Life in Konoha after the War

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This would seem off 2 many kids all with what in my mind ?wats there plot ?plus kakashi n kurenia. Are u serious ..are the kids here to show growth in the ninjas
 

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Well, it's a cool beggining! Naruto becoming Hokage and Sakura and Shikamaru as his advisors! Cool. Since it's basically the introduction, I've no much idea of the rest of the Ff, but overral I think is gud.
My only advice: Please...put proper punctuation.... otherwise I ge confused a little.
 

Sophie Ezra

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Well, it's a cool beggining! Naruto becoming Hokage and Sakura and Shikamaru as his advisors! Cool. Since it's basically the introduction, I've no much idea of the rest of the Ff, but overral I think is gud.
My only advice: Please...put proper punctuation.... otherwise I ge confused a little.

i am happy you enjoyed it yeah i know my punctuation is not perfect but i am glad you enjoyed it.
 

Skylar Knight

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Really good! :D Great work, and don't stop writing FF, yours are amazing :)
Btw, Congratulations on the marriage! ^^
 

Honord Sage

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Thanks keep up the good work,don't be afraid to let the characters show their personalities ask yourself what would Tsunade,Naruto,Hinata would say or do if this or that happen,put yourself in their shoes.
 
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