Storyboard Mission Submission

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Players Involved: Anbu Kirito
Mission Rank: 5 = S
Date of Start and Completion: December 15th, 2019.
Storyboard Elements Chosen:

  • Fight off an adversary from the past who is much stronger than you. (5)
Relevant Links: The Older Brother
Additional Information:
A mix between character building surrounding Azuma's past after he was adopted, and the hopefully striking introduction of one of his primary character antagonists; Segamu.

Mission Passed. Now I know what it's like to have to read my long-ass missions.

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Mission rank: C, A, and S
Date of start and completion: December 15 2019
Storyboard elements chosen:

  • Trail an individual without being detected
  • Fight an enemy stronger than yourself
  • Assasinate the enemy commander
Relevant links: Adventure On Yume Island
Additional information: I may have put more effort into story then actual mission. So yeah sorry for that. Also I plan to bring that Uchiha back.


Mission Passed. Again, mark your missions and average them. 2 + 4 + 5 = 11 / 3 = 3.6 rounded to 4.

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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Win a fight without your ninjutsu(5)
  • Locate and annihilate a major enemy base(Custom 5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: (16/10/2019 - Start) | (16/10/2019 - End)
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. Good use of items, weapons and kenjutsu to accomplish your goal.

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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Traverse into the unknown and encounter a great threat(Custom 5)
  • Survive a near-death situation(5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: (20/10/2019 - Start) | (20/10/2019 - End)
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Learn about the location and all knowledge this place has to offer
- Save princess from bandit attack. There are 12 bandits, all tough and gritty.

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Jan 8 - 8
Relevant mission links: Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. The way you have this structured is weird. You can't start another mission until your original one is finished. I read ahead and see you have an "Overarching Mission." Having an arc goal is a good thing, as it can keep you productive but the way you're going about it probably won't pan out properly since you can't be doing multiple missions at the same time the way you are atm. I'd suggest breaking away from the "Overarching Mission" aspect you're doing and in the future move from one mission to the next. You can keep a narrative flow going and are able to do other missions with Shadow Clones if you plan to put in a lot of work.

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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

- Learn about the location and all knowledge this place has to offer

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Jan 8 - 8
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/iwabiro-013.755830/post-21975839
Additional information: N / A

Mission Passed. In the future you could just use the "explore a landmark" element.

I'm going to disregard the "Overarching Mission" for simplicities sake.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

- Learn about the location and all knowledge this place has to offer
- Defeat Mother Fish

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Jan 8 - 8
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/shinramoto-012.755829/post-21975856
Additional information: N / A

Mission Passed. In the future always label your elements with their appropriate ranks. EG:

- Learn about the location and all knowledge this place has to offer ( 1 )
- Defeat Mother Fish ( 4 )

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Sign a Legendary Contract (4)
- Come in contact with an alien species and survive (4)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 1/20/2020-1/20/2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-3#post-21977418
Additional information: my third contract since Sage can have 3. Will be using these for a lot of RP

Mission Passed. I kind of didn't expect this to work as an A-rank tbh, it does, but barely. I feel it would have been better as a B-rank in my personal opinion. However, you put in enough effort for an A-rank and there was some danger to it. Watch using NPCs a lot other than that you pretty much know what you're doing. No bonus though because it doesn't follow the arc parameters to gain the bonus.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Face the consequences of your actions (2) - Custom.

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Jan 21 - 21
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. The storyboard element at the end threw me off, it's easier if you keep it at the top. It gives me an idea of what I'm looking for in the mission. Other than that it was a good story and you followed through with the element having your biography face harsh consequences for their actions. In this case exile. I'm giving you the 10% arc bonus because this element revolves around the fallout and consequences brought upon you by the last arc.

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Players involved: Skorm, all_red, Howard, Paperboikonan
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
*Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan
*Meet with a major faction representative
*Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your village

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
(19/1/2020 - Start) | (19/1/2020- End)
Relevant mission links: 1 2 3 4 5
Additional information: N/A

Mission Declined. Lolno. Don't try to pull that again. I was literally there for the roleplay and I can see edited history.

I suggest you fully read the Storyboard Mission post, specifically the following.

※Declaring Your Mission: Roleplayers do not have to do anything in particular to create, accept, or begin a mission. This gives significant freedom to roleplayers in initiating a mission which they can acquire from a group of other roleplayers, themselves, a friend, or an NPC. The story is entirely up to the player, and it is theirs to tell. The only requirement is that the player clearly indicates in the post in the Ninja World when they begin their mission. This is done by including the selected storyboard elements and the self-written overall details of the mission in a note at the top of it. You cannot edit a mission into an old post in the Ninja World. Players can utilize NPCs in their missions freely, even if it is not a story element requirement. This NPC cannot engage in battle and is simply there for story purposes.
Additionally read through,
Storyboard Missions: The Warring States Era will introduce Storyboard Missions, allowing roleplayers to create their own missions through a various story elements and tailor their own story out of them. Completing these missions and satisfying their objectives will award players with an amount of Kumi depending on the difficulty of the mission. If missions aren't fully completed, such as lacking the storyboard requirement, or are carried out in negative ways, such as metagaming, powerplaying, godmodding, etc, one is subject to gaining half or less Kumi for completion and in the case of metagaming, etc, one may potentially lose Kumi.
I'm not punishing you this time because it's literally the first time someone has tried to do it.

But if I catch anyone doing it again, I'll take away the mission value in kumi from them.

Also, I did my own thing/mission so I don't know why you counted me in your mission.

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Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Hand out gifts, trinkets, toys, candy or other memorabilia that could ease tensions ( 1 )
  • Tell the story of the Fallen Shogun and the heroes who slew him to a crowd ( 1 )
  • Tell the story of the Mother of Beasts and her ultimate defeat to a crowd ( 2 )
  • Take part in local festivities or a cultural ritual ( 1 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/07/2020
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Can just count it like a normal mission. It has elements from the event, but eh. 250 payout if passed.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Meet with a major faction representative ( 4 )
  • Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your village ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/19/2020
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: I spoke to another clan leader about their clan joining my village, he ultimately refused but I still did the elements I set out to. This clan leader was the major faction representative from the first element. I also spoke on behalf of my village as a liaison, since I'm the Tsumikage of the village and was making an official proposal to join. It should satisfy the elements.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Meet with a major faction representative ( 4 )
  • Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your Clan ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/22/2020 - 01/23/2020
Relevant mission links: [Raitoninguroddobare]
Additional information: I spoke with the Tsunikage, the leader of the Village Hidden in Sin about my clan joining his village. We ultimately refused but the Story Board Elements are still satisfied. Since the Tsumikage was the major faction representative from the first element. I also spoke on behalf of my clan on refusing an official proposal to join The Village of Sin.

Mission Passed. This was one that was teetering on the edge between a pass and a fail. I suggest being just a bit more detailed in the future, especially for A-rank and S-rank. Especially so for S-rank. This made the cut off for a pass because I could clearly see you playing your biography and working through the elements as it happened and I liked the way you roleplayed through it keeping your biographies resolve and principles. However, as I said to a degree it almost lacked the detail usually associated with A-rank missions. I understand I was a bit forceful in trying to take hold the narrative and I can see why your biography took a more passive, yet effective stance on his beliefs. Again that's why I'm passing it. Ah before I forget, link all the posts individually, it makes it just the tiniest bit easier to read through and follow along.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: (2) - Custom
1. Find your Clan leader
2. Converse of future plans
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20200122/20200123
Relevant mission links: Single Page
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. In the future link all the posts individually. Hmm, this one had a few problems, but the level of detail was sufficient. First I feel like the storyboard elements were overstated, they felt more like D-rank elements. Finding your Clan leader was as easy as Exploring a landmark which is a D-rank mission, then Conversing on future plans was as easy as something like Perform administrative duties another D-rank element. Though I admit there was enough work here for a C-rank but don't always be overestimating the difficulty of the elements. It could lead to failures in the future more so for B-S ranks.

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Story elements chosen:

- Steal an important document - B rank
- Infiltrate an enemy's base - B rank

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 31/01/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/jarteeg-003.755819/post-21978985
Additional information: Just tryna find my boy

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: (4) - Custom
  • Purge a landmark of sinister forces [Custom]
  • Claim a landmark [Custom]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/02/2020
Relevant mission links: †
Additional information:
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Mission Passed.

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