Sophie Ezra
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it is just what i decided on after someone gave me the idea and it just the way it worked out
Life in Konoha after the War
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Uchiha Paulsama
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amazing. you should start your own manga xd juss take your time but this is truly amazing. it shows how your mind works. your truly special indeed U_U
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The plot itself makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside like when Teuchi compares Naruto to his daddy. I was like "d'awww"
You're good at coming up with stories! Just work on your format. For example, I wouldn't use script style because it's very limiting. It makes it harder to convey emotion which is something you want your readers to feel when they read your story.
Also, don't break the 4th wall when you write unless you use an Author's Note. It keeps the reader inside the "world" you create with your story.
But this is great! I hope you continue to write and improve! ^^
You're good at coming up with stories! Just work on your format. For example, I wouldn't use script style because it's very limiting. It makes it harder to convey emotion which is something you want your readers to feel when they read your story.
Also, don't break the 4th wall when you write unless you use an Author's Note. It keeps the reader inside the "world" you create with your story.
But this is great! I hope you continue to write and improve! ^^
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jiriya sama
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the story line is very interesting but if you watch the series closely you will notice that naruto calls the man in the ramen shop old man
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yeah i did watch naruto it just i decided to actually put his real name thnak you for your comment
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