Storyboard Mission Submission

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
-Help a local trader by transporting his wares (2)
-Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/01/2019 - 01/02/2019
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Claimed a Landmark for my clan.

Mission Passed. Good job. Was an interesting story.
 
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Mission Rank: C rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Set up camp
  • Set up a secure camp
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 04/01/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bonsai-island-140.756154/#post-21892727
Additional information: Arriving on Bonsai Island, Grimmjow takes time away from the Main village, however, late at night, he senses a large build up of chakra, spurring him to set up the camp a little better.

Mission Passed. You split the elements pretty well for them being so similar.
 
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Mission Rank: C rank(custom)
Elements Chosen: Investigate what happened the night before
Date: 04/01/2019
Link: https://animebase.me/threads/bonsai-island-140.756154/#post-21892736
Additonal Info: Grimmjow heads into the village, investgates the damage, eaves drops in a tavern, speaks to a guard and set up a stake out while waiting for the group to reappear

Mission Passed.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
-Guard someone very important (5)
-Save a large community from danger (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12-19-2018, 1-4-2019
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Additional information: N/A

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Build Technology (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01-6-2019, 1-6-2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/fuging-030.755847/post-21893961
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. You also win a C-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

Explore the history of something (3)
Fight an enemy stronger than yourself (4)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/1 - 8/1
Relevant mission links: Start - Finish
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
 
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Mission Rank: D
Elements chosen:
  • Build something for the Clan
Date started/concluded: 09/01/19
Link: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-21894976
Other info: Sin returns and makes a confession but to strengthen the clan.

Mission Failed. You spent too long setting up a scenario that didn't work into your element. A secondary element would have been good here. A lot of them could have fit and would have made it more on point. Judging the mission on how it is, puts your storyboard element effort at less than half of the mission itself. That's not enough. However, I like the overarching story and land your building up. It's just a matter of picking the right elements to go along with the mission you write out or writing the mission to follow the elements more closely.
 
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Players involved: FortuneSoul
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Spy on an important target and remain undetected
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/17/19
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/posts/21897690/

Mission Failed. You spent too much time setting up where you were and superficial things that didn't build toward the element itself, and not enough time actually spying on the target which was your objective. When you take a single element the mission needs to revolve almost completely around that element with little room to be off topic. Picking more elements can help with this giving you different topics to build off of. Additionally, there's not enough actual work here for an A rank.
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: (custom)
-Eliminate bandits stealing from your clan. (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/17/2019
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Additional information: Claimed a Landmark for my clan.

Mission Passed. A warning, try to minimize the use of NPCs to accomplish goals.
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

  • Explore an abandoned site (2)
  • Set up a secure camp (2)
  • Put the Clan's interest first (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 1/18/19
Relevant mission links: [X]
Additional information: Claimed Landmaark for clan

Mission Passed. You also win a C-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.
 
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Mission Rank: 2.5 = B?
Story elements chosen:
  • Put the Clan’s interests first (2)
  • Stomp out protest and/or dissent (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 31/01/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/razorfens-076.755893/post-21901495
Additional information: I'm claiming this landmark for my clan.

Mission Passed. "Live in peace or we'll kill you." someone plays Gandhi in Civ.

Checked by @Howard
 
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Mission Rank: D rank
Elements: Set Up Camp
Date: 6/2/2019
Link: https://animebase.me/threads/mauna-loa-142.756156/#post-21903063
Additional Information: Im replacing my Grimmjow bio with my Raven bio in this post, making Raven my WSE Bio

Mission Passed. Gotta focus more on the element for anything above a D-rank. Almost failed this.

Checked by @Howard
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Choose between what is right and what is easy ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
1/01/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Wanted to mess around and used this to go out and explore a bit.
 
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Story elements chosen:
  • Choose between what is right and what is easy ( 3 )
  • Explore the history of something ( 3 )
  • Fight an individual of comparable strength ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
2/02/2019
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: Wanted to tie my bio's history into his newfound Yang abilities also tied him to the Freehold for a cool plot hook.
 
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