Storyboard Mission Submission

[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Destroy a large group or settlement
Assassinate the enemy commander
Survive a near-death situation
Win a fight without your ninjutsu
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 17/05 - 2018
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Additional information: N/A >_O

~Mission Passed. This was good, and I'll cut you some slack with the near-death situation since you're a Jashinist, lol.

Mission Failed. You can't use a new bio in WSE like this.

 

[Xicer]

Players involved: Xicer
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
-Explore an abandoned site
- Trail an individual without being detected
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/17/18
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~Mission Passed. Nice plot twist. It is appreciated.

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Players involved: Xicer
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
-Defend yourself from wild beast (2)
-Survive a near-death situation (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/22/2018
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~Mission Passed. Nice work. You stick to your storyboard elements and put words to them. What more can I ask?

 

[Geezus]

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
Collect taxes from those who reside in your landmarks (1)
Do a bad deed. (1)
Help a local trader by transporting his wares. (2)
Put the Clan’s interests first. (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/15/2018 - 05/19/2018
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~Mission Passed. Bit peripheral with your storyboard elements, but it works for a D-rank.

Oh, and you win an artifact, congratulations:

(Chīsai Iyakuhin Nankō) – Lesser Medicinal Salve

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Type: Artifact
Rank: C
Range: N/A (Contact)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A teal paste crafted by skilled healers and sold for profit in various markets throughout the world. It is stored in a small fist sized jar and can be conveniently kept safely in a ninja pouch. The salve is soothing to the touch and brings a warm comfort to wounds it is applied to. Usable once, it can regenerate wounds over a short period of time and specializes in gashes and cuts on the user’s body. When applied the salve works to mend the user’s wounds over three turns, sealing up cuts of varying severity and stopping bleeding within that time. This effectively restores 10 health over three turns after it is applied. It is important to note that the salve cannot regenerate broken bones, torn tendons, lost limbs, or ligaments, etc. it specializes in cuts and can be applied to electrical and fire-based burns. This can be used on allies.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Custom: Provide medical attention to someone who needs it ( 2 )
Help a local trader by transporting his wares ( 2 )
Show the people of your landmark the merits of your Clan ( 2 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/26/2018
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Additional information: RP to facilitate the claiming of a LM

~Mission Passed. You're really good at this, aren't you?

 

[Pyro NB]

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Facilitate a major peace agreement (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/27/2018
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Additional information: Part one of major LM development

~Mission Failed. This won't do, I'm afraid, though I like your continuity.

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Facilitate a major peace agreement (5)
Meet with a major faction representative (4)
Explore a landmark (1)
Lend a helping hand in one of your landmarks (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/28/2018
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Additional information: Part two of major LM development. Also, didn't want to double post so hope it's ok to post these at once.

~Mission Passed. I suppose badassery like that counts as a helping hand. I'll allow it.
EDIT: This isn't a valid clan mission though; your clan SE has to be equal to the rank of your mission, so this just counts as a regular mission.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Explore the history of something ( 3 )
Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/28/2018
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Additional information: RP to facilitate the claiming of a LM

~Mission Passed

 

[Pyro NB]

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Facilitate a major peace agreement (5)
Meet with a major faction representative (4)
Convince a criminal to confess (3)
Explore a landmark (1)
Lend a helping hand in one of your landmarks (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/29/2018
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Additional information: Part three of major LM development

~Mission Passed. This doesn't work as a clan mission though.

 

[Goetia]

Players involved: Goetia
Mission Rank: D (1)
Story elements chosen:

⇒ Do some moderate meditation to improve focus (1)
⇒ Set up camp (1)
⇒ Gather resources from the land (1)
⇒ Do a good deed (1)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 31/5/2018
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Additional information: N/A

~Mission Passed

 

[Xicer]

Players involved: Xicer
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Explore an abandoned site (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/31/2018
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~Mission Passed. Look at you, spending the whole time exploring. Kudos.

 

[Ryóma]

Players involved: Ushiro & Ryóma
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Lend a helping hand in one of your landmarks (1)
Finish a chore using Ninjutsu (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29/5 - 1/6 GMT+10
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Additional information: This was our first clan mission and it was pretty fun!

~Mission Passed. Good job for your first mission. You've also won an artifact, only one though, so it's up to you who gets it:

(Hanuri Sensō Cheisā Kutsu) – Hangurian War Chaser’s Shoes

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Type: Artifact
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A pair of worn shoes recovered from the Ruins of Chungsu and sold on the Ninja World Marketplace after being refurbished. These shoes augment the user’s travel speed in the Ninja World, reducing their travel time by 5 minutes. The shoe’s bonus to travel time cannot stack with other items equipped on the user’s person that also reduce travel time in the Ninja World; meaning two pairs of shoes, or an item like it, would not additively reduce the user’s travel time. However, the bonus from the shoes can be stacked with bonuses granted to specific landmarks, like a road or bridge. This bonus can also be stacked with consumable items, like the Runner’s Liquid Courage, to further reduce travel time.

 

[Zatanna]

Players involved: Zatanna
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Convince a criminal to confess
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 1 of June/ 2nd of June
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~Mission Failed. My problem, as usual, is your one storyboard element, which you do not seem to spend a lot of time on. I can see how your evidence gathering is what chiefly sets the scene for your actual talk with this kid, but you're not spending any time actually convincing him to confess, in whatever sense. You could and should have added a SE about some sort of investigation being done, or something like that.

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Players involved: Lord of Kaos, Daemon, Mellow, Punk Hazard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: ¤ Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan ( A rank )
¤ Capture an important target ( A )
¤ Sacrifice someone for the mission ( A )

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 04/48/2018 - 06/02/2018
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~Mission Failed. So, again, people are just trying out group missions and they'll quickly adapt, but there are some problems here. You picked your storyboard elements and both Akujin and Sasori stick to those, but the way you've structured the mission makes it so that neither Eraserhead nor Dio participate in these SE's in any meaningful way. The former arrives in time to listen to some planning and the latter does not arrive until the end. You could have done the group mission separately, I suppose, but that would still require Dio and Eraserhead to do things more closely intertwined with the SE's. Fine writing though. You guys will catch on quickly.

 

[Vegeta]

Players involved: Shady Doctor, King Crimson
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Establish control over a hostile area (5)
Destroy a large group or settlement (5)
Defend against or attack another group (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05-20-2018-06-2-2018
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~Mission Failed. I'm sorry, but I can't find heads or tails in this.

This mission was a mess, handled poorly by all parties involved; for this reason, I'm agreeing with ZK's judgement on this mission. The issues with this mission begin when its flow was interrupted. And while that is not a reason to fail a mission (missions can be interrupted, and can even become more interesting because of this), the way the fights were handled during the mission is the reason I find this a failure. I found multiple instances of posts being ignored and an accusation of metagaming (which on its surface I found had merit). This is an S-Ranked mission, which necessitates it be judged with the highest standards given that it has the highest potential for reward (S-Rank artifact, Kumi, and Ryo). So overall, at best, I found it to be very questionable execution. When things like metagaming and posts being ignored come to the surface like this, its best to get a third party to clear it up. And in the case of this mission, it just turned it into a mess.

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: B rank
Story elements chosen: Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6/6/2018
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Additional information: Used my Self Fueling Paper jutsu and a mix of Passive Paper Manipulation. Put a 10 hours alter pic so i wouldn't have to multiple post all over.

~Mission Failed. I’m afraid this won’t do. I understand your practical approach to the storyboard element, but for this to count as a mission you have to wrap it up in a little more story. To do that I would suggest adding more SE’s or, if you really want to go all out with the preparation, then take the time and really talk about the process and the results. And if you want your actions reflected in the landmark description then submit it.

 

[Geezus]

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

[FONT=&quot]Explore a landmark. (1)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Run an errand for someone. (1)[/FONT]
Custom Storyboard: Use a artifact* (1)

*Requires a previously obtained artifact.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/06/2018
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~Mission Passed. You’re really good with structure, aren’t you? Pretty much not a wasted word in here. Oh, and nice use of a custom storyboard element.

 

[Priest]

Players involved: Priest
Mission Rank: D/C
Story elements chosen:
- Explore a landmark(1)
- Defend yourself from wild beasts(2)
- Finish a chore using Ninjutsu(1)
- Set up camp(1)
- Set up a secure camp(2)
- Build something for the Clan(1)
- Do some moderate meditation to improve focus(1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 09/06 - 2018
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~Mission Failed. This was a close one for me. You’re talking about the storyboard elements, yes, but with only a sentence or two at times. The narrative isn’t bad it’s just superficial; you build a fortress, you fight black wolves. You talk about exciting stuff, but you just don’t talk about it enough. Too many storyboard elements, but not enough time spent on each. Adding more of them allows you to talk about other things, but if you only mention them in passing then you’re really just subtracting from the overall story. I hope you see this as an encouragement to tell more of your story.

 

[Xicer]

Players involved: Xicer
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: - Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/02/18 - 06/09/18
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Additional information: I opted to take this mission instead of the one I asked ZK permission for, we decided to go a different route with the RP to save time. I felt this fight satisfied the conditions for the mission because Howard is two ranks above me, being Kage compared to my S-Class

~Mission Failed. Battles have their own separate rewards.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Defend against or attack another group ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
06-02-2018
06-09-2018
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~Mission Failed. Battles have their own separate rewards.

 

[Skaaar]

Player involved: Skaaar
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
* Help a local trader by transporting his wares (2)
* Defend your employer from bandits (3)
* Do a good deed (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12th, June 2018
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~Mission Passed. There’s some overlap between the storyboard elements, but I think the final result is good. This is a C-rank though.

 

[Bloo]

Players involved: Bloo
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Explore a landmark (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6/13/18
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~Mission Passed. You are now an indentured servant. Congratulations.