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*I inhale as much air as I can. When Im finished gathering my air, I infuse some of my fire chakra into my lungs. I gather the air into my mouth and visualize a ball of fire. I add as much chakra as I can and then blow out the air very hard. As soon as the chakra infused air hit the normal air I burst more chakra out of my mouth. I then attempt to shoot out three fire balls.*
*Nothing happens.* o_o

You missed a crucial step - with most fire jutsu, just having the chakra filled air hit normal air won't cause it to ignite; you have to remember that you still have the ability to manipulate your chakra at a distance - with this, you'll use the nature of fire chakra to cause an actual ignition, or a spark, which will ignite the rest of your chakra.

Everything else you did was absolutely perfect, but you didn't actually use your chakra to ignite the air.

^_^ So, try again, and mention how you use your chakra to create the flame (from here on out, I won't really require this step, as it'll be understood to function in all the fire jutsu, but seeing as this is the first fire jutsu, it's important that you know).
 

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*Nothing happens.* o_o

You missed a crucial step - with most fire jutsu, just having the chakra filled air hit normal air won't cause it to ignite; you have to remember that you still have the ability to manipulate your chakra at a distance - with this, you'll use the nature of fire chakra to cause an actual ignition, or a spark, which will ignite the rest of your chakra.

Everything else you did was absolutely perfect, but you didn't actually use your chakra to ignite the air.

^_^ So, try again, and mention how you use your chakra to create the flame (from here on out, I won't really require this step, as it'll be understood to function in all the fire jutsu, but seeing as this is the first fire jutsu, it's important that you know).
*Again, I inhale as much air as I can. When Im finished gathering my air, I infuse some of my fire chakra into my lungs and the air I inhaled. I gather the air into my mouth and visualize a ball of fire. I add as much chakra as I can and then blow out the air very hard. As soon as the chakra infused air hit the normal air I burst more chakra out of my mouth. Also, as soon as my air hits the normal air, I do what I did to the chakra paper, to the air and chakra in front of me. I then attempt to shoot out three fire balls.*
 

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*Again, I inhale as much air as I can. When Im finished gathering my air, I infuse some of my fire chakra into my lungs and the air I inhaled. I gather the air into my mouth and visualize a ball of fire. I add as much chakra as I can and then blow out the air very hard. As soon as the chakra infused air hit the normal air I burst more chakra out of my mouth. Also, as soon as my air hits the normal air, I do what I did to the chakra paper, to the air and chakra in front of me. I then attempt to shoot out three fire balls.*
*Three small fireballs shoot out of your mouth into the air in front of you.* ^_^ Very well done.

Now, we can move on to the next jutsu, which is:


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.



This jutsu requires no handseals, and is fairly simple. ^_^

This jutsu works by simply throwing shuriken at the same moment you breath out fireballs, causing them to become engulfed in flame.

Like all the fire jutsu that work like this, this is handy if you ever find yourself in a situation when your shuriken ever need a bit more kick...but...given that we can infuse shuriken with chakra and throw them without it counting as a move, it's probably already possible to do this already without a jutsu.

Furthermore, there's actually a stronger version of this jutsu (two of them, if I remember correctly), so you'll not be likely to ever use this one.

So, I want you to demonstrate. Throw some shuriken at that tree *points*, and engulf them with fireballs, forming them as you just did previously.
 

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*I take out three shuriken.I infuse them with some chakra. I then throw them at the tree and at the same time breath fire onto them.*
Not right. =/

This jutsu works by throwing your shuriken and engulfing them in fire-balls - that is, you fire the fireballs at the same time you're throwing the shuriken.

I said this jutsu could be compared to focusing chakra into your shuriken, not that it worked that way.

So, once again, and with more detail, please.
 

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*I take out three more shuriken. I then focus chakra into my lungs. Afterwards, I thriw the shuriken. At the same time, I blow fire onto the shuriken.*
Lackluster description, however, you get the point. o_o

So, next we'll move on to:


Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.



This jutsu requires no handseals.

^_^ This is practically the same as the very first jutsu we preformed, except you're exhaling one, large fireball, instead of several smaller ones.

This also has the same usefulness and flaws as the first one, as well.

Give it a shot - you already know how to use it.
 

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*I inhale a large amount of air infusing chakra as I do so. I then blow out one, small fireball. When I shoot it out, I add more chakra making it bigger.*
Good enough.

The next jutsu we'll be doing is:


Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.



I'd like to try a bit of an experiment, though, to see if it works better for training.

I want you to tell me:

Handseals required:
Advantages to the technique:
Disadvantages to the technique:
Potential Strategies:
How the technique is preformed (in detail):

I'll fill you in on any gaps you leave, and then we'll move on to actually preforming the technique (meaning, in the last section, I do not want you to preform it, but rather explain how you think it is preformed).
 

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Handseals: No clue. >_>
Advantages: Can cause massive damage
Disadvantages: Can be interrupted or backfired
Potential: Used to take out multiple enemies or get away with the gas
How: The user would inhale and use his chakra to create flammable gas in their lungs. Then, the user would blow out the gas and create a spark or use a fire Jutsu to make the gas explodonate.
 

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Handseals: No clue. >_>
Advantages: Can cause massive damage
Disadvantages: Can be interrupted or backfired
Potential: Used to take out multiple enemies or get away with the gas
How: The user would inhale and use his chakra to create flammable gas in their lungs. Then, the user would blow out the gas and create a spark or use a fire Jutsu to make the gas explodonate.
Handseals: Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Tiger

Your descriptions are lack luster...

Good uses for this jutsu are empowering a wind-jutsu without out-right igniting it, or allowing an explosive kunai to have a much bigger blast radius by having it ignite the gas; it could also be used to power-up fire-jutsu.

This jutsu works by infusing the air in your lungs with your chakra and changing it's composition with your chakra, thus creating a flammable gas...I don't care much for the super-chakra-science that deals with the manipulation of the compounds involved, so simply say that you use your chakra to change the chemical composition of your breath, and give the jutsu a try.
 

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*I take a deep breath of air. I the put my chakra into the air I just gathered. Using shape manipulation, I shape the air into a dark, flammable gas. I then turn to the right and blow out the gas I just made. I then throw an explosive kunai into the gas.*
 

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*I take a deep breath of air. I the put my chakra into the air I just gathered. Using shape manipulation, I shape the air into a dark, flammable gas. I then turn to the right and blow out the gas I just made. I then throw an explosive kunai into the gas.*
Alright.

That concludes the D-ranks, so we'll be moving on to the C-rank jutsu, beginning with:


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique.



Handseals required:
Advantages to the technique:
Disadvantages to the technique:
Potential Strategies:
How the technique is preformed (in detail):

I do have a question, though. Would you rather continue training with the method we have done for the last two techniques, where I make you do your own research, or would you rather I give you the information, as we did for the first few?
 

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I prefer this way better. I gives me more understanding of the jutsu.
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Handseals required: I dont know. (This is the only thing Im going to have trouble with)
Advantages to the technique: It can be used to burn the opponent. Also, in the description, make them collapse from the heat.
Disadvantages to the technique: Its short range so Id have to be close to use it. Judging from the rank and damage, its not a sure kill.
Potential Strategies: By trapping the opponent with another jutsu one can use this to finish them of. Im guessing this jutsu would be great when used in conjuction with Water style: Black Clouds or Fire style: Mist covering technique.
How the technique is preformed (in detail): The user would breathe in air and infuse it with chakra. They would then blow it out like a whistle(to make a stream) and use more chakra to ignite it.
 

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I prefer this way better. I gives me more understanding of the jutsu.
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Handseals required: I dont know. (This is the only thing Im going to have trouble with)
Advantages to the technique: It can be used to burn the opponent. Also, in the description, make them collapse from the heat.
Disadvantages to the technique: Its short range so Id have to be close to use it. Judging from the rank and damage, its not a sure kill.
Potential Strategies: By trapping the opponent with another jutsu one can use this to finish them of. Im guessing this jutsu would be great when used in conjuction with Water style: Black Clouds or Fire style: Mist covering technique.
How the technique is preformed (in detail): The user would breathe in air and infuse it with chakra. They would then blow it out like a whistle(to make a stream) and use more chakra to ignite it.
This move requires no handseals. Note, to find handseals you'll have to do research on Narutopedia if you want to keep doing it in this method.

Notes about your listed advantage: even though it says so in the description, just being near this jutsu isn't going to make the opponent pass out. It may not even do that if it hit a higher-ranking opponent. There are a lot of fire jutsu out there, and lot of them burn much hotter than this one.

And you listed potential strategy was very good. Using the Black-Clouds is almost always a good strategy with jutsu like this, as it allows their power to be boosted at minimal cost to you.

And now, I would like you to try and preform the jutsu. Again, in detail, please.
 

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Im cool about researching techniques. ^_^
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*I breathe in some air and infuse it with fire chakra. I then heat it up. When it gets to a certain heat, I move the air to my mouth which I heat more to make the fire. I then blow out the fire as if Im whistling to make it a small stream*
 

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Im cool about researching techniques. ^_^
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*I breathe in some air and infuse it with fire chakra. I then heat it up. When it gets to a certain heat, I move the air to my mouth which I heat more to make the fire. I then blow out the fire as if Im whistling to make it a small stream*
Nicely done. Now, moving on, we have:


Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Boar โ†’ Horse โ†’ Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.




Handseals required:
Advantages to the technique:
Disadvantages to the technique:
Potential Strategies:
How the technique is preformed (in detail):

xd One of these is already given to you.
 

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Handseals required: Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Boar โ†’ Horse โ†’ Tiger xd
Advantages to the technique: The fireball destroys everything in short range. If the opponent cant get out of short range, its over.
Disadvantages to the technique: Its range is short and since its only C-rank, it can be taken out by low rank water. External ignition.
Potential Strategies: Combining it with the two jutsu mentioned above, its range can increase along with damage. If you trap the opponent with say Syrup, then it will be an easy hit.
How the technique is preformed (in detail): I would breathe in air and infuse fire chakra into it. Heat it up. I then blow it out in the ring I make with my index and thumb. After leaving my mouth, I then drastically heat up and ignite the chakra infused air to make a large fireball.
 

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Handseals required: Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Boar โ†’ Horse โ†’ Tiger xd
Advantages to the technique: The fireball destroys everything in short range. If the opponent cant get out of short range, its over.
Disadvantages to the technique: Its range is short and since its only C-rank, it can be taken out by low rank water. External ignition.
Potential Strategies: Combining it with the two jutsu mentioned above, its range can increase along with damage. If you trap the opponent with say Syrup, then it will be an easy hit.
How the technique is preformed (in detail): I would breathe in air and infuse fire chakra into it. Heat it up. I then blow it out in the ring I make with my index and thumb. After leaving my mouth, I then drastically heat up and ignite the chakra infused air to make a large fireball.
Very nice. ^_^

Now, if you would, please demonstrate.
 

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Ohkee dohkee! ^_^
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*I breathe in air and infuse it with fire chakra. I then heat it up inside my lungs. After heating it, I make a ring with my index and thumb and blow thw air into it. I drastically increase the heat right after leaving my body and create a large ball of fire*
 
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