[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

New weeks submission, decline if i posted early. Its thursday over here,

Wind style; Turbulence (Fuuton; fuon)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Entire feild
Chakra cost: 40
Damage; 80
Description; A tremendous blast of wind, that increases the air pressure in most of the battle field which cause deafness and lessening of oxygen.
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Forbidden Fire style; Hells shine (kinkaton no jutsu; Naraku terasu)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost; 50
Damage; 80
Description: An attack that releases an invisible flame in the air which burns down the targets, it is difficult to avoid it even with time/space(unless if

you could judge the flame). By drawing hydrogen particles near then burning them in the preasence of oxygen in the air creates a partially invisible flame,

unseen normaly. Inhaling it causes instant death.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle. Doujutsu can see through this.
-Based on real life science.
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Wind style; Turbulence (Fuuton; fuon)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage; 80
Description; A tremendous blast of wind, that increases the air pressure in most of the battle field where the attack is directed towards, which cause deafness and lessening of oxygen. The effect wears off after 2 turns.
Note; Usable only 3 times

|Declined|

Forbidden Fire style; Hells shine (kinkaton no jutsu; Naraku terasu)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost; 50
Damage; 80(30 to the user)
Description: An attack that releases an invisible flame in the air which burns down the targets, it is difficult to avoid it even with time/space(unless if you could judge the flame). By drawing hydrogen particles near then, burning them in the presence of oxygen in the air creates a flame releasing ultraviolet rays instead of ordinary, creating a partially invisible flame.
Note; Can only be used 2 times in a battle. Doujutsu can see through this, but gets the user of the doujutsu blind slowly if seen too much of it(Effect of ultraviolet light rays), The opponent have to stay in the doujutsu state to see properly.
-Based on real life science.

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(see the combustion part)

|Declined|
Similar Jutsu exist, + Hyrdogen is a CE

Earth Style; Ground Dasher (Doton; Daichiyakushin)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stomps on the ground that first makes a tomb of earth binding the opponent tight, then the user stomps again the brings rock out of the ground that goes rushing towards the opponent. The opponent gets crushed if he is underground due to flipping of the earth and stomping.
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|Declined|

Earth Style; Ground Dasher (Doton; Daichiyakushin)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-mid
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stomps on the ground that first makes a tomb of earth binding the opponent tight, then the user stomps again the brings rock out of the ground that goes rushing towards the opponent. The opponent gets crushed if he is underground due to flipping of the earth and stomping.
Note; Usable 3 times only.
|Declined|
Similar Existing Jutsu
Credit goes to HBA fro helping me with above techniques so he's technically co-creator

Just trying if this'll get approved o.o
Ninja art; Secret ink seal method (kakushigoto sumi fuinn no shikata)
Rank; B
Range; Sort-Long
Type; Supplementary
Chakra cost; 15
Damage points; N/A
Description; A special technique Minato uses to control and turn ink from any source into small animals, normally undetected. When needed Minato does a single handed tiger seal and turns the ink into the seal he utalizes to teleport. The location and surroundings of the ink animals is alway detectable by Minato.
Note; Only Minato Namikaze can perform this.
|Declined|
Sounds more like a sai technique

Mad Dance of Infinity (kichigai odori no mugendai)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Mid
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 30
Damage; Depending on attack.
Description; A Taijutsu style Minato uses with combination of his time/space, using stunning attacks in combination with great speed stopping opponent from countering.
Note; Takes 1 usage of FTG per usage of this technique, all seal are applied on the target without him knowing while linking combo's. Only Minato Namikaze can perform this technique.

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Attacks;
Instant Thunder Blade; The user dashes towards the opponent and disappears at the very last moment of contact appears behind and slashes the opponent.
Flash Assault; The user flares the opponent reflecting light from his kunai and quickly kicks his chest knocking him in the air passing a seal and appears behind the opponent as it hits.
Light Beam Kick; The user suddenly appears in front of the opponent by a already passed seal and flip kicks him followed by a reverse flip kicks, then slides down the opponent kicking him from the back.
Light Particle Kick; A technique so fast it breaks the highest lvl. guards cause the opponent does not receive enough reaction time. The user kicks the opponent with a hidden kunai and appears behind him with a massive barrage of stunning kicks greatly damaging the opponents face neck and chest.
Rising Thunder Flash; The user jumps and kicks the opponent in the air followed by a aerial flip kick with both legs from beside and appears behind slashing through.
Falling Thunder Blade;After using Rising Thunder Flash(without finishing blow), the user appears above the target and stabs him drilling down till reach the ground.
Instant Bullet; After a aerial flip kick the user flips behind the opponent starting a mid-air dash slashing the opponent.
Shooting star flash; After a combo of kicks the user appears above the opponent at 60 degrees angle and dives drilling down.
Instant Triple Blades; After a barrage of kicks knocking the opponent high, the user flicks above the opponent giving a flip kick pushing him down and appears below followed with 2 slashes and 1 stab killing the opponent.
Instant Light; The user flicks randomly around the opponent continuesly attacking him from all sides and confusing him.
Damage Description;
Instant Thunder Blade; 10
Flash Assault; 20
Light Beam Kick; 15
Light Particle Kick;25
Rising Thunder Flash; 20
Falling Thunder Blade; 35(plus 5 per 30 cms high)
Instant Bullet; 20
Shooting Star Flash; 25
Instant Triple Blades; 25
Instant Light; 5 per attack hit

Similar to Frog kata i made my own way of taijutsu style>.>

|Declined|
Rip off of Lee's Ougi.

 

[Ace]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fuiinjutsu: Omoi Futsuu (Sealing Technique: Heart Suspension)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra: 50
Damage: (80 to user)
Description:The user releases a seal that slows their heart rate down to 2-3 beats per minute but for the users heart rate to be slowed down, their alligator must be in contact with them, and the alligator must regulate the chakra flow of the user.
*Must be used with an alligator on the field*
*User is unable to use fuiinjutsu for 2 turns afterwards.*
*Since the users heart rate is slowed down, they can only use 2 jutsu per turn for a turn.

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~Declined
medical jutsu

 

[Hellsbadass]

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(Kuchiyose: elemento ryuujin)- Summoning: element dragon god
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons an elemental dragon into the battle field. the dragon is able to jutsus based on its element and they could fly. the dragon is the same size as gama (except for yin yang. they are half the size and metal dragon)
there are dragons for every element. this like a normal summonin jutsu, the user must bite his tumb and do the hands to summon the dragon and the dragon could some user.
to summon dragon, the user must a sperate contract wit each element dragon. only the god of dragon contract allows the user to summon all the elemental dragons.

god of dragons- the strongest of all dragons. he able to control all the elemental dragons. he has only fire element. the fire from the god dragon is strong enough to turn rock into lava.
Dragon powers
Fire from hell
Rank- Forbidden
distance: short- long
Chakra:75
Damage: 150
description: A very powerful blast of fire that is capable of turning rock into lava and burning tru thick walls of rock. example of the fire blast is in the pic.
*can only be used 2 times

|Modify the damage 100 is more than enough for a summon|


Liquid fire
Rank: S
distance: short- mid
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
description: The dragon will spit of a flame able liquid from the mouth. the liquid is like oil. once the liquid ignited, it will burn anything and last for 3 turns.
*can be used 2 times
|Remove the "burn" anything part|

Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

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void dragon- cold hearted dragon. the void dragon is able to use void based attacks.
Dragon powers
check my custom element jutsus

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ice dragon- the ice dragon of the north. he is able to use ice jutsus

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fire dragon- the dragon of the east. the fire dragon is a fire elemental dragon and can use fire jutsus

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yin dragon and yang dragon- the twin dragons. they both must be summoned together. they are able to use yin and yang based attacks. they are half the size of gama and the rest of the dragons. the white dragon is a girl and the other is a boy

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earth dragon- the oldest dragon, he is a earth element dragon
can use earth jutsus
[i am aprovin it for bisha and he has left nb =/]

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undead dragon- a former dragon god that was brought back to life. he has poison based attacks. he has the strongest poison ever.

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Lich King undead dragon- its a skeleton dragon and has bat wing like skin on the wings. this dragon is able to use dark jutsus (not the element. its its another yin yang dragon but this use only the evil energy)
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water dragon- water dragon of the south. she is able to use water jutsus

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wind dragon- wind dragon of the west. he is able to use wind jutsus

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metal dragon- she is the only one thats the same size as an average size girl. her appearance is almost human. she has a strong skin and is a defence dragon
Dragon power
Absolute defence
rank- S
distance:short
chakra: non
damage: non
description: she will appear behind the sommer and wraps she wings around him/her protectin her from attacks or she can appear infront of the summoner.
[its like pein's rock panda, its only used for defence]

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holy dragon- Kinetic (spellin) energy
Dragon powers
look at my custom element jutsus

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lightning dragon -can use lightning jutsus

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[ dude i cannot make all the dragon moves -.- its too much for me and i am too lazy. can they please use the jutsus]
|All Approved|

 

[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(manipyureito shiro bo-ru)Manipulated white ball
Type: Supplimentary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0 (30 if the needle goes through the ball)
Description: The user first throws one of shikamaru's white blinding balls at the opponent then focuses chakra into a metal shiny needle the user throws the needle at the ball this needle will reflect the light directly into the opponents eyes blinding them for two turns
Note: This jutsu can only be used once.
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~Pending
isn't it the same if u throw the flash bomb? oO y do u want to make a jutsu?

(oroton:dyuaru oroton ofu) Sound style: Dual Sound off
Type: Attack
Rank: A-S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: The user pulls off dual swords

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off of the users back that was handed down to him from generations of sound ninja after taking off these swords he focuses chakra into them and strikes one into the ground if one is striked in the ground it sends a medium sized tendril towards the opponent from the ground and comes out underneath the opponent hitting the opponent for 60 damage if both swords r put into the ground two tendrils are sent but the second tendril is decreased in power so it deals 80 damage.
Note: This jutsu can only be used three times.
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~Pending
poor description, explain how a sound wave can make a tendril?

(Kuchiose:Genka hiki) Summoning style: Singing toad
Type: Supplimentary/Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (If in sage mode these attacks do 20 more damage)
Description: The user focuses his chakra to summon a special toad that was made to use his voice the toad was taught to use nothing but his horns and sounds. This toad can do three things called "acts" The acts are:
First act: The toad uses his fast legs and horns to tackle the opponent head on.
Second act: Sending off a loud croak pulsing into the opponent and making a ringing sound into the opponents ears
Third act: Sending loud vibrations through the whole terrian sending ringing into everybodies ears except the user and himself.
Note:The toad is the size of the user
Note: Must master the sound style before using this summoning and must have toad summonings.

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~Approved

1st jutsu: No flash bomb only last for a certain period of time. Maybe I should amplify it to three turns to make the jutsu of value?
2nd jutsu: Sound can come from any shape form or fashion why does it have to be a wave? O_<
3rd jutsu: Thanky

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1. yea sure will talk to goro
2. because its common sense =/

1) Declined a jutsu isn't needed for that..
2) Sound can only travel in waves, or pulses (a condensation of waves) so Declined

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tenrai Ranpu , Mikomi no Enka) Divine Light, Beacon of Hope
Type- Attack
Rank- Forbidden
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 50
Damage- 90
A truly devastating move, there are four stages to it.
As a one second chant is said two vises of chakra form around the opponent's wrists and hold the hands out in a crucifix position
Next, as the second chant is said, a chakra vise grabs the opponent's neck and head and tilts it upward so the opponent is facing the sky.
As the third chant is said, two chakra vises grab the opponent's legs. preventing them from moving.
As the final chant is said, all the vises project chakra spikes, and then constrict with devastating force.
The vises cannot be broken out easily, though a sufficiently focused beam of a high rank ( and not a wide area explosion ) will be able to break them.
* Can only be used once per battle.
* Does 35 damage to the user
* No Wood/Ice Release , Doujutsus or Strong Fist Taijutsu till the end of the match.
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~Declined


(Gansaku Shinfoni , Chikatachi Takai) Unreal Symphony, Death in Many Forms
Type- Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank- S
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 40
Damage- 60 ( less than a normal S rank since it serves as a defense as well )
The user manipulates their chakra into countless ball-bearing sized spheres. These spheres can be controlled by the user by doing hand movements ( much like a conductor in a orchestra ), and when grouped together, form a spinning mass of chakra.
Another way to use this technique, is to allow the spheres to merge with nearby objects, filling them with the user's chakra, allowing the user to manipulate them with the same hand movements. Of course, the user cannot manipulate the opponent / opponent's jutsus.
* User can only use two techniques per turn as long as the user chooses to keep this technique active.
* Costs 25 chakra to the user per turn
* No Wood/Ice Release , Doujutsus or Strong Fist Taijutsu till the end of the match.
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~Declined
its too much like gravity jutsu

I really dont think its like gravity techniques. They blow the opponent back or toward. This is either a grouped mass of chakra or allows the user to manipulate inanimate objects by filling them with the user's chakra - something ninjas anyway often do.
So I'm resubmitting this one:


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=/ same thing dude. and i think this jutsu already exist


(Gansaku Shinfoni , Chikatachi Takai) Unreal Symphony, Death in Many Forms
Type- Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank- S
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 40
Damage- 60 ( less than a normal S rank since it serves as a defense as well )
The user manipulates their chakra into countless ball-bearing sized spheres. These spheres can be controlled by the user by doing hand movements ( much like a conductor in a orchestra ), and when grouped together, form a spinning mass of chakra.
Another way to use this technique, is to allow the spheres to merge with nearby objects, filling them with the user's chakra, allowing the user to manipulate them with the same hand movements. Of course, the user cannot manipulate the opponent / opponent's jutsus.
* User can only use two techniques per turn as long as the user chooses to keep this technique active.
* Costs 25 chakra to the user per turn
* No Wood/Ice Release , Doujutsus or Strong Fist Taijutsu till the end of the match.

|Declined|

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Shiruken Cut (Shiruken Kai)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range:Long 10-45
Chakra Cost:8
Damage:16
Description: Throwing a shuriken infused with a little chakra that makes it go faster.

Slicing Chain Attack(suraisu kusari raishuu)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:20
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to cut into the bone.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Slicing Chain Escape (suraisu kusari tonsou)
Type: Defanse
Rank: D
Rangedistance from the building/tree)Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:0
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to a near by building/tree to pull themselfs in the direction of the building/tree to escape attacks.But when it is used again and again it becames predictble so it loses its effect.1st use 50% of the attack damage misses.2nd use 25% the attack damage misses.3rd time and after 0% the attack damage misses.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Punch-Punch-Kick-Grab-Punch-Kick Combo(panchi-panchi-kikku-haji-panchi-kikku konbo)
Type:Attack
Rank D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage:4 per punch, 4 per kick total of 20
Description: A basic taijutsu combo for novices.

Slicing Chain Strangle(suraisu kusari ho-rudo)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 8
Damage:15
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to strangle the enemy.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Battle Dummy (kaisen fukikae)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Shorth-Mid 3-7m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:3
Description:The user summons a fighting dummy that attacks 2 times per each turn until its beat. To beat it deal 15 damage to it or use any fire element jutsu.
Can be used once per turn. Ninjutsu

Lightning style:Flash Kick (Raiton:senkou kikku)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:20
Description:User kicks their enemy with a lightning infused kick.If wind style jutsu is used to block it does 10 damage but ıf earth style jutsu is used to block it then it does 25 damage.

Lightning style:Spark (Raiton:hibana)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: D
Range: Long 25m
Chakra Cost: 3
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a bright spark that lights up a 25 m radius area.

Lightning style: Blinnding Flash (Raiton:buraindo senkou)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: D
Range: Mid 10-12
Chakra Cost: 8
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a series of sudden bright flashes that makes the opponant blind for a few seconds.


I think admins skipped it so I re posted

I am chunin so

Water:

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Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy.

Water: Rain Drop (suiton:ame kakou)
Type:Supplemantry
Rank:C
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:0
Description:The user focuses water in his hand to launch rain drop from his hand.

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~All Declined
hmmmm. dude did u read the rules. i will not approve these jutsus bcz it has pass the jutsu submission limit

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Shiruken Cut (Shiruken Kai)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range:Long 10-45
Chakra Cost:8
Damage:16
Description: Throwing a shuriken infused with a little chakra that makes it go faster.

Slicing Chain Attack(suraisu kusari raishuu)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:20
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to cut into the bone.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Slicing Chain Escape (suraisu kusari tonsou)
Type: Defanse
Rank: D
Rangedistance from the building/tree)Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:0
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to a near by building/tree to pull themselfs in the direction of the building/tree to escape attacks.But when it is used again and again it becames predictble so it loses its effect.1st use 50% of the attack damage misses.2nd use 25% the attack damage misses.3rd time and after 0% the attack damage misses.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Punch-Punch-Kick-Grab-Punch-Kick Combo(panchi-panchi-kikku-haji-panchi-kikku konbo)
Type:Attack
Rank D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage:4 per punch, 4 per kick total of 20
Description: A basic taijutsu combo for novices.

Slicing Chain Strangle(suraisu kusari ho-rudo)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Mid 5-10m
Chakra Cost: 8
Damage:15
Description: The user throw his Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to strangle the enemy.
*Needs a Slicing Chain (Mamorito) to use*
*Go to Karano Tazai (burakyilan) to get the Slicing Chain (Mamorito)*

Battle Dummy (kaisen fukikae)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Shorth-Mid 3-7m
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:3
Description:The user summons a fighting dummy that attacks 2 times per each turn until its beat. To beat it deal 15 damage to it or use any fire element jutsu.
Can be used once per turn. Ninjutsu

Lightning style:Flash Kick (Raiton:senkou kikku)
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage:20
Description:User kicks their enemy with a lightning infused kick.If wind style jutsu is used to block it does 10 damage but ıf earth style jutsu is used to block it then it does 25 damage.

Lightning style:Spark (Raiton:hibana)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: D
Range: Long 25m
Chakra Cost: 3
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a bright spark that lights up a 25 m radius area.

Lightning style: Blinnding Flash (Raiton:buraindo senkou)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: D
Range: Mid 10-12
Chakra Cost: 8
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a series of sudden bright flashes that makes the opponant blind for a few seconds.


I think admins skipped it so I re posted

I am chunin so

Water:

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Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy.

Water: Rain Drop (suiton:ame kakou)
Type:Supplemantry
Rank:C
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:0
Description:The user focuses water in his hand to launch rain drop from his hand.

1: Goro Kaguya and Hellsbadass, two moderators, approve/decline custom jutsu submissions. They don't do this instantly when someone posts a custom jutsu, but always after some days so that they do them all at once. They aren't admins.

2: Could you please bother to read the rules about custom submissions thoroughly. Because then you would know you can only post 5 submissions each week; you posted 11.

 

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[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose : Kikio no Shuiro Komadori)- Kikio the Scarlet Robin
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Kikio the Scarlet Robin.Her Natural Affinity is Fire and can do from C-A Rank Fire Justu. She could Fly in the Air about 90 Mph.
*this Justu can Only Be Used by Minato1*
Note: this justu Can only be used once per Battle
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(Kuchiyose: Komadori)- Summoning: Robin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon a Robin into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the Robin of their choice. The size of the Robin will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All robins are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Minato1~
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~WTF O_O
thats a big robin

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i am not sure if u can create a big bird sommon like that oO the only person that has a big bird sommon is pein and all his summons are unnatural summon, meanin they are modified

(Kuchiyose : Kikio no Shuiro Komadori)- Kikio the Scarlet Robin
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Kikio the Scarlet Robin.Her Natural Affinity is Fire and can do from C-A Rank Fire Justu. She could Fly in the Air about 90 Mph.She is about the Size Of Gamakichi
*this Justu can Only Be Used by Minato1*
Note: this justu Can only be used once per Battle
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(Kuchiyose: Komadori)- Summoning: Robin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon a Robin into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the Robin of their choice. The size of the Robin will be even to that of Gamakichi, unless stated otherwise. All robins are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Minato1~

~declined: I agree with Grimm~

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Kinjutsu: Soshi Toubou (Forbidden Technique: Elemental Escape)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 60 (+15 to the user)
Description: The user will charge a large amount of fire chakra or lightning chakra all throughout their body, they will then release it all at once creating a large explosion of either fire or lightning. This jutsu is mostly used in situations where the user is trapped and can’t use handseals, but this jutsu can also be used for offensive play.

Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: Can’t use either fire or lightning jutsu next turn.

-approved since you are a med nin-


Suiton: Mizu Bakuha (Water Style: Water Blast)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Once Akuma has been summoned, he can then bring forth all of the water in the entire area with his chakra( Akuma can also create water from his stomach to add to the jutsu if needed), and then have it directed at the opponent with great force. The shire amount of power that is created by all of the water is incredible. Once this jutsu has ended the whole battlefield will be under water.

Note: Can only be used Twice Per battle.

-approved-


Suiton: Mizu Wana (Water Style: Water Trap
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Discription: Once akuma has been summoned, he will generate a massive amount of chakra, he will then manipulate all of the water in the area and have it swirl around the summon, user and the opponent (360). This extremely powerful slicing water traps everything that is inside, and the opponent cannot simply pass through.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

-approved but make it once per battle-

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Taijutsu: Kinkou Of The Aisu Shokou) Balance Of The Ice Princes
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user releases a massive amount of chakra and putting it in their feet and ground, causing a massive mount of balance, grace and speed, causing the kind of grace you'd have on ice, run at speed. The user will run and balance over to the target and switch the massive chakra into their hands and frontflip over the target and twisting around, pushing out the massive chakra out of their hands into the opponents back and back of neck, causing difficulty to move backwards, or anything by back, and also slowing breathing causing a bit of problems, like slowing down and needing to relax after just a few things. This move will make most taijutsu attacks that are aimed at the user will be difficult to strike with.
Note: The user must have byakugan activated
Note: Must Be Taught By SinRival

-declined: wrong rank and info-

(Taijutsu: Reversing Kobushi) Reversing Fist
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When the user is getting punched or kicked, the user will release chakra into that part thats getting struck, and will force loads of chakra and pushing hard reversing all the power of the attacks onto the target, meaning the target will face all damage and user has none. This jutsu can match s-rank and below attacks of punches or kicking or anything that can be reversed.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: The user must have byakugan activated
Note: Must Be Taught By SinRival

-Declined: you cannot use your own chakra to reverse the damage down to your own body unless you are a med nin-

(Kuchiyose:Amerikahyou)- Summoning: Jaguar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This summoning of one of the big feline cats, is a strong one, very fast aswell, these jaguars, can come in a few forms, one known as a black panther, and white panther. The Jaguars are special and can use their first element very well.
Scroll Owner is SinRival.

-approved-


(Kuchiyose:Melanistic Amerikahyou)- Summoning: Melanistic Jaguar
Type: Attacking/Defence
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (Attacking)
Description: This jaguar is black and very powerful, it can use up to two elements, one of them is fire and the other is earth which they can use up to s-rank, this jaguar can also create holes in the earth with one quick slash of their paws. These jaguars fight, and aren't very friendly.
SinRival holds this summoning.

-declined: they cant use both earth and fire merged at the same time, either pick one or summon 2 of them-

(Kuchiyose:Amerikahyou Musha)- Summoning: Jaguar Warrior
Type: Attacking/Defence
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This warrior is able to stand on two paws, and able to use wind, it also is able to glide in air easily, with wind helping it, this jaguar is for fightning and sometimes running, but is usulley a fighting, with its power of striking closely and far away, its main ability is good with taijutsu.
SinRival holds this summoning.

-your jaguars cant be able to use all elements, please pick 2 of them, and i don't think a jaguar should be able to use wind-

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1st submission this week

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Gorillas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon an ape into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the ape of their choice. The size of the apes will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All apes are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Nine Tailed Naruto~

Spoiler

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: King Kong
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth King Kong. King Kong is a huge sliver back gorilla roughly the size of Gamubunta a little bigger, with the ability to use fire and wind techniques. He also has the ability to breath fire that is equal to A-Rank. He is also able to use taijutsu. He has an huge chakara source which the user can draw from which if done will give the user increased speed and strength and also is very muscular in both his arms and his legs allowing him to use both in a fight. Even with his size he has speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts for 3 turns~
~Can't summon Apes for the remainder of the battle~

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Tiki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Tiki. Tiki is a gorilla a little bigger than Gamubunta, he also has a large chakara source though not as large as King Kong and he is also very muscular and can use all taijutsu and has a average amount speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size. Tiki has the power to use both lightning and water jutsus.


(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Loki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Loki. He is a great sized gorilla the same size as Tiki, he has spent ages in the practicing the art of earth jutsus and has gained the ability to use earth based jutsus. Very muscular and has a huge chakara source. He is also a skilled taijutsu user and has an average amount of speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size.
~Lasts 3 turns~

_______________
Only one element per summon


(Raiton: Dendou Suru) Lightning: Electrical Hypnosis
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakara cost: 60
Damagae: N/A
Description: The use will send out pulses of electricity that will make contact with the opponent and will go into their brain through the nerves allowing the user full control of their opponent. After the electricity hits the opponent they will be under contol and whatever happens to the opponent will count as real damage.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts one turn~
~User can not use lightning jutsus for 2 turns~
________
~Declined
sounds like a medical jutsu

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Gorillas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon an ape into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the ape of their choice. The size of the apes will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All apes are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Nine Tailed Naruto~

Spoiler

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: King Kong
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth King Kong. King Kong is a huge sliver back gorilla roughly the size of Gamubunta a little bigger, with the ability to use fire techniques. He also has the ability to breath fire that is equal to A-Rank. He is also able to use taijutsu. He has an huge chakara source which the user can draw from which if done will give the user increased speed and strength and also is very muscular in both his arms and his legs allowing him to use both in a fight. Even with his size he has speed equal and greater than most other summonings his size.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts for 3 turns~

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Tiki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Tiki. Tiki is a gorilla a little bigger than Gamubunta, he also has a large chakara source though not as large as King Kong and he is also very muscular and can use all taijutsu and has a average amount speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size. Tiki has the power to use lightning jutsus.
~Lasts 3 turns~

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Loki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Loki. He is a great sized gorilla the same size as Tiki, he has spent ages in the practicing the art of earth jutsus and has gained the ability to use earth based jutsus. Very muscular and has a huge chakara source. He is also a skilled taijutsu and can use all taijustu. And has an average amount of speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size.
~Lasts 3 turns~

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~Approved~

(Fuuton Hito) Wind Man
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: None
Chakara cost: 40
Damage: None
Description: User transforms their body into wind allowing them to avoid physical attacks. And fire blast of wind that are medium size. The user body also has all properties of wind.

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~Declined
its almost similar to the time/space and i think some1 made it

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouten: Furosuto Haji) Ice Style: Frost Grip
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will imbue their hands with a massive amount of ice chakra. For five turns, the user's hands will gain a blue glow and certain ice-related powers. For one, anything the user touches begins to turn into ice. E.g. If the user touches a tree, the entire tree is encased in ice, still in the form of a tree though. The user can also touch the ground to make an area of 10 yards in every direction turn into ice, though an ice-user able to use this jutsu is also an ice-user that is able to stand on the ice easily without slipping. If the user touches a lake or river, the entire body of water will become frozen, despite its size. This jutsu also affects people that the user touches, if using a taijutsu move that involves using your hands, or simply by touching the opponent, they will be completely frozen.
Note: The jutsu itself lasts five turns and can be used freely throughout battle, although the user must wait 4 turns between using it. If the user does use it before those 4 turns are done, both hands are completely fozen in ice, stopping them from using a jutsu to free themselves, that spreads along the users arm and body, encasing them in ice in a single turn.
Note: The user can freely release this jutsu along the ground in a form similar as Chidori Nagashi, by placing their hands on the ground, and releasing it from all angles around them, freezing the ground around them for 30 yards instead of 10. This can only be done if the jutsu has been active for less than three turns (and including the third turn). If active for more, the jutsu will not have maintained enough chakra to successfully do this. When this ability is used, the jutsu is released and the user can't use it again for 4 turns as stated above.
Note: This jutsu freezes nearly anything that the user touches, meaning that if the user has a weapon or even attempts to throw a kunai, it is encased in ice, making it unbearably heavy. This does not apply to the user if they are of Sannin rank or above.

(Hyouten: Touketsu Hydra) Ice Style: Frozen Hydra
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will create a hydra of ice. The hydra can be created in one of two ways, it can be created in whole, meaning that it's a body, tail, and three heads (that it starts off with) and will be as large as about three tall trees stacked on top of each other. The second way, is that the heads can emit from a source of ice (like a frozen lake). The hydra, like all hydra's, will grow two heads for every one that is sliced off (if it is made from a source of ice, then more heads will emit from the source). The hydra starts off with 3 heads, and can have a maximum of 10. When the maximum is reached, and if a head still comes off, that head will come back but no additional one. The hydra has extremely sharp teeth that can rip through something as thick as a tree, and can shoot out a freezing blast of ice that's equal to its rank.
Note: The user must wait 3 turns between use of this and can only use it 4 times per battle. But there is no limit to how long this lasts.
Note: If the user makes the hydra emit from a source of ice, it can become a full hydra at any time. It can also sink into a source of ice if it is a complete hydra. When it is in a source of ice, only the heads show, and they can sink in and come back up at any time.
Note: The hydra can disperse itself or any of it's heads at any time. If a head is dispersed, the opponent is attacked with ice senbon. If the entire hydra is dispersed, senbon will rain on most of the battlefield, excluding where the user stands.

-add restrictions-

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

(Suiton: myou mizu) dark water
Type: Attack/Supplementary
P.S. *when S rank type will be: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates dark water by spreading water orbs around the enemy, and when that enemy touches these orbs they would be damaged from 15-30 points also taking that damaged point as the user's own life force

P.S *this can only be used when dark water is at S rank: it can also be used for defense when the enemy is about to attack, dark water would then form as an orb barrier around the user, but still having the same effect when used as an attack taking the damaged point as life force.*

*dark water can be used as an attack or as a defense*
*it can also be both, such as:
after using it as an attack the dark water orb barrier will then appear around the user*
*the barrier will last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

P.S. the user would need to specifically define how he/she used dark water for everyone to know it if was used as an attack, a defense or both

this is a theory of dark water

Spoiler

it doesn't mean that its dark or black when i said its called dark water...

when u look at it, it would appear like any other water,
but in truth its not just any pure water;
that reason is because this water was gathered
from the depths of the lake at night
where the moon illuminated above...
also it is a mixture of the user's own life force and chakra
giving it that dark eerie feeling of
lucubration that which is composed by night,
doing so, when the enemy gets hit,
the damaged will be absorb by dark water
converting it just like the user's own life force
and taking it back to the user
through evaporation of course thus,
the user will then gain the damaged points of the enemy as life force

________
~Declined
explain how these orbs can damage the opponent? bcz i dont get it O_O do they explode or something? if they do explode, it wont be approved bcz i created the exploding water jutsu
and this jutsu it to overpowered to be a C rank

Spoiler

(Raiton: doragon ryoukin) dragon charge
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:15
Description: User creates 3 small version of the original dragon (from dragon shield) they are also made by pure chakra converted into electricity. These dragons then attack the enemy with electric flames that damages them by 15 points. though they are smaller and weaker than the original dragon, they are very useful for long range attacks unlike dragon shield.

*dragons last up to end of the battle unless killed*
*this can be done 3 times in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

________
~Approved

this is a resubmission of dark water

Spoiler

(Suiton: myou mizu) dark water
Type: Attack/Supplementary
P.S. *when S rank type will be: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates dark water by spreading water orbs around the enemy, these orbs are hot and when the enemy touches these orbs they would be damaged from 15-30 points also taking that damaged point as the user's own life force.

P.S *this can only be used when dark water is at S rank: it can also be used for defense when the enemy is about to attack, dark water would then form as an orb barrier around the user, but still having the same effect when used as an attack taking the damaged point as life force. the user is immune to dark water's power to drain life force.*

*dark water can be used as an attack or as a defense*
*it can also be both, such as:
after using it as an attack the dark water orb barrier will then appear around the user*
*the barrier will last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

P.S. the user would need to specifically define how he/she used dark water for everyone to know it if was used as an attack, a defense or both

this is a theory of dark water and how it damages the enemy:

Spoiler

it doesn't mean that its dark or black when i said its called dark water...

when u look at it, it would appear like any other water,
but in truth its not just any pure water;
that reason is because this water was gathered
from the depths of the lake at night where the moon illuminated above...
also it is a mixture of the user's own life force and chakra
giving it that dark eerie feeling of
lucubration that which is composed by night,

...it can damage the enemy cause this water
is hot, really hot, reason for it is
cause of the mixture of life force and chakra

knowing so, when the enemy gets hit,
the enemy will then get burned by it and
the damaged will be absorb by dark water
converting it just like the user's own life force
and taking it back to the user
through evaporation of course thus,
the user will then gain the damaged points of the enemy as life force

-This should be a custom element and not a custom jutsu-

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hachi-baribari Kasen) Eight Tearing Rivers
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
The user focuses their chakra into forming eight swords made of chakra that materialise around the opponent. The swords have a white hilt, and a black blade, with the kanji for "River" engraved on the blade.
The swords circle the opponent, until the user commands them ( by thinking ) to do otherwise. Since these swords are made of the user's own chakra, the user can make these swords move around as they wish.
The movement of these swords is thrice as fast as the speed of a normal, thrown shuriken.
Note: Any technique that is used to affect weapons may be used on these swords
Note: This technique costs 15 chakra per turn to maintain the swords circling, and an extra 5 chakra every time one of the swords is moved.

-declined: overpowered. And the chakra needed to maintain these swords on the battlefield and command them by will should be like -300-

(Shikyogyoushi) Death Stare
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Humans, from their evolution from cave-dwelling people, are conditioned to fearing certain bodily expressions or movements ( for example, shifting your weight slightly to attack a person , or a look of absolute anger on the face ). This technique takes advantage of the fact, since the user performs those expressions/movements, placing the opponent in a state of absolute, paralysing fear.
Note: This technique paralyses a very low level opponent for up to twenty seconds, a slightly lower level opponent for up to ten seconds, an equally leveled opponent for five seconds, and a higher leveled opponent for two seconds.
Note: If the opponent sees the user attack them when they are paralysed, there is a good chance they will break out of the fear and fight back ( if they are the same level or above )
Note: This technique reduces in its effectiveness with use, since the opponent will grow accustomed to the stimuli. After the second use, the time the opponent is paralysed is cut in half, and then further in half with the next use, and so on.

-I like it, but you understand it is not realistic like this. Make it a mode if you insist on having it-


(Kyouou no Akuma ) The Demon's Banquet
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
The user releases a burst of chakra in the shape of a demon, that is ( at most ) equal to a C rank technique. However, the real purpose of the technique, is a genjutsu that accompanies it, unnoticed by the opponent, since they think the demon is the actual technique.
The genjutsu plays with the opponent's mind, causing an irrational anger at the user. The anger the opponent feels for the user slowly rises with every turn.
The opponent's blood pressure slowly rises due to the anger, adversely affecting them. Another side effect is that the opponent will be willing to do whatever it takes, even at the cost of getting hit, to kill the user. After two turns, the opponent's blood pressure rises so much that they will rupture their blood vessels, causing internal bleeding. By the fourth turn, the opponent will be dangerously close to death
Note: Since the opponent will realise the true purpose of the technique if they manage to break it once, the second use onwards will not be effective at all to deceive the opponent.
Note: This technique costs 15 chakra per turn to maintain the illusion placed on the opponent.
Note: An unfortunate side effect of this technique is that the opponent, due to their anger, will gain +10 power to Taijutsu, and +15 to Ninjutsu, however, their anger will reduce their Genjutsu casting capabilities, or Medical jutsu capabilities due to the fact that those technques require precise control.
Note: If the opponent is already in a rage for some reason, then the time taken by this technique reduces by one turn.
Note: If the user dodges the opponent's attacks and taunts them, the opponent will damage their own heart due to their explosive anger. On the other hand, if the opponent manages to connect with a technique, the blood vessels under pressure will be able to stand the anger better, and the opponent will take 10 damage less.

-what happens if used against a Sharingan? and restrict it-

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

(Raiton: dendou gekihatsu) electric outburst
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates this electric armor around his/her body, making him/her move 20% faster to avoid attacks from the enemy. the user can also strike out electric bolts from this armor using his/her hands.

*should not be used in water, or else the user will get shocked as a backfire*
*only by A-rank will this jutsu be able to get contact with water and not get the user shock*
*can use up to 5 electric bolts per turn* (increases by 3 as the rank increases)
*this only last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

|Declined|

it's already been 7 days,
so technically monday
is wer i can submit
another 5 jutsu ryt?
or am i wrng???

well, this is a resubmission of electric outburst

Spoiler

(Raiton: dendou gekihatsu) electric outburst
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 25-30
Description: the user creates 3 electric orbs which are thrown above the enemy; those orbs explode making this electric outburst blinding the enemy for split second. the user can then use an attack jutsu while the enemy is left unguarded or escape unnoticed.

*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can be used as an escape attack*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

-wrong rank info-

 

[karagekazuno]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(fire style: hanabiki kenseida)art of the flaming sword blades
type: attack boost
rank:c
chakra cost:10
damage points:20
range:long/short
description:a flaming elemental boost that covers any weapon in hand
(Note:can't block genjutsu)
note:still being perfected
note can only be used by karage until he is able to be a jonin
note:the covering length differs from weapon to weapon

-Be more specific, what do you mean "element boost"? of which element?-

element boost meaning that it boosts up your weapon with fire

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hateshiganai Purantan Enchoku Sentou) - Eternal Springtime Vertical Punch

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: the user starts off by standing side ways with their right arm retracted and their left arm in a guard and then they hit the enemy with a vertical punch which users leverage from the bending of the arm and the body weight of the user to increase the power of the strike from the right hand. This is done with careful breathing to also increase maximum potential power in a punch the user also charges his fist with chakra.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito.
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-approved-

(Taba Ryuu Roppou Ashige) – Coiling Dragon Up Kick

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges their legs with chakra and then they quickly appears below the enemy and uses their hands to twist their body into a spinning motion and then kicks up at the enemy three times. This move then sets up for Dancing crane wheel kick.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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-approved-

(Tora Kijuuki Ryousha Katachi Genkotsu) – Tiger Crane Paired Form Fist

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user charges both their fists with chakra to increase damage and then the user gets below the enemy and strikes the enemy twice. One blow towards the collarbone with a fist cracking the collar bone and the other a palm strike to the throat causing the enemy to be winded and on arm useless from the braking of the collarbone.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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-restrict it to twice per battle-

(Wakai Ryuucho Hazumi) – Young Flowing Spring

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: the user charges their legs with chakra to increase damage and then begins by sending a flying kick straight towards the enemy’s upper body and then causing the enemy to guard the attack. After hitting the guard the user then spins 360 degrees and brings their left foot up breaking the guard and kicks the enemy with the right leg to the chin sending them up in the air. Then the user lands on the ground and quickly uses a burst of chakra out of their feet to launch them above the enemy and finish them off by hammer kicking them into the ground.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito.
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-approved-

(Ikazuchi Raikou Hirameki Dageki) – Thunder Lightning Flash Strike

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is taken form a form of Chinese martial arts southern style. The user chargers their body with chakra and discharges it through their feet to give them a speed boost towards the enemy and then the user charges their fists with lightning chakra and hits the enemy 8 times around the shoulders, chest and stomach and discharges the electrical chakra to numb the points of contact. This causes temporary paralysis and makes the enemies movements slow from the electrical currents retracting the muscles.

Note: Affect lasts for 1 turn
Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
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-approved-

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Hoshiki Segari- Dan (Blue –Armor Dragon Bullet)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User Fires off a bullet that summons a powerful Dragon that can protect the user from 1-Srank attack or 2 A-ranks. Then It can Attack afterwards. Swallowing the opponent whole.
(Usable twice per battle)
(Takes 2 turns to create otherwise no other jutsu may be used that turn.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)[/

Name: Gose Rimido-Dan (Furious Dragon Bullet)
Rank: S
Type Attack
Range: Entire Arena
Chakra: 40
Damage: 70
Description: Turns any wall into a dragon.
(Takes 1 turn to create)
(No Other Dragons can be cast on the field while this is in play.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

Name: TeggaHorin- Dan (Iron-Fanged Cannon Dragon bullet)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage:80
Description: User Fires off a bullet that spawns a Dragon who shoots Earth bullets From its head. It can separate these heads to fire off multiple bullets or into one full head to fire off a cannon blast.
(Usable once per Battle)
(Takes Two turns to create or otherwise no other jutsu may be used.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

Name: Basada-Dan (Binding Chain Snake Bullet)
Rank:C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: User Fires off a bullet that becomes a Snake Made of Chain that cand bind a opponent.
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

Name: Doton: Doshinrido-Dan ( Earth Style: Dragon Wrath Quake)
Rank: A
Type: Defense/ Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 20 above ground 100 below
Description: Spawns a Dragon that when cause a massive earth quake. When Grouped together 5 of these dragons can Collapse a whole Mountain.
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

-do you hold the dragon contract?-

 

[UzumakiJake]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I think ive already submitted but i think i got the format this time.

Spoiler

Sage Art: Seal Disruption
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: NA
Discription: By focusing your chakra into an enemy hand sighn you can disrupt their chakra and cancel their jutsu. Much like the anti summoning but with hand sighns. Like in ninja school they said if you dont get the chakra just right it will not work and may even hurt you by doing this your chakra strings become more active for a turn making you a little faster and stronger for just one turn.

NOTE: only usable 2 times a fight.
NOTE: must know sage mode
NOTE: dont need to be in sage mode
NOTE: After use cant use again for a nother 2 turns.
NOTE: cant be used till at least turn 2

Spoiler

Nezumi: Rat Hair
Rank: A
Chakra: 35
Damage:60
Discription: Your summons hair/fur by encasing it with chakra your summon can sharpen then extend its hair/fur and can even pierce through the ground to hold incase tehre is a threat of being washed or pushed away, aslo in defence and attack.

NOTE: Only Summoned beast can preform
Note: Only UzumakiJakes Summons can use

-both pending: I am not sure about them, Grim or Goro should check them also-