Life in Konoha after the War

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Life in Konoha after the War

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Chapter 1

The is set quite a few years after the 4th great ninja war

The 5th Hokage Lady Tsunade was in the Hokage mansion in the office she had been the one in charge for quite a long time now she was remembering the reason why she became the Hokage she was sipping her sake and while she was sitting in her chair, she then stood up and decided to look out the window and the sun was rising she thought to herself that it was a nice sunset. she was also thinking about what was happening today as well as thinking about Jiraiya & the Third Hokage as well as what it took to attain the peace they have today. she was also gonna be handing over her job to another outstanding Ninja because it was time for her to retire she was thinking about the decision that the elders had made about who was gonna be taking over but she was sure it was the right choice, then her thinking was interrupted by the sudden footsteps approaching her office that’s when she heard

“knock knock”

The door then opened; giving Tsunade the sight of Shizune with a pile of paper work she was not too happy about it!

Tsunade: So is everything set for the Ceremony & Shizune, I see you have more paper work for me I hope this is the last of it

Shizune: Yes, the place is all set for the announcement that will be made later on this morning! & yes this is the last of the paper work you will ever have to take care of before the new Hokage takes over However; the two Elders want to discuss things with the chosen Ninja that will be taking over the Hokage position

Tsunade: well you can tell the two oldies to calm down will you he will take care of important business duties later! Besides, I know where he would right at this point in time; he has definitely woken up bright and early today that is for sure. His dream is finally going to be coming true.

Kakashi: yes that’s for sure I was told by the elders to bring him to see them but he was not home he must be at one his favourite places

Tsunade: don’t you know how to knock Kakashi and I see you have a few followers that are also up early

Kakashi: sorry Lady Hokage and oh hello there Sakura and Shikamaru

Tsunade: well there no need to worry they will show up they would not want to miss their own induction ceremony, may I ask why you two are here

Sakura: hi Kakashi Sensei, well the elders told us you wanted to see us Lady Tsunade

Shikamaru: yeah what she said

Kakashi: your right he would not let anything stand in the way he has worked way too hard to do that now

Tsunade: ah yes I know why you two were sent here the Elders told me to appoint the two new advisers for the new Hokage to be I chose you two you will be perfect for the job I reckon

Sakura & Shikamaru: who is the new Hokage

Tsunade: never you mind you will just have to wait like everyone else

Sakura & Shikamaru: no fair but I guess we have no choice but to wait

Shizune: um I am really sorry to have to interrupt everyone My Lady but I do actually need to know where the person you and Kakashi are talking about is otherwise the elders won’t be too happy, he/she has to know a few things

Tsunade: just let it go Shizune please I am quite sure he/she is digging into the best tasting food around since they were born

Kakashi: don’t forget he/she will probably be paying his tribute to the special place in the village.

Shizune: okay then I can see I am deffinately not gonna win with you two hiding their location don’t blame me if the elders come here so they can force you to tell them where he is.

Tsunade: I will support him because of the wish of my brother Nawaki & the love of my life Dan the wishes of those two are finally coming true

Kakashi: well it is good when wishes come true my Lady

Tsunade: what is that suppose to mean now Kakashi

Kakashi: nothing my lady any way now that you are stepping down you have you will have less work, it does seem like that is what you are looking forward to right

Tsunade: I don’t know what you mean by that I loved my job; you have always had a keen sense of humour Kakashi.

Sakura & Shikamaru: well we better go prepare the last few things we will see you all at the ceremony

Tsunade: Okay then you two I will catch you two later on at the ceremony

Tsunade was grinning while appreciating her sake then she went back to being in deep thought while she was looking out the window again

Meanwhile in the village a very drowsy Teuchi was preparing some ramen that someone had been waiting months for

Teuchi: you woke up bright and early this morning Naruto Kun. you would not be nervous now would you

Naruto: I actually was before I decided to come here so is the ramen I spent a long time getting the ingredients for ready?

Teuchi: be patient now it will be ready very, very soon I am sure you can wait 5 more mins now it won’t hurt you have waited this long what’s a few mins

Naruto: your are right as always sir I am just a little anxious about today but I am happy as well

Teuchi: so how was the ramen boy

Naruto: this was definitely the best tasting ramen I have ever had.

Teuchi: so how are you coming to terms with your dream coming true

Naruto: it has not sunken in yet but I sure it will once I go visit the one spot to pay my tribute and thank all the people that help me get here

Teuchi: I see you have finished already you don’t like to waste any time do you

quite a few hours later, he had a satisfied look on his face

Naruto: here you go and thanks for the meal and I am sorry that I woke you so early this morning Teuchi.

Teuchi: never you mind about that I will take an afternoon sleep later.

Naruto: don’t you forget to come now you hear

Teuchi: I would not miss the ceremony for anything

Naruto: thanks Teuchi any way I really better go now otherwise I will be in trouble and I still have one more stop to make

In an orange flash, he completely disappeared out of sight

Teuchi: father like son I hope you’re very proud of him 4th Hokage Sama because the whole village now believes in him because of the decision that you made all those years ago.

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CHAPTER 2

Meanwhile the ANBU where patrolling around as they always do they then spotted another group of Shinobi heading towards the land of lightning, the ANBU member then called out to the group of Shinobi to identify themselves. One of the Shinobi identified themselves as ANBU from the Cloud village they then stated that there is a Possibility of a new threat and that the Raikage will contact your Hokage soon.

ANBU member: (from Konoha) thank you for informing us we will let the Hokage know to expect a letter from the Raikage

ANBU member: (from the Cloud) your welcome glad to help we are allies now after all

Meanwhile back in the Konoha village, Naruto was paying tribute to Jiraiya’s Sensei’s tomb.

Naruto: Ero-Sennin you where my Sensei but you became more like a father to me. I am finally able to make yours and my father’s visions come to pass, I am now officially one step closer to attaining the dream you thought was impossible the one you entrusted to me before your unfortunate passing. I hope I have not disappointed you in any way Sensei, My only regret is that I did not get to learn alot more from you I am sure you had alot left to teach me. from the very first time that you took me on as your student up until the day you told me that you were my godfather the discussions we had while we were on our journeys my dad was correct in saying, you where the perfect role model for me. even tho you where a little pervy and your teaching techniques may have been strange sometimes you ment well I am sure. You’re the best Sensei your wisdom and teachings guided me down the right path I don’t really know if I’ll be able to change this world Sensei but, I have never back down from a challenge because I won’t let all my hard work that I put in go to waste.

Naruto: to everyone else that contributed Nagatto you were my Sensei’s first student and you attack village but we got talking and you entrusted the future to me. Granny Chiyo you saved the Kazekage my friend you did this because you wanted do something right for the future, Dad & Mom you put the fox in me you did all this because you trusted me and because of that I am here today and I thank you because I would not have achieved what I did if you were not for all of you. I will definitely carry on your legacy, I will deffinately keep the promises I made to you all I will do whatever it takes this curse will definitely be broken it has been going on far too long.
Naruto had to close his eyes for at least five minutes to prevent the tears in his eye’s coming down his face but it did not work out they still came running down his face.

Naruto: He then opens his eyes and saw everyone that helped him achieve his dream they were smiling at him, this gave him a nice and warm feeling. He did not wish to brag about it because all of his friends helped him get here as well so he grinned at everybody and then he said…

Naruto: you can count on one thing; I will never give up...
Back at the Hokage’s Mansion, all the villagers had gathered for the induction ceremony of the new Hokage.

Sakura: whoever the elders have chosen to be the next Hokage you would think they would be here on time for their induction they should have showed up by now

Shikamaru: that is true Sakura, I am sure that there dream is coming true but maybe they have realised that this job involves hard work, they can no longer do what they want once they become Hokage so they decided not to appear until the last minute, or maybe they have realised that this job will be a total drag and they have decided not to show up.

Sakura:this is not the time to be joking around Shikamaru

Kakashi: Come on now you two, don’t be like that I sure who ever the elders have chosen will show up they would not miss their own interduction now that is for sure, he is just following in someone else’s footsteps

Shikamaru: Oh I guess you are right Kakashi, I guess it is pointless worrying about it. What did you mean by saying he is only following in some else’s footsteps

Kakashi: what do you mean, I ment nothing by it at all......
He was then interrupted

Shizune:Silence now all of you, Lady Tsunade is now going to make her speech to everyone that has attended this ceremony

Tsunade: Welcome everyone I will try to keep my speech short & sweet, since the Third’s death which was the reason I was chosen to be your Hokage even tho I was not the first choice, the elders wanted Jiraiya but Jiraiya did not want the job so I was the next choice but at first I was unsure whether I wanted to take the job but someone convinced me. Now that the 4th great Shinobi War has been over for quite some time now and while my decisions during the war may have been questionable in the end we attained peace but it was also thanks to the allied Shinobi forces. My grandfather was the first Hokage he trusted me with his jewels but they were protected by some else, my brother Nawaki and the love of my life Dan wanted to be Hokage and I met someone with the same ideals they had I hope that I did not disappoint any of you while I was your Hokage. Today I’ll finally pass the torch to the next generation hero; I now present to you the sixth Hokage…

She then felt chills throughout her body she felt emotional as well but by using her firmness, she then declared!

Tsunade: UZUMAKI NARUTO!

As soon as Tsunade said his name he appeared in a flash he had his back turned to all villagers He was wearing His orange & black coat it was hanging just above his feet. The Uzumaki sign was still present in his bright yellow hair which had grown a little bit more. His determination was clearly seen in his eyes.

Hinata: hey Naruto-kun you forgot your hat

Naruto then put on his official Hokage hat that Hinata gave him she was handling their new born son Jiraiya in her other hand and standing next to her where there other children they have 2 more sons and two daughters and they names are Yahiko who is 8 and Rin who is 7 but she will be turning 8 very soon those two will be starting at the academy, Minato their 13 year old son will be Graduating from the Academy next month along with their 12 year old daughter Kushina who will be turning 13 next week

He then smiled and looked up at all the Hokage faces and then he turned around and looked at the villagers to give his Hokage speech.

Naruto: Thank you Tsunade I will accept the position of Hokage with an open heart and I thank you and the Elders for choosing me, since the Third’s death you where chosen to be our Hokage. I just caught your speech, yes during the 4th great Shinobi War your decisions may have sometimes been questionable I am certain you inspired many Shinobi. You did not disappoint any one we all looked up to you for guidance & you believed in me and that is why I am here. Yes the first Hokage entrusted the Jewels to you, they may have been protected by someone else but you did your very best. Now you are stepping down to entrust the village to a new Hokage and that is me I will do my best to protect this village like you did.
After his speech all the villagers cheered, he once again he turned around & looked at the Monument! Of the Hokage faces Naruto then took off his hat and pointed it towards it

Naruto: You all will be astounded and amazed, believe me I will be the best Hokage; I will not disappoint you that is for sure.

He then saw the elders and a ANBU member they all went back into the mansion and went to his office.

ANBU member:there is something I have to tell you Hokage Sama

Naruto: yes what do you want to tell me?

ANBU member: I was told to tell you to expect a letter from the Raikage soon I don’t know what the letter is about tho

Naruto:thank you for informing me

After the ANBU member left the elders began talking, an hour or so later they left, then there was a knock at the door it was Sai.
:lili: thats amazing xd
 

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It was very good indeed! The story itself is gr8, but you could have spent a little more in the descriptions. That would have made a more paced reading (the dialogue has little "breaks", it seems we're in a hurry).
The Naruto's speech was very sentimental.
Could have made it look like it was someone else to become hokage, to a more surprising revelation (just too obvious it would be Naruto).

Don´t be discouraged by these comments: they are merely to let you know what you could improve in the next chapter (which I´m looking for).

Again: very good work (4/5) (18/20)
 
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It was very good indeed! The story itself is gr8, but you could have spent a little more in the descriptions. That would have made a more paced reading (the dialogue has little "breaks", it seems we're in a hurry).
The Naruto's speech was very sentimental.
Could have made it look like it was someone else to become hokage, to a more surprising revelation (just too obvious it would be Naruto).

Don´t be discouraged by these comments: they are merely to let you know what you could improve in the next chapter (which I´m looking for).

Again: very good work (4/5) (18/20)
Thank you for your Compliment
 

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:)dude you did a marvelous job.honestly i'm giving you a roound of applause.but i thought you will write that sasuke and naruto have becaome best friends again and that sasuke has decided to give a little respect to him.well at least make like sasuke was the general or the leader of the shinobi force like his dad.i will like it dearly if you say that naruto and hinata had three kids unidentical twins which is a boy and a girl and also a baby girl.and the same goes for sasuke and sakura being parents and also having the same number of kids like naruto and hinata.and oh yeah i hope there is a part where naruto's son and sasuke's daughter will have a serious crush on each other.that will be soooooo epic.
 

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:)dude you did a marvelous job.honestly i'm giving you a roound of applause.but i thought you will write that sasuke and naruto have becaome best friends again and that sasuke has decided to give a little respect to him.well at least make like sasuke was the general or the leader of the shinobi force like his dad.i will like it dearly if you say that naruto and hinata had three kids unidentical twins which is a boy and a girl and also a baby girl.and the same goes for sasuke and sakura being parents and also having the same number of kids like naruto and hinata.and oh yeah i hope there is a part where naruto's son and sasuke's daughter will have a serious crush on each other.that will be soooooo epic.
thank you and thanks for your idea
 
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