[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[The_Empire]

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Handstand (Sakadachi)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does a hand stand, depending on if it is one or two hands, states the amount of time the user can stand on their hands. The user can stand on their one hand for at less five seconds and two hands for fifteen seconds. with the hand(s) being charged with chakra, the user can infuse the muscles adding at the most five more seconds to the hand stand. This is a simple taijutsu move which can be used to dodge or counter a jutsu or move during a battle.

Scorps made the Roll and Flip but forgot all about the Handstand lol. Thx Scorps forgetting all about my most favorite of all simple acrobatic movements.

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±± Declined ±± Time in our RP is counted on turns... not seconds. Also, yeah...all pink and fluffy but how can a handstand make you dodge a technique or counter it? Head stand is this btw:

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[KeotsuEclipse]

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This is a rather big change to Waka, so...not sure if this counts as an "update", or just dropping him to replace him with Agrias...However, I bolded the important changes, and I'll also list below the major differences between the two.

(Hato-ka Kuchiyose:Aguriasu Ōkusu) Columbidae Summon: Agrias Oaks
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Type: Summon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon. In her dove form, she appears as a regular size dove with yellow plumage. Her only ability in this form is the ability to summon other Columbidae at their normal summoning cost, by trilling a tune specific to each summon; conversely, she can be summoned through use of a piece of special reed grass that grows only in Eden, the realm where the Columbidae reside – using this grass allows her to be summoned at a regular chakra cost, but bypasses summoning ninjutsu, by using chakra to activate the glyphs found inscribed upon the wheat when a tune is blown on it; in essence, Agrias is summoning herself to the Summoner, but using their chakra for the job. As a Human, Agrias is a stunning young woman of 20 years old with long, golden hair that comes down to her hips and amber eyes; she keeps her hair tied back in one large braid, though. She wears a navy trench cloak and a pair of leather breaches, boots, and gauntlets, as well as wearing a steel breastplate, and her personal sword, Save the Queen; she also speaks with a slightly Old-English dialect. In human form, she is capable of using any Kenjutsu or Taijutsu that the summoner can use, and is also treated as the same rank (HP and Chakra). As a human, she also gains access to a personal Kenjutsu technique known as “Divine Ruination”, an S-rank technique that fires a helix-shaped shockwave at the enemy (described below).
*Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon, and thus remains on the field indefinitely when summoned by him. When summoned by others, she remains for four turns.
*Save the Queen can only wielded by Agrias and Columbidae Contract signers; the sword itself is indestructible, but has no special powers.
*Though Agrias has her own Health and Chakra pools, her moves still count towards the summoner’s 3 moves per turn.
*Divine Ruination is a double helix (DNA) shaped, blue shockwave. The shockwave itself does no damage, but when it comes into contact with an object, causes a cross-shaped explosion to occur from within the object - this is the damaging aspect of the attack. When used by Agrias, it is treated as a justu with S-rank power and chakra cost; it can be used by the summoner as well, if they have a sword, but only while Agrias is in play. It reaches up to Mid-range before disappearing.
*Transforming to/from Avian/Human form costs 30 chakra to Agrias and counts as a move.
*Though she can perform Columbidae Summoning Techniques while in Avian form, Agrias is treated as a “Samurai” in human form.
*Agrias in Human form:

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Changes: Traded Waka's Wind abilities in Dove Form for Agrias's Summoning abilities . Exchanged the sleeping lightsaber Pillowtalk for the regular Save the Queen. Gave her access to Taijutsu as well as her own technique Divine Ruination in exchange for Flight in human form and the use of Wind-elemental Kenjutsu . Increased her chakra cost for transformations, but she has her own chakra pool and health.

~Leaving for Scorps~

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±± Pending ±± Decide if you want to update the older summon or drop it or what you want to do. You're changing the name...Its not a simple update so decide what you want please. Resubmit when you decide on what to do.

Decision:If Agrias get's approved, she'll be replacing Waka; meaning if Agrias gets approved, I'll be dropping him.

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(Hato-ka Kuchiyose:Aguriasu Ōkusu) Columbidae Summon: Agrias Oaks
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Type: Summon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon. In her dove form, she appears as a regular size dove with yellow plumage. Her only ability in this form is the ability to summon other Columbidae at their normal summoning cost, by trilling a tune specific to each summon; conversely, she can be summoned through use of a piece of special reed grass that grows only in Eden, the realm where the Columbidae reside – using this grass allows her to be summoned at a regular chakra cost, but bypasses summoning ninjutsu, by using chakra to activate the glyphs found inscribed upon the wheat when a tune is blown on it; in essence, Agrias is summoning herself to the Summoner, but using their chakra for the job. As a Human, Agrias is a stunning young woman of 20 years old with long, golden hair that comes down to her hips and amber eyes; she keeps her hair tied back in one large braid, though. She wears a navy trench cloak and a pair of leather breaches, boots, and gauntlets, as well as wearing a steel breastplate, and her personal sword, Save the Queen; she also speaks with a slightly Old-English dialect. In human form, she is capable of using any Kenjutsu or Taijutsu that the summoner can use, and is also treated as the same rank (HP and Chakra). As a human, she also gains access to a personal Kenjutsu technique known as “Divine Ruination”, an S-rank technique that fires a helix-shaped shockwave at the enemy (described below).
*Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon, and thus remains on the field indefinitely when summoned by him. When summoned by others, she remains for four turns.
*Save the Queen can only wielded by Agrias and Columbidae Contract signers; the sword itself is indestructible, but has no special powers.
*Though Agrias has her own Health and Chakra pools, her moves still count towards the summoner’s 3 moves per turn.
*Divine Ruination is a double helix (DNA) shaped, blue shockwave. The shockwave itself does no damage, but when it comes into contact with an object, causes a cross-shaped explosion to occur from within the object - this is the damaging aspect of the attack. When used by Agrias, it is treated as a justu with S-rank power and chakra cost; it can be used by the summoner as well, if they have a sword, but only while Agrias is in play. It reaches up to Mid-range before disappearing.
*Transforming to/from Avian/Human form costs 30 chakra to Agrias and counts as a move.
*Though she can perform Columbidae Summoning Techniques while in Avian form, Agrias is treated as a “Samurai” in human form.
*Agrias in Human form:

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±± Declined ±± Yeah, you can't drop customs. You can only update them. This is not an update.

 

[Gitanshu]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Katon: Suiton hi-ta - Fire Release: Water heater
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short long
Chakra:30
Damage:+20 to water tech.
Description:A very simple yet a useful technique in which the user performs a single hand seal and release his katon chakra towards a water source/technique and use there to increase the temperature of the water to a point where it easily becomes capable of delivering 3rd degree burns upon contact with opponent's body.
-Can only heat up the jutsu of user or a neutral source
-Can only increase the temperate of A rank and below techniques
-Can only be used 5 times
-This Jutsu can only be taught by -Gitanshu-

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

Genjutsu meiro - Illusionary Arts Maze
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms Tiger → Boar handseals and put's the opponent under a Genjutsu where he see's thick mist has started to cover the battle field and with in few second's visibility becomes total zero for him and then he hears footsteps which originate from the original position of the user and approaches him in arc pattern from either left or right at great speed but in reality the user never moves in arc pattern and stays at his initial position.
-Can only be used 3 times
-This Jutsu can only be taught by -Gitanshu-

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

Doton deido numa - Earth Style Mud Pond
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple jutsu which either requires the user to stomp the ground using his hand or simply using a single hand seal to pass his chakra into the ground via legs, It works by changing the state of the ground and creating a small pond of mud any where on the battlefield for strategical advantage.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by -Gitanshu

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

 

[Littlefinger.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Genjutsu : Koinu no yōna me|Demonic Illusion : Puppy Dog Eyes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This genjutsu employs the innocency of the eyes of a puppy to hypnotize an opponent. In order to cast this genjutsu on an opponent, eye contact must be made. After this has occured and the genjutsu has been cast, the opponent, in amazement, would remain still as he/she would be paying attention to the calmness and innocency of the user's eyes, leaving he/she open to an attack. The opponent would also be made to believe that everything has been slowed down thereby making the environment and atmosphere very calm and soothing. This genjutsu would help to kill feelings of anger or hatred an opponent has towards the user.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Naizen.

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±± Declined ±± You can't force the opponent to react in a given way to something. You can only manipulate his senses, not his reasoning or will. Thats Doujutsu Sharingan and even so has some limitations. DNR.

Katon: Dōmōna Yajū no Ikari| Fire Release: Rage of the Ferocious Wild Beast
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will perform 7 handseals and exhale highly heated and intense flames. The flames on being released take the shape of fearsome creature with 7 large lion-like heads possessing horns that is in a full sprint which transforms almost immediately into a ferocious rotation that travels through the ground, devouring everything in its path. Once it hits its main target, it results in a massive explosion which causes the 7 heads to erupt in a destructive frenzy of C ranked fireballs capable of knocking down opponents and doing minimal damage.
-Usable twice per battle.
-No other fire technique in the previous, same and next turns.
-Can only be taught by Naizen.

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±± Declined ±± Incorrect damage info. All forbidden ranks do damage to yourself. Palpable damage. Can only be used once per match.

 

[Kamishiro]

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[Mokuton/Suiton: Kenryoku Hashirama Senju] - Wood Release/Water Release: The Authority of Hashirama Senju
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short/Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique designed by Hashirama Senju, the god of all shinobis. Hashirama with his intellegence designed this technique to get ride of Mokuton's weakness against Fire being able to burn Mokuton upon impact as it was needed during the Senju's war against the Uchiha's. This technique is for the skilled shinobis and them only. Hashirama meanwhile producing the Mokuton chakra with the help of his Water chakra and his Earth chakra put even more water chakra into it, he doesn't put it in any normal way he puts it in a very special and unique way that only Hashirama could do it. This causes any Mokuton technique used after this to have a decent layer of water on the Mokuton's outer skin.
Note: Can only be used by Hashirama Senju bios
Note: Lasts 4 turns
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

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±± Declined ±± I already have a similar technique. DNR.

[Genjutsu: Zennou Koumuru Kami] - Illusion Technique: The Almighty Suffer of The God
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: An illusion that could be placed on multiply victims. The user performs one single handseal, casting an illusion into his opponent(s) causing them to see two portals emerging out of nowhere. One emerging from their right direction and one from their left direction. These portals once emerging starts to pull their body to their sides which causes the user's opponent(s) to feel as if their bodys are tearing which causes them to faint right away. In reality the opponent(s) are fainted and their mind is really affected and damaged due to the exhaustion of the illusion.
Note: Can only be used twice per turn
Note: Cannot use any Genjutsu in this turn nor the following
Note: After this illusion the user won't be able to cast any illusion higher than B-rank
Note: Fainting only lasts one turn

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±± Declined ±± OP.

 

[Hazure]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katana No Zenpyou) The Sword of Omens
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: The Sword of Omens is the legendary sword of the Ninja Cats. Its blade can extend or retract, being in the form of a dagger when resting, and a full-length broadsword form when at full strength and power. The blade itself is near indestructible, shown to be extremely strong, durable, and laser-sharp. It is able to slice through hardened materials such as steel and solid stone with relative ease. Its power stems from the Eye of Thundera, which is embedded in its hilt. The Eye of Thundera is a ruby that can absorb the user's chakra in vast amounts using it for the varying abilities associated with the sword. The Eye of Thundera is sentient in nature, and takes the form of a closed cat's eye pupil when dormant, and opens to become a black cat's head when fully awake. The Eye of Thundera possesses a level of sentience/consciousness that has lead to it being described as "alive". by shouting the battle cry, "Ninja, Ninja, Ninja NinjaCats HO!" the Sword can transform; the cross-bars of the hilt curl upwards, the blade grows from dagger form to fully sized sword form, and the Eye opens from its dormant to awakened and full powered state.

At this point the main ability of the sword comes into play The Sword of Omens allows its wielder to see across great distances, find hidden things, and spot impending danger or allies that are in trouble with its iconic ability "Sight Beyond Sight", by saying the command, "Sword of Omens, give me Sight Beyond Sight!". This is due to it sentience/consciousness. It can hone in on any single signer of the Cat Contract letting the wielder see how they are in danger and how best to help it can also hone in on an ally only if that ally wishes to be seen and helped. When in it's Powered up state the Sword of Omens is able to grant the ability to keep track of the battle field rather easily. It has even been known to change the course of a strike against the user's will to protect him.

Notes:

-"Sight Beyond Sight" can only be used three times per battle
-The sword can be in it's powered up state for five (5) turns

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±± Declined ±± DNR. No makeshift doujutsu.

 

[Frozenstein]

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(Genjutsu: Hando Natsuin Henkan) - Illusionary Arts: Hand Seal Changer
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and puts the opponent into a genjutsu. This in contrary with other genjutsus, doesn't create false images or feelings, but messes up the opponent's memory about 3 of the following hand seals: Snake, Rat, Sheep, Monkey, Ox, Horse, Dragon, Dog, Boar, Bird, Rabbit, Tiger and replace them with different ones. Due to the change in his memory, the opponent would perform different hand seal(s) than what he wants. Because of this, the opponent can't focus his chakra properly and the jutsu fails when is about to be activated. As it fails only at the activation, the chakra necessary for the jutsu is gone in vain. Also because of his memory change, it makes hard to realise the genjutsu and makes the opponent totally confused about why he can't use his jutsus.
- can only be used 3 times per match
- effect lasts 3 turns after activation
- only 1-3 hand seal(s) can be replaced and must have been mentioned in the following form: "Rat -> Dog"
- once a hand seal is changed, it remains like that until the tech is broken/cancelled
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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±± Declined ±± DNR.

(Genjutsu: Tsuchi Kaibutsu) - Illusionary Arts: Earth Troll
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals and puts the opponent into a genjutsu what affects his eyesight and hearing. In this, he can see a 3 meter tall creature emerge from the ground near the user, making the impression that the monster is made from earth. Then as the monster is "done", roars with a terrifying sound and starts running toward the opponent with a speed that can reach a normal shinobi's running speed. While moving, the troll makes terrifying sounds to scare, demolarize and attack the opponent's mind.

As the opponent most probably can't tell if it's a genjutsu, he would try to destroy the troll. Whenever this happens, the user can perform another hand seal to strengthen the technique and make the opponent see his attack(s) failed. This is showned like the troll broke through the technique(s) used against it, either after a short period of time, or almost instantly. This depends on the technique used against the troll, meaning a large scale / strong attack needs more time to break. Whenever the troll "breaks through" a technique, it roars in a frightening way further demoralizing the opponent and damage his mind.

If the troll reaches the opponent and he still didn't realise the genjutsu, the monster performs a single attack toward the opponent by opening it's arms and roaring continually. However right before it could reach the target, the troll disappears into nothing, giving the opponent a last "stab" into his mind, leaving nothing but a terrified, trembling opponent who can hardly move.

- can only be used 2 times per battle
- effect only lasts 2 turns
- the troll must be "made" nearby the user, but can move freely toward the opponent up to mid range
- every technique used by the opponent has to be countered by the user if it could reach him
- every time the troll "breaks through" a technique and roars, the opponent gets more and more frightened, potentially slowing him down and making him desperate
- summoned animals if used on them, easily gets terrified and make them reverse-summon after the first roar
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

The troll looks like this:

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±± Declined ±± OP and its too big without explaining exactly why it does the effects it does.

 

[Lucifer]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Last submission of this week

(Katon: Kagirinai no Jigoku) – Fire Style: Eternal Hell
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Dragon, and gathers a large mass of unstable Katon chakra throughout both of the users arms, from the shoulders till the finger tops. While doing that the user will enclose both fists as hard as possible and jump as high as he/she can and comes down smashing with both fists onto the ground. Thus releasing the highly unstable Katon chakra through the entire battlefield. While the ground will literally start to tremble as far as the enemy can see causing small tremors and cracks beneath the targets. As the crimson red cracks open up, the user will take quite some damage (-20) due to the unnaturally large amount of chakra send into the ground. Meanwhile the ground it self will get pressurized causing a range 20-30 meters large fire streams to shoot up across the whole battlefield randomly and without any kind of warning. As the streams start to rise the user will clap both his hands together and make each one of these fire streams explode leaving huge craters filled with molted rocks behind (10-15 meters wide) they all explode turning everything to ashes near the craters. This jutsu will take place outside short range, leaving little ground to stand on. These fire streams are great enough to evaporate any kind of liquid substance, such as water, slime etc. turning it into steam.

Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigo.
Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.
Note: The user can't use fire techniques for three turns after this jutsu is used.
Note: The user will take damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-20)
Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users' moves, due to the abnormal amount of chakra used to cast this jutsu.
Note: The user cannot participate in close combat for the rest of the battle due to the weakend state of the body.

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±± Declined ±± OP and fire based omnidirectional attacks have been done before. Yours is not unique enough to be approved.

 

[-Broly-]

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Moukoton: Broly no denryoku reberu wa mugendesu Woodstyle: Broly's power level is infinite
Type: Offensive
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Similar to the greater wood style technique. Zetsu will focus his mokouton chakra to create root pillars, structures, defenses etc to aid him in battle. This allows Zetsu to have maximum control over his root style of wood release. The roots can be made from either the ground or Zetsu's body
-Can only by Zetsu bios
-Can only be taught by Broly

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±± Declined ±± DNR.

Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong and resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes start at the users forearm and surround it all the way down to the wrist and continues down to each individual finger however there are no spikes on the palm side of the hand, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate with the high vibrations of the spikes moving back and forth making them function similar to a chainsaw when used.Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the gauntlets each have the cutting power and chakra of A rank lightning. When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

-Can activate only 2 times per turn.
- Can only activate in order to perform taijutsu (not cutting a jutsu and only striking an opponents flesh) twice per turn.
- Can only cut through a jutsu once per turn, meaning that the user can either strike an opponent with the chainsaw function twice in one turn or he can strike the opponent with the chainsaw function once and cut through a jutsu once in the same turn or only do one of those options in a single turn if need be
- If the opponent is hit with a non chakra infused strike he simply gets hit with a spiked gauntlet
-Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
-Shaving effects can only be used 3 times before needing a 2 turn cooldown


Hopefully cleared everything up and did as you asked, bolded the changes

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±± Declined ±± Each gautlet -Rank doesn't mean that combined they are S-Rank. Also the restriction about using it against a technique and in taijutsu and what not is compeltely and utterly confusing. Fix it. You say you can only activate them twice...then only once and in the end you can shave people 3 times... >_> Get your ideas straight.

Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong and resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes start at the users forearm and surround it all the way down to the wrist[/B] and continues down to each individual finger however there are no spikes on the palm side of the hand, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate with the high vibrations of the spikes moving back and forth making them function similar to a chainsaw when used.Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the gauntlets each have the cutting power and chakra of A rank lightning however this does not mean that combined they are S rank. When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

-The shredding ability can only be used a total of 3 times each needing a 2 turn cool down
-To use the ability of the gauntlet, the user spends a move each time. The gauntlets don't have the shredding effect active at all times.
-Can only cut through a jutsu within reason.
-Can only be used or taught by Broly

Bolded changes. Lol i really hope this one isnt so confusing

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±± Approved ±± Edited.

 

[Magic..]

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(Katon: Inkurizu Rumu Netsu) - Fire Style: Increase Room Temperature
Rank: A
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(3rd degree burns, +10 every turn)
Descritpion: Using his Katon chakra, the user being unaffected, supperheats the air molecules of whole environment upto 100degrees rendering the whole environment unsuitable for ice techniques. Every wind techniques used even by the user looses a rank.
The user also would sense any body/object with lower temperature entering the hot region. Opponent within the hot region would recieve minor burns which increase +10 each turn they stay inwithin.
Note: Useable Twice per match
Note: Last 4 turns

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±± Declined ±± OPed. Similar to some techniques of some CEs. DNR.

(Suiton: Earozoru) - Water Style: Aerosol
Rank: A
Type: Supplimentary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user kneads his suiton chakra into a water source then makes very tiny water droplets rise covering an expansive range and upto 20meter height. He then merges the water droplets with harmful airbone gaseous particles like poison gas and its varient. This is an alternative water release in which the user breaks down water into its least possible size which makes it more prone to combine with gases in the air(something like moisture). Instead of the normal syphoning of harmful gas from the air, the water fuses with it and continue to coagulate more water unitl it becomes heavy. After combination, the later(gas/water mixture) becomes heavy/dense due to the presense of impurity then drops to the ground. This clears harmful gases from the surrounding air.
The aerosol is nearly invisible at first(appears like a fading mist) but can be seen clearly when it has completely combined with the gas and is droping as tiny droplets of water.
-note-
+- Requires a water source
+- No S-rank suiton in the next turn
+- Can be used twice.

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±± Approved ±± Intelligent. I like it. Don't forget this will abide by the elemental weaknesses and strengths.

(Fuuton: Kantu Britto ) - Wind Release: Can't Breathe
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: 60
Description: The user after waving 3 handsigns, spreads his Fuuton chakra all over the surrounding then he extremely reduces the air pressure around him and the target/s, The body pressure however would want to balance itself with the outside pressure therefore leading to bleeding from the nose and ears causing loss of blood. The opponent would have difficulty molding jutsus and his movement becomes momentarily slow as breathing becomes hard and difficult. The victim(s) eventually collapses after two turns. However, the user and his summons are not affected.
-Useable only twice
-Last for 3 turns
-No fire jutsu while active
-No S-rank fuuton in the turn and next
-A turn rest before using it again.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Similar to existing techniques.

 

[Seblax]

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Spit Summoning - Kushi Kuchiyose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When the user is about to summon a creature he already had a contract with, he form the handseals accordingly then, instead of biting his thumb and placing his hands on the ground, he bite his lips harshly while forming the handseals, then place his chakra into the spit he mixed with his blood and spit it at a surface accurately, preforming the summoning as it touches the surface normally. This method is developed to make a summoning technique formation proceed faster.
-This method can only be used thrice per battle.
-Doesn't count as a jutsu usage since its merely a method enhancer.
-The user must have already mastered the summoning contract of the animal he's about to summon.

X-Declined-X Raise to C rank, and be aware biting your tongue can cause death from bleeding.

Spit Summoning - Kushi Kuchiyose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When the user is about to summon a creature he already had a contract with, he form the handseals accordingly then, instead of biting his thumb and placing his hands on the ground, he bite his lips harshly while forming the handseals, then place his chakra into the spit he mixed with his blood and spit it at a surface accurately, preforming the summoning as it touches the surface normally. This method is developed to make a summoning technique formation proceed faster.
-This method can only be used thrice per battle.
-There's no tongue beating in this jutsu, only the lips are to be bet.
-Doesn't count as a jutsu usage since its merely a method enhancer.
-The user must have already mastered the summoning contract of the animal he's about to summon.

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Ridiculous.

 

[Gèckö]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kadou Kiri) Suiton/Fuuton Vortex Mist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick between the opponent and himself. Then after channeling more chakra into the mist and performing a single handseal. The user would inhale the mist back towards himself causing the opponent to be sucked into the mist.
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
Note: Can be used with pre-exisisting mist

~Declined~ "The user creates a thick between the opponent and himself" what

(Kadou Kiri) Suiton/Fuuton Vortex Mist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick mist between the opponent and himself. Then after channeling more chakra into the mist and performing a single handseal. The user would inhale the mist back towards himself causing the opponent to be sucked into the mist.
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
Note: Can be used with pre-exisisting mist

Katon Kaen Batafurai (Blazing Butterflies)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user builds up fire chakra within his lungs, then the user exhales a steady stream of fire at the opponent. After performing a single handseal, the stream of fire would break off into multiple balls of fire. By focusing more chakra into the fire balls. The user will shape them into as many butterflies as the want. (It gets weaker the more butterflies you make)
Note: Can be used by swinging a staff or sword aswell
Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

Raiton Torappu Lacrima (Trapping Lacrima)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his lightning chakra into the ground. Then the lightning emerges around the opponent in multiple streams of lightning. By performing two handseals, the lightning will then merge together forming a large orb around the opponent which shocks the opponent when he attacks the orb.
-Lacrima/Orb lasts 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Gecko

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±± All Declined ±± If you don't name your techniques accurately I won't even bother to check them.

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Genjutsu/Hyouton: Shishou's E-Cu(Illusionary Technique/Ice Release: Master's Ace)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Depends on ice technique
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is used in conjunction with an ice release technique, when the user is performing the ice release technique he will cast a genjutsu on the opponent, inside the genjutsu the opponent will not see a ice related technique, but rather a different element(the elements are below). Now there is the problem of the 'type' of chakra the technique emits, which is normally coldness for ice release techniques, the user can through direct physical contact with the opponent alter the opponents 'sensory buds' sort to say, the user will cause the opponents sensory ability to be mixed up. And in order to invoke that mix up with the elemental change of the technique, the user will have to perform two hand seals.
-The elements that the user can change the ice technique to are: Water, Earth, Fire, and Lava.
-When altering the opponents sense direct physical contact must be established.
-The altering of senses counts as a move, and the invoking of the elemental change also counts as a move, so if used in conjunction it counts as two moves.
-When the user alters the opponent sense, the effect takes place after the user performs the two hand seals. So a portion of the users chakra will reside in the opponents body.(maximum three turns, and if full body surge techniques are used, the effects are dispelled, so the user must have direct physical contact once again to invoke the alteration)
-Technique can be used without the sense altering.
-Technique usable 5 times.
-Must have completed canon ice release training.

Third submission as the other two were checked ^_^.

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±± Declined ±± This is a copy of my Misleading Words. DNR.

 

[Illyasviel]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton:Suraisu Senpuu)-Wind Release:Slicing Whirlwind
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will perform a single hand seal and make the air around the opponent spin rapidly,lifting him into the air,constantly cutting him.When the whirlwind lifts the opponent to about 2m into the air.The spiraling wind will rush inwards,crushing the opponent.
-Note:No S rank wind the following turn.
-Note:Can be used twice per match.

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

(Fuuton:Shibu Kaze)-Wind Release:Branching wind
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Mid(only)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will perform two hand seal and exhale a thick and powerful stream of wind.When the wind gets to around the end of short range the stream will branch into 7 smaller,s harp streams of wind.3 will go to the left of the opponent,3 to the right and one above.Once they get to the line of the opponent they will turn towards him,stabbing him where they hit.
Note:Can be used only once per battle.
Note:No above A rank wind the same and next turn.
Note:The branching property can be used only in Mid range.

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±± Declined ±± How can a stream of wind stab someone?

(Fuuton:Satsu Uindo)-Wind Release:Splitting wind
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user will perform a single hand seal and gather a large amount of chakra.He will the exhale a large(around a small car size)sphere of wind.On the top of the wind sphere the user will form a thin layer of sheer chakra.The chakra will have chakra sensing properties and when it notices a large amount of foreign chakra coming towards it(above B rank technique)will quickly dig through the wind sphere effectively splitting the wind technique in two smaller wind spheres(A rank each)which will pass to the both sides of the enemy technique and rejoin into one sphere on the other side.
Note:No above B rank wind techniques for two next turns.
Note:Can be used only once.
Note:It can split only once.
Note:Can be used only by sensory biographies.
Note:It can escape only techniques smaller than 10m in diameter.

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±± Declined ±± DNR.

 

[Obvious]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Megami no namida | Tear of the Godess
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20 (+10 per ability used)
Damage: 40
Description: Megami no namida is an umbrella that was given to Obvious many years ago. At first it was just an ordinary umbrella, but thourgh the years Obvious realized that she could modify it to fit her own fighting style. She started with the handle of the umbrella. First of all she would make it so that there was a rubber strap around it which would act as an isolater. Then she hollowed the handle and added a special mechanism into it. That mechanism would be triggered whenever Obvious' chakra flow would be disrupted, meaning that small and thins spikes would protrude from the handle and slightly cut her hand. The cuts would be minor but cause enough pain to be released out of C rank genjutsu. Afterwards, she made it so that there was a sword hidden inside of the umbrella. To pull the sword out, she would have to press a small button and pull at the handle (gif below in spoiler to make clear how it works. Obvious then worked with the top of the umbrella, she added a mechanism which would allow her to use the top of the umbrella as a flame thrower by pressing a second button on the handle. The flamethrower would release a B ranked steady flow of fire (much like Sasori's). The ribs of the umbrella contain spring loaded mechanisms which allow Obvious to use the umbrella to shoot a rain of senbon when it is open (B-Rank).

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±± Declined ±± Rip off of Amegakure's customs. DNR. Don't do it again.

 

[Inch]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Hyouton: Bakuhatsu Fuyu Uzu)-Ice Release: Explosive Winter Vortex
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals and focuses a massive amount of chakra into a single point in the sky. After the hand seals are complete, the user will manipulate the chakra to form a fast-moving downward swirling vortex of ice, snow, and wind, and there is now hollow point in the middle of the vortex. The vortex is quite narrow at the point of the creation and becomes wider as it moves towards the ground. Anyone caught in the vortex will be rotated at great speeds and slammed into the ground, in addition to being impaled by the ice shards. The vortex can last one full turn if the user wishes. After the vortex ends, all of the snow, wind and ice shards within it will burst outward to a mid-range away from the vortex. Anyone caught in this explosion, including the user, will be knocked backward by the wind and snow, and impaled by the ice shards, though both effects aren't as powerful as they were in the vortex due to the now unfocused and spread out explosion.
Note: The user is only able to perform a total of 2 jutsu the turn this was used.
Note: The user will be unable to perform anymore forbidden jutsu for the next 4 turns.
Note: The user will feel exhausted the turn after this was used and will have slowed movements.
Note: Requires the user to have mastered ice.

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±± Approved ±±

(Hyouton: Kōri Kō Gihō)-Ice Release: Ice Propulsion Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: When standing on ice, the user forces chakra from their feet in a manner that pushes them across the slick surface of the ice at an extreme speed. This works in a similar way to when someone uses chakra to push himself away from the ground with greater force. The difference is that the user releases the chakra without jumping, and it will simple propel them horizontally across the surface of the ice, without moving them into the air. The user is able to travel across long distances at great speed using this technique, but it only works if the user is standing on ice.

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±± Approved ±±

(Hyouton: Yuki Tenkan)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user manipulates the snow on the battlefield that they created and uses their chakra to completely freeze the snow, causing it to become ice. Upon turning into ice, the newly turned ice will retain the same properties that it had before becoming ice. This includes, shape, rank, momentum, location, etc.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle.

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±± Declined ±± missing english name. Also, if you transform snow into ice, it should become a bit smaller. Snow has air in it and isn't that compressed or dense.

 

[Venom]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon/Raiton:Heru Purominensu) - Fire/Lightning Release:Hell Prominence
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user performs the Horse->Rat hand seal and then channels chakra into there hands and feet. The user is then projected into the air by a stream of flame. The user then stretches their arms out and build up energy in front. Such energy is subsequently released into a large, long and powerful laser-like beam horizontally, capable of enveloping in an explosion. The beam is capable of burning the opponent as well as paralyzing the opponent.

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±± Declined ±± Without Y/Y you cannot mold 2 elemental chakras at the same time.

 

[Akuma]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Yomazu) - War Cry
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A katana with its sheath being attached to either side of the wielder's hip. It sported a reddish, traditional Japanese hilt-wrapping, and its large, simple circular tsuba, which had a golden color, was decorated by a flower-motif. Not only that, but it's properties are nearly indestructable. Yomazu became Loki's right hand, being able to perform numerous unique assaults, known as Bo, Kan, Zan, & Anko, all together are known as the 4 Kin of Purgatory. Mainly based on chakra control and raw chakra. No elemental chakra is known to work with Yomazu, with the exception of wind release.
Bo: This assault creates a strong defensive wall in the form of a cloud of chakra, which shields the user from enemy attack and is powerful enough to remain intact after being hit by B rank or lower ninjutsu techniques. The user puts his free palm against the side of the blade while the other hand holds the handle, and lifts it foward, releasing a burst of chakra that forms into the cloud shield.
Kan: The user writes hols Yomazu with both hands and channels massive amounts of raw chakra into it. Then releasing it at once in a compressed state, creating a beam of energy which pierces the target set by the user, with ease. It can successfully rip through B rank and lower ninjutsu techniques, all within reason. It however, can only reach mid ranges.
Zan: The user infuses wich chakra into Yomazu and then swings Yomazu, creating a giant and wide air blade, to slice across everything within range. Having a reach of Mid range, and a strength of B rank wind.
Anko: The user creates a dark wave from Yomazu, which cuts through everything in its path. This works by the user rushing towards his enemy, whom he slashes and then goes past, unsheathing his blade. A few seconds before this, raw chakra is focused into Yomazu, thus, when it's unsheathed it release the chakra in a dark-ish color.

Only 2 Kin of Purgatory assaults can be used per turn.
The same Kin of Purgatory can not be used in consecutive turns.
Each Kin of Purgatory counts towards one of the user's 3 techniques.
May only be wielded by Loki

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±± Declined ±± Bo ability can't be a cloud. Makes no sense. Anko ability needs more definition and a better explanation. Rest seems fine. Good weapon.

 

[-Blade-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Veloci-Raptors
Scroll Owner: ~Orochimaru~
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King Veloci(will submit if approved)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Long ago before there were any shinobi or humans for that matter another species ruled the world, the dinosaurs. Although most were extinct some were summoned to Dino Island a place much like Mt. Myuoboku by the dino king Veloci in order to preserve the species. After time passed and humans inhabited the earth King Veloci found it best to keep the dino's at Dino Island. Veloci-Raptors are highly intelligent and very ruthless, and cunning. With their slender legs, and an S-shaped neck and spine, they are quick and agile at jumping, running and tracking. Velociraptors have excellent hearing, a powerful sense of smell, and binocular like vision making them very useful for tracking down enemies

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±± Declined ±± DNR. No extinct animals.

 

[Cursed Prince]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Summoning Animal: Jabberjay
Scroll Owner: Cursed Prince
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
Description and Background: The Jabberjay was a genetic mutation that was developed by the capitol. It consists of all males that are usually dark brown in color. They are very similair in appearance to a mockingbird, with very long beaks and wings that can beat as fast as 30 times per second. Jabberjays greatly vary in size. Their our scouts, that are used to spy on the enemy and only as big as a regular bird. Attackers, however, can be as big as Sasuke's hawk summon. Jabberjays have the unique ability to mimic anyone's voice perfectly, which made them very valuable in war. They can fly, obviously, and can speak English and Japanese as a result of the experiments done on them.

Users of this contract recieve this tattoo

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±± Declined ±± DNR. No fictional animals.

Raiton: Ba-suto (Lightning Release: Burst)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses all throughout him until a visible aura of lightning surrounds him, that can be served as a shield. The user can then releases it into a burst of unfocused lightning that travels up to mid range. It can paralyze and numb opponents similair to chidori Nagashi
-Lasts for 2 turns
-Releasing the shield into a burst cancels the technique

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±± Declined ±± DNR. Similar to existing techniques.