[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Yüme1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Im only doing one (my first)
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(Kuchiyose:Kuuhaku Jikoku) Space Time Defiement.
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90-(your Choice)
Description: The User Opens a small warp hole in front of them Using their chakra. How big it can be depends on the size of your body. It will send you to a location in which is in your range of sight. This can be used from combination attack's, to being stealthy. It damages you each time you use it. This Jutsu is forbbiden and you need a tattoo set on your right arm in able to use it.

Note: Only Jin Enshirou can set this tattoo.
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-I know this is a space and time jutsu and it may not be approved, i tried to make it as fair as possible-
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~Decline~
No time space jutsus

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouten: Furosuto Haji) Ice Style: Frost Grip
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will imbue their hands with a massive amount of ice chakra. For five turns, the user's hands will gain a blue glow and certain ice-related powers. For one, anything the user touches begins to turn into ice. E.g. If the user touches a tree, the entire tree is encased in ice, still in the form of a tree though. The user can also touch the ground to make an area of 10 yards in every direction turn into ice, though an ice-user able to use this jutsu is also an ice-user that is able to stand on the ice easily without slipping. If the user touches a lake or river, the entire body of water will become frozen, despite its size. This jutsu also affects people that the user touches, if using a taijutsu move that involves using your hand, or simply by touching the opponent, they will be completely frozen.
Note: The jutsu itself lasts five turns and can be used freely throughout battle, although the user must wait 4 turns between using it. If the user does use it before those 4 turns are done, both hands are completely fozen in ice, stopping them from using a jutsu to free themselves, that spreads along the users arm and body, encasing them in ice in a single turn.
Note: The user can freely release this jutsu along the ground in a form similar as Chidori Nagashi (they can even release it around them to make ice surround them 30 yards in each direction), and freeze an opponent it touches. They can also release it as if they were using an ice version of Raiton: Gian. Although, both of these moves cannot be used after the jutsu has been active for three turns.
Note: This jutsu freezes nearly anything that the user touches, meaning that if the user has a weapon or even attempts to throw a kunai, it is encased in ice, becoming too heavy to carry. Only a Kage or Sage ranked ninja is able to stop the effect, enabling the use of ice-imbued kunai that aren't heavy. Otherwise, it will make any weapon too heavy to carry.
|Declined|
Oped.

 

[Vexen]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

all of them taken from games :|

i did gave them to rei who gave them to nexus and they were not allow to go as jutsu for everyone so i put them as customs

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kobushi no Jinteki Enkou)- Fist of the Mortal Flame
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User gathers fire chakra into their fist. They then strike their victim several times with a series of amazingly fast and precise punches. Each punch leaves a small indentation in the opponents skin, as it burst into flames. After the last punch is made the targets entire body burst into flames.
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~Approved~

(Ryuusei Shougeki)- Meteor Impact
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User covers themselves in earth, creating a mass of dense earth spikes all over their body. They then launch themselves at their target with merciless force. Upon impact a massive crater is made, or impalement.

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~pending~
make it a S rank jutsu

 

[Yüme1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Im only doing one (my first)
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(Kuchiyose:Kuuhaku Jikoku) Space Time Defiement.
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90-(your Choice)
Description: The User Opens a small warp hole in front of them Using their chakra. How big it can be depends on the size of your body. It will send you to a location in which is in your range of sight. This can be used from combination attack's, to being stealthy. It damages you each time you use it. This Jutsu is forbbiden and you need a tattoo set on your right arm in able to use it.

Note: Only Jin Enshirou can set this tattoo.
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-I know this is a space and time jutsu and it may not be approved, i tried to make it as fair as possible-
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~Decline~
No time space jutsus

I know, thats why i made it as fair as possible, see.

for the Minato Bio's.

it spacificly says that flying thundergod jutsu cannot be countered without time or space Jutsu T.T

 

[Hellsbadass]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

But we dont approve time space bcz its overpowered =/ other wise i would have made it long time ago. so goes to the rest of the members who posted elemental variations of time space jutsu

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kobushi no Jinteki Enkou)- Fist of the Mortal Flame
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User gathers fire chakra into their fist. They then strike their victim several times with a series of amazingly fast and precise punches. Each punch leaves a small indentation in the opponents skin, as it burst into flames. After the last punch is made the targets entire body burst into flames.
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~Approved~

(Ryuusei Shougeki)- Meteor Impact
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User covers themselves in earth, creating a mass of dense earth spikes all over their body. They then launch themselves at their target with merciless force. Upon impact a massive crater is made, or impalement.

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~pending~
make it a S rank jutsu

(Ryuusei Shougeki)- Meteor Impact
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User covers themselves in earth, creating a mass of dense earth spikes all over their body. They then launch themselves at their target with merciless force. Upon impact a massive crater is made, or impalement.
Note
Limit 3 times per battle.
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~Approved~

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

During each new week of posting your customs, if asked to resubmit or posting within your 5 jutsu limit, please quote any jutsu that have been review if, any have been reviewed during said week.

See my example above.

This will cut back on the time of reviewing jutsu, and help you keep track of the amount you've posted that week.

Thanks. Goro Kaguya.

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ryuusei Shougeki)- Meteor Impact
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User covers themselves in earth, creating a mass of dense earth spikes all over their body. They then launch themselves at their target with merciless force. Upon impact a massive crater is made, or impalement.
Note
Limit 3 times per battle.
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~Approved~

(Kuchiyose : Balder no Kori Kuguma)- Balder the Black Bear
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Balder the Black bear. Balder has a nature affinity for fire element and is a skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi bear clan; able to release large burst of fires. Known for his speed and his ability to release a dense chakra endow smokescreen. Being dense with chakra the smokescreen can be recalled if blown away.

 

[Azaghast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fuuin : Teiryuu ( Sealing : Restrict )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
The user creates a seal for the kanji of "Restrict", which effectively blocks the opponent's chakra from flowing into that object. This cannot be used on the opponent himself, as he will only project chakra outwards to create Jutsu.
This seal can be delivered by touch or thrown attached to a kunai, much like a paper bomb.
~ Does 15 damage to the user
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|Pending|
Who taught you fuuinjutsu?

Taijutsu Kata: Ekitaikai ( Physical Technique Style: Fluid Ocean )
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
This fighting style is characterised by focus on calculating the opponent's strikes, dodging with minimum effort and strikes that do damage to a variety of body parts than just one.
The user shapes their chakra into a circle around them, with a radius of five metres. As the opponent or the opponent's techniques travel over this field, they "ripple" the chakra in a particular way based on their direction and speed, allowing the user to calculate the trajectory of the attacks, and hence dodge ( much like a ripple caused when a stone is thrown into a lake )
This style also focuses on multiple damage causing strikes - for example, a hard palm to the heart will cause pain, coughing, as well as possibly a fractured rib.
This taijutsu kata also has weapon utilisation capabilities. The primary weapon is a set of curved swords, though the user can use any weapon they prefer. The user is able to change the angle of their weapon attack midway through the attack, allowing them to bypass the opponent's defenses.

Spoiler

The swords look like these:

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~ Does 5 damage to the user per turn
~ Costs 10 chakra per turn to maintain the circle
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|Pending|

No one taught me Fuuin per se.
I thought I could submit this and then use it once I learnt Fuuin.

Also, why is the second one pending ?

 

[Poseidon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Iten Mizutoho Jutsu) Turbulent Water Walking Skill
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
An advanced version of the water walking taught to Genin, this technique, which requires more control, allows the user to walk even on moving and turbulent water.

|Approved|

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Tsuchi Shouten Seikou) - Earth Release: Earth's Converging Point
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60(+30)
Damage Points: 100 (15 to user)
Description: The users first sends his chakra trough the ground (30 Chakra) and will inject it on the ground and underground. In the next turn the user will use the chakra filled earth and will make it converge all in one point with such force that will crush whatever is inside of it (60 Chakra). This jutsu leaves a huge creater on the ground due to the mass of earth utilized. The user needs to send chakra trough the ground and can only use this jutsu in the next turn. This jutsu lasts one whole turn. The user takes 15 damage because he is hit by some rocks and because of the great amount of used chakra. Can only be used once per battle.

|Declined|
Jutsu Exist

And btw, could you tell me what is wrong with the game over jutsu?
I'll tried to restrict it more

(Emono O-ba) - Game Over
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: All
Damage Points: N/A (will make the heart of the user stop)
Description: The user will concentrate all of his chakra in its heart and will release it all at once. This will make the user to have huge speed (not as fast as the gates) and strength and will make him able to use very strong jutsus which will drain all of the user’s chakra. Thanks to the enormous amount of chakra released the user can control his element at will with no need of hand signs and some jutsus that require a huge mass of chakra can be used. Lasts 3 turns, after this, the user’s heart will stop beating. Can only be used once per battle, only in a Kakuzu Bio and can only be used on 1 mask. Must have perfect control over all masks, meaning needs to be at least Kage level.
|Pending|
Kind of Oped..
I'm not Kage level btw need to spam xD

(Emono O-ba) - Game Over
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: All
Damage Points: N/A (will make the heart of the user stop)
Description: The user will concentrate all of his chakra in its heart and will release it all at once. This will make the user to have huge speed (not as fast as the gates) and strength and will make him able to use very strong jutsus which will drain all of the user’s chakra. Thanks to the enormous amount of chakra released the user can control his element at will with no need of hand signs and some jutsus that require a huge mass of chakra can be used.Lasts 3 turns, after this, the user’s heart will stop beating.Can only be used once per battle, only in a Kakuzu Bio and can only be used on 1 mask. Must have perfect control over all masks, meaning needs to be at least Kage level. The user can only use the element from the mask he sacrifices and 2 jutsus per turn while Emono O-ba is active

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|Declined|
Still kind Oped.

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose: Kokuou Hydra (Summoning: King Hydra)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user bites their thumb, and wipes it on any surface. They can then summon a legendary three headed hydra, that is the size of a king summon. The hydras main ability is that they can use any water based moves that the summoner can, while the hydras skin is as hard a steel leaving them protected from all E-C rank Ninjutsu/Taijutsu. Because they have three heads they can use water jutsu simultaneously.
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|Approved|

No Pick atm.


Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ( Devils Leg)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+20 to taijutsu attacks, and leg based fire jutsu)
Description: This form of taijutsu is where the user will use air friction to set their leg/s on fire, adding extreme heat to the impact of kicks, ableling them to break through most defensives. In this from the user, due to the high temperature, has more speed, more strength, and the ability to burn the opponent. While like this, the user can light the opponent on fire.

Note: Can only be used Twice per battle.
Note: While in this from the user cant use Wind jutsu.
Note: Lasts 3 turns.
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|Declined|
Remove that last 3 turns part. and make usable 3 times per battle. Resubmit


Looks like this...

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Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ( Devils Leg)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+20 to taijutsu attacks, and leg based fire jutsu)
Description: This form of taijutsu is where the user will use air friction to set their leg/s on fire, adding extreme heat to the impact of kicks, enabling them to break through most defenses. In this form the user, due to the high temperature, has more speed, more strength, and the ability to burn the opponent. While like this, the user can light the opponent on fire.

Note: Can't use wind jutsu next turn.
Note: Useable 3 times per battle.
|Approved|

Taijutsu: Premier Hache (First-Rate Mincemeat)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80 (+10 with Devils Leg is activated)
Description: The user does a running jump and kicks with both legs into the opponent’s stomach rapidly various times, but if the user has Devils Leg activated the heat will greatly increases the power.

Note: Can only be used Twice per battle.
|Approved|

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

2nd submission of the week

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Gorillas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon an ape into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the ape of their choice. The size of the apes will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All apes are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Nine Tailed Naruto~

Animals related to this summoning

Spoiler

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: King Kong
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth King Kong. King Kong is a huge sliver back gorilla twice the size of Gamubunta, with the ability to use fire and wind techniques. He also has the ability to breath fire that is equal to A-Rank. He is also able to use taijutsu. He has an huge chakara source which the user can draw from which if done will give the user increased speed and strength and also is very muscular in both his arms and his legs allowing him to use both in a fight which he can combine with his ability to channel chakara. Even with his size he has speed.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts for 3 turns~
~Can't summon Apes for the remainder of the battle~
|Declined| Channel chakra? What do you mean? Also remove twice gambunta part.

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Tiki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Tiki. Tiki is a gorilla bigger than Gamubunta about twice his size, he also has a large chakara source though not as large as King Kong and he is also very muscular and can use all taijutsu and has a incredible speed. Tiki has the power to use both lightning and water jutsus.
~Lasts for 3 turns~
|Declined|
How incredible is this speed? And remove the twice the size of gambunta part.

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Loki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Loki. He is a great sized gorilla the same size as Tiki, he has spent ages in the practicing the art of earth jutsus and has gained the ability to use earth based jutsus. Very muscular and has a huge chakara source. He is also a skilled taijutsu user and has great speed.
~Lasts 3 turns~
|Approved|
How great is the speed, and remove the twice the size of gamabunta part.

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

Touch of the Black Plague
Type-Supplementary
Rank-S
Range-Short
Chakra cost-40
Damage-N/A
Description- The user places a special tag on the opponent. Once placed this tag instantly releases, causing a slow-paced disease to effect the opponent. What this does is cancel all modes/power-ups the opponent might be using (Sage mode, Eight gates, Curse Mark,etc) by attacking their chakra systems.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use this jutsu
*This jutsu can only be used once per battle, however the opponents mode/power up cannot be used again this battle.
*This jutsu is ineffective on medical ninja

|Pending Who taught you Fuuinjutsu?|

Spoiler

(Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki)- Heavens Gliding Dragon Flash
Type- Attack/Defense
Rank- S
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 40
Damage- 80 (90 if first attack is avoided and second hits) (-30 to user)
Description- The user uses his chakra to incredibly boost his speed, adding instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword. If the initial strike is avoided or blocked the force of the unusually fast slashing motion displaces the air around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the oppenent in; as this happens, the user spins around for a second strike adding force and momentum to the swing due to the vacuum effect of the first swing for an even stronger strike. Because of the extreme speed needed to preform this jutsu, it eventually wears down the users body and is dangerous to overuse.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Second Strike Unavoidable unless with use of a space/time ninjutsu
*Cannot use any Taijutsu for 3 turns after using this due to the strain it puts on the body.
*Can only be used twice per battle

|Approved|
No mimicking the gates.

Spoiler

(Ku Zu Ryu Sen)- Nine-headed Dragon Strike
Type- Attack
Rank- A
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 30 (because of booting the users speed)
Damage- 60
Description- The user uses his extreme speed to rush towards the opponent and simultaneously deals nine strkes to the fundamental targets of swordsmanship, making guarding and dodging virtually impossible. (Meaning it cannot be blocked by taijutsu)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have a Katana to use this jutsu
*No B-rank or higher taijutsu next turn
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The speed of this attack is equivalent to that of a Hidden Lotus.

|Declined|
No mimicking the gates. Sounds a bit like Gentle Fist.

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninpou: Kaze Sanpo) Ninja Art: Wind Walk​

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 05
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is an advanced form of the climbing tree’s training and the water walking training. The user focuses their chakra into the soles of their feet. Then by jumping upward the chakra keeps the user stable in mid-air, enabling them to walk in the air. The user must keep a constant and stable flow of chakra in the soles of their feet, in order to keep balance on the shifting air particles. The chakra in the soles of the feet, draw the air particles and molecules together to form a somewhat stable platform on the soles of the user’s feet.
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure
*lasts for 7 turns or for how ever long you want it to last under the 7 turns

|Declined|
Existing Jutsu

(Akimichi Kata: Genjutsu: Sakuhen Akuma no jutsu) Akimichi Style: Illusion Technique: Chip Nightmare Jutsu​

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user opens up a packet of chips and starts to munch on them; the sound of the packet opening activates the Genjutsu. The target is trapped inside a chip packet and has a craving for chips, so they start to eat all the chips until they are the only thing left in the packet, then they hear a noise and the packet opens and they see themselves look into the packet and say “What a rip-off! There’s only one chip! Well like Chouji says the last bite of a meal is the best bite of all” Then they reach into the bag and grab the target (who has been transformed into a chip, with a face xd) and then eats them.
*Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan
*Must have a packet of any flavored chips.
*Paralyzes the target for 2 turns by fear.
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure

|Approved|LAWL xd

(Neko Mo-do Tsugi Ni) Cat Mode Stage Two​

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (-15 to the user for each turn it is in use)
Description: Like the original Neko Mo-Do the user takes on the characteristics of a cat. The user’s senses are the same strength except for their sight; the user’s sight becomes accustomed to speeds equal to the Neko Mo-Do’s speed. All taijutsu and ninjutsu damage are the same as ‘Stage 1’. The user’s eyes become that of a cat and his speed becomes equivalent to double of Lee’s speed when lee took his weights off. The user’s nails grow longer. The user is able to sense chakra and the user’s chakra is doubled, due to this the user releases chakra that forms a cloak around the user, the cloak looks like a regular cat. The user can use the chakra to lengthen the user’s range of taijutsu.
*Only lasts for 4 turns.
*Must have activated Neko Mo-Do
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure.
*The chakra can only block elemental jutsu up to C-rank.
*After the mode has ended, the user cannot move for 1 turn.
*Must have signed the Contract with the Cats (held by Hazure)
Note: The cloak is nothing like the Demon Cloaks the Jinchuuriki have; this cloak does not act on its own accord but on the thoughts of the user. The user must know where an attack is coming from for it to be able to defend him/her, they still take damage from the use of the chakra.

|Pending|

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doujutsu: Metsuki Of Ato Shippuu) Eyes Of A Hurricane
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user activates their doujutsu and looks into the eyes of the opponent,if the opponent looks at the users eyes, they are trapped in this attack, the target starts to feel like is spinning, and then starts to feel getting cut and ripped into pieces, the opponent is hurt very badly.
Note: Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle
Note: Can Only Be Used/Taught By SinRival

I removed that bit about cannot escape
|Declined|
What doujutsu do you possess?

(Katon: Kuroi Kashou)Fire Style: Black Burn
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases crows of flame that appear out of the user, and start to form blasts of fire, the user also turns into black flames that dissapear and then appear where the user set any crows, and can decide which crow to appear to, when the user reaches the target, the user turns into the users normal self and release black flames that attack the opponent.
Note: The user can keep it as armor, that will hurt anybody who touches it.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Only People Taught by SinRival Can use it
|Approved|
Limit Only 4 crows can be made per use.

(Taijutsu: Dageki Of The Howaido Honoo) Strike Of The White Flame
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user charges alot of chakra into their body, then releases it, turning parts of their body into a white flame that can burn up to the sun's tempeture if touched long enough, they then grow wings of white flame, and can run at the same pace as 6th gates, when the user runs its like they teleport, its so quick, 3rd tomoe sharingan will only be able to glance at parts, but cannot see it so well, mangekyou can follow it easily. When used, it increases heart rate and the flow of chakra, so when it finishes you cannot try any c-rank or higher taijutsu, as it can kill you. When the target gets hit the target will feel triple pain of b-rank and below attacks. When flying in the air the winged flames will disperse in rain, and can keep up to intense speed.
Note: Can only be used 1 per battle
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Only SinRival can use/teach
Note: After use, you will slow down by a half
|Declined|
White Fire is a Custom Element. Also Overpowered

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Water Style; Blessed Drop (Suiton; keitaku tekika)
Rank; S
Type; Attack/Defense (can be both at the same time)
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user collects moisture from the air into an orb shape, the user keeps on collecting water and condenses it into the orb, the friction upon condensing produces electricity, thus an orb of condensed electrified cold water, upon impact the orb releases large ammount of water capable enough of blocking the highest level wind fire combo's and strong lightning techniques.
Note; No water source needed to perform this technique, though a water source can increase the speed of forming the orb.

At the blocking part i said blocking not overpowering, don't misunderstand that part.
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|Declined| Remove the highlighted area. resubmit.

Earth Style; Ground Dasher (Doton; Daichiyakushin)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stomps on the ground that first makes a tomb of earth binding the opponent tight, then the user stomps again the brings rock out of the ground that goes rushing towards the opponent. The opponent gets crushed if he is underground due to flipping of the earth and stomping.
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|Declined|

Water Style; Blessed Drop (Suiton; keitaku tekika)
Rank; S
Type; Attack/Defense (can be both at the same time)
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user collects moisture from the air into an orb shape, the user keeps on collecting water and condenses it into the orb, the friction upon condensing produces electricity, thus an orb of condensed electrified cold water, upon impact the orb releases large ammount of water capable enough of blocking strong wind/fire(combo) and lightning techniques.
Note; No water source needed to perform this technique, though a water source can increase the speed of forming the orb.
|Approved|

Wind style; Turbulence (Fuuton; fuon)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Entire feild
Chakra cost: 40
Damage; 80
Description; A tremendous blast of wind, that increases the air pressure in most of the battle field which cause deafness and lessening of oxygen.
|Declined|

Twin Snake Sacrifice technique (Sujasosai no jutsu)
Rank; Forbidden
Range; Short
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; N/A
Description; This forbidden jutsu is a murder/suicide attack that kills both user and the target. By grabbing the opponents hand and performing a one-handed seal, 2 snakes are summoned from the sleeve that bites both the targets wrist killing them instantly with a deadly venom. Both targets die before they have time to react.
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Forbidden Fire style; Hells shine (kinkaton no jutsu; Naraku terasu)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost; 50
Damage; 80
Description: An attack that releases an invisible flame in the air which burns down the targets, it is difficult to avoid it even with time/space(unless if you could judge the flame). By drawing hydrogen particles near then burning them in the preasence of oxygen in the air creates a partially invisible flame, unseen normaly. Inhaling it causes instant death.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle. Doujutsu can see through this.
-Based on real life science.
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Weapon Japanese Name:Kyuudoragon no Enjin
Weapon English Name: Ring of the 9 Dragons
Rank; Forbidden.
Chakra cost; 40 per clone, 40 per absorption.
Description: A super natural item taken from the Tomb of the Dragon Emperor,China. The special ability of the ring is that it can make upto 9 complete flesh clones of the original. The ring has 9 Dragons incarnated over it which glows upon contact with the users chakra, the dragons divide the users soul and makes a copy of the users body which absorbs the divided soul, though it seems like a molecules splitting in to atoms. This is perhaps the greatest drawback of this ring, an incomplete soul means lots of problems the users can face. The user can always absorb back the clone, though the chakra used to make an absorb clones is too much, another weakness.
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[Black Reaper]

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Katon/Ration: Soshi Toubou (Fire/Lightning Style: Elemental Escape)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will charge a large amount of fire chakra or lightning chakra all throughout their body, they will then release it all at once creating a large explosion of either fire or lightning. This jutsu is mostly used in situations where the user is trapped and can’t use handseals, but this jutsu can also be used for offensive play.

Note: Can only be used 3 time per battle.
Note: Can’t use either fire or lightning jutsu next turn.
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Fuuton: Tenrai(Wind Style: Tenrai)
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user forms a set of handsigns then releases a layer on wind charka around their body, the user has the ability to manipulate the layer of wind charka an form blades at any part of the body an can increase the size of blades at will, the largest the blade can get varies from what part of the body the it was made at,blades on the arm an legs can get to the size of an

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,smaller places like knees elbows etc dont get nearly that large.

Note:Jutsu Lasts for 3 turns
Can only be used twice a battle
Can cut through up to A rank harden materials an block up to S rank lightning

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Kinjutsu : Omoi-Sata Rei(Forbidden Technique: Mind-State Zero)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:
Description: The user clears their mind an goes into Zen-Like State, in this form all the users emotion an pain are sealed at it increases the users focus levels, reaction times an increases their overall speed an power, the reason for this is because when people are influenced by emotions their power becomes impure by using Mind-State Zero an since the user is a Zen-Like state their body attacks in an Insinct like manner.

Note: Increases all Attack/Defense Jutsu up one Rank(except for Forrbidden Rank)
Because the user Is acting off Insinct he/she can predict close range attacks

Only can Be used once per battle
Lasts for 2 turns
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Kuchiyose:Takeshi Ligre (Summoning Technique: Takeshi the Ligre )
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The User bites his thumb an places his hand on the ground an Summons Takeshi the Ligre, Takeshi is a large Ligre with good speed an strength an posses a fercious roar the roar is a sound type jutsu that has enough force to shatter ones ear drum the user is ineffected of this jutsu because of a contract signed with takeshi
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