Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Investigate the history of a landmark
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/04/2018 - 24/04/2018
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Additional information: Alucard needs netflix.
~Mission Failed. You don't really investigate... you read an inscription and excavate an artifact. I'm not saying this isn't interesting, but you picked one storyboard element and really only describe the statue and the artifact itself. The narrative just seems a little shallow where the storyboard element is concerned.
Don't be afraid to pick more storyboard elements. The more you pick, or make up, the more evenly you can spread your story. If you don't want to write solely (or mostly, at least) about investigating history (in whatever form) then you should pick more storyboard elements.
Also, I swear the references about TV and Netflix didn't influence this decision, but I did grit my teeth like Stannis on drugs. Turn that down and you'll have my thoughts and prayers.
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Investigate the history of a landmark
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/04/2018 - 24/04/2018
Relevant mission links:
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Additional information: Alucard needs netflix.
~Mission Failed. You don't really investigate... you read an inscription and excavate an artifact. I'm not saying this isn't interesting, but you picked one storyboard element and really only describe the statue and the artifact itself. The narrative just seems a little shallow where the storyboard element is concerned.
Don't be afraid to pick more storyboard elements. The more you pick, or make up, the more evenly you can spread your story. If you don't want to write solely (or mostly, at least) about investigating history (in whatever form) then you should pick more storyboard elements.
Also, I swear the references about TV and Netflix didn't influence this decision, but I did grit my teeth like Stannis on drugs. Turn that down and you'll have my thoughts and prayers.
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