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[The Mockingjay]

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Type: Simple Change
The original paragraph:
Omashu is named for the city that lies on the banks of the only river running through the area. The city itself was devasted by the moon fall, but a couple of things have kept it afloat. The fact that it is a wealthy city has given them the benefit of hiring outside help with rebuilding the damages that have been done. The wealth along with the mastery of earth release has made it to where the infrastructures of the city is almost 100% how it was before. The only thing significantly new is the walls and half dome built around and over the city. The city council had opted to spend a mass amount of money on protection from "natural" disasters like before. They now seek to be even greater than before and have been thriving off of helping surrounding settlements.
The new paragraph:
Omashu is named for the city that lies on the banks of the only river running through the area. The city itself was devasted by the moon fall, but a couple of things have kept it afloat. The fact that it is a wealthy city has given them the benefit of hiring outside help with rebuilding the damages that have been done. The wealth along with the mastery of earth release has made it to where the infrastructures of the city is almost 100% how it was before. The only thing significantly new is the walls and self-healing crystal half dome built around and over the city, the crystal leaving the city coated in a pinkish shade whenever the sun should be out. The city council had opted to spend a mass amount of money on protection from "natural" disasters like before. They now seek to be even greater than before and have been thriving off of helping surrounding settlements.

 

[The Pervy Sage]

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Type: Simple Change
The original paragraph:

Mt. Imperium's once grand countenance has been destroyed by the falling shards of the moon.
Landslides are the least of one's worries travelling through these ruined mountainscapes now...

The new paragraph:
The Obsidian Remnant Where the grand silhouette of Mt. Imperium once stood, a jagged scar now remains, its peak sheared away by the falling shards of the moon. Rising from these cataclysmic ruins is a monolith of pure, spiraled carbon, a fortress of deepest pitch that stands in stark, violent contrast to the surrounding snow. The structure is a forest of saronite-colored spires, each reaching upward like frozen spears aimed at the heavens. At its highest precipice, open to the freezing gales, sits a lone, silent throne. The air here is heavy with an unnatural chill; the very ground at the mountain’s base heaves and churns as the restless dead, pulled from the frozen earth, form a tireless perimeter of bone and rusted steel around the black keep.

 

[El Alucard]

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Type: World Change
The original paragraph: While it was quite literally an uphill struggle, the forces of Millicent were able to assault the Katsuryoku's home, forcing them to abandon the mountain, or fall to the Rot. The mountain's once glorious facade is now stained with a deep crimson, running down the side in a sight reminiscent of a volcano, though one that spews forth ichor and vile abomination-spawning mud.
The new paragraph: Mount Katsuryoku, previously having been overrun by the Scarlet Rot, has been retaken and restored. It is now encircled by a ring of molten bismuth, which serves as a glowing moat around the mountain. There is only one earthen bridge crossing the molten metal. Beyond that, there is an internal corridor, carved out within the mountain, which is dark and spirals up to the peak. Along its sides, veins of bismuth, set in the stone, shine with colors of the spectrum, giving off an otherworldly glow.

The peak itself is hidden behind massive natural stone, invisible from the outside. Atop the mountain, the rebuilt Katsuryoku mansion, a fortified monastery, open only to the sky, made stronger with earth and connected to the metallic veins within the mountain. The inhabitants of the Pure World (Genki), layered on top of the mountain and through its corridor. Should any non-Katsuryoku attempt to enter, their chakra will be drained, bit by bit, as the spirits pass through them, leaving them weak and drained before ever reaching the peak. Those approaching the peak from the top will be swarmed by the defenders, and their chakra will be drained in the same manner.

The mountain only recognizes its own.