[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Troyard]

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(Katon: x-ba-na-)| Fire Release: X-Burner
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: For this technique, the user will extend his/her hands forward, focusing a large amount of Katon chakra. The user will then condense/charging this chakra into both of their palms. The user will then use two of their jutsu slots to make sure that their chakra is evenly charged in both arm or this won't work. Because of the strength of this technique, the user has to put one hand behind them, and then the other hand to release the stream. The user will turn to their side, achieving perfect symmetry then they will yell "X-Burner" releasing the large mass of flame from both arms. The arm that is facing away from the opponent is not to attack, but for support or-else the user would be sent flying because of the extreme pressure from the arm they fired the technique. The x-burner is a beam of pure fire chakra that is sent toward the opponent in one direction which means it can be easily avoided, but does extensive damage if it makes a direct hit. This beam is about 4 meters in width.

Drawbacks and notes:

-When the user uses this technique, the user can't use ANY katon techniques for the Next 2 turns
-User becomes very tired because of the extensive amount of chakra used and can hardly move
-The user must stay stationary when using
-No s-ranks the same turn and the turn after this technique is used
-After this is used, the user becomes sluggish, not moving as fast as they did before, their speed is cut by half.
-Can only be fired once.
-Can only be used by Light...

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✘ Approved ✘ remove a "restriction" and edited a few stuff, removed destroying everything in it's path, 2 meters in width means it's rather a small beam so i made it 4 instead, not as big as you might think, keep in mind that if someone is hit by the fire used for stability he won't suffer any kind of damage or even be blasted away, also keep in mind that "using" two of your jutsu slots means it counts as 2 moves.

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( Sution: Makishimamu Ba-suto )| Water Release: Maximum Burst
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: For this technique, the user focuses a large mass of suiton chakra into their hands. The user will then place their hands together as if they were performing ' Storm release: Laser Circus' (didn't know how to describe the way the hands are put together >_<), channeling the chakra allowing it to surround their hand. After this step has been done, the user will then yell 'Go!' releasing this bird like wave. The wave spreads out to about 3 meters, still leaving a trace on the users hand, this allowing them to move it to attack. The technique is allowed to make one turn, but take time.

-Must have mastered Suiton
-No Fire techniques the time this is used
-Must be Sannin Rank or higher to use
-Usable 2x
-Can only be taught by Colonello...
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✘ Declined ✘ remove the colored lol, what do you mean by no fire techniques the time this is used?

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( Genjutsu : Osanago jikoku ) | Illusionary Arts: Baby time!
Rank:B
Type: Supplamentary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description: For this technique, the user sends their chakra into the opponent's brain, thus sending them into the genjutsu. This genjutsu attacks the opponent eyesight, allowing them to see a special phenomenon. The user of the Gen would shrink down and become a baby. The user who would 'seem' to be a baby by the opponent would stay the same, only people who are caught in the gen would see otherwise. As no one would forcefully attack a young and helpless baby, the user will have a chance, but their are some drawback with this. As the user wants this to seem real, the user is only allowed to use Mid- Short rage techniques while the opponent is under this genjutsu, the user will not be allowed to use any taijutsu while this is active. When the user talks, the opponent will hear babies wining.

-Stays active for two turns if not broken
-Once deactivated, can't be used for another 2 turns
-No Long range techniques or Taijutsu when technique is active
-Can only be taught by Colonello....
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✘ Declined ✘ What the........... O_O you can't make your opponent unable to attack you by using genjutsu, don't resubmit. EVER!!

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( Sution: Makishimamu Ba-suto )| Water Release: Maximum Burst
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: For this technique, the user focuses a large mass of suiton chakra into their hands. The user will then place their hands together as if they were performing ' Storm release: Laser Circus', channeling the chakra allowing it to surround their hand. After this step has been done, the user will then yell 'Go!' releasing this bird shaped wave. The wave spreads out to about 3 meters in diameter, still leaving a trace on the users hand, however it doesn't mean that the user is able to redirect the bird shaped wave after the initial trajectory it takes.

-No Fire techniques the turn this is used
-Usable 2x
-Can only be taught by Ĺight

~Approved~ Edited a bit.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

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(Genjutsu/Ninjutsu: Itachi Ken ) Illusion/Ninja Arts: Skunk Stung

Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs 1 handseal, casting a genjutsu on the area around (Mid-range). The genjutsu has a high impact but is very short-lived. It will induce a death/damage-like experience, which will trigger an immediate response of "vanishment" or "release", it's effects added by the shock factor and the usage of physical chakra as a guidance. While on normal opponents it will have no real or significant effect, when used on clones or summoned animals, it will make them experience an impact intense enough to reflexively reverse them or vanish them. Even if the targeted opponents are linked together by a chakra-exchanging techniques, the short-peak of this technique will still follow through. The one handseal can be kept for more than one usage. This is to double the effect, as multi-layered genjutsu or for a more focused/concentrated approach (reaching up to Long-Range). Any clone technique or summoning animals lower than A rank will be efficiently affected by the wide-spread usage of the technique. Summons A rank and above will require an individualized concentrated casting (thus spending 1 jutsu per animal). Summons ranked Boss (allowing for a current king and/or a queen, if fit) will require both an individualized and a double-layered usage (regardless of the rank).
*Requires 1 turn between usages*

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±± Declined ±± Idea is ok but range...no. Mid range max. Also, Genjutsu can't be casted on an area. It needs specific targets. I don't get also why you have the ninja art part added. It seems to be a simple genjutsu all together. However, its applications on Shadow Clones... We saw when Itachi put Kakashi's shadow clone in a genjutsu that they are left unaffected by some genjutsu so you might need to explain that part a bit better. But the core idea seems ok.

(Genjutsu/Ninjutsu: Itachi Ken ) Illusion/Ninja Arts: Skunk Stung

Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs 1 handseal, casting a genjutsu on up to 4 targets in the area around (Mid-range). The genjutsu has a high impact but is very short-lived. It will induce a death/damage-like experience, which will trigger an immediate response of "vanishment" or "release", it's effects added by the shock factor and the usage of physical chakra as a guidance. While on normal opponents it will have no real or significant effect, when used on clones or summoned animals, it will make them experience an impact intense enough to reflexively reverse them or vanish them. Even if the targeted opponents are linked together by a chakra-exchanging techniques, the short-peak of this technique will still follow through. The one handseal can be kept for more than one usage. This is to double the effect, as multi-layered genjutsu or for a more focused/concentrated approach. Any clone technique or summoning animals lower than A rank will be efficiently affected by the wide-spread usage of the technique. Summons A rank and above will require an individualized concentrated casting (thus spending 1 jutsu per animal). Summons ranked Boss (allowing for a current king and/or a queen, if fit) will require both an individualized and a double-layered usage (regardless of the rank).
*The genjutsu part pertains to infiltrate the mind and guide the ninjutsu chakra, while producing the death/damage-like experience. The ninjutsu part is guided by the genjutsu, further enhancing it's penetration on the opponent's mind (Even shadow clones) and enhancing the effects, relaying a physical response (vanishming or release of the technique).*
*Requires 1 turn between usages, excluding a double layer*

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( Kouton: Yari ) Box Arts: Woomera

Rank: A
Rank: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Allows the user to summon several (up to 10) isolated nematocysts, of various sizes (from the tiny pin-sized nemoticysts of normal boxes to the massive spear/staff sized nematocysts of gigantic boxes). These can be wielded like weapons or thrown like projectiles (in the same manner as one throws kunais or shurikens). The user claps his hands and summons the nematocysts in front of him or in his palms, grabbing them to use. The nematocysts have only one autonomy, if the tips are stimulated, the injection mechanism is triggered, sending an infusion of Box venom directly related with the size of the nematocyst, otherwise, they're innanimate.
*charging chakra through the nematocysts while physically wielding them allows them to gain a certain steel-like quality, like a sword or a kunai. Throwing them or loosing physical contact will rever them back to soft organic material*
*triggering mechanism allows only one infusion, aftewards the namotocyst is reverse summoned*
*human summoners are more resistant but not immune to the venom*
*Can only be used once every 2 turns*
*Range pertains to the range of the summoning of the nematocysts and not their throwing, which is the same as the range at which the user can throw a kunai*

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±± Approved ±± Edited to make approvable. If you don't like it you can resubmit. I removed the use from Boxes because if they used it like this, all boxes would gain an A-Rank defense since they are virtually covered in nematocysts or can be by the use of their tentacles.

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(Katon/Fuuton: Ikusen no Houou) Fire/Wind Release: The Squad of the Scorching Falcons
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This technique consists in two different steps, which can be preformed simultaneously, using an ally, or in a quick succession. The first part consist in stringing together 4 handseals before spitting a huge quantity of seriously hot ashes, which will then burst into an hellish flock of about 10-15 bird-like ash structures. The birds will fly out in different directions, some will fly high into the sky, while others (Only a few 2-3) will attack the opponent(s) directly.
The second part of the jutsu consists in preforming 3 handseals. The first will quickly gather air around each individual bird. The second will concentrate the gathered wind into the ash-hawks, which will make them burst ablaze. At that point, the birds will be sharper and faster, aswell as hotter. The third handseal will make all of the birds fall onto the opponent. Much like real birds of prey, the free-falling bird-structures will acquire great speeds, and will violently explode upon impact (At the scale of a Paper Bomb induced Explosion). The few birds that directly attacked the opponent will simple burst outwards, burning anything close to them.
*This jutsu can only be done once per battle*
*The user will the ability to call forth Fire or Wind Chakra to preform techniques higher than B rank in the turn after usage, higher than A in the next and higher than S in next*
*The user will suffer a damage loss of 20 damage points*

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(Katon/Fuuton: Ikusen no Houou) Fire/Wind Release: The Squad of the Scorching Falcons
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This technique consists in two different steps, which can be preformed simultaneously, using an ally, or in a quick succession. The first part consist in performing one handseal charging chakra in a point on the battle field which will turn into seriously hot ashes, which will then burst into an hellish flock of about 10-15 bird-like ash structures. The birds will fly out in different directions, some will fly high into the sky, while others (Only a few 2-3) will attack the opponent(s) directly. The second part of the jutsu consists in preforming an additional handseal. This will quickly gather air around each individual bird, concentrating the gathered wind into the ash-hawks, which will make them burst ablaze. At that point, the birds will be sharper and faster, aswell as hotter. While keeping the handseal, the user is able to make them all flock down on the target. Much like real birds of prey, the free-falling bird-structures will acquire great speeds, and will violently explode upon impact (At the scale of a Paper Bomb induced Explosion). The few birds that directly attacked the opponent will simple burst outwards, burning anything close to them. Entailed with this technique is the ability to induce heat on a certain substance, instead of creating ash, and quickly provide wind/oxygen all the same. This will induce a powerful combustion reaction on the substance, vanishing it whole and turning it into it's combustion gasesous byproducts (example, hydrogen into water)
*The user loses the ability to call forth Fire or Wind Chakra to preform techniques higher than S rank in the turn after usage*

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±± Approved ±± Don't forget to notify whomever might have use of this technique so that they get the new version.

 

[Beifong]

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(Suiton: Aku****suna jū) Water Style: Vicious Gun
Type:offensive
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short-Mid Range
Chakra:15 Chakra
Damage:30 Damage
Description: after preforming the Ram → Tiger the user focuses his suiton chakra into his both hands and after he puts enough amount of chakra his hands will get wet like they're just out of water the he launches many small water balls from his hands the water balls when they hit a solid thing they turn into chakra-infused highly- vicious water the same as (Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field), the water of each ball covers only a small area
note: only usable 5 times per battle
note: must have 2 turns cool between each usage time
note: can only be taught by FeeLPaiN
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✘ Declined ✘ If it traps the opponent, why is there damage points? mention the size of the balls.

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(Suiton: Nensei gan) Water Style: Viscous Gun
Type:offensive
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short-Mid Range
Chakra:15 Chakra
Damage:N/A
Description: after preforming the Ram → Tiger the user focuses his suiton chakra into his both hands and after he puts enough amount of chakra his hands will get wet like they're just out of water the he launches many fist-sized water balls "up to 5" from his hands the water balls when they hit a solid object they turn into chakra-infused highly- viscous water the same as (Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field), the water of each ball covers only a small area of 3 meters in radius
note: the user can shot up to 3 balls per turn
note: only usable 5 times per battle
note: must have 2 turns cool between each usage time
note: can only be taught by FeeLPaiN

~Approved~ Edited a bit, keep in mind you can only release up to 5 balls max like i mentioned, with each of them breaking down to a 3 meter's wide area of water, so all equals 15 meters = mid range.

(Raiton: Kaminari Senbon) Lightning Release: Lightning Senbon
Type: Offensive
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description: after preforming Snake handseal the user focuses his raiton chakra into his back, then by using shape manipulation. The user shape the raiton chakra as senbons of lightning. After this the user releases them from his back at his opponent. the lightning is very dense as it do the damage of normal senbons with the shocking damage of raiton-based attacks
Note: can be used 5 times per battle
Note: only FeeLPaiN can teach this Jutsu

~Declined~ Rip off of Chidori Senbon technique, i don't see how it is different other than it comes out of your back lol, Chidori senbon is even better.

 

[Negative Knight]

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(Kuro Ito Gizagiza Domu) – Dark Threads Jagged Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within a specific limb in his body to cause countless spikes (which are each a meter in length) to extend from the chosen limb e.g. hand, foot, leg or arm. The spikes resemble basic spears in both shape and width and will skewer through the bodies of shinobi who come into contact with them. After use, the spikes re-enter the user's body and the holes created in the user's limb by the technique are sewn up. This jutsu’s main purpose is to be used in conjunction with Taijutsu attacks, allowing them to be much more severe on contact.

Note: Can only be used Thrice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight

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(Kuro Ito Gizagiza Kyuuzou) – Dark Threads Stalactite Surge
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (-30 damage to the user)
Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within his body and releases it all at once, to cause countless spikes (which are 5 meters in length) to extend from his chest, back and arms. The spikes resemble basic spears in both shape and width and the end result makes the user look like they’re coated in an armour of spikes. Anyone hit by this technique is skewered through their body and the technique is capable of impaling multiple enemies and clones. After release, the spikes re-enter the user's body and the holes created in the user's body by the technique are sewn up. The initial pain to the user is the equivalent of being stabbed multiple times and is capable of breaking A-Rank and below Genjutsu

Note: Can only be used Twice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight

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✘ Declined ✘ I was okay with everything until that whole pain releasing from genjutsu thing, releasing threads doesn't really make Kakuzu feel pain, take the relation to genjutsu out and should be good to go, remove also the "clones" reference.

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(Kuro Ito Gizagiza Kyuuzou) – Dark Threads Stalactite Surge
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within his body and releases it all at once, to cause countless spikes (which are 5 meters in length) to extend from his chest, back and arms. The spikes resemble basic spears in both shape and width and the end result makes the user look like they’re coated in an armour of spikes. Anyone hit by this technique is skewered through their body. After release, the spikes re-enter the user's body and the holes created in the user's body by the technique are sewn up.

Note: Can only be used Twice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight

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~Approved~

No bolded changes because i removed things.

(Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground at an astonishing speed. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 50 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus. However, it is highly chakra taxing to maintain the source of chakra infused threads, resulting in a steady depletion of chakra every turn the technique is active. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated.

Note: Must have Dark Threads active
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight
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✘ Declined ✘ Too broad, how is this going to affect traveling through the earth? and Earth techniques used through the terrain, an earth technique like the Rising Earth Excavation or Destructive Rising Rock Pillars will render your technique useless, and 50 meters is too much, up to 20 meters and that's it, which is considered a long range, remove that whole "astonishing speed", and mention that you can't use this technique itself to attack the opponent, make it last up to 4 turns max.

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(Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 20 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus, however this jutsu can't be used to attack the opponent directly. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated. Whilst this jutsu is active, underground travel is impossible as the user/opponent will become tangled in a dense mass of threads if they attempt to do so. Furthermore, Earth techniques which affect/devastate the terrain will render this jutsu useless as the source of threads will be destroyed in the process.

Note: Lasts for Four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight

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~Declined~ I was just going to approve it then i saw the "twice" per battle thing, that's a definite no, supplementary techniques like this can only be used once, also add another restriction that says you can't use threads from your body anymore, as long as this is active, because all of the threads are released underground, an amount of threads that covers 20 meters are quite a massive one, unless you have fuuinjutsu or something and can summon other threads, like i told you before it's a bad idea, but needs those kind of restrictions.

Removed "Must have Dark Threads active"

Removed chakra cost in place of a turn limit.

 

[Priest]

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Jūkenpō/Suiton: Aoigekimi - Gentle Fist Style/Water Style: Blue Blow Body
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: 80
Description: This is an advance variant of the original "One Blow Body Jyûken style" where instead of expelling raw chakra from every 361 tenketsu of the body, Priest will manipulate and modyfies his chakra by expelling water chakra from his whole tenketsus. the aftermath of the jutsu expunges wet blueish chakra from every sweatpore of the skin. This carries a bit more force than its prototype and can blast away obstacles short range of the user. The chakra however has a blueish color and filled with moisture.
Note:
++Must be from the Hyugga Clan
++Useable only thrice per match
++No S-rank Jyûken in the same turn

~Declined~ Rip off of the technique you mentioned, the One blow body, don't resubmit.

Genjutsu: Waga Honmei Jibutsu - Illusion Style: My Favourite Things
Type: Sup
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The target/s is/are lured in a genjutsu after 3 handseals where they find themselves in a dreamworld (Totally white environment which looks like a flash light is been used) filled with floating fluffy Golden teddy bears. The teddy bears glow with entraping glare making the opponents be forcibly filled with toughts of their childhood, their toys, playpen, they want to make a sand castle, walk naked and even cry. Their feeling is mesmerized and emotions enchanted making them feel like touching the soft and furry skin of the hovering teddies, grab them to their bossom and cuddle it till they fall asleep. In real life, opponent/s are in a dormant state, pertrified and goes into a deep sleep after 2 turns.
Note
++Can Affect more than one target
++Useable Thrice per match
++No S-rank Genjutsu in the turn or next
++ Must be taught by Priest
++Opponent stays paralysed for two turns in which they fall asleep after that.

~Declined~ *Sigh* people aren't getting how genjutsu is used these days, genjutsu can't force your opponent to do anything, that's an ability of Sharingan genjutsu only, so that basically voids the genjutsu, needs rewording, no i won't let it affect multiple people, S-rank is too much, using 3 times for an S-rank is too much as well.

Raiton: Raikou Onjou - Lightning Release: Lightning Tame
Rank: D-Forbidden
Type: Defense/Attack/Sup
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 10-50
Damage point: 20-90
Description: This is an advanced kind of redirection jutsu whereby the user contains a lightning jutsu and sends it back. The user creates a transluscent bubble of lightning on one of his hand or both depending on the rank of the lightning he wants to absorb(one hand for lightninng up to B-rank, both hands for A-rank and above). The amount of chakra imbued in the bubble depends on the rank of the raiton he wants to absorb. He then captures the jutsu in his hands, neutralising the opponent chakra turning it to raw lightning as he mixes his own chakra while he shape manipulates it to its initial form or any form he wants and sends it back in the incident direction it came with the same speed and power. However this cannot be done on unfocused lightning such as Nagashi.
Bubble can increase in area according to the size of the lightning to be absorbed.
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++User is only allowed capture and send-back:
F-rank Lightning only once
S-rank Lightning only twice
A-rank only thrice
That is, once the user uses this jutsu on F-rank once, he can't use it on F-ranks again through out the match and suffers the consequencies of using it before he can use it again on lower level lightnings.
This is the same to other S-rank, when used twice, the user can't use it on S-ranks again and so on for restricted ranks.
++No S-rank Lightning in the turn and the next (for S-rank and above useage).
++For F-rank useage, +30 damage to the user due to chakra strain and hands won't be useable for 2 turns

~Declined~ I'm not allowing elemental absorbing techniques, nor multiple ranks. don't resubmit.

 

[Enzup]

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(Katon/Raiton: E3) - Fire/Lightning Release: E3
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user)
Description: E3 which stands for Extreme Element Effect is an incredibly powerful long-range technique, that results in a hugely destructive and widespread blast, formed from the combined generation of enormous amounts of both fire and lightning. In order to perform such a devastating attack, not only a great deal of energy but also the establishment and strict enactment of a rather long complex process is required.
User engulfs both of his arms, one after another, one in fire and another in lightning element which produces visible manifestations of the powers involved from the hands. The user then proceeds to aim his hands towards his intended target, signaling his brain to fire. Large beams, one from each hand emanates, combining together to form sort of bluish flame which travels rapidly towards the intended target, which upon impact intermingle and create a massive explosion, incinerating everything.

Note: -User can't aim his hands in separate locations, but at a single target.
-User takes 20 damage from the technique on his hands, reducing the speed of handseals to half for 2 turns, including the one in which this technique is used.
-User cannot use his hands to use any taijutsu above B-rank for 2 turns.
-Cannot use any fire or lightning above A-rank in same turn.
-Cannot use any fire or lightning technique above S-rank in next turn.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

~Declined~ don't resubmit.
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(Suiton: HornBill) - Water Release: HornBill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E-A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 05-30
Damage Points: N/A (+1 rank to water technique)
Description: Right after using any water technique, user uses the environment to his advantage and bends the specific water molecules around the water technique towards itself, which increases the volume of water technique to some extent, making it stronger, and also allows the user to bend those water molecules in a way that its shape can be manipulated (regular spherical ball can be shape manipulated into dragon head etc)

Note: -Rank of this technique depends, and is same as of the water technique on which it is used.
-Cannot be used to strengthen S-rank or F-rank water techniques.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

~Declined~ no multiple ranks, no elemental boosting techniques, don't resubmit.
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(Kame Ninjutsu: Kame Atogama No Jutsu) - Turtle Style: Turtle Replacement Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to switch his position with any turtle by performing the summoning technique. User and the turtle starts performing the series of 5 handseals and perform summoning technique by slamming their respective hands on ground, the moment both simultaneously slam their hands on ground, the user summons the turtle to his place and turtle summons the user to his place, exchanging their positions.

Note: -Can only be used if a turtle is present on the battlefield.
-Can only be used, if user has signed turtle (or any other specie of it) contract.
-Since its a Turtle Ninjutsu, it can only be used by the user and turtle or turtle and turtle.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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~Declined~ That's not substitution, that's space-time ninjutsu, don't resubmit.

 

[Erzo]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Olm Kuchiyose no jutsu: No musuko Kōjin) - Olm Summoning Technique: Son of Kōjin.
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long (Summoned in Short range)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (For S-rank move) 60 (For A-rank Fire+Slime jutsus)
Description: One of the sons of the great Olm who is deemed God of Fire, a proud Olm who is proud of his fathers name and calls himself son of Kōjin, rather than his actual name, Kojiki, a name which very few know. Kojiki is roughly the same height as a human and is able to stand on his two back legs as his 'tail' rests flat on the ground. He is able to speak English and respects his summoner and whatever needs his summoner may have of him. Kojiki has very distinct and powerful Fire jutsus which have never been seen by other Olms. He has the ability to use Fire jutsus up to A-rank, however, he adds slime to the Fire before releasing it, allowing it to become more viscous, almost like Lava allowing it to have more resistance to Water jutsus as the viscosity of the slime is able to overcome the water. This makes it so that fire jutsus gain an extra resistant to water jutus, meaning the water jutsu would have to be the same rank as the Fire used by Kojiki in order to neutralize it. The Olm has also got his own special Slime related Fire jutsu in which he aims his mouth at the sky, spitting out 20 small yet quick marbles of slime which have his fire chakra within them, no more than a second later, those small marbles of Slime begin to come down at a bigger size of tennis balls, raining down, creating craters which are about half a meter deep at each point they land. These Fire infused Slime balls also have an increased resistant to water and over the whole jutsu is equivalent to an S-rank. Like all other Olms, Kojiki has a sense of smell which is equal to that of a dog from the Inuzuka clan and hearing easily comparable to someone who may have C-ranked sound jutsu Inner hearing skill activated.
Note: Can be summoned twice.
Note: Lasts 3 turns each time.
Note: All his moves count towards the users 3 moves.
Note: His S-rank move can only be used 2 times a battle.

~Declined~ The main ability makes no sense, fire can't have a sticky liquid added to it, it doesn't have a physical trait like water or lava does, and because the slime is sticky it has a physical mass obviously, when you attempt to add slime to the fire, all that's going to happen is the slime being evaporated, furthermore, there's a reason to why Water is stronger than fire, because when the fire collides to the water, it becomes quite hard to break the Hydrogen and Oxygen molecules and separate them from one another, adding slime to the fire wouldn't make that change, it will only make the water that it collides with more sticky, also you should remove the reference to sound with the hearing, i find having the smell of an Inuzuka dog is enough, make him summoned once and stays for 4 turns on the field.

(Olm Genjutsu: Ikkō & Ikki's Fukushū ) - Olm Genjutsu Technique: Ikko & Ikki's revenge.
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple genjutsu which requires the user to summon 2 Olms who have trained themselves to be genjutsu specialists in their home land. This jutsu requires the use to either slam his hands down or stomp on the ground to summon these 2 Olms. Upon being summoned the twin Olms can release their chakra into the opponents brain whilst they zig zag around each other, catching the opponent in a visual genjutsu where he then suddenly feels another Olm is suddenly clutching his chest tightly (Olms have hands) as it's slime covers his whole body, slowly travelling downwards, all while the other two make their way towards him with quick haste, before slowly travelling past the slime which was made to cover his body by the big Olm 'summoned' at his back, and into his mouth, causing him gag as he's having breathing problems, all whilst he's struggling to move from his position due to the size of the Olm and the sticky slime it's holding him down with. Furthermore, the opponent's hearing would also be disturbed, only allowing him to hear the squelching of the slime which droops downwards, the heavy breathing of the Olm standing beside him and the Olm's hot breath on his back as it carries on clutching him extremely tightly. However, in reality, the two Olms summoned simply disperse back into their land, as soon as they've caught their opponent in this genjutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No other Olm jutsu in the next turn.

||Declined|| The hearing loss makes zero sense. Remove it.

(Olm No jutsu: Ashigaru's Fureru ) - Olm Technique: Ashigaru's Touch.
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (If opponent makes contact) (-10 to Olm)
Description: A infamous technique among all Olms, this jutsu allows the user to add his Fire chakra into the outer layer of Slime covering the body of Olms and heat it up to a point where that Olm becomes untouchable due to the heat that it's producing from its body. This jutsu is able to heat up any and every layer of slime on the battlefield. This gives the user an advantage if his Olm is fighting a taijutsu based summon or someone has made physical contact with the slime. In additon, it also gives the Olm more resistance against Water jutsus as it's able to evaporate up to B-rank water jutsus as well as allowing Olms resistance to S-rank Wind due to the amount of fire chakra that's channelled into the slime, making it an extra shield of fire.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No other Olm jutsus Next turn.

~Declined~ Won't allow something like that, don't resubmit.

Approval of Olms:

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[Shady Doctor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu: Kaiyō atsuryoku) -
Illusion arts: Oceanic pressure
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user first does a small sequence of hand seals (3) which acts as a medium for the user to insert chakra into his opponents brain/chakra system. Once that is done the user gets control over majority of the opponents senses, touch, sound, smell and sight. The second the genjutsu is casted the victim begins seeing and hearing massive amounts of water flow out of thin air (like storm upheaval) from every direction. In nearly an instant the entire battle field would be turned into a huge ocean in which the opponents are at the bottom of. Due to the high pressure of being so deep in the water would begin "crushing" the opponents and completely restricting their movements whilst in reality they're just standing there frozen in place.


- Only taught by william24
- Can be casted on multiple opponents
- Only usable 2x per battle

~Declined~ First i won't allow a single genjutsu technique to affect 4 senses at the same time, that shouldn't be mentioned anyway, sometimes it's mentioned for clarifications, and the feature of the genjutsu is already attempted by Serpent, so this is a rip off of his CJ that he submitted a while back, and no multiple people affecting genjutsus.

(Taiguronsamon: Nel ) -
Tiglon summon: Nel
Type: Summon/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: /
Description:
The user draws his own blood and either wipes it on his Tiglon tattoo or uses the summoning technique in order to summon Nel, a warrior Tiglon. Nel takes on the typical look of a tiger but with a small clean mane along with a thick, gold cuffling around her neck and a small one around her tail. Around her paws hers fur is very thick and take on the shape of angel-like wings, which allows her to fly but at speeds 1 ranks below it's summoner. When she is first summoned she's small enough to fit on an average sized man's shoulder, only about a foot tall. And like all the other Tiglons she's able to communicate with the summoner via telepathy. She is also noted to be the only Tiglon to be able to walk on it's hine legs to function.
Abilities
Nel's abilities are more of a "support" type, she is able to use Genjutsu up to A-rank. Along with that she is able to feel her summoners chakra flow in a "sensing" type of way and force chakra into him/her in order to free them from A-rank and below genjutsu.. Nel is known to move at speeds equal to a Sannin Ranked Taijutsu specialist.

- Only taught by william24
- only summoned once per battle and lasts 5 turns
- Breaking summoner out of genjutsu counts as a Kai
- Only knows when the users in genjutsu when in contact

~Declined~ Where's the link of the approved custom summoning contract?

(Katon: Mini-en gōremu ) -
Fire Release: Mini Flame Golems
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user first kneads katon chakra within his gut followed by spewing out flames but using shape manipulation to instantly mold the flames into several (up to 6) golems of fire. Each golem will stand about 4 feet tall and have tiny tails. The golems can all spew out streams of fire that reach long range and equal to B-rank fire. At any moment the user can perform one hand seal thus detonating any chosen golem(s) and causing severe damage to anything in close range.

- Only taught by william24
- Can only be used 2x
- Using the streams of fire count as an allotted jutsu per turn.
- Detonating any amount of golems count as a jutsu per turn. I.e. If the user explodes 4/6 of the golems at once, that only takes up 1 jutsu.

~Declined~ don't resubmit.

 

[Alternative]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Futon: Soyokaze Suteppu) - Wind Release: Zephyr Step
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: -
Description: This technique is in a similar respect to the Peacock Whirlwind Formation technique. The user constantly expels wind chakra from their body, creating a current of wind which revolves around them. The purpose of the technique is to give the user extra maneuverability so they can become more agile with their movements, allowing them to swiftly move around people, small projectiles and "pillar based" techniques like tornadoes. The wind revolving around the user is only strong enough to make the user more agile, and doesn't protect against projectiles. The technique only increases one's flexibility allowing them to move around these things, it doesn't allow for any speed increments. If used on a person, the velocity of the current can knock them off their feet.
Notes:
- Can only be used five times a match.
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✘ Declined ✘ Doesn't protect against projectiles isn't enough, i said i don't allow 360 degree defenses, so you should've mentioned that it doesn't protect against anything, and remove that pillar based techniques, tornadoes will pull you towards them you won't be able to dodge them using the technique.

(Futon: Soyokaze Suteppu) - Wind Release: Zephyr Step
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: -
Description: This technique is in a similar respect to the Peacock Whirlwind Formation technique. The user constantly expels wind chakra from their body, creating a current of wind which revolves around them. The purpose of the technique is to give the user extra maneuverability so they can become more agile with their movements, allowing them to swiftly move around people and small projectiles. The wind revolving around the user is only strong enough to make the user more agile, and doesn't protect against anything. The technique only increases one's flexibility allowing them to move around these things, it doesn't allow for any speed increments. If used on a person, the velocity of the current can knock them off their feet.
Notes:
- Can only be used five times a match.

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~Approved~

Removed the pillar based techniques part.

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(Serēnogurōbu) - Sereno Gloves
Rank: B
Type: Weapon
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: Otherwise known as Unbreakable Fists, the Sereno Gloves are a special brand of gauntlet worn by the user. The backs of the gloves are lined with a chakra-reactive metal, mostly used to defend against blades and other weapons. The chakra reactive metal is used to reinforce the gloves to strengthen them, which is why they are considered unbreakable. The strengthening could be compared to the high-speed healing of a medical ninja, constantly reinforcing the gloves with chakra. Another feature is that the gloves hold is that they have special apparatuses which resemble boosters. The user can channel chakra into these boosters so that for a split second, they can amplify the speed of one's punches and other hand-based taijutsu techniques, increasing the rank of these techniques by one rank when used.

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✘ Declined ✘ So you just disregarded what i said about being traceable by normal eyes? do this again and i'll DNR the technique, mention that the "strengthening" doesn't heal you in anyway and only reinforces the gloves.

Removed the +15

(Serēnogurōbu) - Sereno Gloves
Rank: B
Type: Weapon
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: Otherwise known as Unbreakable Fists, the Sereno Gloves are a special brand of gauntlet worn by the user. The backs of the gloves are lined with a chakra-reactive metal, mostly used to defend against blades and other weapons. The chakra reactive metal is used to reinforce the gloves to strengthen them, which is why they are considered unbreakable. The strengthening could be compared to the high-speed healing of a medical ninja, constantly reinforcing the gloves with chakra although this doesn't heal the user at all. Another feature is that the gloves hold is that they have special apparatuses which resemble boosters. The user can channel chakra into these boosters so that for a split second, they can amplify the speed of one's punches and other hand-based taijutsu techniques, increasing the rank of these techniques by one rank when used, although the speed of the user's punches while amplified is still traceable by normal eyes.
Notes:
- Techniques aided by this weapon are still traceable by normal eyes.

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~Approved~ Edited a bit.

 

[Summer]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Armadillo
Scroll Owner: Roju
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None as of yet
Description and Background:

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Habitat and anatomy
Armadillos are small to medium-sized mammals. The smallest species, the pink fairy armadillo, is roughly chipmunk-sized at 85 g (3.0 oz) and 11 cm (4.3 in) in total length. The largest species, the giant armadillo, can be the size of a small pig, weigh up to 60 kg (150 lb) and be over 150 cm (39 in) long. They are prolific diggers. Many species use their sharp claws to dig for food, such as grubs, and to dig dens. The nine-banded armadillo prefers to build burrows in moist soil near the creeks, streams, and arroyos around which it lives and feeds. The diets of different armadillo species vary, but consist mainly of insects, grubs, and other invertebrates. Some species, however, feed almost entirely on ants and termites.


Paws of a hairy and a giant armadillo
In common with other xenarthrans, armadillos in general, have low body temperatures (33–36°C) and basal metabolic rates (from 40–60% of that expected in placental mammals of their mass). This is particularly true of types that specialize in using termites as their primary food source.
The armor is formed by plates of dermal bone covered in relatively small, overlapping epidermal scales called "scutes", composed of bone with a covering of horn. Most species have rigid shields over the shoulders and hips, with a number of bands separated by flexible skin covering the back and flanks. Additional armor covers the top of the head, the upper parts of the limbs, and the tail. The underside of the animal is never armored, and is simply covered with soft skin and fur.
This armor-like skin appears to be the main defense of many armadillos, although most escape predators by fleeing (often into thorny patches, from which their armor protects them) or digging to safety. Only the South American three-banded armadillos (Tolypeutes) rely heavily on their armor for protection. When threatened by a predator, Tolypeutes species frequently roll up into a ball. Other armadillo species cannot roll up because they have too many plates. The North American nine-banded armadillo tends to jump straight in the air when surprised, and consequently often collides with the undercarriage or fenders of passing vehicles.
Armadillos have short legs, but can move quite quickly, and have the ability to remain under water for as long as six minutes. Because of the density of its armor, an armadillo will sink in water unless it swallows air, inflating its stomach to twice normal size and raising its buoyancy above that of water, allowing it to swim across narrow streams and ditches.
Armadillos have very poor eyesight, and use their keen sense of smell to hunt. They use their claws for digging and finding food, as well as for making their homes in burrows. They dig their burrows with their claws, making only a single corridor the width of the animal's body. They have five clawed toes on their hindfeet, and three to five toes with heavy digging claws on their forefeet. Armadillos have a large number of cheek teeth, which are not divided into premolars and molars, but usually have incisors or canines.

Special notes:
-Can be used to bypass Katon while in defense mode being thrown or kicked at an enemy.
-will float in water but cannot swim across great lengths of water.
-Digging of the armadillo can be enhanced by adding my chakra to it.
-speed is as stated they are quick and with a good running start they can produce attacks like chouji but with less attack damage.
tattoo of the contract will recieve the armadillo mark.

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Restrictions:must be taught by Roju
[has been held by -vendetta- but I believe he dropped it as he has mink for a summon now and can only hold one summon at sannin I believe and no one else has been shown using it beside's him and or holding it. I have pm him to find out some info but he is inactive.]


If you find out any info about the armadillo and it is taken then here is my other choice

~Declined~ It's not mentioned in the Approved Custom Summons thread so i think it's okay, but remove those "special notes" part, the abilities of the animals are determined when they are made into techniques.

Summoning Animal: Alligator
Scroll Owner: Roju
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None as of yet
Description and Background:

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mark of the alligator:

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Restriction's: must be taught by Roju.

~Declined~

 

[Tosen]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton: Enbu Ketatamashii Fuuton) Wind Style: Waltz Of The Piercing Wind
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will do 2 handseals and Swing Both of their legs back to back Once. The Right Leg when swung will create a huge gust of wind that travels to the left. As quickly the left left when swung will travel to the right. Causing the two winds to meet in the middle causing something similar to a tornado. The tornado will travel towards the opponent in a vertical manner, with the tip of the tornado facing the opponent.
:Note: Can only use Twice
:Note: No A rank or above wind in the same turn

~Approved~ Edited a bit.

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(Fuuton: Fuuton tate danpen) Wind Style: Wind Shield Shredder
Type: Defense/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will a set of 5 handseals. Once done several streams of wind will then emerge from around you going in all directions. The winds are very sharp that it can slice through B Rank and Below Earth if come in contact. This jutsu is more so a defensive technique to give the user some time to plan for an attack but can be used offensively.

:Note: Can use Twice
:Note: Can Keep it active for Two turns
:Note: Cant use no jutsu as long as this is active
:Note: No Wind jutsu in the same turn as this

~Declined~ Similar Techniques exist.

0:41-0:42 Is how it looks

 

[Akuma]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton: Kaosu Kyuutai) - Wind style: Mayhem Orb
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focusses wind chakra into the air. The air around the user and opponent begins changing color to a black color, swirling around them rapidly. Remaining in his focus stance the air quickly encloses the area that the user and his opponent occupy, creating a dome of air denser than steel. Enclosing larger areas takes both more chakra and more time, making it dangerous to enclose any area larger than 100 feet. This may also be used to enclose only his targets within the dome, confining them to an area he controls. Due to the nature of this jutsu the entire area within the dome will instantly combust from a fire jutsu. Due to it's properties, any lightning that tries to go out of come inside the dome, will instantly be dispersed by the wind. The user, if wanted, may perform 2 handseals and cause the dome of dense air to enclose completly, crushing everyone within the dome.
May only be taught by Lokí
No A rank of higher wind the next turn.
No other wind technique can be used in the same turn.
Only useable x3 times per battle.
||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit

Summoning Animal: Ferrets
Scroll Owner: Lokí
Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
Summoning Boss if existing: Frabolts (below)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Soon
Description and Background: The ferret is a mammal. Ferrets are sexually dimorphic predators with males being substantially larger than females. They typically have brown, black, white, or mixed fur. Unlike their polecat ancestors, which are solitary animals, most ferrets will live happily in social groups. They are territorial, like to burrow, and prefer to sleep in an enclosed area. As with skunks, ferrets can release their **** gland secretions when startled or scared, but the smell is much less potent and dissipates rapidly.
Ferret Tattoo symbol located on the summoner's right wrist.

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(Feretto Kuchiyose no jutsu: Kasai Kami Kaonbuto) - Ferret Summoning Technique: Earth Emperor Frabolts
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long (Summoned in Short range)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The boss of the Ferret family/contract, he is respected by every other ferret and is well known for his seriousness and loyalty. Frabolts whom makes every other Ferret shiver yet feel very safe when around him, is roughly the size of gamakichi when on 4 legs, when standing in two legs, he is 2 times as tall, his with is enough to wrap around a human 1 entire circle. It is completly white around his entire body with red eyes. He is able to speak English and respects his summoner aswell as shows the most loyalty possible. He can run at a very high speed, easily out-running a regular ninja. He has a very high sense of smell, being able to smell up to mid ranges, when smelling an sense diferent from it's summoner, it'll instantly take the offensive and show off their canine teeth at the unkown target. It has sharp claws/nails easily able to rip human off flesh. It's able to use by its own the technique "Killing Intent" by glaring at the opponent with it's red eyes and growling his teeth showing off it's pure killing intention. The rank it has when using Killing intent is that of a Kage, however if someone of lower rank where to summon him, his killing intent rank would also drop to the rank of the summoner. This shows that it feels stronger with some summoners than others. It is able to affect both humans and other summonings with Killing intent, however it's only able to do this once. Aside from that, thanks to his earth affinity, he is able to easily travel through ground. A particular signature move of his is to hide underground and pop up with his jaws open under the target, biting and eating them alive if captured within his reach, Lokí has named this particular technique of his, "war dance" and Frabolts proudly accepted the name. Frabolts who feels the need to portect his summoner at all times is also able to focus earth chakra across his entire body and using the technique "Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique" he hardens his skin and fur to a steel-like quality, creating a B rank defense wich he uses to protect his summoner by either surrounding him or simply stand infront of them, he also uses it to defend himself when needed. He allows his summoner and sometimes, allies of his or his summoner to ride on his back in means for travel, he can carry at most 3 people on his back without his speed decreasing, if wanted, it may carry at most, 4 people, though his speed with decrease.

May only be summoned 1 time per battle.
May only remain on the field for 4 turns.
Must have signed the Ferret contract to summon.
All his techniques count towards the users 3 moves.

~Leaving for Scorps~

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±± Both Declined ±± This contract is virtually another variation of Marten, weasel, etc. Weasel is cannot and Martens are done. And I'm pretty sure this was tried before.

 

[Robot Boy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Moles (animal)
Scroll Owner: Fang
Other Users who have signed contract: none at the moment
Summoning Boss if existing: none at the moment
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none at the moment
Description and Background: Moles are small cylindrical mammals adapted to subterranean life. They have velvet fur, tiny/invisible ears and eyes, and atrophied hindlimbs as well as short, powerful forelimbs with large paws oriented for digging. Moles have been found to tolerate higher levels of carbon dioxide than other mammals, because of their blood cells having special and unique hemoglobin protein. Moles are also able to reuse the oxygen inhaled when above ground and from this they are able to survive in low-oxygen environments such as underground burrows. A mole primarily eats earthworms and other small invertebrates found in the soil, and a variety of nuts. Moles have polydactyl forepaws. Eaching have an extra thumb next to the regular thumb. The extra thumb is also called a prepollex. Moles possess saliva that is toxic which paralyzes their prey. That is why they can store their prey that is still-alive for later consumption. They also have an affinity for earth release.

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Restriction: Must be taught by Fang.
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✘ Declined ✘ Remove the toxic saliva that can paralyze the opponent, and the affinity for earth release.
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(Raiton: Gouzen Tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Roaring Earth
Type: Short
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user places their fists on the targets chest releasing electricity in a horizontal column outward. The user finishes by slamming their hands on the ground and releasing electricity along the ground and shot upward in a vertical column below the targets feet.

Restriction:
- Physical contact needs to be made.
- Counts as two moves.
- Can only be taught by fang.
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✘ Declined ✘ A bit too much for a D-rank, it's like two moves cramped in one.

Resubmitting

Summoning Animal: Moles (animal)
Scroll Owner: Fang
Other Users who have signed contract: none at the moment
Summoning Boss if existing: none at the moment
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none at the moment
Description and Background: Moles are small cylindrical mammals adapted to subterranean life. They have velvet fur, tiny/invisible ears and eyes, and atrophied hindlimbs as well as short, powerful forelimbs with large paws oriented for digging. Moles have been found to tolerate higher levels of carbon dioxide than other mammals, because of their blood cells having special and unique hemoglobin protein. Moles are also able to reuse the oxygen inhaled when above ground and from this they are able to survive in low-oxygen environments such as underground burrows. A mole primarily eats earthworms and other small invertebrates found in the soil, and a variety of nuts. Moles have polydactyl forepaws. Eaching have an extra thumb next to the regular thumb. The extra thumb is also called a prepollex.

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Restriction: Must be taught by Fang.

~Approved~

The toxic saliva and earth affinity have been removed.
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(Raiton: Gouzen Tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Roaring Earth
Type: offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams their hands on the ground, releasing electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a vertical column made of electricity.

Restriction:
- Physical contact with the ground must be made as soon as the target is within range.
- Can only be taught by fang.

~Approved~

Removed the restriction for two move count. Stuck with the vertical column attack for this one.

 

[Alyx]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal:Deer
Scroll Owner:Asuna
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing:
Xerneas The Chital Sage
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A(will be made later if approved)

Deer (singular and plural) are the ruminant
mammals forming the family Cervidae.
Species in the Cervidae family include white-
tailed deer, mule deer such as black-tailed
deer, elk, moose, red deer, reindeer
(caribou), fallow deer, roe deer and chital.
Male deer of all species (except the Chinese
water deer) and also female reindeer grow
and shed new antlers each year. In this they
differ from permanently horned animals such
as antelope; these are in the same order as
deer and may bear a superficial
resemblance. The musk deer of Asia and
water chevrotain (or mouse deer) of tropical
African and Asian forests are not usually
regarded as true deer and form their own
families, Moschidae and Tragulidae,
respectively.

Custom History:The Deer summons are a species of proud animals residing in the Land of Snow in the darkest and coldest parts of the forests.There leader is the Xerneas of the Chital species.Each species are under his command and separates them based on there species creating clans within the contract having the Chital species as the highest ranking clan.Though they are different they all respect each others species and will always ban together as one common animal and help in times of trouble.
Abilities
All Deer have the ability to talk normally or telepathically to each other and there summoner(only contract holder can talk telepathically to Deer),they all can detach there current antlers and regrow them nearly instantly when needed to similar to the Kaguya Clan and there bones.Only the entire Chital clan(Chittal species) can stand on two legs with the exception of the other Deer Council members.

Summoning Tattoo:

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✘ Declined ✘ remove that telepathic ability, and the growing antlers thing, dunno why you need them anyway, and how would a deer stand on 2 legs? O_O

(Shōkan jaiantodia: Akushisujikakuran: Xerneas
akushisujikasēji)Giant Deer Summoning:Chital Clan:Xerneas the Chital Sage
Type:Summoning
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:
Description:Xerneas is the Leader of the Chital Clan of the Deer contract and the head of the Deer Contract,he is a brave and wise leader having the rule of many clans under him.Xerneas is a huge deer being half the size of Gamabunta but much like the other members of the Deer Council he is able to also stand on two legs and walk and run fast at speed that make him a formal opponent in Taijutsu,when he is on two legs he is almost the exact height of Gamabunta standing at 90 metre high,but his antlers make up the extra 10 metres making him the exact height as him with his antlers.Xerneas has blue and black fur and a short tail,with unusual rainbow colored antlers which only appears in the current Deer contract boss.Xerneas never took interest in learning to use elements and instead preferred using Taijutsu and Genjutsu in his fighting styles,being able to use Taijutsi up to A-rank and Genjutsu up to C-Rank however due to him not being able to perform hand seals he uses a special grunt that only the Deers use as a trigger to activate the Genjutsus.Xerneas also carries a bow across his back that he uses with his antlers that he can remove part of them to create his own arrows and cover Mid to Long range distances on his targets,as all there deers have the ability to rapidly grow back there antlers.He is big enough to carry 4 people on his back when on all fours and runs at speeds that a normal shinobi can't keep up with but is abit slower when standing on 2 legs.

-Can only be used once per battle
-Remains in battle for 3 turns
-Can only perform two Genjutsu techniques per battle and will disperses after second usage
-All jutsus done by him counts to user's 3 jutsu limitation.
-Must have sign the Deer contract to sign
-Shooting an arrow counts as a move
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✘ Declined ✘ Resubmit when the contract is approved, right now i won't check it.

Summoning Animal:Deer
Scroll Owner:Asuna
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing:
Xerneas The Chital Sage
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A(will be made later if approved)

Deer (singular and plural) are the ruminant
mammals forming the family Cervidae.
Species in the Cervidae family include white-
tailed deer, mule deer such as black-tailed
deer, elk, moose, red deer, reindeer
(caribou), fallow deer, roe deer and chital.
Male deer of all species (except the Chinese
water deer) and also female reindeer grow
and shed new antlers each year. In this they
differ from permanently horned animals such
as antelope; these are in the same order as
deer and may bear a superficial
resemblance. The musk deer of Asia and
water chevrotain (or mouse deer) of tropical
African and Asian forests are not usually
regarded as true deer and form their own
families, Moschidae and Tragulidae,
respectively.

Custom History:The Deer summons are a species of proud animals residing in the Land of Snow in the darkest and coldest parts of the forests.There leader is the Xerneas of the Chital species.Each species are under his command and separates them based on there species creating clans within the contract having the Chital species as the highest ranking clan.Though they are different they all respect each others species and will always ban together as one common animal and help in times of trouble.

Summoning Tattoo:

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~Approved~

Removed the abilities like I was tolded to do

 

[Selendrile]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Magen: Miyagi no Sukāretto Bonsai)- Demonic Illusion: Miyagi's Scarlet Bonsai
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will perform three hand seals (Dragon → Boar → Rat), and then channel their chakra into their opponent’s nervous system, taking control of their senses. Immediately after, the opponent will feel an uncomfortable piercing and twisting pain throughout their entire body, as if they are being pinched by something incredibly sharp. Soon after, their flesh suddenly erupts from underneath their skin, causing massive hemorrhaging and blood to run down their body. The muscles and skin of the limbs rise up into the air, twisting and forming into several species of flowers, vines and small leaves. The organs of the abdominal cavity spill out, and curl into long, thick roots. These roots slither down the body and attach to the ground. On the forehead of the enemy, the skin bursts open sending a torrent of blood down the face, clogging the airways of the opponent, suffocating them. The flesh rises up and forms into a gnarled, old bonsai tree. The growing garden of flesh continues its formation until the body of the opponent is virtually unrecognizable, replaced by the image of a small, lush garden of human entrails, flesh, and muscle. Due to the initial growing of the flesh garden, the massive pain “experienced” by the opponent completely restricts their movement and causes severe mental stress.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the same or next turn

||Approved||

 

[The Mockingjay]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Mockingbird
Scroll Owner: The Girl on Fire
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: Mellark
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Odair, Hawthorn, Snow.
Description and Background: Mockingbirds are a group of New World passerine birds from the Mimidae family. They are best known for the habit of some species mimicking other species, therefore every summon that's a part of the mockingbird contract is capable of using the Transformation Technique, to change their shape. most commonly birds and the sounds of insects and amphibians, often loudly and in rapid succession. There are 17 species in three genera and the species live in a wide range of habitats.

-Signers must wear this tattoo.-

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~Approved~

(Kchuysei: Mellark) Summoning: Mellark:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his/ her hand on it. With this action the user summons Mellark the king Mockingbird. Mellark is big enough for the user to stand on comfortably whilst flying (Half the size of Gamabunta). Mellark is also able to use Wind up to A-rank (S if jutsu was used by opponent previously) and Earth Jutsu up to B-rank (A if jutsu was used by opponent previously) that do not require handseals.
-Can only be summoned once per battle-
-Remains on the field for four turns-
-Must have signed the Mockingbird contract to summon-

~Declined~ Only one elemental affinity is permitted per summon, plus i don't get what you mean by the colored parts.

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Hyouton: Kagirinai(Ice Release: Unlimited)
Type: Attack/Defense*
Rank: Forbidden*
Range: Short-Mid Range*
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: *The user first performs a sequence of five hand seals and creates six ice weapons(any kind of weapon sword, spear, axe...)two of the weapons will be in the users hands the other four will be on his sides (from, back, left, and right)After the weapons are created the user will hold out the two weapons in his hands and spin inside the perimeter of the weapons, while the user spins he release his chakra *from the weapons and manipulate it so it forms a ice wall that is above the four weapons this causes the weapons in his hand to disappear and "go" to the wall and the weapons on the ground will have their "tip" inside the wall the user will then use further shale and chakra manipulation to increase the length of the weapons so they are "spikes" on top of the wall the user then performs five hand seals and causes the same process to occur but this time the weapons will cover the entire wall. The user can make a maximum of 6 walls with a minimum of 3 walls. Now after tue desired number of walls are created the user will perform two hand seals and direct then"cyclone" of weapons toward his opponent(s) the "cyclone" has a radius of 3 meters and it can be decreased to a smaller radius through the user will, the "cyclone" has the weapons on it's "tip" and the walls(inside and out) are fill of jagged pillars of ice that are emerging from every direction of walls. The user can attack using this technique by either directing the "tip" of the cyclone to the opponent(s) or by trapping the opponent(s) inside the "cyclone" and let it close in on them.
-Usable once
-must have mastered ice
-must be member of yuki clan.
-no forbidden ranked techniques for the rest of the battle.
-can't be performed by shadow clones or when shadow clones are created.
-for the next three turns the user is restricted to D rank water and wind and no ice.


Hyouton: *Zairu (Ice Release: Spiked Laso)*
Type: Attack
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range*
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will first perform two hand seals and send his chakra to his index finger after that is done he will swing his finger in the air above him and follow it up by directing his finger towards his opponent as the user directs his finger towards his opponent he releases the Hyouton chakra built up in his finger in the form of a transparent (similar to the transparency of ice disk tech) rope that has a "whole" in it in the front after the opponent is caught inside the rope the user will "click" one finger to his index finger and cause the rope to tighten around the opponent since chakra is built up in the second finger and through the clickage the user sends his chakra down the rope the user will then click his other finger and cause the rope to harden and cause ice spikes to "emerge" from the area that surrounds the opponent and impale them.
-Must be from Yuki Clan.
-Must have mastered Ice release.
-Usable three times per battle.
-No s rank ice and above on the same turn.

X-Both Declined-X Very vague descriptions, not that i mind. I'd check 10 times if i need to understand properly, but text based RP needs proper explanation of moves. It would be a hindrance during battles.

Hyouton: Handanryoku (Ice Release: Pillars of Judgment)*
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Mid range*
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: *The user first performs three hand seals and causes 4 pillars of ice to emerge from The ground or be created around the opponent(s). The pillars are arranged so that they form a parallelogram with point A(left of opponent) 6 meters away from point B(right of opponent) and point A 4 meters away from point C(back left of opponent) and point D like point C but from B, the user then performs another hand seal and causes ice to emerge from the pillars and connect to the other points so a parm is made(Ice does not cover the ground nut it covers the "roof" and there are no diagonals) the ice that emerges from the pillars are from inside reflective like a mirror and from the outside are similar to this found in investigation rooms so the user can see his opponent while they are inside but the opponent can only see his reflection, this technique serve as a capturing technique. More techniques related to it will be added like "Sin", "Slice" etc*
-Usable four times per battle.
-Lasts until destroyed or escaped from.
-No S rank ice on same and next turn.

X-Approved-X Additional techniques may or may not be approved, that's given.

Note when I say more techs related will be added I mean in a another submission if this gets approved*

For above technique
Ice Release Pillars of Judgment: Frozen Hell(Hyouton Handanryoku: Touketsu Heru)*
Type: Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Mid Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: *After the opponent(s) is(are) trapped in Ice Release Pillars of Judgment Technique the user will perform a sequence of five hand seals and cause water to materialize inside the pillars of judgment, the water is materialized from the moisture in the air inside the technique, once the water is materialized and has covered the entire space of the technique(this takes about 10 seconds) the user will perform another five hand seals and freeze the water in the structure thus freezing the opponent(s) inside it.
-Usable Twice.
-No S rank ice on same and next turn.
-Can only be done after IRPoJT is used.
-The user can choose to freeze the water even if it hasn't filled the structure.
-The user can't perform another technique while 'releasing' the water as he/she must concentrate on that action.
-Must have mastered Ice Release.
-If somehow someone else(partner) created water inside the structure in a specific way, the user can freeze it as well as long as it is B ranked and below.

Other

Ice Release: Speed Freak(Chisoku Henshu*
Type: Attack
Rank: F ranked*
Range: Long Range
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(40 to user after one turn)
Description: *The user first performs 12 hand seala, and creates 20 ice mirrors similar to the Canon technique... The user will arrange the mirrors in the form of a circle, the mirrors will be connected by a line, the line is just for show and has no relevance for the technique. Now for the main purpose of the technique begins now, the user will have to travel in the 20 mirrors in either a clockwise or counter-clockwise direction, this mist be done for 1 turn, after 1 turn has passes the user will create an extra mirror on the field( mostly in the sky) and the user will emerge from that mirror with immensely great speeds(the S rank canon ones give the user great speed, and now even more chakra is used) the user will appear as a blur to people even those of same caliber(rank), now while the user is descending(or emerging) from the mirror, he/she has two choices, the first is to either deliver a 'normal' Taijutsu attack(punch/kick/etc) to the opponent, the punch will take a toll on both parties, the other choice is performing one hand seal and releasing a wave of ice from the palm, the wave will freeze the opponent instantly when it comes into contact with them, but at the cost of that palm being frozen as well.(The wave is not really a wave but a shroud that is 'attached' to the users palm)
-Usable once.
-Must have mastered Ice
-The user wont be able to use Ice for three turns(Wind and Water for two turns)
-The users palm will be frozen.
-The user can choose not to attack, and use the speed in order to flee for example.
-The user can attack with a Rasengan for example, but only on the same turn. Meaning the user can use S ranks on same turn but not the next, the reason is that the users state of mind will be in kill mode and he will try harder thus being able to use more chakra.
No S ranks on next turn.

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~Both Declined~ OP, don't resubmit.

Majestic Shoes*
Type: Supplementary/Weapon
Rank: S rank*
Range: Self
Chakra: 40(-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: *Majestic Shoes are a pair of custom made shoes, the shoes have three abilities, A passive one which is the sensory ability of the shoes, the shoes can sense anything that is one meter below it, it does so by using the users chakra as a comparison method, it will send a 'wave' that will feel chakra and if there was a different chakra than that of the user 1 meter or less below, the shoes will provide a stimulus to the users feet, the stimulus will be recognized by the user as a message "Foreign Chakra located" the disadvantage is that it doesn't distinguish between people, raw chakra, or even animal so it sometimes is a waste and a hindrance to the user. The second ability is the thrust or burst the shies can 'perform' the user will first stand on a water source for one whole turn while he/she is doing so the user will be absorbing water particles and 'sending' them to his shoes. After the turn the user will have gathered enough water in the shoes, which makes it slightly heavier. The user can then choose to 'release' the water from his shoes this will propel the user into the air(mid range in the air) this ability can be used three times, after the three times water must be absorbed once Again in order to use the thrust again. The thrust can be used as an offensive technique that can cause damage equivalent to B rank offensive water technique. The third ability is the offensive one, the user can create spikes from his feet that will emerge from the shoes and hit the opponent, the spikes can be launched up to mid range. The spikes are made up of ice chakra and are B ranked.
The reason why the shoes can do what it does is that it is made of material that allows 'objects' that are from inside to exit freely, while not damaging the shoes itself. The sensory ability is accomplished by the special material of the shoes. And the thrust's water will be stored in the fiber of the shoes.
-Must be Kage rank.
-Must be Yuki Clan member.
-Must have mastered Ice release.
-The shoes are somewhat symbiotic(in order to create stimulus)
-The thrust and spikes can be released from every angle of the shoes.
-The shoes are not indestructible or anything they take damage like normal shoes, the exception are the spikes and thrust ability.

~Declined~ No sensing weapons are allowed anymore, and seriously remove those useless restrictions that i colored, and let me get this straight, you want the abilities not to count towards your move count? if so then no, i won't approved it like that, and how is the user is going to "absorb" water molecules and "send" them to the shoes again? this means that the shoes itself absorb water?

 

[-Broly-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes go from the start of the users forearm and continues down to each individual finger, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers also having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate, making the spikes on them function similar to a chainsaw when used, much like samehada, who shaves instead of cuts. Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the user can also slice through B rank earth and wood. When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

-Activation only lasts in quick bursts up to 15 seconds long
-Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
-Shaving effects can only be used 3 times before needing a 2 turn cooldown
-In order to maintain control of the strong vibrations the user must have mastered basic taijutsu
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✘ Declined ✘ You say that the gauntlets are made of a strong chakra resistant metal, then how are you going to channel lightning chakra into it? remove that 15 seconds activation it messes things up in the RP, give it a turn limit instead, give the cutting through B-rank earth and Wood ability a rank, and a usage limit.

Fuuton:Zetsubō no kaze:Wind Release: Breeze Of Desperation
Type: Attack/Sup
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Cost: 40 (+15 in conjuction with fire techs)
Description: This jutsu is best used in conjuction with a fire jutsu. The user make the tiger handseal. As the tiger handseal is made wind will form around the fire jutsu similar to Wave of inspiration and water techs. Only difference is as the wind circulates around the fire, It will combine with the fire seconds after making the fire more powerful. If not used with a fire tech. Its just a circular wind breeze. Enough to call minor scratches but not major damage.

-Can only be used 4 times per battle
-Can only be taught by -Broly-
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✘ Declined ✘ How is the wind made? you influence the air around the fire? or you blow the circular wind? and regardless, how is it released when not being used in conjunction with a fire techinque?

Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong and resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes go from the start of the users forearm and continues down to each individual finger, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers also having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate, making the spikes on them function similar to a chainsaw when used, much like samehada, who shaves instead of cuts. Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the gauntlets each have the cutting power of A rank lightning When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

-Can activate only 2 times per turn.
-Can only be used twice per turn for Taijutsu purposes (directly against an opponent and not a jutsu)
-Can only cut through a jutsu once per turn
-Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
-Shaving effects can only be used 3 times before needing a 2 turn cooldown
-In order to maintain control of the strong vibrations the user must have mastered basic taijutsu

Added everything you wanted and cleared up the chakra metal issue

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±± Declined ±± Remove the useless restriction of mastery over taijutsu. Its just a filler. Second, you don't seem to understand how a chainsaw works. I suggest you look it up. Has nothing to do with vibrations but movement. Second, if you have spikes in your palm, regardless of how you want it to seem, you can't do hanseals. Not all at least. The restrictions I bolded either don't make sense as a whole (some contradict eachother) or are simply are badly written and explained. What happens if you do a palm strike with no chakra on an enemy? Or a punch? Comparisson with samhada? It doesn't make sense because, again, the chainsaw reference throws the rest out of the window in terms of logic. Still a long way to go until its approvable.

Fuuton:Zetsubō no kaze:Wind Release: Breeze Of Desperation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (+15 in conjuction with fire techs)
Description: This jutsu is best used in conjuction with a fire jutsu. The user make the tiger handseal. As the tiger handseal is made wind will form directly around the fire jutsu similar to Wave of inspiration and water techs. The only difference is as the wind circulates around the fire, the fire will become stronger due to the wind empowering it. If not used with a fire tech the wind will be released from the mouth as a circular wind breeze. Enough to call minor scratches but not major damage.

-Can only be used 4 times per battle
-Can only be taught by -Broly-

Did what you said, clarified the technique

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±± Declined ±± Yet what you added makes no sense. If you want wind to form around the fire, you need to explain how it happens and limit it. What if its a fire technique that happens around your opponent? Its clear what you want from the technique but your description doesn't come even close to explaining in a suficienet manner how you achieve it.



Doton: Daiyamondodarasupēji no daiyamondokattā no datto wa da teidan no atarimae o okonaimasu Earth Style: Diamond dallas page's diamond cutter dat does da ding dude duh
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: What can be seen as turning Moving Earth Core into an offensive technique, the user stomps their foot on the ground and makes the ground move down, up to 8m at high speeds, enough to make the opponent lose balance like "Moving Earth Core". Then as the opponent goes downward the user claps his hands and makes the walls around the hole close in at the same high speeds, crushing the opponent. The hole can be up to 8x8x8 meters in terms of size.

-Can only be used twice per battle
-No S rank and above earth for the turn after this jutsu is used
-Can only be taught by Broly

~Leaving for Scorps~

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques. DNR. And name your technique decently please.

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Resubmitting

(Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…
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✘ Declined ✘ So this can be made anywhere in the air? no, that needs to be defined, whether it is above your opponent or another location, if it's made above the opponent then there should be a gap of like 10 meters between the technique and the opponent, also remove "giant" out of the technique, it's 10 times as big as you, it's not THAT big lol.

Removed the ridiculous restrictions and removed the part about genjutsu and Taijutsu also changed the Rank and placed it as a S Rank

Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish [/B]
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking The Koy Fish is made 10 meter infront of the opponent

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

~Declined~ see the bold, trying to get yourself killed? lol, how would it be made 10 meters in front of the opponent if you are 5 meters in front of him? just mention that it comes out of the ground or from your body, because this reference isn't good enough.

 

[Alucard]

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(Katon: Mikonenkou) - Fire Release: Flames of the Untamed
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is used to counter an opponent’s fire technique, however, to be effectively performed and damage the opponent, it should be used on continuous techniques, that take some time (like a stream of fire for example).
The user will perform three hand seals and point his palms outwards, releasing his own fire chakra on the opponent’s fire technique. This will create a perturbation on the technique, causing it to suddenly explode in a big fire ball.
This can be used to cancel an opponent’s fire technique and to possibly, catch him off guard, while he is performing it so it explodes near him. The bigger the opponent’s technique, the bigger the explosion
- Usable three times per battle

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±± Declined ±± You can only do this up to one rank lower to this technique. If you use it against same rank, the result is a cancelthe mutual cancel of both techniques. However, what worries me is that you don't protect yourself. Just because you stick your palm against the enemy technique doesn't mean you can nulify all of its effects. The stream would engulf you by the time you can produce the disturbance to make it backfire onto the opponent.

(Katon: Fire Release: Miyabitahane Fenikkusu, Sekensoroi Kashou) - Graceful Feathers of the Phoenix, World Set Ablaze
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 per turn it’s active)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will perform a row of 13 hand seals, creating an opening in the sky, similar to the one of Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop, but up to long range, all around him. From there, multiple orange glowing chakra feathers will slowly start to fall down on the battlefield. However, these are no ordinary chakra feathers. Each of these feathers has a great amount of fire chakra within them, ready to be released. Once the user decides, with a single hand seal, he can make any number of feathers on a certain area to explode. The power of each feather is equal to five exploding tags. These feathers keep falling for three turns and only on the third will the first ones arrive on the ground (meaning it will take them three turns to arrive to the ground and the last ones will only arrive on the fifth turn after this jutsu is used). Although they keep falling, they can be neutralized by pouring water over them (though rain is not enough) or by blowing them away.
- Usable twice per battle
- Gap of 2 turns between usage

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±± Declined ±± I don't get it that muhc, 3 turns to get to the ground? Why?And, if each feather is 5 explosion tags...who many feathers can you make and how many can you explode at once? The result is a bit over the top in terms of desctrutive power.

(Fuuinjutsu: Douzen Raiton) - Sealing Technique: Natural Lightning Release
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: For this technique to work, the user needs a scroll with pre-sealed lightning. However, this is no vulgar lightning, but rather, Natural Lightning, like the one produced by thunderclouds. Once he releases the seal – by performing a row of five hand seals - The user can perform lightning techniques, but from the scroll instead. For this, the user performs two hand seals to draw the natural lightning out of the scroll, followed by the jutsu’s needed hand seals in order to manipulate and shape the lightning. Since his techniques are now composed by Natural Lightning, they are much faster and stronger.
- Lightning techniques used from this scroll now lose their weakness to wind, making them neutral to each other ( X-rank Wind = X-rank Natural Lightning)
- Lightning techniques used from this scroll now overpower regular lightning techniques (X-rank Natural Lightning > X-rank Lightning)
-The user does not need to make physical contact with the scroll, meaning he can throw it into the air, perform the hand seals and draw the technique out of it.
- User can perform up to seven lightning techniques from this scroll
- User can only possess two of these scrolls with him
- Kirin cannot be performed from these scrolls

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±± Declined ±± Idea is good but like normal water is weaker than chakra infused, ninjutsu water, so would lightning. The principle is that for kirin it was deadly not because of the fact that it was natural lightning but becuase it was a large neough amount of it. I get you can add X damage to lightning techniques used from the scroll, but you cannot negate elemenatal weaknesses and strenghts whitout adding a new chakra nature. Als, 7 techniques from one scroll is a bit too muhc. perhaps 4 is more suited. Make it add +20 to the techniques used from the scroll.