Custom Jutsu Submission - III

[Serpent]

(Suiton: Kujiku Kou) Water Release: Imploding Box of Might
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will make a quick sequence of four handseals causing water to rise around a target in the form of a box. The size of the box is dependent on the size of the target. Larger boxes, like ones to trap a summon are rather slow to form, while smaller boxes like ones to trap a normal sized human can be near instantaneous. The user will then form a handseal causing the water implode in upon itself with massive crushing force causing damage to whatever is trapped within.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a two turn cooldown between use.
-Requires a Water Source
-Can only be taught by Serpent

Approved. Made edits.

(Suiton: Komadzukai) Water Release: Drilling Maiden
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will cause a near instantaneous vortex to water to erupt around an opponent quickly throwing them off balance and it condenses trapping them within a spinning cylinder that continues to spin high speed. Its density will make it a target unable to move while trapped within without any type of physical enhancement. Drills of water will then form along the outside of the cylinder and collide into it piercing into the target.
Note:
-Requires a Water Source
-Requires a 3 turn cool down
-Can only be taught by Serpent

Declined. Elemental ninjutsu above C-Rank require hand seals, which makes this impossible to be instantaneous.

(Suiton: Hakuchou) Water Release: Gliding Swan
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: A basic technique, the user will focus chakra upon their feet forming a thin layer of water to glide on. When used correctly this technique can be very effective in close combat, allowing for a more unorthodox method of movement as they can slide around an opponent; or can be used to quickly slide small distances along the water to evade small to medium scale attacks within reason. This technique is Ideally used in conjunction with Taijutsu for more prominent combinations, using it's momentum to booster an attack with an increase of +10 damage. (This technique only lasts the turn it is used.)
Note:
-Requires a Water Source
-Can only be taught by Serpent

Declined. Clashes with Mathias's Fluid Step, which is a donated CJ anyway.

 

[Urda]

(Yōton: Dansei) - Lava Style: Elasticity
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+10 boost to Earth or Lava Jutsu)
Description: Yōton: Dansei is a ninjutsu that utilizes the Lava Element to allow the caster to endow the properties of elasticity. After performing three hand-seals, chakra is gathered and channeled through solid objects (including the earth) - with a slam of a palm on the ground, in the air - with a gesture or wave of the hand - or applied it to their clothing (or ally) or on the targets clothing - with a simple touch or direct contact, preventing them from being knocked off balance or to repel the opponent. All those touched by this ability, morph into a trampoline-like form, allowing the caster to move around by bouncing or weaken the foothold of the target(s), limiting their mobility. The alternative usage is releasing the elasticity as raw chakra, which becomes visible to the naked eye in the form of a square, circle, or rectangular barrier. The pink, raw chakra erects, becoming a springboard or stack into a pile of five upwards into the air to crush the target(s) below. It can also become a shield to repel Earth, Fire, Water or Wind Jutsu, weapons, and projectiles such as swords, shuriken (etc.), or chakra-like blast of sorts, unto the target. This ability can be augmented to other vulcanize rubber or Earth Jutsu to strengthen or fortify them.
Note: Only usable by Custom Rubber and Dodai Biographies

~ Usable 5 Time per battle
~ Can repel A-rank Fire, Earth, Wind and Water and below. Cannot repel combination Jutsu such as Wind/Fire Jutsu of equal rank.
~ Only taught by Zarus

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Declined: the "morph into a trampoline-like form" bit needs to be changed as you won't be permitted to use it on others as is and the implications with regards to clothing is hard to say unless a clear example can be provided. Moving on, how is the user "releasing the elasticity as raw chakra"? If the user is first creating a construct of raw chakra and then applying the elasticity via Lava, a technique that only does the latter is better suited. Not to mention that raw chakra is weak to elemental attacks.​

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(Yōton: Chō Dansei) - Lava Style: Hyperelasticity
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Yōton: Chō Dansei is a ninjutsu that utilizes the Lava Element to allow the caster to endow the properties of elasticity. Gathering lava chakra into their hands, the air and the ground become malleable to manipulate to their advantage. The air becomes compress and twist to create an aerial elastic-barrier that blasts the target away. Moreover, the user can gesture to create a series of aerial elastic-barrier that total 3 in number, appearing above the target, and pin the target under them. Forcibly slamming your palms onto the ground, the floor becomes springy under the targets foothold and can bounce them into the air. Additionally, both the air and earth methods can be utilized as a means to travel. Applying the elastic energy into their clothing, the user can recover from a fall - preventing oneself from being knock off balance.

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Declined: the fault is mine for not establishing that the air itself cannot be made malleable like this. ​

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