Essen as he gasps the longsword. "ah!..Sensei.." bursting with emotion, focusing his chakra onto the blade of he long-sword as he emittes rations chakra the whole blade lightens up, a seizing sound and soon before you know it, the blade has been engulfed with ration chakra. *Alright* Essen then releases the sword from his hands and continues to focus on the sword with your raiton chakra released as he levitates it in front of him slowly he imagines a chainsaw the ration quickly intimates. *good, now for the finish* Essen then places his chakra into three other types of Rations as he manipulates then into lancer like ration spares. In the motion of his hands he sends them directly at the tree far off in hopes of striking.
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Essen as he gasps the longsword. "ah!..Sensei.." bursting with emotion, focusing his chakra onto the blade of he long-sword as he emittes rations chakra the whole blade lightens up, a seizing sound and soon before you know it, the blade has been engulfed with ration chakra. *Alright* Essen then releases the sword from his hands and continues to focus on the sword with your raiton chakra released as he levitates it in front of him slowly he imagines a chainsaw the ration quickly intimates. *good, now for the finish* Essen then places his chakra into three other types of Rations as he manipulates then into lancer like ration spares. In the motion of his hands he sends them directly at the tree far off in hopes of striking.
"Alright so a few mistakes Essen. Nothing huge to worry about. First off I got a bit confused when you mentioned your "three other types of Rations". Remember you're only creating two additional copies that levitate along with the original so you make a total of three swords. Also a chainsaw isn't exactly what kind of rotation I'm talking about here. This is more of the sword actually rotating itself in mid-air as if it was rotating from the middle of the sword in a circle. Are you able to picture that?"
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Okay, I've reread this quite a lot, I've pictured this(underlined & bold):"I want you to begin by channeling raiton chakra into my longsword. Then, release the sword from your hands and continue focusing on the sword with your raiton chakra in order to levitate it in front of you. (sword is now floating, with cover of lightening) Once that is done you'll actually produce two physical copies of the blade (I release two more) by further use of your raiton chakra which then you'll apply careful shape manipulation to cause the blades to spin rapidly(yeah, I thought of the ration cover acting as a chainsaw, but I now see it your way) and allow them to fly toward your target to slice them up! Keep in mind once you let the sword go you'll control the three swords(This is where I'm lost), once you create the two extra copies, with hand motions.(Same as the sentence before)"
Okay, I've reread this quite a lot, I've pictured this(underlined & bold):"I want you to begin by channeling raiton chakra into my longsword. Then, release the sword from your hands and continue focusing on the sword with your raiton chakra in order to levitate it in front of you. (sword is now floating, with cover of lightening) Once that is done you'll actually produce two physical copies of the blade (I release two more) by further use of your raiton chakra which then you'll apply careful shape manipulation to cause the blades to spin rapidly(yeah, I thought of the ration cover acting as a chainsaw, but I now see it your way) and allow them to fly toward your target to slice them up! Keep in mind once you let the sword go you'll control the three swords(This is where I'm lost), once you create the two extra copies, with hand motions.(Same as the sentence before)"
The raiton chakra creates two physical copies of the original sword. Thus you have three swords. Now the hand motions control the movement of those rotating swords. Should you want them to fly forward you do it with your hands and motion for that. Should you want them to go up into the air then you do that with your hands. It is all based on those hand motions. Those hand motions control the three swords (2 copies, 1 original). Did that clear it up slightly?
"Great! Glad that helped!" I say as I smile. "Right, moving on. This next technique is the last of the C-Rank Lightning Techniques. So for this technique pay close attention to the wording of the jutsu and the range of the technique. The range is quite important to using this jutsu correctly. The jutsu itself requires no hand seals making it quite quick in its usage. By channeling raiton chakra into your dominant hand you will begin generating bolts of lightning around your forearm and then release them into the ground causing them to move around you in a 5 meter radius around you. So I want you to perform this as per usual and then tell me what you think about it for its uses!"
( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
Quickly Essen get's on his feet, "...alright!" quickly in its surging his chakra though his body toward his channeling of the raiton chakra, most of it is enforced into his dominant hand. For the moment he begins generating bolts of lightning around his forearm and then releases them into the ground causing the move around and crack in it's way. "the technique was made to either break lower grounds or to be performed onto situation terrain like water based surface, where you could damage multiple enemies at once..."
"Great job Essen! You're very right this could indeed shock multiple enemies. Now, regarding your point about the water based surface. Be careful when you're applying this. In most cases if you are standing on water directly and channel your own lightning chakra through it you will shock yourself feeling the effects of your own technique. This is quite dangerous and you should be very conscious where you are using the technique. Well very good job Essen! You've finished the C-Rank lightning techniques! Now, before we move on, do you have any questions regarding the C/D rank lightning techniques?"
Essen Smiles as he waves off the dust, walking toward his sensei, who happens to be in a good mood. Essen enters the tree shade for where his sensei was, "no, not really...just as why do I shock myself when I'm able to stream ration?...also when your done answering, could you show me the next thing for me to learn"
"Well you don't shock yourself when you stream a raiton technique. The key here is that when you stream it into a water you are conducting the electricity through the water. Water is an excellent conductor for electricity and when it basically just shocks anyone inside that body of water. So, before we move onto the B-Ranks we're going to evaluate your knowledge so far and give you a little battle practice! This is basically going to be a fight where I come at you and you'll need to defend and counter attack against me using only lightning techniques you have learned so far in the training! I'll come at you with a variety of attacks and continue attacking until I feel you have performed enough and shown enough knowledge before we move on. Remember, don't feel any pressures. You can make mistakes and be totally fine! Any questions before we begin?"
OOC: I'm not sure if you've actually had a fight in the RP yet. If not explore the rules a bit as well. This will help you a lot with actual sparring^^. I'm going to assume the tree that you're standing on is 10 meters from me (mid-range).
"Let's begin then, shall we?" I ask with a smile as Essen leaps into the tree branch above. "I'll begin slow Essen." As I say this I channel earth chakra throughout the earth near the tree Essen is standing on while performing the Rat hand seal. As this is finished two enormous slabs of earth rise from both sides of the tree. They rise to Essen's height and them slam together aiming to crush him!
Essen notices his sensei performing the jutsu that could probably be a mid-range or a long range due the distance between them, * two enormous slabs of earth rise from both sides of the tree* in shock Essen prepares to perform hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog as the two slabs rise to Essen's height and then slam together aiming to crush him! Essen releases ration jutsu, Electric Attack, which he creates an electric current from his hand as he targets both slabs and his sensei as he plan to hit all targets at the same time.
I watch carefully as Essen releases a current strong enough to neutralize the two slabs of earth and strike me simultaneously. Good work, Essen. I think to myself as I prepare my counter attack. Leaning back I mold katon chakra in my gullet unleashing a small fireball aimed straight for Essen's stomach. Immediately after I channel doton chakra throughout the earth beneath the tree you are perched on. He needs to fall now. I think as I weave a quick series of hand seals causing a small fissure to open up beneath the tree causing the tree itself to fall into it partially. The result would be Essen would quickly lose his footing as the tree fell in on itself.
Essen watches carefully with focus as his sensei leans back as if he is preparing to unleash something from his mouth, *a small fireball aimed straight for Essen* Immediately Essen leaps onto the higher branch above him as the earth beneath the tree, cracks causing Essen to lose balance thus falling into the ditch of roughly 3 meters deep. "Crafty" Essen thinks as he falls, while doing so, he releases an electric discharge to the side of the underground he falls into. Slamming the current into the ground to end it's progression and for precaution Essen heightens his defense with Lightning. Landing in the tight spaced area, Essen leaps out onto the fallen tree as he stares at his sensei, who seems to be fairly relaxed at a 10 meter range.
Alright so, here's where your first mistake occurred. Allow me to talk about it OOC until we move on. It isn't a major mistake don't worry^^. So anyways from what I read and understand you dodged my D-Rank Small Fire by simply jumping up to a higher branch. While this normally would make sense to do in the RP you aren't actually able to freeform dodge any ninjutsu. So in this case as I said you jumped to evade my D-Rank Small Fire which normally wouldn't be allowed and in an official fight would mean you took the small fire and were hit in the chest by it. So does that make sense? While it may seem a bit odd logically at first its done to keep fights going so people aren't simply just saying that they side step a jutsu lol
Awesome^^. Alright, lets continue. Also, now I want you to try to bring the fight to me. Don't just defend against my moves but remember to try to come at me.
As Essen stands preparing for my next offensive I skillfully weave fuuton chakra in my gullet. Lets see what he knows now... I think to myself as I lean forward releasing a single blast of wind chakra aimed directly for Essen's forehead.
Essen clearly notices the aim of attack as he stared at his sensei's body movement, preparing the Lightning Armour and moving in too; as he rushes for a close contact. The light stream of wind aimed at his forehead is blocked by both Essen's gesture also Lightning Armour for he blocked the attack using his arm before streaming Lightning Strike Horn at his sensei.
Alright, lets end the fight there 
. I want to discuss each of your moves now in response to what I did. The next fight we have will be when you finish A-Rank lightning before we move onto the S-Ranks and that will be slightly longer to allow you to show off a bit more. But since D/C-rank raiton is a little more limited in scope we'll start the discussion now.
As I watch Essen's attack come forth I raise my hand releasing a D-Rank blast of wind strong enough to neutralize it.
"Okay Essen, lets look at what you have done so far. Can you explain what you did in your first move in response to mine? The one where I used Bedrock Coffin. Explain why you did what you did to me."
. I want to discuss each of your moves now in response to what I did. The next fight we have will be when you finish A-Rank lightning before we move onto the S-Ranks and that will be slightly longer to allow you to show off a bit more. But since D/C-rank raiton is a little more limited in scope we'll start the discussion now. As I watch Essen's attack come forth I raise my hand releasing a D-Rank blast of wind strong enough to neutralize it.
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