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Custom element Japanese name: Serenton

Custom element English name: Selenium Dust Release

The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in manga context):
First, there must be proof that Selenium exists in the Naruto universe: Selenium is a nonmetal element that functions as cofactor for reduction of antioxidant enzymes in animals and plants, an enzyme that occurs in all living organisms. It is an essential micronutrient for animals, naturally existing in domestic livestock (Pigs, Cows, Turkey, Chickens, Fishes). It is also readily present in the thyroid gland that exists in the human body (The selenium content in the human body is believed to be in the 13–20 milligram range) and research (In 1957) has shown that it is essential for mammalian life. In plants, it occurs as a bystander mineral existing in bananas, cashews, lentils, spinach, mushrooms etc. Research has also proven Selenium is present in the soil and in mushrooms. Significant amount of selenium can also be found in ocean water.

As far as Naruto goes, there isn't really anything to lead anyone to believe that the makeup of Naruto's earth, especially the plant and organic life there, is any different from our earth. Not only that, but there is also no reason to believe that, without chakra intervention, the organs and chemicals within a normal human beings or animals body in Naruto is any different than ours. If the plant life and the human and animal life in Naruto are all the same (and there is not much as far as reasoning that it wouldn't be) then it stands to reason that Selenium exists in Naruto.

A complaint as to how viable this element lies in the amount of Selenium that can even be extracted. Would it be enough to actually combat other opponents? Consider another element, Wood Style. In real life, it takes many years, if not decades, for full grown trees and forests to grow. Yet Hashirama and Yamato have been shown to accomplish completing this feat in mere seconds or less. Another example would be Crystal Release. In order for the amount of crystals that can be created from the ground with this element to naturally occur, decades if not centuries would have to pass. Yet Guren can create a massive amount of crystals from the ground in an instant. The point here is that with chakra being the engine behind the growth of substances, the growth rate can be exponentially increased.


How it works:
Selenium exists in 3 forms, however this CE focuses mainly on the amorphous red brick powder state. It is created by manipulating the consistency of the user's Fire chakra and adding Earth chakra to create the base of the element, which results in a red powder being produced, after which advanced chakra control is introduced to exponentially increase its growth rate and toxicity. Selenium can be released from the user's body, the ground or from water sources by channeling the chakra into the earth/water.

Selenium has an high melting of 221 °C making it durable against heat based elements. Should Selenium get to this temperature, it'd be converted into its black form and the user becomes unable to manipulate it. Selenium possesses both a photovoltaic action (It converts light to electricity) and a photoconductive action (Its electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination) which makes it weak to lightning and strong to non-electric light releasing elements. Despite selenium being essential for mammalian life, it is highly toxic when consumed in high quality. As such if one were to absorb the substance, whether it be orally, directly into the bloodstream, or even by inhaling it, it causes a number of effect depending on the amount absorbed. Exposure to the eyes also causes irritation and eventually blindness.

Toxic effects of Selenium include:
Nausea
Vomiting
Fatigue
Irritability
Headaches
Myocarditis
Death

Usage Examples:
Red wedding:
The user slams their hand on the ground and use their serenton chakra to create a wave of red sand from the ground, the wave would slam into the opponent crushing them and poisoning them.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Must be atleast Jonin rank
Must have mastered Earth, Fire and Basic Ninjutsu

Weak to:
Lightining: Due to Selenium's photoconductive action (Electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination). It becomes extremely conductive when exposed to lightning jutsus (those that produce any form of light) and as such it reduces its efficiency against lightning techniques. It is neutral to black lightning seeing as that form of lightning doesn't produce light.
Water: Similarly to Sand release, Water makes it harder to control

Strong to:
Light and Variations: Due to Selenium's photovoltaic action (converts light to electricity) any non-lightning jutsu that produces tremendous light would cause the red powder to produce electricity that further boosts its offensive and defensive capabilities
Fire and Variations: Due to Selenium's high melting point and its photvoltaic action (see explanation above). It is strong against fire related elements.
Organic Materials such as Wood, Aburame bugs, Bones etc due to its toxicity
Earth: Similarly to sand release, Selenium dust can be used to grind Earth or to become dense enough to compete against even the hardest rocks.


Co-creator: N/A

Students I pass this custom element on to: ? & ?

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Declined. I'm not very keen on approving Custom Elements that have "Strong/Weak to *insert element* and variations anymore. To have it, you'll have to be very specific in the description of the properties that create the Strength/Weakness relationship.
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Custom element Japanese name: Serenton

Custom element English name: Selenium Dust Release

The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in manga context):
First, there must be proof that Selenium exists in the Naruto universe: Selenium is a nonmetal element that functions as cofactor for reduction of antioxidant enzymes in animals and plants, an enzyme that occurs in all living organisms. It is an essential micronutrient for animals, naturally existing in domestic livestock (Pigs, Cows, Turkey, Chickens, Fishes). It is also readily present in the thyroid gland that exists in the human body (The selenium content in the human body is believed to be in the 13–20 milligram range) and research (In 1957) has shown that it is essential for mammalian life. In plants, it occurs as a bystander mineral existing in bananas, cashews, lentils, spinach, mushrooms etc. Research has also proven Selenium is present in the soil and in mushrooms. Significant amount of selenium can also be found in ocean water.

As far as Naruto goes, there isn't really anything to lead anyone to believe that the makeup of Naruto's earth, especially the plant and organic life there, is any different from our earth. Not only that, but there is also no reason to believe that, without chakra intervention, the organs and chemicals within a normal human beings or animals body in Naruto is any different than ours. If the plant life and the human and animal life in Naruto are all the same (and there is not much as far as reasoning that it wouldn't be) then it stands to reason that Selenium exists in Naruto.

A complaint as to how viable this element lies in the amount of Selenium that can even be extracted. Would it be enough to actually combat other opponents? Consider another element, Wood Style. In real life, it takes many years, if not decades, for full grown trees and forests to grow. Yet Hashirama and Yamato have been shown to accomplish completing this feat in mere seconds or less. Another example would be Crystal Release. In order for the amount of crystals that can be created from the ground with this element to naturally occur, decades if not centuries would have to pass. Yet Guren can create a massive amount of crystals from the ground in an instant. The point here is that with chakra being the engine behind the growth of substances, the growth rate can be exponentially increased.


How it works:
Selenium exists in 3 forms, however this CE focuses mainly on the amorphous red brick powder state. It is created by manipulating the consistency of the user's Fire chakra and adding Earth chakra to create the base of the element, which results in a red powder being produced, after which advanced chakra control is introduced to exponentially increase its growth rate and toxicity. Selenium can be released from the user's body, the ground or from water sources by channeling the chakra into the earth/water.

Selenium has an high melting of 221 °C making it durable against heat based elements. Should Selenium get to this temperature, it'd be converted into its black form and the user becomes unable to manipulate it. Selenium possesses both a photovoltaic action (It converts light to electricity) and a photoconductive action (Its electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination) which makes it weak to lightning and strong to non-electric light releasing elements. Despite selenium being essential for mammalian life, it is highly toxic when consumed in high quality. As such if one were to absorb the substance, whether it be orally, directly into the bloodstream, or even by inhaling it, it causes a number of effect depending on the amount absorbed. Exposure to the eyes also causes irritation and eventually blindness.

Toxic effects of Selenium include:
Nausea
Vomiting
Fatigue
Irritability
Headaches
Myocarditis
Death

Usage Examples:
Red wedding:
The user slams their hand on the ground and use their serenton chakra to create a wave of red sand from the ground, the wave would slam into the opponent crushing them and poisoning them.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Must be atleast Jonin rank
Must have mastered Earth, Fire and Basic Ninjutsu

Weak to:
Lightining: Due to Selenium's photoconductive action (Electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination). It becomes extremely conductive when exposed to lightning jutsus that produce bright lights and as such it reduces its efficiency against lightning techniques. It is neutral to black lightning seeing as that form of lightning doesn't produce light.
Water: Similarly to Sand release, Water makes it harder to control

Strong to:
Light release techniques and abilities that produce a lot of light (e.g Noldor's Holy Fire)
: Due to Selenium's photovoltaic action (converts light to electricity) any non-lightning jutsu that produces tremendous light would cause the red powder to produce electricity that further boosts its offensive and defensive capabilities
Fire release: Due to Selenium's high melting point and its photvoltaic action (see explanation above). It is strong against fire elements.
Scorch: Similarly to earth, Selenium lacks moisture for Scorch to evaporate and it's high melting point.
Organic Materials such as Wood, Aburame bugs, Bones etc due to its toxicity
Earth: Similarly to sand release, Selenium dust can be used to grind Earth or to become dense enough to compete against even the hardest rocks.
Lava: Due to Selenium's strength to both fire and earth (See descriptions above), it's is only natural for it to be strong to lava

Co-creator:
N/A

Students I pass this custom element on to: ? & ?

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I, Punk Hazard, moderator of the Custom Elements Bureau, declare for all men to hear that I give you the following:
Lytes, our loyal member, gave on the date June 28th, 2020, a request for a Patent on his custom element (Serenton); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned Patent on this element by the following;
Serenton

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Daemon gave me the go-ahead to resubmit despite Riker's unfounded complaints. (Because this entire CE is based on a CJ of mine created before Yin was even introduced)

Changed most of the description and because of that, omitted the bold. (plus it wasn't checked for feedback anyway)

Custom element Japanese name: Shinenton

Custom element English name: Sacred Fire

The element is based on: Fire + Yin

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Yin forms half of all creation and is representative of the immaterial, spiritual, metaphysical and imagination. In the Manga it was stated that Hagoromo’s use of ‘Creation of All Things’ allowed him to use Yin to create the physical forms of the Tailed Beasts from nothingness. Similarly, Izanagi operates on a similar principle, with Yin allowing an Uchiha clan member to re-write portions of reality through sacrifice of their eye.
Finally, Yin release is defined in the manga as the ‘ability to create form out of nothingness’.

The ability to create from nothing through Yin defies the first law of thermodynamics that ‘nothing is created or destroyed, only transformed’. Similarly, Izanagi and Creation of All Things proves that it is possible to manipulate already existing forms of existence through Yin. From here, it is reasonable to assume that Yin release can yet again defy the First Law and be used to reduce form to nothingness. (Which, in a way can already be seen via Truth Seeking Balls, Hungry Ghost,Tayuya’s doki etc, all of which have the potential to negate or reduce a part of reality.)
Additionally, the canon technique 'Fire Release: Heavenly Prisons' shows that it is already possible to alter the fire element and its qualities to directly interact with the immaterial and conflagrate the incorporeal.


Therefore, this reduction of form will be expressed through the innate qualities of Fire Release, whose qualities serve as the baseline and medium for this element. A highly destructive element, through the introduction of Yin Fire is re-imagined from a physically destructive element capable of destroying all forms of physical phenomena (a hot enough flame can burn virtually anything, including water via high temperatures splitting H20 into oxygen and hydrogen), into an element that has the potential to incinerate the immaterial, incorporeal and metaphysical aspects of the world. Essentially, this element forgoes fires ability to impact physical matter to instead impact energy and immaterial forces.


How it works:

The user will combine their Fire and Yin nature's to form a new element that, visually, will take the appearance of black and gold flames so translucent in appearance that they will seem almost ethereal, and can be made to materialize wherever the user concentrates their chakra - whether it be from their body, the ground or the air. The form of these flames will invoke the immaterial properties of Yin, thus these black and gold flames will be wholly incorporeal. Incapable of interacting with physical matter, these flames will instead phase through physical obstructions until they meet the limits of their range.

Although incapable of interacting with the material, these flames will be highly effective against the immaterial and intangible. The flames are exceptional when it comes to erasing forms of energy - such as chakra, lightning, and intangible elements such as fire, wind, dark release, scorch release and the like. This is due to the fact that such entities have minimal levels of form in the first place, so erasing what little it does have is an easy task for the flames of Sacred Fire. The harder task is erasing the chakra of material entities, such as Earth release or Wood Release. As aforementioned, Sacred Fire phases through the tangible, and as such will simply erase the chakra within such physical entities leaving the technique in question an empty husk. The material qualities of these techniques however insulates them against the capabilities of Sacred Fire, therefore while still effective, the process is more cumbersome and exhaustive, thereby formulating an inherent weakness.

Similarly, Sacred Fire is extremely effective against both absorption and sealing. Both of these principles operate by using incorporeal applications of chakra to affect a target/object. However Sacred Fire will simply erase any chakra that it encounters. Attempts to influence an element that indiscriminately burns chakra, through chakra or spiritual effects, is logically ineffective. Therefore attempts to absorb or seal it will simply be like attempting to encase a burning cloth with another cloth - wholly ineffective unless the seal/absorption technique is significantly stronger.
Just as Fire has the capacity to wreck widespread destruction on naturally occurring physical matter, so too does Sacred Fire possess the ability to erase non-chakra produced intangible physical phenomena - i.e, electricity. Occupying the niche of an element that has the capacity to erase the immaterial world, Sacred Fire is capable of negating magnetic fields, kinetic energy, and even natural phenomena such as forces, and gravity itself. The latter means that, if the user were to transform into Sacred Fire they would be able to free themselves of all influences and freely traverse across the axis of space unencumbered by anything. It is here that the dichotomy between normal Fire, which erases the substantive material, and Sacred Fire, which erases the immaterial and spiritual worlds, can be most seen.

Finally, Sacred Fire has no substantial Damage Value since it lacks any material qualities. Instead, Sacred Fire operates by virtue of its chakra supply. Therefore, when a Sacred Fire technique has more chakra, it wins, less, it falters, equal, it neutralises. Outside of this unique interaction, it reflects and abides by elemental interaction rules as usual. (i.e if a 40 chakra point SF techniques clashes neutrally against a 30 chakra point technique, the clash would weaken SF as though it were a normal S rank vs A rank clash, just with the clash itself occurring through a different unique mechanism.)


Finally, when Sacred Fire contacts a living target, it will not do damage by subjecting the victim to kinetic force but instead by dealing damage to the intangible aspects of a human, such as their nervous system, spiritual body, and chakra reserves. By default, the opponents chakra pool will reduce by an amount equal to the (placeholder) damage value of the Shinenton technique, and this reduction will re-occur each turn until the aftereffects of Shinenton are purged from the victims system. (can be countered in the same way as Hungry Ghost)Like a flame, this infection will spread if a victim transfers their chakra to someone else. Individual Shinenton techniques may have different effects (to be described within individual CEJ) such as field limiting, or a parasitic effect that is ‘exothermic’ in expression - ‘burning’ at anyone within a particular vicinity to the technique.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

Sacred flame:
produces a wave of sacred fire that burns away at the immaterial. if it hits the opponent it sets their chakra system aflame as described in the ce.


Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Release, Yin.


Is weak to:

Earth, Water, and all Material elements/fields. Including variations of energy elements that produce matter (such as Ash from Fire Release)


Neutrality: Yin, Yang, and Yin-Yang.


Is strong against:
Fire, Wind, Lightning and all Energy/Immaterial/Incorporeal elements/fields, including; Absorptions, sealing, decay and elements with neutrality clauses. Also material techniques that function by virtue of absorption (i.e absorption mists etc)


Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. We've resolved any issue between this CE, Black Salamander, and Riker's Burn Down the House Custom MS technique.

Definitions need to be worked on here, because it isn't clear what you mean when you refer to incorporeal/intangible and corporeal entities. It is highly inconsistent. See colored portions. How is the nervous system an intangible part of the human body? Their chakra system? In the NRP these are both equally tangible, and 'real' things.

These also need damage values. Being 'immaterial' in the sense that you're going for doesn't mean it doesn't have damage values. This won't work off chakra clashes. Likewise, this won't pass through all physical objects freely; it's going to be based on rank. If the rank of the Sacred Fire technique is equal or higher then it will pass through. If it is lower, then it won't and it will clash normally.

Overall, this really needs a lot of work in terms of the wording. It's often inconsistent.

Added clarity to how it affects the human body, and made it clearer that it's phasing isn't absolute, but instead has an effectiveness based on rank differentials. Also removed chakra based clashes and made it work off of rank instead.

Custom element Japanese name: Shinenton

Custom element English name: Sacred Fire

The element is based on: Fire + Yin

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Yin forms half of all creation and is representative of the immaterial, spiritual, metaphysical and imagination. In the Manga it was stated that Hagoromo’s use of ‘Creation of All Things’ allowed him to use Yin to create the physical forms of the Tailed Beasts from nothingness. Similarly, Izanagi operates on a similar principle, with Yin allowing an Uchiha clan member to re-write portions of reality through sacrifice of their eye.
Finally, Yin release is defined in the manga as the ‘ability to create form out of nothingness’.

The ability to create from nothing through Yin defies the first law of thermodynamics that ‘nothing is created or destroyed, only transformed’. Similarly, Izanagi and Creation of All Things proves that it is possible to manipulate already existing forms of existence through Yin. From here, it is reasonable to assume that Yin release can yet again defy the First Law and be used to reduce form to nothingness. (Which, in a way can already be seen via Truth Seeking Balls, Hungry Ghost,Tayuya’s doki etc, all of which have the potential to negate or reduce a part of reality.)
Additionally, the canon technique 'Fire Release: Heavenly Prisons' shows that it is already possible to alter the fire element and its qualities to directly interact with the immaterial and conflagrate the incorporeal.


Therefore, this reduction of form will be expressed through the innate qualities of Fire Release, whose qualities serve as the baseline and medium for this element. A highly destructive element, through the introduction of Yin Fire is re-imagined from a physically destructive element capable of destroying all forms of physical phenomena (a hot enough flame can burn virtually anything, including water via high temperatures splitting H20 into oxygen and hydrogen), into an element that has the potential to incinerate the immaterial, incorporeal and metaphysical aspects of the world. Essentially, this element forgoes fires ability to impact physical matter to instead impact energy and immaterial forces.


How it works:

The user will combine their Fire and Yin nature's to form a new element that, visually, will take the appearance of black and gold flames so translucent in appearance that they will seem almost ethereal, and can be made to materialize wherever the user concentrates their chakra - whether it be from their body, the ground or the air. The form of these flames will invoke the immaterial properties of Yin, thus these black and gold flames will be wholly incorporeal. Incapable of interacting with physical matter, these flames will instead phase through physical obstructions until they meet the limits of their range.

Although incapable of interacting with the material, these flames will be highly effective against the immaterial and intangible. The flames are exceptional when it comes to erasing forms of energy - such as chakra, lightning, and intangible elements such as fire, wind, dark release, scorch release and the like. This is due to the fact that such entities have minimal levels of form in the first place, so erasing what little it does have is an easy task for the flames of Sacred Fire. The harder task is erasing the chakra of material entities, such as Earth release or Wood Release. As aforementioned, Sacred Fire phases through the tangible, and as such will simply erase the chakra within such physical entities leaving the technique in question an empty husk. The material qualities of these techniques however insulates them against the capabilities of Sacred Fire, therefore while still effective, the process is more cumbersome and exhaustive, thereby formulating an inherent weakness. (To clarify, Sacred Fire will only be capable of phasing all the way through techniques that it is stronger than. (based on rank) Against equal or weaker techniques, Sacred Fire will still phase into the technique, but then futilely disperse into the technique itself: Either destroying or weakening it, but failing to pass through to whatever might be on the other-side of such a technique. I.e, it could still be blocked or negated by an armour of equal or greater strength; it wouldn't just pass through as though there were no obstructions and attack whatever's hiding inside)

Similarly, Sacred Fire is extremely effective against both absorption and sealing. Both of these principles operate by using incorporeal applications of chakra to affect a target/object. However Sacred Fire will simply erase any chakra that it encounters. Attempts to influence an element that indiscriminately burns chakra, through chakra or spiritual effects, is logically ineffective. Therefore attempts to absorb or seal it will simply be like attempting to encase a burning cloth with another cloth - wholly ineffective unless the seal/absorption technique is significantly stronger.
Just as Fire has the capacity to wreck widespread destruction on naturally occurring physical matter, so too does Sacred Fire possess the ability to erase non-chakra produced intangible physical phenomena - i.e, electricity. Occupying the niche of an element that has the capacity to erase the immaterial world, Sacred Fire is capable of negating magnetic fields, kinetic energy, and even natural phenomena such as forces, and gravity itself. The latter means that, if the user were to transform into Sacred Fire they would be able to free themselves of all influences and freely traverse across the axis of space unencumbered by anything. It is here that the dichotomy between normal Fire, which erases the substantive material, and Sacred Fire, which erases the immaterial and spiritual worlds, can be most seen.

Finally, Sacred Fire has no substantial Damage Value since it lacks any material qualities. Instead, Sacred Fire clashes based on rank - but nonetheless still reflects and abides by elemental interaction rules as usual. (i.e if a S ranked SF techniques clashes neutrally against a A ranked technique, the clash would weaken SF as though it were a normal S rank vs A rank clash, just with the clash itself occurring through a different unique mechanism.)


Finally, when Sacred Fire contacts a living target, it will not do damage by subjecting the victim to kinetic force but instead by dealing damage to the intangible aspects of a human, such as their nervous system, spiritual body, and chakra reserves. (Neurones and chakra pathways are organic physical structures, but ultimately only exist as conduits for forms of energy; electrical impulses, spiritual and physical energies and chakra.) Therefore victims of a Sacred fire technique will, by default, have their chakra pool reduced by an amount equal to the (placeholder) damage value of the Shinenton technique, and this reduction will re-occur at a doubling potency each turn until the aftereffects of Shinenton are purged from the victims system. (can be countered in the same way as Hungry Ghost) Like a flame, this infection will spread if a victim transfers their chakra to someone else. Individual Shinenton techniques may have different effects (to be described within individual CEJ) such as field limiting, or a parasitic effect that is ‘exothermic’ in expression - ‘burning’ at anyone within a particular vicinity to the technique.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

Sacred flame:
produces a wave of sacred fire that burns away at the immaterial. if it hits the opponent it sets their chakra system aflame as described in the ce.


Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Release, Yin.


Is weak to:

Earth, Water, and all Material elements/fields. Including variations of energy elements that produce matter (such as Ash from Fire Release)


Neutrality: Yin, Yang, and Yin-Yang.


Is strong against:
Fire, Wind, Lightning and all Energy/Immaterial/Incorporeal elements/fields, including; Absorptions, sealing, decay and elements with neutrality clauses. Also material techniques that function by virtue of absorption (i.e absorption mists etc)


Co-creator: Xylon

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. A lot of things that need to be refined before this can be approved. First thing first, your understanding of Yin Release is flawed in your justification. You cannot cite Yin-Yang Release's Truth-Seeking Orbs. The first, and most obvious reason, is that they're a Yin-Yang based ability. They cannot be formed purely from Yin; those are the Yin Truth-Seeking Orbs and they do none of what is mentioned in this CE. The true TSB can only be used by the specific bios that were shown using them too. So remove any mention of them. Second, I'm not really sure why Hungry Ghost is mentioned here. Hungry Ghost is a spiritual parasite that consumes chakra and via established spiritual tether. So, honestly, get this entire second paragraph out of there. It just seems a lot of extra justification that really makes no sense. When it comes to a Yin element, as long as its reasonable, you can just end the justification at "Yin creates form from the imagination."

Second. You still have a lot of problems with what you define as 'material' and 'immaterial.' When it comes to the tangibility of Yin Release techniques we often use the term intangible for them. Think of Madara's Limbo technique; it could equally phase through Water Release as it did Fire Release. Energy isn't intangible. It is just as 'material' as Earth, Wood, Steel, and so on. So a huge part of this decline is really to clean up the terminology so you can better understand exactly what this element is interacting with. Because at the moment, it's really hard to decipher. You might have a clear idea in your head, but when someone else reads this is might be much more jumbled. For reference, see the colored paragraph in the abilities section.

The third paragraph just seems like you're shoving extra abilities in with no actual reasoning for them. It doesn't make sense why Sacred Fire can negate magnetic fields, kinetic energy, or gravity. These are all tangible things. Just because you can't visually perceive them doesn't mean they aren't physically real. It's a similar gripe I had with you trying to say that the nervous system is intangible. And some of the wording in the third paragraph really seems to rip into Force Release's territory, as well as Mystic Fire's.

For your Strengths and Weaknesses, you need to remove the neutrality part. That has to go. An element does not mention what it's neutral to unless it states that it is neutral to everything. Secondly, I'm not sure if a CE is going to be allowed to be intrinsically strong to Fuuinjutsu. Especially now that Fuuinjutsu works on Chakra interactions, rather than rank. I had a similar issue when I made my first draft of Mystic Fire and was turned down, so I'm going to apply the same logic here. This also has no reason to state things strengths to "neutrality clauses." That has to go. Make your S/W's simple. None of this extra stuff like "ash from Fire Release." All these conditions and qualifications generates wayyyyy too much to consider to actually approve the CE.

The core problem with this CE right now is the wording. It's so inconsistent and the definitions of the terms intangible/tangible (with respect to Yin Release), aren't really being respected. In your eyes, you see any energy as intangible. That isn't how it is in the RP. Intangibility is the same as Hands of Sloth and Limbo; they phase through anything, energy or otherwise. I get you want to make Black Salamander as a CE, and that can work. But CE have a very high bar for clarity and consistency and when it comes to an element as complicated as this, it is imperative that it be clear.

What I suggest you do is you sit down and rewrite the entire thing. Make a clear, core, basic concept and build from there. Right now it's doing too much in too confusing of terms. Thankfully I understand Black Salamander to know what you're trying to achieve.
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Kottahiton

Custom element English name:
Frozen Fire Release

The element is based on:
Lightning, Wind, Fire, Water

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
There have been multiple elements that have been shown to manipulate temperature, from ice release (shown to decrease temperatures), to Scorch release (shown to severely increase temperature). There have also been several examples of using multiple elements together to creature new elements, such as Mei combining Fire, Water and Earth to create a 'lava' that is effectively a corrosive earth. This is important to show that multiple properties of elements can be combined to produce specific effects for new elements. It also shows Kekkei Tota that can combine multiple elements into one new element, ne; Dust Release.

How it works:
Frozen fire is a mix of science in reality with creativity of fantasy where by taking the actual physical process of creating freezing fire is substituted into our creative fantasy world.

First the scientific process:
Fire is known as a partial plasma, where only some of the gas is ionized. So fire and plasma are normally hot, for example things like electricity has a high temperature and can cause burns. You can however cool this plasma down, by flowing helium gas through it, which has a high thermal conductivity, you cool the atoms down while the electrons stay hot, so you have hot electrons but cool atoms. By supercooling the helium, you can achieve a flame that is cold, where by it actually can freeze water, (reducing it to 0 Celceius). Should you be able to cool down the helium even further, you could achieve even colder temperatures.

Second, the fantasy process:
Using elemental chakra, we are able to substitute out the previous process by using nature manipulation chakra to achieve the same process. working backwards, we are able to control and create plasma like states by manipulating fire release. This gives it shape and the state (plasma) that the Frozen Fire Element is in. Next, we use wind release to control and create naturally occuring helium within the atomosphere. (we are able to create massively expanded bullets of wind, enourmous tornados from one breath of air thanks to chakra manipulation being able to recreate wind and create it from nothing.) This gives a source for our helium. Lastly, through lightning and water we are able to super cool down the helium to use as a source for the fire plasma, to create the Frozen Fire. By creating a current through the water, we can create a super cooled liquid. This is done by a process known as eletrofreezing, by manipulating the eletricity to cool and slow down the molecules to create lower temperatures.

Lastly, Combining:
By using the process explained above, its possible to create a Freezing Fire release, that is to say a fire plasma that is super cold and freezing instead of hot and burning through the use of fire, water, lightning and wind. Using wind release as a source, water and lightning to super cool it, then fire to control and manipulate its form, we create Freezing Fire.

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Jutsu Usage Examples:
Kottahiton: Bakahatsu | Freezing Fire Release: Blast
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user sends forth a blast of Frozen Fire chakra like a bomb which upon hitting water detonates instantly freezing any source of water with equal chakra or below rendering it useless

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning

Is weak to:
Earth: Being a non biological object, as well as being very resistant to temperatures can block Freezing Fire
Lightning: Freezing Fire can lose its shape if coming into contact with another source of plasma such as lightning

Is strong against:
Fire: Reducing the temperature of fire reduces its power while increasing the temperature of Freezing fire would turn it to a liquid water source, dousing fire even further
Water: Capable of freezing water, Freezing Fire is naturally strong to water
Wind: a source of more fuel for Freezing Fire, it is naturally strong to wind

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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Declined. A plasma that freezes already exists in the form of LGeezy's and Koto's Plasmoid Release.
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Custom element Japanese name: Kokutanton

Custom element English name: Ebony Release

The element is based on: Mokuton + Meiton

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in manga context):
Ebony is found in trees and As far as Naruto goes, there isn't really anything to lead anyone to believe that the makeup of Naruto's earth, especially the plant and organic life there, is any different from our earth. Not only that, but there is also no reason to believe that, without chakra intervention, the organs and chemicals within a normal human beings or animals body in Naruto is any different than ours. If the plant life and the human and animal life in Naruto are all the same (and there is not much as far as reasoning that it wouldn't be) then it stands to reason that Ebony exists in Naruto.



How it works:
Ebony is a more Dense and refined form of wood that usually resides within the trunks and wood of the trees it is apart of. It took Lena of Shinramoto a long time after finding a chunk ebony to be able to manipulate it and create more. Though Ebony has more unique properties than just it's hard more dense form, being able to combat a lot more elements - though the refined nature of Ebony is slick and can be reflective. Ebony has more unique properties than normal wood doesn't and it's especially prominent when it is broken apart with force or ground into dust (for example, with a saw); it leaves a toxic and flammable powder which can float in the air for several days making it quite dangerous. The Toxic effects of Ebony include Irritability of the Skin, Pink Eye and restriction of Vision and effects similar to that of having an Allergic Reaction to something. Lena to try and make use of this property in a more unique way than other custom elements tried to imbue her Heart's other Advanced Element Meiton within it as part of the control of the element. After long concentration and meditation Lena polymerised her dark chakra within the toxic powder properties of ebony giving it's a sort of cosmetically blue glow. Now with the powder having more chakra suppressing/absorbing abilities and increasing it's toxicity, it can ignite itself if enough chakra is absorbed and can also drain chakra directly from energy-based techniques it's strong to or opponents if it comes into contact with them. Though Ebony Release is less potent in that area than Dark Release.

Now as a Ninjutsu based Element, Ebony can be created from the user and the ground like it's Mokuton counterpart and has just as much versatility with it's creation and construction; as it's . However Ebony created techniques whilst still being able to create natural rough wood surface constructions (which now with the addition of meiton has a blue glowing aura from within it's cracks and grooves), it can also be created in a more refined more varnished look which has a mirror-like finish - it's reflective nature can be used for more interesting and illusion-like effects during combat. The shift in the wood could reflect harsh lights into enemies to blind them even.

Now with the added usage of the toxic powder, when ebony is produced it will radiate a powder from it's surface and across it's surfaces. When it clashes with other techniques or dense objects and creates friction or shatters it apart, it can leave a large amount of powder residue in the air that can last for a long time, if ignited can create and extend the range of the technique. When ignited it creates blue flames due to it being imbued with Meiton and will further empower a technique making it really dangerous for Katon or any fire based elements to come into contact with it. If for example; an ebony dragon would hit a fire technique it would ignite the surface and area around the dragon, blue flames erupting from it's surface it will become even more powerful. Mass amount of powder maybe blown away, but it's useless if the source of the ebony is not destroyed, water will dampen the effects and neutralise any powder on the surface of the ebony.

Usage Examples:
Type Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank A-S
Range Short-Long
Chakra 30-40 (-10 for animated constructs)(-20 to opponent per turn)
Damage 60-80 (+20 if ignited)
Description
The user creates constructs of Ebony Release from the ground or their person, these constructs can be as small or large as they wish and they're only limited by the user's imagination. This can range from Ninja tools to Walls; any animated constructs like large dragons that actively pursue the target require chakra each turn to keep active. If these constructs come into contact with opponents or living beings that use chakra they'll be subject to irritated, burning skin and partial blindness if it gets in their eyes, they'll be unable to breath properly and not able to concentrate on attacks with more than 2 hand seals.

If the technique comes into contact with any fire based techniques that aren't strong enough to defeat the constructs, they will instead of being weakened absorb the chakra within itself and ignite from within itself and across it's surface turning the flames blue seemingly taking it under their control. Any other energy-based elements it comes into contact with that aren't strong enough to defeat the constructs will be absorbed instead into it though not immediately ignited; it becomes up to the user when they want the constructs to ignite with a simple handseal.
- Animated constructs last for four turns maximum
- A Rank can only be used 6 times per battle
- S Rank can only be used 4 times per battle with a two turn cooldown
Type Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Rank S
Range Short - Mid
Chakra 40 (+5 per turn actively shifting)
Damage N/A (+80 if ignited)
Description The user creates a very polished construct of Ebony which takes the form of tree like pillars with other branches of polished ebony hanging from them. They cover the entire field like a forest and constantly shift and spin and twist, reflecting the sunlight or moonlight into the eyes of opponent's causing them blindness; the light is not constant blindness but active enough to constantly shift and flash into the vision of enemies after every second making it hard to concentrate on techniques with hand seals over 2. If an opponent comes into contact with the tree it saps 40 of their chakra.

If the trees are attacked and attempts at removing them are made, they will break apart and release clouds of powder which saps chakra from techniques but doesn't stop them, it also leaves the residue behind and begins to irritate any opponents caught within the vicinity of the forest and also begins to sap their chakra. If it's ignited the whole forest explodes with blue and the trees light up on fire, touching the trees deal 40 damage.

The user can perform two handseals at any time, also costing a move to localise and explode one of the trees near an opponent. It will secrete powder and then ignite, exploding in a 5 meter radius. This causes a chain reaction of lightning up the other trees though they won't explode, they'll just be on fire. The user can continue to have trees explode each turn.
-Whilst this technique is active the user cannot perform any Kokutanton techniques.
-Whilst this technique is active the user can only perform Mokuton and Meiton techniques
-Can only be used thrice per battle
Type Supplementary/Defensive
Rank Forbidden
Range Long
Chakra 50 (-40 to the opponent(s) per turn)
Damage n/a (-5 per turn to opponent(s) and the user)(+90 if ignited)
Description
The user perform four handseals and creates a large dome around the battlefield that covers both the user and the opponent - the diameter of this dome is 15m and height at it's peak is 20m. Within the dome it is completely pitch black and normal vision becomes impossible to use, the dome when it rises also fills up with black ebony powder that makes the air toxic and irritable to the skin hurting the opponent a little but over time; but also absorbs 40 chakra per turn of them and anyone but the user trapped within it. Within the dome if a fire technique is used it ignites the powder and the inside of the whole dome lights up with blue flame (see second para). It becomes really hard to use sensory techniques or sharingan/chakra seeing dojutsu with all the chakra powered black powder full inside of the dome

The user performs a couple of hand seals after any time chakra has been absorbed and can ignite the dome, causing the inside the completely explode with blue flames. The inside of the ebony walls erupt with blue flames and continue to linger, coming into contact with said wall causes a further 20 damage to anyone. It takes another move to force the powder to ignite, if the user is still inside they will also be hurt by the full force of an F-Rank Technique. If the dome is ignited by fire it doesn't count as another move as it was ignited by an outside source though the full damage still applies.
- Usable Once
- No Kokutanton/Mokuton in the same turn

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must be at least Jonin rank
Must have mastered Mokuton & Meiton
Must be able to use both Mokuton & Meiton on the same Bio, limiting it further to certain characters and abilities. (Example)

Weak to:
Lightning; even though it's an energy, lightning is quick and can tear up wood like it's nothing and it's electrical properties can neutralise ebony's toxic aura. Though if the lightning is still low enough of a rank not to defeat the construct (C-Rank Lightning versus A-Rank Ebony for example), it has the potential to be absorbed to empower it.

Extremely dense elements like Crystal, Steel and other Metals. These elements are just too hard for Ebony Release to bunch through and with a large enough volume of said elements will just easily carve through the wood.

Lava Release: even though it will ignite the powder, the sheer liquid form of lava will just melt through the ebony meaning if it's quick enough to come into contact with the source (i.e the ebony itself) the powder will explode but at a localised point under the force/shield of the lava.

Water: Wood acts as a good solid defence versus water usually. However because of the properties that Ebony carries the water isn't fully solid so absorption is attempted soaking through the wood and causing it to become soft and can easily pull apart. Water also extinguishes Ebony when ignited and neutralises any powder and further potential for ebony to ignite.

Strong to:
Earth and Doton based elements; like standard mokuton, wood can infiltrate and break apart earth. Earth cannot be absorbed so when defeated will not allow the user to ignite techniques further.

Fire and other elements that use flames, combust or ignite like Bakuton; a dangerous element to combat Ebony and one that will potentially empower it further.

Wind release and energy based elements like dust; the dark properties residing within Ebony further augment it's power. Energy based elements that could be feasibly absorbed by Dark Release just make it hard to combat and can end up empowering the user's techniques.

Bijuu Chakra; like normal Mokuton Ebony would still retain it's chakra suppressing properties versus Bijuu chakra and raw bijuu chakra techniques.

Mokuton; Ebony is more dense, refined and just inherently stronger than normal Wood Release and so can easily halt it's form.

Dark Release; Dark Release can only combat energy based elements - since ebony is solid then it's a counter for it's own element.

Co-creator: N/A

Students I pass this custom element on to: ? & ?

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Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Fire | Wind | Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Volcanic Storm or what some call it, Dirty Storm is simply a storm created by a Volcanic ash and ice rubbing against each other which produces lightning through the volcanic plume which gives form to volcanic storm. There is proof that this is in the narutoverse due to the fact that volcanoes exist inside the narutoverse, namely the forgotten island that was shown in the series which is a huge volcano in itself. Due to that information, its safe to believe that this volcano acts in a similar way as normal volcanos such as erupting, and creating ash, etc.

How it works:
This element works in very unique ways, utilizing every single element to make this element possible. Though comes with great chakra control. This is done by creating volcanic ash using fire, earth, and lightning. The earth and fire creates the volcanic rock while the lightning chakra is used to break it apart causing it to turn into a dust-like state which turns into volcanic ash. The user will then mix these two outcomes together in their chakra system. This gives birth to a Volcanic storm. The powerful mix of the ash and lightning that surges through the Volcanic Ash, creating a Volcanic Storm. Volcanic storms can reach higher than 1000 degrees, thus is extremely hot, while also having the flexibility of wind though the wind is a heavier than regular wind thus giving it a more physical attribute than regular wind (allowing for blunt damage to a smaller degree), This is similar to how essentially smoke is heavier than air, Volcanic Ash is broken down earth particles mixed with several other things. while lastly having the destructive nature of lightning since lightning surges through and around it as a whole, though only being fast as wind as a whole. The user is able to create this from their body or the user can use this from an earth source.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create things made from Volcanic storm. Be it a wall, or spikes, or a even a sword through the hand. Though due to its nature the user isnt able to make tools to hold or through.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned the basic 5 elements

Is weak to:

Water & Water Based Elements:
Liquid based elements will simply wash away the Volcanic storm, complete dissipating it
Wind & Wind Based Elements: Since Lightning surges around and through the storm, the wind would not only overpower the lightning, but by doing that, it would weaken the overall element, dispersing it

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements (Thats weak to lightning only):
Due to the incredible amount of lightning that surges through this element, it will simply break down earth like normal
Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would overpower fire, completley engulfing it, and even extinguishing it.

Co-creator: Daemon

🍆Declined. On a smaller note, you still have some stuff in here to clean up; you kept in mentions of this utilizing more elements like the previous submissions even though you reduced the amount of elements used. The main note for this decline: This doesn't read much different than regular Volcanic Ash. As I mentioned in my previous check, ash with lightning running through it doesn't warrant a CE, you can do that with a CJ. For a CE, there has to be something physically unique about this. All lightning has done in this is made the ash hotter, and hotter volcanic ash isn't unique enough to be a CE. Essentially, you gotta find a way to combine these elements to create one or more properties unique to this that isn't in Volcanic Ash, and it can't be something like "it's hotter" that can be accomplished with a CJ.🍆
Lowkey just revamped the whole thing.

Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Lightning|Fire|Earth|

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Volcanic storm can easily be explained through Manga context and in real life application. In the manga, we clearly see Ash being used in a few variations, One being in Asuma's flammable Ash, which can be reignited through sparks, and through Madara's Hiding in Ash jutsu, where he can expel large amounts of ash from his mouth as an escape. There can be a few explanations that either Ash can be directly created from fire release, or perhaps through earth release to create a fuel source, then fire release to burn it to create ash. Lightning release itself is self explanatory. In the context of Volcanic ash, I will explain below but for now, when something is super heated, it loses an electron which generates an electrical charge. Through lightning release we can either increase this through chakra or collect it and multiply it.


How it works:
This Elements works by combining the three above elements together into a single medium, to create a large Electrical Ash Storm. Firstly, the user combines all three elements together, and when this occurs, is how the element is formed.
Firstly explaining it scientifically, "Volcanic ash is formed during explosive volcanic eruptions when dissolved gases in expand and escape violently into the atmosphere. "

Translated into the Narutoverse we can use fire release and earth release to create magma/lava (already shown to be possible). This is how we create Volcanic ash instead of regular ash.

As said above, when something is burnt and super heated, it loses electrons. The loss of electrons creates a small electrical charge, however due to the sheer size of electrons, we can increase this number in terms of how many electrons we lose.

We can assume that lightning release is similar or at least we have the ability to produce electrical currents from lightning release. Then via Kekkei Tota, we can combine all 3 elements to produce a lightning charged Volcanic Ash, which has the properties of being both burning hot while also being electrical. This form can be seen as a mix being being solid while also behaving like a gas.

By doing this, the user creates a huge Ash Storm, which is imbued with Lightning, and burns on two different levels. The first level of burning is from the Ash itself, which leaves burns similar to fire, destroying the cells with raw heat upon contact, leaving reddening marks the longer contact is maintained. Secondly, from that same wound, the lightning burns occur, which travel up the persons body, tearing the skin fibers, in the same way regular lightning would, splitting the muscles and skin and causing electrical burns.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create various structures of Volcanic Storm. Be they waves, blasts, or spikes, as long as it makes sense within Volcanic Storms usage.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned Lightning, Earth and Fire.

Is weak to:

Lightning and Lightning base Elements:
Volcanic storm is weak to lightning due to the opponent electrical currents. When a secondary current comes into contact with Volcanic storm, the two currents will cancel out, halting Volcanic storms progression, and destroying the Ash due to the combined clash of particles from the outside source.

Wind & Wind Based Elements: Since Lightning surges around and through the storm, the wind would not only overpower the lightning, but Also wind is sharp enough to slash the Volcanic Storm ash to ribbons, pushing it back and also destroying the ash itself.

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements:
Due to the incredible amount of lightning that surges through this element, it will simply break down earth like normal, smashing it apart.

Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would engulf Fire techniques, the heat being absorbed into the ash and simply being dispersed within the storm, becoming one with the storm, and being overpowered.

Water and Water Based Elements: When Volcanic storm comes into contact with Water, the Ash inside the storm will absorb it into itself, and the lightning and heat from the ash will boil it upon contact, causing the Ash to expand, and actually strengthening the Storm by adding more volume to the Ash and expanding the side of the storm upon contact.

Co-creator: Delta

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Declined. You have the same issue as before. What you're describing is just Volcanic Ash with lightning flowing through it. You came close by mentioning that it's a solid that acts like a gas, but you'll have to elaborate more on what that means and how that factors into how the CE operates for approval. I'd recommend expanding on this, or making this something like lightning in the form of ash.
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Custom element Japanese name:

Feromonton

Custom element English name:

Pheromone Release

The element is based on:

Earth + Water + Wind

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Pheromones are present in nearly all living beings, commonly used as a chemical to either communicate between species, influence the behavior of those who can perceive it. This usage in the series is primarily seen with insects, typically Aburame insects. They are able to use pheromones to communicate with bugs within the species or the host itself by releasing pheromones from their bodies. This can even effect how these insects behave. Pheromone Release centers around the production of these pheromones which can have varying effects.

How it works:

Pheromone Release is primarily generated by using water and earth to build the buildings blocks of a biological chemical that can be released from the body. The addition of Wind Release gives these pheromones the ability to quickly cluster together and travel similarly to a gas that can be released from the body. Logically, Pheromone has the properties of a gas even if it's a chemical gas, being able to be manipulated similarly to Wind release, allowing it to be released in gusts, slicing winds, blasts, etc.

Now that the boring stuff is out of the way. Pheromones true shine comes in its ability to use the chemicals that make up its structure to send out signals that can influence living creatures on various levels whether it may be on a basic communication level or able to influence behavior entirely. This naturally comes within levels as not all pheromones can work on all creatures. At their most basic level, Pheromones can effect rudimentary creatures such as insects, allowing the user to send out communications with them or change their behavior entirely. At an intermediate level, these pheromones are capable of interacting with the senses of Summoning Contracts, Inuzuka Dogs, familiars etc influencing their behavior and communicating with them. And at its highest and most potent level, interacting with other humans being able to relay signals and influence their behavior on a level not too dissimilar to genjutsu but clearly do not follow the same rules as this is not a genjutsu based element. Each subsequent level can effect creatures below it. For example intermediate levels can affect summonings and basic insects and animals. Or the Peak level is capable of affecting Humans, Summonings and/or basic animals or insects as the effects that take place depend on the potency of the Pheromone itself. The higher the potency (rank), the more individuals it can effect.

Naturally, these pheromones can be applied to inanimate objects too that come into contact with these gaseous chemical clouds, getting covered in the chemical "scent" these pheromones produce. This allows users of this element to leave around pheromone trails around the battlefield for various uses. Or even having different chemical trails around the battlefield to insight different behavioral effects. The user is also capable of releasing these Pheromone clouds from creatures with the ability to release pheromones such as other insects etc. Making it Pheromone Release the perfect combination with the Aburame Clan insects which this element was based off of. However, naturally it would require the user to focus the Feromonton through the insects for them to release it in this method.

Normally, pheromones have no color to them but for the sake of the RP, Pheromone Release techniques will be given a pale teal color within its gas clouds.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

Pheromone Release
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will release a condense Pheromone cloud blade from his mouth aimed to pierce the target. Once pierced the target, the Pheromone effects will take place. These pheromone effects act at the intermediate level. Due to the opponent doused in pheromones these pheromones signal nearby summonings/creations/animals/insects (including the opponent's summonings/creations) to attack the opponent.

Conditions to be able to use it:

Must have Earth + Water + Wind

Is weak to:

Wind - Can blow away Pheromone cloud

Earth - Can be used to block pheromones from entering

Is strong against:

Lightning - Will just diffuse into gaseous cloud
Fire - Oxygen isn't present with this gaseous cloud allowing it to quickly smother fires
Water - Pheromone gas will just mix into the liquid, not removing the chemical scent.


Co-creator:


Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


Declined. Clashes with Ganmi Clan Pheromones.
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Genshi Supaku



Custom element English name: Primordial Spark



The element is based on: Lightning and Sea of life



Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga context there is no proof of the sea of life existing, since it’s a creation custom to the roleplay, however there are multiple instances where we have lightning be conducted through other elements, proving that lightning can be conducted through elements is the core fact required. In regard to proving the existence of electrical signals in the body, the main proof is seen in the Kabuto vs Tsunade & Naruto battle, in which he directly messes with the electrical signals in her body.



How it works: By releasing the sea of life from their body as they release lightning chakra in combination, the child of Tiamat will create a sort of highly accelerated electrical mud, in terms of appearance it could be likened to Madara’s sage lightning technique, though much darker in coloration with a black and red colour scheme appearing like liquid lightning. With the sea of life substituting the traditional conductor however this electricity will carry certain leech like properties due to the Amino-Geis. When struck with techniques created by this element the victim will have the altered amino-geis enter their body, instead of paralysing them like some electrical attacks these ones will directly begin to alter the opponents genetic structure specifically in regards to the electrical signals that are sent through the body, restructuring how these work can cause multiple things to happen at the users discretion, they can completely remove the ability for the opponent to feel the area struck, they can on the opposite side of the scale cause the electrical triggers to go haywire inflicting mental damage every turn as the opponent feels incredible agony, finally a middle path is simply to mess with the electrical signals pathway, causing movements to be messed up. These alterations will revert after a few turns usually, since this element is adding to the sea, the amino-geis isn't pure and as such doesn't carry it's initial effects, instead it's altered in such a way where repeated exposure to this element will cause a total loss of motor control, leaving victims immobile indefinitely instead of enslaved. Additionally due to using the sea of life, the damage and chakra cost of this element will be raised, to be in line with the Sea of Life itself. The effects of the altered amino-geis becoming permanent follows the same rules as the traditional amino-geis.



Jutsu Usage Examples:
Primordial Lightning Release
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Releasing a blast of primordial lightning in the shape of a beam from the fingertips or mouth, the user will aim to strike the opponent in a specific area, whether this is the arms or legs or torso, the user will be able to rewrite the electrical signals in the opponents body thanks to the Amino-Geis, this can either be used to inflict mental damage over time by increasing their signals of pain, which will cause 10 damage per turn, or the user can disable electrical signals, rendering the limb useless, in the case of the torso this would prevent jutsu that mould chakra in the stomach. These effects wear off after three turns.



Conditions to be able to use it: Must be able to use the sea of life.

Is weak to: Nothing, nor is it strong to anything.



Is strong against: Nothing, nor is it weak to anything.



Co-creator: N/A



Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined: Okay so a lot of the effects you describe are things that you dont necessarily need amino-geis for. As lightning can already cause numbing etc etc. The mental damage section kind of doesnt make sense given the CE is based on the Sea of Life that doesn't really give these effects. This reads more like a CoT/Lightning CJ than an entire CE. - Daemon
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Tariumu


Custom element English name: Thallium

The element is based on: Earth and advanced chakra control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Thallium is a bluish-white hued metal found in trace amounts throughout the Earth’s crust. In its purest state thallium is both tasteless and odorless, and was once sourced from smelting other metals. The Boruto anime shows an advancement in technology where they will use certain metals to allow it to work. For example, In the sphere of the fibre optic and glass lens industries, thallium serves as a dopant within the lenses to hasten received signals. We have seen that video recording and television exists in the Boruto series, so it would seem logical they would use the best materials for this technology.

On the other side, we have seen shinobi can control steel, different elements through magnetism such as Iron and Gold, so it should be possible to create or control different metals as long as they are known to man.

How it works: The user can draw on thallium from the earth's crust, or create it from their own chakra, releasing it from their body in any shape and form. Thallium is a bluish-white hued metal. Aside from being a metal, it is actually poisonous. Thallium poisoning foments adverse effects on the nervous system and may cause vomiting, diarrhea, temporary hair loss, and impediments to the lungs, heart, liver, and kidneys. (These effects will be made into cj for reference) this was used as a rodent killer for this reason. It's boiling point is 1473°C.

Along with it's poison aspects it has several other uses:
- It reacts to Gamma radiation.
- It's a super conductor
- It's used in the manufacturing of reflective glass, allowing it to be used as a form of reflecting images.

Jutsu Usage Examples:
Thallium wall:
The user slams their hands on the ground, manipulating the earth to produce a large wall made of thallium.

Conditions to be able to use it:

- Needs to have access to earth release and basic ninjutsu

Is weak to:
Wind - Due to it tarnishing easily, sharp wind will be able to cut through it
Lightning - Much like steel the lightning will destroy it


Is strong against:
Fire and heat based elements(Scorch, Lava and the likes) - It has a high melting point which makes it resistant to heat.
Earth and wood - It's harder than earth and wood so it breaks through them easily.
Water and liquid elements - Much like earth, where it's so dense, it can't be over powered by liquids.


Co-creator: Kashin

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. This is really underdeveloped. First, and immediate concern, what do you mean by "it reacts to Gamma radiation"? That has to be very clearly defined. Same with your note on it being highly reflective. You can't turn this into a pseudo-light release like element where you can mess around with light and radiation. So you need to explain these things very clearly.

Poisonous metals in the RP are hardly unique at this point. In fact, all heavy metals on the periodic table are poisonous. I'll allow this, but find something that actually separates this element from all those other heavy metals that have been submitted. Get creative. This isn't a chemistry class. I don't need to know what the melting point is exactly (because I could argue that canon Fire Release goes beyond what a standard flame burns at, meaning this 1300C melting point is actually meaningless). So get creative.
 
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Lowkey just revamped the whole thing.

Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Lightning|Fire|Earth|

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Volcanic storm can easily be explained through Manga context and in real life application. In the manga, we clearly see Ash being used in a few variations, One being in Asuma's flammable Ash, which can be reignited through sparks, and through Madara's Hiding in Ash jutsu, where he can expel large amounts of ash from his mouth as an escape. There can be a few explanations that either Ash can be directly created from fire release, or perhaps through earth release to create a fuel source, then fire release to burn it to create ash. Lightning release itself is self explanatory. In the context of Volcanic ash, I will explain below but for now, when something is super heated, it loses an electron which generates an electrical charge. Through lightning release we can either increase this through chakra or collect it and multiply it.


How it works:
This Elements works by combining the three above elements together into a single medium, to create a large Electrical Ash Storm. Firstly, the user combines all three elements together, and when this occurs, is how the element is formed.
Firstly explaining it scientifically, "Volcanic ash is formed during explosive volcanic eruptions when dissolved gases in expand and escape violently into the atmosphere. "

Translated into the Narutoverse we can use fire release and earth release to create magma/lava (already shown to be possible). This is how we create Volcanic ash instead of regular ash.

As said above, when something is burnt and super heated, it loses electrons. The loss of electrons creates a small electrical charge, however due to the sheer size of electrons, we can increase this number in terms of how many electrons we lose.

We can assume that lightning release is similar or at least we have the ability to produce electrical currents from lightning release. Then via Kekkei Tota, we can combine all 3 elements to produce a lightning charged Volcanic Ash, which has the properties of being both burning hot while also being electrical. This form can be seen as a mix being being solid while also behaving like a gas.

By doing this, the user creates a huge Ash Storm, which is imbued with Lightning, and burns on two different levels. The first level of burning is from the Ash itself, which leaves burns similar to fire, destroying the cells with raw heat upon contact, leaving reddening marks the longer contact is maintained. Secondly, from that same wound, the lightning burns occur, which travel up the persons body, tearing the skin fibers, in the same way regular lightning would, splitting the muscles and skin and causing electrical burns.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create various structures of Volcanic Storm. Be they waves, blasts, or spikes, as long as it makes sense within Volcanic Storms usage.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned Lightning, Earth and Fire.

Is weak to:

Lightning and Lightning base Elements:
Volcanic storm is weak to lightning due to the opponent electrical currents. When a secondary current comes into contact with Volcanic storm, the two currents will cancel out, halting Volcanic storms progression, and destroying the Ash due to the combined clash of particles from the outside source.

Wind & Wind Based Elements: Since Lightning surges around and through the storm, the wind would not only overpower the lightning, but Also wind is sharp enough to slash the Volcanic Storm ash to ribbons, pushing it back and also destroying the ash itself.

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements:
Due to the incredible amount of lightning that surges through this element, it will simply break down earth like normal, smashing it apart.

Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would engulf Fire techniques, the heat being absorbed into the ash and simply being dispersed within the storm, becoming one with the storm, and being overpowered.

Water and Water Based Elements: When Volcanic storm comes into contact with Water, the Ash inside the storm will absorb it into itself, and the lightning and heat from the ash will boil it upon contact, causing the Ash to expand, and actually strengthening the Storm by adding more volume to the Ash and expanding the side of the storm upon contact.

Co-creator: Delta

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Declined. You have the same issue as before. What you're describing is just Volcanic Ash with lightning flowing through it. You came close by mentioning that it's a solid that acts like a gas, but you'll have to elaborate more on what that means and how that factors into how the CE operates for approval. I'd recommend expanding on this, or making this something like lightning in the form of ash.
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Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Lightning|Fire|Earth|

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Volcanic Storm exists as extremely hot lightning existing in a form akin to that of ash. In the manga, we clearly see that charka can be used to produce ash through Fire Release, such as through Asuma's flammable ash and Madara's ability to quickly release a cloud of ash as both an offense and defense. The element's existence is further supported by the existence of Darui's Storm Release. The latter element functions as lightning given the ability to flow as though its physical form is that of water, proving that it's possible to create advanced elements through granting one element the physical state of another. Therefore, using Earth and Fire chakra to facilitate the ash-like form granted to Lightning chakra is fully possible.

How it works:

This Elements works by combining the three above elements together into a single medium, to create ash in the form of lightning. Rather than the typical solid remnants of combustion that make up ash, the particles in Volcanic Storm consist of electricity, given shape and form through the user's chakra. Produced through Fire and Lightning Release, Volcanic Storm is extremely hot to the touch and also capable of inducing shocks to the target. The physical form of the element also grants it an advantage in that the element is highly malleable. Similar to normal clouds of ash, the element's form lacks rigidity and is fluid. Its shape is capable of being altered and compressed to suit the user's needs, granting it a dexterity not unlike that of Gaara's sand. Examples of this are compressing the size of an entire building into a single long cylindrical pipe the size of a shoe, by folding it in on itself.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create various structures of Volcanic Storm. Be they waves, blasts, or spikes, as long as it makes sense within Volcanic Storms usage.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned Lightning, Earth and Fire.

Is weak to:

Lightning and Lightning base Elements:
Volcanic storm is weak to lightning due to the opponent electrical currents. When a secondary current comes into contact with Volcanic storm, the two currents will cancel out, halting Volcanic storms progression, and destroying the Ash due to the combined clash of particles from the outside source.

Wind & Wind Based Elements: Volcanic Storm's physical form is highly susceptible to Wind Release, as the lightning can be neutralized by Wind's insulation and the ash form can be scattered by the wind's force.

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements:
Consisting of Lightning, Volcanic Storm can destroy and penetrate through Earth Release and elements whose physical form consists of Earth.

Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would engulf Fire techniques and elements whose physical form consist of fire, the heat being absorbed into the ash and simply being dispersed within the storm, becoming one with the storm, and being overpowered.

Co-creator: Delta
Student(s): Strix

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Custom element Japanese name: Genshi Supaku



Custom element English name: Primordial Spark



The element is based on: Lightning and Sea of life



Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga context there is no proof of the sea of life existing, since it’s a creation custom to the roleplay, however there are multiple instances where we have lightning be conducted through other elements, proving that lightning can be conducted through elements is the core fact required. In regard to proving the existence of electrical signals in the body, the main proof is seen in the Kabuto vs Tsunade & Naruto battle, in which he directly messes with the electrical signals in her body.



How it works: By releasing the sea of life from their body as they release lightning chakra in combination, the child of Tiamat will create a sort of highly accelerated electrical mud, in terms of appearance it could be likened to Madara’s sage lightning technique, though much darker in coloration with a black and red colour scheme appearing like liquid lightning. With the sea of life substituting the traditional conductor however this electricity will carry certain leech like properties due to the Amino-Geis. When struck with techniques created by this element the victim will have the altered amino-geis enter their body, instead of paralysing them like some electrical attacks these ones will directly begin to alter the opponents genetic structure specifically in regards to the electrical signals that are sent through the body, restructuring how these work can cause multiple things to happen at the users discretion, they can completely remove the ability for the opponent to feel the area struck, they can on the opposite side of the scale cause the electrical triggers to go haywire inflicting mental damage every turn as the opponent feels incredible agony, finally a middle path is simply to mess with the electrical signals pathway, causing movements to be messed up. These alterations will revert after a few turns usually, since this element is adding to the sea, the amino-geis isn't pure and as such doesn't carry it's initial effects, instead it's altered in such a way where repeated exposure to this element will cause a total loss of motor control, leaving victims immobile indefinitely instead of enslaved. Additionally due to using the sea of life, the damage and chakra cost of this element will be raised, to be in line with the Sea of Life itself. The effects of the altered amino-geis becoming permanent follows the same rules as the traditional amino-geis.



Jutsu Usage Examples:
Primordial Lightning Release
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Releasing a blast of primordial lightning in the shape of a beam from the fingertips or mouth, the user will aim to strike the opponent in a specific area, whether this is the arms or legs or torso, the user will be able to rewrite the electrical signals in the opponents body thanks to the Amino-Geis, this can either be used to inflict mental damage over time by increasing their signals of pain, which will cause 10 damage per turn, or the user can disable electrical signals, rendering the limb useless, in the case of the torso this would prevent jutsu that mould chakra in the stomach. These effects wear off after three turns.



Conditions to be able to use it: Must be able to use the sea of life.

Is weak to: Nothing, nor is it strong to anything.



Is strong against: Nothing, nor is it weak to anything.



Co-creator: N/A



Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined: Okay so a lot of the effects you describe are things that you dont necessarily need amino-geis for. As lightning can already cause numbing etc etc. The mental damage section kind of doesnt make sense given the CE is based on the Sea of Life that doesn't really give these effects. This reads more like a CoT/Lightning CJ than an entire CE. - Daemon

Custom element Japanese name: Genshi Supaku



Custom element English name: Primordial Spark



The element is based on: Lightning and Sea of life



Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga context there is no proof of the sea of life existing, since it’s a creation custom to the roleplay, however there are multiple instances where we have lightning be conducted through other elements, proving that lightning can be conducted through elements is the core fact required. In regard to proving the existence of the nervous system in the body, the main proof is seen in the Kabuto vs Tsunade & Naruto battle, in which he directly messes with the electrical signals in her body. Additionally the sea of life has shown that it can have it's state changed at the users will, via the vile haze technique.



How it works:
By releasing the sea of life from their body as they release lightning chakra in combination, the child of Tiamat will create a sort of highly accelerated electrical mud, in terms of appearance it could be likened to Madara’s sage lightning technique, though much darker in coloration with a black and red colour scheme appearing like liquid lightning. With the sea of life substituting the traditional conductor however this electricity will carry certain leech like properties due to the Amino-Geis. When struck with techniques created by this element the victim will have the altered amino-geis enter their body, While some lightning techniques can cause muscle paralysis this will not do so instead it will alter the opponents genetic structure specifically in regards to the electrical signals that are sent through the body via the nervous system, restructuring how these work can cause two potential alterations to the opponents body, the first will cause the targeted area to become entirely immobile, restructuring their nervous system to send no signals at all stripping them of any sense of feeling. The second does the opposite, restructuring the nervous system to be constantly firing signals of pain, causing the victim to suffer terrible immeasurably high amounts of agony constantly. This power is something that could only be achieved through the sea of life given it's ability to alter life itself on a primordial level, restructuring the genetic structure of the enemy with incredible precision and taking away or adding features. These alterations will not revert unless the victim somehow corrects their genetic structure, something that is possible through yang release, but not through traditional medical ninjutsu. Unlike the Amino-Geis in the pure sea of life, this ability won't enslave those it repeatedly strikes, instead it will cause the effects to be irreversible by any means if the victim is struck enough times. This follows the rubric for the canon Amino-Geis effect.



Jutsu Usage Examples:
Primordial Lightning Release
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Releasing a blast of primordial lightning in the shape of a beam from the fingertips or mouth, the user will aim to strike the opponent in a specific area, whether this is the arms or legs or torso, the user will be able to rewrite the nervous system in the opponents body thanks to the Amino-Geis, this can either be used to inflict mental damage over time by increasing their signals of pain, which will cause 10 damage per turn, or the user can disable signals, rendering the limb useless, in the case of the torso this would prevent jutsu that mould chakra in the stomach. These effects wear off after three turns.



Conditions to be able to use it: Must be able to use the sea of life.

Is weak to: Nothing, nor is it strong to anything.



Is strong against: Nothing, nor is it weak to anything.



Co-creator: N/A



Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. I don't think this warrants a CE. As it stands now, it just seems like something you could accomplish by running a Lightning Release infusion technique through a Sea of Life technique. In fact, I don't really see how Lightning Release truly factors into this, as what you're describing can really be accomplished with a custom Sea of Life technique.
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Hisei-Fu

Custom element English name:
Jade Wind

The element is based on:

Wind+Water+Medjutsu

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
We have seen that Wind can carry water molecules via mist and fog, examples being hidden mist jutsu, Mei's Corrosive Fog Vapour element. We have seen that water can be combined with Med to use med via water transmission, eg Water Mosquito technique, additionally medical fluid jutsu can be used, which would assume to be medical techniques combined with water release.
Medical Fluid control/release:
Combing Elements with Universal ninjutsu has already been done, such as fuuinjutsu that creates a flame barrier, (additionally Drackos Mystic Fire), as well as other Yin Custom elements that prove its possible to create CE with universal jutsu.

How it works:
To start, it is possible to combine Water release, that is let out via fine molecules, and combined with wind to create a mist and fog like creation. This gives us a physical actual release.
Combining Med jutsu with this physical release allows the user to imbibe Medical chakra that can be used to heal or damage targets, depending on techniques. By creating specific medical chakra, whether that be medical fluid, as explained above, or infused into the water molecules similarly to the Water Mosquito Technique, the user can choose to control their medical chakra released to be healing, like normal, or aggressive, to attack biological targets. This can be seen similar as "( Iryo Ninjutsu: Tsuyoi Kōsen ) - Medical Ninjutsu: Strong Beam" which is described as "This chakra quickly changes from a light, translucent green to a heavy, bright red color as the user points his fingers outwards, unleashing a powerful chakra beam. The chakra beam, however, has different properties from normal chakra and, unlike the technique which serves as its basis, has no healing effect, quite the contrary. If it hits an enemy living organism, its aggressive nature injures the targeted tissues, creating an effect similar to a severe burn. The cells burst open as if having been hit by a high temperature, reducing themselves to a mushy pulp as the beam travels through them. "
Several other properties can be given to Jade Wind, as the Uses for medical ninjutsu are great for specifically targeting biological organisms. This can include Nervous System disruption, Tenketsu disruption, possibly preventing healing, restoring health, or healing the user's injuries.

Advantages of having medical chakra combined with elements allow it to have a greater variety of forms, which can travel, create contracts, or even use more advanced shape manipulation. Elemental manipulation with medical chakra also can be seen as a boon to have a new form to manipulate. All current medical techniques themselves are all produced from the users body as point of origin. However when introduced with medical chakra, this now allows the user to create new source from which to form medical chakra, using the element as a medium.

Jade Wind is the name given to this Custom Element for the fact that normally medical Chakra is seen as green, and thus when carried by a wind/fog, it can be seen as an emerald wind. This advanced medical chakra usage as a result is neutral to all elements, having no weakness, but no strengths to any others.

Jutsu Usage Examples:
Hisei-fu: Yulon ga Kokyu | Jade Wind: Breath of Yulon
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a vortex of wind to rotate around them, stripping away flesh of anyone that is not standing at the eye of the storm. Lasts 3 turns.

Hisei-fu: Niuzao ga Shukufuku | Jade Wind: Blessing of Niuzao
Type:
Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 health restored each turn)
Description:
The user covers an area up to mid range in Jade Wind that hides the user, while healing them while they stand inside the mist.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind+Water+Med

Is weak to: Neutral to all elements

Is strong against: Neutral to all elements
Biological oorganisms. Gains one rank for biological organisms when in contact

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?


Declined. Alright so the issue here is that you kind of shoot yourself in the foot. You use the Water Mosquito technique as proof of concept. Yet Water Mosquito is just Water + Medical Ninjutsu, it isn't actually a separate element. That's basically what you've done with this. You've just made Medical Wind, rather than an actual unique element. Go a step further in that direction. I think it's possible. Make something that isn't just Medical Wind, but an actual full on element.
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
HiseiFu

Custom element English name:
Jade Wind

The element is based on:
Wind+Water+Medjutsu

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
We have seen that Wind can carry water molecules via mist and fog, examples being hidden mist jutsu, Mei's Corrosive Fog Vapour element. We have seen that water can be combined with Med to use med via water transmission, eg Water Mosquito technique, additionally medical fluid jutsu can be used, which would assume to be medical techniques combined with water release.
Medical Fluid control/release:
Combing Elements with Universal ninjutsu has already been done, such as fuuinjutsu that creates a flame barrier, (additionally Drackos Mystic Fire), as well as other Yin Custom elements that prove its possible to create CE with universal jutsu.

How it works:
To start, it is possible to combine Water release, that is let out via fine molecules, and combined with wind to create a mist and fog like creation. This gives us a physical actual release.
Combining Med jutsu with this physical release allows the user to imbibe Medical chakra that can be used to heal or damage targets, depending on techniques. By creating specific medical chakra, whether that be medical fluid, as explained above, or infused into the water molecules similarly to the Water Mosquito Technique, the user can choose to control their medical chakra released to be healing, like normal, or aggressive, to attack biological targets. This can be seen similar as "( Iryo Ninjutsu: Tsuyoi Kōsen ) - Medical Ninjutsu: Strong Beam" which is described as "This chakra quickly changes from a light, translucent green to a heavy, bright red color as the user points his fingers outwards, unleashing a powerful chakra beam. The chakra beam, however, has different properties from normal chakra and, unlike the technique which serves as its basis, has no healing effect, quite the contrary. If it hits an enemy living organism, its aggressive nature injures the targeted tissues, creating an effect similar to a severe burn. The cells burst open as if having been hit by a high temperature, reducing themselves to a mushy pulp as the beam travels through them. "
Several other properties can be given to Jade Wind, as the Uses for medical ninjutsu are great for specifically targeting biological organisms. This can include Nervous System disruption, Tenketsu disruption, possibly preventing healing, restoring health, or healing the user's injuries.

Advantages of having medical chakra combined with elements allow it to have a greater variety of forms, which can travel, create contracts, or even use more advanced shape manipulation. Elemental manipulation with medical chakra also can be seen as a boon to have a new form to manipulate. All current medical techniques themselves are all produced from the users body as point of origin. However when introduced with medical chakra, this now allows the user to create new source from which to form medical chakra, using the element as a medium.

Hisei-fu or Jade Wind is the name given to this Custom Element for the fact that normally medical Chakra is seen as green, and thus when seen as a thick viscous substance can be called Jade Wind. This advanced medical chakra usage as a result is neutral to all elements, having no weakness, but no strengths to any others.

Jutsu Usage Examples:
Hisei-fu: Yulon ga Kokyu | Jade Wind: Breath of Yulon
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a vortex of wind to rotate around them, stripping away flesh of anyone that is not standing at the eye of the storm. Lasts 3 turns.

Hisei-fu: Niuzao ga Shukufuku | Jade Wind: Blessing of Niuzao
Type:
Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 health restored each turn)
Description:
The user covers an area up to mid range in Jade Wind that hides the user, while healing them while they stand inside the mist.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind+Water+Med

Is weak to: Neutral to all elements

Is strong against: Neutral to all elements
Biological oorganisms. Gains one rank for biological organisms when in contact

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?


Declined. Alright so the issue here is that you kind of shoot yourself in the foot. You use the Water Mosquito technique as proof of concept. Yet Water Mosquito is just Water + Medical Ninjutsu, it isn't actually a separate element. That's basically what you've done with this. You've just made Medical Wind, rather than an actual unique element. Go a step further in that direction. I think it's possible. Make something that isn't just Medical Wind, but an actual full on element.

Custom element Japanese name:
Hisei-Fu

Custom element English name:
Jade Wind

The element is based on:
Wind+Water+Earth+Medjutsu
(A sticky slime like substance with biological properties)

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

We have seen that Wind can carry water molecules via mist and fog, examples being hidden mist jutsu, Mei's Corrosive Fog Vapour element. We have seen that water can be combined with Med to use med via water transmission, eg Water Mosquito technique, additionally medical fluid jutsu can be used, which would assume to be medical techniques combined with water release.
Medical Fluid control/release:
Combing Elements with Universal ninjutsu has already been done, such as fuuinjutsu that creates a flame barrier, (additionally Drackos Mystic Fire), as well as other Yin Custom elements that prove its possible to create CE with universal jutsu.
Additionally, we have seen several unique variations of nature release in several forms, such as sticky syrup with water, Swamp of the underworld for Mud, Gas form for fire relase, and a semi solid tangible wind (Danzo's wind kunai sword). On top of this, Advanced elements have properties when combining elements such as Mei's Acid mud, Blaze release's intense heat to burn fire to ash, etc. By combining Water, Wind and Earth, we can create a sticky slime that can stick upon contact like an adheasive to surfaces, while being light enough to float when not within contact with a surface.
On top of this, we have seen several other elements (base, advanced and custom) that manipulate the body when in contact. Examples being as said above Water mosquito (able to use elements combined with medical chakra to heal), Wood Release (Hashirama Cells that increase chakra capacaity) and things like Radiation release (dangerous to the body).

How it works:
When combining Water and Wind, we can create a type of water that is lighter than air, as seen as a fog. Examples of this are like Hidden mist jutsu where water is floating in the air to create a fog. While this is an advanced application of water, by adding in Wind nature, we can create a more specific type of floating. The reason needed for this is when adding in earth nature release, we can combine this with a water release to create a sticky adheasive element that is similar to mud and syrup, that can float. Examples of this being done are like bubble release, which needs to a bubble blower to use, however due to the nature of bubble release, it needs to stay in the shape of a bubble. By controlling the density with Wind Chakra, we can create a malleable new element that is adheasive, a slime that floats through the air, that has the properties of a liquid and a gas, but is a solid.

The reason Medical chakra comes into this is where the specific medical chakra used creates a flesh eating element, or a capable healing element, where the element itself can be seen as a salve or balm. When applied or within contact of flesh, depending the medical chakra used, whether tuned to be healing or tuned to be aggressive, it can repair or destroy cells.

This can be seen similar as "( Iryo Ninjutsu: Tsuyoi Kōsen ) - Medical Ninjutsu: Strong Beam" which is described as "This chakra quickly changes from a light, translucent green to a heavy, bright red color as the user points his fingers outwards, unleashing a powerful chakra beam. The chakra beam, however, has different properties from normal chakra and, unlike the technique which serves as its basis, has no healing effect, quite the contrary. If it hits an enemy living organism, its aggressive nature injures the targeted tissues, creating an effect similar to a severe burn. The cells burst open as if having been hit by a high temperature, reducing themselves to a mushy pulp as the beam travels through them. "
Several other properties can be given to Jade Wind, as the Uses for medical ninjutsu are great for specifically targeting biological organisms. This can include Nervous System disruption, Tenketsu disruption, possibly preventing healing, restoring health, or healing the user's injuries.

Medical chakra also gives the user a greater control over the element when created alongside the nature releases, capable of allowing the user to manipulate it on a cellular scale, with the fine tuning present in medical ninjutsu. The abilitie to create a medical scapel shows the ability to form very fine blades through shape manipulation on almost a microscopic scale.
Advantages of having medical chakra combined with elements allow it to have a greater variety of forms, which can travel, create contracts, or even use more advanced shape manipulation. Elemental manipulation with medical chakra also can be seen as a boon to have a new form to manipulate. All current medical techniques themselves are all produced from the users body as point of origin. However when introduced with medical chakra, this now allows the user to create new source from which to form medical chakra, using the element as a medium.


Jutsu Usage Examples:
Hisei-fu: Yulon ga Kokyu | Jade Wind: Breath of Yulon
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a tornado of slime to rotate around them, stripping away flesh of anyone that is not standing at the eye of the storm. Lasts 3 turns.

Hisei-fu: Niuzao ga Shukufuku | Jade Wind: Blessing of Niuzao
Type:
Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 health restored each turn)
Description:
The user covers an area up to mid range in Jade Wind that hides the user, while healing them while they stand inside the mist.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind+Water+Earth+Med

Is weak to: Neutral to all elements

Is strong against: Neutral to all elements
Biological oorganisms. Gains one rank for biological organisms when in contact

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?


Declined. I should decline this just for the name. Jade Wind, but its a fog mud thing? First off, and this is something I didn't notice before, you don't use other CEs to justify your own. You base it off of evidence from the manga, hence why it says manga context. The basis of the adhesive doesn't make sense. You can't have a gas that is sticky. You call this element a fog, which makes it a gas. Bubbles are not gas, they are liquids. So that just doesn't make sense. Determine what the element is first, then we'll go into the medical part.
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Kisenonton

Custom element English name: Xenon Release

The element is based on: Wind Chakra| Lightning Chakra | Medical Chakra

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Xenon is an actual element, it is colorless, heavy, odorless, and is a noble gas. Xenon has been used for many things, from being used for flash lamps to being used for anesthesia, and even in some lasers. It exists naturally within the earth's atmosphere, and even found in some natural springs around the world. While in most cases, being inside camera bulbs which produce the flash. One thing that makes this element unique is that it is the 2nd heaviest gas rivaling radon, being stronger than its counterparts (neon, argon, helium, etc) while the most noticeable difference between the Argon element is that xenon does not have a cold effect upon impacts like argon and frostbite. While also not having any negative side effects upon inhalation like Argon In these cases we seen plenty of cases of all these examples above. Naruto of course has an atmosphere, which would apply a sort of real-world physics into play. We have seen natural springs (Where pervy sage used to spy on woman, and multiple cases where we saw shinobis relaxing). The use of drugs (Medicine) In naruto has also been seen, including lasers, not only for medical reasons but the asura path himself, which produces lasers. All these are reasons to believe that just like the real world, xenon is also present in NV as well. All around us, mainly in the atmosphere

How it works:
This element works by combining wind and lightning releases to create a dense blinding gas. While not only being capable of causing damage from the blunt impact, Xenon is capable of being used as an Anesthetic for healing purposes, giving Xenon both damaging and healing properties. When Xenon is used, a blinding light is created capable of affecting enemies and allies alike with the user being immune to the blinding effects.

Usage Examples:

Kisenonton: Gurandochariotto No Idaina Furasshu | Xenon Release: Great Destruction of the Grand Chariot

Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will create several hand seals while gathering xenon chakra into their lunges. The user will then expel the xenon from their mouth expelling a large stream of xenon from his mouth towards the said opponent. This technique is powerful enough to cause devastating force in its wake

Kisenonton: Ionsurasuta wa, akutibu ni! | Xenon Release: Ion Thrusters Activate!
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will create beams of Xenon from their hands that will quickly propel them in the opposite direction they pointed said beams in, if they were aimed at point-blank range of a target it would cause tremendous blunt damage to them but is mainly used for evasion.

Is weak to:
Earth & Earth Base CE: (Elements Harder then earth, such as ruby, iron, etc): Earth is a strong defense and can protect one from Xenon.

Water & Water Base CE: (has more of a form than Xenon, thus causing it to impact xenon more, while at the same time xenon dissolves in water


Is strong against:
Lightning & Lightning-based CE (Lightning-based elements): Xenon still being wind, and conduct lightning very well

Wind & Wind-Based CE: Being heavier than Wind, it allows to majorly overpower wind.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Mastery over Wind
-Mastery over Lightning
-Mastery over Medical Ninjutsu

Co-creator: N/A

Students: N/a & N/a

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BusinessManTeno, our loyal member, gave on the date September 4th, 2020, a request for a Patent on his custom element Kisenonton; after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned Patent on this element by the following;
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Custom element Japanese name: Tsutaurushi

Custom element English name: Poison Ivy Release

The element is based on: Earth Release | Water Release | Medical or Poison Release

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The concept that poison ivy release is possible in the narutoverse is the mere facts that plant life is cannon in naruto. We have seen multiple plants in usage, be it wood release, the flower that blooms from wood release which is indirectly a plant. We have also seen during the Gaara arc in shippuden the need to find a cure for the poison. In which they had to search for specific plants. In which we have seen multiple plants in the search for the specific one. We also have just seen random plants in the narutoverse as a whole. Not to mention, Zetsu design is after a whole ass plant. That alone would make one believe that plants and the varieties as a whole is possible and exist inside narutoverse.

How it works:
This element works similar to wood release in its usage but due to its poison affects, its entirely different. Combing earth release for the solid shape and water release for the fluidness, or rather flexibility the user creates the base of poison ivy which would essentially be vines. Though adding medical chakra or poison chakra, the user turn this from a regular ivy custom element to a poison ivy element, giving it the properties of poison upon impact. Upon doing this the user is able to use this similar to the root variation in terms of length and usage. Depending on the rank, depends on the severity of the poison ivy. It can go from from something as simple as a small itchy rash all the way to severe allergic reaction, attacking the immune system. Though typically poison Ivy isnt fatal it can create huge blisters or major swelling.

Usage Examples:

Tsutaurushi: Poison Ivy Release: Dance Of The Wild Queen

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel poison ivy chakra beneath the opponent. Doing this poison ivy will spring beneath the opponent in a swirling manner circling around them with thorns. Once sprouted they will close in on the opponent, with an attempt to scewer the opponent.

Is weak to:
Fire and Fire Variants: Fire can burn poison ivy, reducing it to crisp. Though upon burning poison ivy, the poisonus will spread into the air, being airborne. Meaning depending on the rank, it will linger in the air for one turn after being burned up to mid range (The user is excluded due to its mastery).

Lightning and Lightning Variants: Due to the destructive nature of lightning, it will rip apart poison ivy


Is strong against:
Water and Water Variants (Excluding Acid): Poison ivy is able to rip through and disperse water, while normal water would actually feed the poison ivy

Earth and Earth Variants (Those that are on the same hardness scale as Earth or Below) Poison Ivy is able to break through earth, be it from the ground similar to how a plant cant break through the ground or through normal earth.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Mastery over Water
-Mastery over Earth
-Mastery over Medical Ninjutsu OR Poison Release

Co-creator: El Alucard

Students: N/a & N/a

Declined. Conflicts with Plant Release.
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Summanus/Yoru No Kaminari

Custom element English name:
Summanus/Nocturnal Thunder

The element is based on:
Earth Release + Water Release + Lightning Release

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Summanus, otherwise known as nocturnal thunder, is an element based off of Ferrofluids, a substance containing molecularly small iron suspended in an oil based liquid, with an attraction to magnetic fields. These properties are present through a variety of Canon sources such as Storm release and Magnet Release alongside it's sand variations, alluding to the possibility of combining the basic element natures to create a hybrid whose sum exceeds it's parts. Through Earth Release, the iron quality is provided, whereas Water Release provides the oil base, and Lightning Release itself is utilised to create the magnetic fields required, whilst also providing it with an electrical charge. This creates a refractive dark liquid element that both contains and is reactive to charges.

How it works:
Summanus is an element achieved by combining the Earth, Water, and Lightning elemental natures, wherein the iron required is provided by the usage of Earth Release, which is then added to oily liquid base through Water Release, and finally made magentised through the usage of Lightning release. Naturally all of this occurs in tandem with one another. Alternatively, the user could manipulate pre-existent earth and water sources, changing them into Summanus through the addition of the missing components via simple chakra manipulation.

As mentioned, Summanus is a refractive dark liquid, one whose functionality closely resembles that of the water element, albeit with additional capabilities. The element's main point is it's reactivity to magnetic fields, where it's shape rapidly changes into different forms, typically one's containing jagged and spiked edges. Due to it's oily composition and functionality, this makes the element quite adverse, as it behaves as a hydrophobic element, one capable of repelling fluid. As for it's refractive properties, each of the element's 'iron grains' is capable of reflecting light, enabling the element to be used to combat a variety of external sources, potentially blinding aggressors. Due to each grain containing these properties, the reflected light can be made to not blind the user and allies through controlling how the light is reflected when it makes contact with Summanus. Due to typically existing with an innate charge, products of the element appear to be in a constant flow, wherein the constructs appear to be breathing to a certain extent, with the produced element itself being capable of achieving flight easily through said manipulation of electrical charge.

Summanus can also be utilised as a surfactants, allowing other liquids to spread faster, or alternatively be used to enclose objects, such as tech/tools, toxins, and poisons within them to be protected or selectively released at later points through manipulation of the magnetic fields. Combined with the elements high energy harvesting capabilities, this gives a high potential to cause significant damage under the right conditions. The elements energy harvesting capabilities comes in it’s reaction towards external vibrational and sound forces that come into contact with the element. These forces would cause the automated release of electrical charges from the liquid equivalent to the strength of the technique's strength in the direction opposite to where it was struck, with them being aesthetically coloured in a mixture of golden, royal purple, and black. When forcibly released as such, the user would have no control over the charges, and it would prevent the user from manipulating Summanus surfactants and toxin enclosing functions, wherein stored materials will be released outwards away from the user, regardless of the fact the Summanus is inherently durable to such forces. However, these charges can be triggered though the user himself by collapsing the liquid upon itself, forming the necessary vibrational forces to produce the charges in a controlled fashion. Combined with the elements naturally appearing to be a dark breathing, this application often gives the appearance a touch of flare through the uniquely colored charge, giving it’s name Nocturnal Thunder/Summanus.

Jutsu Usage Examples:
Summanuss Release Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: D-S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: 20-80
Description: The user will be able to create objects, tools and other creations composed of the 'breathing' Summanus Chakra, with two handseals. These can be created directly from the user's body, from already existing Summanus or created from a source of earth or water. These creations carry the innate ability of reflecting light back towards their source, causing blinding. Products of Summanus naturally contain a charge, allowing the user to manipulate the objects through the air regardless of their mass. These constructs if struck with vibrational or sound attacks would release a coloured electrical charge.

Midnight Chaos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Through an influx of chakra, the user is capable of forcing the rapid collapse of existing Summanus constructs, causing the production of electrical charges that can reach mid range distance from the element, causing damage equal to the techniques rank.

(Nara/Summanus: Y'all Wa Omotta) - Shadow Arts/Nocturnal Thunder Release: Y'all Thought
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: By coating their physical shadow techniques with Summanus, the user's shadows would no longer have any weakness to light sources and similar, as the Summanus serves to reflect any any all light that would compromise the shadow attack.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Jounin Rank or higher
User must have completed training in Earth, Lightning, and Water Release.

Is weak to:
Earth and similar, interacting similar to water.
Lightning and similar, though it’s destructive force and the charge it carries, causing destabilization.

Is strong against:
Fire Release and similar, interacting similar to water.
Water and similar, repelled due to the hydrophobic qualities.
Light, Sound and Vibration based attacks as previously elaborated.

Additionally, the element is neutral to Wind Release. However, produced charges are weak toward it as they behave similar to lightning release.

Co-creator:
Shady Doctor

Students I passed this custom element on too:

Declined: Well for one, being a dark liquid that reflects light that intensely doesn't make sense. Dark Materials absorb light so by nature the element would be contradicting itself in that way. Secondly, having this element react to vibrations and sound waves is fine but having the electrical pulses it generates be equal to the strength of the technique/vibration it counters is not. Also since you can't control Summanus after it gains its charge from the vibrations, the explosions or "detonation" would be omnidirectional and not always away from the user. That can only be done if the thing you are releasing can be controlled by you i.e. Blast Release. Now on to the strengths and weaknesses. If this CE is oil based, it literally cannot be strong against fire it wouldn't make sense. Especially since its hydrophobic due to its oil like properties. If anything it'd be weak to fire. - Daemon
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Hisei-Fu

Custom element English name:
Jade Wind

The element is based on:
Wind+Water+Earth+Medjutsu
(A sticky slime like substance with biological properties)

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

We have seen that Wind can carry water molecules via mist and fog, examples being hidden mist jutsu, Mei's Corrosive Fog Vapour element. We have seen that water can be combined with Med to use med via water transmission, eg Water Mosquito technique, additionally medical fluid jutsu can be used, which would assume to be medical techniques combined with water release.
Medical Fluid control/release:
Combing Elements with Universal ninjutsu has already been done, such as fuuinjutsu that creates a flame barrier, (additionally Drackos Mystic Fire), as well as other Yin Custom elements that prove its possible to create CE with universal jutsu.
Additionally, we have seen several unique variations of nature release in several forms, such as sticky syrup with water, Swamp of the underworld for Mud, Gas form for fire relase, and a semi solid tangible wind (Danzo's wind kunai sword). On top of this, Advanced elements have properties when combining elements such as Mei's Acid mud, Blaze release's intense heat to burn fire to ash, etc. By combining Water, Wind and Earth, we can create a sticky slime that can stick upon contact like an adheasive to surfaces, while being light enough to float when not within contact with a surface.
On top of this, we have seen several other elements (base, advanced and custom) that manipulate the body when in contact. Examples being as said above Water mosquito (able to use elements combined with medical chakra to heal), Wood Release (Hashirama Cells that increase chakra capacaity) and things like Radiation release (dangerous to the body).

How it works:
When combining Water and Wind, we can create a type of water that is lighter than air, as seen as a fog. Examples of this are like Hidden mist jutsu where water is floating in the air to create a fog. While this is an advanced application of water, by adding in Wind nature, we can create a more specific type of floating. The reason needed for this is when adding in earth nature release, we can combine this with a water release to create a sticky adheasive element that is similar to mud and syrup, that can float. Examples of this being done are like bubble release, which needs to a bubble blower to use, however due to the nature of bubble release, it needs to stay in the shape of a bubble. By controlling the density with Wind Chakra, we can create a malleable new element that is adheasive, a slime that floats through the air, that has the properties of a liquid and a gas, but is a solid.

The reason Medical chakra comes into this is where the specific medical chakra used creates a flesh eating element, or a capable healing element, where the element itself can be seen as a salve or balm. When applied or within contact of flesh, depending the medical chakra used, whether tuned to be healing or tuned to be aggressive, it can repair or destroy cells.

This can be seen similar as "( Iryo Ninjutsu: Tsuyoi Kōsen ) - Medical Ninjutsu: Strong Beam" which is described as "This chakra quickly changes from a light, translucent green to a heavy, bright red color as the user points his fingers outwards, unleashing a powerful chakra beam. The chakra beam, however, has different properties from normal chakra and, unlike the technique which serves as its basis, has no healing effect, quite the contrary. If it hits an enemy living organism, its aggressive nature injures the targeted tissues, creating an effect similar to a severe burn. The cells burst open as if having been hit by a high temperature, reducing themselves to a mushy pulp as the beam travels through them. "
Several other properties can be given to Jade Wind, as the Uses for medical ninjutsu are great for specifically targeting biological organisms. This can include Nervous System disruption, Tenketsu disruption, possibly preventing healing, restoring health, or healing the user's injuries.

Medical chakra also gives the user a greater control over the element when created alongside the nature releases, capable of allowing the user to manipulate it on a cellular scale, with the fine tuning present in medical ninjutsu. The abilitie to create a medical scapel shows the ability to form very fine blades through shape manipulation on almost a microscopic scale.
Advantages of having medical chakra combined with elements allow it to have a greater variety of forms, which can travel, create contracts, or even use more advanced shape manipulation. Elemental manipulation with medical chakra also can be seen as a boon to have a new form to manipulate. All current medical techniques themselves are all produced from the users body as point of origin. However when introduced with medical chakra, this now allows the user to create new source from which to form medical chakra, using the element as a medium.


Jutsu Usage Examples:
Hisei-fu: Yulon ga Kokyu | Jade Wind: Breath of Yulon
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a tornado of slime to rotate around them, stripping away flesh of anyone that is not standing at the eye of the storm. Lasts 3 turns.

Hisei-fu: Niuzao ga Shukufuku | Jade Wind: Blessing of Niuzao
Type:
Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 health restored each turn)
Description:
The user covers an area up to mid range in Jade Wind that hides the user, while healing them while they stand inside the mist.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind+Water+Earth+Med

Is weak to: Neutral to all elements

Is strong against: Neutral to all elements
Biological oorganisms. Gains one rank for biological organisms when in contact

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?


Declined. I should decline this just for the name. Jade Wind, but its a fog mud thing? First off, and this is something I didn't notice before, you don't use other CEs to justify your own. You base it off of evidence from the manga, hence why it says manga context. The basis of the adhesive doesn't make sense. You can't have a gas that is sticky. You call this element a fog, which makes it a gas. Bubbles are not gas, they are liquids. So that just doesn't make sense. Determine what the element is first, then we'll go into the medical part.
Custom element Japanese name:
Hisei-Fu

Custom element English name:
Jade Wind

The element is based on:
Wind+Medjutsu


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Elemental techniques can be imbued with different additional properties and one we have seen is to use water to carry medial chakra to heal internal injuries in the body. On top of this, additionally the Water Mosquito technique works along the same property.
Further evidence is provided by the fact that advanced ninjutsu such as fuuinjutsu can create different properties or use elements as their medium for their ninjutsu. Wind has shown to carry different kinds of properties depending on how its shaped, whether its physically blunt, or sharp and slicing. The gaseous nature of wind gives it this advantage, and using chakra, it can be changed and altered to suit different properties.

How it works:
By using chakra as the medium, the user creates medical chakra, dependant on what the technique is. (eg healing or destructive). After this, the user manipulates the shape similar to Wind release, using the same shape manipulation to wind, to create an identical shape and motion to wind, whether its something like a breeze, a fog, a tornado etc. As this is technically a manipulation of medical chakra, in the shape of wind, this element becomes neutral to elements, as it is shaped and advanced chakra, however has the same weakness to canon Dark release.


Jutsu Usage Examples:
Hisei-fu: Yulon ga Kokyu | Jade Wind: Breath of Yulon
Type:
Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a tornado of slime to rotate around them, stripping away flesh of anyone that is not standing at the eye of the storm. Lasts 3 turns.

Hisei-fu: Niuzao ga Shukufuku | Jade Wind: Blessing of Niuzao
Type:
Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 health restored each turn)
Description:
The user covers an area up to mid range in Jade Wind that hides the user, while healing them while they stand inside the mist.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind+Medjutsu

Is weak to:

Neutral to all elements

Is strong against: Neutral to all elements
Biological organisms. Gains one rank for biological organisms when in contact

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?


Declined, based on the actual description of this and how it's formed, this is nothing more than just Medical Jutsu; the entire portion under How It Works simply describes you manipulating "medical chakra" into something similar to Wind without actually using Wind. This is not an element - this is just pure Medjutsu.
 
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