[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Pervyy]

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(Senpō: Sennin bakuha) – Sage Art: Sage blast
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This jutsu is based on similar principles of the frog kata, where the user attacks using pure sage chakra, though it doesn't use the same shape manipulation. The user will focus their sage chakra into their hand and thrust their hand forwards releasing a blast of sage chakra. The size will vary from the size of the users hand, to the size of a person, but the same amount of chakra will be user. In the smaller version it will just be more concerntrated.

Note: Useable 3 times
Note: Must be in a mode that uses Natural energy

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±± Declined ±± First this needs to be visible by any bio. Secondly, it can only be used in cannon Sage Mode.

(Katon: Ho tougyo) - Fire style: Fire control
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is similar to Pein's Shinra Tensei and Bensho Ten’in but instead of using gravitational forces, it's based solely upon the use of fire. The user will release a blast of fire from their body in any given direction, but the fire goes straight. The size will vary depending upon the use, but the larger the scale, the larger the restriction, due to the use of chakra. If the user create's a small scale blast which goes in one direction and is can be up to the size of a person, it can travel up to long range, this can be user 4 times per battle. If the user creates a blast all around, it can travel up to mid range and only be used twice.

Note: If used to release from one direction it can't be used again in the next turn
Note: If used for an all around blast the user must wait 2 turns until using it again.

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±± Declined ±± Similar to many existing techniques for being so general. Any "Fire Blast" can be considered similar to this.

(Katon: Ho jiten) - Fire style: Fire spin
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This is much like the hyuuga's rotation jutsu but is soley based upon the fire element. The user will begin to spin at high speed releasing fire chakra from their body outwards, like a nagashi for fire, and as they spin they will create an orb of fire around them for defensive purposes.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: No water in the same turn

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

 

[Darijan]

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LavaRelease: Lava Technique ~ Youton: You no jutsu
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user Will channel his lava chakra to the ground and create any stuff from it, but he will also use lava chakra to it creating lava stuff from the ground which he can use to defend or to attack the opponent.
Restrictions:
-Usable 3 times per battle

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±± Declined ±± Lava Stuff? Don't resubmit.

Lava Release: Hundred Stone Spikes ~ Youton: Nanbyaku Ishi Supaiku
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will chanell lava chakra in the hard part of the lava sword

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(Youton: Youton Katan)Youton: Lava sword
Rank: A
Type: Offence/Defence
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points: /
Dectription: This is a sword which has a special affinity to the lava chakra and, its made of 2 parts, the 1st part is made out of lava stones, and the other is made of a metal that gets lava qualities when infused with youton chakra which burns everything it touches. To make full the 2nd part of the sword the user has to chanel some lava chakra in the sword to makes the blade liquid lava, alltough the liquid lava can be hardened if needed.

Notes:
~Can only be only used by sisko
~The Hard part of the sword can only be weaked by high concentrated lightning jutsus and the liquid lava part only by very strong water.

creating many additional spikes on it and when the user swings his sword he will release hundreds of very hot stone spikes which go towards the opponent at the speed of the chidori senbon jutsu
Restrictions:
-Usable twice per battle
-No S rank in the same turn in which this one was used

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Lava Release: Rubber grip ~ Youton: Gomu Totte
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will send lava chakra to the ground and quickly add some more to create lava whips which emerge from the ground and then as they are wrapping up the opponent burning him just a bit because they would transform into rubber as climbing him up.
Restrictions:
-Usable twice per battle
-No S rank in the same turn this was used

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±± Declined ±± Makes no sense...

 

[Drizzy]

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Suiton: Fuka Yari|Water Release: Shark Arrows
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: "Suiton: Fuka Yari" is a water based technique in which the user produces a source of water on both palms, they will then proceed to continuously launch small arrows/spike shaped figures . These arrows can deal great damage, and can easily small through rocks due to their destructive power. This technique is performed by channeling chakra to the palms and creating water from it, upon launching the water in small portions, the user will focus on shape manipulation and chakra manipulation to make them as sharp and destructive as possible. Gif #1 shows the movements made to release the water arrows, Gif #2 shows an example of the technique's speed.
Note Usable only twice per battle.
Note Must have water mastery for the level of skill needed.
Note Can only be used by S-Class Ninja Rank and above due to the level of concentration and focus required.
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±± Declined ±± Remove the useless restrictions I colored and the sentence. Add a max number of "bullets". The way it is means you could keep launching them non stop. This also seems much more like a B-Rank than an A-Rank but its up to you.

 

[-Broly-]

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(Suiton: Neptune’s Tenken) Water Release: Neptune’s Divine Punishment
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Charka Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+25 to water release)
Description: This is a supplementary technique that serves to add a rapid spinning motion to any already existing water release technique under the users control. With more chakra, the user can add an incredibly rapid spinning motion, fast enough to create the alter the appearance of any technique to resemble that of raging white rapids; The user is able to control the direction of the spin. The spinning serves to give water techniques un-paralleled piercing and maiming powers, allowing for water release techniques to break through and demolish defensive barriers without losing much of its power; With this information, it becomes easy to see what its capable of when used against a human. The power this technique offers can be compared to that of the alligators and crocodile’s death roll, in which they will grab a limb lump of flesh with their jaws and rotate on the longitudinal axis of their body to tear off the piece for their meal; Only this technique operates on the next level, thanks to the addition of chakra.
*If used on a large or un-focused water technique like giant water colliding wave, it simply adds more rotational and concussive ability to the technique - Like a larger version of the Water Release Tearing Torrent technique.
*Can only used thrice per battle, with the sole exception that it be used on an already existent water technique under the control of the user.
*This technique cannot be used once every other turn

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±± Declined ±± similar to existing techniques.

(Doton: Tanrei no Tsuchi) Earth Release: Beauty of Earth
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique meant primarily for training purposes, the user channels and infuses their doton chakra throughout the earth in the entire surrounding area. The process of infusing the entire earth with chakra can in no way be sensed or felt by an opponent without some type of sensory ability. The process of this technique is very swift, almost immediate. Under no circumstances does this prevent the enemy from using Earth Release Ninjutsu, nor does it in any way hasten the use r’s own earth release techniques. If the opponent is to use earth release, the users chakra will be expelled from the portion of the earth used for said technique in a harmless manner – This allows for anyone else’s chakra to permeate the ground, as well as allowing for the use of Underground Fish Projection and techniques of that sort. The technique allows one to “become one” with the earth, and to gain a better understanding of the terrain and that it ultimately represents life. As a result of becoming one with the earth, the user will feel more powerful, although physically they gain no extra power, the “power” resides in one’s heart. As a side-effect of their willpower, the user is also able to ‘see through’ and immediately escape the Killing Intent and Temporary Body Paralysis techniques.
*This technique may only be used three times per battle.
*Though the users chakra is spread throughout the ground, it does not allow the user to ‘sense’ or ‘feel’’ the presence of anyone else standing on the ground.

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

Fuuton:Takoberu de supagetti yoru (Wind Release: Spaghetti Night at Taco Bell)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal and focuses small pockets of wind chakra into the earth all around the opponent. They then release the wind chakra upwards towards the opponent, making a shower of small sharp stones hit the opponent and damage him. The stones are sharpened by the wind and move fast so that they cause 1 inch stab like wounds in the places they impact. The shower continues as long as the user is making the handseal they used to activate the jutsu.

-Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Can only be taught by Goku2000
-can only be used once per turn

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±± Declined ±± Remove the part i colored and make it clear that the speed is still quite trackable.

Fuuton:Takoberu de supagetti yoru (Wind Release: Spaghetti Night at Taco Bell)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal and focuses small pockets of wind chakra into the earth all around the opponent. They then release the wind chakra upwards towards the opponent, making a shower of small sharp stones hit the opponent and damage him. The stones are sharpened by the wind and move fast so that they cause 1 inch stab like wounds in the places they impact.

-Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Can only be taught by Goku2000
-can only be used once per turn
-Can be tracked by normal eyes

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[-Vendetta-]

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Summoning Animal: Mink
Scroll Owner: -Vendetta-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: There are two living species referred to as "mink": the European Mink and the American Mink. Both species are semi-aquatic, carnivorous mammals of the family Mustelidae, which also includes the weasels and the otters and ferrets. The American Mink is larger and more adaptable than the European Mink. It is sometimes possible to distinguish between the European and American mink; a European Mink always has a large white patch on its upper lip, while the American species sometimes does not. Thus, any mink without such a patch can be identified with certainty as an American Mink, but an individual with a patch cannot be certainly identified without looking at the skeleton

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Mr. Rogers) Summoning: Mr. Rogers
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mr. Rogers is the boss summoning of the minks. He is slightly smaller than Gamabunta. He wears steel armor that cover his head, torso, and limbs, but leaves room so he can still bend all his joints. The armor has a form of insulation on the inner materials that reduces the conductivity of electricity. The armor is strong enough to defend against any B-rank or lower physical attack. Mr. Rogers has the ability to sharpen his fur to make each strand as sharp as a kunai. He can release the fur as projectiles from any location on his body by forcefully exerting chakra from his pores. The projectiles can reach up to long range. They travel extremely fast and are equal to an A-rank technique.
Note: Due to his armor, he can only fire the fur from certain locations, so this attack can be used only three times per match.
Note: He can only be summoned once per match and he disperses after three turns.

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±± Declined ±± Ok...he's covered in an armor but then he can shoot his fur? How does that work? Its not logical...also, he can stay 4 turns.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ricky Bobby) Summoning: Ricky Bobby
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Ricky Bobby is the fastest of all the minks. He can move at speeds that match a person who has completed special weights training. He is about four meters long and one and a half meters tall. When Ricky's summoner sits on him, he emits chakra from his back that prevents the rider from falling off, similar to how a ninja uses chakra to stand on water. Because of this, the rider does not have to hold on with their hands and is free to use them. He has no special abilities other than his speed, so the only way he can attack the opponent is with physical attacks.
Note: Ricky Bobby can only stay summoned for four turns.

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[Ushiro]

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(Suiton: Ekitai no Eikyō) - Water Release: Liquid Impact
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An very dense sphere of water is created in front of the user's hand or foot that is 3 meters in diameter. The sphere levitates near the user and is controlled using leg or arm motions that the sphere follows. It can be swung around to strike at enemies with enough force to shatter bones. It may also be shot at a distant target with a thrusting motion and on impact, the orb will lose its structure and release a torrent of water throughout the area.
-Usable 4 times per battle

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(Kuchiyose: Kishi) - Summoning: Kishi
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishi, a silver colored locust with black limbs that is 15 meters tall. Kishi has the ability to fuse with the summoner and transform into a larger version of the summoner that can perform his jutsu regularly but with greater scale because of his size and the extra chakra provided by Kishi. The summoner's jutsu are not strengthened when in this form.
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 4 turns
-Must have signed the locusts contract

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±± Declined ±± No hybrid things. Basically, no fusions.

 

[Black Butler]

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(Kikaichu Chacha no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Disruption Technique
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: E-Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Within the Aburame clan, the elders, for many years have thought of ways in order to protects oneself from opponent's foreign chakra or Genjutsu. Over many years of practice and failed attempts, they've come up with a soluton. They counteract illusions by commanding their already latched on bugs, to suck the foreign chakra from within one's body dry. They do this by the same measures of how they feed on the user, sucking their chakra, but there are certain Bugs bred for for distinguishing foreign chakra and eliminating it. The bugs detect the entry of foreign chakra and eliminate it within 2 steps. Step one being closing off all entry spots of foreign chakra, not allowing any further entry into their user's body, by continuously sucking whatever chakra may be trying to enter. Step 2 being sucking the already present foreign chakra form their user's body, delatching themselves and leaving the immediate area. The user can also command/have them act on their own accord if the bugs/user detect an ally under the influence of foreign chakra. The user can have a pre-bugged ally, as foreign chakra enters their system, the bugs relay the information back to the user and bugs, thus allowing them to act accordingly. Although this may seem like it can be completed over and over, there are a certain amount of bugs a user can breed in a extended time, so this technique, although automatic (Bugs don't go on user's command, but rather act like white blood cells and protect the user from one's own will) it is limited:

Usable 3 times per battle unless Forbidden Rank
Forbidden:1 use per battle
Note: No Bugs next turn(Applies to S-Forbidden Rank uses)
Note: Must be Sannin or above due to mastery over bugs
Note: Bugs act on own will, automatically activating this jutsu on detection of foreign chakra

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

(Kikaichu Tekishutsu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Extraction Technique
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Seemingly an offspring of Destruction Bug Disruption Technique, this technique was created only for a select few members of the Aburame clan who possess the infamous Nano Bugs. This technque was created by the very first Nano Bug user in order to protect oneself from the harm and side effects of toxins including, posion, fungus, etc. This works as the Nano Bugs detatch themselves and travel a certain distance and release poisonous toxins themselves that is also alloted with the user's chakra, neutralizing any poison within it's range. Also if the user is somehow infected by toxins, these Nano Bugs act automatically, extracting the toxin from the user's body, therefore relieving them from harm. The Nano Bugs aren't affected by the poison as the toxin within themselves stalemate the foreign poison.
Note: Extracts all posion within the vicinity
Note: Must be Sannin Rank or higher due to Bug Mastery
Note: Usable 3 times per battle
Note: Must have Nano Bugs
Note: No Nano Bug Techniques next turn

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±± Declined ±± Makes no sense tbh. Releasing toxins counters toxins? Mid-ranged nano bugs?

(Kikaichu Haisetsu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Excretion Technique
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This jutsu is one of the secret techniques of the Aburame clan, able to be performed only by Nano Bug users. This justu works around the capabilities of posion that is honed by the user's Nano Bugs. The user will command the Nano Bugs within the user's body to release their poison into the user's body on a handseal (Tiger) (The user is immune to this posion due to being infested by the bugs themself and developing immunization through usage of Nano bugs), then the user will excrete the poison from any opening in their body (Mouth, Eyes, Ears, Spores, Cuts, Wounds, etc.) allowing it to freely flow throughout the air or the user can aim this poison. The user can freely see and maneuvor through this poison due to immunization, but the effected opponent, if not cured within the next turn, can undergo several side effects(which the user has to explain and choose 2), ultimately leading up to death if not cured within 3 turns.
Side effects(Maximum Selection of 2):
Effect 1: The poison enters the opponents body and numbs thier entire body within 1turn
Effect 2:The poison enters the opponent's body and obscures their eyesight, causing blindness within 2 turns.
Effect 3: The poison enters the opponent's body and causes vomiting.
Effect 4: The poison enters the opponent's body and causes them to lose control of 2 limbs. (Selected by user)
Effect 5: The poison enters the opponent's body, creating a reaction with the user's lung's, throat, and other breathing related organs, causing them to close up slowly, creating heavy breathing in the first turn and leading to suffocation within the third turn.
Effect 6: The poison enters the opponent's body and causes halleucinations (Described by user)
Effect 7: The poison enters the opponent's body and disrupts chakra flow, stopping low ranks techniques (E-C) and disrupting/deforming higher ranked techniques (B-S)

Note: Can only be used Once per battle
Note: No Nano Bug Techniques for 3 turns
Note: User uses only A-Rank and below techniques for 3 turns
Note: Must be Sannin Rank or above
Note: Must have Nano Bugs

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±± Declined ±± Nano bugs aren't poisonous as far as I know. And even so, poison techs require medical training. Don't resubmit.

 

[Xylon]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Blaze Luminous (Bureizuruminasu)
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The technique is a principle guided defensive and counter-offensive method. Using the users multiple swords, he levitates them forwards and makes them spin. By applying chakra the user creates a energy shield to defend against incoming threats. Aside from the durability of the shield itself the rotation redirects the attacks towards the sides. By adding lightning chakra, user could create an electric storm infront that extends till mid-range. The storm is capable of completely repelling metallic objects and paralyzing human targets.
Note: Can defend against up to S rank techniques thrice per battle.
-The swords are heated by the rotations and thus cannot be held the following turn.

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±± Declined ±± Chakra cost? If it creates that storm it does damage right? How many swords do you need?

(the ordinary chakra shield blocks A ranks with ease i thought i improved upon it, feel free to edit this to what that fits)

Sealing Technique: Formulae Battle Method (Fuinjutsu:Teishiki Kaisen shikuchi)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30(per formulae)
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The technique allows the user to write formulae around existing seals to slightly alter them to the users benefit. Formulae:
Add/remove a function: By placing the formulae around the seal, the user could add or remove a function(I.e. activate upon contact with a lightning release technique, make transcription seals)
Encryption: The formula combines and or locks seal(s) within the formulae while retaining their functionality(optionally) to make it easier to manage them or harder to decode them.
Ghost: For techniques that relay information to the user or activate upon certain events, the formulae written makes the target appear as someone or something else(according to the seal) or entirely disappear the user.
Link Block/Reroute: The formula works on techniques that creates a link/contract between people. Using the formulae the user could block/sever the links or reroute it to another person somehow linked to the seal/contract. However the user cannot change/reciprocals the roles between the user and opponents.(I.e. Using the seal the opponent sucks chakra from the user. The formula cannot make it so the user sucks chakra from the opponent which falls in the category of rewriting seals).
Note: Requires physical contact with the seal being altered.
-Works on specific sealing techniques that are in formulae or kanji, Cannot be applied of barriers and forbidden. Cannot alter seals tattooed on the ninja.
-Cannot be used on S rank sealing techniques used by the opponents. But still could be applied on the users own S ranks.

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±± Declined ±± The blue segments need more explanation and examples. Add that it can only edit a seal once (to add, remove or edit something) and can't be done multiple times for multiple effects on the same seal. Also, in battle, it can only be used 4 times. If you decide to combine seals that you'll use prepared, you need to post this tech.

Flying Thunder God: Explosion (Hiraishin: Bakuha)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 2 Tags= B-rank, 4 Tags= A-Rank, 8 Tags= S-Rank.
Description: The technique transports explosive tags to a FTG seal. These explosive tags are altered by Minato to take advantage of his FTG technique. Minato rewrites the sealing in the explosive tags to ad the FTG seal formula into the explosive formula enabling him to teleport the explosive tags into an FTG seal. Minato can set the explosive tags to explode on arrival or when enemy chakra is nearby. The explosion is related to the amount of tags used and nothing else.
Note:Usable 4 times in a battle
Note:Can't be applied when the FTG seal is placed directly into someone

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[Lyanna Stark]

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(nagai tsume)Long Claw
Type:Weapon
Rank:A-Rank
Range-Short
Description:
The sword is unbelievably light and is made of valyrian steel able to cut through some of the most dense and tough surfaces.It is a reletively dark grey colour with swirls similar to that of a katana but the sword is more thin and longer than a katana and due to it being a medium-ish long sword needs to be carried on kanames back when he is not using itOn the handle is also a image of a wolfs head carved into the white stone like material.
~only useable by blaise12 or those who he gives permission to.
Abilities:
(Suiton Tansen)Water Edge
Type:Offensive
Rank:B rank
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The sword allows the user to circulate suiton chakra through the blade from which the user will make water visible similar to chidori but a long and straight percise sharp edge with which the user can cut through steel objects and produce water slashes.
~only useable by blaise12 or those who he gives permission to.

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±± Declined ±± Not only isn't this in proper format as it also mimics tons of swords already created.

 

[Frozenstein]

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(Fuuton: Hishou Tsume)- Wind Style: Flying Claws
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user first gathers wind chakra in his hands and directs it into his fingers. Then he swings his arm(s) in a direction, usually with a crescent shaped motion and release his chakra from his fingers. This chakra then turns into a blade of wind and cuts the target. The user could create 5-10 blades at the same time, what can extend up to mid range in a crescent shape. These blades are strong enough to cut through solid objects if used in short range, but only do deep cuts in mid range.
- can only be used 5 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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±± Declined ±± Similar to cannon techniques.

 

[Roy]

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(Katon: Kasai Rei) - Fire Style: Fire Ray
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user places his palms against eachother and gathers fire chakra within them, then the user moves his palms away from eachother and as he does so a fireball is materialized inbetween them, which grows until it has reached a diameter of about 1 meter. After the fireball has reached it's full size countless tentacle-like "rays" of fire sprout from it, attacking the target in a wide controllable trajectory.
- Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Is able to attack multiple opponents at once due the the number of "rays"
- Can only be taught by Tybone

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(Hakke Doragon no Handan) - Eight Trigrams Dragon's Judgement
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(+60 to user if they're within mid range of the target)
Description: The user raises one of their hands and exerts a massive amount of chakra from all 361 tenketsu upward, manipulating the chakra to form a rising chakra-based dragon. The user then pulls their hand down, sending the dragon downward in a spinning motion to crash into the target with accurate precision, smashing the target into the ground crushing their every bone. After completely enveloping the target and reaching the climax of it's spinning motion the dragon explodes into a massive wide-spread rotation with a diameter which covers anything within mid-range distance of the target and leaves a huge crater. If the user is caught up in it himself the force will render him unconcious aswell. The strain caused by exerting the massive amount of chakra will render the user unable to make use of either his Byakugan or Jyuuken for a while.
-Can only be used once
-User must have mastered Jyuuken
-If the user is within mid-range of the opponent the rotation would hit him aswell
-After using this jutsu the user is unable to use their Byakugan and any Jyuuken techniques for 3 turns
-Can only be used by Tybone

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±± Declined ±± This is not a Gentle Fist technique...

(Futon: Kazekamaririisu) - Wind Release: Wind Sickle Release
Rank: D - B
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 10 - 40
Description: While "Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor" is active and by performing the Bird handseal the user manipulates the wind in which their clad to explode in an outward direction all around them, pushing away any small objects within a short-range distance of the user aswell as causing damage to any enemy within short-range in the form of a cutting gust of wind of which the power is equal to the remaining strength of the original armor.
-Can only be performed while "Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor" is active, naturally the Armor is dispersed after using this technique.
-The power of this technique is equal to the remaining strength of "Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor" so if the armor, which originally is B-Rank is damaged and goes down to a mere D-Rank, this technique only has the strength of a D-Rank technique.
-Can only be taught by Tybone.

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[Yugure]

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( Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ventus no Kaze)| Summoning Jutsu: Ventus of the Wind
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Ventus is one of the five Sparrow that is capable of using a element, in Ventus’ case, wind. Ventus is capable of using Wind techniques up to A-Rank, and one S-Rank jutsu per battle. Ventus is the same size as Sasuke's hawk, and is thus able to carry the user on his back, and transport him twice as fast then when the user should run. So, instead of 10 posts to reach one's destination, it takes him only 5 posts.
Note:Can be summoned once per battle
Note: Stays in battle for a maximum of three turns
Note: The user must have learned the technique, will Ventus be able to use it.
Note: Ventus’ attacks count as one move

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kasai Senpū Peruro)| Summoning Jutsu: Fire Whirl Peruro
Type: Smmoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Peruro is one of the five Sparrow that is capable of using one element, in Peruro’ case, Fire. Once Peruro is summoned, he can shot ignited feathers to the opponent, which are equivalent to an A-Rank Fire technique. He will flap with his wings to loose his feathers, and at the moment they loose contact with him, they will ignite and head for the opponent at the speed of a normal thrown kunai.
Note: Peruro can be summoned once per battle
Note: can stay on the field for four turns
Note: 'Fire Feathers' can be used once per turn
Note: 'Fire Feathers' count as one move

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±± Declined ±± Everything he uses counts as a move and you need to rank these feathers.

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(Fuuton: Kaze no būmeran) |Wind Release: Wind Boomerang
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After preforming the 'Bird' handseal, the user will remove his hands from each other while focusing his chakra between them, merging it with the air, creating a sickle shaped boomerang. The boomerang itself is hard too see in certain conditions, because it totally consists out of air and chakra. The user will throw it towards the opponent, and if it doesn't hit anything in it's way, it will return towards the point where it was thrown in a mirrored move. (If thrown 30 meters with a bow to the right, then it returns with a bow to the left)

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±± Declined ±± You do know that you then need to defend from it once it returns right?

 

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Doton: Jari doroppu | Earth release: Gravel Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Descripton: This allows the user to summon a massive amount 5 millimeter sized earth gravel from the sky crashing it into the opponent. The gravel must be summoned at least 5 meters above the opponent to have any real effect as gravel is composed of many small but sharp rocks.

Can be used 4x per battle.
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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±± Declined ±± Summon from where? Restrictions? 5 meters?

Serpents Wrath | Hebi no Ikari
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique allows the use to manipulate their limbs of choosing to flex in various motions and have the elasticity as of a serpents body. This allows for constricting opponents movements at close range and provides surprising offensive counters for the user.

Can only be used 3x per battle
Must have signed the snake contract.
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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±± Declined ±± How can this work? There is already a canon technique to make your body more flexible you know?

Summon from where? Another dimension of course, just like water storm upheaval, the sticky mud drop, etc and I already said 5 meters in the description .______.

Doton: Jari doroppu | Earth release: Gravel Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Descripton: This allows the user to summon through a "portal" of sorts in the sky (similar to Dropping Lid and Sticky Mud Drop) a massive amount of 5 millimeter sized earth gravel from the sky crashing it into the opponent. The gravel must be summoned at least 15 meters above the opponent to have any real effect as gravel is composed of many small but sharp rocks.

Can be used 3x per battle.
No more S rank or above Earth the same turn and the next
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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I'll just completely make it into a new custom

Serpents Wrath | Hebi no Ikari
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Snakes have the ability to move limbs in the serpentine motion to swim underwater and cover great distances. With showing manda going underground inside earth it should be possible for the user that has signed the snake contract to mimic those attributes. This technique allows the use to manipulate their limbs of choosing to flex in various motions and have the elasticity as of a serpents body. This allows for taking some of the brute force of water techniques without severely snapping bones and being able to swim through it rapidly. It also allows the user to dig and move through earth in the same fashion

Lasts 2 turns.
Can only be used 3x per battle
Must have signed the snake contract.
Can only take the force of A ranked level Water or Earth attacks.
Cannot be used against water that is slicing.
Cannot use Ninjutsu A ranked or above for one turn
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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Hojōjutsu - Taitorōpusaikuron (Hidden Rope Art - Tight-Rope Cyclone)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+5 Elemental Chakra)
Description: The user extends 10 feet of hidden rope out from both of their sleeves and charges it with chakra (pure or elemental) while spinning extremely quickly, creating a large cyclone. Each rope that extends out of the user's arm has a knot on the end of it with which the user charges pure or an elemental chakra into it. The ropes come out of the tornado and can attack multiple enemies without warning like a whip. These are two separate ropes, their speed gives off the impression as if their are more.
*Grandmaster - Can insert any chakra they choose to obtain the desired result within the constraints of the element.
*Stone - Becomes an A Ranked Earth Cyclone
*Wave - Becomes an A Ranked Water Cyclone
*Thunder - Becomes an A Ranked Lightning Cyclone
*Flame - Becomes an A Ranked Fire Cylone
*Erosion - Becomes an A Ranked Wind Cyclone
Note: Grandmaster can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Grandmaster must wait 2 turns to use A Ranked and above Hojōjutsu.

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Hojōjutsu - Taitorōpusaikuron (Hidden Rope Art - Tight-Rope Cyclone)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+5 Elemental Chakra)
Description: The user extends 5 meters of hidden rope out from both of their sleeves and charges it with chakra (pure or elemental) while spinning extremely quickly, creating a large cyclone. Each rope that extends out of the user's arm has a knot on the end of it with which the user charges pure or an elemental chakra into it. The ropes come out of the tornado and can attack multiple enemies without warning like a whip. These are two separate ropes, their speed gives off the impression as if their are more.
*Grandmasters can charge any elemental technique they know.
*Masters can only charge the element aligned with their village.
*Iwa/Earth, Kiri/Water, Kumo/Lightning, Konoha/Fire, Suna/Wind
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to use A Ranked and above Hojōjutsu.

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Doton/Yōton: (Earth/Lava Combination: Erupting Volcano)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user combines Earth Style: Open Earth Rising Excavation and Lava Release: Lava Geyser, creating and causing a Volcano to erupt with lava on the battlefield. This is done in a fashion that as the earth raises, Lava raises with a voilent tremor. The earth becoming narrower as it reaches a height of 30 meters. The Lava will spread throughout the battlefield covering the terrain with Lava that spreads extremely quickly. To do this, the user must perform 4 hanseals and slam their hands onto the ground.
Note: No Lava or Earth Techniques above A Rank for 3 turns.
Note: Takes 3 turns for the Lava to cool down, upon which the terrain will be considered Rocky.
Note: Due to the size and nature of this technique, it can only be performed once per battle.
Note: During Cool down, a light steam will fill the battlefield, as it comes from the lava, it will have the user's chakra inside of it, though the user cannot manipulate the steam, it is used as a smokescreen
Note: After the eruption, the volcano will lie dormant.
Note: After the eruption, the sky will darken and be covered with Ash.
Note: The user takes 50 damage from the strain needed to perform this technique.

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing technique.

Ototon: Yamero!!! [Sound Release: Stop It!!!]
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user performs 4 handseals while charging an immense amount of chakra into their throat and screams the words "Stop It" as loud as they can, causing it to be heard throughout the entire battlefield. The scream produced from the user is at a resonate frequency that is strong enough to destroy earth and crystaline based objects with ease (Not bones). When heard by an opponent, it causes them to faint and lose consciousness from bursting their eardrums followed by bleeding from the ears. If an opponent somehow regains consciousness however, as a result of the constant immense pain from their eardrums, they will be immune to genjutsu.
Note: Can only be used once per turn.
Note: Opponent regains consciousness after one turn.
Note: User will be unable to use techniques from their mouth for 2 turns.
Note: No Sound Release techniques for 5 turns.
Note: User takes 50 damage from stretching the throat past its limits.

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. OPed.

 

[Kerrah]

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(Mokuton: Hiru Zamen) Wood Release: Leeching Seeds
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: By using an already pre-existing source of Wood, the user will send his chakra through it and cause several branches to sprout, all containing several seeds. Upon contact of a human body, the seeds will attach, and will stick to his body. Once done, the seeds will disturb the opponents chakra, by sending their minerals through the victim. This will have great effects on the opponent, but this is not a quick process, it last 3 turns. At the moment of impact, the seeds have not started to send their minerals, and thus can be gotten rid of then. However, if the opponent does not do that, he will face dire consequences, The seeds will eat up his body. At first, the symptoms will be not so fast reflexes, slow movement and a little bit of blurred vision, this will be the first turn of the minerals being active in the victims body. In the next turn, the victim will begin to cough up blood, he will barely be able to move his body due to the minerals, and his vision is extremely blurred, not allowing him to have a clear vision at all. Also, at this point he will begin to lose his senses. And on the third turn, the symptoms only worsen, not allowing him to move at all, the slightest touch will cause him to cry in pain, and his senses would be near to non-functional

Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot use this on Wood grown in the same turn, it has to be from a turn before.
Note: Due to heavy chakra consumption, the user cannot use any S-rank techniques for the following turn.

~ the seeds will eat up his body, literally or are you being unnecessarily dramatic ? ~

(Mokuton: Hiru Zamen) Wood Release: Leeching Seeds
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: By using an already pre-existing source of Wood, the user will send his chakra through it and cause several branches to sprout, all containing several seeds. Upon contact of a human body, the seeds will attach, and will stick to his body. Once done, the seeds will disturb the opponents chakra, by sending their minerals through the victim. This will have great effects on the opponent, but this is not a quick process, it last 3 turns. At the moment of impact, the seeds have not started to send their minerals, and thus can be gotten rid of then. However, if the opponent does not do that, he will face dire consequences. At first, the symptoms will be not so fast reflexes, slow movement and a little bit of blurred vision, this will be the first turn of the minerals being active in the victims body. In the next turn, the victim will begin to cough up blood, he will barely be able to move his body due to the minerals, and his vision is extremely blurred, not allowing him to have a clear vision at all. Also, at this point he will begin to lose his senses. And on the third turn, the symptoms only worsen, not allowing him to move at all, the slightest touch will cause him to cry in pain, and his senses would be ner to non-functional

Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot use this on Wood grown in the same turn, it has to be from a turn before.
Note: Due to heavy chakra consumption, the user cannot use any S-rank techniques for the following turn.

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±± Declined ±± The mineral do all this? How? Which minerals? Why? I mean, if you want to get that specific you need to make it fully so.

(Mokuton: Hando Orikaeshi) Wood Release: Hand Cuffs
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will perform the snake hand sign, and two pillars of Wood will grow out of the sides of the opponent, with hand cuffs at the top of them. Both of the pillars will then move towards the opponents hand, bring them towards his back and cuff them together. The hand cuffs will then start to drain the opponents chakra, as well as keeping his hands locked, not allowing him to perform any hand signs.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle.

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±± Approved ±± I like this one.

 

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(Bītorumōdo) Beetle Mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (to the user upon deactivation)
Description:Beetle Mode(BM) is achieved by the balanced combination of a ninja's chakra with the natural energy . The user, like most modes, has to stand still in a motionless state and gathers up chakra. The user will draw in the natural energy and mix it with his chakra. This takes time to achieve (1 turn). When the user has achieved BM he takes on the attributes of the Rhinoceros Beetle, the user’s skin becomes dark and harden throughout his body like an exoskeleton of a beetle, capable of blocking normal weapons and withstanding C-rank and below attacks (Earth, water, and wind only). His eyes become jet black compound eyes (like that of beetles), as such the user is granted the ability to track fast movements (not as well as the Sharingan; 2 tome at best (compound eye link ). The user’s nails will turn black and sharp and his hair will grow into a harden horn on the user’s head. BM gives the user boosted strength to lift several times his own body weight (like the rhinoceros beetles), his speed will be lowered slightly due to the dense skin that dons him but he will be able to react much quicker than a normal ninja due to the compound eye. This mode gives the user a +10 boost to Ninjutsu. After deactivation the user will become motionless and restrained for 1 turn and have to shed his now brittle skin in the next turn (counting as a move). The user will also be drained of chakra and can only use C-rank and below jutsu for a short time (3 turns).
- Can only use once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Takes 1 turn to achieve BM
- Can only withstand 2 C-rank attacks
- Withstood attacks can only be earth, water, and wind
- The user can’t move for 1 turn after the BM deactivation
- The user takes 80 damage upon deactivation
- The shedding of the skin counts as one of the user’s 3 moves
- Can only use C-rank and below jutsu for 3 turns after the shedding (due to chakra loss)
- Can’t use Fire techniques while in BM
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 2 months

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~ Declined ~ The first few sentences are an exact ripoff of SM. One more chance and then it's no resubmit.

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(Konchū sutairu: Tekitai-teki baishū) Insect Style: Hostile Takeover
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: All
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (50 to user)
Description: The user releases a pheromone of his own inside and around his body to excite the insects to go into an near uncontrollable state. Once in this state the insects forsake their chakra only diet, and devour any solid mass (earth/metal/ice...etc) in seconds. The insects suck up 60% of the users chakra before they burst from within the user and gourd in all directions, injuring the user badly and only leaving him with seventeen insect within to replenish their numbers. The insects release the absorbed chakra to protect them from attacks S-rank and below of any nature.
- Can only be used once per battle
- Works on all bugs under the users control
- Can't use insect jutsu until Insect Cocoon is used twice
- Lasts for 1 turn then the bugs die off
- Can only withstand 1 S-rank attacks (due to chakra coating)
- Chakra coating only last 1 turn or untill hit by S-rank attack and can be stopped by normal weaknesses of bug techniques
- Only B-rank and below techs for 2 turns, due to fatigue.

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~ Declined ~ Quote the other techniques where this chakra coating was approved.

Note: The fact that Shino's bugs ate thru 4-5 metal ships in seconds, in the 2nd shippuden movie Bonds is what makes it plausible.

The chakra is used to shield the bugs like in othe bug tech that were approved by you and other mods...hence the 60% drain

(Bītorumōdo) Beetle Mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (to the user upon deactivation)
Description:Beetle Mode(BM) is achieved by the user drinking a vial of rhinoceros beetle blood. In doing this the user takes on the traits and abilities of the rhinoceros beetle. This takes time to achieve (1 turn). When the user has achieved BM the user’s skin becomes dark and harden throughout his body like an exoskeleton of a beetle, capable of blocking normal weapons and withstanding C-rank and below attacks (Earth, water, and wind only). His eyes become jet black compound eyes (like that of beetles), as such the user is granted the ability to track fast movements (not as well as the Sharingan; 2 tome at best (compound eye link ). The user’s nails will turn black and sharp and his hair will grow into a harden horn on the user’s head. BM gives the user boosted strength to lift several times his own body weight (like the rhinoceros beetles), his speed will be lowered slightly due to the dense skin that dons him but he will be able to react much quicker than a normal ninja due to the compound eye. This mode gives the user a +10 boost to Ninjutsu. After deactivation the user will become motionless and restrained for 1 turn and have to shed his now brittle skin in the next turn (counting as a move). The user will also be drained of chakra and can only use C-rank and below jutsu for a short time (3 turns).
- Can only use once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Takes 1 turn to achieve BM
- Can only withstand 2 C-rank attacks
- Withstood attacks can only be earth, water, and wind
- The user can’t move for 1 turn after the BM deactivation
- The user takes 80 damage upon deactivation
- The shedding of the skin counts as one of the user’s 3 moves
- Can only use C-rank and below jutsu for 3 turns after the shedding (due to chakra loss)
- Can’t use Fire techniques while in BM
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 2 months

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(Konchū sutairu: Tekitai-teki baishū) Insect Style: Hostile Takeover
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: All
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (50 to user)
Description: The user releases a pheromone of his own inside and around his body to excite the insects to go into an near uncontrollable state. Once in this state the insects forsake their chakra only diet, and devour any solid mass (earth/metal/ice...etc) in seconds. The insects suck up 60% of the users chakra before they burst from within the user and gourd in all directions, injuring the user badly and only leaving him with seventeen insect within to replenish their numbers. The insects release the absorbed chakra to protect them from attacks S-rank and below of any nature.
- Can only be used once per battle
- Works on all bugs under the users control
- Can't use insect jutsu until Insect Cocoon is used twice
- Lasts for 1 turn then the bugs die off
- Can only withstand 1 S-rank attacks (due to chakra coating)
- Chakra coating only last 1 turn or untill hit by S-rank attack and can be stopped by normal weaknesses of bug techniques
- Only B-rank and below techs for 2 turns, due to fatigue.

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(Hakai bagu: Nyūburīdo) Destruction Bug: New Breed
Rank: All (tech based)
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This breed of kikaichu is of an acid nature. These bugs have the size, shape, and chakra eating ability of the normal Aburame insects; but these also have the ability to excrete acid from glands found throughout their bodies and their mouth. This acid burns the skin of the enemy to the point of second to third-degree burns, but is generally harmless to the user. This breed of insect was created to be particularly strong against earth and earth based techniques; being beetles and having the ability to secrete an acid capable of metabolizing most organic matter and earth based techniques makes them perfect to fight against Mokuton users as well as Earth users. This acid, while fearsome is, like most acids, slow acting on living flesh and as such can be countered with the correct actions, leaving the same effects that would otherwise be produced by heat/fire which will basically be a burn. When the bugs are killed by weapons, or anything that leaves their insides in an liquid state; the bugs leave droplets of acid that affect whatever touches them. However, this strong acid and the ability to produce it leaves the bugs also quite weaker when facing Water or Ice techniques as water reduces the acidity of their secretions, rendering the acid useless.

- Must be posted at the beginning of the fight and in the bio that wields them
- The bio that uses these bugs loses the ability to use normal bugs and will produce these bugs permanently
- Must be a normal Aburame member (can't be used with nano bugs bios)
- Must have had Aburame bio for 5 months
- Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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±± Approved ±± Well done. Tweaked some things to make it approvable and more reasonable. Also, you need to update your bio and discriminate that your bugs now are "acidic" to touch and post this tech in the bio. Your bio will then only be able to "produce" said bugs.

 

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Secret Technique: Shadow Change(Naibun Waza: Kage Henkou)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B Rank
Range: Long
Chakra: 20(+10 each turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change the color of their shadow from the normal black to any color the user wants this will allow the user to make his shadow blend in with the surrounding area and send his shadow toward his opponent undetected.
-Must be a Nara Clan member
-Must have mastered NAra CLan techs.
-Changing from color to color counts toward three jutsu limit.
-Lasts Three Turns and Usable Thrice but must be separated by a turn interval.

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Secret Technique: My World(Naibun Waza: Waga Seken)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: F Rank
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will take out a scroll and insert their Nara Chakra into the Scroll, this will cause the field to turn into pitch Black due to it being filled with shadows. This will allow the user to Attack his opponent(s) with ease with his shadow regardless of the Location of their opponent. The user can distinguish between the shadows due to the shadows summoned will have his chakra signature and his opponent's shadow will be in the place where the chakra is different.
-Usable Once
-Affects Whole Field
-Usable Once.
-No B rank Nara Clan techs for next turn.
-Lasts four turns.
-Must have mastered Nara Clan Techs.

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±± Declined ±± Makes no sense.

Secret Technique: Max Submission(Naibun Waza: Max oujou
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Mid Range
Chakra: 30(15 for each turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will spread there shadow throughout the field and will capture everything within range even summons this is a greater version of shadow imitation but on a grander scale.
-Can submit multiple enemies at a time even summons.
-Must have mastered NAra Clan techs.
-Usable Thrice

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[McRazor]

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Hyouton: Aisu kogen o takameru | Ice Release: Elevating Ice Plateau
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After completely mastering and specializing in the Hyouton release, the user is able to quicky create an ice pleateau beneath him. The plateau is created by releasing Hyouton chakra through his legs, into the ground. Before the plateau rises, as it's forming, the user can slightly alter its form, making it shield-like from any direction. The plateau rises very fast, taking the user a few meters above the ground. While creating the plateau, it produces a quite loud hissing sound that can be heard up to long range.
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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~ Declined ~ It's not really a plateau if it only rises a few metres, use some other word

Hyouton: Aisu fumiishi o jōshō | Ice Release: Elevating Ice Stepping Stone
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After completely mastering and specializing in the Hyouton release, the user is able to quicky create an elevating stepping stone beneath him. The stepping stone is created by releasing Hyouton chakra through his legs, into the ground. Before the stepping stone rises, as it's forming, the user can slightly alter its form, making it shield-like from any direction. The stepping stone rises very fast, taking the user up to 50 meters above the ground. While creating the stepping stone, it produces a quite loud hissing sound that can be heard up to long range. While rising, and without altering, it looks similar to the first stepping stone in the picture. The user can, as long as the stone is active, control its movement and use it to move around the field at speeds similar to those at which he can run.
Note: Only McRazor can teach this
Note: Stone lasts 5 turns each time and only one can be created at a time

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Hyouton: Hangingu shonyuseki| Ice Release: Hanging Speleothems
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40 (+ extra damage depending on the force)
Description: By channeling chakra throughout the battlefield the user can create a plateau above the enemy from which a huge number of speleothems are hanging. They're very sharp and can easily pierce through the opponent, potentially causing immediate death, if the opponent collides with them with force. As they're formed they don't fall down, instead, they stay at the very place they're created. They will have the best effect if created quickly, just a few meters above the enemy. The plateau has a radius of approx. 3 meters and the spikes are just a few centimeres thick, much alike as the picture provided.
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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~ Declined ~ For heaven's sake use a word most RPers will understand so they can properly know what's going on in your technique

Hyouton: Tsurusu tsurara| Ice Release: Hanging Icicles
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40 (+ extra damage depending on the force)
Description: By channeling chakra throughout the battlefield the user can create a plateau above the enemy from which a huge number of icicles are hanging. They're very sharp and can easily pierce through the opponent, potentially causing immediate death, if the opponent collides with them with force. As they're formed they don't fall down, instead, they stay at the very place they're created. They will have the best effect if created quickly, just a few meters above the enemy. The plateau has a radius of approx. 3 meters and the spikes are just a few centimeres thick, much alike as the picture provided.
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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±± Approved ±± But for some weird reason i'm not seeing this as terribly useful.

 

[Wakizashi]

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resubmitting

(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu
Type: Summoning/Attack
Rank: S
Range:mid-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a full grown Akamaru size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This toucan has a blade located where his top beak should be, that is able to spin fast enough to when he sticks is beak to the ground he can easily dig into it, normal sized wings, and has razor sharp talon attachment to make them abnormally sharp. He is also able to use raiton to make his spinning blade beak and talons more penetrable when attacking.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract

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±± Declined ±± Why is this mid-long range?

( Kaminari no yobidashi)- lightning call
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:n/a
Chakra:30
Damage:(+15 damage to standard attacks)
Description:kyofu makes the most unbearable croak that will send chakra out from his croak to the sky and cut off there sense of hearing. The chakra will cause clouds to form. once the clouds fully form to where thunder sounds and lightning passes thru the clouds kyofu will then fly to the sky and use his blade beak as a conductor and attract the lightning and mold it with his own chakra.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: one turn must be in between each use
-note: jutsu last one turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must signed the toco toucan contract

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±± Declined ±± The summon wasn't approved

( Saigai no kaiten ha)-spinning blade of calamity
Type:attack
Rank:A
Range:mid-long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:kyofu begins raise his head to the sky as he opens his mouth, the top blade beak starts spinning. Once the blade spin at it’s highest velocity kyofu then slams it to the ground, drilling it with the blade beak. This in result creates a earthquake that causes the shattering ground underneath to smash the opponent. Combined with the lightning call jutsu makes the lightning on the beak run thru the ground and shock the opponent if he’s not already dead.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: lightning call used by this summons will count as one move.
-note: must have signed the toco toucan contract.

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±± Declined ±± The summon wasn't approved

resubmitting

(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu
Type: Summoning/Attack
Rank: S
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a full grown Akamaru size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This toucan has a blade located where his top beak should be, that is able to spin fast enough to when he sticks is beak to the ground he can easily dig into it, normal sized wings, and has razor sharp talon attachment to make them abnormally sharp. He is also able to use raiton to make his spinning blade beak and talons more penetrable when attacking.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract
~Approved~

 

[ZK]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Resubmitting. I removed all the creature parts and made the purpose clear:

(Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, this technique allows the user to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. As the frame nears its target, the chakra inside the raindrops turns unstable in nature, exploding violently and causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target and everything in its near vicinity.
- All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
-Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
-No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~ Approved ~



Resubmitting. I haven't changed anything, as it was declined because I was in detention.

(Ichitenkai) One Point Release
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-No S-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
-This does not count as an actual opening of the First Gate (Kaimon).
-The user must be able to open the Kaimon to use this technique.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~ No, it has to count if you want it. ~

New submission:

(Tetsujō) Razor Wire
Rank: S
Type: Armor
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Tetsujō is a sentient, tight-fitting bodysuit that encases the user’s upper body like a second layer of skin. Similar to Samehada in terms of function, Tetsujō shares a semi-symbiotic bond with its wielder, constantly absorbing his/her chakra, be it normal or abnormal, in order to remain sentient and functional. The main characteristic of Tetsujō is its ability to change the chakra signature of everything it absorbs. Through miniscule vibrations and fluctuations, the suit changes the signature of all the chakra it absorbs and injects it back into the user’s chakra pathway system in almost constant bursts. Normally, foreign chakra would disturb and disrupt the chakra pathways, but through the symbiotic bond the armor and wielder shares, Tetsujō is able to function as a purifier of sorts, guiding the user’s body through an almost instant process of adaption, though still altering its wilder's chakra flow. With its incredible ability to evolve, Tetsujō is also able to perform this process on unusual types of chakra. This constant process of change and evolution also serves to gradually, but continuously, change the user’s chakra signature on a fundamental level. Generally, Tetsujō will render illusionists unable to use dual-layered illusions on its wielder and make it all but impossible for Sensors to recognize its wilder’s chakra signature. Furthermore, Tetsujō makes the user’s constantly changing chakra impossible to mimic. Through its continuous changing of the user’s chakra signature, Tetsujō also decreases the rank of all Genjutsu Techniques cast on its wielder by one rank. Finally, Tetsujō is able to harshly constrict itself around its wilder’s body for a short amount of time.
If anyone but the wielder touches Tetsujō, the suit releases a harmful burst of chakra into the perpetrators chakra pathway system, ruining his/her balance and equilibrium for a short amount of time.
- Tetsujō cannot decrease the rank of a Mangekyō Sharingan Genjutsu.

~ Some restrictions ? ~

Yes, this'll replace my old Custom 'Weapon'.

(Ichitenkai) One Point Release
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point. It is possible to use this technique with more than one Gate open, which increases its speed and power exponentially.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-No Forbidden-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
-The user must be able to open the Kaimon to use this technique.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

Now it counts.
~Declined~ Exponentially? I'm sorry, please elaborate. Also, make it clearer that this counts as opening the eight gates. Otherwise, nice idea.