Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Throw) | Short-Mid (Explosion)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Every great display of fireworks must come with a grand finale. The “ending sequence” to the show created by the “Fireworks Festival” technique. This orb of explosive notes is roughly the size of a billiard ball, compared to the marble-sized orbs of its parent technique. This technique functions in the same manner in that the chakra is not used to cause damage, but rather to allow the rather low-mass ball of paper to be thrown large distances; the damage comes about solely from the explosive yield of the paper bombs.Like a fire-works star, the color of the explosion can actually be controlled while making the orb, though this is purely aesthetic.
*Only useable three-times per battle, as the balls are pre-formed.The three balls are kept in a special container attached to the user's belt, on their back, where many people usually carry large scrolls.
*Due to the nature of the technique, due to the explosive yield of the tags, the user can be stuck by this technique if they are in the blast radius.
*Can be detonated by chakra, much like a normal explosive note. Otherwise, it functions like a grenade with a four second fuse.
‡ Approved ‡
Changed a few small things. Explained how I carry them. Bolder a sentence that was already there - I did not change anything, but it was my previous attempt at explaining how the technique functioned, in the same manner as its parent. If its not adequate, I apologize. Included that I can be hit by this.
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Submission:
(Gurandofināre) Grand Finale
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Throw) | Short-Mid (Explosion)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Every great display of fireworks must come with a grand finale. The “ending sequence” to the show created by the “Fireworks Festival” technique. This orb of explosive notes is roughly the size of a baseball, compared to the marble-sized orbs of its parent technique. This technique functions in the same manner in that the chakra is not used to cause damage, but rather to allow the rather low-mass ball of paper to be thrown large distances; the damage comes about solely from the explosive yield of the paper bombs. Like a fire-works star, the color of the explosion can actually be controlled while making the orb, though this is purely aesthetic.
*Only useable three-times per battle, as the balls are pre-formed.
*Can be detonated by handseal, much like a normal explosive note. Otherwise, it functions like a grenade with a four second fuse.
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Declined A few notes: If you throw this into mid-short range of you, you receive damage as you're essentially also inside the explosion area you define. So add a note explaining that. The size of this makes it somewhat not easy to carry on you. I mean, its 3 baseballs worth of explosive tags. How can you carry these? Doesn't make much sense so at least try to add a small explanation that, even if it counts for little, helps this make some sense. And finally, all the properties you explain in the original technique you must explain here even if you refer it as to being a bigger and stronger version of the original. You cannot expect all enemies will read your cj thread to try and find the original.
(Gurandofināre) Grand Finale(Hanabi Taikai) Firework Festival
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Throw: Short-Long | Explosion: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 10 each (x3)
Description: The user will throw three balls of rolled up explosive notes that are the size of regular marbles (exploding balls hereafter referred to as marbles), after infusing them with chakra; this chakra coats the marbles and allows them to be thrown a greater distance than the marbles would otherwise be capable of reaching, due to their extremely low mass and weight. Due to their small size, and the lack of a kunai to give away their position, these become a viable option in battle, as they are harder to see. Not only that, but each marble can be detonated individually at the user’s command, like regular exploding tags, allowing the marbles to be used for strategic purposes, due to their explosive radius. The damage is caused solely by the explosive tags; the chakra does not amplify the damage in anyway, and is simply used to throw them greater distances.
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Throw) | Short-Mid (Explosion)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Every great display of fireworks must come with a grand finale. The “ending sequence” to the show created by the “Fireworks Festival” technique. This orb of explosive notes is roughly the size of a billiard ball, compared to the marble-sized orbs of its parent technique. This technique functions in the same manner in that the chakra is not used to cause damage, but rather to allow the rather low-mass ball of paper to be thrown large distances; the damage comes about solely from the explosive yield of the paper bombs.Like a fire-works star, the color of the explosion can actually be controlled while making the orb, though this is purely aesthetic.
*Only useable three-times per battle, as the balls are pre-formed.The three balls are kept in a special container attached to the user's belt, on their back, where many people usually carry large scrolls.
*Due to the nature of the technique, due to the explosive yield of the tags, the user can be stuck by this technique if they are in the blast radius.
*Can be detonated by chakra, much like a normal explosive note. Otherwise, it functions like a grenade with a four second fuse.
‡ Approved ‡
Changed a few small things. Explained how I carry them. Bolder a sentence that was already there - I did not change anything, but it was my previous attempt at explaining how the technique functioned, in the same manner as its parent. If its not adequate, I apologize. Included that I can be hit by this.
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