Storyboard Mission Submission
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Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Set up camp
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21945830
Additional Information: Spawning in the NW first mission.
Mission Passed. Obviously lol. Though, I do suggest that you don't undersell your effort. This could have easily been a higher rank. For example, "Set up a secure camp ( 2 )" to make this a C rank. You are also free to use custom elements of your own creation as long as they have a tangible goal you can accomplish. Anyway excellent first go at it.
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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Set up camp
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21945830
Additional Information: Spawning in the NW first mission.
Mission Passed. Obviously lol. Though, I do suggest that you don't undersell your effort. This could have easily been a higher rank. For example, "Set up a secure camp ( 2 )" to make this a C rank. You are also free to use custom elements of your own creation as long as they have a tangible goal you can accomplish. Anyway excellent first go at it.
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Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Finish a chore using Ninjutsu
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21945849
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Mission Passed. You also win a D-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.
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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Finish a chore using Ninjutsu
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21945849
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Mission Passed. You also win a D-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.
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Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Take part in a physical trial
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946068
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Mission Passed. Good story building so far. Liking it.
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Take part in a physical trial
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946068
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Mission Passed. Good story building so far. Liking it.
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Players involved: ZK
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Survive the encounter with Acnologia...
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/12/18 - 04/01/19
Relevant mission links: #1 / #2 / #3 / #4 / #5 / #6 /
Additional information: It should be noted that 'survive' in this context does not simply refer to not dying, but also to analyzing and fighting Acnologia and the related processes hereof.
Mission Passed. Interesting way to do the mission. Even with it being like 6 months old, it was a change of pace from the usual.
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Survive the encounter with Acnologia...
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/12/18 - 04/01/19
Relevant mission links: #1 / #2 / #3 / #4 / #5 / #6 /
Additional information: It should be noted that 'survive' in this context does not simply refer to not dying, but also to analyzing and fighting Acnologia and the related processes hereof.
Mission Passed. Interesting way to do the mission. Even with it being like 6 months old, it was a change of pace from the usual.
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Howard
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Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: I convinced some religious refugees to find asylum in the Lost Shores instead of heading west to the mainland having them ally with Tsumigakure in the process. This is meant as a way to begin drawing Tobusekai into the aid of Tsumigakure and to create a safe-haven in the Lost Shores that the people can flock to for protection separate from the Witchwood company and those that hide behind the Last Bastion.
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Convince a neutral party to fight with you ( 3 )
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: I convinced some religious refugees to find asylum in the Lost Shores instead of heading west to the mainland having them ally with Tsumigakure in the process. This is meant as a way to begin drawing Tobusekai into the aid of Tsumigakure and to create a safe-haven in the Lost Shores that the people can flock to for protection separate from the Witchwood company and those that hide behind the Last Bastion.
Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Defend yourself from wild beasts
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946109
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Defend yourself from wild beasts
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29th June 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946109
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Mission Passed. Just as a heads up for higher ranked single element missions, you may want to trim out a bit of the offtopic roleplay or in contrast, add in additional elements to open you up for other tasks. Additionally, if you haven't already the Storyboard Mission Criteria is a good resource for reasoning out what each rank of a mission will require, and the different expectations between a single and a multi-element mission. Keep in mind, you're doing fine from what I've seen so far, it's just a suggestion for the future.
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Players involved: Keikou
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
-fight an enemy stronger than yourself
-save a large community from danger
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20th June 2019/30th June
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-blood-fields-217.768211/post-21944272
Additional Information:
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
-fight an enemy stronger than yourself
-save a large community from danger
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20th June 2019/30th June
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-blood-fields-217.768211/post-21944272
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Mission Passed. I'm being a bit lenient and I'm going to use this as a chance to talk about tone and danger, especially for S ranks. Primarily for the elements "Fight an individual of comparable strength" "Fight an enemy stronger than yourself" and "Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself." If your bio's opponent is comparable, there should be a back and forth between you and them but ultimately you're both basically equals. If they're stronger than you, they should be able to push you around, and you should be defending trying to find your opening and finally, if they're much stronger than your bio, you should be having serious trouble fighting them making it almost impossible to win. There should be a tangible scale in difficulty and you shouldn't be steamrolling your opponent if they're stronger than you. You are always in control of the scenario, so controlling the tone of the battle is important. The reason I'm passing this is because your main element was "Save a large community from danger" which you sufficiently complete.
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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3
Additional information: Whales.
Mission Passed. Had a lot of setup, almost too much but the effort for the rest of the mission was more than enough.
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Spy on an important target and remain undetecte
- Fight an enemy stronger than yourself
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3
Additional information: Whales.
Mission Passed. Had a lot of setup, almost too much but the effort for the rest of the mission was more than enough.
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Players involved: The pervy sage
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946477
Additional information: Na
Mission Passed.
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Explore a dangerous site
- Investigate the history of a landmark
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21946477
Additional information: Na
Mission Passed.
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Howard
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Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Prepping for the Mother Cult. Probably pissed them off by now.
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks ( 3 )
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Prepping for the Mother Cult. Probably pissed them off by now.
Howard
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Korra.
Sage of Snakes
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Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Your mission is a simple one, though may be dangerous. Claim land in Tobusekai. By any means necessary. Spread the name of Tsumigakure, and take what belongs to us. To pass this mission you will need to face some form of violent resistance be it bandits, undead, or other beasts. You are to clear out a landmark and claim it for Tsumigakure.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6/29/ 2019 - 76/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-lost-shores-239.768233/page-2#post-21946156
https://animebase.me/threads/heroes-rest-228.768222/#post-21947545
https://animebase.me/threads/martok-226.768220/#post-21948096
Additional information: As said to me by Howard, this is a village mission as the adm bug won't let me have access to the village sub forum so I can not post it on there.
Mission Failed. There was nowhere near enough for this. It was an A-rank with a specific goal, additionally, the parameters were set up in the mission itself. With it being an A rank it should have come off as your biography performing a laborious or arduous adventure to completion. This falls short of that by a lot. The highest effort I could say was put into this was D-rank.
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Your mission is a simple one, though may be dangerous. Claim land in Tobusekai. By any means necessary. Spread the name of Tsumigakure, and take what belongs to us. To pass this mission you will need to face some form of violent resistance be it bandits, undead, or other beasts. You are to clear out a landmark and claim it for Tsumigakure.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 6/29/ 2019 - 76/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-lost-shores-239.768233/page-2#post-21946156
https://animebase.me/threads/heroes-rest-228.768222/#post-21947545
https://animebase.me/threads/martok-226.768220/#post-21948096
Additional information: As said to me by Howard, this is a village mission as the adm bug won't let me have access to the village sub forum so I can not post it on there.
Mission Failed. There was nowhere near enough for this. It was an A-rank with a specific goal, additionally, the parameters were set up in the mission itself. With it being an A rank it should have come off as your biography performing a laborious or arduous adventure to completion. This falls short of that by a lot. The highest effort I could say was put into this was D-rank.
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Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Explore a dangerous site.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7th July 2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21948272
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Defend yourself from wild beasts
Mission Passed.
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Explore a dangerous site.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7th July 2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21948272
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Defend yourself from wild beasts
Mission Passed.
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Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8th July 2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21949051
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Defend yourself from wild beasts
Explore a dangerous site
Mission Passed.
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8th July 2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21949051
Additional Information:
Setting up Camp
Eating a Meal
Trial of Strength
Defend yourself from wild beasts
Explore a dangerous site
Mission Passed.
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Howard
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Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: Bit repetitive, but trying to prep some of the landmarks to be defendable.
I split it up into three smaller posts to have Korra help me with it.
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks ( 3 )
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: Bit repetitive, but trying to prep some of the landmarks to be defendable.
I split it up into three smaller posts to have Korra help me with it.
Sauron
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Players involved: Sauron
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21950977
Additional Information:
Mission Set Prologue
Mission Passed.
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
- Guard someone very important (S Rank)
- Safely transport highly classified information (S Rank)
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ice-falls-186.756201/post-21950977
Additional Information:
Mission Set Prologue
Mission Passed.
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Korra.
Sage of Snakes
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Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: - Preserve your research (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/16/2019
Relevant mission links: Additional Information: Switching bios and my new bio will have the two summons so they will continue their stories
Mission Failed. There wasn't enough effort and work for a C-rank mission. Additionally, you messed up your Storyboard Elements. When you declared the mission you used "Set up a secure camp." When you submitted it you submitted it as "Preserve your research."
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: - Preserve your research (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/16/2019
Relevant mission links: Additional Information: Switching bios and my new bio will have the two summons so they will continue their stories
Mission Failed. There wasn't enough effort and work for a C-rank mission. Additionally, you messed up your Storyboard Elements. When you declared the mission you used "Set up a secure camp." When you submitted it you submitted it as "Preserve your research."
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Players involved: Hokusai
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Relevant mission links:
Part1: https://animebase.me/threads/avalon-205.768201/post-21951230
Part2: https://animebase.me/threads/sanctuary-of-the-moon-248.768242/post-21951386
Additional Information:
Mission Passed.
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Survive a near death experience (S)
- Rescue a hostage from enemies (C)
- Face of against Mother Cult Members (B)
Relevant mission links:
Part1: https://animebase.me/threads/avalon-205.768201/post-21951230
Part2: https://animebase.me/threads/sanctuary-of-the-moon-248.768242/post-21951386
Additional Information:
Mission Passed.
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