Life in Konoha after the War

[Yanto]

Wow..
Nice..Very well written

 

[Sophie Ezra]

Wow..
Nice..Very well written

thank you for your comment

 

[Vayne]

nice this is very nice but why don't u make them as separate threads

 

[sasukeultimateninja]

thank you for your comment

Dude please teach me how to create awesome stories like you.i'm desperate

 

[Sophie Ezra]

nice this is very nice but why don't u make them as separate threads

i just put them in one but i put the six chapter seperate because i decided to not make it any longer

Dude please teach me how to create awesome stories like you.i'm desperate

thanks for the Compliment we will see what happens you know my grammer was not perfect but if you want to i can try and see how i go not that i know where to start i just write what comes to mind and edit it if it does not sound right

 

[basegirl]

this is great i love it!

 

[Sophie Ezra]

this is great i love it!

Thank you i am happy you liked it, and i thank everyone else for there nice Comments as well

 

[Maina Deah]

Its really long since I've read from ch. 1-5 :ghehe: but its a nice story =D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I thought you thought up an interesting plot for your story. I loved how you incorporated Sasuke let alone a changed Sasuke. He is my favorite character thus any story involving him excites me ^.^ I liked how your fanfic depicted Kishimoto's characters to be more good-hearted therefore I suppose the cycle of hatred had begun to break post Fourth Shinobi War. Its a little weird viewing the Raikage act calm and kind but that is how all the Kages should portray themselves especially after the Tsuchikage's quote in the manga.

I read member's posts and they more or less brought up your grammar/spelling but what I would propose for future purposes is to check your work several times if needed before posting to ensure a more successful finished product. Aside that keep up the good work and I look forward to reading chapter six.

I have a question if your don't mind-is English your mother's tongue?

 

[Sophie Ezra]

I thought you thought up an interesting plot for your story. I loved how you incorporated Sasuke let alone a changed Sasuke. He is my favorite character thus any story involving him excites me ^.^ I liked how your fanfic depicted Kishimoto's characters to be more good-hearted therefore I suppose the cycle of hatred had begun to break post Fourth Shinobi War. Its a little weird viewing the Raikage act calm and kind but that is how all the Kages should portray themselves especially after the Tsuchikage's quote in the manga.

I read member's posts and they more or less brought up your grammar/spelling but what I would propose for future purposes is to check your work several times if needed before posting to ensure a more successful finished product. Aside that keep up the good work and I look forward to reading chapter six.

I have a question if your don't mind-is English your mother's tongue?

thank you for your comment & Advice i am happy you enjoyed my fan fic and yes english is my mother touge language

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

thank you for your comment & Advice i am happy you enjoyed my fan fic and yes english is my mother touge language

Your welcome-yes just take it slow, observe as your write and you'll more accustomed to writing better as you progress

I forgot to add about the couplings. I thought NarutoxHinata was inevitable to Kishi's standards thus that was fine. I didn't have a problem with any couples except for InoxChoji/ShikmaruxTemari as I love Ino and Shikamaru is a character I like. I personally would have preferred InoxSai/ShikamaruxShiho xd I loved however, what you did with SasukexSakura/NejixTenten-I thought that was perfect!

 

[Infinite Mizu]

Nice i enjoyed this

 

[Sophie Ezra]

Nice i enjoyed this

i am happy you enjoyed it

 

[tom94]

Really great story, going to read the other 2 now Hope they are as good as the others!

 

[ItachiG]

Very interesting!!!

i give you 10 out of 10 for imagination, alot of grammer errors but the whole idea to the story is really good. The only thing i can say is that we really dont know if half of these characters in your story are gonna survive in the war. Other than that, i love it!! Keep it up and continue writting chapters

 

[Sophie Ezra]

Very interesting!!!

i give you 10 out of 10 for imagination, alot of grammer errors but the whole idea to the story is really good. The only thing i can say is that we really dont know if half of these characters in your story are gonna survive in the war. Other than that, i love it!! Keep it up and continue writting chapters

thank you

yeah i know who knows what will happen but this is just a fan fic i guess its my version of what i hope happens lol

 

[Flash]

Nice story.....but I don't like the idea of everyone calling him Hokage 'sama' i.e. his close friends
N Naruto calling Kakashi directly by his name.....I mean even Minato called jiraya...'Sensei' after he became the kage

 

[Sophie Ezra]

Nice story.....but I don't like the idea of everyone calling him Hokage 'sama' i.e. his close friends
N Naruto calling Kakashi directly by his name.....I mean even Minato called jiraya...'Sensei' after he became the kage

i am glad you like the story & well its just the way i did it, it is alittle wired for his friends to have to call him that is true but its just how i decided to have it.

 

[The Demonic Kazekage]

congrats on the marriage

 

[Sophie Ezra]

congrats on the marriage

thank you