[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

The_Empire · Jan 11, 2013

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I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------>

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-Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

-Mid range is the limit it can reach
-It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
-Only used by Dei Dei

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(This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

Dropping this
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weapon[/url] for the one above if it gets approved.

I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

±± Approved ±± Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol

(Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air and using shape manipulation shapes the water into any weapon or shield the user like to fit for the situation. The highest rank of the object that is made of water is A rank. The user can have already have water in the bearers but they must state this at the beginning of the battle.
-Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user.
-The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
-The weapons when made also feel like the real weapon when used
||Declined|| Restrict it a bit (I would suggest some form of limit to how often the shape of the water weapons can be changed)

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Sealing Arts: Shine Bright (Fuuinjutsu: Akaruku Kagayaku)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user after having Fuuin for a year, makes a tattoo on both of their arms that reacts with their chakra. The only way the tattoos react to the user chakra is when it is irregular. The tattoos glow a white light down the whole tattoo when the user chakra is irregular. The light is bright enough to see when not even looking at the arms. The user can see the light from the corner of their eyes.
-Must be posted in the bio or beginning of the battle
-Must have fuuin for a year because they need the experience to developed such sealing tattoos on themselves.

How they look when they glow but it will be brighter.

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||Declined|| What's the point of this technique?

Baba Yaga · Jan 11, 2013

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Summoning Animal: Seals
Scroll Owner: Defg
Other Users who have signed contract: n/a

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Summoning Boss if existing:n/a
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:n/a
Description and Background: Seals aka pinniped are a widely distributed and diverse group of fin-footed marine mammals which are semiaquatic comprising the families Odobenidae (the walrus), Otariidae (eared seals, sea lions, and fur seals), and Phocidae (earless seals).

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||Leaving for Scorps!||

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±± Approved ±± this was hard to search in all the threads because Seals (animal) is written the same as Seals (from Fuuinjutsu, Handseals, etc). but I didn't find a match for it.

Wakizashi · Jan 11, 2013

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(kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
Type:supplementary/summoning
Rank: A
Range:short-long
Chakra:30
Damage:None
Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
note: last three turns
note: genjutsu usable only once
||Pending|| Is this genjutsu user-specific or is it just any NarutoBase Genjutsu?

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(Futago no doragon: Kirikaeru To Kakeru)-Twin Dragons: Kirikaeru and Kakeru
Type:weapon
Rank:A
Range:short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60(when cut by kakeru)
Description:legend has it that there was a warrior in the ninja world that was so strong that he never lost a battle, including the battle between him and nidaime hokage, tobirama senju. After a while the warrior had gotten bored from all the weaklings he had defeated. After hearing legend about the power of two dragons in the distant land he traveled to face them but not for power but for the thrill of battle he had been longing for. After defeating the dragons, their power was absorbed by the warrior’s wakizashi and katana. the blade is made of dragon scales and the sheath made of dragon claw thus making both the blade and the sheath indestructable. Knowing that this power would make future challenges less entertaining due to the combined strength of his skill and the dragons’ power he discarded them leaving them for someone weaker and less skilled.

Abilities:

Kirikaeru: the wakizashi’s ability after cutting the opponent the sword can grant the ability to switch places with the opponent after focusing chakra into it.

Kakeru: the katana’s ability after focusing chakra into the katana multiple blades can extend short range from the original blade making it more difficult to avoid. The blade returns to it’s original state after chakra is withdrawn.

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||Declined|| Can you explain the Kirikaeru better? Also, these swords are pretty similar to those that already exist.

Vasto Lordé · Jan 11, 2013

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Ł Lawliet said:
( Furea ) - Flare
Type: Offensive
Rank: C - Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user first Stands and extends his right leg in front of him and his left leg to the left of him. Then he places his hands on the floor with his right hand on the floor in between his legs. Then the user lifts his left hand in the air to help with both balance and momentum, after that he puts his weight on his left leg and swings his right leg up and around. The user rotates his legs around his body, shifting his weight from one hand to the other and back again as his legs pass. This process can be done much quicker if the user was of Sannin rank and higher.

Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.
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✘ Declined ✘ What is this why does it have damage points and mentioned as an attack when i don't see any kind of attack in the description, or chakra charging as well.

-Resubmitting-

( Furea ) - Flare
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user first Stands and extends his right leg in front of him and his left leg to the left of him. Then he places his hands on the ground with his right hand on the ground in between his legs. Then the user lifts his left hand in the air to help with both balance and momentum, after that he puts his weight on his left leg and swings his right leg up hitting the opponent's leg, thigh, or knee which ever the user needs to throws him off balance and into the air sideways. The user rotates his legs around his body, shifting his weight from one hand to the other and once his head is tilted infront of his body he pushes himself off the ground with his hand and does a front flip where the back of his heel hits the opponent in his abdomen region slamming him into the ground. This process can be done noticeably faster if the user was of Sannin rank and higher.

Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.
(Good enough, Dante

?)
||Approved||

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( Genjutsu: Kabe ni mirāmirā ) - Illusionary Arts: Mirror Mirror on the wall
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases his chakra towards his opponent using ANY, VALID, medium, such as earth, water, or even through a wind gust trapping him in a Genjutsu where the opponent sees a mirror coming out of the ground infront him. The mirror has the exact same reflection of the opponent's image, but the -Mirror Reflection of the opponent- is being controlled by the user himself. This Genjutsu is aimed to shock and affect the opponent's brain by releasing a huge amount of the user's chakra towards the opponent making him disorientated to such a degree that he starts to imitate his mirror reflection instead of it being the other way around. The user then is able to control the opponent's movements using the reflection for (5) seconds, before the disorientation effect fades away and the opponent starts to realize that he's in a Genjutsu. The user cannot use the same element he used as a Chakra channeling medium in the same turn, ( example; The user used a wind gust as a medium to channel the Genjutu's chakra to the opponent, then he may NOT use any wind technique in the same turn ).

Note: Can only be used (2) times per battle, and each time has to be separated by at least (2) turns before using this technique again.
Note: If the user made handseals for a technique, the opponent will make the same handseals but CANNOT create the attack unless it was in his Jutsu arsenal from the beginning.
Note: After the (5) seconds, the opponent still needs to figure out that he's in a Gen before releasing himself from it.
Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.

||Declined|| No to the bold.

Akuma · Jan 12, 2013

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(Raiton/Katon: Maruii kaen Zuchireiki) - Lightning/Fire Release: Twist of the Blazing Thunder
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: F
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user will perform 1 handseal and focus lightning chakra into his palm, releasing it and manipulation the lightning into the shape of a rasengan-sized orb of lightning, then the user will gather fire chakra and spew out a large amount of it around the lightning orb, to serve as a coat. The user will then trust his palm foward and extend the orb into a large and fast beam of lightning, helped by the fire to twirl/spin around the lightning in ring formation, creating a fire/lightning beam combination. The shear speed of lightning and the devastating strength of fire combined with lightning make this technique deadly, and it's speed is bearly able to be tracked by a 2 tomoe sharingan. Regular naked eyes would see more of a blur move towards them. Thanks to the fire around the beam of lightning, this beam can pass through and overpower wind techniques, and thanks to it's lightning destructive strength it can also tear through and rip apart earth techniques. Due to the tremendous strength of this technique, the user's palm after using the technique is rather burned and paralized for the entire turn, not only this but the huge amount of chakra applied and controled spent on this techniques renders the user to be able to only use A rank and below Lightning and fire techniques for the following 2 turns of the match.

May only be used x1 per battle.
May only be taught by Lokí
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✘ Leaving for Scorps ✘
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±± Declined ±± DNR

Vex · Jan 12, 2013

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Lord Vile's Armor
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Self
Chakra:40 (-5 per turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:This armor looks like something out of a nightmare. It is very simply decorated, it is as black as night with a helmet that completely covers the user's head. The history of the armor is a simple and bloody one. It was forged by a material as black as night called Ebony. It was melted down, and formed into the armor by one of the first Nara clansmen. That Nara has since passed it back and forth through his clan. The armor has the ability to manipulate already existing shadows. It can manipulate these shadows into B rank tendrils similar to the shadow stitching jutsu. The difference is that the shadow tendrils come out of the armor itself, and are controlled by the user. They can move up to mid range, and there are a fair amount of them. These tendrils can be used to stab, grab, rip, and trap the enemy. Like normal shadows, the shadows from the armor can be extinguished with complete darkness, or extreme light. The armor obviously being armor in it's very nature can protect the user from simple tools such as shuriken, and kunai. The armor's other ability is it's ability to create a surge of chakra through the user allowing him to break out of C rank and below genjutsu (of course he would still need to know he was in the genjutsu). If someone other than Killua zoldyck attempted to wear the armor, that person would be consumed by shadow chakra and stabbed in the stomach. He would then be tortured, being stabbed repeatedly by the shadows until he finally succumbed to his wounds and died a slow painful death. The armor has no chakra of it's own, so it must feed on the chakra of the user every turn it is in play to function.

Restrictions

-Cannot be put on during battle, only before or after.-
-Lasts only 4 turns-
-Genjutsu break ability only once per battle-
-Only a Nara bio made by PresidentBush can use it.-
- eats 5 chakra per turn-

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||Pending|| I want another mod's opinion. By the way, you might as well have made this the Ebony Mail

Lightning Release: Thor's Hammer!
Type:Offense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user pulls out a scroll, and concentrates lightning chakra into the scroll. The lightning chakra is then disperesed into the air, and reassembles directly behind the user about as large as an elephant and composed entirely of lightning. The materialization then swings a hammer composed entirely of lightning of course directly at the opponent. If the hammer hits the opponent, it has the potential to send him flying in the opposite direction in addition to electrocuting him. The materialization then disperses.

Restrictions

-Can only be taught by PB-
-Can only be used twice per battle-
-Can break through S rank earth-
||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit (Similar Technique Exists)

Oh crap what the Hell is that?!
Type:Offense
Rank:B
Range:Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user focuses fire chakra into his body, and pressurizes it. He then channels it into his elbow, and uses it to propel himself forward. This increases the forward momentum and speed of the corresponding arm. The user then drives his fist into the enemy at a very high speed . The enemy is then sent flying several feet away.

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||Declined|| A member has brought to my attention that a similar technique already exists.

Yūsuke1 · Jan 12, 2013

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(Fuuton : Disuasenburu) - Wind Release : Disassemble
Type : Defensive / Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user releases from the palm of his right or left hand, a highly compressed senbon of wind. The senbon is slightly larger than the ordinary senbon, but being made out of wind, just makes it as invisible as a regular senbon. With a single fling of the arm towards the intended direction, the user is capable of launching the senbon at greater speeds than the average senbons, thanks to the senbon being made out of wind. The primary function of this technique is to intrude enemy techniques, reach the very core of the technique and explode, releasing an all-round raging blast of wind. As though disassembling the technique, it takes it apart from the inside, causing techniques to falter before this technique. That is the main purpose of this technique, though it could be mistaken that due to it's quick speeds and sharp piercing ability, it could be utilized to just pierce through the enemy, killing them instantly, just like that. However, an unwritten law oversees the usages of this technique. The senbon is incapable of piercing into human flesh, instead, it releases the blast of wind, knocking the opponent out cold, but not causing instant death. If they wish to rejuvenate, they may possibly be able to if the situation allows for it.

Note : Created by Yūsuke
Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn
Note : The unwritten law oversees the technique, as per said in description
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✘ Declined ✘ How would a senbon made of wind, meaning it has a very small scale do such things? that's unrealistic for one, why would you say that the needle is as invisible as other senbons, other senbons aren't invisible, you should've said "as visible as other senbons" core of the technique makes no sense, i'll leave the changes up to you, you even didn't restrict the kind of elemental or techniques it works, so this basically works against everything.

(Fuuton : Suihourenda) - Wind Release : Bubble Barrage
Type : Offensive
Rank : S
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user concentrates his wind chakra at about ten different spots in the air around his opponent. They have their distance between each other, and are placed at different angles from the opponent and are significantly near the opponent, but no where less than a meter. The tenth spot where the wind chakra is concentrated at will have to be directly placed over the opponent's body, at chest-level, behind, front or to the opponent's side. After the user get's the wind chakra in place, the user snaps his fingers and the wind chakra takes the form of bubbles of wind, that pops when in touch with any kind of surface, be it sharp or blunt. Upon being popped, it releases a sharp blast of wind that pushes the opponent into the direction where the wind sends them, which is directed by the user upon placement of wind chakra. The wind chakra that was placed directly onto the opponent acts as the techniques's trigger. Immediately after it becomes a bubble, it pops due to being so close to the opponent. It becomes much like pinball, where the enemy is the ball and he gets pushed around at high speeds, knocking against the other bubbles. Every bubble pop hurts the opponent. Within a few seconds, the technique would be over, since there aren't really a lot of bubbles. By default, if no changes was made to the final bubble, it will send the opponent flying into the sky, letting him fall back towards the ground. Most of the bones in the opponent's bodies would have already been broken upon the last bubble being popped as all the bubbles together rivals the level of S-rank.

Note : Created by Yūsuke
Note : Can only be used twice per battle
Note : While this technique is active, no wind techniques higher than A-rank can be used
Note : The minimum numher of bubbles must be ten, having more will prolong the technique's activeness, giving more time to counter
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✘ Declined ✘ This is a rip off of bubble Ninjutsu used by Utakata, wind doesn't form bubbles, only water does and with some form of shape manipulation, Utakata needs a bubble blower to do that, don't resubmit.

Mockingbird · Jan 12, 2013

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Mockingbird said:
Resubmitting:

Genjutsu: Komaiso; Taigo Sendai Yaburetayume) Illusion Technique: Great Burial; Ranks of the Irrevocably Shattered Souls
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is an advanced Non-Sharingan Genjutsu that can only be activated if and when the user can see the opponent’s body, or at least his upper torso. Within the illusion, the opponent believes that large amounts of water burst out of the ground and materialize from thin air to completely envelop and wash them away. The water will converge on and physically touch him no matter what methods of evasion are used, or whatever defense he has established. As the imaginary water washes him away, the opponent is exposed to a more powerful hallucination in which they, as a ninja, witness the pain and numerous deaths inflicted on others throughout history, during past wars and battles – The illusion manifests as a representation of the pain that war brings. The hallucination is excessively intricate and detailed, as the irrevocably shattered souls of the damned reciprocate the damage and pain that was once dealt to them in the past, using the water as their medium. While witnessing this, the water will thoroughly burn away the skin as if it was a potent acid. While this is not happening in reality – It’s nothing more than an illusion – the enemy is faced with such perceived agony and fear, that his muscles will begin to uncontrollably convulse, and he will scream out in pain, unable to fight, or even remain completely still as the pain washes over him, while under the influence of this jutsu.

*This technique can only be used twice per battle.
*The user cannot use any Genjutsu at all within the following turn.
*The user must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around.
*The user must remain still focused over the genjutsu through the entirety of the technique.
X-Approved-X added a restriction

Updating:

Genjutsu: Komaiso; Taigo Sendai Yaburetayume) Illusion Technique: Great Burial; Ranks of the Irrevocably Shattered Souls
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is an advanced Non-Sharingan Genjutsu that can only be activated if and when the user can see the opponent’s body, or at least his upper torso. Within the illusion, the opponent believes that large amounts of water burst out of the ground and materialize from thin air to completely envelop and wash them away. The water will converge on and physically touch him no matter what methods of evasion are used, or whatever defense he has established. As the imaginary water washes him away, the opponent is exposed to a more powerful hallucination in which they, as a ninja, witness the pain and numerous deaths inflicted on others throughout history, during past wars and battles – The illusion manifests as a representation of the pain that war brings. The hallucination is excessively intricate and detailed, as the irrevocably shattered souls of the damned reciprocate the damage and pain that was once dealt to them in the past, using the water as their medium. While witnessing this, the water will thoroughly burn away the skin as if it was a potent acid. While this is not happening in reality – It’s nothing more than an illusion – the enemy is faced with such perceived agony and fear, that his muscles will begin to uncontrollably convulse, and he will scream out in pain, unable to fight, or even remain completely still as the pain washes over him, while under the influence of this jutsu.

*This technique can only be used twice per battle.
*The user cannot use any Genjutsu at all within the following turn.
*The user must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around.
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✘ Declined ✘ Seriously now? when you don't understand something one of us has edited you should contact them asking for information, not resubmit it removing what we did, right now i could revoke your right to have such a technique just because of what you did here, it means when the genjutsu is cast you can't use another technique until it's finished, that's for me, contact Xylon about it and ask him for information.

I removed the last restriction because I wasn't sure what it meant.
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(Hakkyou Taijutsu: Asura no Manbennaku Hakkyou) Hakkyou Martial Art: Asura’s Ubiquitous Madness
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will begin by effectively subjecting their target to a genjutsu through the use of eye contact or hand gestures. Within the genjutsu, the user will disappear from sight, their body dissolving into a flock of crows – Though this is only the initial effect. As the user disappears, superfluous amounts of useless ‘information’ will be forcibly crammed into the mind of the opponent. The brain will interpret the ‘information’ as a form of psychosis and induce symptoms such as auditory hallucinations, bizarre persecutory delusions, giving rise to paranoia, as well as disorganized thinking, effectively disturbing cognitive function.The illusion basically serves to effectively hamper the opponent’s ability to process thought. While the opponent is deprived of the ability to think, the user will rush towards the opponent, appearing in front of them, delivering an initial punch to the solar plexus and then the left pectoral muscle. The initial two strikes serve to break the genjutsu and catch the opponent off guard as well as induce breathing difficulties, a few broken bones. The user will finish with a powerful upwards palm thrust to the throat, palm sideways, clenching down to reduce the blood flow to the brain, knocking the opponent out, and in the worst case scenario, causing cervical fracture. What makes this technique even more formidable however is that after the illusion is broken, the information is still retained within the opponent’s mind. This results in a lag of about three to four seconds in the opponent before they can focus long enough to perform techniques or undertake specific actions in the following turn.

*The illusion will only work twice per battle.
*In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of B Rank and below Hakkyou Taijutsu.
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✘ Leaving for Scorps ✘
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±± Declined ±± Too much. Reduce range, reduce rank and reduce the overal effect.

Sonnelion · Jan 12, 2013

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Ninja Art:Heavenly Light(Ninjutsu:Ten No Hikari)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:E
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:5
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will first perform one handseal,Dog,then sslam their hands together as they're hands seperate a ball of chakra will be formed this ball will then be slamed into any surface causing an explosion of sorts causing a huge burst of light that's even brighter than a normal flash bomb.

Restriction/Notes
-Can only be taught by sonnelion.
-Blindness lasts for one battle phase.
-Require one turn breaks between use.
-Doesn't affect people with doujutsu active.

Ninja Art: Demon Smoke Bomb(Ninjutsu:Oni Kemuri Kumo)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:E
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:5
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will perform one handseal,Rabbit,then grab two smoke bombs and channel chakra into them then as normal they will throw them to trigger them and as they explode because of the chakra infused the user will be able to control it to an extent the smoke will be spread wider and form several demon heads at the end of the smoke cloud.
Restrictions/Notes
-Can only be taught by sonnelion.
-Require one turn breaks between use.
-Doujutsu users will be able to see through the smoke.
-Lasts until the end of the opponent's battle phase unless dealt with.
-The user can make openings in the smoke since it's his chakra.

-Also the cloud's height is 14 feet high.

Heaven's/Hell's Call(Ten Ka Jigoku No Yobidashi)
Type:Weapon
Rank:C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:N/A[+5 for each turn chakra imbued for each weapon]
Damage:20[+10 when ability active]
Description:Heaven's call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a blue design on each of the four blades.Heaven's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will be surrounded by lightning and can paralyze if a hit lands.It also has the ability when thrown to release the chakra in the shape of a lightning saw equal to a C-rank lightning technique.When thrown the cross pike will return to the user at 20 mph.

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Hell's Call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a red design on each of the four blades.Hell's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will heat up to the point that it is on fire and glowing red hot,but not to the point that it will lose it's strength.The blades also will b surrounded by fire balls that follow the blades.Hell's call can be thrown just like heavens call and use a similar attack.

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Note
-Can be used at the same time or by themselves.
-Have to be summoned to use.
-Costs 2 chakra to summon one of the weapons.

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✘ All Declined ✘ Submitting more than 3 techniques between markers is against the rules, and thus i won't check any of your techniques. if you did this again you will be punished.

Yveltal · Jan 12, 2013

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Raiton:Kirameku Hiroi Atsuryoku - Lightning Release:Sparkling Wide Pressure
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and then channels their chakra to their hands. The user then charges the chakra thus converting it into lightning chakra. The user will then separate their hands creating streams of lightning in the gap between them. The user then brings their hands closer to each other together while shaping and compact the lightning stream into a disc and launch it at the enemy.
Note:
-Can only be used 3x
-Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix

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✘ Declined ✘ Similar techniques exist.

Raiton:Mokusei Ōku Shinka - Lightning Release:Jupiter Oak Evolution
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Bird->Rat->Horse hand seals and then gathers chakra and channels it all around their body and converts it into lightning chakra. The user then generates lightning from their pores and expands it from their body. The user then shapes the lightning into 10 discs of energy. After that the user start to spin rapidly, while launching the discs at the opponent.
Note:
-Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-Can only be used 2x

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✘ Declined ✘ Generates lightning from their pores? no you should remove that, and similar techniques exist, too generic, don't resubmit.

Magic.. · Jan 12, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Magic.. said:
New submission

(genjutsu-Kai no te) - illusion technique- hands of time
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a snake handseal,whilst ejecting chakra into the brains of their foes nearby,making them think everything in their souroundings,including the user,as well as theirselves and everything the can see in general,has frozen(motionless),though it would seem like some kind of time manipulation jutsu was used,while infact,their vision of reality was paused and they were placed in a trance like state.
-last for a turn
-Once per battle
-No s-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
-Can affect multiple targets.
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✘ Leaving both for Scorps ✘

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±± Declined ±± Too high a rank and you need more than one handseal to induce such an effect...

(genjutsu-Kai no te) - illusion technique- hands of time
Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs 3 set of handseals,whilst ejecting chakra into the brains of their foes nearby,making them think everything in their souroundings,including the user,as well as theirselves and everything the can see in general,has frozen(motionless),though it would seem like some kind of time manipulation jutsu was used,while infact,their vision of reality was paused and they were placed in a trance like state.
-last for a turn
-twice per battle
-Can affect multiple targets.
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✘ Declined ✘ Ok my concern here is the "time manipulation" jutsu you mention, there isn't anything of the sort in the narutoverse or our RP, if you mentioned it to keep your opponent from noticing that he's under a genjutsu then it's invalid, because the second everything freezes they will notice that they are under a genjutsu from that, and define motionless, does it make the opponent freeze in reality, as in unable to move? paralysis or not? that needs to be defined.

(genjutsu-Fukusū bijon) -illusion technique- multiple vision
Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a basic genjutsu where the user performs just 2 handseals,whilst casting an illusion on the foe,which changes their vision of certain things like attacks and the user, to be in multiple forms.It can be used in conjuction with elemental attacks e.g(if a fire ball is heading for the target,he sees 5 fire ball thus won't knw which to dodge) and also taijutsu attacks,where the target can't tell which is the real hand or leg thus they will surely have a hard time blocking kicks and punches.
-last for a turn.
-twice per battle.
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✘ Declined ✘ Similar techniques exist, in both genjutsu and ninjutsu.

Summer · Jan 12, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Roju said:
Custom weapon

(金沙羅, Golden Sal Tree)-Kinshara*
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Well the whip in it's self has a unique golden look while the scabbard has a 2.5 inch length. The whip can extends from the scabbard to the length of 25 feet while being manipulated by chakra to control the direction of attack and the speed in which the whip is being sent out at. meaning this is a chakra activated weapon as the whip will only extend when my chakra has been discharged into the scabbard.The whip has a flower like end at the end of it and has a unique ability where the user's sends chakra into to blind an opponent with bright flashes and light source beaming off the flower like tip. Knowing that this is a length based weapon puppet master's would have an advantage against this weapon they can easily attach chakra string to this whip to stop its movements. the whip is made of flexible titanium joints capable of flexing and moving at high speeds.This whip works very well for subdue tactics and disabling an enemy from being able to move or make hand sign by wrapping around there body as long as the enemy is wrapped up with the whip making hand signs is nearly impossible unless you can do handsigns with one hand.
Look of the
Secret technique: the user of Kinshara can change the frequency of his chakra to make a musical genjutsu that resides out of the small pin holes in the gold links of Kinshara the genjutsu is played in a crescendo type melody (meaning calming) hypnotizing the enemy leaving them motionless. Now to explain what changing the frequency will mean. By utilizing the different vibrations between raiton chakra in my hand the user can speed up the vibrations until they make a screeching type noise. Now by feeding that chakra in through the scabbard it is released out the the numerous pin holes which are setup in perfect coordination to release a melody by continuation of feeding the chakra frequencys to Kinshara.
weapon:

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Restrictions:
- light flash usage attacks with Kinshara have a limit of 3 attacks per battle and needs a one turn cool down to use.
-genjutsu effect can only be used twice in battle. And has a three turn period in between uses.
-Can only be used Roju
- can be used 5 strikes per turn as the effects of Kinshara are very melodramatic.
- The whip will only extend with roju's touch only as his my chakra has been mixed in with the fabrication of the whip

Special notes: as this is a tactic type weapon does not do direct damage to opponents rather it has effect which were all list but will list again
- binding
-bright flower light
-genjutsu
-extension (can trip and or knock over opponent as fact that Kinshara is not sharp so can only leave bruising an or internal injuries from binding or being hit.)
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✘ Declined ✘ Music genjutsu is a no, you need to have sound release and Roku NR's permission to have that, and you should in the future define the extension of a range it can reach up to, like Mid range, Long range etc, remove the flexible titanium joins, -Mugen- has Titanium release and thus your CW can't have that, and hypnotizing ability? that's a Sharingan's ability, what bright flower light? changing the chakra frequency? honestly the CW is a big mess.

Summoning Animal: Venus flytrap
Scroll Owner: Roju
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None as of yet
Description and Background:*

The Venus Flytrap (also Venus's Flytrap or Venus' Flytrap), Dionaea muscipula, is a carnivorous plant native to subtropical wetlands. It catches its prey—chiefly insects and arachnids— with a trapping structure formed by the terminal portion of each of the plant's leaves and is triggered by tiny hairs on their inner surfaces. When an insect or spider crawling along the leaves contacts a hair, the trap closes if a different hair is contacted within twenty seconds of the first strike. The requirement of redundant triggering in this mechanism serves as a safeguard against a waste of energy in trapping objects with no nutritional value.

The Venus Flytrap is a *plant whose structure can be described as a rosette of four to seven leaves, which arise from a short subterranean stem that is actually a bulb-like object. Each stem reaches a maximum size of about three to ten centimeters, depending on the time of year; longer leaves with robust traps are usually formed after flowering. Flytraps that have more than 7 leaves are colonies formed by rosettes that have divided beneath the ground.

two trigger hairs must be touched in succession within 20 seconds of each other or one hair touched twice in rapid succession, whereupon the lobes of the trap will snap shut in about one-tenth of a second. The edges of the lobes are fringed by stiff hair-like protrusions or cilia, which mesh together and prevent large prey from escaping. (These protrusions, and the trigger hairs, also known as sensitive hairs, are probably homologous with the tentacles found in this plant’s close relatives, the sundews.)
The holes in the meshwork allow small prey to escape, presumably because the benefit that would be obtained from them would be less than the cost of digesting them. If the prey is too small and escapes, the trap will reopen within 2 minutes. If the prey moves around in the trap, it tightens and digestion begins more quickly.
Speed of closing can vary depending on the amount of humidity, light, size of prey, and general growing conditions. The speed with which traps close can be used as an indicator of a plant's general health. Venus Flytraps are not as humidity-dependent as are some other carnivorous plants, such as Nepenthes, Cephalotus, most Heliamphora, and some Drosera.
The Venus Flytrap exhibits variations in petiole shape and length and whether the leaf lies flat on the ground or extends up at an angle of about 40–60 degrees.*The plant's common name refers to Venus, the Roman goddess of love.*Closeup of one of the hinged trigger hairs.

Prey selectivity

Most carnivorous plants selectively feed on specific prey. This selection is due to the available prey and the type of trap used by the organism. With the Venus Flytrap, prey is limited to beetles, spiders and other crawling arthropods. In fact, the Dionaea diet is 33% ants, 30% spiders, 10% beetles, and 10% grasshoppers, with fewer than 5% flying insects.[9] Given that Dionaea evolved from an ancestral form of Drosera (carnivorous plants that use a sticky trap instead of a snap trap) the reason for this evolutionary branching becomes clear. Can attack any other animal or fish as well if the hair's are triggered by the summoner .

Mechanism of trapping

A closing trap.Closed cilia around the prey
The Venus Flytrap is one of a very small group of plants capable of rapid movement, such as Mimosa, the Telegraph plant, sundews and bladderworts.
The mechanism by which the trap snaps shut involves a complex interaction between elasticity, turgor and growth. In the open, untripped state, the lobes are convex (bent outwards), but in the closed state, the lobes are concave (forming a cavity). It is the rapid flipping of this bistable state that closes the trap, but the mechanism by which this occurs is still poorly understood. When the trigger hairs are stimulated, an action potential (mostly involving calcium ions—see calcium in biology) is generated, which propagates across the lobes and stimulates cells in the lobes and in the midrib between them.It is hypothesized that there is a threshold of ion buildup for the Venus flytrap to react to stimulation.The acid growth theory states that individual cells in the outer layers of the lobes and midrib rapidly move 1H+ (hydrogen ions) into their cell walls, lowering the pH and loosening the extracellular components, which allows them to swell rapidly by osmosis, thus elongating and changing the shape of the trap lobe. Alternatively, cells in the inner layers of the lobes and midrib may rapidly secrete other ions, allowing water to follow by osmosis, and the cells to collapse.

Digestion

If the prey is unable to escape, it will continue to stimulate the inner surface of the lobes, and this causes a further growth response that forces the edges of the lobes together, eventually sealing the trap hermetically and forming a 'stomach' in which digestion occurs. Digestion is catalysed by enzymes secreted by glands in the lobes.
Oxidative protein modification is likely to be a predigestive mechanism of the Dionaea muscipula. Aqueous leaf extracts have been found to contain quinones such as the naphthoquinone plumbagin that couples to different NADH-dependent diaphorases to produce superoxide and hydrogen peroxide upon autoxidation. *Such oxidative modification could rupture animal cell membranes. Plumbagin is known to induce apoptosis, associated with the regulation of Bcl-2 family of proteins. When the Dionaea extracts were preincubated with diaphorases and NADH in the presence of serum albumin (SA), subsequent tryptic digestion of SA was facilitated. *Since the secretory glands of Droseraceae contain proteases and possibly other degradative enzymes, it may be that the presence of oxygen-activating redox cofactors function as extracellular predigestive oxidants to render membrane-bound proteins of the prey (insects) more susceptible to proteolytic attacks.
Digestion takes about ten days, after which the prey is reduced to a husk of chitin. The trap then reopens, and is ready for reuse.

Evolution

Ablity:-When summoned the Venus flytrap comes to the summoner and sinks it's roots into the ground as soon as being summon to gain stability.
-Can speed up digestion by channelling my chakra into my summon thus speeding up the acid break down
-the teeth(cilia) of the flytrap carry a deadly poison if struck by the teeth the enemy become's paralyzed for 1 turn thus incapable of movement.(this only apply's to the boss summoning.
The summoning's attack strength can be enhance by upturning the earth(cultivation effect) making the summoning happy and more aggresive during battle.(lasts the duration of the battle after being utilized).
Signer's of the contract will receive the Venus flytrap tatto mark.

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✘ Declined ✘ Like i told you before plants can't be summoned like animals, and Passion has a plant CE that would collide with this.

Resubmitting:
(金沙羅, Golden Sal Tree)-Kinshara*
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range:short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Well the whip in it's self has a unique golden look while the scabbard has a 2.5 inch length. The whip can extend to the length of 15 feet while being manipulated by chakra to control the direction of attack and the speed in which the whip is being sent out at. The extending whip works because of the fact that by running you chakra into the joints you can make then extend or retract.The whip has a flower like end at the end of it and has a unique ability where the user's sends his chakra directly to the end of the whip allowing the user attacks light flash attacks from the flower tip. The attacks are to a limit though the flower has colored mirror's on the inside of the flower which emit light out of the flower by channelling chakra to the flower. The end of the flower has an opening where the light source flash comes out of. Knowing that this is a length based weapon puppet master's would have an advantage against this weapon they can easily attach chakra string to this whip to stop its movements. the whip is made of flexible joints capable of flexing and moving at high speeds.
Look of the sword:

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Restrictions:
- flower flash usage attacks with Kinshara have a limit of 3 attacks per battle
-Can only be used Roju
- can be used 5 times per turn as the effects of Kinshara are very flashy.
- The whip's will only extend with roju's touch only as his blood has been mixed in with the fabrication of the whip
-as explained the flower on the end of the whip has mirror's in it thus allowing the chakra to be utilized off of the mirror's to create a bright flash (if needs tweaking would use raiton chakra as it is bright and can be discharged to give off a bright flash)
- the moveable metal joints must be left in because if they are taken out then I might as well not submitt a whip of any kind as they are taken by whip arts.(which is why this is a custom whip that extends from the scabbard by using chakra to extend the joint or retract them.)
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✘ Declined ✘ When resubmitting you should bold the changes, i won't check a resubmission like this.

Ryūjin · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Kaen Bōrei Mōdo) – Fire Release: Blaze Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is an advanced fire release technique which is unlocked after gaining mastery of the fire release, after the user gathers a huge amount of Fire chakra all over his body, basically converting most of their chakra into fire chakra inside of their body, the user undergoes a special state where he becomes covered in a fire aura, like a faint blazing red aura around his body that's resonating as long as the technique is active, this aura doesn't grant the user any defensive capabilities whatsoever, however it allows the user to power up his Fire techniques alone in rank, meaning that any Fire technique that the user uses while this technique is activated will gain an additional rank, like A-rank fire techniques when used while this technique is active will become S-ranked, the reason for the boost in rank is that the user utilizes double the amount of chakra that the fire techniques requires so if a technique requires an amount of 40 chakra points, the user performs it with 80 chakra points instead, similar to how Naruto does with the Rasengan by compressing and utilizing more chakra he upgraded it into the Big Ball Rasengan, this also makes the user capable of performing Fire techniques with one less handseal than they originally require, and able to change the solid aspect of the fire techniques at will, meaning if he utilizes a Fire technique that causes a physical effect, he can make it like a regular decompressed fire and if he used a normal fire technique he can cause it to cause a physical effect, like smashing through earth and other solid objects like how the Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire technique works, the user is capable of doing the compression and decompression of the fire techniques as a result of his chakra usage for each technique, so if he compresses more chakra into the fire he would make it have a more solid aspect by compressing the flames together however this doesn't increase the power of the fire technique, the only power boost they get is the rank which is the initial effect of the technique, maintaining this technique is rather difficult and require vast amount of chakra from the user, so they can only be maintained for a limited amount of time, while in this technique the user will be incapable of using any water techniques, as well as the wind techniques the user uses while in this mode will lose one rank, so if the user uses a B-rank wind technique it will become a C-rank, this technique also puts a huge strain on the user's body, decreasing their speed by half of the original amount, however they are still capable of stringing handseals just as fast as they were capable of before.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
Note: After the technique deactivates the user will be incapable of using Fire techniques for 3 turns.

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±± Declined ±± A few notes: no handseal alteration, no physical characteristics alteration. Also, no boost in damage for F-Ranks or you'll die since the backfire of a f-rank would also hurt you much more. Also, please use more periods. Your description is big and its clear but hard to read. Rest seems...okaish.

(Sennin Fūinjutsu: Naiteki Fūin) – Sage Sealing Art: Inner Seal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a simple Sealing technique dedicated to the use of Senjutsu, basically the user previous has a large amount of natural chakra sealed into a specific seal that's found onto the center of the user's chest, when activating the seal that has the natural chakra stored inside, the Seal inserts natural chakra into the user constantly allowing the user to enter Sage Mode, the constant amount of natural chakra that's transferred into the user allows him to maintain Sage Mode for a limited amount of time, normally the user has 2 Seals that has large natural chakra stored into them, by using this technique the user is incapable of entering Sage Mode again after the natural chakra in the seals run out, only a seal can be active at a time, both cannot be active and apply the user with natural chakra at the same time, when switching to the other seal that has natural chakra stored inside of it, the user has to post this technique once more, counting towards his 3 move count per turn, each seal can only be used once per battle, by sacrificing one of the seals, it allows the user to summon Shima and Fukasaku the toad sages without having to wait a turn in order to summon them, by using the mass of natural chakra present in the seal to summon them instead, by doing this it scarifies one of the seals, leaving the user with one seal left, however when used for summoning the toad sages, the same seal cannot be used to enter Sage mode, he has to use the other seal in order to do so.
Note: Each Seal allows the user to maintain Sage Mode activated for 3 turns.

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Shinta · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Shinta said:
(Doragon Naginata) Dragon Naginata
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: The Dragon Naginata consists of a hardened chakra resonant metal shaft with a curved blade, also made of chakra resonant metal, on the end. It has a stylised tsuba of a dragon, between the blade and shaft and has a hidden mechanism that allows the blade to break off under the tsuba where it is attached to a chain within the shaft. This allows for a slightly greater reach during a slash if activated at the correct time. The shaft is 120cm long and the blade 60cm long with a single cutting edge and a sharpened point like any other Japanese Katana, giving the Naginata a total length of 180cm. Through the unknown process this weapon was made in, the Dragon Naginata is indestructible when faced against similar ranked weapons and jutsu (S-rank). The chakra resonant metal this naginta was made from work particularly well with fire chakra allowing the user to channel their fire chakra into it to unleash an arc of flames during a slash, that is equivalent to an S-rank fire jutu, three time per match.
Notes:
- Can only be used by those allowed by Shinta,
- Even with the chain attachment, without a specific jutsu it cannot reach anything outside of Short Range,
- The fire arc counts as one of the users three jutsu per turn and cannot be used in succession, this must be posted as a reference in place of an actual jutsu.

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Declined
Alright, I just need a bit of clarification with your arc slash. Is there a certain range to this? The power, the reach? Also, add an usage limit on it.

(Doragon Naginata) Dragon Naginata
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: The Dragon Naginata consists of a hardened chakra resonant metal shaft with a curved blade, also made of chakra resonant metal, with a stylised tsuba of a dragon, between the blade and shaft containing has a hidden mechanism that allows the blade to break off under the tsuba where it is attached to a chain within the shaft. This allows for a slightly greater reach during a slash if activated at the correct time in that in can reach out to mid-range. The shaft is 120cm long and the blade 60cm long with a single cutting edge and a sharpened point like any other Japanese Katana, giving the Naginata a total length of 180cm. Through the unknown process this weapon was made in, the Dragon Naginata is indestructible when faced against similar ranked weapons and jutsu (S-rank). The chakra resonant metal this naginta was made from work particularly well with fire chakra allowing the user to channel their fire chakra into it to unleash an arc of flames during a slash, that is equivalent to an S-rank fire jutu and is capable of reaching long range, three time per match.
Notes:
- Can only be used by those allowed by Shinta,
- The hidden chain device allows the blade to swing out to mid-range and retract back into the weapon automatically,
- The fire arc counts as one of the users three jutsu per turn and cannot be used in succession, this must be posted as a reference in place of an actual jutsu. The flame arc can reach long range and can only be done three times per match.

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✘ Declined ✘ Reaching Mid range with a single slash is a no, you need to define that this is NOT a sword when you mentioned "Katana" it lead me to say this, chakra infusable swords aren't allowed anymore, keep in mind that you can only channel fire chakra into it for the special "effects", define this "fire arc" it needs size definition, and what exactly does it look like, and remove that the sword is indestructible when facing S-ranks, instead you could just write indestructible, keep in mind that you can't use it to counter techniques because it's "indestructible" it simply means the sword won't break apart.

(Raiton: Raitoningu no kōkan) Lightning Release: Lightning Replacement
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 (-5 for turn active)
Damage: 60 (If the opponent makes contact with the user)
Description: The user, by flooding their body with lightning chakra, will convert their physical form in a contained formed of pure lightning that allows attacks to pass harmlessly through the user's body. If used to block a taijutsu attack, the opponent will receive a powerful shock from the user as they would if they made contact with any other lighting attack. When in this form the user can move at a normal pace but cannot perform any jutsu however it does not cancel any jutsu the user already has active. While the users taijutsu will be ineffective they can however try to touch the opponent to deal powerful electric shock. From the opponents perspective the user will appear normal until hit by an object or jutsu where the users body will appear to disperse in a flicker of electrical current.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can only be used five times per match,
- User cannot make any knew attacks in this form but can move around as normal,
- Remains active for three turns unless cancelled by the user and can not be used in successive attacks.
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✘ Declined ✘ Dear lord, don't resubmit.

Howard · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Hana Furi-ku) Earth Release: Booger Flick
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20 (+5 per booger flicked)
Damage: 40 (+5 per booger flicked)
Description: The user begins by pooling doton chakra into their index finger and their thumb as they pick their nose. Once they have a booger on the tip of their finger they flick it towards the opponent releasing the doton chakra and condensing it into the booger. As the booger travels towards the opponent it picks up momentum and begins to coat in earth created from the doton chakra, it grows to the size of a basketball and can slam into the opponent with enough force to break bones. The user can perform the Seal of Confrontation before the earthen ball hits the opponent causing it to explode out towards the opponent. As it explodes it sends out a mass of airborne spikes (ten per booger flicked). These spikes are much smaller then the earthen mass being only the size of a kunai. Ear wax can be used instead of a booger.
Notes:
-Can be used four times per battle (once per nostril and once per ear)
-Can flick more then one booger at a time but only four in total (referring to a small ball of ear wax as a booger)
-The 'explosion' has no force and it's just the ball releasing the spikes
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✘ Declined ✘ What the........................... @_@ unrealistic and just bleh, don't resubmit.

Littlefinger. · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Genjutsu: Weberly Pureisu no Akumu |Illusion Technique: Nightmares of the Weberly Place
Rank: A
Type: Attack|Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 40[stress on the target(s) mind]
Description: This technique enables the user cast a genjutsu on the target after performing 3 handseals in which the target believes that there are tiny cobwebs around his/her face. This causes the target to become distracted as he/she will try to remove the cobwebs from their face using their hand(s). The target will gradually begin to feel the cobwebs all over their body, making them uncomfortable, uneasy and distracted as the cobwebs become visible and in a bid to tear his/her way out of the thick cobwebs, he/she will start stumbling and walking around aimlessly in a darkness that sets in as their head starts to spin, causing them to become dizzy and hear voices of people laughing at them and mocking them. Eventually, they fall to the ground helpless, stressed out and weakened.
-Usable 3 times per battle.
-Can be used on multiple opponents at the same time as long as the are in range(short-mid)
-Can only be taught by Naizen
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✘ Declined ✘ You can't mention how your opponent is going to react when struck by the genjutsu, only what he sees/experiences in the genjutsu has to be mentioned, things like they will tear through the cobwebs when feeling that they are on their face or whatever can't be mentioned in the technique, second part about hearing people laugh at them is done countless times in other genjutsu techniques. so basically the whole description needs to be reworded.

Bad Luck Brian · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Mouretsu Kamigami) The Gods Rage
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Many years ago The Trojan War was supposedly fought for a woman named Helen; secretly, however, the The Trojan Paris had also stolen Menelaus’ spear which was given to him by his godly father, Ares. The spear towers at 7’ with a chain and brace that leads back to the users arm to it can be pulled back to the user if they miss.

-Abilities-
The spear can pierce through solid rock on its own
The spear can be used Short range to be stab with (Not as strong as being thrown)
The spear can be mixed with the users chakra making the spear have different capabilities, each of which counts as an S rank move in which case costs 40 chakra
Wind- the spear is thrown and can pierce any material and pierce up to A rank jutsu (Can only be used once per move set, counts as a move, doesn’t work against fire Jutsu)
Earth- The user throws the spear along or into the ground and the chain is broken off, the spear then is led by the users chakra into the opponent.
Fire- A layer of fire is coated around the spear causing extra damage
Lightning- The user throws the spear at his or her opponent, and if it hits a lightning strike then also comes down from the sky and hits the opponent, the lightning is unblockable
Water- works like the Earth version, thrown into the water and goes underneath the opponent, when it rises the spear has gained enough water (Infused with the users chakra) along the way to when it rises water surrounds it in the form of a shark with its mouth open.
-The chain and brace can be chosen to be put on (Will be stated in either the beginning of the battle or when summoned)

-Restrictions-
-During the battle the spear may only be used with the element capabilities 3 times per battle (Must use different elements Ex. No Wind-Wind-Wind use or Wind-Wind-Fire use)

-Can only be used by Bad Luck Brian

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✘ Declined ✘ Too many abilities, that lightning part really made me reconsider and just DNR it, you can't put a technique as "unblockable", what do you mean about "the spear can tower at 7'", can pierce solid rock on it's own? so that's pretty much every solid Earth technique out there? no, it's a big mess, make it reasonable.

Geezus · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Shurikenjutsu| Setsunada Kunai - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Instant Capture Kunai]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: -
Description: The Instant-Capture Kunai are weapons designed specifically for disabling and capturing opponents by rendering them immobile. Unlike most of the other weapons created, these weapons inflict no actual damage to the opponent when used. The Instant-Capture Kunai are exactly identical to a typical kunai regarding appearance, allowing the user to maintain the element of surprise. When thrown the four sides of the blade open in order to release the capturing device sealed within the kunai, the device used is either a weighted net or a Boleadora and each is woven from a sturdy metal alloy to effectively detain the opponent. The alloy is designed to electrify itself when it comes into contact with excess chakra, effectively preventing the opponent from strengthening their body through the use of techniques such as Chakra Enhanced Strength to break the restraints. That being said the restraint is able to be broken through brute force but at the cost of the restraints digging into the skin of the opponent before breaking and due to the durability of the restraints they may only be broken by opponents with immense physical strength or their allies.
Note: User only carries 4 of these in battle.

Shurikenjutsu| Shouheki Kunai - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Barrier Kunai]
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Upon Contact with a Barrier)
Description: The Barrier Kunai is the only weapon designed and forged to be used exclusively for defensive purposes. Functioning similarly to Instant-Capture Kunai, these weapons are meant to provide the user with a quick, effective, and surprising defense against all modes of attack. Prior to throwing the blades, the user imbues them with a decent amount of chakra before throwing the blade into an object such as a tree, a wall, or even the ground. Upon impact the rear of the kunai splits into four sections and projects a barrier in the opposite direction, allowing this technique to easily block areas such as halls or paths inside forests. The barrier itself is of a light blue color and any thing, living or dead, that comes into contact with the barrier is deflected; beings that possess chakra signatures that differ even slightly from that of the user receive electrical shocks upon contact with the barrier, these shocks are meant to interfere with the nervous system of the victim in addition to inflicting physical pain. Objects such as kunai, shuriken, rocks, etc. simply bounce off the barrier and have the potential to inflict damage on the user through ricochet. In addition to the visible barrier, the kunai creates a notably weaker but invisible barrier around itself to deter the efforts of those who realize the kunai is the source. This barrier does not cause electrical shocks, it simply makes it impossible to physically grab the kunai and causes some difficulty in attempting to damage the kunai. That being said the barriers erected through the use of this tool are able to be dispersed by those with the ability to absorb chakra and may be shattered by higher powered techniques. The strength of the barrier is entirely dependent upon the amount of chakra the user pushed into the kunai before hand and a barrier may not be erected with a single kunai, pairs or sets must be used. The shape of the barrier is dependent upon the locations of the kunai used to form it and as such is determined by the user before hand, it must be noted that it is impossible to create a spherical barrier but it is possible to create a circular barrier through the use of this tool. As with most barrier techniques, the uses stem past forming defensive barriers and may be used to stop falls, restrict the movement of an opponent, or even completely detain the opponent by enclosing within the barrier.
Note: User only carries 8 of these into battle.

Shurkienjutsu| Burafu Kayaku - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Bluffing Powder]
Rank: D-S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: (Depends on Rank Used)
Damage: -
Description: Bluffing powder is a chalky, white substance created for use in more desperate situations. The powder itself is unable to do any damage to the opponent unless thrown into their eyes and beyond that and its intended use is absolutely worthless. The user can use this technique in two different ways. The first, the user must direct a small amount of their chakra into the powder after covering their inner palms with it, this must be kept hidden from the opponent. After this process the powder can then be diffused into the air to make it seem as though the user's chakra levels suddenly surged, preferably by clapping one's hands after weaving a series of handseals. The second the user can place the pre-attached bags on kunai with the powder inside and apply chakra and then throwing it another location, then at the user's will the powder can be made to explode outwards since it contains the user chakra. Once the powder is in the air it appears identical to the user's actual chakra to Sensors and those able to visualize chakra and is meant to frighten or cause doubt to rise in the minds of the opponents.
Note: User only carries enough powder to use this technique 3 times.
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✘ Leaving for Scorps ✘

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±± All Declined ±± What is this submission? Are you trying to submit a new type of Kunais? what? You talk about Sword Hidden in Hand...what is this? a cfs? You post the techniques but not only don't they say anything about what they are nor do you even explain what they are. contact me.

Typhon · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Hikasazanami-Ken: Hyoro Darumadoru Kyuushuu) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Swaying Daruma Doll Revenge
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is used to counter strikes towards the upper torso or head of the practitioner. Using careful chakra control they'll momentarily reinforce the point of impact to minimize damage while allowing their upper body to move with the strike by swaying their hips. They'll then use their hips to convert the momentum of their body and rebound towards the opponent at high speeds while striking out with both palms.
-Can defend A-rank and below taijutsu.
-Can be used three times per battle.

(Hikasazanami-Ken: Hirashikkyaku Tsuchikujo) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Falling Palm Earthly Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user raises up one of their hands and then brings it down slamming it to the ground. As they do this they release a massive burst of chakra into the ground that ripples outwards in all directions ripping up the earth as it travels. The speed of the ripple is immense making it difficult to avoid.
-Can only be used by a Hyuuga.
-Can be used twice per battle.
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✘ Declined ✘ There should be a link to the approval of the CFS, when submitting techniques for it.

-Kenshin- · Jan 13, 2013

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Akagami Shanks.. said:
(Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: Forbinned
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user due to the size and amount of chakra it takes to perform this jutsu the User is unable to use Genjutsu and Taijutsu while this jutsu is in use and The User can not run due to the Strain on their body that it takes to perform the jutsu... When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Leaves the User unable to perform Genjutsu, Taijutsu or even Run for One Complete Turn
Note: If the Koy Fish is destroyed the user Becomes extremely exhauster
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

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±± Declined ±± Why would this limit your use of Genjutsu or Taijutsu? :sy: Why is this forbidden rank? This is nothing more than at best an S-Rank. And don't add useless restrictions that make no sense to the techniques. It will eventually only lead to a DNR.

Resubmitting

(Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…
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✘ Declined ✘ So this can be made anywhere in the air? no, that needs to be defined, whether it is above your opponent or another location, if it's made above the opponent then there should be a gap of like 10 meters between the technique and the opponent, also remove "giant" out of the technique, it's 10 times as big as you, it's not THAT big lol.

Removed the ridiculous restrictions and removed the part about genjutsu and Taijutsu also changed the Rank and placed it as a S Rank

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