guys how can I make it approvable? I have an idea of making it weakening enemy techs and as a side effect keep the chakra draining part, what I lower greatly but I don't know... would that be ok?
(Hiru Genkotsu) - Vampiric Fist
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background:
Vampiric Fist was invented after investigating different fighting styles, hidden abilities and jutsus that are using raw chakra to affect the opponent's chakra system, or in some way steal chakra from the opponent. The basic idea was coming from the Hyuuga's fighting style to target the opponent's chakra network and the Aburame clan's special bugs that are sucking and feeding on chakra. After looking into these styles and studying about other elemental and non elemental jutsus that allows the user to drain chakra from the opponent, one came up with the idea to create a style that is focusing on stealing chakra. However since he wasn't a Hyuuga or an Aburame, he had to come up with a style that allows him to do so. The easiest way was to find out a close combat style that when gets in contact with the opponent and deal damage, at the same time drains his chakra too. After years of practicing and investigating, he came up with a special chakra circulation style that became the basic of this style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Vampiric Fist is based on the user's ability to drain the opponent's chakra or chakra from the environment. For this, he has to create a circulation of chakra that is leaving and re-entering his own body and is in sync and direct contact with his own chakra flow. To achieve this, the user first makes his chakra to flow with greater speed in his body than normal. Normally only in the part of the body he is using the style with, but he can make his whole chakra flow to increase in speed. Then as it's done, the user picks a part of his body that he will use to release his chakra and an another part of his body where he makes it to re-enter. The only thing that is left from here is to release the chakra and make it flow around the user's body or body parts before it re-enters into him. In case this happens in a small area, like the hands or feet of the user, he can make the chakra to leave his body through his palms or sola and re-enter above the wrist or ankle. However while the chakra is flowing around his body, the user also has to spread it out to cover his body with it like a cloak.
Once the user has the appropriate speed to flow his chakra and created the cloak, he can now attack his opponent with it and try to steal his chakra. To steal chakra from the opponent, the user first has to make direct contact with him. This is achieved through close combat moves, aka taijutsu attacks. He kicks, hits or touches the opponent with the body parts (like arms, legs, shoulders, knees, etc.) he is using the style with and make his chakra to enter the opponent's body. This chakra thanks to the great speed it flows with enters the body easily and temporarily disturbs the chakra flow. While the chakra flow is being disturbed, the user mixes his own chakra with the opponent's and use the speed of it's flow to drag it out of the opponent. This chakra since now mixed with the user's, it enters the user's body along with his own and become his own chakra from that point. However this method would overload the user's chakra network where he uses this tech, so he has to lead this extra chakra away too. To prevent this, the user uses the direct link between his chakra network and the special flow that he uses to steal chakra. As he is draining chakra from the opponent, he makes that extra chakra to flow into his own chakra pathway system and spread it out. As it's done, he now can use that extra chakra as his own to perform jutsus.
Advanced users of this style will also become able to use this style with other fighting styles and other taijutsu attacks. All they have to do is using extra chakra to create the circualtion system and get in direct contact with the opponent. Depending on the way they use this style, the amount of chakra they steal differs too. When they use the style on it's own, they can steal a higher amount of chakra since they are only focusing on it. However if they use it with other taijutsu attacks or other style, the chakra they can steal is very limited. If the jutsu they use this style with doesn't require any chakra, they can steal a moderate amount of chakra.
Example Techniques:
(Hiru Genkotsu: Hiru Tacchi) - Vampiric Fist: Vampiric Touch
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 60
Description: A simple and yet powerful basic move of the style. The user circulates his raw chakra around his own fists by releasing the chakra from his palms and make it re-enter his body around his wrists, while at the same time shape it into a glove. Then he hits or touches the opponent with this glove and lets his own chakra to flow into the opponent's body on contact. When it's done, his chakra disturbs the opponent's allowing the user to steal it easier. As the two chakra collides, the user mixes his chakra with the opponent's and then drag it into his own body as the circulation continues. If the user is good enough, he can deal physical damage to the opponent and suck a great amount of the opponent's chakra. However if he doesn't hit, just touches the opponent, he can't deal damage to his enemy.
- jutsu can suck 30 of the opponent's chakra and make it the user's
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
Additional effects and Restrictions:
- to circulate the chakra with enough speed and drain the opponent's chakra, the user must possess excellent chakra control
Declined
Yeaaaaah, Im not a big fan of chakra draining CFS, especially not one where it's the main focus of the style.
(Hiru Genkotsu) - Vampiric Fist
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background:
Vampiric Fist was invented after investigating different fighting styles, hidden abilities and jutsus that are using raw chakra to affect the opponent's chakra system, or in some way steal chakra from the opponent. The basic concept was to efficiently stop the opponent's attack from landing and retaliate with the least effort and maximum effect. For that to achieve, the creator had to find a way to weaken the opponent while he is attacking and when he is weak, use the user's own movement and momentum to launch a counter-attack at the weakened enemy. After investigating the Hyuuga's fighting style, Aburame bugs, different chakra draining and chakra transmitting techniques, the creator finally had a rough idea how to do it. That is by injecting chakra into the opponent's body and disturb the chakra flow. However it was easier said than done. The how was still unknown. It was clear that a one time chakra injection won't work due to the creator had no possessin of the Hyuuga's Byakugan nor he had bugs up his sleeve. It was also clear he had to do it while his opponent is close and attacking. A simple transmitting wouldn't help either since the opponent would simply absorb it and use as his own, so there was only 1 way to achieve the desired effect. That is to make the chakra enter the opponent's body with great speed and then make it leave with the same speed. To incorporate it with the style, the user had only 1 way. Use taijutsu moves as a base, create a flow of chakra that does the desired effect and finally train his body to move fast enough to be able to finish his techniques in time. The rest was just a detail.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Vampiric Fist is based on the concept of avoid/block incoming close combat attacks from any and all opponents, weaken them and/or their techniques and then retaliate. These 3 concepts were incorporated into 1 style, what made it extremely hard but at the same time useful style.
The first and at the same time second most important part of the style is the first concept, the avoiding/blocking. For that to be achieved, the user has to train his body to be able to react even in the very last moment with the best possible effect. After an intense training in close combat, the user's body will have increased speed and agility that will allow these movements. However even if the user has enough speed to avoid an incoming attack, his movements still have to make it possible to retaliate later on. For that, the style uses fast and fluid movements that are based on spinnings, side-steps, body-throws and attacks that are coming from these defensive actions. With these movements however hard to counterattack with enough force to take down the opponents, that's why the user has to weaken them during the first step.
This weakening procedure is the second and most important concept of the style and at the same time the hardest too. To weaken the opponents and their techniques, the creator came up with a simple looking process. That is to infuse chakra into the opponents' body/chakra system as well as their techniques and disturb the chakra flow. Since ninjas using their chakra to strengthen their own bodys, with injecting chakra that disturb that chakra flow, users of this style became able to weaken their opponents and their techniques for a short period of time. However a one time chakra injection won't have enough effect to achieve satisfactory results, that's why the users have to keep that injection up as much as possible.
The trick of this continuous injection lies in the user's ability to control and manipulate his chakra, chakra flow and circulating speed. However it's hard to keep injecting chakra into the opponent's body by default, but doing this in a close combat situation makes it normally impossible or at least very difficult. That's why the creator came up with the idea of making his own chakra circulate outside his own body, connect it with his own chakra network and speed up the chakra flow. With that 3 steps in one he can make his own chakra to forcefully enter the opponent's body in case of direct contact, disturb the chakra flow to enough extend to weaken him and allow the user to retaliate while he is in a dangerous position. This however doesn't mean that the opponent will be defenseless, not at all, but that short weakened and surprised state will leave enough openings to the user to attack.
To create this special circulating system around his body or body parts, the user has to release his chakra through smaller parts of his body, pretty much like his palm, form it into a cloak like shape or make it look like flowing water around his body and then let the chakra re-enter his body in a different place and direct it back into his chakra network. This on it's own still not enough to weaken the opponent, that's why the user forcefully make it flow with greater speed. With the increased speed, form and flowing direction of the chakra around his body, the user now will be able to make it enter the opponent's body and disturb his chakra flow. This disturbation method is pretty simple too. When the opponent gets in direct contact with the user, the user's chakra will enter the opponent's body, since it was previously being flown there with quite force and speed. The entering chakra will forcefully push away and at some point mix up with the opponent's chakra, and with that make disturbances in it. This unexpected disturbance in chakra flow will weaken the started attack to the extent that it can be pushed away by the user more easily. Side effect of this method is, during the mixing up, the user unintentionally drags some of the opponent's chakra into his own body. However an experienced user can attenuate it to the point where it becomes harmless to him and he can use it as his own.
There's an another method to achieve similar results without using the style with defensive or countering moves. For that the user still circulates his chakra by making it leave his body and re-enter again, but it's done near the same place. For example the user releases his chakra on his upper arm near the elbow, form it into a sphere and make it re-enter is body on the lower arm, still close to the elbow. This sphere is still quite small and is in direct contact with his chakra flow, but thanks to the small size it won't break when it gets in contact with the opponent. The user then only has to attack his opponent with his elbow and land a hit to achieve the same effect. If that attack lands, the opponent's defense will be weaker than normal. Masters of the style can use this method to go on the offense and get the upper hand on a close combat fight. They will also be able to create several small bubbles/spheres around their joints at the same time, allowing for greater variety of attacks.
The last and least important concept of the style is the counter-attack. Since the style's main purpose is the dodging and weakening process, the creator put less effort into this last step. However this is still important to take down the opponent. By the time the user reaches this point, the opponent's attack will be blocked, dodged or redirected by the user and upon his weakened state, the opponent will be most probably confused and surprised too. Attacking in this state is easy. The user only has to use his momentum from his side-step, spinning or body throw and launch a regular attack at the opponent. These attacks has the same strength as normal attacks, but if aimed at the weakened body parts of the opponent, they can still deal more damage. Best example is, if the opponent starts with a straight punch, the user counters it with a side-step and spinning combination and at the same time pushes the opponent's attacking arm to the opposite side while weaken his arm with his chakra. Using his speed from the step and spin and his free other hand, he can easily stab the opponent with a kunai, or break his ribs with a strong punch. Because of the weakened arm, the opponent won't be able to stop that attack completely or at all, but even if he does, he will still take more than regular damage to his arm.
Example Techniques:
(Hiru Genkotsu: Hiru Tacchi) - Vampiric Fist: Vampiric Touch
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (Stolen: 10)
Damage: 60
Description: A simple and yet powerful basic move of the style. The user releases his raw chakra through his hands or feet, make it flow around his lower arms or benders and make it re-enter his body through his elbows or knees. He makes his chakra flow like water in a spiraling manner to keep it close to his body and generate enough force, then waith for his opponent to attack. Once the attack starts, the user uses his arms or legs to redirect the opponent's attack by getting into direct contact with him and weaken his arm or leg. How the redirecting part works is up to the user. He can use side-steps, spinnings or if possible body throws too. He can use complex movements like a combination of block and leg sweeping. All that matters to weaken the opponent. When the opponent is weakened and can't attack, the user can attack however he feels like.
- attack and defense is explained in free form manner
- weakening lasts only a few seconds after direct contact occurs
- can only be used 4 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
(Hiru Genkotsu: Rib Breaker) - Vampiric Fist: Une Bure-ka
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (Stolen: 10)
Damage: 60
Description: An advanced technique of the style. The user releases his raw chakra through his upper arm close to his elbow, form a sphere of chakra around it close to his skin and then make it re-enter into his body on the lower arm still close to the elbow. With that, he creates a bubble around his elbow. Then the user attacks his opponent with a simple elbow strike. This strike however disturbs the chakra and chakra flow in his body, soften up his muscles and make the strike more powerful and deal more damage. It will allow the user to break bones more easily too.
- attack and defense is explained in free form manner
- weakening lasts only a few seconds after direct contact occurs
- can only be used 4 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
Additional effects and Restrictions:
- manipulating his chakra on this level, needs the user to possess excellent chakra control and need to be at least Kage rank
- to learn this style, the user has to start Ninjutsu and get up to C-rank at least as well as master Taijutsu
- after mastering the style the user will have increased speed and agility compared to others and will be able to move in dire situations
- users of this style will be able to use this style with additional Taijutsu techniques, but will pray the price by using additional chakra
- weakening effect only lasts for a few seconds after direct contac occurs
- the amount of absorbed/stolen chakra depends on the used technique and the amount of chakra used in the process that are the following:
* E-rank steals: 0 chakra
* D-rank steals: 0 chakra
* C-rank steals: 5 chakra
* B-rank steals: 5 chakra
* A-rank steals: 10 chakra
* S-rank steals: 10 chakra
, I swear Howard, with your mind you could easily create a Bee Venom CE...if something like that is even possible/Not already in existence
