[Raiton] with Madāra Uchiha

[RuckenTM]

Alright, lets end the fight there . I want to discuss each of your moves now in response to what I did. The next fight we have will be when you finish A-Rank lightning before we move onto the S-Ranks and that will be slightly longer to allow you to show off a bit more. But since D/C-rank raiton is a little more limited in scope we'll start the discussion now.

As I watch Essen's attack come forth I raise my hand releasing a D-Rank blast of wind strong enough to neutralize it.

Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.

"Okay Essen, lets look at what you have done so far. Can you explain what you did in your first move in response to mine? The one where I used Bedrock Coffin. Explain why you did what you did to me."

Essen as he stood two feet from his sensei, "...to neutralize the two slabs of earth is the first thing I wanted to do as I was in danger and then striking my opponent to distance myself from possible close danger that I wouldn't have a head start on."

 

[Drackos]

Essen as he stood two feet from his sensei, "...to neutralize the two slabs of earth is the first thing I wanted to do as I was in danger and then striking my opponent to distance myself from possible close danger that I wouldn't have a head start on."

"Very good Essen! Indeed you made a good move by neutralizing the threat to you and coming after me. That applied pressure to me and forced me to overpower your technique. That was a good application of the technique you used and you certainly seemed to have kept in mind the rank relations with multiple projectiles when you use the technique. Now, we already discussed the biggest mistake in your second move. So lets talk about your third. In the third you used the Lightning Armor to neutralize a D-Rank blast of wind. This worked but also failed you...not fatally, of course. Lets discuss this. D-Rank wind against C-Rank lightning will neutralize each other. We know that. However, what is the one aspect of the Lightning Armor in regards to physical impact that I taught you to keep in mind?"

 

[RuckenTM]

"Very good Essen! Indeed you made a good move by neutralizing the threat to you and coming after me. That applied pressure to me and forced me to overpower your technique. That was a good application of the technique you used and you certainly seemed to have kept in mind the rank relations with multiple projectiles when you use the technique. Now, we already discussed the biggest mistake in your second move. So lets talk about your third. In the third you used the Lightning Armor to neutralize a D-Rank blast of wind. This worked but also failed you...not fatally, of course. Lets discuss this. D-Rank wind against C-Rank lightning will neutralize each other. We know that. However, what is the one aspect of the Lightning Armor in regards to physical impact that I taught you to keep in mind?"

Thinking out loud, "...well since it does neutralize and the damage should go though?.."

 

[Drackos]

Thinking out loud, "...well since it does neutralize and the damage should go though?.."

"Good. Just always be wary about damage from a punch or anything like that. As it can't stop physical impact. So, are you ready to move onto the B-Ranks Essen?!" I say with noticeable excitement.

 

[RuckenTM]

"Good. Just always be wary about damage from a punch or anything like that. As it can't stop physical impact. So, are you ready to move onto the B-Ranks Essen?!" I say with noticeable excitement.

Essen sits down, "wait, so I would take wind damage? I thought it neutralizes?"

 

[Drackos]

Essen sits down, "wait, so I would take wind damage? I thought it neutralizes?"

Sorry. Overlooked something earlier when I made that post. My bad xD.

"In this case you wouldn't!"

 

[RuckenTM]

Sorry. Overlooked something earlier when I made that post. My bad xD.

"In this case you wouldn't!"

Essen Quickly jumps to his feet and energized for the next step, "Alright I'm ready".

 

[Drackos]

Essen Quickly jumps to his feet and energized for the next step, "Alright I'm ready".

"Alright, let's continue. The first B-Rank technique we'll be looking at is Lightning Release Wall. You begin by weaving a single Ox hand seal and stretching both of your arms out to produce a wall of lightning that can defend against quite a few techniques. Now this wall of lightning possesses no solid qualities and as such solids will still pass through it. So you should be weary about that. I want you to simply perform it and tell me what you think."

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

 

[RuckenTM]

"Alright, let's continue. The first B-Rank technique we'll be looking at is Lightning Release Wall. You begin by weaving a single Ox hand seal and stretching both of your arms out to produce a wall of lightning that can defend against quite a few techniques. Now this wall of lightning possesses no solid qualities and as such solids will still pass through it. So you should be weary about that. I want you to simply perform it and tell me what you think."

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defense to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

Where he stood, Essen started weaving a single Ox seal and stretched both of his arms out as the white line separating both him and his sensei appeared. "hmm, it's not thick enough to stop a boulder of similar size from heading through. Though it can hold off enemies and it could also work well with team work as another shinobi throws kunai's from the in side of the wall toward the enemies as the kunai's will inherit electric as they head toward?"

 

[Drackos]

Where he stood, Essen started weaving a single Ox seal and stretched both of his arms out as the white line separating both him and his sensei appeared. "hmm, it's not thick enough to stop a boulder of similar size from heading through. Though it can hold off enemies and it could also work well with team work as another shinobi throws kunai's from the in side of the wall toward the enemies as the kunai's will inherit electric as they head toward?"

"Well you can naturally infuse a kunai with raiton chakra. It possesses no ranked strength (and thus is still noted as 'freeform') but carries the properties of raiton namely it gains in piercing power primarily making it deadlier than a normal kunai in that sense. Now, lets continue. Now for this next technique I want you to pay close attention to the description of it. You create a half dome, or hemisphere, or whatever you want to call it and then push it forward. Now note the range of the technique. It can only reach out from short-range from you. I want you to use it to defend and destroy a boulder I am going to send at you and then describe to me in detail what happens to that boulder!" I say as I leap away 10 meters releasing doton chakra into the ground causing a boulder to be launched from my position toward Essen aiming to crush him!

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.

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[RuckenTM]

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"Well you can naturally infuse a kunai with raiton chakra. It possesses no ranked strength (and thus is still noted as 'freeform') but carries the properties of raiton namely it gains in piercing power primarily making it deadlier than a normal kunai in that sense. Now, lets continue. Now for this next technique I want you to pay close attention to the description of it. You create a half dome, or hemisphere, or whatever you want to call it and then push it forward. Now note the range of the technique. It can only reach out from short-range from you. I want you to use it to defend and destroy a boulder I am going to send at you and then describe to me in detail what happens to that boulder!" I say as I leap away 10 meters releasing doton chakra into the ground causing a boulder to be launched from my position toward Essen aiming to crush him!

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.

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Essen watch as his sensei leaps away as he claim to use a boulder to crush him, noticing the boulder appear toward him. Essen focuses enough chakra into this hands as he forms ration at a great pace and releases it in a form of shield dome as it's in-contact with the boulder at the most impact; a sudden burst of rock turning into soil as it falters apart from him. "well, it seem that his ration technique concentrates the ration from the center of the dome spreading away to the ends as it covers me, leading the doton techniques being much more solid or they scatter into sand-like amount..."

 

[Drackos]

Essen watch as his sensei leaps away as he claim to use a boulder to crush him, noticing the boulder appear toward him. Essen focuses enough chakra into this hands as he forms ration at a great pace and releases it in a form of shield dome as it's in-contact with the boulder at the most impact; a sudden burst of rock turning into soil as it falters apart from him. "well, it seem that his ration technique concentrates the ration from the center of the dome spreading away to the ends as it covers me, leading the doton techniques being much more solid or they scatter into sand-like amount..."

"It would be more like a boulder striking a wall. As long as that boulder or whatever strikes you is within elemental strengths and weaknesses. That's what it means by having physical momentum. It acts as a solid wall almost in that sense as well as anything in touches being paralyzed. If the boulder had passed through it and turned to sand it wouldn't have that quality. Does that make sense?"

 

[RuckenTM]

"It would be more like a boulder striking a wall. As long as that boulder or whatever strikes you is within elemental strengths and weaknesses. That's what it means by having physical momentum. It acts as a solid wall almost in that sense as well as anything in touches being paralyzed. If the boulder had passed through it and turned to sand it wouldn't have that quality. Does that make sense?"

OOC: Okay. So there is not a jutsu as that, if not I call tips!

IC: Essen nods, "oh okay" as he smiled.

 

[Drackos]

OOC: Okay. So there is not a jutsu as that, if not I call tips!

IC: Essen nods, "oh okay" as he smiled.

"Alright excellent. Let us move on. The next one is pretty interesting when you think about its possibilities. You basically just gather up a sizable amount of raiton chakra into either or your fists creating a sphere of pure lightning around that fist. Upon striking a target that sphere of pure lightning will explode dealing some pretty severe electrical damage in the form of electrical burns accompanied by the regular electrical damage that lightning techniques usually cause. So, try it out on that tree in the distance! Then, when you've done that I want you to tell me how would you defend yourself should an opponent use this."

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

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[RuckenTM]

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"Alright excellent. Let us move on. The next one is pretty interesting when you think about its possibilities. You basically just gather up a sizable amount of raiton chakra into either or your fists creating a sphere of pure lightning around that fist. Upon striking a target that sphere of pure lightning will explode dealing some pretty severe electrical damage in the form of electrical burns accompanied by the regular electrical damage that lightning techniques usually cause. So, try it out on that tree in the distance! Then, when you've done that I want you to tell me how would you defend yourself should an opponent use this."

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

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"well, I think if counter with a higher rank Doton jutsu you could avoid the impact or if you send the opponent with a stream of heavy gales/ of water to separate both you and him, that could work. This maybe, if you counter the technique with the same technique it should neutralize both or deflect both users with the same effect." Essen said before he walked toward the tree in which was about 30 feet from him and his sensei. In the distance as he walked he gathered enough lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. Then dashing toward the tree at mid-point as he landed the fist toward impact with the tree, the impact with the stem of the tree lead to an electrical explosion as the tree shattered.

 

[Drackos]

"well, I think if counter with a higher rank Doton jutsu you could avoid the impact or if you send the opponent with a stream of heavy gales/ of water to separate both you and him, that could work. This maybe, if you counter the technique with the same technique it should neutralize both or deflect both users with the same effect." Essen said before he walked toward the tree in which was about 30 feet from him and his sensei. In the distance as he walked he gathered enough lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. Then dashing toward the tree at mid-point as he landed the fist toward impact with the tree, the impact with the stem of the tree lead to an electrical explosion as the tree shattered.

"Be careful when you use water to defend against a lightning technique. If the current ends up in the water you'll end up shocking yourself. And doton is questionable. Remember when we talked about elemental interactions? Not only is lightning strong to earth but when earth is struck by lightning it can explode violently into numerous sharp pieces which can be dangerous in and of itself. So be careful. Any questions?" I say as I motion for Essen to return to my side.

 

[RuckenTM]

Returning to his sensei as he ran back to him, "no questions".

 

[Drackos]

Returning to his sensei as he ran back to him, "no questions".

"Excellent. The next technique will require you to raise either your hands or a weapon towards the sky discharging electricity into the clouds. This essentially allows you to call down lightning anywhere you desire up to mid-range from your position. So it is a fairly straight forward technique. Keep in mind you can call down any number of strikes within the same turn so remember how that works. Try it out and call it down anywhere mid-range from us!"

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

 

[RuckenTM]

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"Excellent. The next technique will require you to raise either your hands or a weapon towards the sky discharging electricity into the clouds. This essentially allows you to call down lightning anywhere you desire up to mid-range from your position. So it is a fairly straight forward technique. Keep in mind you can call down any number of strikes within the same turn so remember how that works. Try it out and call it down anywhere mid-range from us!"

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

Essen prepares for the jutsu, as he raises his hand toward the sky releasing an electrical discharge into the clouds. Which lightens the clouds under his will the moment he has done so, the lightening strikes the trees in the distance all three one after the other and quickly. "whoa"

 

[Drackos]

Essen prepares for the jutsu, as he raises his hand toward the sky releasing an electrical discharge into the clouds. Which lightens the clouds under his will the moment he has done so, the lightening strikes the trees in the distance all three one after the other and quickly. "whoa"

"Very good work Essen! It is a pretty straight forward technique that is actually useful in some situations to strike from above. Anyways, let's move on. Remember if you have any questions feel free to ask. The next technique is quite useful as well and in a way is a combination or earth manipulation and lightning manipulation. Luckily you only need to know lightning release to apply this technique, though. Essentially what happens is you weave a few hand seals and shape four fairly large pillars that are proportionate to the target area. Meaning the larger the area the larger the pillars. Once they have risen they will unleash a barrage of bolts and currents to paralyze and damage the target. So, I want you to try this out on this tree in the distance. Now, I want detail about the size of the pillars in regards to how large of an area you cause this technique to encompass."