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(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
With one handseal, the wires can be shot from the ground upwards, binding the target. The user can gradually increase the sharpness and the tight hold of the technique by hand gestures (when he uses it from his hands directly as "whips") or by maintaining the hand seal (if used from the ground).
*If used from the ground, can't perform any further jutsu until the grip is released*
The wires are only able to severe the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns*
The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths
*Cannot be used by CE elements.
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So, my lordy lord. This technique. I guess it gives Ninjutsu an unique spin, so I hesitantly approve it. Very hesitantly, because I can see ways that this can be abused, but I do approve of its creative spin. Hopefully, I can see some good stuff happening with this in battle test. As such, I will also nerf it to B-Rank.
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( Ninjutsu: Ryousei Kanshou ) Ninja Arts: Amphibian Intervention
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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Based on the principle of friction and microscopic texture. While some materials may seem smooth to the naked eye, in the nano-scale, they're comprised of multiple irregularities and rough textures. When two materials drag on each other, the inherited friction increases exponentially, superior than it would happen case the materials were virtually smooth. Applying the teachings of the basic Tree/Water Walking techniques, the user is able to create a thin layer of chakra across any surface of his/her own body. The chakra is thus able to cover or enhance the microscopic irregularities, thus increasing or decreasing the friction to extremes.
(Kato Enten) Smooth Tadpole- The thin layer will get rid of the irregularities in one's body surface, allowing a nearly zero-friction surface. Given the natural flexibility and curvature of the user's own body, and allying it with well-timed motions, the user is able to become impervious to any physical attack, allowing it to slip off the side. The selective aspect of the jutsu allows one to retain some un-covered areas, permitting usages such as whole-body "armor" with naked soles for walking, left covered-sole and right naked sole for fast gliding, covered arm for evasion and naked fist for attack, etc.
(Gama Ranbou) Rough Toad - The thin layer will accentuate the irregularities in one's body surface, increasing the friction. It allows one to have a much better grip on objects, almost sticking to them in a microscopic scale. Likewise, it allows one to mimic the Lotus Effect, becoming a superhydrophobic surface. This, among other things, would turn the user impervious to pathogenic agents like bacteria, fungi or algae growth, reducing or eliminating the area of contact with the water particles in which these pathogens dwell and proliferate.
Effective against Earth and Water based elements, to a certain extend, as one can be affected through the sheer size of the tangible object. There is a protection against physical blades, but not intangible blades, such as those created with Wind or Energy based elements. While it does cover oneself with chakra, the low amount of chakra deployed is minimal, and thus, outside the described effects, it is useless as a chakra armor, when in direct confrontation with chakra-based attacks. It does not protect against Genjutsu or Yamanaka techniques.
The user is able to passively change between the Smooth, Rough and Normal aspect as long as the technique is active, though, except in the turn of usage, swapping between the Rough and Smooth will count once towards the jutsu count. The user is able to selectively cover oneself with chakra, allowing the rest of the surface to be normal, and alter the degree of irregularity, but the whole affected surface must have the same degree, thus preventing part of the body to have the Rough variation and other part the Smooth.
Lasts 5 turns, max, per usage.
Requires 1 turn cool down.
Can only be used 5 times.
Allows the cover to spread through body/clothes and any surface in contact with the user up to 1 meter all around (thus allowing other people to suffer the same effects).
Doesn't negate usage rank and strength and thus can only be used against physical Jutsu A-Rank and bellow and is completely useless against energy based elements while neutral to wind based ones.
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You know, as much as I really like this technique and how creative it is, I will have to decline it. I can accept it as a custom, if you would like to submit it again as that. But canon is simply a bit too much.
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( Genjutsu: Seidou Shiraha no Hato ) Illusion Technique: The Sanctuary of the Feathery Dove
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Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After 3 handseals, the user is able to cast a genjutsu either on her/himself or on an opponent. The genjutsu pertains as the removal of harm and pain, giving a false sense of security, where there is none, by reattaching severed limbs or healing up wounds and burns or merely anesthetizing the opponent from pain. The illusion comes with a feeling as if the user has been coated by a soft bubble, like a feathery cushion, while seeing missing limbs being reattached, or wounds healing up or poisons being removed from the organism. The illusion makes it so that anything posterior to the initial cast of the genjutsu simple disappears or is bounced off from the skin, instead of healing, further adding to the false notion of security.
While it could be use to sustain wounds that do not put someone in immediate danger, being solely nuisances, the genjutsu could also cover up potentially fatal and paralyzing injuries, making its target careless and self-harmful. The genjutsu latches strongly to the opponent's mind, allowing the user to combine it with a second genjutsu, making the second genjutsu strong against physical pain releases, however major pain stimuli (very deep cuts, strong burns, etc. ) will still break it.
*Lasts 3 turns max*
*Can only be used 2 times*
*If used with a painful second genjutsu, there will be no pain involved.*
*Can be used against opponent's genjutsu as a means to counter it's effect, up to the rank of the technique*
*Genjutsu specialists or doujutsu users can cast against 1 rank higher*
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Oh my lord. I love this technique. I can see this used in absolutely amazing ways for RP. (Time to slice my own arm off!)
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( Genjutsu: Kohitsuji Shoutan Raikou) Illusion Arts: Lightning Tears of a Lamb
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After 2 handseals, the user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent, making him feel 2 lightning threads surge from each eye across his/her face. The lightning threads will cause great pain as they go around the head, pulling the facial muscles into a wide eyed shocked expression and then shoot into the ground, pulling the head downwards to have the opponent face the heaven. At that point, the lightning strings that links the head to the ground pressure into an area of the brain not dealing with vision but the interpretation of vision (left occipital lobe and temporal lobes), signaling the user's chakra messing with those particular areas. At which point, the opponent becames mentally blind, able to see but enable to make sense of it, as the genjutsu mimics Visual Agnosia.
The user has to rely on senses other than vision to perceive through this genjutsu, including but exclusively Sharingan, Byakugan and other Rinnegan, as it does not create a cloak to their eyes but actually messes with the perception and interpretation of visual stimmuli.
*Can only be used thrice, requiring 1 turn break between usages (counting after the turn it ends)*
*Is basically a normal genjutsu with a visual twist, it is as weak to any other method of dispelling as any other genjutsu*
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Declined. As a canon, no way. Also, I just had a very, unpleasant imagery from reading your description. <.< I think I've been watching too much edgy anime.
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(Doton: Usagi no Bibiri) Earth Release: Cowardly Hare
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Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates 10 small hare-like earth structures, which appear from the ground at least 20 meters from the opponent, all around. Their purpose is to approach the target and once they touch it, they blast outwards, with a small explosion, just like Paper Bombs. They're as fast as normal hares, but they're also as cowardly. They hide underground while the opponent is looking in their direction, and only move when in the opponent's blind spot. The transition between hidden and moving is almost instantaneous, and while underground they're undistiguishable to the naked eye (Can be seen or sensed by Byakugan and Chakra Sensors)
*Can't be used twice or thrice at a time. The user can only create a new set of hares once the first one has either reached the target or blocked in the way there*
*Can only be used thrice*
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Declined. This technique is great. But I can also see a lot of problems with metagaming I'd rather not deal with.
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(Suiton: Bouhatei no Hanamizu) Water Release: Mole Snot
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user does a string of 4 handseals, creating a huge reservoir of a sticky substance (Similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field) underground. With one handseal, the user can erupt localized geiser-like streams around the opponent, which will then rain the substance upon the target. In case that doesn't work, the user can, by stomping on the ground, seep out the remaining underground syrup, sticking the opponent's foot to the ground.
In case the opponent decides to go underground to avoid the geysers he will come into contact with the substance underground and be stuck there, making him an easy target. The substance will short-circuit electricity, so if he tries using Nagashi to free himself he is dead.
*Can only be used thrice per match*
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Declined. It's...not very suitable for a canon technique.
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( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting (up to 10) small pillars of earth (Counts towards the jutsu count) , until either she decides to pop them (using one handseal) or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.
With one handseal, the user can make each bead burst into 10-20 smaller yet faster beads, with the same characteristics, despite the size.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle. Can only be used once every 2 turns*
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Declined, for similar reasons as above
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(Fuuton: Fuuheii Fuukaze Fuuka Fuugyuu ) Wind Release: Easy Breezy Beautiful Buffalo
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: With two handseals, the user will charge wind chakra through fine sand, dust or other stagnant loosen earthen materials, which will erupt a gigantic winged cow, with all the speed and agility of the wind, but the solid substance of the earth. Likewise, the user can summon several cows, up to 3, yet smaller. The user can use the cows to achieve flight, or simply smash them against the opponent with great blunt force. Instead of using two handseals to give them a more complex look, the user is able to handsealessly focus wind chakra on the dust to create more basic constructs, related to the bovine, such as a hoof or a horn.
*This jutsu can't turn opponent's active jutsus into cows, likewise, once inside the cows, the opponent can't control the materials*
*Can only be used once every 3 turns*
*Can't use Wind Techniques above S rank in the same turn*
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Declined. I have too many questions about technique and that doesn't bode well.
(Raiton: Fukuro no Giragira) Lightning Style: Owl's Glare
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Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user quickly gathers lightning chakra on the eyes, making them glow, iluminating the path. If eye contact is made with the opponent, a beam of lightning is shot to pierce the opponent's eyes. The beam is virtually untrackable, due to an optical illusion: Since the beam travels straight forward, all the opponent see are the glowing eyes. Only experienced doujutsu users or chakra sensors (Sage rank), will be able to notice the slight increase of chakra/glow as the beam is being shot, and as such are able to respond correctly. In the case the opponent notices, it is easily blockable, for if it it's anything other then soft tissue (I.e. Eyes) the max it can do is leave 2 small wounds.
*Can only be used thrice, lasts 3 turns, where the user can shoot 2 pairs of beams throughout*
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Superman, is that you? Otherwise, declined. Not suitable for canon purposes.
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(Doton: Kachiku Kanshou ) Earth Release: Bovine Intervention
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Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu is based on the Earth Chakra's abilities to harden or soften any earth feature. By slamming the user's palm on the ground, or on any thrown or erupted earth structure, the user is able to harden or soften the said structure, all at once. The technique is based on the user's chakra reservations, and thus the area and volume of the feature the user wishes to change varies with it.
As described this technique has two variants:
(Buru no Ai Naguriai) Bison's Love Fist, which allows the structure struck by the right hand to harden immediately. Basically, any soft structure, such as Sand, Gravel or Mud (Created by Earth Release (Canon Element), not Mud Release (Custom Element) will turn into rock.
(Ushi no Nyuujou Kissu) Cow's Milky Kiss, which allows the structure struck by the left hand to soften immediately. Basically, any hard structure, such as Rock, Harden Mud or Earth will turn into sand.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle*
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Curious...approved. 