[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Method]

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Raiton: Raiton Tsume| Lightening Release: Lightening Claw[/B]
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by performing two handseals (Bird - Dragon), They then place both hands on the ground sending their Lightening chakra through the ground, as it reaches underneath the opponent it erupts through the ground in the shape of a Large clawed hand, the claws come around from either given side of the opponent and the palm emerges behind them & continues to wrap itself around the opponent. The palm spreads 3 meters out & the 5 claws extend to 2 meters , it surrounds the opponent and closes in clenching itself. When the opponent is caught he is electrocuted leaving them paralyzed.
- The opponent is paralyzed for 1 turn
- Useable twice per battle
- No Lightening Jutsu within the same turn
- Only taught by Method

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±± Declined ±± Claws and palm are too big.

Raiton: Raiton Tsume| Lightening Release: Lightening Claw
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by performing two handseals (Bird - Dragon), They then place both hands on the ground sending their Lightening chakra through the ground, as it reaches underneath the opponent it erupts through the ground in the shape of a Large clawed hand, the claws come around from either given side of the opponent and the palm emerges behind them & continues to wrap itself around the opponent. The palm spreads 2 meters out & the 5 claws extend to 1 meter each claw, it surrounds the opponent and closes in clenching itself. When the opponent is caught he is electrocuted leaving them paralyzed.
- The opponent is paralyzed for 1 turn
- Useable twice per battle
- No Lightening Jutsu within the same turn
- Only taught by Method
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-Declined- Similar Techniques exist.

Raiton: Taiden shita Kyōki |Lightning Release: Charged Madness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: The user begins by channeling their Lightning chakra throughout their whole body. Instead of releasing the chakra the user continues to contain it within their body having the vibration further increase leading to an excessive flow of chakra running throughout, Due to this the user's chakra begins leaking letting off short bursts of small electrical currents around their body(being small rapid bursts of current, they have no effect on the opponent, but slightly numb the user due to consistently being in contact with the skin).
Chakra also begins leaking within the user's body having small shocks randomly occur internally, as a result the user is sent into a "Shocked" adrenaline rush which is partnered with the slight numbness left throughout the body due to the bursts of shocks created, leaving the user unable to feel the pain of melee attacks, but having the body still bear the brunt of any damage done. Even though numb, the user's (being in a state of "Adrenaline Shock") muscle are forcefully pushed to be able to further tighten having the user able to clench their fist & add more force behind their strikes. While in shock, the user loses any sense of fear/doubt within themselves, basically having the user's body mainly act on striking the opponent or defending/countering from an opponent's attack(acting on reflex), making it harder for the opponent to predict how the user will react. The user having their muscles in a constant state of tension, leaves a Sharingan user having to predict movement as normal.
To continue the effects of this jutsu, the user is limited to B Rank or lower Lightning Jutsu as to not use too much of the contained chakra. Due to the constant vibration given off within the chakra flow, foreign chakra is unable to smoothly run through the network, having its effects negated(such as Genjutsu). This Jutsu aids in Taijutsu attacks, boosting damage given +15, speed & striking speed risen(Still viewable by normal eyes & still able to react to the user, but with great focus & being psychically prepared). After the jutsu ends, the user is left feeling any pain dealt from previous Taijutsu attacks & still having to wait for the numbness to subside, due to this the user is unable to defend from Taijutsu attacks without suffering an extra +5 damage.
Even though the user had constantly contained the chakra(acting as a reserve of sorts), due to the strain they are unable to perform jutsu up to a certain rank(B Rank) for a portion of the battle(Two Turns). Not having an actual form or shape such as an aura, Wind jutsu are treated as neutral when used to attack the user. The speed added from this jutsu is not stacked on to the speed of what the bio can achieve, speed is set to that of the description.
- Usable Once.
- Lasts Three turns.
- Only able to perform up to B Rank Lightning Jutsu whilst jutsu is in effect.
- Left with the described after effects for 2 turns.
- Can only be taught by Method.
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-Declined- You contradicted yourself with your description, look at the two colored portions, if you condense this much lightning chakra inside, it won't make you numb but rather "explode" from the inside out, chakra follow a pathway that's called the gates, condensing this much chakra with the gates being closed would lead to either messing up your chakra flow, or forcefully opening the gates, without proper training in the gates either way you'd die, also when you are numb you can't expect yourself to counter attacks easily, i like the concept that you thought of, but unfortunately it doesn't work in this RP.

Raiton: Raiton Āmu | Lightning Release: Lightning Arm
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 | +10 Each Turn
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by performing the Snake Handseal, as they do this their Lightning chakra begins coating both arms while the user presses both fists against each other, the user will then rapidly pull both arms out extending them to their sides as a long sharp blade of Lightning forms reaching out to 1.5 meter each blade beginning from the elbows. Due to the user's chakra continuously being pumped into the blade, it takes on a dense form allowing the blade to Slice through Solid objects with much greater ease (Like a hot knife through butter). Because the blade takes on a dense form it can also slightly burn on contact and as it is filled with the user's chakra, they are left unaffected.
- Can only use Lightning jutsu that do not require handseals while active.
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-Declined- Rip off from Chidori Sharp Spear technique.

X-All Pending-X Leaving for someone else

 

[Yveltal]

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(Raiton:Sekai Dōyō) - Lightning Release:World Shaking
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user will begin by raising their hand above their head, causing a ringed sphere of energy to form inside it. When the energy sphere is fully formed, the user will then hurl it toward the ground in the direction of the opponent. The sphere will then zigzag through the ground, causing a small tremor that causes the opponent to lose balance, then rise above the ground just before hitting the target.
Note:
-can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 3x

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±± Declined ±± Your description has a flaw: why does it cause a tremor? And the gif shows a different thing. What you describe appears to be not the same as what you want.

Resubmit-I've removed bold part <.<

(Raiton:Sekai Dōyō) - Lightning Release:World Shaking
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user will begin by raising their hand above their head, causing a ringed sphere of energy to form inside it. When the energy sphere is fully formed, the user will then hurl it toward the ground in the direction of the opponent. The sphere will then zigzag through the ground then rise above the ground just before hitting the target.
Note:
-can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 3x

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(Futon:Tenjin no Mai) - Wind Release:Sky God's Dance
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user rapidly nears the target, and, when they've gotten close enough to the target, rotates her torso while extending her arms outwards. This prompts a very massive, spiraling current of wind to be generated, which lifts the opponent several meters from the ground and harms them. After performing Sky God's Dance, the user can jump in the air to further assault the target before they have a chance to fall back to the ground, if she manages so.
Note:
-can only be taught by Kage Phoenix

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X-Declined-X There are already techniques that do that, and its C ranked? too low

 

[Robot Boy]

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kihonteki bouhatei) - Summoning Technique: Standard Mole
Type: supplementary
Rank: C
Range: short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/a
Description: After peforming the necessary handsigns, the user slams their hand on the ground to summon a mole. These basic moles vary in color and appearance. The standard moles are 12-15 cm and are mainly used to perform earth-based techniques up to C-rank without handseals.

Restrictions:
-Must have signed the mole contract.
-Requires a ground source.

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±± Declined ±± Link to contract?

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link to contract post #2293:

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kihonteki bouhatei) - Summoning Technique: Standard Mole
Type: supplementary
Rank: C
Range: short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/a
Description: After peforming the necessary handsigns, the user slams their hand on the ground to summon a mole. These basic moles vary in color and appearance. The standard moles are 12-15 cm and are mainly used to perform earth-based techniques up to C-rank without handseals.

Restrictions:
-Must have signed the mole contract.
-Requires a ground source.

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(Kuchiyose: Go-rudo Neko)-Summoning: Gold Cat
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user tosses a large scroll into the air above the targets head and summons a large golden statue of a grinning cat that drops down onto the target, resulting in gold coins scattering about it around the area.

Restriction:
-Must have been trained in ninjutsu.
-Can only be taught by fang.

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±± Declined ±± Why gold coin? Don't add useless restrictions. Off course you need training in ninjutsu...duh! :sy: its a ninjutsu technique... No handseals? no restrictions? no size of the cat? why gold coins?

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sorry about that. I removed the coin part.....

(Kuchiyose: Go-rudo Neko)-Summoning: Gold Cat
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user tosses a large scroll into the air above the targets head and forms the snake handseal to summons a large golden statue of a grinning cat that drops down onto the target, crushing them. The statue is the size of a standard toad statue found in Mount Myoboku.
Restriction:
- Can be used twice per battle..
-Can only be taught by fang.

X-Approved-X Maneki-Neko eh?
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Doryuzu) - Summoning Technique: Excadrill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a (+80 Katon)
Description:After performing the necessary handsigns, the user slams their hand to summon Excadrill. Excadrill is the second in command of the moles and one of the strongest among them under the boss. Excadrill is 45 cm and wears jagged axe-like armor pieces on his arms as well as a jagged axe-like helmet placed slightly covering his face. He uses his 'shovels' to aid him in digging or for striking his target. Unlike most moles who specialize in earth based techniques, Excadrill is the only mole to be able to perform fire jutsu up to S-rank without handsigns.

Restriction:
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Must have signed the mole contract.
-His Katon counts as a move.
-Requires a ground source.
-Lasts up to 4 turns.

X-Declined-X Do explain the bold part. And S rank techniques without hand seals is a no without any arguments.

 

[Bloo]

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(Genjutsu - Kuro jujutsu: gama) Illusionary Technique - Black magic: Toad
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will first perform 5 hand seal and place there opponent into a genjutsu. In the gen the opponent will see four toads appear, each toad is wearing traditional samurai armor with the kanji for toad on the armor, one toad appears at each cardinal point. The toads as soon as they appear lash out there tongues wrapping the opponent up. After being wrapped up by the toads tongues the opponent will then feel the tongues crushing them but in reality they are immobilized and open to attack.

-Usable twice per battle
-Can only be taught by Bloo
-Must be a signer of the toad contract.

X-Approved-X Increased the number of handseal, one is just instant.

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(Suiton: Shou sono senjo) Water Release: Call of the nymph
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-15 to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will channel there water chakra either into the air or into a existing water source. Then either using the moisture in the air or the water from the water source they will give it shape. The basic shape of the water is that of a female. The user can manipulate the looks of the basic shape any way that he desires but it still has to retain the basic female shape. The water nymph cant use any water jutsu's. The nymph is solid enough so that it can affect physical objects (i.e push and pull). The nymph can combine with the user forming a sort of water armor. The armor looks just like regular samurai armor. The armor can with stand one fire jutsu up to A rank. While the user is wearing the armor they take greater damage from lightning attacks.

-Usable once per battle.
-No water A rank and up for the next two turns.
-No lightning can be used while wearing the armor.
-Last three turns.
-Turning into armor counts as a move.
-The nymph can be regenerated twice per battle as long as it hasn't turned into armor and there is a water source to regenerate from.
-Can only be taught by Bloo.

X-Approved-X

(Hyouton: Yuki kami rokujou) Ice release: Snow god's anger
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user after using '(Hyouton no Jutsu) Ice Release Technique' to make it snow will perform one hand seal and causing the snow to clump together forming snowballs, up to four. The size of snowballs are as big as a fist. The user can have the snow assume any shape that the user desires but will still be the same size. The user will then launch the snow from the clouds having it attack the opponent. The user if they desire can perform another hand seal while the the snowballs are falling to have them combine together to increase the size of the snowballs, up to four times there normal size.

-Usable four times a battle

X-Approved-X

 

[Summer]

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Summoning Animal: Meerkat
Scroll Owner: Roju
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Description and Background:

Meerkat Anatomy and Appearance
The Meerkat is a small sized mammal that has a long and slender body with a long and light but black-tipped tail that can almost double the animal's total length. Meerkats are sandy to light brown in colour with eight darker stripes on their back, markings on their sides (which are unique to the individual) and a lighter face and underside. They have elongated muzzles with a black nose and dark coloured bands around their eyes. Meerkats have long, sharp claws on their front paws that are curved and can grow up to 2cm long and help them to both dig their burrows and to find small animals that are buried beneath the soft sand. The fur of the Meerkat has actually adapted remarkably to the differing desert conditions, not only helping to keep the animal cool during the boiling hot days, but also acting as a layer of insulation to keep it warm during the freezing-cold winter nights.

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(Katon furaingu hiranabe) Katon frying pan /Teflon
Type: custom weapon
Rank: S rank
Range: short-mid range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: this is a frying pan that is as tall as a shinobi around 5'9" tall. with a long handle from the pan itself. The pan is capable of generating katon release through manipulating Katon chakra. The user carry's it on the back similar to how you would carry a katana on your back with a strap. The pan itself is carried n your back with a leather strap. Now attacks for the pan can only be attacks not requiring any handsigns and which only require manipulation of the elements to form Katon release attacks. This weapon can utilize the multi size jutsu as well as this weapon was used by the akimichi clan women similar to how a akimichi staff enlarges in size while having multi size jutsu in effect. You can use the pan to redirect Katon attacks only up to s rank as forbidden techniques will warp the frying pan making it useless.

Note- can only redirect up to S rank Katon techs by using the frying pan.
Note- can only be used by Roju
Note- can only utilize up to 1 S rank katon technique per turn after requires a 1 turn cool down. Does not require cool down stage for A rank and below
Note- is a lightning conducted if hit by lightning the damage to the holder becomes severe.
Restrictions- only a akimichi bio can make the frying pan expand in size by having the multi size jutsu in effect.

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akimichi expansion size.

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 Declined  Excuse me? =_=
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(Akimichi Kata :Bubun Baika No koutetsu kawa shinchou) Akimichi Style: partial multi size armor shell expansion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user must first channel his or her chakra into the traditional akimichi armor thus expanding only the armor making it cover the user's body inside the armor so only the armor utilizes partial expansion thus the armor can block any and all projectile based attacks even elemental projectiles up to C rank. Will not hold up against paper bombs though. The armor infused with chakra basically sits on top of the user And expands into a shell which is being held up by the user. The user can reinforce the armor using his or her chakra to prevent an enemy from cutting through the armor.
*Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan
*user can on use this once per battle but will stay on the field 2 turns as is until expelled by the user.
*Can only be used/taught by Roju

X-Pending-X Leaving for Scorps.

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[Naruto Uzumaki Bijuu Sage]

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Bonnie and Clyde)- Summoning Technique: Bonnie and Clyde
Type: Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb then swipes it across his snake tattoo, After this is complete two king cobras appear coiled around the summoners arms, Bonnie is a pink is a cobra and is summoned on the summoners left arm, While Clyde is a black cobra and is summoned on the users right arm. Bonnie and Clyde are perfectly capable of speaking and are four feet in length and they each specialize in a elemental nature, Bonnie specializes in fire and is capable of using fire jutsu up to S-Rank and Clyde specializes in wind and is capable of using jutsu up to S-Rank, They use jutsu via there mouth and without the use of handseals. Twice per battle Bonnie and Clyde can release a surge of chakra around the summoner creating a sphere shaped barrier equal to an S-rank non elemental barrier, This barrier also disrupts the summoners chakra allowing the summons to break the summoner from A-rank and below genjutsu, But this also prevents the user from using jutsu while it's active.



Note: Bonnie and Clyde can only be summoned twice per battle.
Note: There is a three turn cool down period before they can be summoned again.
Note: Bonnie and Clyde can only stay on the battle field for five turns.

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±± Declined ±± OPED! Unreasonable! We don't allow summons with such abilities to last more than 4 turns nor do we allow summons to be summoned more than once. And you're summoning 2 summons which can be described easily as boss-level summons in their abilities. Make this reasonable or its a DNR.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Bonnie and Clyde)- Summoning Technique: Bonnie and Clyde
Type: Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb then swipes it across his snake tattoo, After this is complete two king cobras appear coiled around the summoners arms, Bonnie is a pink is a cobra and is summoned on the summoners left arm, While Clyde is a black cobra and is summoned on the users right arm. Bonnie and Clyde are perfectly capable of speaking and are four feet in length and they each specialize in a elemental nature, Bonnie specializes in fire and is capable of using fire jutsu up to A-Rank twice pre battle and Clyde specializes in wind and is capable of using wind jutsu up to A-Rank twice pre battle, They use jutsu via there mouth and without the use of handseals. Once per battle Bonnie and Clyde can release a surge of chakra around the summoner equal to an S-rank non elemental surge, This surge disrupts the summoners chakra allowing the summons to break the summoner from A-rank and below genjutsu, But this also prevents the user from using jutsu while it's active.



Note: Bonnie and Clyde can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Bonnie and Clyde can only stay on the battle field for three turns.
Note: The user cannot have any other summons out, While Bonnie and Clyde are summoned.

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kyo and warui)- Summoning Technique: Big and Bad
Type: Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb then swipes it across his snake tattoo, After this is complete two king cobras appear coiled around the summoners arms, Big is a light brown cobra and is summoned on the summoners left arm, While Bad is a dark brown cobra and is summoned on the users right arm. Big and Bad are perfectly capable of speaking and are four feet in length and they each specialize in a elemental nature, Big specializes in water and is capable of using water jutsu up to A-Rank twice pre battle and Bad specializes in lightning and is capable of using lightning jutsu up to A-Rank twice pre battle, They use jutsu via there mouth and without the use of handseals.


Note: Big and Bad can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Big and Bad can only stay on the battle field for three turns.
Note: The user cannot have any other summons out, While Big and Bad are summoned.

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X-Both Declined-X One last thing, do their techniques count as a move? Both summons are of elements that compliment each other

(Katon: fukuramu kaon nami)- Fire Release: Expanding heat sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user preforms the required hand seal Horse → Ox and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs. The user then exhales a huge, extremely hot, dense sphere of pure heat, This sphere is 5 meters in diameter and travels along the ground with tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. The sphere can rapidly expand either on command by using the Ram handseal or stay compressed and hit it's intended target, When the sphere expands it size grows 5-meters incinerating everything within.



Note:Can only be two times per battle.
Note:No katon for the following turn.

X-Declined-X Scorch release ability

 

[Shikago]

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(Chough Bunshin no Jutsu)- Chough Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique similar to Itachi's, the user produces clones by projecting their chakra towards dozens of choughs. Because it uses choughs as a medium, it requires less chakra than the normal Shadow Clone Technique, while still being able to perform techniques. When the clones are struck, or if the user servers their chakra from the technique, the clones will revert back into birds, which can cause confusion and distract their opponent, if they are happened to be caught within the sudden scattering of birds.
Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Chough contract
Note: Only usable when (Kuchiyose no Jutsu- Ishuu Chough)-Summoning Technique- Swarm of Choughs is active.
Note: Can only create up to two clones with each use
Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

X-Declined-X Which techniques can it perform?

(Chough Bakuhatsu)- Chough Explosion Detonation
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: C- B- A
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 15- 20- 30
Damage: 30- 40- 60
Description: Performing the bird hand seal, the user can cause any summoning relating to chough contract to detonate, whether it be the smaller choughs summoned in groups, to choughs considerably larger than the user. This jutsu also effects clones and other techniques that use choughs as a medium to explode.
Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Chough contract
Note: Can only be used while a Chough Summoning Technique is active
Note: Rank, chakra, and damage is detiremined by the rank of the summon used
Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

X-Declined-X Pick a single rank, and what is up with the kamikaze attack?

clap their hands[/b], summoning dozens to hundreds of choughs, which will fly around the target causing confusion with their dark forms and quick movement. With the target distracted by the birds, the ninja can strike more easily, using the shadows of the choughs as cover. They can also attack the target, using their beaks. When no longer needed, the choughs will disperse.
Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Kumonian Chough contract
Note: Last two turns
Note: Requires the use of a move if still active during the second turn
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu-Ishuu Chough)-Summoning Technique- Swarm of Choughs
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defense, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user will clap their hands, summoning dozens to hundreds of choughs, which will fly around the target causing confusion with their dark forms and quick movement. With the target distracted by the birds, the ninja can strike more easily, using the shadows of the choughs as cover, while the birds attack the target using their beaks. When no longer needed, the choughs will disperse.
Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Chough contract
Note: Last two turns
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

X-Declined-X Bold changes

 

[Wakizashi]

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(kuchiyose no jutsu: Okina Tsubasa) summoning technique: big wings
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a full grown Akamaru size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This toucan has a double the wingspan than normal toucan with his wings made of razor sharp, strong metals, that allows him to create up to A-rank wind jutsu wind with only a flap of his wings, slash his enemies for melee combat, and makes him more agile in high speed flight.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract

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Guardian's Sode
Type:weapon
Rank:S
Range:self
Chakra:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:N/A
Description: this weapon is ancient shoulder pad armor(sode) that is worn on the right shoulder which resembles the shoulder armor of the shodaime and nidaime hokages. this shoulder armor however, carries the spirit of an ancient swordsman that is able to communicate with the user wearing it thru telepathy, gives the user sensing ability allowing him to be constantly aware of everything around him, and grows x3 it's size to successfully defend from incoming A-rank elemental jutsu and S-rank basic ninjutsu as long as the user imputs chakra.
note-defensive ability usable twice per battle
note-sensory ability last 4 turns

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No, you can't sense everything with it, nor can it grow. Way too OP, tone it down.

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Guardian's Sode
Type:weapon
Rank:S
Range:self
Chakra:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:N/A
Description: this weapon is ancient shoulder pad armor(sode) that is worn on the right shoulder which resembles the shoulder armor of the shodaime and nidaime hokages. this shoulder armor however, carries the spirit of an ancient swordsman that is able to communicate with the user wearing it thru telepathy, gives the user sensing ability allowing him to be constantly aware of chakra around him, creates a repelling force short range from the user to successfully defend from incoming A-rank elemental jutsu and S-rank basic ninjutsu as long as the user imputs chakra.
note-defensive ability usable twice per battle
note-sensory ability last 4 turns

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[Akuma]

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(Suiton: Ijin's kagi Sutoringu) - Water Release: Devil's Eternal Sewings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description: The user will gather suiton chakra and send it underground through either their feet or hands, once done so the user creates a small but good enough water source under the target's feet, then the user will perform 1 handseal and manipulate the water under the opponent to rise in form of very thin but resistant strings of water composed of water and dense chakra, this strings will start sewing the opponent's shoes's bottom area where the opponent can't feel to the ground, this is done to both feet and despite the process it is done in less than 3 seconds, this helps to restrict the opponent to the ground only and forbid them to move or jump from their location. The target is not aware of this untill they try to move their feet.
- The water strings last 2 turns, unless they are countered before the 2 turns end.
- May be used x4 per battle, but not in consecutive turns.
- May only be taught by -Castiel-
||Declined|| Overpowered. 2 Turns? Really?

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(Suiton: Ijin Sutori) - Water Style: Devil's Eternal Sewings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description: The user will gather suiton chakra and send it underground through either their feet or hands, once done so the user creates a small but good enough water source under the target's feet, then the user will perform 2 handseals and manipulate the water under the opponent to rise in form of very thin but resistant strings of water composed of water and dense chakra, this strings will start sewing the opponent's shoes's bottom area where the opponent can't feel to the ground, this is done to both feet and despite the process it is done in less than 5 seconds, this helps to restrict the opponent to the ground only and forbid them to move or jump from their location. The target is not aware of this untill they try to move their feet.
- The water strings last 1 turn.
- May be used x4 per battle, but not in consecutive turns.
- May only be taught by Loki

X-Declined-X Can tiny strings of water really hold a person down?

(Raiton - ikazu kyuuden) Lightning Release- Thunder Palace
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long Range
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description:
User by first making the necesary handseals (rat→snake→rabbit→snake) creates multiple Electricity balls with certain amount of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target When the orbs are released, everything below the circle is struck by powerful lightning bolts. Leaving the opponent paralized for 1 turn.

*Note: Can only be used by Gildarts.
*Note: Usable 2 times per battle.

±± Declined ±± This isn't a B-Rank

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(Raiton - Bezurebubu) - Lightning Style: Beelzebub Palace
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
User by first making the necesary handseals (rat→snake→rabbit→snake) then creates multiple Electricity balls with certain amount of Lightning chakra compressed within them and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target When the orbs are released/activated by waving 2 last handseals, everything below and inside the area of the circles is struck by powerful lightning bolts. If the target(s) is hit by one of these blots, they are paralyzed for 1 turn. The user if wanted, can also manipulate each of the balls respectively and move them around in order to assault the opponent with a lightning strength of B rank, wich can paralyze for 10 seconds. This is an alternate version of the technique, where instead of releasing bolts from all of the balls/orbs at the same time, the user manipulates them themselfs. The user can manipulate from 1 to 3 orbs/balls at the same time only. If used within short range of the target, only 6 orbs may be placed above them, mid range 12 orbs, and long range 18 orbs.

- Can taught by Loki
- May only be used x2 per battle; not in consecutive turns.
- No A rank or higher lightning may be used the same turn.

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[Ciberr]

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(Meiton: Chikara Nigiri) Dark release: Force Grip.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will convert the absorbed chakra absorbed from Inhaling Maw send it throughout the battlefield silently. The user will then condense the chakra causing a hand consist of dark chakra to form anywhere there is said chakra. The hand will then travel at the opponents neck and begin to wrap around the opponents neck. Choking the target leaving him unable to breathe. This will also cause the targets vision to become blurry due to the force of the grip. If not stopped the hand can deal serious damage to the neck itself. Though the user can mimic the movement with his left hand as if he was actually choking the opponent, this will allow the user to crush the opponents throat if and only if the user mimics the movement of the hand. This restricts the users ability to use other justu if he chooses to do so. The released chakra used to initiate this justu cannot be seen by the normal eye.

-Only usable twice per battle.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.

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Okay, I like the idea, but I need to clarify a few things. First issue, no, you can't make the chakra invisible to the normal eye, secondly, I need to know more about the hand. When you mean, you can form it anywhere, how large is it? Is it just the hand? Where does it come from exactly? How long does it take to form?

(Meiton: Kuroi Ame Tooriame) Dark release: Dark rain shower.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short- long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will build up meiton chakra into his index finger and swipe it across the area of his choosing. This allows him to create an opening which expands similar to Sticky Earth Drop. The opening will fire countless amounts of thick metion needles down or at the area or target of the users choosing. The user can also swipe in front of him with the meiton charged index finger and create an opening in front of himself, which can combat attacks effectively blocking for the user in addition to firing them as usual.

When used from the sky:

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-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.

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Can't have the second part if you choose the first part. Also, need to know approximately how large the opening is and how long it lasts.

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(Meiton: Chikara Nigiri) Dark release: Force Grip.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will convert the absorbed chakra absorbed from Inhaling Maw send it throughout the battlefield silently. The user will then condense the chakra causing a hand consist of dark chakra to form anywhere there is said chakra. (Example, the user will "Disperse" the chakra around the area in a mistly like form. The mist is very thin and gives off a light blusish appeal. The hand itself is the size of a fully grown human male. Capable of completely wrapping around the neck of a fully grown human male. The hand takes no more than a a second or two to form. But the chakra must first spread throughout the battlefield, which takes one turn) The hand will then travel at the opponents neck at the speed of a wind infused kunai and begin to wrap around the it. Choking the target leaving him unable to breathe. This will also cause the targets vision to become blurry due to the force of the grip. If not stopped the hand can deal serious damage to the neck itself. Though the user can mimic the movement with his left hand as if he was actually choking the opponent, this will allow the user to crush the opponents throat if and only if the user mimics the movement of the hand. This restricts the users ability to use other justu if he chooses to do so.

-Only usable twice per battle.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.
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(Meiton: Kuroi Ame Tooriame) Dark release: Dark rain shower.
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short- long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will build up meiton chakra into his index finger and swipe it across the area of his choosing. This allows him to create an opening which expands similar to Sticky Earth Drop. The opening will fire countless amounts of thick metion needles down or at the area or target of the users choosing. The opening takes no more than 3-7 seconds to open and will fire down meiton needles on one and one target area only unless the user takes damage or the user cancels the technique which he can do with the snap of a finger. The needles are fired out in a spread out manner, like the image below depicts.

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-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Must be taught by Ciberr.

 

[Priest]

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Genjutsu/Suiton: Rosuto Sorrisu no Garathorne - Illusion Style/Water Style: Lost Souls of Galathorne
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After making 6 handseals, the user casts a genjutsu upon an opponent while he immediately follows up with water manipulation. This is an advance genjutsu/water combination where the opponent immediately sees himself bound from behind(like pretta path holding sage-Naruto while sucking his chakra) by an earthy creature that looks like an elvish golem which becomes stiff immediately leaving the opponent bound and unable to move. At the same time he is bound, another elf would rise 5 meters infront of the opponent holding a katana. This Figure is fully erect split seconds after the oponent is bound, then it pushes forward stabbing the opponent with its earthy katana. The katana would pierce through the opponent and into the first earthy figure binding the opponent and it becomes stiff too leaving the katana hanging through the opponent. In real life as soon as the genjutsu is trigered, the user kneads his suiton chakra underground, making an elvish humanoid golem made of water to rise from beneath/behind the opponent restricting him just like in the genjutsu. Everything in the genjutsu happens in real life but the only difference now is that both figures are made of water meaning the opponent takes the full damage the katana stab which in real life would be a katana made of water.
++No S-rank Genjutsu and water in the next turn
++Useable only twice per match
++Does not require water source
++Must be taught by Priest


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±± Declined ±± Smart but unreasonable and too high ranked. Also, change the name and this will need to have a note saying that it takes the same time to perform this as it takes to perform 2 techniques and it counts as two techniques. Btw, name change because elemental genjutsu is from NB Genjutsu only.

Magen: Rosuto Sorrisu no Garathorne - Demonic Illusion: Lost Souls of Galathorne
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After making 6 handseals, the user casts a genjutsu upon an opponent while he immediately follows up with water manipulation. This is an advance genjutsu/water combination where the opponent immediately sees himself bound from behind(like pretta path holding sage-Naruto while sucking his chakra) by an earthy creature that looks like an elvish golem which becomes stiff immediately leaving the opponent bound and unable to move. At the same time he is bound, another elf would rise 5 meters infront of the opponent holding a katana. This Figure is fully erect split seconds after the oponent is bound, then it pushes forward stabbing the opponent with its earthy katana. The katana would pierce through the opponent and into the first earthy figure binding the opponent and it becomes stiff too leaving the katana hanging through the opponent. In real life as soon as the genjutsu is trigered, the user kneads his suiton chakra underground, making an elvish humanoid golem made of water to rise from beneath/behind the opponent restricting him just like in the genjutsu. Everything in the genjutsu happens in real life but the only difference now is that both figures are made of water meaning the opponent takes the full damage the katana stab which in real life would be a katana made of water.
++No A-rank Genjutsu and water in the next turn
++it takes the same time to perform this as it takes to perform 2 techniques and it counts as two techniques
++Useable only twice per match
++Does not require water source
++Must be taught by Priest

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Suiton: Ase Shingai - Water Style: Sweaty Terror
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user infuses a large amount of suiton chakra into his sweat then he grooms himself shaking off the sweat by shaking vigorously the area of his body with sweat preferrably the head, then as the several tiny sweat proceeds away from him, he manipulates them using his suiton chakra contained in them, massively increasing their size and density giving them more destructive power as they proceed then is directed towards the opponent.
Note
++The user must be sweating before hand
++Useable 5 times per match
++Must be taught be Priest

X-Declined-X Similar to Water expansion

Pitohui Kuchyose: Kulios - Pitohui Summoning: Kulios
Rank: B
Type: Sup
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user smears blood on their palm, makes the neccesary handseals then presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Kulios in a cloud of white smoke.
Kulios is a small Hooded Pityohui with the size of a dog. He wears a blue armor on its back and a Kirigakure headband tied around its neck showing their loyalty to the village. However he is but with very large and light feathers even he as a whole is a very rare one among his species being enourmously lightwieghted which naturally grants him immense speed that he can only be traced by 3 tomoe Sharingan and Byakugan. He can communicate with his summoner through Pitohuian Language.
Abilities:
-Kulios can't use any Ninjutsu except for Pitohui arts.
-Has immense flying speed traceble not to normal eyes but 3 tomoe sharingan and Byakugan and although 2 tomoe sharingan and Rinnegan would have difficulty tracing it as they'll see its blurry after-effect but they can still able to react to it
-He can easily detect body presence/heat, spiritual pressure and heart beat which he would memorize at first contact. This allows him to locate people he has met before anywhere they might be.
-He also has some amount of neurotoxins though not enough to kill but can cause paralysis
-He can't be ridden as he's small and very light but can perch on its summoner's head without any stress/load on the summoner
Note:
-Paralysis from his neurotoxin only lasts for 2 turns
-Lasts on the field for 4 turns with 2 turn rest before being re-summoned
-Summoning must be taught by Priest
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[SSW Imp]

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Katon: Supernova
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:After sending a massive amount of Katon chakra to the users hand, the user will concentrate all of the chakra to his/her index finger. When enough chakra is channeled into the finger, the user will raise the finger straight into the air, there will be a red sphere that forms about an inch above the users finger. Soon, the ball will enlarge to about the size of a basketball. As the ball continues it will enlarge into the size of a beachball, until it grows into the size of a large boulder The user will then proceed to flick his finger forward pointing toward the location he is aiming. It will continue to grow in size as it move, the farther it moves, the more the size will increase. When the ball makes contact with anything, it will explode causing a blast the size of meteor to occur.
-Can only be taught/used by Kisamerox9
-Can only be used 3 times per match


Cortana
Type:Weapon
Rank: S
Range:Short/Long
Chakra:20 to activate; 10 to keep each turn
Damage:None
Description: Cortana is an artificial AI system created by high level scientists of the ninja world. Using the users chakra, Cortana appears on a 10 inch metal plate. Cortana can tell the user what he can't see, and has sensing abilities. After giving an intitial amount of chakra, the metal disk that floats around the user will release, and from the middle, a blue woman will apear that can speak to the user with the utermost respect. When the chakra is added Cortana stays with the user forever. Cortana can sense temperature, pressure and can hear slight sounds. Because Cortana is a very advanced piece of weaponry, the user must continue to add chakra, which can be added at any range. If Cortana is seperated from the user she can find her way back by telepathicly locating him, which she can only do with the user. Cortana can not use any jutsu as she is just a chakra produced hologram. If the user decides to drop the chakra adition, Cortana will fall to ground and the user will have to pick it up.
-Can only be used by kisamerox9
-Requires 10 chakra to keep active

X-Both Declined-X Follow proper templates, dont submit AI. And the Fire ball exists, make it different.

Summoning Animal:Camel
Scroll Owner:Kisamerox9
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing:None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None
Description and Background:A camel is an even-toed ungulate within the genus Camelus, bearing distinctive fatty deposits known as "humps" on its back. The two surviving species of camel are the dromedary, or one-humped camel, which is native to the Middle East and the Horn of Africa; and the Bactrian, or two-humped camel, which inhabits Central Asia. Both species have been domesticated; they provide milk, meat, hair for textiles or goods such as felted pouches, and are working animals. "Camel" is also used more broadly to describe any of the six camel-like mammals in the family Camelidae: the two true camels, and the four South American camelids: the llama and alpaca are called "New World camels", while the guanaco and vicuña are called "South American camels". A full-grown adult camel stands 1.85 m (6 ft 1 in) at the shoulder and 2.15 m (7 ft 1 in) at the hump. Camels can run at up to 65 km/h (40 mph) in short bursts and sustain speeds of up to 40 km/h (25 mph). The humps are actually reservoirs of fatty tissue: concentrating body fat in their humps minimizes the insulating effect fat would have if distributed over the rest of their bodies, helping camels survive in hot climates. When this tissue is metabolized, it yields more than one gram of water for every gram of fat processed. This fat metabolization, while releasing energy, causes water to evaporate from the lungs during respiration (as oxygen is required for the metabolic process): overall, there is a net decrease in water. Camels have a series of physiological adaptations that allow them to withstand long periods of time without any external source of water. Unlike other mammals, their red blood cells are oval rather than circular in shape. This facilitates the flow of red blood cells during dehydration and makes them better at withstanding high osmotic variation without rupturing when drinking large amounts of water: a 600 kg (1,300 lb) camel can drink 200 L (53 US gal) of water in three minutes. When the camel exhales, water vapor becomes trapped in their nostrils and is reabsorbed into the body as a means to conserve water. Camels eating green herbage can ingest sufficient moisture in milder conditions to maintain their bodies' hydrated state without the need for drinking. Camel urine comes out as a thick syrup, and camel feces are so dry, the Bedouins use it to fuel fires

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 Pending  It hasn't been done before but when we say background we mean pertaining to Narutoverse. Its where you explain the context of your contract's animals in narutoverse.

 

[BusinessManTeno]

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(Suiton:dedoko tsubasa)Water Style: Source Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: The user will do a set of 5 hands and then slap their hands together. This will manipulate the moisture in the air and the water in the users body causing 2 large wings (about 4 Meters long) to sprout on the side of the user. The water wing does NOT grant flight, but is used as a water source. The user is able to use up to 5 A rank and below water jutsus with this water source. The user can also manipulate the wings to guard against a incoming fire attack.
Note: Can only use once
Note: Blocking against a fire move counts as a turn
Note: Wings stay for 3 turns only

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±± Declined ±± Sorry but that wouldn't sprout enough water to use that many techniques from them.

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(Suiton:dedoko tsubasa)Water Style: Source Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a
Description: The user will do a set of 5 hands and then slap their hands together. This will manipulate the moisture in the air and the water in the users body causing 2 large wings (about 4 Meters long) to sprout on the side of the user. The water wing does NOT grant flight, but is used as a water source. The user is able to use up to 1A rank and below water jutsu each on each wing, allowing the user to be able to use a max of 2 A rank and below water jutsus through the water wings.The user can also manipulate the wings to guard against a incoming fire attack.
Note: Can only use once
Note: Blocking against a fire move counts as a turn
Note: Wings stay active for 3 turns only before dispersing

X-Declined-X Come on, be a bit more realistic here. The Size of the Water techniques is usually too great for those tiny wings to help it....

 

[ZandaT]

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(Phengaris no ikō) Migration of the Phengaris
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90(-15 to user)
Description: Once the user has taken the red Chilli Pill and its effects take place in the users body they channel their unique chakra into their hands while taking a wide stance with their arms bent by their ribcage, and their hands held out with their fingers close together and their thumbs bent inwards. They then highly condense their unique chakra and shape it around their hands rapidly layering the special chakra on top of each other with each layer being thin, hardened, and holding a tremendous amount of the special chakra. The user then begins to rapidly thrust their hands forwards in a random manner, at various angles in front of them, while exerting a tremendous amount of energy behind each thrust allowing the user to perform a great number of thrusts in mere seconds. The energy output of the thrusts causes the condensed chakra layers to be rapidly launched off of the users hands, which they then form into V shaped projectiles, creating a wave of numerous V shaped projectiles launched in a wide radius towards the opponent. Once the wave is released the user then manipulates all of the projectiles at once and claps his hands causing each V shaped projectile to break in two, multiplying the wave of the projectiles even more. The wave of projectiles reach a maximum of 6m long and 6m high making it a very hard jutsu to dodge. Due to the shape of the chakra projectiles and the amount of energy put behind them, the projectiles cuts through the air with little to no resistance allowing them to travel at barely trackable speeds. The opponent would only see a barrage of small blue blurs approaching them at high speeds. This results in the opponent being hit by multiple highly condensed high speed chakra projectiles back to back all over their body which cause bruises, bone fractures, bone displacements, and multiple lacerations. This jutsu is said to resemble thousands of small migrating phengaris butterflies which its name was based upon. This attack takes a lot out of the user physically, and can even kill a Three Colored Pill (3CP) user if done while they are exhausted, but those who have obtained Calorie Control have a less detrimental effect. This is a hidden NinTaijutsu of the Akimichi clan.
NOTES:
-3CP users can only use this 1x per battle
-This move takes away 1 turn away from their 3 turn win limit
-No Taijutsu or NinTaijutsu can be used next turn
-If used on turn 2 the user will die
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-CC users can use this 2x per battle
-With 1 turn in between uses
-No Taijutsu or NinTaijutsu above B Rank can be used next turn
-No ElementalNin. or Ninjutsu above A Rank can be used next turn
-Can only be taught by Zanda

X-Declined-X The technique is not possible. Ask me in PM if you want an explanation.

(Fūinjutsu: Soromon no fūin) Sealing Arts: Seal of Solomon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a special fūin seal made by Zanda. This seal is placed on the users body before battle and is small enough to fit on the user's wrist if they wanted. This seal consist of 8 small circles that surround a bigger circle and its main function is sealing away foreign chakra that tries to enter the users body. The seal starts off in absorption mode where it reroutes any foreign chakra trying to enter the body towards itself, closing 4 of the 8 circles, each time foreign chakra is sealed away. When all 8 circles are closed the middle circle then begins to close and where it will reveal two Kanji's for "Switch" on the surface of the closed middle circle. The user can then perform two hand seals at any time, where he will then channel his chakra towards his index and middle fingertips engulfing them in chakra, and place their two fingers on the "Switch" kanji where they will then turn the middle circle 180 degrees. This turns the seal on to its release mode where it will now have a direct link to the users chakra system. The middle circle will open and release the sealed away foreign chakra into the users chakra system so they can use most of it as their own. Due to not knowing how to create higher level fūinjutsu, the user will be able to add 1/3 of each foreign chakra amount absorbed, to their next two attacks boosting its power. Every time 1/3 chakra of each foreign chakra amount has been used then the 4 small circles will open up and once all 8 have open again the seal will vanish. This technique protects the user from foreign chakra attacks but prohibits the user from entering any modes that require foreign chakra while in absorption mode, because the seal would just absorb it.
NOTES:
-Must be stated in users bio
-This jutsu can be used 4x. Twice to absorb and twice to release
-SM cannot be activated while this seal is on absorption mode
-CM cannot be activated while this seal is on absorption mode
-Can only be taught by Zanda

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(Fuuton: Uwamuki ni sōan) Wind Style: Upward Draft
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals before taking control of the air currents around the battlefield. They will then channel all the air current towards one spot of the battlefield and once the currents from all sides of the field come together they push each other upwards towards the sky. This creates a constant upwards draft towards the sky that is large enough to encompass a short range radius in the spot of the users choosing and reaches to a medium range height. This draft is strong enough to lift a human off balance off of the ground and keep them in a hovering state, at this point they can regain their balance, above the ground as long as they are within the draft. Creatures with wings caught in the draft will lose control, due to the fact they will of gained to much lift, and they would be blown backwards out of the stream. A human can escape the stream by propelling themselves somehow out of the range. A big enough flying summon can easily escape the stream, and even disrupt it, by continuously flapping their wings. Wind techniques cannot be used within the stream nor can they enter the stream by outside means. Projecting fire techniques used within the stream will be blown upwards or misdirected if it is a strong enough jutsu. If a fire stream is used within the wind stream then the wind jutsu will canceled, but if the user uses a fire stream jutsu that enters the wind stream from the outside, they will combine to make a large Pyro pillar with increased strength. (Regular jutsu combination strengths apply). Fast moving jutsus with piercing abilities move through the stream unaffected by its lift due to its wind resistance.
NOTES:
-Jutsu lasts 2 turns
-Can be used 2x
-Has a 1 turn cooldown
-Other wind jutsu cannot be used in the same turn this is used
-Wind jutsu cannot be used while this is in effect
-Can only be taught by Zanda

X-Declined-X Again, too similar to existing techniques. And dont just simply submit a Wide area effect technique you could trigger anytime using 3 seals.

 

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(Katon: Pisuton no Jutsu) Steel Release: Piston Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
forming the hand seals Tiger → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse, the user coats their arm in metal and creates a piston-like attachment around it. When used as a taijutsu measure, the user can punch the opponent with the end of the piston and use their chakra to force their fist into the piston and hit the target with a second, harder impact. Also, if the user hits the ground with the piston, the second blow and can cause a mini-quake that can result in tremendous damage to the surrounding area. However, the piston is usually very heavy, so caution and precise timing must be used when utilizing the piston.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Must wait three turns before you use it again.
- Can only be worn for two turns due to how heavy the piston is.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

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(Koton: Pisuton no Jutsu) Steel Release: Piston Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
forming the hand seals Tiger → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse, the user coats their arm in metal and creates a piston-like attachment around it. When used as a taijutsu measure, the user can punch the opponent with the end of the piston and use their chakra to force their fist into the piston and hit the target with a second, harder impact. Also, if the user hits the ground with the piston, the second blow and can cause a mini-quake that can result in tremendous damage to the surrounding area. However, the piston is usually very heavy, so caution and precise timing must be used when utilizing the piston.
Notes:
- While the piston is active, the user is unable to perform any handseals.
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Must wait three turns before you use it again.
- Can only be worn for two turns due to how heavy the piston is.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

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(Fūton: Seikaku Bakufū) Wind Release: Pinpoint Shock-wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will perform the seals Dog → Rat → Monkey, then the user gathers a small, but intense amount of wind chakra in their fingertips, usually the index and middle finger. Then, the user gives their target a single tap. Upon contact, the wind chakra is released all at once and slams into the target, causing impact damage and sending them flying back. The user can jab their finger deeper to cause even more damage than normal and can use two hands to double the effects
X-Approved-X
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(Meiton: Inperiaru Kyuutai) Dark Release: Imperial Orb
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After using Dark release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemies technique, the user will perform one hand seal and then crosses his arms above his head to begin charging the jutsu, forming a small black orb which rapidly grows in size and also gains small white lights inside it, similar to the night sky. He then unleashes the orb at the target. The orb appears to be incredibly strong, and holds tremendous amount of power to crush its opponents. This technique is able to trap the enemy in itself. Once inside the enemy is surrounded by darkness and no sound, making the enemy terrified of the darkness. The person trapped in the technique is able to use water or earth techniques to escape from the orb.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
- Have to wait two turns before you can use it again.
- The target once trapped inside the orb can only use A-rank and below water and earth techniques.
- Wind/Fire/Lighting have no affect if trapped inside the orb as those elements will only increase the power of the orb.
- The user can only have the orb active for a max of two turns.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
X-Declined-X Why would he be terrified?

 

[Selendrile]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuinjutsu/Doton: Chikyū Ningyo no Ishi Suisō)- Sealing/Earth Release: The Earth Mermaid's Stone Aquarium
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user first will perform the required hand seals, Dragon → Boar → Snake. They then will direct their chakra into the ground, in the necessary location. The user will mold the appropriate creature, and cause it to "leap" out from the ground, where the creature opens its mouth and swallows the opponent's technique. By using the hardest minerals found in the ground, the inside of the creature is capable of swallow techniques without breaking apart due to the force. After the creature enters the ground once its first leap is finished, it performs another leap, spitting the opponent's technique back at them, mixed with sharp pieces of pebbles and rocks. This is done through several seals located inside the creatures mouth which seal and then unseals the chakra. The creature then returns underground and disperses back into earth/rock. The earth pebbles and rocks released by the creature are equal to C-rank. However, due to the opponent's technique being swallowed and returned, the technique loses a single rank once released back at the opponent (Ex: S-rank water is returned as A-rank water + C-rank earth). The creature is capable of swallowing techniques that have have up to a 5 meter diameter.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: No S-rank or higher earth on the same

X-Pending-X Leaving for scorps

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±± Declined ±± Sorry but fuuin is not only for the release part but also for the absorbing part. Earth doesn't have those properties. It may be able to suck in raw chakra (like some cannons) but you can't suck a technique into an earth technique. The sealing part needs more explanation and needs to be in a way that enables the seal to actually absorb the technique . However, one minor thing: releasing it already exists. There are seals that already absorb a technique and then release it back. So that part still needs to be worked out in a way that makes it unique and approvable. all in all, the principle and raw idea may be good but its still poorly explained and developed. Work on it much more.

(Fuinjutsu/Doton: Chikyū Ningyo no Ishi Suisō)- Sealing/Earth Release: The Earth Mermaid's Stone Aquarium
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user first will perform the required hand seals, Dragon → Boar. They then will direct their chakra into the ground, in the necessary location. The user will mold the appropriate creature, and cause it to "leap" out from the ground, where the creature opens its mouth and swallows the opponent's technique. This is done through several seals located inside the creature’s mouth which initially seal the chakra. By having multiple tags spaced along the circumference of the mouth, it reduces the concentrated force of the absorbed technique at a single point. Once swallowed, secondary seals located throughout the inside of the creature labeled with the kanji for, “Secrete” are activated. Depending on the element absorbed, these seals release the chakra onto the creature’s exterior, covering it in an armor of the absorbed element. After the creature enters the ground once its first leap is finished, it performs another leap at the opponent, covered in the armor. The leftover strength of the creature follows elemental strengths and weaknesses after absorption. (Ex: The creature absorbs an A-rank fire attack; the fire is secreted through its skin to cover it in an armor of A-rank fire + A-rank earth) This technique works best on techniques that have a mostly defined shape, and not on huge scale attacks like Wind Release: Pressure Damage.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: No S-rank or higher earth on the same turn; ; No sealing above B-rank next turn

X-Declined-X Are you allowed to submit S rank Fuinjutsu?

(Ginga no Hoshi)- Galactic Stars
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The Galactic Stars are a pair of bladed, sentient, shuriken ear-rings which are stuck to the user’s ears by chakra. When desired, the user can flow elemental or basic chakra into the shuriken to massively enlarge them up to four times the normal size of a windmill shuriken. With the added chakra coat that enlarges them, they stand more resistance to chakra infused attacks sent at the user. The bladed ear-rings can be used to defend from attacks, while the user can also detach them from the ears and send them spinning at the opponent. When levitating in the air, they are able to be passively controlled by the user to perform complex aerial maneuvers. Each shuriken has the power of an A-rank technique when enlarged. Once the user has finished utilizing the shuriken, they revert back to their normal size and rest once again on the user’s ears.
Note: Flowing chakra into one/both of the shuriken counts as a single move of the user
Note: Only wield-able by Selendrile

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±± Declined ±± I need you to define and restrict this hovering, gliding ability and how you induce and control these complex movements. Other than that, nice weapon.

(Ginga no Hoshi)- Galactic Stars
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The Galactic Stars are a pair of bladed, sentient, shuriken ear-rings which are stuck to the user’s ears by chakra. When desired, the user can flow elemental or basic chakra into the shuriken to massively enlarge them up to four times the normal size of a windmill shuriken. With the added chakra coat that enlarges them, they stand more resistance to chakra infused attacks sent at the user. The bladed ear-rings can be used to defend from attacks, while the user can also detach them from the ears and send them spinning at the opponent. The user is able to maintain complete control of them up to a mid-range distance. When levitating in the air, they are able to be passively controlled by the user to perform complex aerial maneuvers. This is achieved through processes similar to that used in the “Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken” technique. The chakra coating around the shuriken allows the user to manipulate and completely control their movements within the air. Each shuriken has the power of an A-rank technique when enlarged. Once the user has finished utilizing the shuriken, they revert back to their normal size and rest once again on the user’s ears. This enlargement ability can be used up to four times per battle.
Note: Flowing chakra into one/both of the shuriken counts as a single move of the user
Note: Only wield-able by Selendrile

X-Declined-X Everything else aside, why are they sentient? They have no reason to be

(Raiton/Futon: Kodoku to Furenjī, Appā Burū no Kyōdai)- Lightning/Wind Release: Solitude and Frenzy, The Siblings of the Upper Blue
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user performs two hand seals (Dog → Monkey), and then channels chakra into the sky. The user will either utilize existing weather conditions (doesn’t necessarily have to be chakra-related weather, as long there are clouds), or create their own clouds within the sky. The user will then release their chakra gathered within the clouds at incredible speeds, downwards onto the battlefield. Solitude, the stoic entity of lightning, and Frenzy, the mischievous entity of wind are released from their cages. They each stand eight feet tall, and are composed purely of their respective natures. When released from the sky, they are able to join together, having Solitude spin around Frenzy (or vice-versa) as they hurtle towards the ground. Additionally, each is able to hit different locations simultaneously. The speed and cutting power of their descent is so great that they can pierce up to five meters deep within the ground, and leave the area short range in all directions around their positions charred and destroyed if they choose to do so. To those without the aid of doujutsu, they merely appear as white and blue streaks in the sky. Once they hit the ground, they are able to rebound back upwards into the sky, to descend once again at a different time as long as they have not been destroyed/defeated.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable once per battle
Note: No Wind or Lightning techniques above A-rank in the next turn
Note: The user suffers from leg exhaustion (half of current speed) and cannot perform techniques that require more than four hand seals in the next turn.

X-Declined-X Two handseals, undefined shape of the creatures and the combination of Lightning and Wind simultaneously without Yin-Yang.
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Be more careful. I wont allow any exploits

 

[Nagato..]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Akira | アキラ
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description:

Somewhere along the lines of history, a boy named Tetsuo gained miraculous abilities within the ninja arts. His specialty was the usage of wind and sound release techniques and his name was known across the globe for how he was unrivaled in combat. That those who came to face him in battle were not known to survive. This was capable through a magnificent plating of armor cased around his right arm and shoulder plexus. It was forged form the finest indestructible alloys and constructed out of hundreds of pieces so that it fit the user like a glove. It slides onto the users arm and seals itself with fuuinjutsu edged into the alloy to respond to the users chakra unto the users body. He called this weapon Akira. Akira sustains itself by slowly extracting chakra form the user throughout the typical day so that sound waves are consistently compressed and ready for use.

Akira's ability is within its unique construct. Its constructed with inner hundreds of tiny holes and tubing that run along its form that compresses sound waves. For example: Like how a user would play a flute instrument by blowing air into the flute while holding the notes, thus compressing the air to form a tune. Akira makes use of that style by compressing the air that circulates around the user through the holes and from basic movement creating unique, compressed sound waves that the user can manipulate. Akira can also be thought of as a medium for performing sound techniques with ease and with more versatility pertaining to the weilders need.

Abilities Notes:

- Akira is a sound instrument that has the ability to project melodies or sound waves that reach up to long range and can be used for supplementary purposes.
- Using Akiras sound waves, it can be used to create small, medium and large, defensive sound barriers when sound chakra is applied that are short range from the user.
- Twice per battle the user is able to release a constant low frequency melody that attacks the inner ear of opponents, which initially causes slight dizziness and disorientation, preventing fast decision making and then if not defended or treated after one turn will cause temporary blindness and paralysis.

Restriction Notes:

- Must know sound release
- Small Defensive Barriers are C Ranked, Medium are B ranked, and Large are A ranked. (Small 4x, Med 3x, Lg 2x per battle).
- The low frequency melody & waves are A ranked, and the user cannot use Akira or any other sound techniques while releasing it, or any sound for one turn after its been stopped or finished. It can only be used twice per battle.
- Elemental Weakness and Strengths Still Exist

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±± Declined ±± Love the core idea and you worded it really well which is refreshing with the latest customs i've been checking the past hour. Here is what you need to edit: Shield form can only be used 3 times and make it only A-Rank and define its range and size. The twice per battle low frequency ability needs to be removed. Its too unreasonable and it mimics existing sound techniques although in a much more powerful variation. I assume you will submit the melodies separately and specify whatever is needed...if so, there is an issue: it will collide with ZK's Melody Arts and Roku's Music Arts and that will make it immediate DNR even if you have their permission.


Genjutsu: Eien no Toreddomiru | Illusion Technique: Eternal Treadmill
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user casts an illusion on the opponent(s) that triggers when they run or move about on the battlefield. It creates the illusion that they are actually running or moving to their desired destination when in reality their bodies are being pushed to the max by running in place, accelerating faster in a trans state affected by the illusion. If the ones targeted stop moving in the illusion, then it will appear as though they stopped running just as they were supposed to. Though in reality their bodies are still moving with the preempted thought to run making their heart race and stamina be pushed to the max eventually causing them to collapse from exhaustion and fatigue. After one turn, their bodies muscles begin to weaken making their actions slower then expected. After the second turn of running they begin to have shortness of breath and gasp for air becoming nauseated and dizzy. After the third turn their bodies begin to collapse form the strain on their physical body. If not stopped by the fourth turn, they will incapacitate themselves for one turn.

Note: This illusion works in a similar manner as False Surrounding & Sly Mind Affect, using the user and the environment to create the illusion they are moving as supposed to when actuality they aren't going where they desire.
Note: This illusion does not control the ones affected, only makes them believe theyre advancing to their location.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle. No other genjutsu can be used while this is active.
Note: No Genjutsu of S rank and below once its finished or canceled
Note: Must be taught by Nagato..

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±± Declined ±± No long range genjutsu. Also, i understand you can fool your opponent into thinking he is running when in fact he isn't or that is running and not getting anywhere but you cannot make him run and think he isn't running. Thats controlling his decisions and that is only possible with Sharingan genjutsu. You can control his senses, not his reasoning or decisions.

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Akira | アキラ
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description:

Somewhere along the lines of history, a boy named Tetsuo gained miraculous abilities within the ninja arts. His specialty was the usage of wind and sound release techniques and his name was known across the globe for how he was unrivaled in combat. That those who came to face him in battle were not known to survive. This was capable through a magnificent plating of armor cased around his right arm and shoulder plexus. It was forged form the finest indestructible alloys and constructed out of hundreds of pieces so that it fit the user like a glove. It slides onto the users arm and seals itself with fuuinjutsu edged into the alloy to respond to the users chakra unto the users body. He called this weapon Akira. Akira sustains itself by slowly extracting chakra form the user throughout the typical day so that sound waves are consistently compressed and ready for use.

Akira's ability is within its unique construct. Its constructed with inner hundreds of tiny holes and tubing that run along its form that compresses sound waves. For example: Like how a user would play a flute instrument by blowing air into the flute while holding the notes, thus compressing the air to form a tune. Akira makes use of that style by compressing the air that circulates around the user through the holes and from basic movement creating unique, compressed sound waves that the user can manipulate. Akira can also be thought of as a medium for performing sound techniques with ease and with more versatility pertaining to the weilders need.

Abilities Notes:

- Akira is a sound instrument that has the ability to project melodies or sound waves that reach up to long range and can be used for supplementary purposes.
- Using Akiras sound waves, it can be used to create small, medium, and large defensive sound barriers when sound chakra is applied that are short range from the user.

Restriction Notes:

- Must know sound release
- Sound waves and defensive Barriers are A ranked, and can be made big enough to protect two ninja if standing next to each other at close range. The barrier itself can be formed to about a meter distance from the user giving enough distance of protection from the opposing force.
- Defensive Barriers can only be used 3 times per battle
- Elemental Weakness and Strengths Still Exist
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(Ototon: Sando Bokkusu O Shindō) - Sound Release: Quaking Sandbox
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: -
Description: The user stomps on the ground, exciting their sound waves into the ground creating a vibrating force to shift the earth back and forth with sound vibrations bouncing off one another through the battlefield causing techniques within the earth or above to loose form and fall apart due to the resonating vibrations. The objective is to destroy the foundation to which how a technique forms or moves within the earth. The frequencies of the sound vibrations being concentrated are so intense that they vibrate enough to turn earth into fine sand where concentrated. Water rising from the ground just splatters around loosely, and other solid objects (crystals, earth related techs) just break apart. If people or summons are standing on the area affected, they will lose balance and become disorientated for a turn. If in mid air, the user must perform Tiger - Boar - Snake and then clap to do the same.


Note: Must know Sound Release
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Area affected depends on where the user channels sound chakra when stomping and lasts one turn or until the technique used to crumble is cancelled.
Note: No Earth Techniques can be used where the earth has been vibrated into fine sand.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No sound release of A rank and above for 1 turn.
Note: Elemental Weaknesses and strengths still exist
Note: Must be taught by Nagato..
||Declined|| Nice idea, but it's been done before.

Oroton: Mahō no yubi | Sound Release: Magic Fingers
Type: Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user rubs their index and thumb fingers together on either hands channeling sound chakra into them, allowing the friction to release a concentrated burst of sound waves towards the target. The sound wave originates from the fingers and is sent towards the target(s). The sound frequencies are controlled by how much chakra the user channels into his hands. It can be channeled high enough to shatter human sized boulders, and low enough to cause slight disorientation, and nausea to the human body. If a person was hit by full force they would be sent flying backwards with cracked bones and hearing loss for two turns.

Note: No S rank Sound this turn.
Note: Can only be used 4x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

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Oroton: Mahō no yubi | Sound Release: Magic Fingers
Type: Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user rubs their index and thumb fingers together on either hands channeling sound chakra into them, allowing the friction to release a concentrated burst of sound waves towards the target. The sound wave originates from the fingers and is sent towards the target(s). The sound frequencies are controlled by how much chakra the user channels into his hands. It can be channeled high enough to shatter human sized boulders, and low enough to cause slight disorientation, and nausea to the human body. If a person was hit by full force they would be sent flying backwards with cracked bones and hearing loss for two turns.

Note: Must Know Sound Release
Note: No S rank sound next turn.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..
||Declined|| Again, similar technique exists.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Time Wizard's Staff
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The Time Wizard's Staff is a 2 meter long staff found years ago by the user. The handle is a light blue with a gold spike at the bottom and at the top is a small red, blue and gold clock. The strange material that forged the staff ages ago is indestructible, has shown no signs of rust or decay and appears to be some kind of non-magnetic metallic alloy as Magnetic ninja have attempted to magnetize it and failed. Despite its strange coloring and simple design the staff posses a unique power, when held in a proper wielder's hand the staff is able to be used as a medium for a powerful Genjutsu, the hands of the clock spin and when they stop any enemies that the user inserts his chakra into is induced into an illusion where time rapidly speeds up around them and their bodies age 100 years in a matter of seconds. After years of using the weapon the user was able to control his flow of chakra through the weapon to be able to cast his own genjutsu through the staff as well not only the staff's unique illusion, however at the cost of spending extra energy to cast the same illusions he would normally be able to perform with hand seals. When casting other Genjutsu the face of the clock flashes red and blue.
If a person who has not been accepted by the staff touches it they will be placed in an S rank illusion where their entire body ages rapidly and their body dissolves into dust in a matter of seconds rendering them unconscious, even if it's chakra is initially rejected it will continue to pour chakra into the enemy body until either the illusion sets in or the constant flow of foreign chakra destroys all of the tenketsu in their arm.
-Can only be held by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only use the Time Genjutsu once per battle. Genjutsu is A rank, lasts 3 turns and counts as one of the user's jutsu use.
-Can't cast any Genjutsu for 2 turns after using Time Genjutsu
-Time Genjutsu reduces the enemy's taijutsu ability to C ranks and cuts their hand seal and running speeds in half.
-Other Genjutsu used through this weapon costs an additional 20 chakra to use but maintains the same rank of power.
-Must be holding the staff to cast any Genjutsu with it.

pic for reference, the staff he's holding but longer

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±± Declined ±± DNR.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sun Wukong Hebereke ) - Summoning Technique: Wukong the Drunk
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the 5 great Monkey warriors that serve under Monkey King Enma, Wukong is 2 meters tall, wears a sake-stained white shirt and a blue sleeveless Haori over it with his name written on the back and white pants. Under his clothing Wukong's body is covered in brown fur. Wukong carries a jug of Sake and his black steel Bo with him at all times.
Wukong is a close combat expert with speed that matches Enma however he lacks the same raw strength as Enma due to his lack of training as he is more often then not, drunk. Due to his near constant state of intoxication he has become a natural in the drunken monkey style as well as being very proficient with his Bo.
Twice per battle Wukong is able to infuse his Bo with chakra and strike an attack or enemy with it, discharging the chakra into the target and causing great damage from a blunt chakra discharge that shatters Earth techniques up to A rank and cause bone shattering damage to a human body.
His speed is comparable to a Sage Ranked Taijutsu master and his strength is easily comparable to that of the 4th Raikage without his Lightning Armor, Wukong is capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and not taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below.
-Requires monkey contract.
-Chakra strike counts as a move and can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be summoned once and lasts 4 turns

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Chen Ishi) - Summoning Technique: Chen the Stone
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the 5 great Monkey warriors that serve under Monkey King Enma, Chen is 2 meters tall, wears black and green armor similar to a samurai including the helmet (without a face mask) and a green haori over it with his name written on the back. Chen also wields a black steel Sasumata in one or both hands with great skill. Under his armor his body is covered in brown fur. Chen is the Monkey warrior with the greatest Defense next to Monkey King Enma's indestructible staff form, being able to use Earth Release to harden his body to the levels of steel which gives him a B rank defense while active. His special training has given him equal strength to that of even Monkey King Enma however at a loss of his speed. His speed is comparable to a Sannin Ranked Taijutsu master but his strength is easily comparable to that of Hashirama with chakra enhanced strength.
Chen is capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and is immune to taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below (B rank and below while in his hardened state). Like Enma, Chen is able to transform into a specialized weapon in the form of a black bodysuit that covers the user's limbs up to the ankles/wrists and their torso up to the neck, in this form his defensive powers surpass their previous levels and can defend from up to A rank attacks to the user's body within reason.
-Requires monkey contract.
-Transformation counts as a move.
-Can only be summoned once.

(have 2 more monkeys to submit as a set next week. Sarutobi bio approved here for proof of Monkey contract:

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±± Declined ±± Suit part is unreasonable. If i approve this you can become imaune to -A-Rank attacks for the rest of the match once you summon him. Ridiculous. Next time i'll dNR directly.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Chen Ishi) - Summoning Technique: Chen the Stone
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the 5 great Monkey warriors that serve under Monkey King Enma, Chen is 2 meters tall, wears black and green armor similar to a samurai including the helmet (without a face mask) and a green haori over it with his name written on the back. Chen also wields a black steel Sasumata in one or both hands with great skill. Under his armor his body is covered in brown fur. Chen is the Monkey warrior with the greatest Defense next to Monkey King Enma's indestructible staff form, being able to use Earth Release to harden his body to the levels of steel which gives him a B rank defense while active. His special training has given him equal strength to that of even Monkey King Enma however at a loss of his speed. His speed is comparable to a Sannin Ranked Taijutsu master but his strength is easily comparable to that of Hashirama with chakra enhanced strength.
Chen is capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and is immune to taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below (B rank and below while in his hardened state).
-Requires monkey contract.
-Hardening technique counts as a move.
-Can only be summoned once lasts 4 turns.
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-Declined- Equal Strength to that of Hashirama Senju with Chakra Enhanced Strength? don't resubmit.

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(Ninpo: Soshi Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Elemental Shruiken Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user charges his choice of elemental chakra into a thrown weapon and performs 5 hand seals multiplying the chakra into elemental clones of the weapon, they all appears to be normal solid weapon clones but when they strike a solid object they disperse into their raw state like an elemental shadow clone. Because elemental manipulation is more difficult then raw chakra manipulation it can't make as many clones as the parent clone technique. This technique can create up to one hundred weapon clones.
-Three times per battle.
-No other A rank or above ninjutsu the same turn.
-Can make clones of any Element the user has mastered.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
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-Declined- Rip off from the generic Shuriken Shadow Clone technique, which can already do all that.

(Genjutsu: Okashi Kujiku) Illusionary Technique: Candy Crush
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: While the opponent is under the effects of Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam, the user will further manipulate their chakra flow and induce a more powerful second genjutsu by making a gripping motion with the hand they cast Candy Beam with much like Gaara's Sand Burial technique. The opponent's mind, currently fooled into thinking the body has been transformed into a candy structure will be broken apart or otherwise destroyed causing severe mental damage and stunning the opponent for short time. The mental damage ends the genjutsu however the damage caused will be enough to force even other skilled genjutsu users to their knees after feeling like their entire body was crushed in the user's hand.
-Once per battle.
-No Genjutsu the next 3 turns.
-No other S rank Genjutsu the same turn.
-Must know Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam to use.
-None or one rank difference between user and opponent will only stun the opponent for 10 seconds at most, 5 for Genjutsu specialists. Two or three ranks will stun them for 15 seconds. Four will stun them for 30 seconds. More then four rank difference will render them unconscious.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
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-Declined- Too OP, generic for an S-ranked genjutsu technique which needs to be more complex.

(For reference here is the Genjutsu that is required to be in effect to use)

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(Genjutsu: okashi sen) Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User points at the opponent which places a genjutsu on them which makes it seem as if a pink beam of energy is fired from the user's finger at lightning fast speed which transforms the opponent into a candy version of themselves, paralyzing them since food can't move.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-3 times per battle.

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Lemur
Scroll Owner: Vayne
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Lemurs are mammals also known as the primates of the ninja world...

Finding: The lemur are a peaceful bunch, they lived a peaceful and calm life; never partaking in the mischiefs of the ninja world nor forming an alliance with shinobi. They lived a calm life, that was until the faithful day; it was a day like no other, for some reason a boy called Vayne had been reverse summoned into the land of Lemurs. The Lemurs at first attacked the boy but the boy simply took the attacks, nothing snazzy was made, he simply refused to hurt innocent animals despite them attacking him. This action lead to the chief of Lemurs approving the boy worthy, worthy of being the successor of the Lemur contract.

Location: The lemurs reside -as do all summons- in a place unique to them. Lemurs are inhabitants of a place dubbed "The Land of Bliss" the land outstretched a distance equivalent to that of Land of Fire, and naturally in such a big land a large variety of Lemurs lived. After the forging of the contract with the human Vayne recreational centers were created as well as human worthy dormitories, this was done in order to provide comfort and rest to those lucky few that sign the contract. Also there is a pond a chakra pond in the land of bliss, this pond is only usable by the lemurs, through this pond the lemurs can 'keep tabs' on the user, this is in order to reverse summon the user when they are in a pinch.(Just a pond to avoid meta-gaming)

Abilities: Upon the various Lemurs only a select few are combat ready, but despite being low in numbers there attack force is great almost insurmountable. Lemurs have the ability to communicate telepathically with the signers of the contract, they are also generally well skilled with the usage of their tails, this helps them greatly in battle, it provides them with a advantage over humans and summons alike since their tails act as an extra arm. Furthermore Lemurs are skilled with Taijutsu this is due to the fact that they can stand on their hind legs, and basically live off food that is located in locations that are "hard to be reached under normal circumstances; trees for example" Also due to them being Nocturnal animals they gain a +15 to damage delivered by them when fighting in the night, conversely they have a -10 damage to techniques delivered by them during daytime.

I will also like to take ownership of the sub-species related to Lemurs.

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 Declined  Exists already

Judgment -*Hanketsu
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:*
Description: Judgment is a pair of cloves created to those of the Bartholomew clan. The gloves were formed through countless years of trial and error, with those years the gloves gained special abilities;
-The gloves gave a damage boost to all Bartholomew clan techniques through a device located on the outer part of the gloves, the devices lead to the amplification of the speed rate and damage delivered by the used technique. It gave a massive +15 damage to the technique, and a speed boost equivalent to 1.5X more.
-The device on the outer part also had the ability to shoot small needles from the 'holes' on the outline of the palm. The needles were made up of the special chakra that the Bartholomew used, in essence it was like a basic repel technique of the Bartholomew, but in a more compressed form. The needles were of B rank equivalent and can only be used 3X per battle.
-From the inside of the gloves the inner part of the device had an ability that can only be used once per battle, it 'massaged' the palms of the user, with the massage any damage done to the palms of the user via Bartholomew techniques(the ones that prevent paw art techniques for X turns)and will lead to the user regaining the ability to use the technique, for example a technique requires that after being used the paw arts can't be used for 2 turns, with the massage the 2 turns are took away. The maximum turns that the gloves can 'negate' are two.
-The user will get a +10 damage to himself when hit by lightning and fire techniques, since the gloves have the reverse function of the first ability.
-All abilities count towards the jutsu limit of the user.
-Gloves only usable by members of the Bartholomew clan.
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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[Blizzàrd1]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

[Genjutsu: Ware] Illusionary Arts: Is it him?
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: User casts illusion on the opponent. In that illusion the user makes a duplicate of himself where the real user vanishes from opponent's eye. The illusionary user now becomes the body of the user. Whatever jutsu is used by the real user, in illusion, is used by the imaginary copy of the user. All actions performed by the user, in illusion, are performed by the copy of the user. All real actions are mirrored by the copy version of the user and the real ones stay invisible to the opponent.
Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.

Leaving for Scorps or Xylon, as I am still a bit dubious regarding Genjutsus.

X-Declined-X Very Generic, cant you do the same with servant or haze clone?

[Genjutsu: Ware] Illusionary Arts: Is it him?
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: User casts illusion on the opponent. In that illusion the user makes a duplicate of himself where the real user vanishes and is replaced by the illusion for opponent's senses. The illusionary user now becomes the body of the user. Whatever jutsu is used by the real user, in illusion, is used by the imaginary copy of the user. All actions performed by the user, in illusion, are performed by the copy of the user. All real actions are mirrored by the copy version of the user and the real ones stay invisible to the opponent. The illusionary user however can move in different directions but the moves performed are always the same as what the user performs, so an attack could come from a different direction in illusion than in reality.
Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.
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-Declined- Still too generic, and same thing can be done through the Mist Servant Illusion Technique.