Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Resubmitting, specified that it takes away the ability to deal internal damage.
(Jūkenpō/Fūton: Tekken no Shippuu) – Gentle Fist Style/Wind Release: Gale Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Gentle Fist)
Description: One of the most basic weaknesses of Gentle Fist is it's raw nature, unable to withstand elemental chakra of the same level unless it possesses a greater density or an advanced shape-.. this technique has been developed to overcome said weakness. Just before executing a Gentle Fist technique and in the same timeframe a Hyuuga converts the raw chakra to wind chakra a split second before exerting it. Due to the nature given to the chakra it gains a slight cutting ability aswell as a slight gusting force behind it but due to the conversion of the nature of the chakra into wind chakra it loses it's ability to deal internal damage and solely damages the target externally, making this technique most suited towards ranged Gentle Fist techniques that do not rely on internal damage in the first place. This technique however can only be utilized in combination with gentle fist techniques that do not require advanced shape manipulation nor the ones that possess an increased density such as the rotation techniques.
Note: Requires mastery of Gentle Fist.
Note: No Gentle Fist above A-Rank in the next turn.
Note: Usable four times per battle with a one turn cooldown inbetween uses.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
Resubmitting, changed to A-Rank and edited the restrictions accordingly.
(Hyouton: Kisei) – Ice Release: Parasite
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates a transulecent needle of ice between the tips of their thumb and index finger, no bigger than an ordinary needle and then shoots it off towards their target. Upon piercing the target, which essentially only causes minor, neglectible damage being a mere needle the user weaves a single handseal upon which more ice sprouts from the tip of the needle lodging itsself into the target's skin whilst invading their body, covering the internal tissue of the affected area in a layer of ice, effectively decreasing the mobility of any joints that may be affected by the ice greatly whilst the cold would cause severe nerve damage. The internal area affected by the freezing is roughly the size two average palms with the point of the needle's impact being the epicenter. The user is able to create upto four needles by materializing them inbetween their fingers just below the knuckles but in that case the strength of each needle and the area they affect are evenly spread out across each needle.
Note: Can only be used by a Yuki Clan member.
Note: Useable thrice per battle.
Note: No Ice techniques above A-Rank in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
‡ Pending ‡ Leaving both for Typhon
☼ Both Approved ☼
(Jūkenpō/Fūton: Tekken no Shippuu) – Gentle Fist Style/Wind Release: Gale Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Gentle Fist)
Description: One of the most basic weaknesses of Gentle Fist is it's raw nature, unable to withstand elemental chakra of the same level unless it possesses a greater density or an advanced shape-.. this technique has been developed to overcome said weakness. Just before executing a Gentle Fist technique and in the same timeframe a Hyuuga converts the raw chakra to wind chakra a split second before exerting it. Due to the nature given to the chakra it gains a slight cutting ability aswell as a slight gusting force behind it, potentially being even more dangerous then Gentle Fist utilized through raw chakra as the cutting ability would also deal slight cuts to the target internally or externally depending on the technique used. This technique however can only be utilized in combination with gentle fist techniques that do not require advanced shape manipulation nor the ones that possess an increased density such as the rotation techniques.
Note: Requires mastery of Gentle Fist.
Note: No Gentle Fist above A-Rank in the next turn.
Note: Usable four times per battle with a one turn cooldown inbetween uses.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
☼ Declined ☼
Pretty simple premise, not an issue. But once converted to wind chakra it wouldn't be able to impact internal organs like gentle fist usually does.
Resubmitting, specified that it takes away the ability to deal internal damage.
(Jūkenpō/Fūton: Tekken no Shippuu) – Gentle Fist Style/Wind Release: Gale Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Gentle Fist)
Description: One of the most basic weaknesses of Gentle Fist is it's raw nature, unable to withstand elemental chakra of the same level unless it possesses a greater density or an advanced shape-.. this technique has been developed to overcome said weakness. Just before executing a Gentle Fist technique and in the same timeframe a Hyuuga converts the raw chakra to wind chakra a split second before exerting it. Due to the nature given to the chakra it gains a slight cutting ability aswell as a slight gusting force behind it but due to the conversion of the nature of the chakra into wind chakra it loses it's ability to deal internal damage and solely damages the target externally, making this technique most suited towards ranged Gentle Fist techniques that do not rely on internal damage in the first place. This technique however can only be utilized in combination with gentle fist techniques that do not require advanced shape manipulation nor the ones that possess an increased density such as the rotation techniques.
Note: Requires mastery of Gentle Fist.
Note: No Gentle Fist above A-Rank in the next turn.
Note: Usable four times per battle with a one turn cooldown inbetween uses.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
(Hyouton: Kisei) – Ice Release: Parasite
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a transulecent needle of ice between the tips of their thumb and index finger, no bigger than an ordinary needle and then shoots it off towards their target. Upon piercing the target, which essentially only causes minor, neglectible damage being a mere needle the user weaves a single handseal upon which more ice sprouts from the tip of the needle lodging itsself into the target's skin whilst invading their body, covering the internal tissue of the affected area in a layer of ice, effectively decreasing the mobility of any joints that may be affected by the ice greatly whilst the cold would cause severe nerve damage. The internal area affected by the freezing is roughly the size two average palms with the point of the needle's impact being the epicenter. The user is able to create upto four needles by materializing them inbetween their fingers just below the knuckles but in that case the strength of each needle and the area they affect are evenly spread out across each needle.
Note: Can only be used by a Yuki Clan member.
Note: Useable twice per battle.
Note: No Ice techniques above A-Rank in the same turn and the next.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
‡ Pending ‡ This isn't worthy of an S-Rank imo. Might come back for this.
☼ Declined ☼
Agree with NK, this is at most an A-rank.
Resubmitting, changed to A-Rank and edited the restrictions accordingly.
(Hyouton: Kisei) – Ice Release: Parasite
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates a transulecent needle of ice between the tips of their thumb and index finger, no bigger than an ordinary needle and then shoots it off towards their target. Upon piercing the target, which essentially only causes minor, neglectible damage being a mere needle the user weaves a single handseal upon which more ice sprouts from the tip of the needle lodging itsself into the target's skin whilst invading their body, covering the internal tissue of the affected area in a layer of ice, effectively decreasing the mobility of any joints that may be affected by the ice greatly whilst the cold would cause severe nerve damage. The internal area affected by the freezing is roughly the size two average palms with the point of the needle's impact being the epicenter. The user is able to create upto four needles by materializing them inbetween their fingers just below the knuckles but in that case the strength of each needle and the area they affect are evenly spread out across each needle.
Note: Can only be used by a Yuki Clan member.
Note: Useable thrice per battle.
Note: No Ice techniques above A-Rank in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Tybone.
‡ Pending ‡ Leaving both for Typhon
☼ Both Approved ☼
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