Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Above ^^^^ in the spoiler is my old CW im dropping for this one below.
(Tenrai ryu setsudanki)- Divine Dragon Guillotine
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The Dragon Guillotine is a weapon made up of seventy two blades that are located on the users back made of an indestructible metal, the blades are reactant to the users chakra moving at the users will as independent limbs. The seventy two blades appear as wings coming from the users back, made up of more chakra absorbing metals. Each of the blades is attached to one another by a thin chakra absorbing metal wire which pull and push the blades while each of the blades is a separate blade they are all connected by the wire. The Dragon Guillotine is able to act separate and in unison with one another, able to be used while they are loose able to be used as a whip like weapon or a single blade, even able to release a small number of the blades from the tips of the wings and they return. The Dragon Guillotine while attached to the users back is able to allow the user to sense the opponents chakra, locating them on the field at all times with great accuracy. The wings can reach to the furthest part of mid range with ease. The wings are also able to release the users elemental affinity from the seventy two blades just by swinging the blades at the opponent.
= Only able to release four total blades from the tips of the wings, per move.
= Having the blades return once released takes 1 post.
= The sensing lasts for four turns once activated, then takes another two turns before it will allow the user to sense again.
= The elemental affinity use can only release a C – S rank jutsu, and is only able to be released via the wings once per turn.
Pending
Not too sure about such a weapon, so leaving for another checker.
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±± Declined ±± Why is this weapon forbidden ranked? No. Also, to drop a weapon you need to link the post where the weapon was approved if you haven't the ability to quote it anymore. If you do, simply quote it.
Below are some Blast Release cj's here is my Blast Release Bio
(Bakuton: Gahou): Blast Style: Tiger Claw
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses their Blast Release through their fingers, then slams their palm into the enemy with their fingers similar to a claw. Each finger causes a small controlled blast from the finger tips. The power of the technique is able to cause opponents to bound away from its strength and is also known for piercing through steel with its force. Due to the direction of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated.
- Can only be used 3 times per fight.
Approved
Removed the part about the fact it lasts for a full move, that sounds a bit too much. Also, you wouldn't be able to form handseals, no?
(Bakuton: Onigoroshi) Blast Style: Ogre Killer
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by utilizing their Blast Release in the palm of their dominate hand, and then following the same process as the rasengan only difference would be the size of the Ogre Killer is slightly smaller. The Ogre Killer can be thrown out to long range from the user and once the ogre killer makes contact with anything it will explode into a fury of debris, the explosion covers short range of the ogre killers contact point.
= Can be used 4 times per battle.
Pending
Sounds too similar to existing techniques. Leaving for someone else to double check.
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±± Declined ±± DNR
♰ (Akumaitosen)- Devils Threading Wire ♰
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The Devils Threads is a weapon that was made by an old semstress and her husband a black smith, they both worked on the Devils Threads for many years only to have it stolen from them, by -Tauburn-. The Devils Threads are wrapped around the users wrists and fingers under the users gloves or around the gloves, the thread are very flexable and cant be broken from use of any other weapons. The Devils Threads is a shape tranformation weapon, given enough chakra will harden into a solid sheild like shape, or a weapon of any kind, even into indiviual stradess that will bind the opponent. The threads are only able to channel Fire and Lightning chakra thoughout the thread, if any other element is used the threads wont even respond to the users chakra. The threads themselves are made out of a thin chakra absorbing metal, that will give shape to the users will, The threads also have silk braided into the chakra absorbing metal threads, giving the thread a greenish tint from the silk.
C -Rank - 20 chakra/30 damage: Will create shapes out of the threads to make a strong defence/offence againist attacks, while giving the threads shape for a extended amount of time.
B -Rank - 25 chakra/40 damage: The user will channel chakra into the threads and munipulate them into a weapons shape Meaning the weapon will have the same weight of a weapon and the same sharpness of a weapon.
A -Rank - 30 chakra/ N/A damage: The user will release chakra into the threads, then control the threads to wrap around the opponents body restraining him. (Arms, legs, neck, wrists, figers, and ankles.)
S -Rank - 40 chakra/80 damage: The user will channel lighting or fire chakra through out the Devils Threads and use them to attack the enemy. Lightning will hit the opponent and give them a numb feeling for 30 secs, while if the user channels fire chakra throughout the thread the opponent will receive critical burns if hit by the thread.
>- The weapons techniques count towards the jutsu per turn
>- Can only be used by -Tauburn-.
>- Can only be used once per turn.
>- The threads can only be used 3 times for the techniques above A-Rank.
>- The threads are always connected to the user and will not be usable if said connection is severed.
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The Devils Threads is a weapon that was made by an old semstress and her husband a black smith, they both worked on the Devils Threads for many years only to have it stolen from them, by -Tauburn-. The Devils Threads are wrapped around the users wrists and fingers under the users gloves or around the gloves, the thread are very flexable and cant be broken from use of any other weapons. The Devils Threads is a shape tranformation weapon, given enough chakra will harden into a solid sheild like shape, or a weapon of any kind, even into indiviual stradess that will bind the opponent. The threads are only able to channel Fire and Lightning chakra thoughout the thread, if any other element is used the threads wont even respond to the users chakra. The threads themselves are made out of a thin chakra absorbing metal, that will give shape to the users will, The threads also have silk braided into the chakra absorbing metal threads, giving the thread a greenish tint from the silk.
C -Rank - 20 chakra/30 damage: Will create shapes out of the threads to make a strong defence/offence againist attacks, while giving the threads shape for a extended amount of time.
B -Rank - 25 chakra/40 damage: The user will channel chakra into the threads and munipulate them into a weapons shape Meaning the weapon will have the same weight of a weapon and the same sharpness of a weapon.
A -Rank - 30 chakra/ N/A damage: The user will release chakra into the threads, then control the threads to wrap around the opponents body restraining him. (Arms, legs, neck, wrists, figers, and ankles.)
S -Rank - 40 chakra/80 damage: The user will channel lighting or fire chakra through out the Devils Threads and use them to attack the enemy. Lightning will hit the opponent and give them a numb feeling for 30 secs, while if the user channels fire chakra throughout the thread the opponent will receive critical burns if hit by the thread.
>- The weapons techniques count towards the jutsu per turn
>- Can only be used by -Tauburn-.
>- Can only be used once per turn.
>- The threads can only be used 3 times for the techniques above A-Rank.
>- The threads are always connected to the user and will not be usable if said connection is severed.
(Tenrai ryu setsudanki)- Divine Dragon Guillotine
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The Dragon Guillotine is a weapon made up of seventy two blades that are located on the users back made of an indestructible metal, the blades are reactant to the users chakra moving at the users will as independent limbs. The seventy two blades appear as wings coming from the users back, made up of more chakra absorbing metals. Each of the blades is attached to one another by a thin chakra absorbing metal wire which pull and push the blades while each of the blades is a separate blade they are all connected by the wire. The Dragon Guillotine is able to act separate and in unison with one another, able to be used while they are loose able to be used as a whip like weapon or a single blade, even able to release a small number of the blades from the tips of the wings and they return. The Dragon Guillotine while attached to the users back is able to allow the user to sense the opponents chakra, locating them on the field at all times with great accuracy. The wings can reach to the furthest part of mid range with ease. The wings are also able to release the users elemental affinity from the seventy two blades just by swinging the blades at the opponent.
= Only able to release four total blades from the tips of the wings, per move.
= Having the blades return once released takes 1 post.
= The sensing lasts for four turns once activated, then takes another two turns before it will allow the user to sense again.
= The elemental affinity use can only release a C – S rank jutsu, and is only able to be released via the wings once per turn.
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Not too sure about such a weapon, so leaving for another checker.
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±± Declined ±± Why is this weapon forbidden ranked? No. Also, to drop a weapon you need to link the post where the weapon was approved if you haven't the ability to quote it anymore. If you do, simply quote it.
Below are some Blast Release cj's here is my Blast Release Bio
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and i spoke with Cali he said i get the training auto for bakuton, since there is no sensei who teaches it. Link to Convo just in case,
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(Bakuton: Gahou): Blast Style: Tiger Claw
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses their Blast Release through their fingers, then slams their palm into the enemy with their fingers similar to a claw. Each finger causes a small controlled blast from the finger tips. The power of the technique is able to cause opponents to bound away from its strength and is also known for piercing through steel with its force. Due to the direction of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated.
- Can only be used 3 times per fight.
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Removed the part about the fact it lasts for a full move, that sounds a bit too much. Also, you wouldn't be able to form handseals, no?
(Bakuton: Onigoroshi) Blast Style: Ogre Killer
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins by utilizing their Blast Release in the palm of their dominate hand, and then following the same process as the rasengan only difference would be the size of the Ogre Killer is slightly smaller. The Ogre Killer can be thrown out to long range from the user and once the ogre killer makes contact with anything it will explode into a fury of debris, the explosion covers short range of the ogre killers contact point.
= Can be used 4 times per battle.
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Sounds too similar to existing techniques. Leaving for someone else to double check.
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±± Declined ±± DNR
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