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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: - Set up a secure camp (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/17/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-2#post-21951674
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Skarlet is my new NW bio

Mission Failed. Too little effort, and work. This may have passed as a D-rank e.g: Set up a Camp.

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Players involved: The Pervy Sage + Corazon
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

- Spy on an important target and remain undetected

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 18/07/19
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Additional information: The story is consecutive from link one in the same thread. This is a set up for a full story to come for us to build on of an npc faction/factions.

Mission Failed. Even with it being a group mission you need to put in A-rank effort each or whatever the rank for the mission is. This feels like it falls short of that requirement, with the back and forth between the two participants being too short, summarized, and indirect. The Pervy Sage carries this mission for most of it, but it needed a bit more from both parties to pass.

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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Survive a near death experience
  • Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: (07/01/2019 - Start) | (07/19/2019 - End)
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3 4
Additional information: I did this shit on my phone and deserve a medal/cask on my right thumb..

Mission Passed. Since you started it long before ( 7/1/2019 ) the beginning of Arc 10: A New Humanity ( 7/19/2019 ) I'm not awarding the 20% buff for this. Also as a suggestion watch the unneeded intros though, setting up a mission can sometimes lead to failure if it goes on too long and takes up too much of the mission itself.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

Deal with a traumatic event from your past ( 3 )
Choose between what is right and what is easy ( 3 )

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/17/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: This took place before the new arc so shouldn't receive the extra kumi if it passes.
 

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Convert a destroyed landmark into something usable ( 3 )
  • Help put a part of the Clan’s past behind it ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/24/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: First mission of the new arc. Payout should be 1200 if I pass it.
 

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Get a construction crew to build a lab (2)

- Assemble a crew to help run the lab (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/24/2019
Relevant mission links: Additional Information: lab creation will be another mission

Mission Passed. For the lower-ranked ones it seems like your effort slows slightly. This one hovered around enough, and too little but more on the side of enough. Watch falling into the mentality of "going through the motions" especially with the low ranking missions. 450 for the mission, 90 for the arc buff, 45 for the Colonial Income.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Explore an abandoned site ( 2 )
  • Deal with a traumatic event from your past ( 3 )
  • Clean up any remaining Sea of Life ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/24/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Payout should be 780 kumi if I pass because of the 20% buff.
 

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Take responsibility for your actions ( 3 )
  • Heal the dying child ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/24/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: 780 kumi payout if passed.
 

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Raise the morale of your village ( 3 )
  • Save several people from the rubble of collapsed houses ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/24/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: 1200 payout if passed. Clones putting in work after an earthquake.
 

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
-Meet with a major faction representative
-Deal with a problem in a tactical manner, instead of through direct confrontation
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/25/19
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: Got permission to use the Colonel Income from Howard boosting it by 30%.

Mission Passed. The mission had decent length and effort, my only suggestion is being more clear, clean and thought out but in the end, you accomplished your elements with enough focus on each of them. So, 1000 kumi from the mission itself, 200 from the 20% arc increase and 100 from the 10% Colonial Income.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Scam people for profit ( 2 )
  • Ease the fears of the local population ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/17/2019 - 07/25/2019
Relevant mission links: First Second
Additional information: Not sure if there's any bonus since it was started before arc 10. The bulk of it was done within the new arc, if that matters at all.

Mission Passed. Since it started before the arc you do not receive the bonus.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
  • Custom Mission: Rebuild the Lands of Tsumigakure
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/27/19 - 7/29/19
Relevant mission links: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5
Additional information: Rebuilding of Two landmarks in Tsumi. Got permission to use the Colonel Income from Howard boosting it by 30%.

Mission Passed. 450 payout from the mission itself, 90 from the 20% increase for the arc A New Humanity and finally 45 from the 10% colonial income increase. A wood biography is really useful for missions and you rp'ed alongside others which is a plus. Nice work.

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Save some residents of your landmark from a large disaster (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 30/07/19
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: Used a custom clan element

Mission Passed.

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Korra.

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: - Create a secret lab underneath a hospital to use the hospital as a cover up (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/2/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-3#post-21954896
Additional Information:
My new lab and will post changes to the landmark after I make a few more changes later on. Also custom story I used before

Mission Passed. Barely, you need to cut back on the usage of NPCs to accomplish goals in the future. It was surface level this time, and you only had them do menial tasks but the focus should be almost completely placed upon your character. The heaviest part should fall upon your biography which it did in this case but this is a warning for the future. If too much effort slips from your grasp and is placed upon random NPCs you will most definitely fail the mission. 1000 kumi for the mission, 200 for the arc buff and 100 from Colonial Income.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: - Gather DNA/Test Material to use (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/4-8/7 2019
Relevant mission links: Additional Information: Using the DNA for Tailed Beast pills for another mission

Mission Failed. This one just doesn't have enough effort to pass as a C-rank. It was a D-rank at best.

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • - Create and test a new Med Pill (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/11/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-3#post-21955957
Additional information: Starting my experimenting missions, DNA was obtained from a previous mission

Mission Passed. Another close one, you'll need to ramp up the danger for an S rank, and even other A ranks with less effort. This element would have fit better as a B-rank mission imho. This is because there wasn't much intrinsic danger to creation and experimentation. There was enough detail and effort placed upon the element, but in the future make A-rank and higher elements more dangerous in scale. Anyway, 1000 for the mission, 200 for the 20% arc buff and 100 from the Colonial Income.


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Story elements chosen: Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Heal those who sustained moderate to serious injuries during the earthquake (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/08/19
Relevant mission links: [x]
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Mission Passed. Apologies got distracted with Classic WoW. You get the 20% buff and all that. As a side note you can do multiple missions while waiting for yours to be checked. In case you were waiting on checks to continue your story. Feel free to submit multiple and rp at your pace.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Deal with a traumatic event from your past
  • Defend your employer from bandits
  • Infiltrate an enemy's base
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: (08/19/2019 - Start) | (08/19/2019 - End)
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: Again.. Whales..

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Explore the history of something
  • Explore a dangerous site
  • Steal an important document
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: (08/19/2019 - Start) | (08/19/2019 - End)
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: Again.. Whales..

Mission Passed. Just a structural suggestion, breaking it up makes it easier to read.

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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: - Perform an Upgrade for Custom Tech (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/22/2019
Relevant mission links: Additional Information: Tech got an update so making it in the NW to match

Mission Passed. A little close to failure but due to the really low rank it was nearly impossible to fail.

20% extra from arc boost ( 50 kumi ) then 10% extra from Colonial Income ( 25 ).

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