Storyboard Mission Submission

[Typhon]

Players involved: Typhon
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

• Do some moderate meditation to improve focus (1)
• Finish a chore using Ninjutsu (1)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/30/2018 - 4/30/2018
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Additional information: None

~Mission Passed. Oddly enough, a story about a failed task constitutes a pass here. Go figure.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Choose between what is right and what is easy ( 3 )
Custom - Deal with a traumatic event from your past ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/01/2018
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Additional information: Just felt like some character fluff.

~Mission Passed. And fluffy it was.

 

[Typhon]

Players Involved: Typhon
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:

• Convince a neutral party to fight with you (3)

Date of Beginning and Date of Conclusion: 5/2/18
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Additional Information: None

~Mission Passed. The best pirate you've never heard of.

 

[Wakizashi]

Players involved: Wakizashi
Mission Rank: D-rank
Story elements chosen:

• explore the landmark
• Do a bad deed
• finish a chore using ninjutsu=making a fire

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: may 2-may 2,2018
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Additional information: pretty self explanatory

Did you really just stab some woman for your bad deed? You monster. Mission Passed.

 

[Shinta]

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Mission Rank: C-rank
Story elements chosen: Custom Element: Build your Custom Technology
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/05/20188
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Additional information: Wanted to find a way to insert my CT into the WSE, without it just conveniently being in place.

~Mission Failed. This was a near-pass for me, but your actual creation process simply wasn't explored to a degree I found acceptable. I don't expect you to be a technical expert, but if you don't want to spend most of your mission doing it, then I would advice you to pick some more storyboard elements.

I just want you to know how much I love the idea, though. Introducing the technology in an RP fashion is exactly how I pictured Boruto-era stuff fitting into WSE. I'm putting your element onto the list.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
Explore a landmark ( 1 )
Set up a camp ( 1 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/05/2018
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Additional information: N/A

~Mission Passed. Good job, and some love from Shinta. What's not to like?

 

[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Defend against or attack another group
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/05 - 2018
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Additional information: N/A >_O

~Mission Passed. This was a close one for me, but you stuck to the theme throughout your mission, so I can't really fault you for the single storyboard element in this case. However, I do want to say that I think your villain was a little too puny for an A-rank, in the context of your story and the chosen storyboard element.

 

[Mirai]

Players involved: Myself
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Deal with a traumatic event from your past
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5/5/2018 to 5/5/2018
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Additional information: Reading my bio history will give a bit of context to this plot here.

Mission Passed. So, I'm passing this because you make the confrontation and background about the storyboard element, but I don't understand why you didn't, for example, pick the 'defend/attack another group' or something along those lines to open up your options more. You're making this way harder for yourself than it has to be. The less storyboard elements you pick the more 'focused' your narrative needs to be. That's not easy to do every time, especially if you want to talk about other things during your mission.

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra, Shinta
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: end a helping hand in one of your landmarks
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5/4/2018
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Additional information: Gave houses to NPCs and townspeople above the waterfall

~Mission Failed. So, yeah, technically you're doing what the storyboard element says, but this feels very superficial, like the Ninja version of corporate gift baskets. You can make huge buildings at will; I'd like to see you be bit more creative with this.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
Custom - Build your Custom Technology ( 2 )
Do some moderate meditation to improve focus ( 1 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/06/2018
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Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. This is actually a C-rank, as 1.5 is rounded to 2. By the way; I put that custom storyboard element onto the list, but, yeah, you can still use Shinta's version.

 

[Skaaar]

Player involved: Skaaar
Mission Rank: C?
Story elements chosen:
* Set up camp (1)
* Do some moderate meditation to improve focus. (1)
* Perform a moderate workout routine (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6th May, 2018
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Additional information: N/A​

~Mission Passed. This is a D-rank, though, but nice work.

 

[Zatanna]

Players involved: UdonPanda
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Survive a near death encounter (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6th May
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~Mission Failed. It is as I keep telling you; you spend too little time on your storyboard elements. The story is good, as always, but I know for a fact that there are storyboard elements on the list that would have fit this narrative fine. I like how you fit the one SE into the story, but there's only one and a lot of the story is not you surviving a near death encounter. I can only highly encourage you to take this advice.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan ( 4 )
Take responsibility for the actions of your Clan and/or its members ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
05-06-2018
05-08-2018
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Additional information: Multiple posts, I apologize if it's lengthy.

...I can't really say anything about about these lengthy missions, though. You're actually writing a story, and trading technically falls under negotiation, I suppose, so, Mission Passed. Good work!

 

[Shinta]

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan ( 4 )
Take responsibility for the actions of your Clan and/or its members ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7th-8th of April 2018
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Additional information: Essentially posts #7 through to #16

~Mission Failed. So, I love the fact that you guys tried a group mission, and there is going to be some adjustments as people get a feel for how group missions are done, but, essentially, the more people the more work. It's not that you have to post 50% of the mission each, but Korra has to at least appear actively in the story more. Since you split up control and just kept using your own biographies it's easy to measure and Korra just didn't feature enough in the actual action.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Trade with another group ( 2 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
05-08-2018
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Additional information: Not as lengthy as the last just a small back and forth.

~Mission Passed. Good exchange.

 

[Skaaar]

Player involved: Skaaar
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
* Meet with a major faction representative
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7th May, 2018 - 8th May, 2018
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Additional information: The thread is pretty much straightforward.

~Mission Failed. You should use more storyboard elements and probably do a little more 'meeting'

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Player involved: Skaaar
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
* Trade with another group
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8th May, 2018
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Additional information: After meeting with Sado, they decided to exchange items and trade.​

~Mission Passed. Good exchange, but include all the links next time.

 

[Geezus]

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

Explore a landmark. (1)
Trail an individual without being detected (2)
Lend a helping hand in one of your landmarks (1)
Show the people of your landmark the merits of your Clan (2)
Build something for the Clan (1)
Set up a secure camp (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 09/05/2018
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~Mission Passed. I can't believe I'm saying this, but be careful with doing too many storyboard elements. I can kinda see the last one in there because of the landmark itself, which I'll give you, but I'm a little iffy about the 5th one. Still, a good, compelling story about an up-and-coming villainess

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Perform administrative duties ( 1 )
Put the Clan’s interests first ( 2 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/12/2018
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~Mission Passed. Huh, not how I imagined Clans leveling up, but who am I to judge? A good story is a good story.

 

[Vegeta]

Players involved: Vegeta
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5/15/2018
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Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

 

[Goetia]

Players involved: Goetia
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

⇒ Guard someone very important (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 17/5/2018
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Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed