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Custom Element Japanese Name: Ōdinfōsu

Custom Element English Name: Odin Force

The Element is based on: Lightning Release & Yang Release

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in manga context):
Odin Force is composed of Lightning Release and Yang Release. Lightning grants the element with an energetic and versatile form, as well as its quick as a flash movement. Yang Release on the other hand, gives it its unique capabilities and life force. The simultaneous combination of Lightning and Yang Release allows for the creation of Odin Force, an indomitable living lightning. Odin Force represents a form of lightning which in some ways can be compared to the Kirin technique utilized by Sasuke Uchiha. A manifestation of lightning, that takes the form of a creature that is then directed at the foe. However, unlike this simple form of lightning, Odin Force not only invigorates and increases the strength and quickness of lightning through the combination with Yang Release, but also grants this element its living and free movements, as the lightning comes to life. While the addition of Yang or Yin into an existing element has been showcased through many a situation, such as Sasuke utilizing Yin Release to enhance his Chidori, it is then giving confirmation of the possibility of the combination of Yang and Lightning to form an entirely unique and dominant element. Odin Force is, in addition, characterized by its added characteristics of fuinjutsu, granting it sealing and unsealing characteristics.

How it Works:
In simple, it combines yang release with lightning to create a more advanced element. Like lightning itself, the user can create bolts, shapes, waves etc., anything lightning can do in that context, this element can do. What makes this unique is the yang infused into the lightning. First and foremost, this makes the lightning sentient. Once release it maintains itself and doesn't require the user to sustain it, freeing them up in battle. Though in doing this the jutsu will cost more chakra to create.

Yang in the lightning acts in a similar way to the yang truth seeking balls. The lightning will give off no heat at all but on contact, not only will the lightning shock, but burn on extreme levels as though it were fire release. Giving the effects of natural lightning in a sense.

The main aspect of this element plays on the effects of lightning itself enhanced with yang release. In the series we've seen lightning effect the body in two ways. Firstly, be it's shocking and paralysis, the other being how the Raikage's use it to stimulate their muscles. Odin Force builds on both. When a target is hit by an Odin Force jutsu they can apply two effects:

Degenerative: Rather than simple paralysis, the lightning will apply advanced effects as seen with the 8 branches technique. The lightning would course through their body, not only stunning them, but apply a degenerative effect to their chakra system. An overwhelming amount of yang chakra in their body would prevent them from using yin related elements while making them need more control and such over their chakra. Forcing their jutsu to cost more chakra to overcome the yang within Odin Force. In the same time manor all their physical abilities would require more effort weakening their body as a whole, slowing them, weakening their taijutsu and such, each to be outlined in the jutsu themselves.

Enhancement: On the other side, yang is useful in enhancing the users body without a mass of side effects like the 8 gates. Combine this with the stimulation of lightning displayed by the Raikage, allows for the user to enhance their speed and power in unique ways with Odin Force or even to others such as their allies.


Usage Examples:

[Ōdinfōsu: Gunguniru no Kosaku-Sha Brokkr] – Odin Force: Brokkr the Artificer of Gungnir

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The technique is derived from myth and legends of Odin and his spear Gungnir, that was said to never miss its target. The user will generate a spear of Odin Force, a powerful spear that seems like it consists of bright white lightning. As it manifests either in the user’s hand or in the vicinity of short range from the wielder, it is immediately directed at the desired target, and will then strike down like lightning from above. The spear that never misses its target, the truth behind it being, that the spear is sentient and flies like a lightning strike, striking through its target with great velocity, piercing and electrocuting them with incredible force. Gungnir, as the spear is known as, maneuvers and flies through everything or past everything to get to its target, as it is a sentient being with a simple goal to pierce its target.

[Ōdinfōsu: Aiangantoretto] – Odin Force: Jàrngreipr the Iron Gauntlets
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: By calling down a lightning strike of Odin Force, down upon the wielder himself, the lightning strike would engulf the wielder in a pillar of white lightning, which would protect him from any incoming attacks. While this is initially meant to protect the wielder from any attacks from any direction, the truth behind it, is that the lightning would imbue the wielder, by generating and solidify Odin Force around the wielders body, effectively creating an armor of Odin Force, a living armor. The armor is unique in the way that it does initially boost the wielders close combat capabilities by +20 to all Taijutsu based techniques and adding a unique potent Odin Force strike to the Taijutsu, resulting in paralysis of body parts. While the armor, is sentient, it as a whole-body encompassing armor, it not only grants significant Taijutsu capabilities, but also protects the wielder by making them inherently immune to C-rank and below physical attacks, while also granting them a significant boost to their movement speed x2. Additionally, due to the armor being sentient, it can act upon itself, by extending rods of Odin Force and extend its reach by itself.

Conditions to be able to use it:
  • User must have finalized their training in Lightning Release & Yang Release
  • User must be Jonin Rank or Sage to be able to use this element
Weak to:
  • Neutral to all Elements
Strong to:
  • Neutral to all Elements
Co-Creator: Sauron

Students I pass this custom element on to: ? & ?

Declined: This is literally just the lightning version of Breakdown Release. I don't think there isn't enough about this this element that differentiates between the two other than one is lightning and one is fire. But they both basically accomplish the same thing. - Daemon
 
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Resubmitting: https://animebase.me/threads/custom-elements-bureau-iii.710828/post-21236041

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- “How it works” portion (Added points of difference between Caesium and Francium).

Custom element Japanese name: Seshiumuton
Custom element English name: Liquid Caesium Release | Sky Silver
The element is based on: Earth Release, Fire Release, Shape Manipulation, Advanced Chakra Control

Caesium, or Sky Silver as it's called, is a silvery-gold metal that exists in a liquid state due to it's incredibly low melting point. The element is highly reactive when introduced to hot air or water, often igniting as it evaporates or exploding altogether.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

It has been shown in the manga on multiple occasions that shinobi are not only able to manipulate the earth itself, but even minerals in the earth through things such as steel release, sand release, and crystal release. In the Narutoverse shinobi are also capable of producing many of these elements directly from their bodies through the use of chakra. The manga has also been shown to have many of the minerals and elements that exist in the real world, such as gold and silver, which makes it easy to assume that Caesium also exists, seeing as how it's the 45th most common element in the earth.

How it works:

As touched on briefly above, Caesium is a highly reactive, silvery-gold metal that exists in a liquid state. It is created by manipulating the consistency of the user's Fire chakra and adding Earth chakra to create the base of the element, which results in a metallic liquid being produced, after which Shape Manipulation is introduced to allow the element to take on various shapes. Due to its low boiling point Caesium can easily be evaporated when exposed directly to fire, immediately explodes on contact with water, and ignites when exposed to highly heated air. The element has a special trait that can only be found in a few substances, which is being more dense in its liquid state. Due to this density and through the use of shape manipulation, the user can concentrate Caesium to form constructs that are able to stop solid objects and function almost as a solid when concentrated enough, while still maintaining the viscosity of liquid and regain its shape. Caesium can be released from the user's body, or from the ground by channeling the chakra into the earth. When the element is ignited and begins to evaporate it creates bright blue flames that can burn an opponent if not properly defended from, and the light from the flames can effectively blind anyone within short range. Due to the nature of Caesium it serves more supplementary/defensive use, but still retains enough power to be used offensively.

Other than being highly more reactive than Francium, there are a number of other ways in which Caesium differs from it. Firstly, liquid Caesium is corrosive, allowing it to dissolve solid objects and metals. Secondly, it reacts even more violently when exposed to water than Francium does, leaving a large amount of smoke behind after each explosion. Another note of difference between the two elements is that Caesium causes burns upon contact with the skin or eyes. The last point of difference is the blinding blue light given off when Caesium ignites and begins to evaporate.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Seshiumuton: Sōsa Jörð) Caesium Release: Manipulation of Jörð
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:
A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels his chakra and, after performing a single handseal, creates constructs such as pillars, orbs, walls, or tendrils of Caesium that can either be used to attack, defend, or bind. These constructs can be made to resemble anything within the user's imagination, and can be made either from their body or from the ground.

(Seshiumuton: Magni Hosoku) Caesium Release: Magni's Entrapment
Type:
Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:[/B] A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing three handseals the user channels his Caesium chakra beneath his opponent and creates a large amount of tentacle-like appendages of Caesium that rise from the ground and binds the opponent in place. These tendrils are large enough to wrap around and entangle even a large summoning, and by performing another handseal the user can have the Caesium continuously expand until it completely encases the target.

Conditions to be able to use it:

User must have completed training in Earth and Fire Release.
User must be Jounin Rank or higher.

Is weak to:

Fire Release: Fire will be able to easily reduce Caesium to its boiling point and force it to ignite, which causes Caesium to burn away in with a bright blue light as it evaporates. By using fire to heat up the surroundings similar to the effects of Scorch Release, Caesium will easily evaporate.

Scorch Release: Caesium ignites spontaneously when exposed to hot air, and since scorch is just that, the element will ignite when exposed to it and evaporate.

Lightning Release: Caesium is a semiconductor, meaning that electricity can be channeled through it. In addition, the sharpness of lightning techniques will be able to easily slice through Caesium. However, due to the heat generated from the electricity the Caesium will evaporate and give off a bright blue light that can temporarily blind both the user and the opponent.

Is strong against:

Water Release: Caesium reacts violently when it comes into contact with water by instantly exploding. However, the force of the explosion is enough to scatter the water that touches the Caesium in its entirety.

Ice Release: Caesium reacts violently with water in any state, and ice in no exception. When ice and Caesium come into contact with each other the element will immediately explode and shatter the ice, scattering it in every direction.

Earth Release: Caesium is exceedingly corrosive towards solid elements, and is capable of corroding through earth with ease. It has a density of nearly twice that of water, but reacts violently when the two come into contact.

Steel Release: Due to its corrosive properties in its liquid state Caesium is capable of overpowering and destroying structures made of steel.

Wind Release: Due to it's incredible density, Caesium is capable of withstanding blasts of wind that would normally dispel most liquids, and is flexible enough to retain its shape when facing slicing/piercing wind techniques.

Co-creator: Delta

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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Anbu_Junior, our loyal member, gave on the date March 21st 2020, a request for a Patent on his custom element (Seshiumuton); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned Patent on this element by the following;

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Custom element Japanese name:
Funsaiton

Custom element English name:
Shatter Release

The element is based on:
Fire, Water, Wind

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The series has shown that chakra has the ability to change nature, creating something extremely hot such as lava, and something cold such as Ice. Given that there is Blaze release that can "turn fire to ash" which would create an extremely high temperatre to do so (temperature control), create huge ice structures in mere seconds (capable of manipulating tempurate on a large scale) and dust release which has a huge amount of force behind it (vaporization requires huge amount of energy like TNT to turn rocks and earth into dust) its safe to say that chakra could sufficiently control temperature on a large scale quickly.

How it works:
Rapidly heating something causes it to expand, while rapidly cooling something causes it to contract. Causing both at the same time compromises the structural integtrity to give up due to the amount of stress.
Different to pressure change which is an outside force causing something to be crushed or pushed, this is like a rapid growing or reducing of material to break the actual structure. Taking ice as an example, when frozen water expands creating a larger mass. If this mass is expanding and contracting at the same time, then the ice crystals break unable to hold the stress of the energy that is causing it to expand and contract at the same time.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

Funsaiton: Bakahatsu | Shatter Release: Blast
Type: Offenaive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user sends their chakra out into an incoming attack to cause a rapid expaning and cooling, breaking its structual bonds to shatter the target.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Jounin

Is weak to:

Wind: Wind is formless and cannot be shattered.
Water: water woth rapid heating and cooling wont change much between steam and ice going back and forth

Is strong against:
Earth and solid objects: Capable of desteoying the bonds, it easily tears through.
Fire: Breaking the bonds of fuel that ignite fire, it can easily overpower it plus the additional cooling element
Lightning: Lihtning can be broken through its bonds causing it to disappate rather than shatter but to the same effect.

Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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Custom Element Japanese Name:
Majinkaton - Demon Fire Release

The Element Is Based On:
Fire, Wind, Lightning, Earth

Facts That Prove It To Be Possible:
In the Narutoverse, it's known that wind increases fire's power. It was how Naruto symbolized his relationship with Sasuke. Now lightning and eart, make Blast Release. It's made because, the earth is known to be solid and lightning is energy waiting to burst. By combining a combination of bursting and explosions, with the more empowered version of fire, you have Majinkaton, or Demon Fire Release.
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How It Works:
Majinkaton works in a way that almost has two different attacks in one. Majinkaton has the nesecary elements needed for Blast Release, and basically stronger fire. That way, Majinkaton can be used like a normal Katon, but will explode. In simpler terms, Majinkaton is like Katon with more power and size, that always results in a large explosion.
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Jutsu Usage Examples:
(Majinkaton: Gokuencho) - Demon Fire Release: Hellfire Bird
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 50
Description: The user creates ball of Demon Fire in between their hands, and shapes two wing-like triangles onto the 'bird.' The user then releases the bird to fly towards an enemy. The user can focus their chakra and basically comandeer the bird to fly to that location, where they wish.
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(Majinkaton: Kajinryu) - Demon Fire Release: Ash Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 80
Damage: 90
Description: The user first forms a sort-of lightning bolt shape of Majinkaton in their hand. By forming it, while still contained in their hands, they make it have what looks like a dragon's mouth on one end. As soon as it is released it expands, big enough to take down a Bijuu. When it hits it's target, it creates a large explosion in the shape of a dragon.
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Conditions To Be Able To Use It:
Jonin
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Is Weak To:
Water: Still being mainly derived from Katon, water can defeat it, by using one rank higher than the rank of the Majinkaton jutsu.
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Is Strong Against:
Earth/Solid Elements: Being very explosive, Demon Fire will explode and break every solid object it comes across.
Wind: Being mainly derived from Katon, adding wind will only increase it's size and power.
Fire: As a stronger, more powerful version, it will overpower normal Katon.
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Is Neutral To:
Lightning: Lightning has no effect on it, except for triggering it's explosive properties.
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Co-creator:
Students I Have Passed This On To:
Declined by Sasori: This has been done before and there is nothing unique about this to warrant approval.
 
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Japanese Element Name:
Kongosekihokoriton | Diamond Dust Release
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Elements Based On:
Water | Earth | Lightning | Precise Chakra Control
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Facts That Prove Possibility:
In the filler episodes which included Guren, we were shown Crystal Release. Crystal Release is a combo of water and earth. With precise chakra control, the user can add more chakra to harden the crystals beyond their normal state. By using the lightning, which is strong against earth, to break down the hardened crystals, the hardened crystals become a sort of dust. The dust is very sharp and rigid, able to cut through solid objects, because of it's base material.
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How It Works:
By using the dust version of the crystals, created by the lightning breaking down the crystals, the user now has a sand like substance, that they are able to control. The sharp small shards, move togetherlike sand because of the electricity left from the original breaking of the crystals.
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Jutsu Examples:
(Kongosekihokoriton: Kongoseki Umi) - Diamond Dust Release: Diamond Sea
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10-80
Damage: 10-80
Description: This is a jutsu that lest the user control Diamond Dust in the way they wish. They first create the crystals, then break them dow, forming Diamond Dust. The Diamond Dust can be used to create small items such as kunai, to giant items as big as a Bijuu.
(Kongosekihokoriton: Nimian Raion: Diamond Dust Release: Nemean Lion
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A (40 from lion's attack)
Description: Creating a larger than normal lion of Diamond Dust, the user can send it out as for attack or just to aid in battle. The lion, which follows the creator's will, will attack until defeated. Being made of Diamond Dust, the lion is very hard to break or destroy.
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Conditions:
Jonin or higher.
Mastery of all three basic elements needed.
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Weak To:
-Wind: Held together by lightning, if wind defeats the lightning chakra, the Diamond Dust will just become a pile of shards.
Strong To:
-Earth: Lightning overpowers earth, so when earth and diamond dust colllide, the lightning will break down the earth.
Neutral To:
-Water: Both have no effect on each other.
-Fire: Diamonds melt only at an extreme temperature, meaning fire has no effect.
-Water: Water has no affect.
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Co-creator:
Students: @Crane__

Declined by Sasori: This has been done before and there is nothing unique about this to warrant approval.
 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Eienoton
Custom element English name:
Eternalite
The element is based on:
Yin + Fuinjutsu + Earth+ Wind

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
This element is only hypothetical in reality and does exist only in theory it requires powerful elements needed to form it. This is why Yin is needed along with Fuinjutsu affected by Yin for unity. We’ve seen dozens of elements based on earth that make it clear it's possible to summon earth via dimensional means. Wind in this case is used to mobilize the extreme reaction that this element produces when it's created. Yin with the power to turn things unnatural to the world into existence, is used as an anchor to put all of this element’s properties, in narutoverse, possible.


How it works: Eternalite is made of Fuinjutsu affected by Yin release anchoring the unpredictable quarks unitizing the earth release's space-time portal summoning ability as the harnessing source, while as wind release gives it form momentum, thus producing an element unlike anything ever seen. Instead of being composed of actual normal predicable matter, like most-things in the universe, this element has varying state of being, appearing much like Fuinjutsu. When enormous amounts of Eternalite is compacted it becomes a thick liquid gloop with an inner core of it appearing as an uncountable amass of Fuinjutsu-characters swarming together like an atom. Eternalite consists only of Yin-attributed quarks, held in control by the Fuinjutsu application as the body. Without having to go too much into it, Quarks being what makes/ builds up neutrons, electrons, and atoms. Yin release and Fuinjutsu acting as the shell & anchor of the element, in its most extreme unpredictable condition such under pressure as the core of an neutron star.

These fundamental particles under enough sealed pressure to implode on the opposing chakra/ object of aim by turning it into the most unstable/unsure state in existence - the quark matter state. From what we know in physics, there are three confirmed types of these quarks, upwards, downwards and strange quarks. While up and down quarks, form protons, and neutrons. It's the strange quarks this element is fully composed of, and where it gets its absurd properties. Of course, all under the right circumstance of Yin release manipulation attributed with Fuinjutsu, all acting as the anchoring factor to these unpredictable quarks, which are potent and stronger in composition to regular matter. This creates strange interactions with other matter, as the unknown & unpredictable composition of matter clashes with the known reality.

Eternalite is made from something that cannot decay as it's already consistent with highest form of the most unstable phase of matter in existence. On the contrary, all matter that comes in physical contact with Eternalite will "become" Eternalite. This includes humans and animals, of course. Now, depending on the rank of the technique or what it clashes with, it will stagnate/halt that subject or object, either removing the opponent's control over the element or in circumstances of living beings it will leave them in a fragile state for the user to take advantage, due to it producing a mental uncertainty of their existence. To living beings: it appears to them as a "clouding of Fuinjutsu characters" within their mind inhibiting their focus on reality.

Eternalite Release acts as any other quark matter, color superconductive. This means the material conducts light and bends it around it. This is quite an anomaly of a sight and makes it possible to not see through it, but rather see everything around it as if it was a 4D shape as light curves around the matter and reflects back. It also means it reflects all colors in existence at the same time which makes it hard to look at for a longer period of time without experiencing nausea.

Eternalite is so unpredictability dense that it makes gravity around it bend (minuscule), not much as to a black hole effect, which means it also has a force-attraction factor. It is also not conductive to temperature and thus forces everything to drop/rise to its temperature immediately as it's by far too unpredictable to be divided by any sort of temperature. To clarify, this is indeed a solid material, and follows the rules of such. Meaning it will not leave the field unless destroyed and does not require additional chakra to keep stable.

In contact with humans and other creatures depending on the scale of the technique on the ratio they will also be affected, but it's universal that on contact, they'll will feel no pain but complete insensibility to world. It will also turn the surrounding area into the same aesthetics as the element itself. In order to prevent the opposing chakra/material from spreading and taking over, however its a given any element can be used to fend off it's effects/ via use of Yin/ Yin-Yang Release to counter it.

Usage Examples:

(Eienoton: Sórui No Sakusei) - Eternalite Release: Eternalite Creation

Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Rank: D – S
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 10 – 40
Damage: 20 – 80
Description: This technique is the most basic application of Eternalite Release, allowing the user to release from any point on their body or from their body. Doing so, the user's chakra will be surged as Fuinjutsu-like characters flow out of their body (depicted in any-color within the visible light spectrum), depending on the user's will, Eternalite will act accordingly to either become liquid or stay in its basic form. As a highly versatile element the user can shape them into a gloop of many forms, however they please. Without further tempering, simply releasing the element in its raw Fuinjutsu-like form, they can send it towards their intent target resulting in a strange elemental clash of Jutsu control seizing. Where's if the user's Jutsu overpower's the opponent's Jutsu, they'll have complete control to redirect their opponent's Jutsu against them. However, if the opponent is affect, they'll be left in a powerful daze as they struggle to rid the influence, depending on the user's rank. Note: D-C rank: Academy Student to Genin Ninja, will be unable to rid of the influence (requiring similar means to Genjutsu release), B-A rank: Chunin, will be unable to rid of the influence (requiring similar means to Genjutsu release), S-Rank: Jounin, will be unable to rid of the influence (requiring similar means to Genjutsu release).
(Eienoton: Onsutá O Attó) - Eternalite Release: Unknowing Forms
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D – S
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: 10 – 40 (-20 Genjutsu via this Jutsu)
Damage: N/A
Description: When the user has successfully physically/ mentally affected their opponent with Eternalite Release, if this element's its effects have taken hold, the user can passively use this along with Genjutsu (1 rank lower than this Jutsu) to in the same time frame via through Jutsu. Initiated by making a Boar > Bird handseal, a swift insanely fast seal-like formulation will be created towards their opponent as it inserts itself within them. Whist is possible to simply use the basic form of this Jutsu by simply releasing towards their opponent, doing so the characters created from Eternalite Release will race towards their opponent as upon the user's will necessary for it to find and track its target autonomously. Depending the rank interaction, the opponent can count the Jutsu by using any means to prevent them from being affected.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Yin + Fuinjutsu + Earth + Lightning
Is weak to: N/a
Neutral to all Elements
Is strong against: Advanced Ninjutsu
Neutral to all Elements. However, note that Advanced Ninjutus such as Sound, Smoke, Rain, poison and etc, will be rendered unstable or rather reacting at a more sedate pace.

Co-creator:
Skorm

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined, Do not Resubmit - This is wild. All I have to say is, using Fuuinjutsu and Yin to somehow harness the fundamental particles of the universe just won't be allowed. Among other things wrong with this. I'll leave it at that because you can't even resubmit it so there is no point. -Daemon
 
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Permission from daemon to submit Volcanic storm since it has Volcanic Ash in it
https://animebase.me/members/daemon.27063/#profile-post-7519329

Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Fire | Wind | Lightning | Water | Earth

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Volcanic Storm or what some call it, Dirty Storm is simply a storm created by a Volcanic ash and ice rubbing against each other which produces lightning through the volcanic plume which gives form to volcanic storm. There is proof that this is in the narutoverse due to the fact that volcanoes exist inside the narutoverse, namely the forgotten island that was shown in the series which is a huge volcano in itself. Due to that information, its safe to believe that this volcano acts in a similar way as normal volcanos such as erupting, and creating ash, etc.

How it works:
This element works in very unique ways, utilizing every single element to make this element possible. Though comes with great chakra control. This is done by creating volcanic ash using fire, earth, and lightning. The earth and fire creates the volcanic rock while the lightning chakra is used to break it apart causing it to turn into a dust-like state which turns into volcanic ash. Where as the water and wind creates ice used in the volcanic storm. The ice breaks down into shards with the volcanic ash thus The user will then mix these two outcomes together in their chakra system. This gives birth to a Volcanic storm. The powerful mix of the ash and the ice shards create lightning that surges through the Volcanic Ash, creating a Volcanic Storm. Volcanic storms can reach higher than 1000 degrees, thus is extremely hot, while also having the flexibility of wind though the wind is a heavier than regular wind thus giving it a more physical attribute than regular wind (allowing for blunt damage to a smaller degree), This is similar to how essentially smoke is heavier than air, Volcanic Ash is broken down earth particles mixed with several other things. while lastly having the destructive nature of lightning since lightning surges through and around it as a whole, though only being fast as wind as a whole. The user is able to create this from their body or the user can use this from an earth source, but mixing in the water and wind through their body, while channeling fire and lightning through the ground (earth source), combining the ice and volcanic ash to replicate the Volcanic storm. Volcanic storms can be toxic due to the amount of carbon monoxide and fluorine and other gases that resides within it, allowing this element to be able to suffocate if caught within.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create things made from Volcanic storm. Be it a wall, or spikes, or a even a sword through the hand. Though due to its nature the user isnt able to make tools to hold or through.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned the basic 5 elements

Is weak to:

Water & Water Based Elements:
Liquid based elements will simply wash away the Volcanic storm, complete dissipating it
Wind & Wind Based Elements: Since Lightning surges around and through the storm, the wind would not only overpower the lightning, but by doing that, it would weaken the overall element, dispersing it

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements (Thats weak to lightning only):
Due to the incredible amount of lightning that surges through this element, it will simply break down earth like normal
Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would overpower fire, completley engulfing it, and even extinguishing it.

Co-creator: Daemon

¤ Declined, this doesn't address some of the things pointed out in the former check; it mentioned how the ice wouldn't be created like this due to it reaching 1000° and would logically melt the ice, which also seemingly has no real purpose to being included as the use of lightning chakra generates the required lightning you mentioned earlier in the technique. I also do not think this needs all 5 elements to be formed. This seems to only need 3 or 4 and not Water. The last line also implies you create other CE through this, which gives it too much leg room to justifiably allow. ¤
Took out everything mentioned above.

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Custom element Japanese name:
Kazan Arashi

Custom element English name:
Volcanic Storm

The element is based on:
Fire | Wind | Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Volcanic Storm or what some call it, Dirty Storm is simply a storm created by a Volcanic ash and ice rubbing against each other which produces lightning through the volcanic plume which gives form to volcanic storm. There is proof that this is in the narutoverse due to the fact that volcanoes exist inside the narutoverse, namely the forgotten island that was shown in the series which is a huge volcano in itself. Due to that information, its safe to believe that this volcano acts in a similar way as normal volcanos such as erupting, and creating ash, etc.

How it works:
This element works in very unique ways, utilizing every single element to make this element possible. Though comes with great chakra control. This is done by creating volcanic ash using fire, earth, and lightning. The earth and fire creates the volcanic rock while the lightning chakra is used to break it apart causing it to turn into a dust-like state which turns into volcanic ash. The user will then mix these two outcomes together in their chakra system. This gives birth to a Volcanic storm. The powerful mix of the ash and lightning that surges through the Volcanic Ash, creating a Volcanic Storm. Volcanic storms can reach higher than 1000 degrees, thus is extremely hot, while also having the flexibility of wind though the wind is a heavier than regular wind thus giving it a more physical attribute than regular wind (allowing for blunt damage to a smaller degree), This is similar to how essentially smoke is heavier than air, Volcanic Ash is broken down earth particles mixed with several other things. while lastly having the destructive nature of lightning since lightning surges through and around it as a whole, though only being fast as wind as a whole. The user is able to create this from their body or the user can use this from an earth source.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will expel volcanic storm through their mouth to create a dragon. This dragon will come swoop down on the opponent dealing moderate damage. The amount of chakra inputed into the dragon determines the output of the dragon

(Kazan Arashi: ???) Volcanic Storm: ???
Type:
Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: The user will create things made from Volcanic storm. Be it a wall, or spikes, or a even a sword through the hand. Though due to its nature the user isnt able to make tools to hold or through.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Must have learned the basic 5 elements

Is weak to:

Water & Water Based Elements:
Liquid based elements will simply wash away the Volcanic storm, complete dissipating it
Wind & Wind Based Elements: Since Lightning surges around and through the storm, the wind would not only overpower the lightning, but by doing that, it would weaken the overall element, dispersing it

Is strong against:
Earth & Earth Based Elements (Thats weak to lightning only):
Due to the incredible amount of lightning that surges through this element, it will simply break down earth like normal
Fire & Fire Based Elements: Volcanic Storm would overpower fire, completley engulfing it, and even extinguishing it.

Co-creator: Daemon

🍆Declined. On a smaller note, you still have some stuff in here to clean up; you kept in mentions of this utilizing more elements like the previous submissions even though you reduced the amount of elements used. The main note for this decline: This doesn't read much different than regular Volcanic Ash. As I mentioned in my previous check, ash with lightning running through it doesn't warrant a CE, you can do that with a CJ. For a CE, there has to be something physically unique about this. All lightning has done in this is made the ash hotter, and hotter volcanic ash isn't unique enough to be a CE. Essentially, you gotta find a way to combine these elements to create one or more properties unique to this that isn't in Volcanic Ash, and it can't be something like "it's hotter" that can be accomplished with a CJ.🍆
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Shinenton


Custom element English name: Sacred Fire

The element is based on: Fire + Yin

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

‘Fire Release: Heavenly Prisons’ impairs a targets chakra network and drains away at their chakra supply, proving that it is possible for the fire element and its qualities to directly interact with the chakra network and chakra in general.
Yin release in the RP has shown the ability to drain targets of their chakra and spiritual energies and has also demonstrated parasitic effects such as that of the ‘Hungry Ghost Technique’. Finally, Yin release, as the power of imagination, is capable of applying traits to elemental releases that it might not traditionally have - as is evidenced in ‘Yin Release: Lighting Dispatch’ creating highly stable, tangible arcs of lightning, and Onyx Chidori having similar qualities of solidity (‘Change into Heaven’. too.)It also forms half of all creation, representative of the immaterial, metaphysical, imagination, and spiritual.

The idea of this element then, is to produce an element that burns the incorporeal instead of the corporeal - in essence a more versatile and external form of ‘Fire Release: Heavenly Prisons’. Through Sacred Fire, the user can produce flames that can directly interact with, infect, and impair a victims chakra network. The incorporation of Yin, which has dictate over attributes of intangibility, chakra absorption, the metaphysical and spiritual, and has demonstrated parasitic qualities supports the function of this element. Meanwhile, the qualities of Fire Release serve as the expression. True to the nature of Fire Release, Sacred Fire will restrict, and interact directly with chakra, energies and spiritual energies not through absorption, but rather through outright destruction and erasure not at all dissimilar to ‘burning’. Similarly, infection and parasitic functions will parallel combustion and deflagration. Infected will literally feels as though their spirit and inner energies are burning (like heavenly Prisons), while attempts to transfer chakra (or otherwise, depending on the technique and situation) can easily lead to the effect spreading beyond its initial point of ignition like a conflagration.



How it works:

Combination of both Fire and Yin Natures, will produce an element that, like it’s components, is energy based. The Fire element will provide the fundamental quality of ‘burning’ and the elements visual qualities, meanwhile, Yin will provide the element with incorporeality, in addition to the chakra erasing and ‘parasitic’ qualities which, as aforementioned, will be expressed through the fundamental qualities of fire release such as ‘burning’ and ‘combustion’. The result will be Sacred Fire: an element has the visual form of golden flames so translucent that they seem almost ethereal. These flames will have almost no corporeal qualities due to the extreme Yin nature of this element, and as a result will possess little to not ability to clash with physical structures. Instead the flames will possess the quality of intangibility. Therefore if, for instance,the user launches Sacred Fire at the ground, it will merely phase through the earth continue travel until it reaches the limits of its range.

As aforementioned, Sacred Fire has chakra erasing qualities; when faced with energy or intangible based jutsu Sacred Fire will make quick work of the chakra that comprises it, completely burning it and the techniques effects from existence. This not only applies to elements that produce incorporeal projections of chakra - such as Fire, Wind, Lightning and their derivatives such as dark, scorch, blaze and so on; but also extends to Fuuinjutsu barriers, spiritual energy, and chakra absorption from Dark, Fuuinjutsu, elements such as Water or Earth, and even Yin and so on. This is because the intangibility of these fields makes them easy prey for Sacred Fire - whose primary function is to deal damage to the intangible and incorporeal, essentially inverting the function of Fire Release which primarily deals damage to the physical.

Conversely, Sacred Fire is far less effective against the material. When Sacred Fire clashes against an element or technique that produces physical matter - such as Earth Release, Water Release or their derivatives (i.e Wood, Mokuton), the flames will simply phase into the technique and, through doing so, erase the chakra within, leaving the technique in question an empty husk. The material qualities of these techniques however insulates them against the capabilities of Sacred Fire, therefore while still effective, the process is more cumbersome and exhaustive. Furthermore, the substance itself will still be left behind along with any momentum that doesn’t require the active input of chakra, but otherwise devoid of any spiritual energy of chakra.

Similarly, an opponent struck by a Sacred Fire technique will not be subjected to adverse kinetic force as Sacred Fire possesses no material qualities. Instead, Sacred Fire will wreak havoc on their chakra system and spiritual energies. Initial contact will immediately reduce the opponents chakra supply by an amount equal to the damage value of the Sacred Fire technique (which, for all other purposes is disregardable due to Sacred Fire’s complete lack of material qualities.) Exposure will also ‘ignite’(infect) an opponent's chakra system and, subsequently, the opponent’s chakra supply will be reduced by 2x each turn. (So, if an opponent's chakra supply is reduced by 80 by initial contact, on the second turn the chakra burn will reduce it by 160, 320 on the third, and so on, increasing cumulatively.) The default effect of this chakra burn on an opponent's ability to function is simply that initial contact will barr them from utilising techniques above S rank, and restrict them from spiritual techniques above A rank, with the restrictions of such becoming a rank more severe each for each turn that a target is afflicted (so no S ranks/A rank spiritual techs on second turn, A/B rank third etc). Attempts to use whats restricted anyway will not only fail, but result in complete dysregulation of ones chakra system, consuming the victim in an even stronger flame that will completely burn all of the targets chakra and spiritual energies from existence (similar to ‘heavenly prison’ but completely chakra/spiritual based due to Yin and incorporeality). Individual Sacred Fire techniques may have their own unique affects, such as restricting opponents in different ways, or a parasitic effect that is ‘exothermic’ in expression - affecting anyone within a particular vicinity to the technique, or possessing qualities similar to ‘Hungry Ghost’ which will allow the parasitic qualities of this element to spread between chakra/spiritual entities that are linked (igniting one ignites another, etc. All of this (unless explicitly stated otherwise) can be counteracted through methods that are effective against ‘Hungry Ghost’.

Finally, since Sacred Fire has no substantial damage value (since it can produce no physical alteration), it’s elemental interactions take function by virtue of chakra supply, not damage value. Therefore, when a Sacred Fire technique has more chakra, it wins, less, it falters, equal, it neutralises. Aside from this special interaction Sacred Fire respects elemental interactions and still functions by reduction rules. So if a stronger Sacred Fire technique continues, it will continue, but weakened by a respective amount. I.e, if 40 chakra points worth of Sacred Fire clashes neutrally against a technique wit 30 chakra points, the Sacred Fire will continue as if it has effectively been weakened by a rank, continuing as 30 chakra points worth of Sacred Fire.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

Sacred Flame:
Description: Produces a ball of sacred fire that can travel up to mid range. If a living target makes contact with the flame they will experience the chakra burn described in the CE.




Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Release + Yin

Is weak to:

Absolutely all material elements and skills, such as Earth, Water, Taijutsu and the like. Is also weak to CE that contain Yang as, in our RP, Yang enhances the physical, and such elements have predispositions towards growth and heightened physicality & material qualities. The exception being techniques that operate through immaterial effects, such as Absorption based water techniques, or Taijutsu that produces energy based projectiles.

Neutrality: Yin, Yang, and Yin-Yang.

Is strong against:
Absolutely all energy based or incorporeal elements, including those with clauses against such, such as Mystic Fire. Also includes absorption based skills such as Dark Release or Fuuinjutsu as attempts to influence an element that indiscriminately burns chakra, through chakra, is logically ineffective (it would, in a sense, be like trying to grab a flame or pick up a burning cloth with another cloth). The only exceptions are Yin (for clarification, the absorptive or parasitic qualities (i.e Hungry Ghost) of Yin are ineffective against this element for the same reason other forms of absorption are ineffective, but they otherwise clash normally), Yang, Yin-Yang, and when an element that would usually be weak to Sacred Fire produces something material (for instance, Sacred Fire would be weak to Ash versions of Fire release for the same reason it is weak to water (Does not include Gases as they still qualify as intangible)). It is also strong against CE that contain Yin since in our Rp, Yin enhances the spiritual, and such elements have predisposition towards absorptive or immaterial qualities - all of which this CE is inherently strong against.

Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. The concept of using Yin Release to burn chakra conflicts with Riker's Mangekyou Sharingan custom Burn Down the House.

-Drackos
Daemon gave me the go-ahead to resubmit despite Riker's unfounded complaints. (Because this entire CE is based on a CJ of mine created before Yin was even introduced)

Changed most of the description and because of that, omitted the bold. (plus it wasn't checked for feedback anyway)

Custom element Japanese name: Shinenton

Custom element English name: Sacred Fire

The element is based on: Fire + Yin

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Yin forms half of all creation and is representative of the immaterial, spiritual, metaphysical and imagination. In the Manga it was stated that Hagoromo’s use of ‘Creation of All Things’ allowed him to use Yin to create the physical forms of the Tailed Beasts from nothingness. Similarly, Izanagi operates on a similar principle, with Yin allowing an Uchiha clan member to re-write portions of reality through sacrifice of their eye.
Finally, Yin release is defined in the manga as the ‘ability to create form out of nothingness’.

The ability to create from nothing through Yin defies the first law of thermodynamics that ‘nothing is created or destroyed, only transformed’. Similarly, Izanagi and Creation of All Things proves that it is possible to manipulate already existing forms of existence through Yin. From here, it is reasonable to assume that Yin release can yet again defy the First Law and be used to reduce form to nothingness. (Which, in a way can already be seen via Truth Seeking Balls, Hungry Ghost,Tayuya’s doki etc, all of which have the potential to negate or reduce a part of reality.)
Additionally, the canon technique 'Fire Release: Heavenly Prisons' shows that it is already possible to alter the fire element and its qualities to directly interact with the immaterial and conflagrate the incorporeal.


Therefore, this reduction of form will be expressed through the innate qualities of Fire Release, whose qualities serve as the baseline and medium for this element. A highly destructive element, through the introduction of Yin Fire is re-imagined from a physically destructive element capable of destroying all forms of physical phenomena (a hot enough flame can burn virtually anything, including water via high temperatures splitting H20 into oxygen and hydrogen), into an element that has the potential to incinerate the immaterial, incorporeal and metaphysical aspects of the world. Essentially, this element forgoes fires ability to impact physical matter to instead impact energy and immaterial forces.


How it works:

The user will combine their Fire and Yin nature's to form a new element that, visually, will take the appearance of black and gold flames so translucent in appearance that they will seem almost ethereal, and can be made to materialize wherever the user concentrates their chakra - whether it be from their body, the ground or the air. The form of these flames will invoke the immaterial properties of Yin, thus these black and gold flames will be wholly incorporeal. Incapable of interacting with physical matter, these flames will instead phase through physical obstructions until they meet the limits of their range.

Although incapable of interacting with the material, these flames will be highly effective against the immaterial and intangible. The flames are exceptional when it comes to erasing forms of energy - such as chakra, lightning, and intangible elements such as fire, wind, dark release, scorch release and the like. This is due to the fact that such entities have minimal levels of form in the first place, so erasing what little it does have is an easy task for the flames of Sacred Fire. The harder task is erasing the chakra of material entities, such as Earth release or Wood Release. As aforementioned, Sacred Fire phases through the tangible, and as such will simply erase the chakra within such physical entities leaving the technique in question an empty husk. The material qualities of these techniques however insulates them against the capabilities of Sacred Fire, therefore while still effective, the process is more cumbersome and exhaustive, thereby formulating an inherent weakness.

Similarly, Sacred Fire is extremely effective against both absorption and sealing. Both of these principles operate by using incorporeal applications of chakra to affect a target/object. However Sacred Fire will simply erase any chakra that it encounters. Attempts to influence an element that indiscriminately burns chakra, through chakra or spiritual effects, is logically ineffective. Therefore attempts to absorb or seal it will simply be like attempting to encase a burning cloth with another cloth - wholly ineffective unless the seal/absorption technique is significantly stronger.
Just as Fire has the capacity to wreck widespread destruction on naturally occurring physical matter, so too does Sacred Fire possess the ability to erase non-chakra produced intangible physical phenomena - i.e, electricity. Occupying the niche of an element that has the capacity to erase the immaterial world, Sacred Fire is capable of negating magnetic fields, kinetic energy, and even natural phenomena such as forces, and gravity itself. The latter means that, if the user were to transform into Sacred Fire they would be able to free themselves of all influences and freely traverse across the axis of space unencumbered by anything. It is here that the dichotomy between normal Fire, which erases the substantive material, and Sacred Fire, which erases the immaterial and spiritual worlds, can be most seen.

Finally, Sacred Fire has no substantial Damage Value since it lacks any material qualities. Instead, Sacred Fire operates by virtue of its chakra supply. Therefore, when a Sacred Fire technique has more chakra, it wins, less, it falters, equal, it neutralises. Outside of this unique interaction, it reflects and abides by elemental interaction rules as usual. (i.e if a 40 chakra point SF techniques clashes neutrally against a 30 chakra point technique, the clash would weaken SF as though it were a normal S rank vs A rank clash, just with the clash itself occurring through a different unique mechanism.)


Finally, when Sacred Fire contacts a living target, it will not do damage by subjecting the victim to kinetic force but instead by dealing damage to the intangible aspects of a human, such as their nervous system, spiritual body, and chakra reserves. By default, the opponents chakra pool will reduce by an amount equal to the (placeholder) damage value of the Shinenton technique, and this reduction will re-occur each turn until the aftereffects of Shinenton are purged from the victims system. (can be countered in the same way as Hungry Ghost)Like a flame, this infection will spread if a victim transfers their chakra to someone else. Individual Shinenton techniques may have different effects (to be described within individual CEJ) such as field limiting, or a parasitic effect that is ‘exothermic’ in expression - ‘burning’ at anyone within a particular vicinity to the technique.


Jutsu Usage Examples:

Sacred flame:
produces a wave of sacred fire that burns away at the immaterial. if it hits the opponent it sets their chakra system aflame as described in the ce.


Conditions to be able to use it: Fire Release, Yin.


Is weak to:

Earth, Water, and all Material elements/fields. Including variations of energy elements that produce matter (such as Ash from Fire Release)


Neutrality: Yin, Yang, and Yin-Yang.


Is strong against:
Fire, Wind, Lightning and all Energy/Immaterial/Incorporeal elements/fields, including; Absorptions, sealing, decay and elements with neutrality clauses. Also material techniques that function by virtue of absorption (i.e absorption mists etc)


Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined. We've resolved any issue between this CE, Black Salamander, and Riker's Burn Down the House Custom MS technique.

Definitions need to be worked on here, because it isn't clear what you mean when you refer to incorporeal/intangible and corporeal entities. It is highly inconsistent. See colored portions. How is the nervous system an intangible part of the human body? Their chakra system? In the NRP these are both equally tangible, and 'real' things.

These also need damage values. Being 'immaterial' in the sense that you're going for doesn't mean it doesn't have damage values. This won't work off chakra clashes. Likewise, this won't pass through all physical objects freely; it's going to be based on rank. If the rank of the Sacred Fire technique is equal or higher then it will pass through. If it is lower, then it won't and it will clash normally.

Overall, this really needs a lot of work in terms of the wording. It's often inconsistent.
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Serenton

Custom element English name: Selenium Dust Release

The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in manga context):
First, there must be proof that Selenium exists in the Naruto universe: Selenium is a nonmetal element that functions as cofactor for reduction of antioxidant enzymes in animals and plants, an enzyme that occurs in all living organisms. It is an essential micronutrient for animals, naturally existing in domestic livestock (Pigs, Cows, Turkey, Chickens, Fishes). It is also readily present in the thyroid gland that exists in the human body (The selenium content in the human body is believed to be in the 13–20 milligram range) and research (In 1957) has shown that it is essential for mammalian life. In plants, it occurs as a bystander mineral existing in bananas, cashews, lentils, spinach, mushrooms etc. Research has also proven Selenium is present in the soil and in mushrooms. Significant amount of selenium can also be found in ocean water.

As far as Naruto goes, there isn't really anything to lead anyone to believe that the makeup of Naruto's earth, especially the plant and organic life there, is any different from our earth. Not only that, but there is also no reason to believe that, without chakra intervention, the organs and chemicals within a normal human beings or animals body in Naruto is any different than ours. If the plant life and the human and animal life in Naruto are all the same (and there is not much as far as reasoning that it wouldn't be) then it stands to reason that Selenium exists in Naruto.

A complaint as to how viable this element lies in the amount of Selenium that can even be extracted. Would it be enough to actually combat other opponents? Consider another element, Wood Style. In real life, it takes many years, if not decades, for full grown trees and forests to grow. Yet Hashirama and Yamato have been shown to accomplish completing this feat in mere seconds or less. Another example would be Crystal Release. In order for the amount of crystals that can be created from the ground with this element to naturally occur, decades if not centuries would have to pass. Yet Guren can create a massive amount of crystals from the ground in an instant. The point here is that with chakra being the engine behind the growth of substances, the growth rate can be exponentially increased.


How it works:
Selenium exists in 3 forms, however this CE focuses mainly on the amorphous red brick powder state. It is created by manipulating the consistency of the user's Fire chakra and adding Earth chakra to create the base of the element, which results in a red powder being produced, after which advanced chakra control is introduced to exponentially increase its growth rate and toxicity. Selenium can be released from the user's body, the ground or from water sources by channeling the chakra into the earth/water.

Selenium has an high melting of 221 °C making it durable against heat based elements. Should Selenium get to this temperature, it'd be converted into its black form and the user becomes unable to manipulate it. Selenium possesses both a photovoltaic action (It converts light to electricity) and a photoconductive action (Its electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination) which makes it weak to lightning and strong to non-electric light releasing elements. Despite selenium being essential for mammalian life, it is highly toxic when consumed in high quality. As such if one were to absorb the substance, whether it be orally, directly into the bloodstream, or even by inhaling it, it causes a number of effect depending on the amount absorbed. Exposure to the eyes also causes irritation and eventually blindness.

Toxic effects of Selenium include:
Nausea
Vomiting
Fatigue
Irritability
Headaches
Myocarditis
Death

Usage Examples:
Red wedding:
The user slams their hand on the ground and use their serenton chakra to create a wave of red sand from the ground, the wave would slam into the opponent crushing them and poisoning them.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Must be atleast Jonin rank
Must have mastered Earth, Fire and Basic Ninjutsu

Weak to:
Lightining: Due to Selenium's photoconductive action (Electrical resistance decreases with increased illumination). It becomes extremely conductive when exposed to lightning jutsus (those that produce any form of light) and as such it reduces its efficiency against lightning techniques. It is neutral to black lightning seeing as that form of lightning doesn't produce light.
Water: Similarly to Sand release, Water makes it harder to control

Strong to:
Light and Variations: Due to Selenium's photovoltaic action (converts light to electricity) any non-lightning jutsu that produces tremendous light would cause the red powder to produce electricity that further boosts its offensive and defensive capabilities
Fire and Variations: Due to Selenium's high melting point and its photvoltaic action (see explanation above). It is strong against fire related elements.
Organic Materials such as Wood, Aburame bugs, Bones etc due to its toxicity
Earth: Similarly to sand release, Selenium dust can be used to grind Earth or to become dense enough to compete against even the hardest rocks.


Co-creator: N/A

Students I pass this custom element on to: ? & ?

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Custom element Japanese name:
(Ekitai) Kuriputon
Custom element English name:
Liquid Krypton Release
The element is based on:
Wind + Lightning + Water
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Krypton is a naturally occuring noble gas in the common air. It is one of the rarest ones but still always present. The fact that it is present in the ninja world is because there is no evidence to suggest why this element would be the only noble gas rejected from its reality. Other noble gases have already been turned into elements. This one is not different.
How it works:
First of all, air is always present in the narutoverse making it the primary source of Krypton. The wind release is also a source for krypton although it is not pure. This is where the lightning element comes into place and acts as a catalyst and using its raw energy to divide and purify krypton from the wind element or present air. While pure krypton is formed in grand scales the wind release together with water release sub freezes the krypton into an absolutely devastating cold liquid form. This is then the release form of the element and how it us made. Now the properties of liquid krypton as suspected, is that its extremely cold and can quite frankly liquify air or at the bare minimum transform it into sub zero temperatures. As being part of the noble gases, krypton does not react chemically easily with anything. This includes acids, heat, cold etc. Krypton is also completely odorless and colorless. While being in a liquid state it will produce gas vapour around its surface because of its interraction with the surrounding air. Even though krypton is naturally occuring in air it takes chakra to produce and sustain it in its liquid and pure form which means it cannot be self sustained unless a user posesses sourceless materialising for liquid krypton release. The element posseses weight and surface although both are very minimal and can be broken by sheer force easily. Although matter can pass through liquid krypton easily doesnt mean that it doesnt react towards its sub zero temperatures. Solids that have very low thermal conductivity such as bismuth will have a very easy time defeating liquid krypton though. When it comes to lasers or plasmas they will be directly affected by the ultra cold properties of liquid krypton and because it has low thermal conductivity itself, liquid krypton will disintigrate plasmas or lasers for that reason. A person cannot breathe in a lot of krypton without passing out either because of the lack of oxygen.

(Kuriputon: Fuyu no Namida| Liquid Krypton release: Tears of Winter)
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user liquifies portions of the air around a target and forces it to drop to subzero degrees. This will freeze movement speeds and slowly paralyse their senses while also suffocate them.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Completed Water, Wind and Lightning.
Is weak to:
Wind
Wind is an element that is both the source and bane of liquid Krypton. Because air takes a considerably longer time to freeze, is very thermodynamicaly stable and brute, it can push back the very light substance that is liquid krypton.
Earth
Earth is denser, heavier and packs a punch compared to liquid Krypton. Because of its density, earth doesnt care if it freezes to a very cold temperature when engaging with liquid krypton by itself. However. Earth and metals will drop to subzero temperatures when interacting with this liquid and will easily shatter to pieces if interacted with a hard surface directly afterwards.
Is strong against:
Water
Water is less dense and freezes very rapidly being in contact with liquid krypton. It therefore loses its structure and forms into ice which cannot be controlled by water chakra while also makes it become so brittle that it shatters on touch with liquid krypton. Acids that are liquid share the same fate.
Fire
Burning oxygen(that is fire) doesnt react with krypton whatsoever and will instead be extinguished by the noble gas as it doesnt provide any reactive oxygen to keep the fire going. This includes super hot fire variations as well as lava because of the fact that liquid krypton is too thermodynamicaly stable.
Lightning
Lightning is a plasma and therefore will be obliterated by the stable and unreactive ultra cold liquid krypton. When these nature types collis, lightning will lose its speed and physical properties and fall flat. The same goes with lasers and other plasmas. Energy elements that are not plasmas can be considered weak towards liquid krypton unless they are proven to have very poor thermonuclear interactive capabilities.
Organic materials
Organic materials such as wood, bones, blood etc are considered weak towards liquid krypton because of its temperature drop and lack of oxygen that most organic materials are needed to have around them to suffice in structure.

Co-creator:
Skorm
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Declined: There are certain things about this that need to be fixed or noted. It's fine that you turn Krypton into it's liquid form and keep it at colder temperatures, however the only way this element will be colorless will be in it's liquid form much like Water so still visible by the opponent. Also while evaporating back into it's gaseous form, it must have a color to be seen. Going off of this also you will only have control over this element within it's liquid state so as it goes back to its gaseous state once in contact with air there is nothing really stopping it from suffocating you as well. - Daemon
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Custom element Japanese name:
(Ekitai) Kuriputon
Custom element English name:
Liquid Krypton Release
The element is based on:
Wind + Lightning + Water
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Krypton is a naturally occurring noble gas in the common air. It is one of the rarest ones but still always present. The fact that it is present in the ninja world is because there is no evidence to suggest why this element would be the only noble gas rejected from its reality. Other noble gases have already been turned into elements. This one is not different.
How it works:
First of all, air is always present in the narutoverse making it the primary source of Krypton. The wind release is also a source for krypton although it is not pure. This is where the lightning element comes into place and acts as a catalyst and using its raw energy to divide and purify krypton from the wind element or present air. While pure krypton is formed in grand scales the wind release together with water release sub freezes the krypton into an absolutely devastating cold liquid form. This is then the release form of the element and how it us made. Now the properties of liquid krypton as suspected, is that its extremely cold and can quite frankly liquify air or at the bare minimum transform it into sub zero temperatures. As being part of the noble gases, krypton does not react chemically easily with anything. This includes acids, heat, cold etc. Krypton is also completely odorless and colorless(this is only true for when it is a liquid, and when it is a vapour or a gas it will change into a light blue/cyan color scheme). Even though krypton is naturally occurring in air it takes chakra to produce and sustain it in its liquid and pure form which means it cannot be self sustained unless chakra is constantly put into the element to have it constantly cold. The element possesses weight and surface although both are very minimal and can be broken by sheer force easily. Although matter can pass through liquid krypton easily doesn't mean that it doesn't react towards its sub zero temperatures. Solids that have very low thermal conductivity such as bismuth will have a very easy time defeating liquid krypton though. When it comes to lasers or plasmas they will be directly affected by the ultra cold properties of liquid krypton and because it has low thermal conductivity itself, liquid krypton will disintegrate plasmas or lasers for that reason. A person cannot breathe in a lot of krypton without passing out either because of the lack of oxygen. The user will lose control over the element if it goes into any other phase than the liquid one unless it is an intended transfusion that occurs with techniques that allows this, such as the Yin technique Change into Heaven.

(Kuriputon: Fuyu no Namida| Liquid Krypton release: Tears of Winter)
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user liquifies portions of the air around a target and forces it to drop to subzero degrees. This will freeze movement speeds and slowly paralyse their senses while also suffocate them.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Completed Water, Wind and Lightning.
Is weak to:
Wind
Wind is an element that is both the source and bane of liquid Krypton. Because air takes a considerably longer time to freeze, is very thermodynamically stable and brute, it can push back the very light substance that is liquid krypton.
Earth
Earth is denser, heavier and packs a punch compared to liquid Krypton. Because of its density, earth doesnt care if it freezes to a very cold temperature when engaging with liquid krypton by itself. However. Earth and metals will drop to subzero temperatures when interacting with this liquid and will easily shatter to pieces if interacted with a hard surface directly afterwards.
Is strong against:
Water
Water is less dense and freezes very rapidly being in contact with liquid krypton. It therefore loses its structure and forms into ice which cannot be controlled by water chakra while also makes it become so brittle that it shatters on touch with liquid krypton. Acids that are liquid share the same fate.
Fire
Burning oxygen(that is fire) doesn't react with krypton whatsoever and will instead be extinguished by the noble gas as it doesn't provide any reactive oxygen to keep the fire going. This includes super hot fire variations as well as lava because of the fact that liquid krypton is too thermodynamically stable.
Lightning
Lightning is a plasma and therefore will be obliterated by the stable and unreactive ultra cold liquid krypton. When these nature types collis, lightning will lose its speed and physical properties and fall flat. The same goes with lasers and other plasmas. Energy elements that are not plasmas can be considered weak towards liquid krypton unless they are proven to have very poor thermonuclear interactive capabilities.
Organic materials
Organic materials such as wood, bones, blood etc are considered weak towards liquid krypton because of its temperature drop and lack of oxygen that most organic materials are needed to have around them to suffice in structure.

Co-creator:
Skorm
Students I passed this custom element on too: Arthorious & Shady Doctor

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Custom element Japanese name: Kurokōriton

Custom element English name: Black Ice Release

The element is based on: Water + Wind + Earth

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

The Yuki Clan lived in the Land of Water. Some time ago, the country was in the midst of a civil war. In this war, different sides battled each other using ninja in combat, some of whom possessed kekkei genkai. After the war ended, memories of the gruesome battles still lingered in the minds of the people, causing wide-spread persecutions against those with the kekkei genkai. Because of this, the Yuki clan, whose members carried the Ice Release kekkei genkai went into hiding for their own safety.

Black Lightning is a unique form of Lightning Release utilised by the Third Raikage, who passed it on to Darui alone. Not much is known about it, but as the name suggests, the lightning produced is black in colour.

Typhoon Release/Taiton is a kekkei genkai that seems to essentially be a stronger form of Wind Release, involving the creation of vortexes that decimate the user's surroundings.

This proves that it is possible to advance an element to a higher level of damage and even alter the color of the element as well.

How it works:

Black Ice is the product of Water, Wind and Earth releases being combined to make a stronger more reliable ice release. Ice typically takes on the color of the surface that it is applied to due to its transparent nature, so with earth chakra being inside of it, the transparency remained intact however the color of the ice itself shifted into black. This ice is so cold that even a scratch will prove fatal by causing ice to form around the afflicted area killing the afflicted in just a few minutes (turns). Black Ice is capable of freezing any liquid upon contact, instantly condensing it into its solidified form, however upon contact the speed at which it becomes solidified renders the now frozen object brittle and quickly breaks down into small crystalline sand like fragments. Black Ice also gives the user a passive resistance to cold weather/temperatures of up to -300 degrees Fahrenheit (just shy of liquid nitrogen) since they have been training with it for so long

*Fire Release techniques have shown to be unable to melt techniques made of Black Ice. Using Fire Release would not be able to stop the rapid spreading effects of Black Ice on the body unless the opponent used a technique that was one rank stronger than the Black Ice technique they were hit with.

*Water and Rain Release, in the event that Black Ice comes into contact with it, will immediately freeze and become apart of the Black Ice, making it even stronger.
Water/Rain and other liquid based jutsu done against this would increase the damage output of Black Ice based on the rank of the Water/Rain jutsu used as long as Black Ice is at least one rank stronger than the water. This will take the form of Black ice crystals forming at

*Lightning Release, whereas it is exceptionally strong against both Earth release and Ice release, yet is weak to wind and can be conducted by water, becomes neutral to Black Ice. Black Ice also is capable of conducting lower ranked lightning and keeping it charged not unlike water and lightning.

*Earth Release - Is extremely Dense and capable of penetrating Black Ice with ease.

*Ice Release - pales in comparison, will be broken with ease.

*Sound Release - Capable of shattering Black Ice with ease.

*Wind Release - Is capable of slicing right through Black Ice with ease.

*Sand Release - Is neutral to Black Ice. It does not affect it one way or the other, however it does allow individuals to transport over black ice easily by providing traction. Sticks to Black Ice like a magnet rendering both unusable.

Though powerful, utilizing Black Ice Techniques aren't without their negative effects. Black Ice is very chakra taxing, draining an extra 50% of the user's chakra for each technique used.

Jutsu Usage Examples:


Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: User creates small objects made of black ice for attacking or defense.





Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User creates Medium to large sized objects made of black ice for attacking or defense. User can also use this technique to make a bridge of Ice form from under their feet (not unlike Iceman). Requires one handseal.
Note: User can also use this technique to make multiple(5) small sized objects made of Black Ice at a time.
Note: Requires Mastery of Ice to use.
Note: Tools/Objects can only use 3x per battle
Note: Ice Bridge can only be formed 1x per battle
Note: Bridge lasts for 2 turns.
Note: Can only manifest objects between Short to Mid range, although capable of sending them up to long range afterwards.




Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth Release, Water Release, and Wind Release.

Is weak to:
Earth (And CE Variants),
Wind (And CE Variants)
Sound (And CE Variants)
Magnetism

Is neutral to:
Lightning (And CE variants)
Sand/Dust (And CE Variants)

Is Strong against:
Fire/Heat (And CE Variants)
Ice
Water/Rain & (Liquid based CE Variants)
Light (And CE variants)

Co-creator: BlacKing

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

🍆Declined. You need to do more to explain what makes this element possible in the context of the series. You mention Black Lightning, but the existence of an Element that's a black version of a basic element isn't really enough to justify something like Black Ice. The "proof it's possible" section is moreso a justification as to how the physical make-up of the jutsu in the next section can be done.


Secondly, not much distinguishes this from Ice Release. You introduce Earth and change its color, but not of the physical properties you describe actually distinguish it from Ice Release. Aside from the S/Ws, what about its properties is physically unique to it?

Thirdly, you're not going to get things like a passive immunity to cold temperatures and things like "kills in a few turns from a single scratch" approved. Not only would this clash with the Health System, details like this need to be reserved for actual Custom Element Jutsu. Also, please keep the S/W explanations in the appropriate section please. I also won't be approving things like "Strong to Earth and CE variants" because CEs can have a wide range of properties even when based on the same elements. My Corium Release is much different than Daemon's Volcanic Ash, for instance, even though they have almost the same base involved. (Note on this: The neutrality to Lightning doesn't make sense. You noted that Lightning is strong to both Earth and Ice Release, and the latter even consists of the elements you use to justify the neutrality to Lightning, so this wouldn't work.)


Lastly, if this is just "Ice Release and taken to a higher form," then the Elements it's based on will need to be "Ice Release+Earth Release," and it'd be bound to Yuki bios only. What I suggest can also fix the second issue I noted here: Focus less on "upgrading" Ice Release and more on creating a material of your own; it can borrow principles of Ice Release, but unless you're okay with this CE being limited to Yuki clan members, you'll have to limit the involvement of Ice Release in the explanation more.🍆
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Banjīgamurirīsu

Custom element English name: Bungee Gum Release

The element is based on: Earth | Fire | Water

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Bungee Gum is possible by two factors in the manga. One it is elastic effect it has. This is seen by the Lava Release style which creates Rubber in the Land of Lightning. The second factor is the two times we have seen sticky element. Once is the Bubble Ninjutsu from Land of Lightning. The last time is when we seen the user who was a Chunin with Asuma and Shikamaru use the Water Release technique that created water into a sticky substance.

How it works: Bungee gum works by combining Earth and Fire to first create an elastic effect and changes the earth into a soft and elastic substance. The user would then combine the Water nature next which changes it into a sticky substance so now the elements are all combined together creating a pink sticky and elastic element. This element is meant for Offensive purposes but can be used for it depending on the skill and tactics of the user. The user isn't really effected by the stickiness or elastic of the substance/element but if they desire they can be for tactics or playing around reasons.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

Bungee Gum: The Wall of Pinky
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps their hands and pulls them part showing Bungee Gum substance in between them but still attach to it and creates a barrier/wall that could be used to capture or defend against attack.

Bungee Gum: Gotcha
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user using just one finger or multiple if they desire shoots off a beam of Bungee Gum directly at their desired target(s). This would attach to whatever the target is and the other end is attach to the user's finger(s). The user can pull the desired target to them or they can come at the target. Either way if the user uses this along side a tajutsu attack it would give a boost in the taijutsu attack by +10 because the momentum of the attraction or retraction of the Bungee Gum.


Conditions to be able to use it: Complete Fire, Earth, and Water

Is weak to: Earth can stop it in its tracks | Wind can slice through it or push it away

Is strong against: Lightning is the element is insulator | Fire can't burn the element

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

🍆Declined. This is just Bubble Gum and the Rubber-variant of Lava Release lol You need more properties to this to warrant it being a CE. Honestly, I'd recommend making it an elastic energy.🍆
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Banjīgamurirīsu

Custom element English name: Bungee Gum Release

The element is based on: Lightning+Water

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): The existence of the elastic variation of Lava Release demonstrates that it is possible to combine chakra natures in order to create a physical form of incredible malleability. Storm Release demonstrates it is possible to combine Lightning and Water in order to produce an energy that flows like one of the forms of matter. While in the case of Storm Release it is lightning that flows like water, Bungee Gum is lightning that flows like an incredibly dense and sticky material, courtesy of the malleable and syrup-like qualities able to be generated through certain canon Water Release techniques.

How it works: Bungee gum works by combining Lightning and Water to first create an elastic energy. Bungee Gum effectively functions as a syrup-like material with the composition of lightning. The typical form of lightning is lost, replaced by one that is dense, elastic, and sticky. Due to being composed of their own chakra, Bungee Gum users are able to freely interact with the energy when produced without suffering from the adverse effects. The element is incredibly destructive to others, however; as it is still composed of electricity, Bungee Gum is capable of inducing the same shocks and burns that Lightning Release normally can, and retains its ability to conduct electricity in compatible materials.

Bungee Gum is an incredibly malleable material, even moreso than the Rubber variation of Lava Release due to the greater potential for shape manipulation in Water Release and Lightning Release alike. The natural properties of lightning responsible for static cling and Water Release's capacity to be made into a sticky syrup both manifest in Bungee Gum as a nigh-unparalleled sticky quality, allowing it to ensnare virtually anything in respect to its own power.

Being composed of Lightning and Water Releases, the user is able to manifest the element through their own bodies, through sources of water, and within thin air.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

Bungee Gum: The Wall of Pinky
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+20)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps their hands and pulls them part showing Bungee Gum substance in between them but still attach to it and creates a barrier/wall that could be used to capture or defend against attack.

Bungee Gum: Gotcha
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user using just one finger or multiple if they desire shoots off a beam of Bungee Gum directly at their desired target(s). This would attach to whatever the target is and the other end is attach to the user's finger(s). The user can pull the desired target to them or they can come at the target. Either way if the user uses this along side a tajutsu attack it would give a boost in the taijutsu attack by +10 because the momentum of the attraction or retraction of the Bungee Gum.


Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Lightning and Water

Is weak to: Wind Release, being an insulator, can neutralize the electrical properties of Bungee Gum and disperse its composition similarly to wind dispersing water. Water Release is capable of "oversaturating" Bungee Gum's form, neutralizing its electrical properties.


Is strong against: Being a form of energy, Bungee Gum is highly effective against Fire and Lightning Release, capable of assimilating Lightning Release into its form and its dense, watery-composition allowing it to put out fires. Due to being composed of Lightning, Bungee Gum is also capable of destroying Earth Release.

Co-creator: Punk Hazard

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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Custom element Japanese name: Tentaikazeton
Custom element English name: Celestial Wind Release
The element is based on: Wind Release + Yin Release

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Celestial Wind Release is a unique combination of Wind Release and Yin Release. The core of the element is provided through the use of wind, which as seen throughout multiple instances in the show is capable of being weaponized via the use of chakra. This ranges from simple bursts of wind from the user’s mouth, a feat demonstrated by Kakuzu with his wind mask, vacuum bullets, and other wind projectiles seen performed by Danzo. This isn’t the only thing, as the very same wind that exists in the world surrounding the user can be molded as well, allowing them to create tornadoes and other constructs made of wind.

Wind has also been shown being infused into weaponry as well, allowing the weapons cutting power to be increased by the very winds. This all in all shows now only the destructive power, but the expansive nature wind release provides. However, within the infusion of Yin Release, this adds in more of a spiritual twist into it. It takes the spiritual nature of Yin Release and meshes with Wind Release to create beautiful silver-colored energy (silver being its default color). Yin release has shown to be able to control many different aspects of techniques influenced by it as seen in RP with Change into Heaven. Allowing the user to essentially be able to mold the wind element into not only solids, but into as an intangible force of energy that passes through solids, but can also retain its cutting power (when solid) or destructive nature, leaving the possibilities of the element quite high. It also adds in the ability to absorb immense amounts of chakra, a trait that isn’t foreign to Wind Release as seen with Madara’s Uchiha Return. The technique in question was of the wind nature, showcasing wind’s inherent ability to absorb chakra. Yin Release simply amplifies this instead alongside Yin's ability to tamper with the chakra of others as seen with the spiritual parasites of Hungry Ghost and Hands of Sloth.

How it works: Celestial Wind Release is a unique free-flowing energy that is formed when combined together with Yin Release and Wind Release. At its core, the element takes its basis of Wind Release as its formal body. The energy produced is an extremely beautiful silver color with the appearance of stand wind-based techniques (like how Danzo’s techniques look), but can be forged in various colors should the user desire. It is highly spiritual in nature due to the higher imbalance of Yin flowing through the energy but is not restricted in movement. This allows the user to mold the energy in the exact same way one would do with Wind Release allowing it to be formed easily into constructs, blasts of energy, or anything the user is capable of with Wind Release naturally. Its formation is done either through the user’s body or at range by using the very air as a medium (though the element itself cannot be spawned within a short range of the target unless already within short range of them). The element can also be fueled into weapons, allowing the user the ability to wield weapons coated/infused with Silver Wind.

How Yin comes into the mixture however is providing its spiritual prowess to the element. Celestial Wind is inherently a chakra absorbing element, to which when it comes in contact with foreign chakra. However, what makes this unique as opposed to just wasting away the chakra, the element utilizes a unique feature dubbed “Spirting Away”. This uses the nature’s ability to forcefully mold the absorbed chakra into the spiritual energy itself, providing the element a way to essentially feed itself. This grants itself rejuvenation – which further sustains the techniques utilized. This process can be done endlessly, showcasing the never-ending life span of Celestial Wind. There is some restraint, however, as the winds produced can only absorb a certain amount of chakra which if the foreign chakra bypasses by having more than its capable of handling, the element will fail to absorb it thus being destroyed. Silver Wind is naturally solid in nature, to which the user can control the element to become intangible in order to pass through solids, though can at times sacrifice the elements powerful nature in order to do this, making it incapable of dealing damage while in said state.

It should be noted coming into contact with the element is also dangerous, as the spiritual absorbing power will essentially lock the target’s ability to mold chakra and causing spiritual degeneration until physical contact from the winds is removed which immediately grants them the ability back. The element however when it's intangible is capable of striking the opponent on the spiritual side, rather than physical based on the Spiritual Damaging Rules.

Jutsu Usage Examples:


(Tentaikazeton ): Celestial Wind Release: Leo's Wrath
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 70
Damage: 100
Description: The user unleashes a powerful tornado of silver-colored winds, capable of destroying everything.

Conditions to be able to use it: Completed Wind Release and Yin Release

Is weak to: Neutral To All Elemental Natures

Is strong against: Neutral To All Elemental Natures

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


Declined. There is nothing about this that really makes it a Custom Element. It really is just Wind and Yin Release that gives you an effective twelve CJ slots. Everything listed here could be achieved in a normal Yin/Wind CJ. It is meaningless to say that it is "naturally" solid when you freely change the tangibility state that it is in. Also, proof read your work.
 
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Custom element Japanese name: Nakaraiton

Custom element English name: Arcane Lightning Release

The element is based on: Lightning + Yang

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the Manga, we've seen characters apply Yin or Yang to elemental techniques. Sasuke for example, was able to blend Yin chakra into his Lightning Release Chidori and amplify it's power and altering it's appearance. Turning the lightning black instead of the standard blue. Like in the series, Arcane Lightning is the infusion of Yang Release into Lightning, causing it to alter its appearance into a white lightning and it's shape becoming less jagged and more fluid.

How it works: By applying Yang Release to Lightning Release you can create a new form of lightning called Arcane Lightning Release. This new form of lighting is very different from normal lighting as the implementation of Yang changes the nature of the element. This new form of lighting will appear white in color, instead of the normal blue and be more fluid in movement instead of random and jagged. Arcane Lightning has a form of semi sentience and awareness allowing it to move more fluidly in it's usage and in some cases even track and lock onto a moving target. This allows the Arcane Lightning to move around obstacles more freely unlike normal lighting. With the introduction of Yang, this lightning has less piercing power but more blunt force power behind it, Being warm to the touch without radiating heat similar to a Yang Release Truth Seaking Ball. Like normal lighting, Arcane Lightning is able to be conducted and can numb or even paralyze a target, being taken a step further with Yang these numbing and/or paralyzing effects are amplified and can even zap a targets physical energy. (effects to be listed in techniques) Arcane Lighting lacks any healing ability that could be gained from Yang, instead focusing entirely on it's power output and hindering affects. Yang Release being a key building block to Arcane Lightning means that it's chakra levels, and in some cases damage output, are much higher then standard lightning; draining the users chakra at a faster rate. Lastly like Yang Release, Arcane Lightning is able to interact with spiritual techniques or creatures that those of hands of the sloth and limbo clones.

Jutsu Usage Examples:

(Nakaraiton no Jutsu) Arcane Lightning Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates three handseals while focusing his chakra, then releasing multiple bolts of Arcane Lightning in front of them. These bolts are able to read the layout of the battlefield when first formed, allowing them to use their fluid maneuverability to wrap around obstructions like walls or trees that are present upon their creation. These bolts carry a strong blunt force damage that upon impact that will radiate within the target, causing a numbing of the area preventing usage of the body part or limb struck for two turns.

Conditions to be able to use it: Jounin rank and Yang Release

Is weak to: Being comprised of Lightning and Yang Release, Arcane is neutral to all elements.

Is strong against: Being comprised of Lightning and Yang Release, Arcane is neutral to all elements.

Co-creator: Serpent

Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A


Declined. There is nothing about this that makes this a standalone Custom Element. All you've done is effectively create a set of twelve Lightning/Yang CJs. There has to be something about this that makes it unique, something that you couldn't necessarily do by just combining Yang and Lightning.
 
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