Pitohui Kuchyosei: Okpakpa Parada - Pitohui Summoning: Okpakpa ParadaHad to resubmit.
Pitohui Kuchyosei: Okpakpa Parada - Pitohui Summoning: Okpakpa Parada
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After following the summoning procedures, the user presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Okpakpa Parada.
Okpakpa Parada is a very proud and lazy Pitohui that when called upon, instead of coming to the battle field, he summons the summoner and whoever the summoner wishes into her own body(uterus) at Modakeke, leaving the task of helping the summoner in the hands of her zygots. Due to this fact, nobody has ever seen her face but one would be able to predict her appearance from her zygots. The zygots are all cocooned in hundreds of eggs that are all over the wall and floor of her uterus and whenever the user deems it, one or more eggs may hatch, releasing corrosive liquids and a cloud of neurotoxin gas that fills entire short range of the egg. Since the user is immune the toxins Pitohui produce, he has no problem moving around without having to worry about the gas but the corrosive liquid from the eggs, he is not immune to. Depending on how the hatching occur, maybe an aggressive hatching where the eggs shell explode outwards thus the corrosive liquid is made to splash all over up to short range, or the subtle hatching, where the eggs shells falls to the ground close by and the corrosive liquids flows. In any case, the neurotoxin gas would spread in an omnidirectional manor.
Zygots
Emerging from each egg would be a premature hooded pitohui which has no wings, but rather arms that looks like threads. They are able to use the arms and the hood which is able to extend up to short range to restrict and crush a target with an A-rank power. The entire body of the zygots are cursed with neurotoxins thus contact with them would induce immediate paralysis. They can be destroyed with A-rank and above jutsu. Hatching an egg or more than one egg at once would count as a move if the action is triggered passively by the user. However, when an opponent happen to stumble on or make contact with an egg, it responds by itself, hatching and emerging to fight for the user.
Uterus
Okpakpa Parada's uterus is very rigid though organic, its dense and is able to even withstand the corrosive liquid S-rank strength corrosive liquid that is released from the eggs indefinitely making it very tempered and conditioned to withstand something of similar strenght and lower. Thus the uterus walls is immune to A-rank and below techniques, able to take 2 S-rank jutsus before it gives in, returning those within it to their former position.
NOTE: Can only be summoned 1x and last 6 turns
NOTE: No other hooded Pitohui can be summoned while one is in the uterus.
Declined: I'm fairly certain that NK/Vex were told (by me) to check it, so I'm blaming both. But let's forget about that.
Anyways, most reverse summonings aren't being approved, at present. Due to how prevalent this type of CJ has become, in addition to their usages, it's actually been suggested that we start declining them. Even if that weren't the chief issue, there's enough in the submission to warrant declining it. To start, there's no explanation of an immunity to this neurotoxin. An immunity to such a substance isn't stated in the contract, nor elsewhere, in any approved CJ about the birds tied to it. If I have overlooked it, please let me know, but if you meant it for this CJ to be the first instance, it won't be permitted.Less notable issues include its duration and durability, both of which exceed standard S-rank limits.
Pitohui Kuchyosei: Owokembe Rebi Ija - Pitohui Summoning: Owokembe Rebi Ija
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
O.R.I is a hooded pitohui with a form almost reminiscent to that of a human. She stands upright and the only notable feature that separates her from a human is a pair of large wings on her back and talons on her feet. She has a pair of hands which she uses albeit they bare claws themselves which are used for attack. O.R.I is six feet tall, slender and stronger than she looks, being able to without much effort, split a large boulder in half with a single swing of her sword. She's a samurai, reserved and would not talk much except the information she needs to convey is vital. She is don is a white kimono while bearing two white swords. She wears golden metal bracelets on her wrist used to shoot neeedles.
O.R.I's abilities stems from her brute strength, agility and speed. She is unable to mold conventional elemental techniques but she makes up for it with her speed and close combat abilities. She's a weapon specialist, able to use only taijutsu and samurai kenjutsu. Her slim body build makes it possible for her to traverse from one point to another at twice her summoner's speed, either through running or flight. Her swords are indestructible and quite lethal, being freely able to cut through A-rank solid objects on its own. The swords are riddled with several seals that activates through O.R.I's will. The seal would ensure the sword is able to cut through non-physical matter, sealing them into itself. This works on any form of energy, non-physical and physical barrier. This ability can only be activated 3x per battle and works on only S-rank and below techniques. By planting her talons on a solid surface and pushing backwards, O.R.I. is able to use her own variation of body flicker movement, moving at the normal speed she's able to move. This can only be done twice per battle.
NOTE
Her swords, talons, claws and needles are laced with the pitohui neurotoxins.
Can only be summoned 1x
Last 4 turns
Declined: the bird's appearance is too human-like, going by its description. It ought to be unmistakably a bird.
Also, please remove the seals and poison-coating for the sword. If you want a samurai bird, that's fine, but it mustn't have what a samurai bio could never have. This is to be fair to those members who have or have had Samurai bios.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After following the summoning procedures, the user presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Okpakpa Parada.
Okpakpa Parada is a very proud and lazy Pitohui that when called upon, instead of coming to the battle field, he summons the summoner and whoever the summoner wishes into her own body(uterus) at Modakeke, leaving the task of helping the summoner in the hands of her zygots. Due to this fact, nobody has ever seen her face but one would be able to predict her appearance from her zygots. The zygots are all cocooned in hundreds of eggs that are all over the wall and floor of her uterus and whenever the user deems it, one or more eggs may hatch, releasing corrosive liquids and a cloud of neurotoxin gas that fills entire short range of the egg. The toxin and corrosive liquid from the eggs would also affect the user if he does not defend from them. Depending on how the hatching occur, maybe an aggressive hatching where the eggs shell explode outwards thus the corrosive liquid is made to splash all over up to short range, or the subtle hatching, where the eggs shells falls to the ground close by and the corrosive liquids flows. In any case, the neurotoxin gas would spread in an omnidirectional manor.
Zygots
Emerging from each egg would be a premature hooded pitohui which has no wings, but rather arms that looks like threads. They are able to use the arms and the hood which is able to extend up to short range to restrict and crush a target with an A-rank power. The entire body of the zygots are cursed with neurotoxins thus contact with them would induce immediate paralysis. They can be destroyed with A-rank and above jutsu. Hatching an egg or more than one egg at once would count as a move if the action is triggered passively by the user. However, when an opponent happen to stumble on or make contact with an egg, it responds by itself, hatching and emerging to fight for the user.
Uterus
Okpakpa Parada's uterus is very rigid though organic, its dense and is able to even withstand the S-rank strength corrosive liquid that is released from the eggs indefinitely due to the organic liquid being part of her making it very tempered and conditioned to withstand something of similar strenght and lower. Thus the uterus walls is immune to A-rank and below techniques, able to take 1 S-rank jutsu fully directed at the walls of the uterus before it gives in, returning those within it to their former position.
NOTE: Can only be summoned 1x and last 4 turns
NOTE: No other hooded Pitohui can be summoned while one is in the uterus.
Declined: I hadn't anticipated this CJ would be resubmitted, and so this time I'll accept culpability.
Like I said before, reverse summonings aren't really being approved, at present. There are still some very palpable issues. I haven't any idea as to why this bird's uterus has a highly corrosive liquid within. Pardon my joke, but I guess this is where Acid Release has been. And that the liquid is so potent means that all the bird's eggs should automatically be destroyed, in addition to the uterus walls, as their durability doesn't encompass S-ranks. Zygots also has its own fair share of issues.
If you still want to do something with these eggs, I suggest making a CJ that summons clusters of them to the battlefield. They can have some sort of adhesive lining that allows them to stick to walls, ceilings, and the like.
If you still want to do something with these eggs, I suggest making a CJ that summons clusters of them to the battlefield. They can have some sort of adhesive lining that allows them to stick to walls, ceilings, and the like.
Pitohui Kuchyosei: Owokembe Rebi Ija - Pitohui Summoning: Owokembe Rebi Ija
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: O.R.I is a hooded pitohui that stands six feet tall, slender and stronger than she looks, being able to without much effort, split a large rocks in half with a single swing of her sword. She's a samurai, reserved and would not talk much except the information she needs to convey is vital. She is don is a white kimono while bearing two white swords.
O.R.I's abilities stems from her brute strength, agility and speed. She is unable to mold conventional elemental techniques but she makes up for it with her speed and close combat abilities. She's a weapon specialist, able to use only standard kenjutsu and samurai kenjutsu up to S-ranks. Her slim body build makes it possible for her to traverse from one point to another at 1.5x the speed of normal kage, either through flight. Her swords are very durable and quite lethal, being able to cut through A-rank solid objects at the expense of a move. Like every other Pitohui, O.R.I is foul and her claws and beaks contains neurotoxins that a simple scratch would induce total paralysis.
Note: Only summonable once per battle.
Note: Last only up to four turns.
Approved: edits annotated in pink. Taijutsu changed to Kenjutsu, and no "hands" in addition to wings.
Ninpou: Kon'in - Ninja Arts: Matrimony
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
This is a simple ninjutsu that works on both variation fuinjutsu, the sealing formula type and the barrier variant. By choosing one as the male and the second as the female variant, the techniques is able to merge the male with the female irrespective of which ever variant they are, though both can not be barrier nor can they be mainly seals. Elaborately, the jutsu allows the user to merge a barrier fuinjutsu with a seal or a seal with a barrier fuin. Depending on which of them comes first which is the male, this jutsu is used together with the female variant, merging with the male, thus the male and the female fuinjutsu variant occupies different time-frames, while this jutsu occupies the same timeframe as the female variant. For example, one could make an animal made of barrier in one timeframe, then merges the B-rank 5 elemental seal(say fire) on the barrier construct in another timeframe. The result would be a product exhibiting the effect of both the male and female in a mutual manner. Meaning the female is able to use the male as a medium and vice versa thus the barrier construct would have the ability to seal a single fire elemental technique. The user spends 3 moves but in two different timeframes(the male in one timeframe, the female+ matrimony in second timeframe). If the male is already made maybe in the previous turn, the user only needs to use a timeframe to merge the female with it.
NOTE
Can not merge male with male or female with female. Meaning one can not merge a seal with a seal nor merge a barrier with a barrier.
Can not be used with any variant of infinite embraces.
3x per battle
Individual restrictions of male of female still holds. Meaning, if the male or female restricts the usage of fuinjutsu while its active, the restricted can not be merged with it.
♪ Declined, DNR: Even just looking at canons, this has the potential to be horribly abused. I'm sorry, but this would be far too powerful to ever approve. ♪
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