Players involved: Delta
Mission Rank:B Rank S
Story elements chosen: Win a fight without your ninjutsu
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 30/11/2018-30/11/2018
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/naxos-201.756216/#post-21864295
Additional information:
Making the first step into the WSE NW
Mission Rank:
Story elements chosen: Win a fight without your ninjutsu
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 30/11/2018-30/11/2018
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/naxos-201.756216/#post-21864295
Additional information:
Making the first step into the WSE NW
Mission Passed. Alright, wew. A lot to unpack here. I think there's a misunderstanding somewhere, this wouldn't be a B-rank mission because you're using a single basic S-rank storyboard element. If you're unsure about the storyboard elements, how they work or where they can be found a list of basic storyboard elements can be found in this post: Mission System | The Storyboard. I'm awarding you the proper rewards for an S-rank. Now moving onto the mission proper. Writing a lot doesn't always mean you'll pass especially if it's off-task and not dealing with your storyboard elements, in this case, you did pass, but that was because you put a lot of effort, and work into tackling the elements. You fought two separate bouts without using your ninjutsu. So, you did more than enough work and put more than enough effort into this mission to pass an S-rank in my opinion. Even with it being a single element mission, but there was also a lot of filler and setup RP. This type of RP doesn't affect the mission. For example, several of your initial paragraphs could have been placed outside of the mission, to build up to actually performing the mission. RP like that can even at times be detrimental because if you focus too much time on that, and not enough on your storyboard elements it can end in a fail after putting a lot of work into your post because it's misplaced effort.
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