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Far eastern swampland said to be where the founder of the Kisei Clan raised the first dead: the Inferi. The Dead Marshes, now void of undead, are still littered with rotting corpses and other disturbing sights. The river that bisects the landmark spills over onto the land, giving it its marshy appearance. The waters of the marsh are said to be laden with sinew and body parts, remains from the risen dead that were used in a great battle between the Radiant Order, Noldor Clan, and Kisei.
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Type: Simple Change
The original paragraph:
Far eastern swampland said to be where the founder of the Kisei Clan raised the first dead: the Inferi. The Dead Marshes, now void of undead, are still littered with rotting corpses and other disturbing sights. The river that bisects the landmark spills over onto the land, giving it its marshy appearance. The waters of the marsh are said to be laden with sinew and body parts, remains from the risen dead that were used in a great battle between the Radiant Order, Noldor Clan, and Kisei.
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These lands used to be far eastern swampland said to be where the founder of the Kisei Clan raised the first dead: the Inferi. The Dead Marshes, now void of undead, used to be littered with rotting corpses and other disturbing sights. The river that bisects the landmark tended to spill over onto the land, giving it its previous marshy appearance. The waters of the marsh were said to be laden with sinew and body parts, remains from the risen dead that were used in a great battle between the Radiant Order, Noldor Clan, and Kisei.
The once abandoned battlefield, filled to the brim with rot, decay and decomposition seemed to have been cleaned. Or at least returned to the earth where it can feed the soil and decompose properly. The swampland has become soft-loamy soil irrigated by the river that splits through the land. The river still spills over covering the land in small waves of clean clear water that dribbles in from the river with the potential to sustain plant-life, or crops, like rice. It seems that the soil could sustain various types of plant-life or crops depending on what is built on top of the new foundation or even a fortress should one be built. The lands have been claimed in the name of Tsumigakure.
The first thing Tsumigakure did with the sprawling landscape was to build a massive wall, through the use of Earth Release. This defense was created upon the eastern border between the Mother Cult's lands and the vast number of lands claimed in the name of Tsumigakure. This defense's purpose was to stave off the chance of another Mother Cult incursion. More than anything it was a line in the sand, for the Mother Cult to learn their place in this new world as Tsumigakure began to box them in away from the mainland.
The once abandoned battlefield, filled to the brim with rot, decay and decomposition seemed to have been cleaned. Or at least returned to the earth where it can feed the soil and decompose properly. The swampland has become soft-loamy soil irrigated by the river that splits through the land. The river still spills over covering the land in small waves of clean clear water that dribbles in from the river with the potential to sustain plant-life, or crops, like rice. It seems that the soil could sustain various types of plant-life or crops depending on what is built on top of the new foundation or even a fortress should one be built. The lands have been claimed in the name of Tsumigakure.
The first thing Tsumigakure did with the sprawling landscape was to build a massive wall, through the use of Earth Release. This defense was created upon the eastern border between the Mother Cult's lands and the vast number of lands claimed in the name of Tsumigakure. This defense's purpose was to stave off the chance of another Mother Cult incursion. More than anything it was a line in the sand, for the Mother Cult to learn their place in this new world as Tsumigakure began to box them in away from the mainland.
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