[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Vex]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ototon: Apparitionu) Sound Release: Apparation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A sound jutsu conceived after seeing the legendary Hozuki clan in action. The user would be able to suddenly turn his body into pure, low frequency, high amplitude sound waves. It would, in actuality, appear as if the user had turned into wind. However, the user's body becomes changed into sound. The user is actually able to reform and disperse at will. This can even be applied to singular portions of the user's body, or to single limbs. The opponent would not actually be harmed upon the user's body turning to sound. However, the sound waves would drive back all matter within a short range radius. This is similar in manner to (Ototon: Himei Zetsubou no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Scream of Despair Skill. Thus, the jutsu would be good to use upon being bound. While the user is capable of normal movement if a singular body parts are changed into sound, if the user were to turn just his lower body into sound he becomes capable of moving at the average speed of a sage ranked user, and able to use sustained flight. This is done by way of acoustic levitation. Furthermore, if the user was to turn his entire body into sound he becomes able to move as a cloud of sound waves (unable to attack, and extremely vulnerable to wind). The user is visible as ripples ain the air, and the opponent is able to hear him as a low pitched hum. Although matter, and energy attacks will be unable to affect the user, attacks utilizing wind are extremely effective. They become able to disperse the user's form. When large scaled wind jutsu such as Tornado Wall strike the user, his form becomes displaced to such a degree that he is unable to reform. This means that the user must be very wary while he is transformed. Upon dispersing, a loud 'pop' is heard. This is, of course, purely cosmetic and serves no purpose. Alternatively, by varying the way in which the sound waves travel, and condensing them - the user becomes able to appear as a traveling whisp of dark smoke (again, purely cosmetic).

Note: Usable thrice per battle.
Note: Lasts two turns per use
Note: No sound jutsu in the same turn
Note: No sound above A rank next turn
Note: Teachable only by Vex
Note: User cannot use this Jutsu whilst he is using a technique to seal the opponent's wind, or restricting him from using wind.
Note: No matter how much of the user's body is transformed, the speed cap is how fast their body was moving before they transform.

Declined - As you know each mod has it's own criteria for cj checks and i've spoken this over with NK before doing the full check. I would of declined it personally as i find turning your body to sound waves, pretty much vibrations isn't plausable but i will allow it if you change it to be useable twice and only lasts for the turn active as in this form it's only wind that can hit you.

Making a variant of this:




( Ototon Juinjutsu: Tabu Fuuin ) - Sound Release Cursed Seal: Taboo Seal Level 2
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long ( applied on self, had long range capabilities )
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advanced application of the Taboo seal, which is a form of Cursed Seal based on the inner workings of the Tongue Twister Seal but inverted, the user instead of casting a seal on others places a seal on himself. The unique composition of this seal is that inside of it, is a kanji for a certain word, interchangeable at the user's will ( cannot be changed after placed, however ). After the user has used the Taboo seal, he will focus Ototon chakra onto the seal that he created on himself. This heightens the seal's effectiveness as a second one layers over it, making what resembles a double seal. This enhances the sensitivity of the Taboo Seal by tenfold, causing it's ability to detect when specific frequencies are made to be able to detect statements from around the Ninja World. Because it's been enhanced so much, this allows the spoken frequency to be able to vibrate and resonate at a rate that armors or hidden protections are revealed as well, the sound waves creating a "mental" map of the surroundings around the created frequency, or person.
Note: Can only be used after the Taboo Seal has been placed.
Note: Lasts for the remainder of the event used in

Declined - not gonna allow you to sense within a barrier around the nina world xd

(Ototon: Lumos) - Ototon: Lumos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: High frequency sound waves have been shown to be able to be converted into pure energy in the form of light. By focusing their chakra, as a jutsu is released, the user is able to quickly produce a sound wave (through some sort of body movement, snapping a finger, clapping, even whistling) which is of a high enough frequency to immediately generate a bright flash of light. This sound wave is released in the same time frame as the previous Jutsu, and aims to make it difficult to see the incoming jutsu, disrupting the opponent's sight. The sound wave would seemingly 'coat' the expelled jutsu in light, making it difficult for the opponent to see the jutsu or look at it directly, blinding the opponent if he looks at it directly for more than a few seconds. This would not work against the Byakugan, or chakra sensors.

Note: Teachable only by Vex

Declined - Nice try harry, but sound creating light is a no

(Ototon: Apparitionu) Sound Release: Apparation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A sound jutsu conceived after seeing the legendary Hozuki clan in action. The user would be able to suddenly turn his body into pure, low frequency, high amplitude sound waves. It would, in actuality, appear as if the user had turned into wind. However, the user's body becomes changed into sound. The user is actually able to reform and disperse at will. This can even be applied to singular portions of the user's body, or to single limbs. The opponent would not actually be harmed upon the user's body turning to sound. However, the sound waves would drive back all matter within a short range radius. This is similar in manner to (Ototon: Himei Zetsubou no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Scream of Despair Skill. Thus, the jutsu would be good to use upon being bound. While the user is capable of normal movement if a singular body parts are changed into sound, if the user were to turn just his lower body into sound he becomes capable of moving at the average speed of a sage ranked user, and able to use sustained flight. This is done by way of acoustic levitation. Furthermore, if the user was to turn his entire body into sound he becomes able to move as a cloud of sound waves (unable to attack, and extremely vulnerable to wind) that travels at the speed of a Sage Ranked shinobi. The user is visible as ripples ain the air, and the opponent is able to hear him as a low pitched hum. Although matter, and energy attacks will be unable to affect the user, attacks utilizing wind are extremely effective. They become able to disperse the user's form. When large scaled wind jutsu such as Tornado Wall strike the user, his form becomes displaced to such a degree that he is unable to reform. This means that the user must be very wary while he is transformed. Upon dispersing, a loud 'pop' is heard. This is, of course, purely cosmetic and serves no purpose. Alternatively, by varying the way in which the sound waves travel, and condensing them - the user becomes able to appear as a traveling whisp of dark smoke (again, purely cosmetic).

Note: Usable twice per battle.
Note: Lasts for the duration of the turn it's used in
Note: No sound jutsu in the same turn
Note: No sound above A rank next turn
Note: Teachable only by Vex
Note: User cannot use this Jutsu whilst he is using a technique to seal the opponent's wind, or restricting him from using wind.

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

(Ototon: Lumos) - Ototon: Lumos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: High frequency sound waves have been shown to be able to be converted into pure energy in the form of light. This is called Sonoluminescence (the process of high frequency sound waves being transformed into light), and is a well documented phenomenon. The usage of chakra to generate the soundwaves causes them to be much more potent than normal, being able to produce much brighter light than what is normally found in sonoluminescence.By focusing their chakra, as a jutsu is released, the user is able to quickly produce a sound wave (through some sort of body movement, snapping a finger, clapping, even whistling) which is of a high enough frequency to immediately generate a bright flash of light. This sound wave is released in the same time frame as the previous Jutsu, and aims to make it difficult to see the incoming jutsu, disrupting the opponent's sight. The sound wave would seemingly 'coat' the expelled jutsu in light, making it difficult for the opponent to see the jutsu or look at it directly, blinding the opponent if he looks at it directly for more than a few seconds. This would not work against the Byakugan, or chakra sensors.

Note: Teachable only by Vex

‡ Approved ‡

3. ( Juinjutsu/Ototon: Morsmorde ) - Cursed Sealing Arts/Sound Release: Morsmorde
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 ( -10 per item marked and for communication, -20 per turn for barrier )
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is based foremost on Fuuinjutsu such as the Tongue Twister Seal and the various types of Ototon Jutsu. The user creates a "cursed" seal on his arm called the Dark Mark, resembling a skull with a large intricate snake extending from it's mouth. This seal itself allows for a myriad of effect, the first and most basic ability being it allows the user to communicate with others who have been branded with the Dark Mark. Through simple touch and fueling of chakra, this allows the user to create a burning sensation which is procured through the intense vibrations resonating through the seal and being replicated in the sister seals marked across others. This acts as a sort of honing device, alerting those with the mark ( either as a group or individually ) to the user's location. In addition to this, the user is able to mark items with the Dark Mark, allowing him to summon the specific item should it be needed to him, much like a Reverse Summoning and Summoning: Lightning Blade Creation jutsu mixed. Up to 4 items can be marked each use.

In addition to this base effect, the user is able to actively stimulate the seal and cause another effect. Through direct contact with the seal, the user releases sound vibrations through the seal and it erects a cursed barrier around the field. This barrier is designed not to harm, but to hinder and taunt the opponent; when erected, those within the barrier's 15 meter radius are left unable to enter or exit the barrier. The key to it's exit and entry is the seal on the user themselves, meaning only those with the Dark Mark are able to cross the barrier. Due to it's sealing abilities, it prevents the ability to use high level ninjutsu that require concentration, namely S rank and higher Ninjutsu ( this would encompass Kinjutsu, medjutsu, S/T jutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc - various branches of Ninjutsu itself ) and Forbidden ranked Elemental Ninjutsu. To break the barrier itself, multiple walls (at least two) must be attacked with S ranked strength simultaneously.
Note: Barrier can only be erected twice per battle with at least a 2 turn break in between use. The barrier itself is of A rank strength.
Note: The communication aspect as well as basic summoning can be done an unlimited amount of times, as long as the jutsu is posted with each use and abiding by the 3 jutsu per turn rule.
Note: While the barrier is in effect, the user can only use Sound, Lightning or Wind and cannot use any other Fuuinjutsu techniques.

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

 

[Xicer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Teiku-itto) Illusionary Art: Take It!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20-40 (depending on rank)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is used after the target has used Jutsu or ability to absorb the users chakra. Intense chakra practice over time allows for the user to regain control of their chakra present within the target, and use it for the chakra needed for genjutsu. After regaining control of their own chakra, the user will force it to infiltrate the targets brain, placing them under an illusion of their choosing. Due to chakra's tendency to begin mixing at once, the user may only convert half of the chakra absorbed for Jutsu (for example, if 50 chakra points are absorbed, only 25 may be used for Jutsu, so a B-Rank technique) Because the chakra from this technique is being pulled from the targets body, they take the chakra cost for the genjutsu formed from this Jutsu.

- Due to the extreme chakra control needed, you must be of Sannin rank to use this Jutsu
- Usable once as S-Rank/twice as A-Rank/ thrice as B-Rank (alternatively may be used once as A-Rank and twice as B)
- Usable only on the turn chakra is absorbed, due to it being lost by infusing into the targets chakra
- Is used in the same timeframe as the genjutsu
- Can only be taught by Xicer

‡ Declined ‡ This is not logical.

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(Katon: Honoo-Chisoku) Fire Style: Blazing Speed
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms one hand seal at end of the series of hand seals used for another Fire technique to increase the speed at which the Jutsu travels. It does this by decreasing the overall surface area of the technique, concentrating it for more pressure. The speed of that the technique is raised to can be compared to that of ( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet. As the technique begins with the end of the previous Jutsu, it occurs during the same timeframe.

-Can only be used with S-Rank and below techniques
-No S-Rank+ fire for two turns following the turn this Jutsu is used
-Usable twice per battle
-Can only be taught by Xicer

‡ Declined ‡ Speed is already heavily abused in our RP and the speed of techniques (if not quantified clearly) is negligible.

 

[Robot Boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Resubmitting~

( Joushou Kashou Hoi-ru ) – Ascending Burn Wheel
Type: offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description: A hammer technique where the user, focuses his lightning chakra into the hammers head and the end of the grip. The user then twirls, and throws it at the target as its twirling, creating a wheel with small blades/spear heads similar to the ascending earth technique's second application, on the ‘tire’ of the wheel. The target is then engulfed by a vertical column of electricity, upon impact. The technique also has numbing properties, numbing the targets body for one turn.

Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang
-Can be used up to four times
-must have a hammer

Approved

~New submission~

(Katon: Doraibu) – Fire Release: Drive
Type:offensive
Rank:D
Range:short-mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description: Is a smaller and weaker version of the raging drive technique. The user creates two vertical column of fire that raise in front of him, on his left and right. The user then manipulates the column and creates an orb of fire that rises above the user and target and then turns into lances of fire from the orb, diving into the target.
Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang.

raging drive:

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( Kibishii Kaen Shikon) –Severe Blaze Fang
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user and his ninken while in the two headed-wolf transformation or the three headed wolf, will follow the same concept when performing the tail fang technique except they will form a tsuga and focus fire chakra to form a drill-like spear. They then create an extra two tail fangs to knock the target into the air and thrust the other tail fang into them, burning and piercing through the victim. If the target(s) is already in the air, the user can plow all three into them.

-Can be used up to three times per battle
-Requires a ninken and a clone if the user goes for the three headed wolf
-Must use the four legged technique beforehand
-Can only be used in one of the wolf transformations
-The user must wait a turn before using it again

Pending: leaving for another mod.

tail fang:

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✦ Approved ✦

-Updating-

(Katon: Doraibu) – Fire Release: Drive
Type:offensive
Rank:D
Range:short-mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description: Is a smaller and weaker version of the raging drive technique. The user creates two vertical column of fire that raise in front of him, on his left and right. The user then manipulates the column and creates an orb of fire that rises above the user and target and then turns into lances of fire from the orb, diving into the target. These lances now have homing capabilities should the target evade them.
Restrictions:
-Can only be taught by fang.

‡ Update Approved ‡

(Yajuu Shindou) – Beast Impact
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using a hammer and imbuing large amounts of chakra into it, the user will perform a stronger version of beast blow. The user doesn't need to smash the target to initiate the attack but he does need to spin before releasing it. The lion's head is much larger than it was with the original, being of equal size to a large fireball, and has a greater reach than before.

-Must have a hammer to use this
-Usable up to three times.

tech:

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(Yajuu Shindou) – Beast Impact
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using a hammer and imbuing large amounts of chakra into it, the user will perform a stronger version of beast blow. The user doesn't need to smash the target to initiate the attack but he does need to SPIN before releasing it. The lion's head is much larger than it was with the original, being of equal size to a large fireball, and has a greater reach than before. When in the beast humanized transformation and Once per battle, the user can sacrifice the transformation to perform a forbidden ranked Beast Impact, without the need to use a tool as a medium, instead releasing it from their own body while spinning in place, focusing immense amounts of energy in their attack, shaping it in the form of large a lion head chakra blast, and being shielded from incoming attacks upon release but, doing so ends the transformation and leaves the Inuzuka and ninken exhausted and damaged from technique putting strain on the user (-25 damage).

-Must have a hammer to use this
-Usable up to three times.

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‡ Declined ‡ The Forbidden Rank part is a no.

(Jinjū Konbi Henge: Kin'niku no ōkami) - Human Beast Combination Transformation: Muscle Wolf
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:n/a
Description: While fighting and one of the transformations used as a last resort, the Inuzuka will utilize the clan’s transformation techniques to combine with their ninken into a two headed wolf that has retained its claws and tail but, appears more human-like, standing on their hind legs, and with their shoulders and upper arms becoming very muscular. The arms increase the force behind user’s his physical attacks, allowing the forearms to deliver such force that it leaves a large imprint of the user’s wolf paw but, his movement becomes slower than normal since he has to put more effort in moving his arms to perform a hand based attack, allowing an enemy enough time to react and evade. While in this form, the user is durable enough to take A-rank physical attacks and they gain access to this transformation’s technique. The technique is called Beast Human Taijutsu: Wicked Release of The Hell Saw and it is performed by following a similar concept of the tail fang technique, the user will focus his or her chakra into their tail, extend, and create ninety nine extra ‘tails’. The user will pair them and spin them into a buzz-saw shape. While maintaining its focus, the user will launch the saw tails in sets of ten, forward at target (s), and deliver many beast-like attacks. The technique can be used to intercept and protect the user should their initial defense fail to shield them from a frontal attack that is manipulated to attack from an opening the enemy exploits.

-Only usable once per battle
-Lasts for four turns or until user decides to deactivate the transformation
-Only one technique per turn may be used with this transformation
-Must be a member of the Inuzuka clan
-Hell Saw counts as a Forbidden-rank move and using this ends the transformation.
-After using Hell Saw, the user takes -40damage due to exhaustion and won’t be able to move for two turns.

‡ Declined ‡ Beast Human Taijutsu: Wicked Release of The Hell Saw needs to be submitted as a separate technique.

 

[Beifong]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Koton: Chishio no Doragon) – Steel Release: Blood of the Dragon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 chakra to every technique this is applied to)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability that will allow them to completely liquefy their steel techniques for the next four turns. When applied to techniques, the user can either choose to have the steel technique retain it's shape and form and essentially behave like a solid (much like Water Release: Sword of Draining) or for it to be used in a formless wave/mass of liquid. An example of the latter would creating pillars of steel from the ground but upon emergence they are released as geysers. An example of the former is creating an armour of molten steel from the body but retaining it's shape, form and structure so it doesn't fall to the ground as a formless mass. This means any techniques this ability is applied to will behave as they usually do but with exception they will deliver severe burns upon contact with the opponent. When created from the user's body, this molten steel will not harm the user (similar to how Fire Release is released from the body). The user will not be burned if he's in contact with the molten steel after creation as long as it originated from his body (and not the ground). Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes other Steel Release techniques. Applying this ability to techniques is both passive and optional (this doesn't have to be applied to every compatible jutsu while this is active).

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle

Declined - this is strong, but make it so you have to use this before releasing a steel jutsu and say it adds fire chakra to it increasing it's heat to molten steel that can retain it's shape. Useable 3 times per battle and only earth, fire and steel in the same turn.

‡ All Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

(Koton: Chishio no Doragon) – Steel Release: Blood of the Dragon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (+20 chakra to a technique this is applied to)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability that will allow them to completely liquefy their next steel technique by imbuing additional katon chakra into it. This heats it up enough to melt it. When applied, the user can either choose to have the steel technique retain it's shape and form and essentially behave like a solid (much like Water Release: Sword of Draining) or for it to be used in a formless wave/mass of liquid. An example of the latter would creating pillars of steel from the ground but upon emergence they are released as geysers. An example of the former is creating an armour of molten steel from the body but retaining it's shape, form and structure so it doesn't fall to the ground as a formless mass. This means any techniques this ability is applied to will behave as they usually do but with exception they will deliver severe burns upon contact with the opponent. When created from the user's body, this molten steel will not harm the user (similar to how Fire Release is released from the body). The user will not be burned if he's in contact with the molten steel after creation as long as it originated from his body (and not the ground). Using this ability counts as one of the user's moves per turn but will occur in the same timeframe as the technique it's applied to.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: User can only use Earth, Fire, Steel and non-elemental abilities in the same turn

Approved

(Koton: Kishi no Marui Teiburu) - Steel Release: Knights of the Round Table
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is the culmination of Steel Release and the “Arthurian” set of techniques. The user will focus their koton chakra into the ground or a source of steel to create one of the Knights of the Round Table. In the case of Gawain, he can only be created from a source of molten steel. All of the Knights have a unique ability but the one they all share is their ability to regenerate from techniques insufficient in destroying them. This regeneration takes the form of the one exhibited in Steel Release: Growth of Gaheris whereby their bodies are made up of thousands upon thousands of extra fines wires which rearrange and sew back together to undo any damage dealt to them that isn't enough to destroy them e.g. A-Rank Fire.

Galahad – The White Knight
Galahad is a shining example of what a Knight should be. He’s composed of steel almost white in colour and his abilities reflect his nature as the embodiment of the “ideal” knight. He has mastered steel release to the extent he can use all steel release techniques the user knows up to and including S-Rank. He can perform them sans handseals and techniques which come from the body will instead be created from the steel that composes his body. Every technique used by Galahad counts as one of the user’s moves per turn.

Gawain – The Red Knight
Gawain is hot tempered and quick to anger. Unlike the other two Knights, he can only be created from a source of molten steel rather than from a steel source or the ground. He hardens into solid steel on creation but his “body” retains bright red colour of the metallic lava he was formed from. His ability is his capability to control any molten steel on the field through hand gestures alone. His manipulation will always be equal to A-Rank and he can only use it once per turn. It will also count as one of the user’s moves per turn.

Mordred – The Black Knight
A corruption of all the ideals Knights hold dear, that is Mordred. His body is composed of the blackest steel and even his abilities reflect his sinister nature. Rather than using techniques, he seeks to bend and control the world to his will. He can control any steel on the field through hand gestures alone, reshaping and reforming them as necessary for his intended purpose. His manipulation will always be equal to A-Rank and he can only use it once per turn. It will also count as one of the user’s moves per turn.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Each night can be summoned once, if they are summoned alone, they can be destroyed by an S rank. If all three are summoned at the same time, the power is devided between them and they can be destroyed by A rank
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle (once per Knight) If all are summoned at the same time the jutsu can't be used again and takes up two of the users three jutsu per turn.
Note: Only Steel, Fire, Earth, any KG/CE of the aforementioned elements and non-elemental abilities while active
Note: All techniques the knights use count as a move per turn
Note: If used to summon one night must wait two turns to use it again
Note: After the technique ends, the user can't use steel, earth and fire jutsu above A rank for one turn

Approved - made edits

(Koton: Bachiatari Subeta no Kaku) - Steel Release: Excalibur, The Accursed Sword of Victory
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus their koton chakra throughout their body to create a sword composed of the blackest steel in either of their hands. The blade will extend from the user’s palm until the hilt of the weapon rests in the user’s grasp. Unlike most steel release techniques, this is no ordinary weapon and is actually an attempt to emulate a cursed sword thought to be lost to history. It imparts several powerful abilities to it’s wielder but ultimately results in their death when it is destroyed or when it expires. The sword will regenerate from techniques insufficient in destroying it in one hit and it’s size can be shrunk/expanded, ranging from the size of a marble all the way up to 15 meters in length and width. This allows it to clash with and counter techniques of a moderate to large size. Shrinking the sword or returning it to it’s normal size is passive but enlarging it will count as one of the user’s moves per turn. The first ability of the sword is that it will turn anything it touches directly or indirectly to black steel (similar to Steel Release: Triumph of Tristan). It takes the petrification in the aforementioned technique one step further as it will be capable of turning even living beings into steel on contact. This will even extend to the user, their whole body transforming into steel as hard as the sword when it’s first created. They will still be capable of moving, using techniques and everything they could do before but when Excalibur expires or is destroyed, the user will become an inanimate statute of steel (essentially killing them). Since the user’s body becomes an extension of the sword while active, this conversion into steel will still occur if contact with the user is made, essentially rendering the user physically untouchable for the duration of this technique. If the sword is created while Steel Release: Glory of Galahad is active, the sword will fortify the strength of the aforementioned technique allowing the user’s transformed body to defend against techniques the sum of their collective power. The second ability is a direct result of the first and occurs only because of the user’s body being converted into steel. While the user is in this state, the opponent cannot inject chakra or any kind of energy into the user’s body and so they become immune to Genjutsu up to S rank. The third and final ability of the sword is it’s capability to enhance the user’s Steel, Earth and Fire techniques. All techniques of the aforementioned elements can be used without handseals while this is active and all of them will gain a +10 damage boost (+1 rank for techniques below S-Rank).

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: User can only use Fire, Earth, Steel and non-elemental abilities while active
Note: Can't use handseals while active or Genjutsu
Note: Controlling the sword takes up one of the users three jutsu per turn
Note: When the sword expires or is destroyed, the user dies.

Approved made edits

‡ All Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.

 

[Erzo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ototon: Niji Parusu) - Sound Release: Secondary Pulse
Rank: C
Type: Defence/suplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 per use)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A pulse based jutsu used to copy and sustain other Sound frequencies, Secondary pulse has no power to do damage of its own, whether physical or mental. The main and only aspect of this jutsu is to be used as support for other Sound techniques, mimicking their frequency when they're used and preserving that frequency continuously throughout battle. Due to its special function, it can however only be used with jutsus that are defensive and/or supplementary, making it a mostly defensive/supplementary aid to those who use it. To make up for this, however it is able to sustain multiple frequencies with the user paying -5 chakra point for per a single turn. In addition, it has the ability to change the frequency of jutsus its used on in order to effect different things. For example, a frequency which effects techniques of A-ranked can be altered so that it specifically works on C-ranked jutsus. This ability only works to lower the frequency to deal with lower ranked techniques, and cannot work to amplify sound jutsus, meaning something A-ranked will not be able to change its frequency to S-ranked, but must be kept at the same frequency, or go down lower to B/C/D-ranks.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. This jutsu - once used - lasts a total of five turns, once those 5 turns are up, the user must wait a turn before being to use this jutsu again. Due to its simple nature, it can be used alongside a Sound jutsu which fit the criteria needed for this to work (in the same time frame), but other wise consumes its own spot in time-frame if activated independently. When used to change frequency (either same rank or lower) it counts as one of the moves per turn.

✦ Declined, the more I read this, the more I can potential issues. Like the bold part is too open and can be left to interpret any way one wants in battle; clarify what altering the frequency can and will cause. Idk about sustaining several frequencies at once either. ✦

Changed several frequencies to two, and clarified further what I meant by altering frequency.

(Ototon: Niji Parusu) - Sound Release: Secondary Pulse
Rank: C
Type: Defence/suplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A pulse based jutsu used to copy and sustain other Sound frequencies, Secondary pulse has no power to do damage of its own, whether physical or mental. The main and only aspect of this jutsu is to be used as support for other Sound techniques, mimicking their frequency when they're used and preserving that frequency continuously throughout battle. Due to its special function, it can however only be used with jutsus that are defensive and/or supplementary, making it a mostly defensive/supplementary aid to those who use it. To make up for this, however it is able to sustain two frequencies with the user paying -5 chakra point for per a single turn. In addition, it has the ability to change the frequency of jutsus its used on in order to effect different things. For example, a frequency which effects techniques of A-ranked can be altered so that it specifically works on C-ranked jutsus. This ability only works to lower the frequency to deal with lower ranked techniques, and cannot work to amplify sound jutsus, meaning something A-ranked will not be able to change its frequency to S-ranked, but must be kept at the same frequency, or go down lower to B/C/D-ranks. Altering frequency simply changes the frequency so that the sound is able to work on different techniques of the same and/or lower ranks, and has no other purpose.~ Can only be taught by Erzo. This jutsu - once used - lasts a total of five turns, once those 5 turns are up, the user must wait a turn before being to use this jutsu again. Due to its simple nature, it can be used alongside a Sound jutsu which fit the criteria needed for this to work (in the same time frame), but other wise consumes its own spot in time-frame if activated independently. When used to change frequency (either same rank or lower) it counts as one of the moves per turn.

✦ Approved, good job ✦

 

[Priest]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon: Amai Seinaru Masshu - Fire Style: Sweet Holy Mush
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses his fire chakra into anywhere on the terrain or any object within the terrain up to mid range with a single handseal and grows from one to hundreds of tiny brown mushrooms made of chakra. Outwards they look like actuall mushrooms decieving the naked eyes except for doujutsus. The mushrooms are manifestation of chakra though contained in them is compressed fire that each of them burst into a geyser of flame with a single snap of the user's finger or prematurely caused to detonate when something makes contact with them. The mushrooms though before they release the pent up fire within them, appears cold and like a normal plant as the chakra coat mask the heat they supposed to be containing.
Manifestation of the mushrooms is quick as the real attack comes only when the user snaps his fingers and the mushrooms burst or something touches them.

NOTE: 3x per battle
NOTE: 2 turns in between usage
NOTE: No katon above S-rank the turn which this is used.
NOTE: Snapping the finger to release the mushroom would cost a move
NOTE: They become inactive and disperse after two turns

Declined - For one using mushrooms made of chakra is a no as i feel it clashes with Mushroom release and 3x per battle is too much for S rank.

Katon: Amai Seinaru Masshu - Fire Style: Sweet Holy Mush
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses his fire chakra into anywhere on the terrain or any object within the terrain up to mid range with a single handseal and creates upto hundreds of tiny chakra structures in the shape of mushrooms/berries/nuts purely made of compressed fire chakra albeit with an epidermis of thin layer of pure chakra masking the real natures of the tiny fake edibles. The user could make the berries pop into existence or add essense to it by making them look as if they pop out of the ground. Outwards they look like actuall mushrooms/berries/nuts decieving the naked eyes except for doujutsus. The mushrooms/berries/nuts are manifestation of chakra though contained in them is compressed fire that each of them burst into a geyser of flame with a single snap of the user's finger or prematurely caused to detonate when something makes contact with them. They though before they release the pent up fire within them, appears cold and like a normal plant as the chakra coat mask the heat they supposed to be containing.
Manifestation of the edibles is quick as the real attack comes only when the user snaps his fingers and the mushrooms burst or something touches them.

NOTE: 2x per battle
NOTE: 2 turns in between usage
NOTE: No katon above S-rank the turn which this is used.
NOTE: Snapping the finger to release the mushroom would cost a move
NOTE: They become inactive and disperse after two turns

Declined - what did i say about mushrooms?
‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

Erementarudaipōru - Elemental Dipole
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user would focus chakra into his entire self and turn himself diamagnetic to elements. Not specifically turning himself diamagnetic but he seems diamagnetic because of the nature of his ninjutsu. He would be expunging continously to the surface of his skin, elemental chakra to repel the element he wants to become diamagnetic to, though not actually cancelling out the element but would be able to walk through them without them touching him. Its just like how Neji expel chakra out of his entire tenketsus to form an invisible aura/veil of chakra which only revealed itself when Naruto hits it and when he spun. The amount of chakra imbued to the technique determines the separation between the user and the said technique thus the power of technique the user can repel. The user would choose a particular element of the basic five and while he radiates the energy of the element all over his body, elemental technique of that nature would be repelled away from him or perhaps unable to touch him due to the repelling/pushing force between the induced user and the opposing technique. This make the user seems able to walk through the said elemental jutsu but what is really happening is that the elemental jutsu would pave way as they are repelled only some centimeters away from the user albeit from a third person view, they seem both too embracing to distinguish a separation between them. Depending on the level of the chakra infused, the elemental separation differs by 2 centimeters. That is, D-rank: 2cm, C-rank: 4cm, B-rank: 6cm, A-rank: 8cm and S-rank: 10cm. While the user is in this form, they are unaffected by natural properties of the said element. For example: Even if the fire is just centimeter close, the user won't feel the heat. Secondly if it were to be doton, the user won't be affected by tremor from quakes, etc.
The user can apply this to weapons and projectiles inform of weapons or jutsus, sentient techniques, etc. and make them exhibit the diamagnetic nature to a particular element, although they have to be at least mid-range from the user.
NOTE: The user can not use the said element he is diamagnetic to until the technique is over
NOTE: A-rank and above infusion can only be used 3x per battle
NOTE: 2 turns rest after an S-Rank usage and a turn rest after an A-Rank usage.
NOTE: Last 3 turns

Declined - this actually clashes with jutsu i've been taught, water rejection is a single cj for water element that repels any water in this way. I also am able to use a lightning variant.

Erementarudaipōru - Elemental Dipole
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user would focus chakra into his entire self and turn himself diamagnetic to elements. Not specifically turning himself diamagnetic but he seems diamagnetic because of the nature of his ninjutsu. He would be expunging continously to the surface of his skin, elemental chakra to repel the element he wants to become diamagnetic to, though not actually cancelling out the element but would be able to walk through them without them touching him. Its just like how Neji expel chakra out of his entire tenketsus to form an invisible aura/veil of chakra which only revealed itself when Naruto hits it and when he spun. The amount of chakra imbued to the technique determines the separation between the user and the said technique thus the power of technique the user can repel. The user would choose a particular element of the basic five and while he radiates the energy of the element all over his body, elemental technique of that nature would be repelled away from him or perhaps unable to touch him due to the repelling/pushing force between the induced user and the opposing technique. This make the user seems able to walk through the said elemental jutsu but what is really happening is that the elemental jutsu would pave way as they are repelled only some centimeters away from the user albeit from a third person view, they seem both too embracing to distinguish a separation between them. Depending on the level of the chakra infused, the elemental separation differs by 2 centimeters. That is, D-rank: 2cm, C-rank: 4cm, B-rank: 6cm, A-rank: 8cm and S-rank: 10cm. While the user is in this form, they are unaffected by natural properties of the said element. For example: Even if the fire is just centimeter close, the user won't feel the heat. Secondly if it were to be doton, the user won't be affected by tremor from quakes, etc.
The user can apply this to weapons and projectiles inform of weapons or jutsus, sentient techniques, etc. and make them exhibit the diamagnetic nature to a particular element, although they have to be at least mid-range from the user.
NOTE: Can only be used on energy based elements of the basic five, in this case, fire, wind and lightning.
NOTE: The user can not use the said element he is diamagnetic to until the technique is over
NOTE: A-rank and above infusion can only be used 3x per battle
NOTE: 2 turns rest after an S-Rank usage and a turn rest after an A-Rank usage.
NOTE: Last 3 turns

‡ Declined ‡ This was reported and is similar to existing customs #StopSnitching

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Fuinjutsu: Arakune no Okubyō - Sealing Art: The Cowardice of Arachne
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra: N/A (-5 when the user forcibly moves it from a spot)
Damage: N/A
Description: The use has a fuin tattoo in form of a large spider on his body which passively can move around the body of the user like a tattoo moving around a body. The spider has nothing much to do than sensing and responding whenever a foreign seal(which is not of the user or allies) is marked/placed on the user. The spider moves immediately towards the foreign seal and devours it and becomes bigger. The cowardice value of the spider is that whenever a jutsu or weapon enters short range of where the spider is currently on the body of the user, it senses it and panics in fear, trembling and quickly moving away from that spot to avoid harm. For example, if the spider is currently situated on the user's back, he'll be able to sense things short range that approaches from behind the user(mid range if the user is not wearing clothes). His cowardice however, has some usefulness to the user as the user is able to feel his movement and he knows that the spider only cowers at the presence of something approaching it thus alerting the user.
NOTE: Arachne leeches the user's chakra for it to devour sealing marks. The rank of the foreign fuin seals determines the amount of chakra Arachne leeches. 20 if the seal is B-rank and 30 if the seal is A-rank in nature.
NOTE: Can devour fuin seals upto A-rank 4x per battle and able to devour one S-rank seal. Devouring seals destroys it.
NOTE: Must be mentioned on bio about Arachne passive ability as Arachne is a tattoo that is drawn on the body before hand
NOTE: By default, it is drawn on the user's back. But the user can spend 5 chakra to change its position. This is different to when he moves in fear of a foreign body which is passive.

Declined - this isn't possible in my eyes. A seal on your body that destroys up to 4 seals. That's too much. If you have a seal that countered the effects of a seal, negating it, like a lock and key to negate each other, but that would be a one off use in itself.

Fuinjutsu: Arakune no Okubyō - Sealing Art: The Cowardice of Arachne
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra: N/A (-5 when the user forcibly moves it from a spot)
Damage: N/A
Description: The use has a fuin tattoo in form of a large spider on his body which passively can move around the body of the user like a tattoo moving around a body. The spider has nothing much to do than sensing and responding whenever a foreign seal(which is not of the user or allies) is marked/placed on the user. The spider moves immediately towards the foreign seal and devours it and becomes bigger in size. This specifically is meant to destroy the source of a sealing jutsu(like marks and tags) placed on the user only, instead of negating the effect of the seal itself. By sealing the external sealing source within himself via devouring, Arachne is able to neutralize a sealing technique. The cowardice value of the spider is that whenever a jutsu or weapon enters short range of where the spider is currently on the body of the user, it senses it and panics in fear, trembling and quickly moving away from that spot to avoid harm. For example, if the spider is currently situated on the user's back, he'll be able to sense things short range that approaches from behind the user(mid range if the user is not wearing clothes). His cowardice however, has some usefulness to the user as the user is able to feel his movement and he knows that the spider only cowers at the presence of something approaching it thus alerting the user.
NOTE: Arachne leeches the user's chakra for it to devour sealing marks. The rank of the foreign fuin seals determines the amount of chakra Arachne leeches. 20 if the seal is B-rank and 30 if the seal is A-rank in nature.
NOTE: Can devour fuin sealing marks/tags upto A-rank 3x per battle and able to devour one S-rank seal.
NOTE: Must be mentioned on bio about Arachne passive ability as Arachne is a tattoo that is drawn on the body before hand
NOTE: By default, it is drawn on the user's back. But the user can spend 5 chakra to change its position. This is different to when he moves in fear of a foreign body which is passive.


‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

declined -Make it work on only one seal.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuin: Bachi no Kindachi) - Sealing Technique: Damocles, The Curse of Kings
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user has a seal on their body (must be stated in the biography) with the Kanji for “Equal” that is passively activated when a certain condition is met. Whenever an attack over Forbidden rank in power (> 90 damage) comes within short-range of the user, the seal will release a barrier that expands outwards in all directions. The barrier instantly reaches long-range in every direction and serves to absorb chakra from the given technique in order to weaken it by half. The amount of chakra absorbed is proportional to the power of the technique but one thing that remains the same is that the remaining technique will fall to half it's original power i.e. a 120 damage technique would fall to 60 damage (A-Rank). This means this technique does not counter other jutsu in itself but rather aids the user in countering more powerful techniques by weakening them slightly. However, this technique is not without drawbacks. The user cannot use techniques of the element or skill affected by this jutsu for the same and next two turns (so three turns in total). This will also not work on solid elements/techniques but will work on pseudo-solid ones (such as Mud, Lava, et cetera), liquids and energy-based techniques. The reason this seal needs to be passively activated is so the user can use a technique in the same-timeframe to counter the opponent's weakened jutsu.

Note: Can only activate thrice per battle

✦ Declined, for starters this is an S rank that has no real restrictions outside of being usable only 3x. Also, the actual execution itself is flawed; how does a seal/barrier determine the power of a jutsu before it reaches them and touches it? That's extremely metagamey, just picture it: An unknown attacks nears you and if it's capable of dealing enough damage, something you wouldn't be able to determine beforehand, a barrier forms and weakens it. Also, reducing the power of it 50% isn't "weakening slightly" lol; that's quite a large reduction and a bit unreasonable when looked at impartially. What I mean is an attack that deals, say 100 damage, nears you. This would reduce it from Forbidden+ power to below A rank, which would be like a 2 rank decrease from one jutsu. That's too much, then what about if you have attacks of an absurd damage, like theoretically 700+ damage? At some point, a barrier is capable of being destroyed, even if it's aim is to absorb chakra, like with MIE. Plus, does the passive activation mean you can use 3 jutsu that same turn this is used? If so, I can't allow that for obvious reasons. ✦

(Fuuin: Kichigai Kouyou) - Sealing Technique: Mad Enhancement
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A (-30 on activation)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user has a seal on their body with the Kanji for "Shield" that passively activates upon being struck with a Taijutsu attack. A barrier instantly forms over the user (before the user can be harmed) and mitigates the damage dealt by the strike and any subsequent strikes encompassed in the technique. Whether a Taijutsu technique deals one single hit or a multitude of them, each activation of this seal will defend one single Taijutsu technique B-Rank or above (will not activate against freeform). It will not activate against freeform as the attack needs to reach a certain threshold of damage (40 points) and freeform deals no quantifiable damage. The effect of the barrier is to reduce rather than eliminate the damage the user takes from being struck physically by the opponent so it will only halve the damage of any Taijutsu technique no matter how low ranked (e.g. S-Ranks will fall to 40 damage, B-Ranks will fall to 20 damage). Due to this seal only reducing damage rather protecting the user completely, it acts as a failsafe more than anything else in case the user is caught unawares by someone much faster than them. The user’s body will sustain the remaining damage after the barrier halves it’s power. Since this seal activates passively and uses chakra stored in it prior to the fight, the user is free to use other techniques in the same time-frame to better defend themselves after being struck.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: User still takes half the damage
Note: Only applies to Taijutsu techniques

✦ Declined, a max damage this can effect is needed; This won't work on Forbidden power or higher, meaning 90 damage or higher. Can't allow an A rank seal that much power. Also, no to passive activation. It will take a slot in the jutsu as well as timeframe ✦

"Removed the passive"

(Fuuin: Hakari no Doragon) - Sealing Technique: Scales of the Dragon
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A (-40 on activation)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user has a seal on their body with the Kanji for "Shield" that activates upon being struck with a Taijutsu attack. A barrier instantly forms over the user (before the user can be harmed) and mitigates the damage dealt by the strike and any subsequent strikes encompassed in the technique. Whether a Taijutsu technique deals one single hit or a multitude of them, each activation of this seal will defend one single Taijutsu technique B-Rank or above (will not activate against freeform). It will not activate against freeform as the attack needs to reach a certain threshold of damage (40 points) and freeform deals no quantifiable damage. The effect of the barrier is to reduce rather than eliminate the damage the user takes from being struck physically by the opponent so it will only halve the damage of any Taijutsu technique no matter how powerful (e.g. S-Ranks will fall to 40 damage, B-Ranks will fall to 20 damage). Due to this seal only reducing damage rather protecting the user completely, it acts as a failsafe more than anything else in case the user is caught unawares by someone much faster than them. The user’s body will sustain the remaining damage after the barrier halves it’s power.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: User still takes half the damage
Note: Only applies to Taijutsu techniques
Note: No S-Rank or above Fuuin in the user's next turn


✦ Declined, like I said in the last check, a max damage is needed; it has to cap at some point. Also, I'd feel better if no A ranked Fuuin and higher next turn was placed. Either that or 2 usages overall, your choice. And like the above seal, you need to be logical about how this works. This one is easier to justify though. ✦

 

[Sasori]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

*Removed poison stuff and electrical current*
Name: (Dai sanji) Catastrophe
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40 ( If summoning)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a puppet that Sasori will use similarly to his Hiruko puppet. Catastrophe is a puppet that Sasori will wear in battle, and will manipulate inside similar to how he is capable of using his Hiruko puppet to attack the enemy. By fighting inside of the puppet it allows for Sasori to be protected throughout the battle, and he doesn’t have to worry about using his main body. Catastrophe has also been modified to use puppetry attacks without difficulty. Sasori created this puppet in hopes of replacing his Hiruko body as the one he travels around in. Catastrophe greatly resembles a demonic knight. Catastrophe has two demonic horns on its head which are capable of being fired off at the opponent. The horns can reach up to mid range and counts as a B-rank, and will explode when it comes in contact with a target due to it having papers bombs coiled inside of it. From the inside of Catastrophe on its left and right sides there are valves with spare horns inside, and when the horns that was already in place have been used up they will begin to make their way upwards to the head which is also why it takes time for the horn to reload. After each usage the horns will automatically replace themselves. Spreading from his upper back are two large wings which give it added mobility as well can attack the enemy, and provide defense. Each individual wing is equal to a B-rank technique together equaling an A-rank attack/defense tool. If in short range the user can use the wings in order to attack the enemy due to their large length. The wings are also capable of unleashing a gust of wind by flapping them which would produce a blast of wind equal to a B-rank Justu. Attached to its left fore arm is a large golden shield. If the shield is used as a defensive weapon it is equal to a C-rank technique. It will also be capable of unleashing gray smoke bombs from inside of it which conceal everything up to mid range equal to C-rank smoke. On the bottom of its feet are holes capable of firing out chakra blast equal to an C-rank blast. The chakra blast allows for the puppet to fly in a horizontal or vertical manner. Metal chains are capable of beings launched from inside of Catastrophe from underneath it or from its sleeves with can be used to grapple onto objects or to bind an enemy but due to the fact they are just regular chains they can be broken through with rather ease. Catastrophe also hays an extra set on arms below its first pair, that Sasori can enable when he is inside of the puppet due to the user's body and chakra system being connected. From its eyes it holds the ability to shine a bright pink light that envelopes everything up to Mid range which causes blinding for up to two turns. On Catastrophes back is an array of weapons such as: Two long swords, and two long axes, there is however nothing special about the tools and are just regular weapons.
Notes: Can only be destroyed by a B-rank or higher technique.
Notes: Horns can only be launched four times and takes -20 chakra, requires a turn cool afterwards.
Notes: Gust of wind takes -20 chakra for each usage.
Notes: Chakra blasts take -15 chakra for each usage.
Notes: The flash ability counts as a C-rank move an can be used every two turns.
Notes: Gray Smoke bombs only take -10 for each time used.
Notes: Must be stated at the beginning of the battle whether or not the user is inside. If so then it won't count as a move.
Notes: Wings can't be used to fly.
Notes: All chakra based attacks count as a move. ( So things like the chains and swords are free form)
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Declined - Smoke doesn't really have a rank when it's a smoke bomb it doesn't need to be C rank just count as a move to fire them.

*Added what you said about smokebombs*
Name: (Dai sanji) Catastrophe
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40 ( If summoning)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a puppet that Sasori will use similarly to his Hiruko puppet. Catastrophe is a puppet that Sasori will wear in battle, and will manipulate inside similar to how he is capable of using his Hiruko puppet to attack the enemy. By fighting inside of the puppet it allows for Sasori to be protected throughout the battle, and he doesn’t have to worry about using his main body. Catastrophe has also been modified to use puppetry attacks without difficulty. Sasori created this puppet in hopes of replacing his Hiruko body as the one he travels around in. Catastrophe greatly resembles a demonic knight. Catastrophe has two demonic horns on its head which are capable of being fired off at the opponent. The horns can reach up to mid range and counts as a B-rank, and will explode when it comes in contact with a target due to it having papers bombs coiled inside of it. From the inside of Catastrophe on its left and right sides there are valves with spare horns inside, and when the horns that was already in place have been used up they will begin to make their way upwards to the head which is also why it takes time for the horn to reload. After each usage the horns will automatically replace themselves. Spreading from his upper back are two large wings which give it added mobility as well can attack the enemy, and provide defense. Each individual wing is equal to a B-rank technique together equaling an A-rank attack/defense tool. If in short range the user can use the wings in order to attack the enemy due to their large length. The wings are also capable of unleashing a gust of wind by flapping them which would produce a blast of wind equal to a B-rank Justu. Attached to its left fore arm is a large golden shield. If the shield is used as a defensive weapon it is equal to a C-rank technique. It will also be capable of unleashing gray smoke bombs from inside of it which conceal everything up to mid range and is just regular smoke. On the bottom of its feet are holes capable of firing out chakra blast equal to an C-rank blast. The chakra blast allows for the puppet to fly in a horizontal or vertical manner. Metal chains are capable of beings launched from inside of Catastrophe from underneath it or from its sleeves with can be used to grapple onto objects or to bind an enemy but due to the fact they are just regular chains they can be broken through with rather ease. (up to four can be fired at a time) Catastrophe also hays an extra set on arms below its first pair, that Sasori can enable when he is inside of the puppet due to the user's body and chakra system being connected. From its eyes it holds the ability to shine a bright pink light that envelopes everything up to Mid range which causes blinding for up to two turns. On Catastrophes back is an array of weapons such as: Two long swords, and two long axes, there is however nothing special about the tools and are just regular weapons.
Notes: Can only be destroyed by a B-rank or higher technique.
Notes: Horns can only be launched four times and takes -20 chakra, requires a turn cool afterwards.
Notes: Gust of wind takes -20 chakra for each usage.
Notes: Chakra blasts take -15 chakra for each usage.
Notes: The flash ability counts as a C-rank move an can be used every two turns.
Notes: Gray Smoke bombs count as a move each time used.
Notes: Must be stated at the beginning of the battle whether or not the user is inside. If so then it won't count as a move.
Notes: Wings can't be used to fly.
Notes: All chakra based attacks count as a move. ( So things like the chains and swords are free form)
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Name: (Ningyō rirīsutekunikku) Puppet Release Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E-S
Range: Self
Chakra: 0-40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a Genjutsu release method that Sasori developed while experimenting with his Human puppets. Once Sasori has figured out that he is inside of a genjutsu, he can begin to use his chakra threads to release himself from the genjutsu. With the Chakra threads attached to the Human puppet, now that he has realized he is in a genjutsu he begins to redirect the chakra flow of the Chakra strings into himself so now the foreign chakra of the human puppet enters Sasori’s chakra system awakening him from the genjutsu. All of this is possible because Human puppets are capable of molding chakra and have a chakra system. The user must still logically figure out that he is in a genjutsu and, does not work on Mangekyo level genjutsu.
Notes: Must have a Human Puppet
Notes: Must already have chakra threads active
Notes: Requires a turn cool down after each usage.

Declined - the way you describe it isn't possible

*reworded*
Name: (Ningyō rirīsutekunikku) Puppet Release Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E-S
Range: Self
Chakra: 0-40
Damage points: N/A
Description: When a puppeteer is manipulaing a puppet via chakra threads they transfer their chakra into different joints of the puppet in order to control it. As the user is controlling a puppet this way one can say the users chakra is flowing into the puppet in order to control it. The chakra threads are also connected to the user's body and chakra system. Usually the Chakra thread method is used as a sort of one way valve in order to control puppets, but it can also be reversed. When using a human puppet the user transfers their chakra into the puppet, but due to the puppet being a human puppet the user is capable of using their chakra threads for another purpose. Due to the puppet holding a unique chakra system from the user, the user once their chakra threads are connected to the puppet the user can take advantage of the chakra threads and reverse their chakra flow in order for the Chakra system of the human puppet to flow back into the user spiking their chakra system awakening them from a genjutsu, but does not work on Mangekyo Level genjutsu.
Notes: Must have a Human Puppet
Notes: Must already have chakra threads active
Notes: Requires a turn cool down after each usage.
Notes: User must still realize they are in a genjutsu.


Declined - your puppets don't have a separate chakra flow from you they just have your chakra strings to control them channeling chakra into them do your bidding lol. You don't store chakra in them you release more chakra through the strings for the jutsu, so there is no store of chakra in them to surge into your body to create the effect strong enough to break gen the way you want it to.

Name: ( Ningyō Chakurau~ebu) Puppet Arts: Chakra Web
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The will first make a horn sign with one of their hands, and then begin to generate chakra in their index and pinky finger. The chakra being generated in their finger tips is similar to the chakra thread technique. Once chakra has been kneaded in their fingertips the user will then aim their hand towards a specific object and launch the chakra threads from their fingertips. The chakra threads will attach themselves to an object by using the sticky properties of the threads, and then begin to drag the user in that direction allowing for the user to dodge attacks or easily get around. The chakra threads were shown to have the ability to pull objects when they are attached to a puppet or when holding a puppet in the air. The process of being dragged happens pretty quickly giving the user swift movements. It is also possible for this technique to work in reverse, which just mean that it is possible to bring objects closer towards the user or even swing them to attack the enemy. The user can also use the threads in order to drag objects closer since it was shown when using a puppet the puppeteer was capable of maneuvering the puppet in any direction that they chose. When using to dodge it is unable evade large scale jutsu, and must still be within reason.
Note: Can be used four times
Note: Can only be taught by Sasori
Note: Must know puppetry
Note: loses control of puppets while using this

Approved - added last note

 

[Corazon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Ototon Genjutsu: Parseltongue ) - Sound Release Illusionary Ars: Parseltongue
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 - 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user channels Ototon chakra and speaks in a snake like dialect called Parseltongue, aimed at various snakes. This serpentine language allows the user to talk to snakes in a language only the user and the animal can understand. The purpose of this is to deliver special coded messages that can't be deciphered by others. This however is only the basic application; by applying Ototon chakra, the user uses sound waves to cast a genjutsu upon the beasts that allow him to revert their minds to a primitive state, one where they rely on their normal, primal instincts and capabilities. The purpose of this is to break them down and weaken mentally to a state where the user is able to use the same Sound waves to implant ideas into the snake's mind, encoding specific commands to them. This allows the user to "control" the snakes in a way that appears like the user in a way similar to Kotoamatsukami, but only works on beings of a lesser kind, only affecting snakes. The power needed to sustain and control a snake is based on it's individual ranking, allowing him to control up to S ranked snakes, i.e. to speak and control an A ranked snake, a genjutsu of A rank is needed to be cast. The user is able to use the C and B ranked variants without restraints; the A ranked version can only be used 5 times while the S ranked variant can only be used twice. The S ranked version lasts only two turns, which each lower rank lasting one turn longer than the previous rank, going from 2 for S up to 5 turns for C rank.

Note: Requires both Sound and the Snake Contract.
Note: Can only be used on Snakes.
Note: A rank and above can only be used 3 times in total, split across A and S rank in whichever way the user chooses.
Note: After using the A rank version, the user is not able to use it in the next turn. If S rank is used, this time doubles.

‡ Declined ‡ This needs to be explained better. How exactly does the genjutsu revert their mind to a primitive state?

( Ototon Genjutsu: Parseltongue ) - Sound Release Illusionary Arts: Parseltongue
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 - 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user channels Ototon chakra and speaks in a snake like dialect called Parseltongue, aimed at various snakes. This serpentine language allows the user to talk to snakes in a language only the user and the animal can understand. The purpose of this is to deliver special coded messages that can't be deciphered by others. This however is only the basic application; by applying Ototon chakra, the user uses sound waves to cast a genjutsu upon the beasts that allow him to revert their minds to a primitive state, one where they rely on their normal, primal instincts and capabilities. This is achieved by simulating a period of unrest in the brain ( similar to going two days without sleep ) to rewire their brains, re-directing activity from the calming and rational prefrontal cortex to the "fear center" -- the amygdala. This causes the brain to revert back to more primitive patterns of activity, in that it was unable to put emotional experiences into context and produce controlled, appropriate responses. The purpose of this is to break them down and weaken mentally to a state where the user is able to use the same Sound waves to implant ideas into the snake's mind, encoding specific commands to them. This allows the user to "control" the snakes in a way that appears like the user in a way similar to Kotoamatsukami, but only works on beings of a lesser kind, only affecting snakes. The power needed to sustain and control a snake is based on it's individual ranking, allowing him to control up to S ranked snakes, i.e. to speak and control an A ranked snake, a genjutsu of A rank is needed to be cast. The user is able to use the C and B ranked variants without restraints; the A ranked version can only be used 5 times while the S ranked variant can only be used twice. The S ranked version lasts only two turns, which each lower rank lasting one turn longer than the previous rank, going from 2 for S up to 5 turns for C rank.

Note: Requires both Sound and the Snake Contract.
Note: Can only be used on Snakes (Vex included).
Note: A rank and above can only be used 3 times in total, split across A and S rank in whichever way the user chooses.
Note: After using the A rank version, the user is not able to use it in the next turn. If S rank is used, this time doubles.

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

 

[ZandaT]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fūinjutsu: Gitai hakai shīru) - Sealing Arts: Mimicry Destruction Seal
Type: Defensive |Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This sealing technique is a rather simple acting one able to be created during battle or prior to using a seal with the word "Revoke" either on paper or somewhere on one’s body, the seal will remain dormant until the enemy’s chakra makes contact with it, thus triggering its activation. If this seal is used against an enemy technique, the moment the technique comes into contact with the seal, it will cease as it is absorbed into the seal, and immediately afterwards a barrier is released from the user as it spreads to the ends of mid range with the user as its epicentre at all times. This barrier carries special chakra blocking properties that focuses on the source of the foreign chakra first used to activate the technique launched by the target. Once in the barrier the target is restricted by the barrier's blocking properties, restricting them from using the same type of chakra absorbed, now unable to mold chakra of that same type above B rank. For example; if used on an elemental technique, it would hinder the target from molding chakra of that specific element/energy. Only elemental and energy based techniques can be registered and absorbed by this seal, and the technique in question can be no bigger than a four meter diameter in order to be absorbed. All divided, but similar, target foreign chakra sources, like clones, also succumb to the barrier's properties while in its realm.
NOTES
►User can only have two of these seals in their possession/body
►Only one of this type of seal can be in play at a time
►The restriction lasts for 4 turns unless otherwise broken
►Seal has a 2 turn cooldown upon ending
►No other techniques S rank and above the same turn the seal is used
►The user cannot use jutsu above S rank for 2 turns after activation
►Can only be taught by ZandaT


Declined - One thing i don't get why would the barrier stop stronger jutsu and not weaker? I mean wouldn't the stronger jutsu overpower the barrier that is errected?

(Fūinjutsu: Gitai hakai shīru) - Sealing Arts: Mimicry Destruction Seal
Type: Defensive |Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This sealing technique is a rather simple acting one able to be created during battle, or prior to, using a seal with the word "Revoke" either on paper or somewhere on one’s body. The seal will remain dormant until the enemy’s chakra makes contact with it, thus triggering its activation. If this seal is used against an enemy technique, the moment the technique comes into contact with the seal, it will cease as it is absorbed into the seal, and immediately afterwards a barrier is released from the user as it spreads to the ends of mid range with the user as its epicentre at all times. This barrier carries special chakra/energy blocking properties that focuses on the foreign source first used to activate the technique launched by the target. Once in the barrier the target is restricted by the barrier's blocking properties, restricting them from using the same type of energy absorbed, now unable to use techniques of that same type S rank and below. For example; if used on a suiton technique, it would hinder the target from molding their water chakra while in the barreir. Only elemental and energy based techniques can be registered and absorbed by this seal, and the technique in question can be no bigger than five meters in diameter in order to be absorbed. All divided, but similar, target foreign chakra sources, like clones, also succumb to the barrier's properties while in its realm. This doesn't block jutsu coming from outside the barrier just seals the element within.
NOTES
►User can only have two of these seals in their possession/body
►Only one of this type of seal can be in play at a time
►The restriction lasts for 4 turns unless otherwise broken
►Seal has a 2 turn cooldown upon ending
►No other techniques S rank and above the same turn the seal is used
►The user cannot use jutsu above S rank for 2 turns after activation
►Cannot be used on F ranks
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Approved - added bold at the end

(Fūinjutsu: Maiyā no bando) - Sealing Arts: Mayer's Band
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: (-30 from user when sealing activates)
Damage: N/A
Description: This seal, Mayer's Band, was created by an Uzumaki prior to their village's destruction. The jutsu's purpose revolves around the ability to identify and seal foreign energy produced by the user's enemies. The seal itself is placed onto a wrist band and it is a kanji line shaped like a pentagon with open circles placed at every point of the shape. When foreign energy enters short range of the user, a circle on the wristband will emit a bright colorful light corresponding to the known energies of the Ninja World (our current rp). The circle will glow purple for Keigoku, green for natural energy, gold for Kiyoshi energy, blue for Force energy, and red for Ethereal energy (what the Katsuryoku use) within range. Once the energy is close enough the seal will release a special energy absorbing barrier around the user protecting them for that one attack before sealing the energy back into the wristband. The jutsu is quite helpful for shinobi that does not have any energy sensing abilities, but its sealing effect only lasts a limited time. After sealing its maximum amount of energy the band will only work as an energy identifier for the user, but it will no longer be able to seal energy.
NOTES
►Activates 3x per battle
►No fuuinjutsu the following turn
►Has a two turn cool down when a S-Rank technique is sealed, and no other fuuin A ranked and above can be used that turn
►Seal must be placed in biography
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Declined - You've designed a seal that will absorb chakra's that you yourself don't know how to control, such as Nekura clan's, how could you create the seal in such a way that it would specificially react to that?

(Fūinjutsu: Maiyā no bando) - Sealing Arts: Mayer's Band
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: (-30 from user when sealing activates)
Damage: N/A
Description: This seal, Mayer's Band, was created by an Uzumaki prior to their village's destruction. The jutsu's purpose revolves around the ability to identify and seal foreign energy produced by the user's enemies. The seal itself is placed onto a wrist band and it is a kanji line shaped like a pentagon with open circles placed at every point of the shape. When foreign energy enters short range of the user, the circles on the wristband emit a bright colorful light signifying to the user that an energy different from the energies known to them has broken their perimeter. The sealing band cannot inform the user about the type of energy being used, but it can and does tell the difference between the various energies it comes across, and thus repeats the same color glows corresponding with that energy when met again. Once the energy is close enough the seal will release a special energy absorbing barrier around the user protecting them for that one attack before sealing the foreign energy into the wristband protecting the user. The jutsu is quite helpful for shinobi who don't have any energy sensing abilities, and its sealing effect only lasts a limited time. After sealing its maximum amount of energy the band will only work as an energy identifier for the user, but it will no longer be able to seal energy.
NOTES
►Activates 3x per battle
►No fuuinjutsu the following turn
►Has a two turn cool down when a S-Rank technique is sealed, and no other fuuin A ranked and above can be used that turn
►Seal must be placed in biography
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Declined - now it's fine but their is a line, you either have it so that it can only absorb A rank and below as it's an A rank seal, or you bump it up to S rank seal with a restriction to match S ranks. The rest is fine now though, nice jutsu.

(Suiton: Amanogawa) Water Style: Milky Way
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: Amanogawa is a very versatile water technique that allows the user to alter a water source within short range of them creating a compressed moving current from the source that takes the shape of a cylinder. Dependent on the size of the source, the current can be stretched throughout the battlefield taking on various path designs depending on the user, like linear, swirl, arc pathways, etc, where it will then at some point come to an end creating a stationary water circuit in mere moments. What makes this compressed cylinder shaped water circuit so special is the ability the user has with it while active. About 2m in width, these currents propel the user at nearly double their base speeds throughout its circuit allowing them fast travel while submerged within the speedy current always following route. Onlookers may find it highly difficult to completely track the user while in Amanogawa's current due to its moving speed, opaqueness due to compression, and possible wayward designs unless blessed with an advanced form of eyesight/tracking, but this does not mean it is impossible for those without these blessings to find the user, they would just have to rely more on their other senses. Still aware of their outside world the user can but shouldn't mold other techniques from water while within the current due to the definite risk of damaging the circuit, but they are free to jump out of the water current in order to attack the opponent at any time, where they can then re-enter once again. Due to the currents overall narrowness in design, when creating from a source within range this technique's overall length will be double that of the water source's volume in control, making this move suitable in cases where the source may be small, but overall the source must be at least 4m in volume in order to use. Amanogawa can also be used defensively to overpower a foreign medium-large source of water directed at the user in order to be utilized and overall redirected with this move. Normal shinobi can use this move to overtake water jutsu of lower rank while water specialist can overtake jutsu of equal rank, and the user cannot use this move to directly attack targets in any way, likewise the circuit stays highly compressed when faced with opposing sorces of chakra preventing targets from entering.
NOTES
►Can be used 3x per battle
►User can maintain circuit for 3 turns
►Cannot re-use while active
►Has a 2 turn cool down
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Pending, alls i can see right now is you flying around with the cartoon Futurama in my head like how they get around the city but with water. Lemme think on this

Declined - while this is active you should only be able to use water element and being active for 9 turns in total for an A rank is a bit much for my liking

(Suiton: Amanogawa) Water Style: Milky Way
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: Amanogawa is a very versatile water technique that allows the user to alter a water source within short range of them creating a compressed moving current from the source that takes the shape of a cylinder. Dependent on the size of the source, the current can be stretched throughout the battlefield taking on various path designs depending on the user, like linear, swirl, arc pathways, etc, where it will then at some point come to an end creating a stationary water circuit in mere moments. What makes this compressed cylinder shaped water circuit so special is the ability the user has with it while active. About 2m in width, these currents propel the user at nearly double their base speeds throughout its circuit allowing them fast travel while submerged within the speedy current always following route. Onlookers may find it highly difficult to completely track the user while in Amanogawa's current due to its moving speed, opaqueness due to compression, and possible wayward designs unless blessed with an advanced form of eyesight/tracking, but this does not mean it is impossible for those without these blessings to find the user, they would just have to rely more on their other senses. Still aware of their outside world the user can't mold other techniques from water while active due to the definite risk of damaging the circuit, but they are free to jump out of the water current in order to attack the opponent at any time, where they can then re-enter once again. Due to the currents overall narrowness in design, when creating from a source within range this technique's overall length will be double that of the water source's volume in control, making this move suitable in cases where the source may be small, but overall the source must be at least 4m in volume in order to use. Amanogawa can also be used defensively to overpower a foreign medium-large source of water directed at the user in order to be utilized and overall redirected with this move. Normal shinobi can use this move to overtake water jutsu of lower rank while water specialist can overtake jutsu of equal rank, and the user cannot use this move to directly attack targets in any way, likewise the circuit stays highly compressed when faced with opposing sources of chakra preventing targets from entering.
NOTES
►Can be used 3x per battle
►User can maintain circuit for 2 turns
►Has a 2 turn cool down
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Approved - go make a fry bio O_<

 

[Venom]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Raiton/Fuuinjutsu: Tōkyoku no Hajimari] - Lightning/Sealing Art: Beginning Of Authority
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: One of the underlying issues when performing lightning jutsus is the lack of source. This basic fuuinjutsu essentially attempts to disregard this weakness for the user to have an easier access to a source of continuous electricity to be used for lightning jutsus. The user will place a tag, with channeled lightning chakra, titled in Kanji (限) meaning "Authority". This tag will preferably be on the ground, or any solid areas. The seal will then create a barrier on the ground around the entirety of the solid area to a max of long range. The barrier will seep into the ground. The steps might seem long, but this process is done rather quickly. The entire area that was covered by the seal is now a barrier, a source of the electricity. The barrier is the holding of the lightning, and the user consistently channeling chakra into the seal allows for the source to remain replenished and active. From here, the user can perform lightning jutsus out of the ground, or any solid material (water can be included, metal terrain, etc). Most jutsus that would had required to be made from the body or sky can now be accessed from the ground, this adds a new dimension in performance for lightning. The key to unlock the barrier and summon the lightning is specifically the chakra of the user to activate the barrier and unleash the source to be used. These are required to prevent the opponent to have any sort of benefit with the source, making this a user-only access jutsu. Nothing else changes from the jutsus, rank, damage, length (not distance of creation, but the reach of the jutsu itself), ability, duration, etc are all relatively the same. Lightning jutsus used through this seal cannot be erected directly beneath an opponent or within a 5m radius of their current position to kill an opponent(s).

Notes:
Can only be taught by Venom
Can only be used twice
Lasts four turns
Can not be used in consecutive turns
Can not be used with forbidden ranked lightning
Must specialize in Lightning

‡ Declined ‡ Sorry but I've thought about it and I can't approve this without having serious doubts. The concept in itself doesn't feel feasible and when I think of all the different possible applications this could have CJ I have no choice but to decline this.

[Fuuinjutsu: Boukun no Ryoudo] – Sealing Technique: Tyrant’s Dominion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A (+1 range to technique applied to)
Chakra Cost: N/A (+20 to the technique used prior to this)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: he user will have a seal on their body that can be activated whenever they use a technique that sends chakra through or into the ground. Upon activation, the seal will pump extra chakra into the technique and thereby extend it’s range by one (e.g. short-range techniques will be able to reach mid-range and mid-range techniques will be able to reach long-range). The chakra used for this technique will be added to the cost of the jutsu that preceded this. This technique counts as a move but occurs in the same timeframe as the technique it's applied to.

Note:
Last 3 turns
Can only be used thrice per battle
Must have a one turn cool down the least between each usage

Declined - State the seal needs to be in your bio and it can be used 3 times but i wont allow it to last, even though it's only B rank it's OP in the effect. APart from that it is a nice jutsu.

[Raiton/Fuuinjutsu: Tōkyoku no Hajimari] - Lightning/Sealing Art: Beginning Of Authority
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: One of the underlying issues when performing lightning jutsus is the lack of source. This basic fuuinjutsu essentially attempts to disregard this weakness for the user to have an easier access to a source of continuous electricity to be used for lightning jutsus. The user will place a tag, with channeled lightning chakra, titled in Kanji (限) meaning "Authority". This tag will preferably be on the ground, or any solid areas. The seal will then create a barrier on the ground around the entirety of the solid area to a max of long range. The barrier will seep into the ground. The steps might seem long, but this process is done rather quickly. The entire area that was covered by the seal is now a barrier, a source of the electricity. The barrier is the holding of the lightning, and the user consistently channeling chakra into the seal allows for the source to remain replenished and active. From here, the user can perform lightning jutsus out of the ground (only includes solid earth). Most jutsus that would had required to be made from the body or sky can now be accessed from the ground, this adds a new dimension in performance for lightning. The key to unlock the barrier and summon the lightning is specifically the chakra of the user to activate the barrier and unleash the source to be used. These are required to prevent the opponent to have any sort of benefit with the source, making this a user-only access jutsu. Nothing else changes from the jutsus, rank, damage, length (not distance of creation, but the reach of the jutsu itself), ability, duration, etc are all relatively the same. Lightning jutsus used through this seal cannot be erected directly beneath an opponent or within a 5m radius of their current position to kill an opponent(s).

Notes:
Can only be taught by Venom
Can only be used twice
Lasts four turns
Can not be used in consecutive turns
Can only be used on S ranks and below Lightning techniques
Must specialize in Lightning

‡ Approved ‡

[Fuuinjutsu: Boukun no Ryoudo] – Sealing Technique: Tyrant’s Dominion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A (+1 range to technique applied to)
Chakra Cost: N/A (+20 to the technique used prior to this)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will have a seal on their body that can be activated whenever they use a technique that sends chakra through or into the ground. Upon activation, the seal will pump extra chakra into the technique and thereby extend it’s range by one (e.g. short-range techniques will be able to reach mid-range and mid-range techniques will be able to reach long-range). The chakra used for this technique will be added to the cost of the jutsu that preceded this. This technique counts as a move but occurs in the same timeframe as the technique it's applied to.

Note:
Can only be used three times per battle
Must have a one turn cool down the least between each usage
Seal must be place within user's bio
Can only be taught by Venom

Approved

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

[Hercules' Zen Ude] - Hercules' Right Arm
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra: 50 Chakra
Damage: N/A (-40 DMG to user's body)
Description: This was a once cursed weapon used by unknown shinobis who later died after constant use of the weapon. It was until Venom found and relinquish parts of the curse and basically "tame the beast" and made it his own. The weapon is said to have a conscious of it's own though it isn't able to do anything offensively on it's own. To use; the user must apply the required chakra (50) to a Fuuinjutsu seal on their arm to 'summon' the weapon upon the user's arm. The weapon takes over the entire arm, cladding it in what seems to be metal, though it is made out of some unknown material. Durable yet flexible to move along with the limb. Underneath the weapon are several needle like appendages that latch onto the user to make the weapon irremovable by any means (unless the arm is cut off), unless the user wills it to or 'reverse summoning' it by performing a confirmation handseal. Due to the weapon basically having a conscious of it's own and being stubborn; if the user tries to reverse summon it back, it will leave on the following turn instead. Fighting with the user to not be sent back basically. Although seemingly attach to the arm in a outside perspective it isn't. The gaunlet actually becomes the arm itself until reversed summon. Now instead of surviving from the user's chakra only, the weapon simply has it's own chakra source (amount the user uses to summon it) intertwine with the user's own, causing a constant fluctuation. This is how the weapon survives mainly, by basically having its own chakra circulate amongst the different source (the user's), constantly replenishing itself in a sense. The weapon simply borrows -10 chakra the first 5 turns (so -50 in total) of replenishing itself, after that it doesn't suck chakra from the user again to survive. This serves a more negative side effect than good. This prevents the user from focusing chakra to perform tactics such as Yamanka techniques & Genjutsu unfortunately. The weapon was also forged & laced with the Kyōkai Kekkai no Jutsu seal to help aid it's user after causing so much trouble and negative side effects. The worse and most dangerous part of the weapon is the fact that it deals 40dmg per turn to the user's body which may prove to be very dangerous and unhealthy for many. For this same reason some shinobis don't use the weapon much and don't keep it out for long period of times. The weapon itself can be used to deflect and block against freeform strikes from swords, kunais and other weapons including opponent's fist & feet.

Now on the offensive side of the weapon the user can apply raw chakra or elemental chakra to the body of the weapon to reshape it into a basic weapon (sword, axe, spear etc). If one applied elemental chakra to the weapon, it would take the appearance, properties, strength & weaknesses of the weapon while still being attach to the arm. Using the former application one can also have a part of the body extend out (up to 2m) like a dagger to aid them in taijutsu battles. Each action only requiring 20 chakra for use and 25 for the elemental application. The reshaped weapon or the extended ones would simply be B rank in power and lasts for 3 turns before reverting back to normal.

Notes:
Requires basic Fuuinjutsu training to access & summon
If the user doesn't have a valid defense against the damage (such as healing etc), after using the weapon for 4 turns, they will be unable to use the arm for the rest of the fight.

‡ Declined ‡ This is just horrible. DNR.

 

[Kamishiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The user creates openings into the sky however instead of creating a single opening the user creates three opening into the sky,one opening above the opponent with 5 meters and one 5 meters from his left and one 5 meters from his right,the user uses each opening to summon different stuff,the user uses the opening above the user to create lots of water spikes that rains down on the opponent alongest with two big metal spikes,one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes and thus the metal spikes and the water spikes smashes the opponent from the above,the user uses the second opening that is on the opponent's right to summon lots of strong,sick and big strings made of metal that wraps around opponent from the front side,and at the same time the user uses the opening that is on the opponent's left side to summon lots of strong,sick and big string which is also made of metal that wraps around the opponent from his back,wrapping all of the opponent's body with sick string binding the opponent in his place and also inflicting damage to him due to the pressure that the strings will cause while being around the opponent,causing the opponent to be open for water and metal spikes that is coming from above.
- Requires a mastery over Water Release
- Requires a mastery over Manipulating Tools
- Counts as two moves
- The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
- Counts as two moves
- The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank
- Can only be taught by Kamishiro

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±± Declined ±± Too much going on. Simplify as this is borderlining DNR

[Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The technique relies on the creation of portals. However, instead of creating a single portal, three portals are created. The first portal is 10 meters above the opponent, the second one is 5 meters to his right and the third one is 5 meters to his left. Once done, the user would use each portal to summon a different object. The user would use the first portal which lies above the user to create hundreds of water spikes that rain down on the opponent as well as two big metal spikes, one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes. Simultaneously, the user would use the second and third portals to summon hundreds of different ninja tools (kunais, strings, needles, shurikens, etc..) as well as a lot of wires that the user can manipulate freely to bind or damage the opponent, leaving him at the mercy of the water and ninja tools.
Note: Counts as two moves
Note: The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
Note: Counts as two moves
Note: The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank the following turn
Note: The user experiences chakra exhaustion and restrain to his body which causes -20 dmg to his body.

‡ Declined ‡ No idea what the restriction in green means. Overall this is underestricted for a Forbidden Rank. You need to quantify just what kind of damage you take e.g. if this was a fire technique, I'd say you sustain first degree burns. Since this part Ninjutsu, that component is of course weak to all elemental techhiques.

Reworded completely.

[Ninpo: Hangyaku] - Ninja Art: Rebellion
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D/S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: Rank dependent
Damage: Rank dependent
Description: A technique specifically made for those who are granted the ability of absorption whether by an ability or a weapon. The technique itself is simple, whenever the opponent attempts to absorb a technique of the user's, at the same time frame of his absorption attempt, the user would condense the chakra within the technique being absorbed, focusing the chakra into the technique's axes and causing the chakra to create an enormous pressure. With such pressure, the chakra would create an explosion, thus erasing the existence of any chakra so the opponent won't have anything to absorb and also creating an attack with the explosion itself.
-S-rank can only be used twice, A-rank can only be used thrice
-If S-rank is used, the user can't use any Techniques higher than S-rank the same turn
-Requires 2 turns to cool down and be reused.

I know you aren't in favor with techniques with several ranks, but this technique can't have one rank because it depends on the chakra inside the technique.

Declined - The pressure explosion has been done before, but to counter absorbing i just don't think it can, i mean depending on the absorbing method. So like Pein through up a barrier around himself to absorb a mass attack, or when he was nagato, he got hit then drew in kirabi's full cloak pretty fast to heal himself. I just don't think this would be possible with the effect you desire. Maybe just maybe you could do it as vibrating chakra, causing an unsteady flow of the chakra within the jutsu being absorbed making it harder to draw into their body or item absorbing, doubling the time it takes to absorb said attack?

[Ninpo: Hangyaku] - Ninja Art: Rebellion
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D/S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: Rank dependent
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique specifically made for those who are granted the ability of absorption whether by an ability or a weapon. The technique itself is simple, whenever the opponent attempts to absorb a technique of the user's, at the same time frame of his absorption attempt, the user would condense the chakra within the technique being absorbed, focusing the chakra into the technique's axes which causes an unusual vibration in the technique, such vibration causes the technique to be unstable to be absorbed and as such it delays the time estimated to absorb a technique from a move slot in the timeframe (1/3 of a turn), to a turn. During such, the opponent has to maintain the absorption technique/weapon in play in order to fully absorb the technique and if he stops the absorption proceed for any reason, he would get him by the remains of the technique.
Note: S-rank can only be used twice, A-rank can only be used thrice
Note: If S-rank is used, the user can't use any Techniques higher than S-rank the same turn
Note: Requires 2 turns to cool down and be reused.
Note: If for any reason the opponent stops the absorbing process, he is hit by the remains of the technique and the damage of such depends on the time the absorption process lasted. i.e If the opponent stayed 2/3 of a turn absorbing the technique and then stops, only 1/3 of the dmg of the technique would hit him and so on.

‡ Declined ‡ I just don't see this as feasible.

Edited the bold with mentioned suggestion.

[Futon: Kinjirareta Gattai] - Wind Release: Unusual Alliance
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+20 dmg to Solid elements)
Description: Normally, wind and wood don't have much in common, however, this technique is where everything changes. Specially designed by Hashirama to supplement Mokuton, "Futon: Kinjirareta Gattai" uses the natural traits of wind to push Mokuton even further. After performing one handseal the user can activate the technique individually, or at the same timeframe of another technqiue, depending on the user's move. With such activation, any Mokuton technique made by the user gets coated by a condensed, thick coat of wind. This coat of wind takes the same shape as the Mokuton technique in order not to effect the purpose of the technique, going as far as the slightest details go. The said coat of wind acts as a shield and rather insulator of elements that happens to have superiority in the elemental nature, such as but not limited to lightning. Basically, it remove's it's elemental weakness due to it insulating wood from all sides. But that also happens to cause it it's elemental superiority, so it rather becomes neutral. That is until the wind coat is destroyed by technique of equal rank following W&S, and the wood gets exposed exposed, then the elemental W&S returns to normal. For such reasons, another usage was introduced which is pseudo-coating the techniques with wind. By doing this, the user coats a specific part of the Mokuton technique which leaves the rest exposed, leaving the exposed part to the same destiny as any normal wood technique. The wind coat happened to have another effect on not only Mokuton, but also any other solid element like earth. Due to the condensation of the wind coat, it caused the molecules of the enveloped element to be pushed even closer to each other, which enhanced the strength and solidity of the said element, granting it boost to dmg. The concept of the technique was then generalized to include all solid elements due to it having the same effect on them as it did on Mokuton.
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-No wind higher than A rank the same turn

‡ Pending ‡ I feel like this has been done before. Need to check to be sure.

Declined - sorry but you would need yin yang for this. Coating wood with water or earth is fine as they are element's that make it up, but to add wind to the mix is too much. If you had fuuin you could do it though

[Suiton: Shiawase no Poseidon] - Water Release: Posiedon's Blessing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Specially designed by Hashirama to supplement Mokuton, "Suiton: Kinjirareta Gattai" uses the natural traits of water as a liquid to push Mokuton even further. After performing one handseal the user can activate the technique individually, or at the same timeframe of another technique, depending on the user's move. With such activation, any Mokuton technique made by the user gets coated by a condensed, thick coat of water. This coat of water takes the same shape as the Mokuton technique in order not to effect the purpose of the technique, going as far as the slightest details go. The said coat of water acts as a shield. Basically, it remove's the elemental weakness due to it insulating wood from all sides. But that also happens to cause it, it's elemental superiority, so it rather becomes neutral. That is until the water coat is destroyed by technique of equal power following W&S, and the wood gets exposed, then the elemental W&S returns to normal. Essentially an S-Rank Lightning technique would neutralize an S-Rank Wood technique clad in this coating of A-Rank Water. Alternatively, this technique can be applied to other elements which are a combination of Earth and Water.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Each use affects a single technique and the coating lasts 3 turns
Note: Can only be used on S-Rank and below techniques

Edited the name and used water instead of wind.

‡ Approved ‡ Removed the second usage as I didn't find it logical.

 

[BusinessManTeno]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Namekuji: Hedoro Utsuwa) Slug Arts: Slime Vessel
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This technique is special as it was created from the slug family utilizing their slime in an way that can help during combat. Even though this technique was created by the slugs, it was passed down to those who have access to the slug contract. This user will simply channel chakra around their whole body, releasing it, causing a shell or armor of slime to surround the users body excluding the eyes and nostrils, taking on a green color. The slime has multiple purposes for the user. The slime thats present on the feet of the user allows the user to glide on the ground as if they were skates. The main purpose for this is not only to aid the user speed but it allows the user to bypass any sharp objects that may be present on the ground beneath the feet, be it sharp glass, sharp grass, razors, etc allowing the user to become completely unharmed. This technique also aids in taijutsu, making the user immune to physical attacks be it kenjutsu (Unless channeled with chakra) and taijutsu (this does not include eig techniques and kaitos taijutsu), making the strikes slide right off the users body. This of course is a double edged sword as the user cant chain handseals and hold weapons without them slipping out the hand. But the most unique ability about the slime is the ability to absorb water at a rapid pace up to 10x its volume. Once water technique strikes the user, the slime will simply absorb the water at a rapid pace, not only absorbing the water technique but causing the water technique to lose its momentum allowing the user to be immune to water. The absorbed water can then be used to release more slime from around the body.

Note: Can use this technique 3 times and must wait 2 turns after the technique ends
Note: Technique last 3 turns
Note: Each time the user absorbs a water technique, the user can produce more slime increasing the duration of the technique by 1
Note: Can only absorb water technique twice
Note: Absorbing water counts as a turn
Note: Must have slug summon contract
Note: This can be used by both slugs and humans

Declined - I'm pretty sure this wouldn't protect you from leaf dragon god, but it would cause attacks to slide off your body. 10x it's volume in water is too much. Make it two times and can last up to 4 turns. Describe the slime a bit, it could be like jelly that absobs the impact and hardens on contact, other slime might just splash off you.

(Namekuji: Hedoro Utsuwa) Slug Arts: Slime Vessel
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This technique is special as it was created from the slug family utilizing their slime in an way that can help during combat. Even though this technique was created by the slugs, it was passed down to those who have access to the slug contract. This user will simply channel chakra around their whole body, releasing it, causing a shell or armor of slime to surround the users body excluding the eyes and nostrils, taking on a green color The slime is 3inches thick . The slime has multiple purposes for the user. The slime thats present on the feet of the user allows the user to glide on the ground as if they were skates. The main purpose for this is not only to aid the user speed but it allows the user to bypass any sharp objects that may be present on the ground beneath the feet, be it sharp glass, sharp grass, razors, etc allowing the user to become completely unharmed. This technique also aids in taijutsu, making the user immune to physical attacks be it kenjutsu (Unless channeled with chakra) and taijutsu (this does not include eig techniques and kaitos taijutsu), This is due to the thickness of the slime to absorb the impact from said techniques.. This of course is a double edged sword as the user cant chain handseals and hold weapons without them slipping out the hand. But the most unique ability about the slime is the ability to absorb water at a rapid pace up to 4x its volume. Once water technique strikes the user, the slime will simply absorb the water at a rapid pace causing the slime to harden upon contact, not only absorbing the water technique but causing the water technique to lose its momentum allowing the user to be immune to water. The absorbed water can then be used to release more slime from around the body.

Note: Can use this technique 2 times and must wait 2 turns after the technique ends
Note: Technique last 4 turns
Not effective against enhanced taijutsu (such as kaitos tai, and eig techniques)
Note: Each time the user absorbs a water technique, the user can produce more slime increasing the duration of the technique by 1
Note: Can only absorb water technique twice
Note: Absorbing water counts as a turn
Note: Must have slug summon contract
Note: This can be used by both slugs and humans

Approved - go be all slimy xd

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(Ensui Katatsumuri: Kawa mikiri) Cone Snail Art: Shell Of Solitude
Type: Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a (60 if crushed)
Description: This is a common technique for the cone snail art family, or any snail family. Derived from the toad stomach techniques exclusive to toads but with alot of unique twist. The user will reverse summon him and his opponent inside the shell of a large cone snail. The shell is 5 Meters wide, 20 meters high (this is due to the shell unique cone shape) and 10 meters both and forth of both the user and the opponent. The shell of the cone snail is infused with large amounts of chakra, making it very hard and sturdy, but not impossible to break. The unique thing about this technique is that, once the user reverse summons both him and his opponent, it is pitch black, and they are summoned on the body of the cone snail. Once this happen, similar to toad crushing stomach, the user will cause the body of the snail to absorb the body of his opponent down into the main body. As the opponent is being absorbed, the snails body will contract, crushing the opponents body the deeper it gets dragged down into its body. If the opponent gets fully absorbed, his whole body would not only be crushed but will also suffocate.

Note: Can use a max of 3 turns
Note: The shell due to its hard nature, it will take A rank to break the shell. Once broken both the user and opponent are returned to the field.
Note: Must wait 3 turns before this technique can be used again
Note: Can only be used by those who have the cone snail contract

Approved, can't get enough of us toad users O_<
(Doton: mikiri toge) Earth Style : Splinter Weight
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is a multi-purpose technique allowing the user to do both piercing and/or blunt impact utilizing the added weight, and light weight earth technique. The user will mold chakra into their mouth, spitting out a senbon twice the size of an original senbon but still small towards their target or opponent. The user will either do the boar handseal which will add large amounts of weight into the senbon. Though the appearance doesnt look harmful due to its small nature, once the senbon strikes a body part it will cause major blunt damage (enough to deal major brusing, and even fracture or break the bones if struck twice in the same spot. The technique will indeed become slower losing 1/4 its speed. While on the other hand, the user can do the tiger handseal which will reduce the weight of the earth senbon. This will not only allow the senbon to speed up tripling its speed but give it piercing damage. Due to the reduced weight of this technique, it loses alot of its momentum, only being able to pierce the body up 2 inches deep which in most case is normally used to irritate the opponent or even serve as a distraction.

Note: Can use a max of 4x per battle
Note: No earth jutsu in the next turn after use
Note: Must have learned added/reduced weight technique before using this.

Declined - clashes with existing jutsu

 

[Mellow]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

↯(Raiton: Raijū no Funsai Hana) - Lightning Release: Raiju's Shattering Flower
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid Range
Chakra:30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is a variation based on the usage of C's lightning illusion technique. Applied to a lightning technique the user has already formed. He will form two handseals supercharging the electrons within the lightning jutsu with additional chakra. As seen with Chidori high concentrations of lightning chakra can be caused to make distinctive loud noises that closely resembled that of millions of birds constantly chirping . This noise however will remain dormant within the charged electrons until the moment the jutsu strikes an opposing jutsu or the opponent. Once it has struck it's mark the dormant addition will cause the lightning jutsu to explode violently creating a deafening cracking noise very similar to a high pitched thunderclap. This can cause temporary loss of hearing to the opponent if he happens to be in short range of the jutsu. However similar to C's usage of the illusion flash pillar the user will be able to cast the opponent in a genjutsu using the loud clap of thunder as a medium. Sound created by the thunderclap or if the user knows sound release, a sound genjutsu using the loud noise of the thunderclap as a medium.
↯Usable thrice per battle.
↯Must be used while performing a technique and only works on one technique at a time.

‡ Declined ‡ Where's the quote? The bolded changes?

♪(Ototon:Aporo no Kurēdoru) - Sound Release: Apollo's Cradle
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:(+20 to earth techniques due to speed boost)
Description: The user claps his hands while radially releasing instant sound waves throughout the ground and atmosphere. This creates a field of sound energy which allows the user to manipulate surrounding earth and earthen constructs at will by decreasing it's masses in turn, the earth techniques will gain speed from fueling additonal sound waves into them. This causes the vibrations of the waves to easily force earth and earthen constructs up with the violent chakra without the user coming into direct contact with the earth's surface. All seals apply except for those that require a gesture involving the ground. Those gestures will be substituted by an additional can seal to whatever earth jutsu.

♪ Created by Mellow.
♬ Lasts for 3 turns.
♩ Can be only used twice.

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

♪(Ototon/Genjutsu: Chōrui Kōringu)- Sound/Illusionary Release: Avians' Calling
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Upon hearing the sound of lightning ,the target will instantly feel the effects of this jutsu.The user uses the high resonance and amplitude of the violent chirping noises as a medium for casting genjutsu. The user combines his Ototon chakra with a previous lightning jutsu's sound effects and induces the target into a sound genjutsu. The mixture of the two elements amplify the sound of the lighting which closely mimicked the sporadic noises caused by a flock of a million of birds. The lightning technique acts as a vocal point in order for the genjutsu to take effect . The effects of the genjutsu would be to simply cause an unbearable amount of pain which would feel as if the opponent's brain was repeatedly being beaten into, giving the effects of thunder and vibrations "stuck" in the opponents head and body , believing to feel these intense effects on their brain mostly since that's where the birds were mostly aiming at to get a quick kill and great meal. With this intense pecking within the victims head and body , it would nullify advance cognitive ability and quick thinking for physical reaction. Along with the pain distorting the opponent's ability mold chakra effectively (won't be able to perform S-Ranks and above) due to this intense pain occurring inside one of the important chakra points of the body; the brain.

♪Can only be used once every 3 turns
♪The chirping is quickly elevating in volume.
♪Can only be taught by Mellow.

‡ Declined ‡ OP and I'm not approving techniques like Banshee. You need to find another effect for this technique to be viable.

 

[Onii Chan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Raitonyari) - Lightning Spear
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After performing the hand signs Bird - Dragon - Serpent the user will draw back one hand in preparation to form a thin yet very long spear made of lightning that can be thrown in any direction at high speeds. Because this jutsu is so thin and quick it can fly straight through any jutsu that is not B-rank or higher.

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

(Katon: Kaenhana) - Flaming Flowers
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing the hand sign ''tiger'' a thousand flower petals will fall from the sky in all directions except where the user is standing. The petals will gradually catch flame and fall slowly downwards. Although very slow this can be used as a ultimate defense and offense attack against the opponent because it covers the whole area at which both parties are fighting and once eye level they are highly undodgable. The only way to counter act this jutsu is either to finish off the user before the petals reach you or to create a shield of your own and wait till all the petals fall. If the petals hit the opponent then they will cause immense burns on the skin which wont kill the opponent but it will hurt a lot and if hit by enough of them will cause the opponent to pass out.
NOTE: Can only be used once per battle.
NOTE: If you happen to destroy them all before they hit the ground then they will merely reform and fall again. The petals cannot be destroyed and will only stop falling once every one hits the ground.

‡ Declined ‡ Are these actual petals that catch fire or are they made of flame from the first place? If it's the former, I don't see this doing any damage or even being a viable technique. Katon techniques can only be created from the user's body, sent through the ground or materialized within short-range of the user.

 

[Penguin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Same Kuchiyose: Same Ha no Guraindā ▽ Shark Summoning: Grinder of the Shark Tooth
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10)
Damage: N/A (+20)
Description: After signing the shark contract, Ashitaka began to create several techniques for his new ability. One of his most useful and diverse creations was Same Kuchiyose: Same Ha no Guraindā ▽ Shark Summoning: Grinder of the Shark Tooth. After performing the necessary hand seals, the user would reverse summon anyone they wanted to within range into a huge cavern with natural light bending from the outside. The walls and the roof of the cavern were made of a crystalline-water, allowing the light to be let in. The width of this hardened water cave, however, only extended forty meters in diameter and forty meters 'b]high[/b], much like a dome. The "floor" of the crystalline-water cavern was as huge as a lake's worth of water. This is due to the fact that some sharks can be summoned with their own water source, and this is where they reside and it would need to come from somewhere. If the user wanted to, they have the option to release ten extra chakra and perform one extra hand seal as they reverse summon everyone, to have the crystalline-water cave walls, roof, and the water below to become littered with small and large shark teeth varying from size to size. From the highest point all the way down onto the edges of the walls, the shark teeth were pointing towards the center of the cavern except the teeth that would be summoned in the water. If the teeth were summoned and someone used the water below as a source of water for techniques, it would gain an additional twenty points of damage (not including forbidden ranked water). Plenty of "basic" shark live in the water below, and if one is not a signed contract summoner for sharks and they become submerged, the sharks speed towards whoever has become submerged and would begin to tear them to pieces with their powerful and sharp teeth (opponent must be bleeding or be submerged for one turn).

Note: Can only be taught by Penguin
Note: Can only be used by shark contract holders
Note: Can only be used twice per match
Note: No shark ninjutsu A-rank and above for a turn after this technique

‡ Declined ‡ Still not keen on the idea of Reverse Summons but I'll allow it. As long as people don't go overkill and try to amass multiple ways of reverse summoning the opponent. This needs to have some kind of turn limit (whereby everyone that was summoned to this place is returned to the original battlefield). The damage boost is overkill and just out of place in this technique. What you could do is change the property of the water in this cave e.g. make it sticky or some kind of variant of water.

Same Kuchiyose: Same Ha no Guraindā ▽ Shark Summoning: Grinder of the Shark Tooth
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After signing the shark contract, Ashitaka began to create several techniques for his new ability. One of his most useful and diverse creations was Same Kuchiyose: Same Ha no Guraindā ▽ Shark Summoning: Grinder of the Shark Tooth. After performing the necessary hand seals, the user would reverse summon anyone they wanted to within range into a huge cavern with natural light bending from the outside. The walls and the roof of the cavern were made of a crystalline-water, allowing the light to be let in. The width of this hardened water cave, however, only extended forty meters in diameter and forty meters high much like a dome. The "floor" of the crystalline-water cavern was as huge as a lake's worth of water. This is due to the fact that some sharks can be summoned with their own water source, and this is where they reside and it would need to come from somewhere. The crystalline-water cave walls, roof, and the water below are littered with small and large shark teeth varying from size to size. This in no way adds a damage to techniques the user performs. From the highest point all the way down onto the edges of the walls, the shark teeth were pointing towards the center of the cavern except the teeth that would be summoned in the water. Plenty of "basic" shark live in the water below, and if one is not a signed contract summoner for sharks and they become submerged, the sharks speed towards whoever has become submerged and would begin to tear them to pieces with their powerful and sharp teeth (opponent must be bleeding, or be submerged for one turn).

Note: Can only be taught by Penguin
Note: Can only be used by shark contract holders
Note: Can only be used twice per match
Note: Lasts for four turns then everyone is de-summoned
Note: No shark ninjutsu A-rank and above for a turn after this technique

‡ Approved ‡

 

[Lytes]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon Nikkōyoku - Fire Style Sun Bath
Type: Offensive
Rank: F rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user builds up his katon chakra in his core, absorbing the heat energy near himself to further make this jutsu stronger and would release the katon chakra all at once in an omnidirectional wave of heat, this heatwave is so hot it roast sts and sets things on fire as it moves capable of vaporising huge water sources in moments and turning the ground to lava, the wave is invisible to the normal eye but it can be noticed by the effects it has on the surroundings. The only Ninja who had survived the jutsu described it as a bath in the sun, the origin of the jutsu's name, from a third person's view, the user screams (special effects) and everything all around starts burning spreading outwards, the jutsu is capable of roasting and vaporizing any living thing it hits, while being able to wipe out a whole landmark moving quite fast but not untrackable.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: User receives 10 damage for the burns the heatwave inflict on his skin.
Note: No fire jutsu in next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Lytes.☼
Note: No F rank justu in next turn.

‡ Declined ‡ This is not how Katon works. DNR.

Genjutsu Sore ni chokumen - Illusion Arts Face it
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra into the opponent's brain and initiates this jutsu by uttering a sentence Your face , placing the opponent in an illusion where he suddenly gets an irresistible urge to feel his face with his hands, this urge can be accompanied by any feeling the user wants, irritation, self loathe, curiosity etc, while under the effect of this jutsu opponent obviously can not perform handseals and would continue feeling his face until broken
~ Can be used ten times per battle.
~ One turn cool down after each usage.
~ Can be used on multiple targets at a time.
~ Can only be taught by Lytes

‡ Declined ‡ This is not how Genjutsu works. DNR.

(Fuuton: Senshi Futan) - Wind Release: Warrior's burden
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: A jutsu originally developed to be used on prisoners ,the user performs a lone handseal before focusing their fuuton chakra around their target's ankles or wrists, using this chakra the user will compress the air around the joint until it's very dense and heavy, so dense that it gives off a bright blue glow, this "heavy air" is attached to the ankles or wrists depending on which joint is targeted, due to its immense density and small volume, the compressed air has a lot of mass and weight and would weigh down the targeted joint.
Note: The compressed reduces the target joint's speed by 5 points i.e if a target's leg speed is 20 and this jutsu is used on his ankles, his leg speed gets cut down to 15 as they aren't used to the immense weight and also the damage from this joints is reduced by 10 i.e say...if this jutsu is used on a ninja's wrist, the punches or palm thrusts jutsu the target pulls off from this hand gets a - 10 damage as long as this jutsu is active.
Note: Cannot be used on summons
Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle with 2 turn cool downs
Note: Lasts 2 turns for every usage.
Note: Can only be taught by Mako.

☼ Approved ☼

Resubmitting
(Fuuton: Senshi Futan) - Wind Release: Warrior's burden
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: A jutsu originally developed to be used on prisoners but was modified by Kurapika to combat leg weights users,the user performs a lone handseal before focusing their fuuton chakra around their target's ankles and wrists, using this chakra the user will compress the air around the joint until it's very dense and heavy, so dense that it gives off a bright blue glow, this "heavy air" is attached to the opponent's ankles and wrists , due to its immense density and small volume (about the size of a bracelet), the compressed air has a lot of mass and weight and would weigh down the target. Plus, twice per usage, at the cost of 5 chakra the user can manipulate the compressed air in the sense that the user can move the compressed air anyway and any direction they want e.g After using this jutsu on a target, the user wills all four bracelets of compressed air to move five meters to the right, since the bracelets are on the opponent, the opponent's body would be dragged along against their will.
Note: Due to the weight of compressed air on the opponent, their overall speed is halved, and also the damage from the opponent's joints is reduced by 10 i.e say when this jutsu is used on a target, the punches, palm thrusts or any attacks and jutsu the target pulls off that requires the strength of his hand gets a - 10 damage as long as this jutsu is active, however this also affects the opponent's kicks too making this jutsu a perfect counter to leg weights. [/b']
Note: Cannot be used on summons
Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle with 2 turn cool downs
Note: Lasts 4 turns for every usage.
Note: Can only be taught by Lytes .

‡ Update Declined ‡ Keep the original.

 

[Nathan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Discussed with Pervy via PM's about how it doesn't clash with Music Arts.

(Ototon: Kodai Sorufējusukēru) - Sound Release: Ancient Solfeggio Scale
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Self - Short (Direct Contact)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is derived from "

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", which basically is: "Solfeggio frequencies make up the ancient 6-tone scale thought to have been used in sacred music, including the beautiful and well known Gregorian Chants. The chants and their special tones were believed to impart spiritual blessings when sung in harmony. Each Solfeggio tone is comprised of a frequency required to balance your energy and keep your body, mind and spirit in perfect harmony." To start the use of this technique, the user gathers up a large amount of sound chakra that can either be released, or used in two options. The user then either starts to vibrate the chakra, either within their own body, or the body of their intended target Using their chakra, the user is able to manipulate and alternate between specific frequencies the chakra vibrates at, resulting in various beneficial effects on the receiving party. The available frequencies, and the effects generated by them, are as follows;

174 Hz - "Do" (Pain Relief) - The lowest of the Solfeggio Scale, this frequency uses the slow and calming vibrations to act as a sort of anaesthetic, relieving the affected of pain and trauma. While under the effects of "Do", the user/ target is more tolerant of minor pain, (i.e broken finger, or broken toe, etc...) lending them a brief respite from the burden of physical damage. The target is unaware of their body's own pain for 2 turns.
285 Hz - "Io" (Healing (Increased Efficiency) - The "Io" frequency is perhaps one of the most beneficial forms on the Solfeggio Scale, as its soothing waves help to repair or "return" the body to its natural state. In other words "Io" helps the repair of damage done to it's target, allowing them to be healed faster and more effectively by Medical Shinobi. Any Medical Jutsu performed on a target under the effects of the "Io" frequency cost 50% less Chakra, which last for a max of 3 turns and expire when a Medical Jutsu is performed on the user. The sound itself doesn't actually heal the user in anyway, but it just creates an opening for medical ninjas to use their techniques more efficiently.
396 Hz - "Ut" (Killing Intent Resistance) - "Ut" is a rather unique frequency, as it grants its target a feeling of liberation from negative feelings, such as guilt, fear or anger. Through this liberation the user is granted a high level of mental clarity, the likes of which may seem alien to them. Thanks to the relief of the burden of negative emotions, a beneficiary of the "Ut" frequency will be less susceptible to techniques that prey on such emotions. This makes the user one level more resistant to the "Killing Intent" Jutsu for 2 turns.
417 Hz - "Re" (Re-encouragement - Next tone from the solfeggio scale is connected with resonation processes or processes of amplification. Re can “delete” person’s “alienation from God” and enable returning to the “right path”. This solfeggio frequency cleanses traumatic experiences and clears destructive influences of past events. It can be used for cleaning limiting impression, which disables the person to achieve her life goals. When speaking of cellular processes, tone Re encourages the cell and its DNA to function in an optimal way. 417 Hz frequency energizes your body cells and helps to use their creative potentials. This one creates a small window of opening where the users reaction speed is doubled, that being said this frequency is activated will only last the turn it is used on.
741hz - "Sol" (Cleansing infections) - It cleans the cell (“Solve polluti“) from the toxins. Frequent use of 741 Hz leads to a healthier, simpler life, and also to changes in diet towards foods which are not poisoned by various kinds of toxins. Tone ‘Sol’ cleans the cell from different kinds of electromagnetic radiations. Another application of this sound frequency is solving problems of any nature. This frequency of the Solfeggio scale will also lead you into the power of self-expression, which results in a pure and stable life. Another important application of this sound frequency is cleansing infections – viral, bacterial, and fungal, so it creates a layer of sound that radiates bacterial, and fungal based things that lasts for two turns unless turned off by the user.
852hz - "La" (Genjutsu Resistance) - Tone ‘La’ is linked to your ability to see through the illusions of your life, such as hidden agendas of people, places and things. This frequency can be used as means for opening a person up for communication with the all-embracing Spirit. It raises awareness and lets you return to spiritual order. Regarding cellular processes, 852 Hz enables the cell to transform itself into a system of higher level. The sound created from this effect, creates a resistance to genjutsu, how this works is that the sound reverberates the users chakra flow in such a way that it constantly fluctuates the chakra which makes it easier for the easy to break out of genjutsu of B-rank and below, this technique lasts for two turns.
Notes:
- Only one effect can be used per-usage.
- Each effect can only be used once per-match/twice per-NW event.
- Cooldown of two turns before re-use.
- Not a medical ninjutsu technique, this is rather a technique that enhances the use of medical ninjutsu though the use of specific frequencies.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Declined - i can't allow anything that helps med jutsu, even if not relating to it. So that needs to be removed, doubling reactions is a no. Cleaning cells is too close to med to be approved in this thread. Sound blocking gen is a no too. And it's toooooo long, making my beautiful pink eyes bleed >_<

‡ All Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy since he checked them before.

(Ototon: Kodai Sorufējusukēru) - Sound Release: Ancient Solfeggio Scale
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Self - Short (Direct Contact)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is derived from "The Ancient Solfeggio Scale", which basically is: "Solfeggio frequencies make up the ancient 6-tone scale thought to have been used in sacred music, including the beautiful and well known Gregorian Chants. The chants and their special tones were believed to impart spiritual blessings when sung in harmony. Each Solfeggio tone is comprised of a frequency required to balance your energy and keep your body, mind and spirit in perfect harmony." To start the use of this technique, the user gathers up a large amount of sound chakra that can either be released, or used in two options. The user then either starts to vibrate the chakra, either within their own body, or the body of their intended target Using their chakra, the user is able to manipulate and alternate between specific frequencies the chakra vibrates at, resulting in various beneficial effects on the receiving party. The available frequencies, and the effects generated by them, are as follows;

174 Hz - "Do" (Pain Relief) - The lowest of the Solfeggio Scale, this frequency uses the slow and calming vibrations to act as a sort of anaesthetic, relieving the affected of pain and trauma. While under the effects of "Do", the user/ target is more tolerant of minor pain, (i.e broken finger, or broken toe, etc...) lending them a brief respite from the burden of physical damage. The target is unaware of their body's own pain for 2 turns.

285 Hz - "Io" (Healing (Increased Efficiency) - The "Io" frequency is perhaps one of the most beneficial forms on the Solfeggio Scale, this frequency helps return tissue into its original form. 285 Hz influences energy fields, sending them a message to restructure damaged organs. It also leaves your body rejuvenated and energized. In other words "Io" helps the repair of damage done to it's target, allowing them to be healed faster and more effectively by Medical Shinobi. Any Medical Jutsu performed on a target under the effects of the "Io" frequency cost 50% less Chakra, which last for a max of 3 turns and expire when a Medical Jutsu is performed on the user. The sound itself doesn't actually heal the user in anyway, but it just creates an opening for medical ninjas to use their techniques more efficiently.

396 Hz - "Ut" (Killing Intent Resistance) - "Ut" is a rather unique frequency, as it grants its target a feeling of liberation from negative feelings, such as guilt, fear or anger. Through this liberation the user is granted a high level of mental clarity, the likes of which may seem alien to them. Thanks to the relief of the burden of negative emotions, a beneficiary of the "Ut" frequency will be less susceptible to techniques that prey on such emotions. This makes the user one level more resistant to the "Killing Intent" Jutsu for 2 turns.

417 Hz - "Re" (Re-encouragement - Next tone from the solfeggio scale is connected with resonation processes or processes of amplification. Re can “delete” person’s “alienation from God” and enable returning to the “right path”. This solfeggio frequency cleanses traumatic experiences and clears destructive influences of past events. It can be used for cleaning limiting impression, which disables the person to achieve her life goals. When speaking of cellular processes, tone Re encourages the cell and its DNA to function in an optimal way. 417 Hz frequency energizes your body cells and helps to use their creative potentials. This one creates a small window of opening where the users reaction speed is by a scale factor of 1.5x, that being said this frequency is activated will only last the turn it is used on.

852hz - "La" (Genjutsu Resistance) - Tone ‘La’ is linked to your ability to see through the illusions of your life, such as hidden agendas of people, places and things. This frequency can be used as means for opening a person up for communication with the all-embracing Spirit. It raises awareness and lets you return to spiritual order. Regarding cellular processes, 852 Hz enables the cell to transform itself into a system of higher level. The sound created from this effect, creates a resistance to genjutsu, how this works is that the sound reverberates the users chakra flow in such a way that it constantly fluctuates the chakra which makes it easier for the easy to break out of genjutsu of B-rank and below, this technique lasts for two turns. And this only works on basic genjutsu, and sound based. Anything that comes from a Doujutsu is unaffected.

Notes:
- Only one effect can be used per-usage.
- Each effect can only be used once per-match/twice per-NW event.
- Cooldown of two turns before re-use.
- Not a medical ninjutsu technique, this is rather a technique that enhances the use of medical ninjutsu though the use of specific frequencies.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

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(Ototon Genjutsu: Kake Maindo) - Sound Illusionary Art: Splinter Mind
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: By activating this genjutsu though the click of a finger, or any sound the user releases sound waves that travel towards the opponent and induces a genjutsu. The target will find them self inside their own psyche presented by images of all their memories before them as well as finding them self binded by strange tendrils that are connected to their body. These images of past memories begin to fade in front of the victim signifying each of their memories actually being destroyed. As this happens the strange tendrils begin to tear the target apart slowly piece by piece causing tremendously agonizing mental strain. As the images of the memories continue to fade, the tendrils continue to rip the victim apart until there is nothing left of the target. This signifies that not only has the target's entire memory been completely destroyed but their mind as well, this rids the target of a large portion of the target's mind to make them lose what makes them who they are, and induces a vegetative stupor state.
Notes:
- Can only be used thrice per-match.
- Cannot be layed.
- No genjutsu before using this.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Declined ‡ Way too powerful and I'm not entirely sure if the part about showing the opponent their "memories" before destroying them is entirely feasible.
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(Fūton: Seikaku Bakufū) Wind Release: Pinpoint Shock-wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will perform the seals Dog → Rat → Monkey, then the user gathers a small, but intense amount of wind chakra in their fingertips, usually the index and middle finger. Then, the user gives their target a single tap. Upon contact, the wind chakra is released all at once and slams into the target, causing impact damage and sending them flying back. The user can jab their finger deeper to cause even more damage than normal and can use two hands to double the effects
X-Approved-X
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Updating an old technique.

Fūton: Otto, Watashi no Yubi ga Subette! | Wind Release: Whoops My Fingers Slipped!
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will gather a small, but intense amount of wind chakra in their fingertips, usually the index and middle finger, and afterwards he will give their target a single tap. Upon contact, the wind chakra is released all at once and slams into the target, causing impact damage and sending them flying back. The user can jab their finger deeper to cause even more damage than normal and can use two hands to double the effect. Alternatively, the user can use this method to destroy solid techniques such as those from earth release (or similar) which will shatter upon being hit.
Notes:
- Can only shatter B-rank and below techniques of solid nature.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Approved ‡ Doubling the effect doesn't mean this is A-Ranked.

 

[Mellow]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton: Raijū no funsai hana) - Lightning Release: Raiju's Shattering Flower
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is a variation based on the usage of C's lightning illusion technique. Applied to a lightning technique the user has already formed. He will form two handseals supercharging the electrons within the lightning jutsu with additional chakra. As seen with Chidori high concentrations of lightning chakra can be caused to make distinctive loud noises. This noise however will remain dormant within the charged electrons until the moment the jutsu strikes an opposing jutsu or the opponent. Once it has struck it's mark the dormant addition will cause the lightning jutsu to explode violently creating a deafening cracking noise very similar to a high pitched thunderclap. This can cause temporary loss of hearing and vision to the opponent if he happens to be in short range of the jutsu. However similar to C's usage of the illusion flash pillar the user will be able to cast the opponent in a genjutsu using the loud clap of thunder as a medium. This can be a visual genjutsu using the bright light created by the thunderclap or if the user knows sound release, a sound genjutsu using the loud noise of the thunderclap as a medium.
Note: Usable thrice per battle.
Note: Must be used while performing a technique and only works on one technique at a time.

‡ Declined ‡ Not a bad idea but robbing the opponent of both senses is too much. Also, it's hard to gauge if an opponent will be short-range of a clash due to several factors (speed of techniques, if the opponent is currently moving, et cetera). You can increase this to mid-range and tone down the effects.

↯(Raiton: Raijū no Funsai Hana) - Lightning Release: Raiju's Shattering Flower
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid Range
Chakra:30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is a variation based on the usage of C's lightning illusion technique. Applied to a lightning technique the user has already formed. He will form two handseals supercharging the electrons within the lightning jutsu with additional chakra. As seen with Chidori high concentrations of lightning chakra can be caused to make distinctive loud noises that closely resembled that of millions of birds constantly chirping . This noise however will remain dormant within the charged electrons until the moment the jutsu strikes an opposing jutsu or the opponent. Once it has struck it's mark the dormant addition will cause the lightning jutsu to explode violently creating a deafening cracking noise very similar to a high pitched thunderclap. This can cause temporary loss of hearing to the opponent if he happens to be in short range of the jutsu. However similar to C's usage of the illusion flash pillar the user will be able to cast the opponent in a genjutsu using the loud clap of thunder as a medium. Sound created by the thunderclap or if the user knows sound release, a sound genjutsu using the loud noise of the thunderclap as a medium.

↯Usable thrice per battle.
↯Must be used while performing a technique and only works on one technique at a time.

‡ Declined ‡ Where's the quote? The bolded changes?

♪(Ototon:Aporo no Kurēdoru) - Sound Release: Apollo's Cradle
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:(+20 to earth techniques due to speed boost)
Description: The user claps his hands while radially releasing instant sound waves throughout the ground and atmosphere. This creates a field of sound energy which allows the user to manipulate surrounding earth and earthen constructs at will by decreasing it's masses in turn, the earth techniques will gain speed from fueling additonal sound waves into them. This causes the vibrations of the waves to easily force earth and earthen constructs up with the violent chakra without the user coming into direct contact with the earth's surface. All seals apply except for those that require a gesture involving the ground. Those gestures will be substituted by an additional can seal to whatever earth jutsu.

♪ Created by Mellow.
♬ Lasts for 3 turns.
♩ Can be only used twice.

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

♪(Ototon/Genjutsu: Chōrui Kōringu)- Sound/Illusionary Release: Avians' Calling
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Upon hearing the sound of lightning ,the target will instantly feel the effects of this jutsu.The user uses the high resonance and amplitude of the violent chirping noises as a medium for casting genjutsu. The user combines his Ototon chakra with a previous lightning jutsu's sound effects and induces the target into a sound genjutsu. The mixture of the two elements amplify the sound of the lighting which closely mimicked the sporadic noises caused by a flock of a million of birds. The lightning technique acts as a vocal point in order for the genjutsu to take effect . The effects of the genjutsu would be to simply cause an unbearable amount of pain which would feel as if the opponent's brain was repeatedly being beaten into, giving the effects of thunder and vibrations "stuck" in the opponents head and body , believing to feel these intense effects on their brain mostly since that's where the birds were mostly aiming at to get a quick kill and great meal. With this intense pecking within the victims head and body , it would nullify advance cognitive ability and quick thinking for physical reaction. Along with the pain distorting the opponent's ability mold chakra effectively (won't be able to perform S-Ranks and above) due to this intense pain occurring inside one of the important chakra points of the body; the brain.

♪Can only be used once every 3 turns
♪The chirping is quickly elevating in volume.
♪Can only be taught by Mellow.

‡ Declined ‡ OP and I'm not approving techniques like Banshee. You need to find another effect for this technique to be viable.

*Added the bold and took out the visual genjutsu medium parts.*

↯(Raiton: Raijū no Funsai Hana) - Lightning Release: Raiju's Shattering Flower
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid Range
Chakra:30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is a variation based on the usage of C's lightning illusion technique. Applied to a lightning technique the user has already formed. He will form two handseals supercharging the electrons within the lightning jutsu with additional chakra. As seen with Chidori high concentrations of lightning chakra can be caused to make distinctive loud noises that closely resembled that of millions of birds constantly chirping . This noise however will remain dormant within the charged electrons until the moment the jutsu strikes an opposing jutsu or the opponent. Once it has struck it's mark the dormant addition will cause the lightning jutsu to explode violently creating a deafening cracking noise very similar to a high pitched thunderclap. This can cause temporary loss of hearing to the opponent if he happens to be in short range of the jutsu. However similar to C's usage of the illusion flash pillar the user will be able to cast the opponent in a genjutsu using the loud clap of thunder as a medium. Sound created by the thunderclap or if the user knows sound release, a sound genjutsu using the loud noise of the thunderclap as a medium.

↯Usable thrice per battle.
↯Must be used while performing a technique and only works on one technique at a time.

*@ bolded are the new effects. Changed the rank and took away the damage.*

♪(Ototon/Genjutsu: Chōrui Kōringu)- Sound/Illusionary Release: Avians' Calling
Type: Offensive/ Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:Upon hearing the sound of lightning ,the target will instantly feel the effects of this jutsu.The user uses the high resonance and amplitude of the violent chirping noises as a medium for casting genjutsu. The user combines his Ototon chakra with a previous lightning jutsu's sound effects and induces the target into a sound genjutsu. The mixture of the two elements amplify the sound of the lighting which closely mimicked the sporadic noises caused by a flock of a million of birds. The lightning technique acts as a vocal point in order for the genjutsu to take effect . The effects of the genjutsu would be to simply make the target see a flock of birds which would constatly swarm near them, limiting their vision while the birds peck at them repeatedly, causing slight yet constant pain . Using their beaks, the birds would be "nailing" the opponent still, causing them to become paralyzed as well. Since the target is indeed paralyzed, they will not be able to weave any seals.

♪Can only be used once every 2 turns
♪Can only be taught by Mellow.

‡ All Declined ‡ You already made a submission this cycle. You are hereby banned from the next cycle.

 

[Detective L]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuin: Kanbatsu Jakunen Metsubou) - Sealing Technique: Law of the Logia
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A (-30 on activation)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will have a seal on their body with the Kanji for a specific element and it will lay dormant until the user is physically struck, be it by an attack, weapon or an opponent. Whenever the user is physically interacted with (e.g. punched, stabbed, shot), their body will instantly exhibit all of the properties of the chosen element. This doesn't mean their body merely has the properties of the element but rather when interacted with the targeted part(s) of the body will passively dissipate into storm energy or harden into steel (effect depends on the chosen element). If for example the user is stabbed and they turn into storm energy, the bladed weapon would merely phase through their gaseous body and leave them unaffected. On the other side of the scale, if the user's body hardens into steel then the attack will simply do them no harm. After the attack or strike has passed through them, their body will automatically revert itself to it's normal appearance. Since this technique usually only applies to specific parts of the body, any unconverted portions of the user's body can still be moved/controlled/used as normal. While in this form, the user can only use the element they transformed into, the element's it's composed of and any combination of the aforementioned element as well as any non-elemental abilities. This technique enables the user to defend against A-Ranks and below of neutral elements (B-Ranks and below for weaknesses, S-Ranks and below for strengths). If the user is struck with an attack that will neutralize their transformation, the two cancel one another out and the user reverts to their original form. If the user is struck with an attack that overpowers their transformation, the user's body reverts to it's original form and sustains the remaining damage (after the collision of techniques). The only exception to this rule is if the two chosen elements have no sort of interaction with one another (e.g. Fire and Lightning), in which case rank differences will not matter.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L.
-This seal can only activate three times per battle and lasts one turn
-This technique must be stated in user's biography
-Follows elemental strengths and weaknesses
-User must possess the given element and it cannot be a CE
-Happens passively but counts as one of the user's moves per turn

Declined - the seal i'm fine with, but reduce it to useable twice and i can't believe i'm saying this but can you add detail. Does it only work on one body part or the whole body, what happens when you're stabbed, use this to turn your stomac to water on impact and someone then uses nagashi through the sword while the blade is still in you with this word active, does that then destroy the seal and leave you in your normal form with a blade through you?

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(Fuuin: Kanbatsu Jakunen Metsubou) - Sealing Technique: Law of the Logia
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A (-30 on activation)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will have a seal on their body with the Kanji for a specific element and it will lay dormant until the user is physically struck, be it by an attack, weapon or an opponent. Whenever the user is physically interacted with (e.g. punched, stabbed, shot), their body will instantly exhibit all of the properties of the chosen element. This doesn't mean their body merely has the properties of the element but rather when interacted with the targeted part(s) of the body will passively dissipate into storm energy or harden into steel (effect depends on the chosen element). If for example the user is stabbed and they turn into storm energy, the bladed weapon would merely phase through their energy-composed body and leave them unaffected. On the other side of the scale, if the user's body hardens into steel then the attack will simply do them no harm. After the attack or strike has passed through them, their body will automatically revert itself to it's normal appearance. Since this technique usually only applies to specific parts of the body, any unconverted portions of the user's body can still be moved/controlled/used as normal. While in this form, the user can only use the element they transformed into, the element's it's composed of and any combination of the aforementioned element as well as any non-elemental abilities. This technique enables the user to defend against A-Ranks and below of neutral elements (B-Ranks and below for weaknesses, S-Ranks and below for strengths). If the user is struck with an attack that will neutralize their transformation, the two cancel one another out and the user reverts to their original form unharmed. If the user is struck with an attack that overpowers their transformation, the user's body reverts to it's original form and sustains the remaining damage (after the collision of techniques). The only exception to this rule is if the two chosen elements have no sort of interaction with one another (e.g. Fire and Lightning), in which case rank differences will not matter. Regardless of how the user is hit, this can be a full body or partial transformation (depends on the user’s choice). Should they be struck by a physical attack capable of cancelling out their transformation (e.g. a sword streaming nagashi), the sword will remain inside them on reversion and they’ll be impaled by the blade.

Notes:

-Can only be taught by Detective L.
-This seal can only activate twice per battle and lasts one turn
-This technique must be stated in user's biography
-Follows elemental strengths and weaknesses
-User must possess the given element and it cannot be a CE
-Happens passively but counts as one of the user's moves per turn

Approved- brilliant jutsu

(Fuuin: Kichigai Kouyou) - Sealing Technique: Mad Enhancement
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will passively apply a seal with the Kanji for "Madness" on their body. This technique will both distort how their body but also their techniques appear. A barrier of chakra will form over their body in the form of a black haze of chakra cloaks the user's body without obscuring their sight. The haze casts anyone who looks upon it in an external genjutsu (A-Rank) that constantly shifts the user's outline like an off-focus photograph, thereby obscuring any discerning marks or features. The mist-like illusion also causes his image to double or triple randomly, making him appear to be a hallucination. It essentially creates the effect of the user's body flickering from side to side across a one-meter area too fast for the eyes to track without the creation of after-images. This isn't to be confused with the user moving back and forth, this effect can solely be attributed to the genjutsu induced by the haze and will occur even if the user is standing still. This throws off techniques which require a clear line of sight or concentration on the user's position. This effect will occur regardless of the opponent's tracking speed. As for the user's techniques, their distorted image will depend on it's state of matter. Solid techniques will appear pitch black with red lines of light across them, liquid techniques will appear as blood, gaseous techniques will appear as a black smog and energy-based techniques will appear a dark-red colour. This lasts until deactivated.

Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used twice per battle

Approved - nice jutsu but i can already see how this will work xd

‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.