Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Summoning Animal
Hoatzin
Scroll Owner
Ikiru Uchiha
Other Users who have signed this contract
None Yet
Summoning Boss if Existing
None Yet Known
Other Summoning Animals Tied to this Contract
None Yet Known
Origin
Hidden within the lands of Jomae, which can’t be made with contact by normal means. These lands are hidden through a passageway clandestine upon going to the mountains in Jomae.
General Description
Hoatzin are pheasant-sized while as eggs, with a total length of 65 centimeters (26 in). Hatching in a toxic strong stench, with a long neck and small head. While growing, they have unfeather blue face with maroon eyes, and the head is topped by a spiky, rufous crest. The long, sooty-brown tail is broadly tipped buff. The upper parts are dark, sooty-brown-edged buff on the wing coverts, and streaked buff on the mantle and nape. The underparts are buff, while the crissum, primaries, underwing coverts and flanks are rich rufous-chestnut, but this is mainly visible when it opens its wings. The alternative name of "stinkbird" is derived from the bird's manure-like odor, caused by its digestive system. The hoatzin is an herbivore, eating leaves and fruit, and has an unusual digestive system with an enlarged crop used for fermentation of vegetable matter, in a manner broadly analogous to the digestive system of mammalian ruminants. There known to being in tune with the nature as even called the 'gardens stabilizers'. This is a noisy species, with a variety of hoarse calls, including groans, croaks, hisses and grunts. These calls are even often associated with body movements, such as wing spreading. Calls are used to maintain contact between individuals in groups, warn of threats and intruders.
Summon General Abilities
Varying in size, being as small as a plate to being as large as gamabunta, and other great summons, these creatures are known to be in tune with nature energy and only certain sages could utilize it. Having a peaceful personality within all of them, they tend to always question why they are summoned for, and fighting for only peace. Stink-birds are one of the few that could utilize ninjutsu, using their toxic stench breath that in use knocking out the target. Meanwhile it’s known that these creatures have the ability to counter Wood Release quite easily. Given to be in tune with nature, their Yang-natured chakra sound release, triggers wood release to stable right back to it's natural state and albeit it won't stop the attack, it would nullify it . They exhibit the silent (sometimes loud) scream in regards to wood attacks that throws off the focus of the threat making it quite slowed. This allows them to use their known ability of devouring plants with their toxic breath. They have the great ability to listen in on people, and understand many different languages while be able to identity who would be talking in a loud group.
Summon Land + History
Over the years that passed, they were searched for combating on attempt to gain advantage on Hashirama's power. These lead them into hiding high, smart to coordinate jutsu which they were able to use to make impossible rock climbing to a high up mountains in Jomae. None have ever made contact with the creatures and so ever since peace has rested with them until Ikiru Uchiha tempted and passed their test. Giving three tattoos that signify the levels of summon one can harness, Ikiru matched on with his scrolls onto the world. Knowing to keep the peace was the at most importance.
‡ Update Declined ‡ If a summon doesn't have certain traits in real life, it won't have those traits in our RP. Simply adding toxins, venoms and poisons to animals which aren't will never be allowed. Their other main ability is a rip of Sound Release and will not be allowed (unless you first obtain sound). You could always sign the canon bat contract if you want such an ability without having Sound Release. As for their manure-like odour, Imperfect already has Maned Wolves which have several customs revolving around their putrid smell. He's effectively patented that field.
Uchiha Sword of Creatures and Encryption(Uchiha Ikimono to angō-ka no Ken)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (20 per turn to form a water source)(-X to -100)
Damage: (-20 to enemy chakra)
Description:
This blade is the most treasured item from Shisui Uchiha's possession when he was alive. The blade was imbued with water chakra when it was made by the monks of the fire temple. This gave the blade a hold over the water element that was unlike any other, this blade once drawn would draw up water from the ground forming water sources with in two turns anywhere on land. This is a very unique trait for a sword to carry which gave note that this blade could tap into natural aquifer's in the ground. The water sources are fairly large in size which is why it takes two turns for the blades natural water ability to activate. The blade having a simple look to it while no chakra is being strewn into the blade, however as soon as you channel water chakra to the blade it begins to have a coat of water on the blade. When the user of the sword strikes an enemy or something an enemy is touching the water sucks -20 chakra from the enemy with every contacted strike. Later after use, the user can invest chakra however much he feels -100 max, which can be attained later for their personal use. This form is very intricate and also unique to user who developed the ability. When light touches this blade once the water chakra has been imbued into the blade it refracts the light around it making the blade itself invisible slightly giving off different reflecting a of the surrounding instead of the blade. This blade has the natural ability to cut through B rank fire jutsu's which can be in almost any form splitting the jutsu to the sides of the sword wielder.
Restrictions:
+ Can only make one water source during battle.
+ Takes two turns to draw up from underground a water source.
+ Can only use chakra drain strike five times per battle.
+ Like refraction go the blade is a natural cause of water projecting a reflection.
+ Requires the user to have completed water training to use.
+ Can only use chakra deposit once after every other battle.
+ User has to post previous depositing post to upkeep banked chakra.
‡ Declined ‡ Ok, this has some potential and if you follow all of my comments, this should be approved next cycle. First things first, template. The Japanese name goes on the left and the English name on the right. Range is N/A for weapons. Remove the chakra cost of 40. Move the (-20 to enemy chakra) from the damage row to the chakra row. Remove the (20 per turn to form a water source). I'm not sure about the 100 chakra investing thing. Remove that altogether. This can't cut through B-Rank and below fire jutsus. Remove the coating of water. The invisible sword thing has been done too many times, so remove that. Separate the abilities of the weapon into their own paragraphs. First paragraph - passive formation of a water source on being drawn. Second paragraph - the chakra absorption upon slashes (I really like this ability, especially the part where you can steal chakra by slashing what the opponent is standing on). You'll need to find new third ability if you want one. For now, you can simply resubmit the CW with two abilities and in future, update it if more ideas come to mind. Generally CW can have three to five abilities, depending on how useful/powerful the abilities are.
(Ration: Dantō Hōndochā)- Lightning Style: Decapitation Horned chirp
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-A
Range: Short
Chakra: 20/30 (+5 per turn active/use)
Damage: 40/60
Description: The user starts by channeling his lightning chakra into one or both of his hands. Using shape manipulation, they can release the lightning chakra in the form of a claw/horn in either short or long form on there arm(12 inches to 16 inches in length, 3/8 inches in width). While depending on the amount of chakra used, streaming A-rank raiton chakra makes the 16 inches form state. When formed the lightning blade(s) vibrate at a high frequency, it creates a short loud strained-bird chirp-like sound. The blade(s) within is a collected rotation of ration acting as a chain saw at such a high speed, for temperature of the blades increase in length. Hōndochā is an extremely powerful and devastating melee weapon in close quarters combat. A single strike can penetrate through solids as butter, being able to slice through the toughest metals or jutsu(s) [all depending on the Elemental S&W]. Hōndochā in most cases is fatal — as the blade passes through the body, the innards of the body are burned and cauterized by the temperatures produced by the blades. Survival is minimal at best and in the case of non-vital organs being stabbed with the energy, proper medical treatment must be applied as soon as possible to ensure long term survival.
Notice:
- Can only be taught by Ikiru Uchiha
- Can only be used thrice.
‡ Declined ‡ Aside from it's shape, this is no different from existing techniques.
Summoning Animal
Hoatzin
Scroll Owner
Ikiru Uchiha |Roleplay wise: Not yet|
Other Users who have signed this contract
None Yet
Summoning Boss if Existing
None Yet Known
Other Summoning Animals Tied to this Contract
None Yet Known
Origin
Hidden within the lands of Jomae, which can’t be made with contact by normal means. These lands are hidden through a portal clandestine on one of the mountains in lightning village.
General Description
Hoatzin are pheasant-sized while as eggs, with a total length of 65 centimeters (26 in). Hatching in a toxic strong stench, with a long neck and small head. While growing, they have unfeather blue face with maroon eyes, and the head is topped by a spiky, rufous crest. The long, sooty-brown tail is broadly tipped buff. The upper parts are dark, sooty-brown-edged buff on the wing coverts, and streaked buff on the mantle and nape. The underparts are buff, while the crissum, primaries, underwing coverts and flanks are rich rufous-chestnut, but this is mainly visible when it opens its wings. The alternative name of "stinkbird" is derived from the bird's manure-like odor, caused by its digestive system. The hoatzin is an herbivore, eating leaves and fruit, and has an unusual digestive system with an enlarged crop used for fermentation of vegetable matter, in a manner broadly analogous to the digestive system of mammalian ruminants. There known to being in tune with the nature as even called the 'gardens stabilizers'. This is a noisy species, with a variety of hoarse calls, including groans, croaks, hisses and grunts. These calls are even often associated with body movements, such as wing spreading. Calls are used to maintain contact between individuals in groups, warn of threats and intruders.
Summon General Abilities
Varying in size, being as small as a plate to being as large as gamabunta, and other great summons, these creatures are known to be in tune with nature energy and only certain sages could utilize it. While known to be the few that could utilize ninjutsu, using their toxic stench breath that melts any type surface or knocking out the target. Meanwhile it’s known that these creatures have the ability to counter Wood Release quite easily. They exhibit a silent (sometimes loud) scream in regards to wood attacks that not only throws off the focus of the threat making it quite slowed. This allows them into their known ability of devouring plants with their toxic breath. They have the great ability to listen in on people also different who the person who’d be talking in a loud group.
Summon Land History
Over the years that passed, they were searched for combating on attempt to gain advantage on Hashirama's power. These lead them into hiding, smart and coordinated they were able to make a portal that would be hidden in the mountains of the thunder. None have ever made contact with the creatures and so ever since peace has rested with them.
‡ Declined ‡ Bold changes on updating/resubmission.
Name: Uchiha Sword of Creatures and Encryption(Uchiha Ikimono to angō-ka no Ken)
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/a
Range: Short
Chakra: N/a (Only when Invested, -X to -100 Max of chakra)
Damage: N/a
Description:
The sword has an implanted markings into it, the user to unlock it has to use the hand seals, Ram → Serpent → Dragon as the moment this is pact is accomplished, the Katana requires the user’s blood onto it(which could be arranged with summoning ninjutsu). When the user has accomplished this task, he/she is to repeat the hand seals required before backwards in doing so the katana turns black in metallic form. When that task is finished the sealed katana will transfer chakra into black katana which we will grant the user the ability invest however much he feels -100 max. Whenever, the user can attain the banked chakra for his personal use. While as guanine metal, this Katana is quite light prone with coarsen. When swung a technique entails a split-second image of latter move of the katana. It’s known the use of abilities the katana, must be unlocked or they cannot use any of the abilities of the katana when it’s sealed. They are able to keep the katana in any desired state, but has to be stated (Linked from last use). Thou, once to the original state, the user will have to perform the unsealing ritual and collected chakra is released, starting again from zero.
‡ Declined ‡ No formatting of any kind on your submissions. Get rid of that image or simply put it in a spoiler below the technique itself. I won't check it like this.
(Raiton: Borutoinferuno) Lightning Release: Volt Inferno
Rank: A-S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (+20 with Katon technique)
Description: After using a Katon Style technique jutsu/ a source is available, the user releases a locomotion of electricity that can electrocute any Katon source within range. Given as the users body has resistance to current since he/she is the medium, disseminating electrocuting current is concomitant; promulgating the Katon source into an inferno. When used with a Katon technique, its power is partisan, making the use rather ideal to be use with conjunction. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
Note: Can only be used once every three turns.
Note: In the turn before the use of Borutoinferuno, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique.
‡ Declined ‡ I know I'm not one to talk but too many complex words here. Concomitant? Promulgating? Partisan? The latter two don't even fit in this context. The concept of the CJ is equally illogical. DNR.
Summoning Animal
Hoatzin
Scroll Owner
Ikiru Uchiha
Other Users who have signed this contract
None Yet
Summoning Boss if Existing
None Yet Known
Other Summoning Animals Tied to this Contract
None Yet Known
Origin
Hidden within the lands of Jomae, which can’t be made with contact by normal means. These lands are hidden through a passageway clandestine upon going to the mountains in Jomae.
General Description
Hoatzin are pheasant-sized while as eggs, with a total length of 65 centimeters (26 in). Hatching in a toxic strong stench, with a long neck and small head. While growing, they have unfeather blue face with maroon eyes, and the head is topped by a spiky, rufous crest. The long, sooty-brown tail is broadly tipped buff. The upper parts are dark, sooty-brown-edged buff on the wing coverts, and streaked buff on the mantle and nape. The underparts are buff, while the crissum, primaries, underwing coverts and flanks are rich rufous-chestnut, but this is mainly visible when it opens its wings. The alternative name of "stinkbird" is derived from the bird's manure-like odor, caused by its digestive system. The hoatzin is an herbivore, eating leaves and fruit, and has an unusual digestive system with an enlarged crop used for fermentation of vegetable matter, in a manner broadly analogous to the digestive system of mammalian ruminants. There known to being in tune with the nature as even called the 'gardens stabilizers'. This is a noisy species, with a variety of hoarse calls, including groans, croaks, hisses and grunts. These calls are even often associated with body movements, such as wing spreading. Calls are used to maintain contact between individuals in groups, warn of threats and intruders.
Summon General Abilities
Varying in size, being as small as a plate to being as large as gamabunta, and other great summons, these creatures are known to be in tune with nature energy and only certain sages could utilize it. Having a peaceful personality within all of them, they tend to always question why they are summoned for, and fighting for only peace. Stink-birds are one of the few that could utilize ninjutsu, using their toxic stench breath that in use knocking out the target. Meanwhile it’s known that these creatures have the ability to counter Wood Release quite easily. Given to be in tune with nature, their Yang-natured chakra sound release, triggers wood release to stable right back to it's natural state and albeit it won't stop the attack, it would nullify it . They exhibit the silent (sometimes loud) scream in regards to wood attacks that throws off the focus of the threat making it quite slowed. This allows them to use their known ability of devouring plants with their toxic breath. They have the great ability to listen in on people, and understand many different languages while be able to identity who would be talking in a loud group.
Summon Land + History
Over the years that passed, they were searched for combating on attempt to gain advantage on Hashirama's power. These lead them into hiding high, smart to coordinate jutsu which they were able to use to make impossible rock climbing to a high up mountains in Jomae. None have ever made contact with the creatures and so ever since peace has rested with them until Ikiru Uchiha tempted and passed their test. Giving three tattoos that signify the levels of summon one can harness, Ikiru matched on with his scrolls onto the world. Knowing to keep the peace was the at most importance.
‡ Update Declined ‡ If a summon doesn't have certain traits in real life, it won't have those traits in our RP. Simply adding toxins, venoms and poisons to animals which aren't will never be allowed. Their other main ability is a rip of Sound Release and will not be allowed (unless you first obtain sound). You could always sign the canon bat contract if you want such an ability without having Sound Release. As for their manure-like odour, Imperfect already has Maned Wolves which have several customs revolving around their putrid smell. He's effectively patented that field.
Uchiha Sword of Creatures and Encryption(Uchiha Ikimono to angō-ka no Ken)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (20 per turn to form a water source)(-X to -100)
Damage: (-20 to enemy chakra)
Description:
This blade is the most treasured item from Shisui Uchiha's possession when he was alive. The blade was imbued with water chakra when it was made by the monks of the fire temple. This gave the blade a hold over the water element that was unlike any other, this blade once drawn would draw up water from the ground forming water sources with in two turns anywhere on land. This is a very unique trait for a sword to carry which gave note that this blade could tap into natural aquifer's in the ground. The water sources are fairly large in size which is why it takes two turns for the blades natural water ability to activate. The blade having a simple look to it while no chakra is being strewn into the blade, however as soon as you channel water chakra to the blade it begins to have a coat of water on the blade. When the user of the sword strikes an enemy or something an enemy is touching the water sucks -20 chakra from the enemy with every contacted strike. Later after use, the user can invest chakra however much he feels -100 max, which can be attained later for their personal use. This form is very intricate and also unique to user who developed the ability. When light touches this blade once the water chakra has been imbued into the blade it refracts the light around it making the blade itself invisible slightly giving off different reflecting a of the surrounding instead of the blade. This blade has the natural ability to cut through B rank fire jutsu's which can be in almost any form splitting the jutsu to the sides of the sword wielder.
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+ Can only make one water source during battle.
+ Takes two turns to draw up from underground a water source.
+ Can only use chakra drain strike five times per battle.
+ Like refraction go the blade is a natural cause of water projecting a reflection.
+ Requires the user to have completed water training to use.
+ Can only use chakra deposit once after every other battle.
+ User has to post previous depositing post to upkeep banked chakra.
‡ Declined ‡ Ok, this has some potential and if you follow all of my comments, this should be approved next cycle. First things first, template. The Japanese name goes on the left and the English name on the right. Range is N/A for weapons. Remove the chakra cost of 40. Move the (-20 to enemy chakra) from the damage row to the chakra row. Remove the (20 per turn to form a water source). I'm not sure about the 100 chakra investing thing. Remove that altogether. This can't cut through B-Rank and below fire jutsus. Remove the coating of water. The invisible sword thing has been done too many times, so remove that. Separate the abilities of the weapon into their own paragraphs. First paragraph - passive formation of a water source on being drawn. Second paragraph - the chakra absorption upon slashes (I really like this ability, especially the part where you can steal chakra by slashing what the opponent is standing on). You'll need to find new third ability if you want one. For now, you can simply resubmit the CW with two abilities and in future, update it if more ideas come to mind. Generally CW can have three to five abilities, depending on how useful/powerful the abilities are.
(Ration: Dantō Hōndochā)- Lightning Style: Decapitation Horned chirp
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-A
Range: Short
Chakra: 20/30 (+5 per turn active/use)
Damage: 40/60
Description: The user starts by channeling his lightning chakra into one or both of his hands. Using shape manipulation, they can release the lightning chakra in the form of a claw/horn in either short or long form on there arm(12 inches to 16 inches in length, 3/8 inches in width). While depending on the amount of chakra used, streaming A-rank raiton chakra makes the 16 inches form state. When formed the lightning blade(s) vibrate at a high frequency, it creates a short loud strained-bird chirp-like sound. The blade(s) within is a collected rotation of ration acting as a chain saw at such a high speed, for temperature of the blades increase in length. Hōndochā is an extremely powerful and devastating melee weapon in close quarters combat. A single strike can penetrate through solids as butter, being able to slice through the toughest metals or jutsu(s) [all depending on the Elemental S&W]. Hōndochā in most cases is fatal — as the blade passes through the body, the innards of the body are burned and cauterized by the temperatures produced by the blades. Survival is minimal at best and in the case of non-vital organs being stabbed with the energy, proper medical treatment must be applied as soon as possible to ensure long term survival.
Notice:
- Can only be taught by Ikiru Uchiha
- Can only be used thrice.
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‡ Declined ‡ Aside from it's shape, this is no different from existing techniques.
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