field of flowers seem to be a swamp, or a fly seem like a dragon.
Note: The ability count as a jutsu and is equal to B-rank Genjutsu
Note: Usable once per turn.
Note: Can only be used by Sosuke Aizen

||Declined|| I'm still not particularly keen on this, and you should understand why given the pretext of this weapon.

(Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles. The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
Kyōka Suigetsu has the special ability Kanzen Saimin (完全催眠, Complete Hypnosis). The user can place a single person under a Genjutsu that can ONLY deceive their perception of other objects. The user can have the opponent misinterpret a persons shape, form, size, smell, mass and feel to be that of an enemy. However this sense manipulation can only successfully work against a foe if they initially see the release of Kyōka Suigetsu. Although having to see it's release, they foe only has to see it once to be subject to it's powers for a limitless amount of time, no matter how many times Kyōka Suigetsu is activated and deactivated. Because the foe has to see the release for the Complete Hypnosis to work, those who have not seen it are effectually immune to it's powers. When the Complete Hypnosis is activated and Aizen wishes to remove the illusion by force of will or if the opponent breaks the genjutsu, it will appear to shatter or melt away. It's hypnotic capabilities can be extremely useful when used in combat situations; for example, he can create either simple or complex illusions to completely fool or disorientated his opponents. Whilst his foes are concentrating on his illusions, he can then hide his actions with extreme secrecy and impunity, and when he delivers an attack they'll be focused on the decoy until it's too late. While the illusions created by this Sword can be powerful, those who are extremely well trained and skilled themselves may be able to tell the differences between the illusions and the reality. Dojutsu and Sensors can easily break through this Genjutsu with ease.
Note: Can only be wielded by Sosuke Aizen
Note: Kanzen Samnin Can only be used twice per battle
Note: The genjutsu is only kept as long as the user focuses to keep it, during which he can't perform any techniques.
Note: Require's eye contact.
Note: The genjutsu last 1 turn maximum.
Note: Is equal to an A-rank illusion.

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±± Declined ±± banned.

 

[Vasto Lordé]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Summoning Animal: Red Panda
Scroll Owner: Vasto Lordé
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None
Description and Background:
The red panda is a small arboreal mammal native to the eastern Himalayas and southwestern China. It is the only extant species of the genus Ailurus and the family Ailuridae. Slightly larger than a domestic cat, it has reddish-brown fur, a long, shaggy tail, and a waddling gait due to its shorter front legs. It feeds mainly on bamboo, but is omnivorous and may also eat eggs, birds, insects, and small mammals. It is a solitary animal, mainly active from dusk to dawn, and is largely sedentary during the day.

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±± Declined ±± Contract made. Belongs to Iwabi.

( Doton: Kaimetsu-tekina raijingu iwa hashira ) - Earth Release: Devastating Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of the Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars that causes giant devastating pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. The spikes are (5) meters tall and with a radius that increases by (1) meter in width every (1) meter of height.

Note: Can only be used (3) times.
Note: Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Similar to existing techniques.


( Genjutsu: Rakujitsunohisōkyoku ) - Illusion Technique: Chains of Olympus
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user makes a single handseal and traps his opponent in a genjutsu where the opponent thinks he's at the bottom of some sea with chains binding his Feet and Hands while in reality the opponent is simply standing still and cannot move. These chains appear to be coming from underneath the sea ground, not only that, but due to being so deep undersea, the user begins to feel crushed and at the same time the genjutsu stimulates the user's brain into a drowning phase where the user cannot breath, which is logical. This results in the opponent passing out at the end of the turn.

Note: Can only be used (3) times.
Note: Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé.

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±± Declined ±± a genjutsu can't make your opponent think this or that. I manipulates senses, not reasoning. Only Doujutsu Genjutsu can manipulate reasoning and only to some extent. DNR.

 

[Enzup]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kame Ninjutsu: Sukin Heru) - Turtle Arts: Skin of Hell
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In this technique user performs a row of 2 handseals, and grows turtle scales from his whole body such that now the user looks like a reptile, and his defensive power reaches at utmost limit, but with the loss of speed. The user now has the absolute defensive power being able to defend against almost any taijutsu move and 1 ninjutsu move upto S-rank (or 2 A-ranks etc). Once per use, user can also focus his chakra in the scales(B-rank), and can shoot them without any prior notice, though this does not reduce the defensive strength of the user but it counts as another user's 1/3 move.
Note: -Lasts 4 turns at max.
-The scales shed after they are hit by a S-rank (or 2 A-ranks etc)
-User speed drops down by one level. (eg from Sage to Kage, Kage to Sannin etc)
-Can only be used, if user has signed turtle (or any other specie of it) contract.
-Turtles themselves can use this technique which does not grants them defence upto S-rank but increases their shell's strength by one rank (eg: a turtle can take on attacks on his shell upto B-rank, so after using this techniqe his shell can take attacks upto A-rank)
-Can only be used once per battle, per living being.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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±± Declined ±± Unreasonable. Next time its a DNR.

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(Kame Ninjutsu: Ao Bara) - Turtle Arts: Green Rose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons 2 turtle shells around his enemy, forming a sphere, such that the enemy is trapped inside it. The moment shells are summoned they starts secreting water from all the pores, filling the sphere with water and eventually leaving no space in it for breathing and hence enemy caught inside it may pass out if he don't deal with it in time. Because of turtle's natural granted defensive capabilities, the shells are of high strength and hence capable of taking one attack equal to its own rank.
Note: -Can be used by turtles and people who have signed Turtle contract or any specie of it.
-Usable by any one of them, and hence only once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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±± Declined ±± This makes little sense.
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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Za Tsuiraku Kame) - Summoning Technique: The Falling Turtle
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: User claps his hands and summons a giant Turtle, who carries giant swords in both of his hands. The turtle however is summoned upside down having it's face facing the ground with it's legs facing the sky, as the turtle is summoned, he start rotating very fast with facing his one hand in downward direction, while the second one remains perpendicular to the first one. The first hand with sword forms a giant drill with it's sword as the center of the drill, while his second hand with sword spins like that of helicopter's rotor blades. falling onto the opponent from above and drilling into them.
Note: -The Turtle is summoned above the opponent's location by 10-20 meters.
-Must have signed the Terrapin contract.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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±± Declined ±± Keep the original one. BTW, you don't have Turtles...you have Terrapins... Don't refer ever again to Turtles which are a cannon contract. If you try to do so it will lead to dnr and I'll decline your contract. Your contract was approved under the condition that it wouldn't collide with the cannon turtle contract... so don't.