[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Edward]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmission; Lessened its size so the amount of water used is lesser, I also decreased its speed (took out the cutting off limbs which may have made it overpowered.)

(Suiton: Mizu Kamigami no Zangyakuna Fukushū) - Water Release: Atrocious Vengeance of the Water Gods
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: With the use of three hand seals, the user can summon forth a large vortex of water around the enemy and the user, or around the enemy only. The vortex of water is circular, with a maximum diameter of 15 meters and a minimum diameter of five meters therefore, the target must be within mid-range. It reaches the height of twenty meters and spins at a dangerously fast speed, such that physical contact with the spinning vortex would be capable of cutting off limbs. It is hollow inside and serves as a water source and to keep the enemy inside. Once the "vortex" of water is created, the user, with the use of shape manipulation, will shape hundreds of basketball-sized goldfishes with pressurized 1 foot horns. They attack from all directions, except the direction the user is standing on if he was to create the vortex around him to avoid the technique from backfiring. They jump out of the wall/vortex of spinning water as if it was a river and jump out to attempt to impale the target(s). The goldfishes jumping from the walls have a long-reach, therefore, they are able to jump from one side of the vortex and land on the other one and continuously jump back and forth to repeatedly attack the enemy. Releasing it in the same turn is generally only used if, A) The technique was successful, or B) The enemy was able to properly defend from it, or completely destroy it. If, for whatever reason, the user chooses to release the technique, the enemy will take in no damage unless they've been pierced by goldfishes, in which case, they will take the S-rank damage
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Useable three times per battle with a four turn cooldown before each usage
Note: Can only be taught by Edward.
Note: Lasts 2 turns per usage.

Declined. While a lot clearer, I still find it a bit too much in power. Tone it down a bit (description wise, not restriction wise). Getting such an enormous amount of water to continuously spin (up to the point it cuts off limbs) and create such a high amount of fishies while controlling all of it together is too much for S-rank.

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(Suiton: Mizu Kamigami no Zangyakuna Fukushū) - Water Release: Atrocious Vengeance of the Water Gods
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: With the use of three hand seals, the user can summon forth a large vortex of water around the enemy and the user, or around the enemy only. The vortex of water is circular, with a maximum diameter of 15 meters and a minimum diameter of five meters therefore, the target must be within mid-range. It reaches the height of fifteen meters and spins at a dangerously fast speed, such that physical contact with the spinning vortex would be capable of pulling the person that touched it into the currents, which would make them vulnerable to the goldfishes. It is hollow inside and serves as a water source and to keep the enemy inside. Once the "vortex" of water is created, the user, with the use of shape manipulation, will shape hundreds of basketball-sized goldfishes with pressurized 1 foot horns. They attack from all directions, except the direction the user is standing on if he was to create the vortex around him to avoid the technique from backfiring. They jump out of the wall/vortex of spinning water as if it was a river and jump out to attempt to impale the target(s). The goldfishes jumping from the walls have a long-reach, therefore, they are able to jump from one side of the vortex and land on the other one and continuously jump back and forth to repeatedly attack the enemy. Releasing it in the same turn is generally only used if, A) The technique was successful, or B) The enemy was able to properly defend from it, or completely destroy it. If, for whatever reason, the user chooses to release the technique, the enemy will take in no damage unless they've been pierced by goldfishes, in which case, they will take the S-rank damage
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Useable three times per battle with a four turn cooldown before each usage
Note: Can only be taught by Edward.
Note: After using, cannot use A rank and higher Water jutsu the next turn.
Note: Lasts 2 turns per usage.

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✦ Approved, made slight edits and added a restriction. ✦

New Submission:

( Ninjutsu: Kakashi no osoroshī shisen - fantazumu ) - Ninjutsu: The Scarecrow's Horrendous Gaze - Phantasm
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will slam his hands on the ground after a succession of two hand seals, Ram - Snake, and send his chakra to a desired location within mid-range. As a result, a figure made of chakra, taking the form of a scarecrow of about three meters, is materialized in the battlefield. It is colored in dark and very ominous colors, while not as sharp and therefore, having a "hazy" effect in its appearance. It, upon materialization, releases an omnidirectional blast of chakra that reaches mid-range from its location and casts a D-ranked illusion on any targets within short range from it. The illusion accompanied with the technique is more of a thematic element, adding visuals like crows, fog, darkness, etc. which work together to enhance the frightening image of the scarecrow. After it is summoned, it can attack in either two different ways. One is a simple omnidirectional burst of chakra. The first application is achieved by performing a hand seal and re-shaping the original scarecrow into hundreds and hundreds of mini-crows , compressed and pressurized allowing it to have piercing capabilities. It bursts into the crows omnidirectionally, therefore, if the user is within range, he will be affected as well. The alternative application is through a single hand seal, and instead of an omnidirectional burst of crows, the crows would all be aimed towards one person as projectiles. Maintaining the hand seal would give the user the ability to have the crows seemingly follow a target, or multiple targets, but he would be unable to perform other techniques whilst the hand seal is maintained.
Notes and Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used three times with a three turn cooldown before each usage.
Note: The crows from either applications can only reach mid-range from the source, in this case, the scarecrow. How far the burst of crows expands out to depends on the user, so long as it is within the maximum mid-range from the source.
Note: Can only be taught by EdwardSama

✦ Declined, hol up hol up hol up. So okay, you make a scarecrow that's ugly and wears dark clothing. Looking over his great taste in fashion, it's able to create a D rank illusion. Uhh......nah. This isnt casting a genjutsu for you lol, find another to get that to work ✦

New Submission:

(Katon: Planetarium) - Fire Release: Planetarium
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 Chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A (80)
Description: The user will slam his hands on the ground to create a dome of flames around him, acting as a defensive and offensive mechanism. It is first created to have the user as the center, with a five meter radius (the size of it is adjustable; so long as it does not exceed a ten meter radius and does not go under three meter radius. The height of it is of course proportional to the diameter, with the shape of a dome). The flames that the dome is composed of is compressed and fairly thin, such that anyone inside can vaguely see the image of anyone outside, and vise versa. Defensively, any material passing through the walls of the dome is destroyed and reduced to mere ashes (in accordance with elemental strengths and weaknesses) and any body attempting to pass through the walls making physical contact with the flames will sustain massive injuries to the limb that touched the intense heat (4th degree burns). Alternatively, and offensively, the user can perform hand motions from within the dome to create shaped constructs from the dome, and to have them attack as a projectile. They carry the same heat intensity as the dome they originated from. To help imagine this, the dome would compress and gather into a single structure that is created through simple hand motions, and is also sent out as a projectile through simply hand motions. The structures that are created must stay within logic; for example, one could create multiple spears of compressed flames and release them as projectiles, however, it would be impossible to compress the entire dome into a penny-sized ball to attack. The maximum height of the structure created is approximately the size of the original dome, and by separating them into multiple attacks, the power would be divided accordingly.
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used three times per battle, with a three turn cooldown between each usage.
Note: Lasts two turns, unless it is destroyed, or if the user chooses to deactivate it
Note: Can only be taught by EdwardSama

✦ Declined, be real: Did you REALLY expect this to not have been made before? ✦

 

[Akasha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon/Doton: Gibil to Girra no adobento) - Fire/Earth Release: Advent of Gibil and Girra
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Advent of Gibil and Girra is a technique where user will firstly release doton chakra within their vicinity as to take a shape of two skulls with an opening at the lowest point of it. These two skulls would be approximetely the size of human heads and their properties would actually be the one of adhesive mud. As soon as the skulls have been formed, user will release katon chakra where they are placed, making it arise from the ground taking shape of two spirits, with two hands, levitating through the battlefield and filling in the previously made skulls. These spirits would be formed of solid fire chakra, being capable of withstanding the weight of mud that would act as a protector from other techniques, however at all times they will have intangible layer of fire flowing through them. Both Gibil and Girra are capable of going to mid range from the user before dispersing however they can only be made in vicinity to the user, aka short range. Each turn they are active, user will only be capable of performing techniques of fire release and his chakra would be drained by five points. They can stay on the battlefield up to three turns and can be made only twice per battle, however never in consequent turns. Now both Gibil and Girra have their specific traits. Gibil, is mostly known for his solidity. He is capable of extending different parts of his body as to form different solid form of fire that will aid him in battle and that he is capable of relasing which will upon impact form explosion, albeit they can only reach short range. It could be swords, shields and similar. Their size can vary as well as the rank, going up to B rank. However in the case where the extension has been destroyed, the rank from which it was will also effect the rank of the spirit itself. The main attack of Gibil however is to actually condense itself into the mud skull which represents its base after which it will propel towards the target. Because of the highly condensed fire within the mud, upon impact with a solid object it will explode forming a maelstorm. Girra on the other hand, is different from Gibil. Its main property is the one of light. Because of the brightness of its fire, upon its forming, it will blind opponent for few moments as he needs to get used to to its illumination. It is less solid than Gibil, and its main use is to actually send projectiles of fire towards the target. Projectiles size at its peak can be 3 meters in diameter and their shape varies depending on Girra's feeling which are reflected upon them. Projectiles can be of either C or D rank, and it can only release up to 4 projectiles of C rank before dispersing completely. Both Gibil and Girra can in case of danger actually condense themselfs into skulls which represent the base of them as to defend from attacks coming their way. Their reforming however would drain user of the technique by ten chakra points.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No technique of S rank or higher of fire release in the turn they are made.
Note: They can not be made in consequent turns.
Note: They can be on the battlefield up to three turns before dispersing.
Note: When it comes to elemental techniques, user can only use element of fire whilst they are active.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

✦ Declined, this would be an Earth/Fire combination jutsu so it would require two jutsu slots in formation. Also, -5 chakra per turn is too little for this, make it -10. These abilities of Gibil ( both ranged ability and maelstorm ability ) need to cost a jutsu per turn, same as Girra's projectile base ability. Not sure about the reforming if they retract into their skulls, it should cost another usage but without costing two jutsu slots per turn that time, since it's already formed. Besides that, I like this, nice jutsu. ✦

(Doton/Katon: Gibil to Girra no adobento) - Earth/Fire Release: Advent of Gibil and Girra
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Advent of Gibil and Girra is a technique where user will firstly release doton chakra within their vicinity as to take a shape of two skulls with an opening at the lowest point of it. These two skulls would be approximetely the size of human heads and their properties would actually be the one of adhesive mud. As soon as the skulls have been formed, user will release katon chakra where they are placed, making it arise from the ground taking shape of two spirits, with two hands, levitating through the battlefield and filling in the previously made skulls. These spirits would be formed of solid fire chakra, being capable of withstanding the weight of mud that would act as a protector from other techniques, however at all times they will have intangible layer of fire flowing through them. Both Gibil and Girra are capable of going to mid range from the user before dispersing however they can only be made in vicinity to the user, aka short range. Each turn they are active, user will only be capable of performing techniques of fire release and his chakra would be drained by ten points. They can stay on the battlefield up to three turns and can be made only twice per battle, however never in consequent turns. Now both Gibil and Girra have their specific traits. Gibil, is mostly known for his solidity. He is capable of extending different parts of his body as to form different solid form of fire that will aid him in battle and that he is capable of relasing which will upon impact form explosion, albeit they can only reach short range. It could be swords, shields and similar. Their size can vary as well as the rank, going up to B rank. However in the case where the extension has been destroyed, the rank from which it was will also effect the rank of the spirit itself. The main attack of Gibil however is to actually condense itself into the mud skull which represents its base after which it will propel towards the target. Because of the highly condensed fire within the mud, upon impact with a solid object it will explode forming a maelstorm which would be of A rank. Gibil would actually prematurely detonate in case where wind based attack is coming his way which would actually just add onto fire because of oxygen feading the flames, making it envelop it before descending towards them (the person who used wind attack). Girra on the other hand, is different from Gibil. Its main property is the one of light. Because of the brightness of its fire, upon its forming, it will blind opponent for few moments as he needs to get used to to its illumination. It is less solid than Gibil, and its main use is to actually send projectiles of fire towards the target. Projectiles size at its peak can be 3 meters in diameter and their shape varies depending on Girra's feeling which are reflected upon them. Projectiles can be of either C or D rank, and it can only release up to 4 projectiles of C rank before dispersing completely. Both Gibil and Girra can in case of danger actually condense themselfs into skulls which represent the base of them as to defend from attacks coming their way. Their reforming however would drain user of the technique by ten chakra points.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No technique of S rank or higher of fire release in the turn they are made.
Note: They can not be made in consequent turns.
Note: They can be on the battlefield up to three turns before dispersing.
Note: When it comes to elemental techniques, user can only use element of fire whilst they are active.
Note: User would be drained proportioned amount of chakra to the rank of the ability that the spirit uses. (e.g. if spirit uses a projectile of C rank, user would be drained by 15 chakra point and similar)
Note: Each ability they use will also count towards the three jutsus limit.
Note: The ability of condensing themself into the skull will cost 10 chakra points as well as reforming back to their original shape.
Note: The jutsu would take two slots of possible three upon its activation.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

(Etlingera no keisei) – The Formation of Etlingera
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10)
Damage: 60 (+20 if used with exploding paper tags)
Description: Through the rapid conversion and release of chakra the user will release numerous sheets of paper from their body. These sheets of paper are purposed in such a way that they are highly versatile allowing the user, through shape manipulation, to create numerous forms such as kunai, swords, walls, pillars, and wave like formations of paper. The paper can maintain their form and shape for longer periods of time than normal by continually feeding chakra into it. Should the user desire they can use explosive tags instead of regular paper allowing for an increase of +20 damage through the explosive power of the paper tags. User can also mix up flash bomb which are in paper form, similar to how explosive tags look. They can either be detonated with a performance with a seal or on impact with a solid object.

Note: If there is paper on the battlefield already dispersed user can use it as to create formations. However, the size of the source has to be proportioned to the creation that user wants to make.
Note: Can be used four times per battle.
Note: Must have a Paper Ninjutsu biography to learn the skill
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

✦ Both Approved, nicely done - you've successfully put a monopoly on Paper Ninjutsu. ✦

 

[Troi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Hōhei Sanpu Shotto) - Fire Release: Artillery Scatter Shot
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description: This fire technique has two phases. First phase: The user will weave the dog and boar hand seals and exhale, repeatedly, up to eight, baseball sized fire bullets into the sky on a vertical slant towards their opponent or in between the user and their opponent. These pellets will come down fiercely and hit either the opponent or the terrain. Once set, the second phase is ready to take place.

Second phase: The user will weave a hand seal and choose one to two of the fireballs to burst into a flame frenzy (whether on the opponent, in the air or on the terrain). These fireballs have a blast/burn radius of one meter. The fireballs are also capable of melting solid techniques such as earth techniques or steel techniques. However it does not spread, increase or decrease it's capabilities and acts as if it has landed on the ground but instead, on the solid technique.

Note: Choosing to make the fireball(s) explode take up one technique.
Note: Once the initial technique/phase is placed, the user may choose to ignite one to two fireballs at any given time, whether it be in the air, on the current terrain, or on the opponent.
Note: The user may only choose two fireballs to explode per turn and each explosion costs 5 chakra.
Note: This technique can only be taught by Moxxi

Declined. Nope, you're not going to melt stuff with that.

(Suiton: Tenshi no Matsuge) - Water Release: Angel's Lashes
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user weaves a hand seal and raises their dominant hand, expelling four very fine and thin strings of water from their palm and into the sky. Once the strings of water reach a certain rang (close, medium, or long range), the connection from the user's hand and the technique is severed and the rest of the strings are used to form the rest of the technique in the sky. The strings of water meet up with the lingering ends in the sky and form four, very small but extremely lethal buzz saws made of water. These saws are easily capable of cutting through A rank and under earth techniques, and B rank and under steel techniques. With the use of another hand seal, the saws come straight down and cut anything on their way down. The speed of which the saws come down are nearly instant.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Once the technique has been stated and set up, the user may choose when the buzz saws come down but when this occurs, it takes up a technique, so in the same turn, you may only use two other jutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by Moxxi

declined. First off all: nearly instant? I doubt it. Second of all: how are these formed? Are they highly pressured water beams? If they are just thin streams of water, gravity will cause them to fall down. If they aren't, the pressure will cause them to splat against each other when the touch each other and then cause the saws to fall down (which might have been your point, but the description was quite unclear on that). If that is the case however, the blades would fall down randomly, making the chance to hit an opponent as big as the chance to hit you. Adding your notes on to that: you can't control gravity.

Arashi Zensen - Stormfront
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 per use of damage enhancement
Damage: +10 to Suiton and Fuuton techniques
Description: Arashi is a folding fan, similar in shape to that of Temari's fan but entirely different in terms of usage, techniques and looks. Arashi is a fan that was crafted by the first of five Sages of the Sea and passed down through the generations of the Sages of the Sea. Therefor, the fan landed in the hands of the current Sage of the Sea, Moxxi, who was given a title from a close friend. The title was "Sage of the Beautiful Blue". The fan has an iridescent shade and is pitch black in color and has a pitch black trim that depending on what angle you're looking at it from, changes to a sea green. When opened, the fan shows five, bright blue emblems that almost looks like they are glowing. Symbols for things such as "Storms", "Life", "Tides", "Destruction" and "Wrath". Each symbol etched onto the fan by an owner. Wrath was the symbol made by Moxxi. Although the two last symbols are completely contradicting the first three, the symbols only upheld that of which the sage in possession of the fan stood for. Although Moxxi didn't display just her emblem, but all five of them, making her a very unique wielder of Arashi.

Abilties:

1: Arashi Zensen has the capability to enhance the damage and destructive power of suiton and fuuton techniques by 10 when the user uses the mentioned elements (suiton and fuuton) in unison with Arashi Zensen, but when done, it also takes 20 more chakra points on top of however much chakra the original technique(s) takes up.

2: Because of the chakra and force it can dish out because of the way it is made, it is able to push wind and water techniques that are short range, to mid range, and mid range techniques, to long range.

3: Using two hands, the user is able to channel suiton and fuuton chakra into Arashi Zensen and fan Arashi up and down, quickly producing an artificial "tsunami". More specifically: big waves of water and a windy environment. This technique is capable of altering an entire environment to a sea-like state. It costs 30 chakra to do so, takes up two technique slots and cannot be used before the user performs any other technique in that turn.

4: Like most fans made for combat, Arashi has the basic capability of blocking/deflecting certain ninja tools such as kunai, shuriken, senbon, etc. and is also sturdy enough to be used against an opponent with a sword when folded. However, it can get broken and be unusable for the duration of a battle (not an event) if hit with an A rank technique or above directly.

5: One of Arashi Zensen's other abilities is the ability to create artificial clouds of wind and able to rearrange or move already existing clouds. Swinging Arashi towards the sky, the user of Arashi can create up to five artificial clouds of wind costing 4 chakra each. These artificial clouds can be used for techniques that need clouds for a technique to be performed. After using an artificial cloud for a technique, the cloud disperses and is no longer usable. The user is able to create only five clouds during a battle. Whether it be five at one time or separated throughout the battle, once five clouds have been created, no more clouds may be created after the fifth cloud. Creating clouds, whether it be one or five, only takes up one technique slot out of the usual three. To rearrange or disperse existing clouds, it costs 10 chakra and takes up a technique slot.

6: The user of Arashi Zensen is able to summon an animal with it with the stroke of blood on the fan itself. With this, the user may swing Arashi whichever way, and have the summon blown by wind to a certain location or ride a gigantic wave to a certain location.

Note: Can only be given to others by Moxxi

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Declined: First of all this is borderline DNR. The only reason i'm not doing it is because I assume you put a lot of work into it.
So: you're just stacking thing after thing. 6 abilities?
First one is basically a rip-off of the nb swords. pushing away wind and water techs due to sheer force of the weapon... just no. You're not getting a free way to just push away everything coming in your way. Creating a tsunami is meh. Pretty generic. No rank on it either, so hardly any counterplay there (abilities don't take the rank of your CW. Specify it!). Nr 4 is the usual, Nr 5 is a nice one, when combined with rain. Nr 6 has been used in so many other CWS before so leave that out. Also: no damage booster on elements with a CW.

Summoning Animal: Barracudas
Scroll Owner: Moxxi
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: The barracuda is a ray-finned fish known for its large size and fearsome appearance. Its body is long, fairly compressed, and covered with small, smooth scales. The barracuda is a fish of the genus Sphyraena, the only genus in the family Sphyraenidae, and is found in tropical and subtropical oceans worldwide ranging from the Eastern border of the ocean of Kirigakure to the ocean of Amegakure. Although barracudas vary in size, most barracuda summons are as big as a modern shark that is an adult. Barracudas can be summoned accompanied with a body of enough water to fill an entire field. Barracudas have basic abilities such as great swimming speeds that are slightly faster than that of a shinobi's swimming speed, can chomp down on enemies and objects with their strong jaws and many sharp teeth. Because of the barracudas' natural upbringing in water, they typically have an affinity to water techniques, but this doesn't limit them to water techniques.

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Declined. An entire field of water... Really? You're not going to fill an entire field of water to get your summoning inside all together in the contract. You can use an existing pool of water (if it is stationary, not just a jutsu) or create it maximally up to mid range from you. And even that is a lot, for only a contract.

Resubmitting:

(Katon: Yaketsuku yōna Himitsu Tekunikku: Hōhei Sanpu Shotto) - Fire Release: Searing Secret Technique: Artillery Scatter Shot
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This fire technique has two phases. First phase: The user will weave the dog and boar hand seals and exhale chakra into the air whilst molding the chakra into fire. It creates a heatwave that excites the molecules in the sky long range from the user, so much so that the air bursts aflame into a great fireball that further moves into the sky. Then, with another hand seal, the user may split the fireball into up to 8 baseball sized projectiles, in any geometrical shape, which the user guides towards any location needed, dropping to the floor with the power of several paper tags each. This fireball may be divided over the course of two turns, instead of dropping all 8 on the same turn. It doesn't cost additional chakra but it does require you to spend one move in the following turn. The user of this technique may make the fireball drop and explode as a whole or as individual fireballs, and any combination of the two. The big fireball is A rank, each division lowers the rank ( 2 B rank, 4 C rank, 8 D rank ).

Note: Choosing to make the fireball(s) drop and explode takes up one technique, regardless of how many are dropped, throughout the turn.
Note: Once the initial technique/phase is placed, the user is able to perform other techniques, with the exception of Water techniques, until the whole fireball is dropped ( if it's still being guided, it doesn't count as dropping ).
Note: This technique can only be taught by Moxxi

Declined
Several things need clearing up. Why is the range short-long when you clearly create this in long range? Do all the projectiles remain in place until you choose to spread it and attack with it across turns? Lastly, it's an A-Rank. Add restrictions.

(Acionna no Kiba) - Fang of Acionna
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Arashi Zensen is a folding fan, similar in shape to that of Temari's fan but entirely different in terms of usage, techniques and looks. Arashi is a fan that was crafted by the first of five Sages of the Sea and passed down through the generations of the Sages of the Sea. Therefor, the fan landed in the hands of the current Sage of the Sea, Moxxi, who was given a title from a close friend. The title was "Sage of the Beautiful Blue". The fan has a dark blue shade and is pitch black in color and has a pitch black trim that depending on what angle you're looking at it from, changes to an extremely bright blue. When opened, the fan shows five, bright blue emblems that almost look like they are glowing. Symbols for things such as "Storms", "Life", "Tides", "Destruction" and "Wrath". Each symbol etched onto the fan by an owner. Wrath was the symbol made by Moxxi. Although the last two symbols are completely contradicting the first three, the symbols only upheld that of which the sage in possession of the fan stood for. Although Moxxi didn't display just her emblem, but all five of them, making her a very unique wielder of this weapon. On top of all of this, she hated the fan's original name and renamed it in favor of the Gallo-Roman water goddess, deeming it as Acionna no Kiba, also known as the Fang of Acionna.

Abilties:

1: Because of the chakra and force it can dish out because of the way it is made, it is able to push the wind and water techniques the wielder performs with it that are short range, to mid range, and mid range techniques, to long range.

2: Using two hands, the user is able to channel suiton and fuuton chakra into the Fang of Acionna and fan it up and down, quickly producing an artificial "tsunami". More specifically: big waves of water, which are A rank and go up to mid range and creates a windy environment. This technique is capable of altering an entire environment to a sea-like state. It costs 30 chakra to create the initial wave and 10 more chakra to change the terrain. Changing the terrain takes up two technique slots and cannot be used before the user performs any other technique in that turn. The initial A rank wave, shall the user use it by itself (and not in unison with the second wave for the environment change), can manifest several giant spikes capable of impaling and severing an opponent.

3: Like most fans made for combat, the Fang of Acionna has the basic capability of blocking/deflecting certain ninja tools such as kunai, shuriken, senbon, etc. and is also sturdy enough to be used against an opponent with a sword when folded. However, it can get broken and be unusable for the duration of a battle (not an event) if hit with an A rank technique or above directly.

4: The Fang of Acionna also has the ability to create artificial clouds of wind and able to rearrange or move already existing clouds. Swinging the fan towards the sky, the user of the fan can create up to five artificial clouds of wind costing 4 chakra each. These artificial clouds can be used for techniques that need clouds for a technique to be performed. After using an artificial cloud for a technique, the cloud disperses and is no longer usable. The user is able to create only five clouds during a battle. Whether it be five at one time or separated throughout the battle, once five clouds have been created, no more clouds may be created after the fifth cloud. Creating clouds, whether it be one or five, only takes up one technique slot out of the usual three. To rearrange or disperse existing clouds, it costs 10 chakra and takes up a technique slot.

5: By swinging the Fang of Acionna downward with both hands, the user may create a close range shield/gust of wind able to deflect ninja tools and send B rank and below fire techniques back at the opponent at one rank lower than the original technique. This also serves as an insulator shield to nullify B rank and below lightning techniques. This "parry", regardless of what it is being used for, may only be used twice per battle and costs 20 chakra to perform.

Note: Can only be given to others by Moxxi

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✦ Declined, first off 5 abilities in a weapon? Let's tackle each ability individually. The first extends the range of jutsu is a no; some techniques have short ranges for reasons, chakra is a big part of it. The second ability is a dual element ability, channeling both wind and water through the fan to release a tsunami from it and to say that it is capable of altering the field and is only 10 chakra to do is foolish, as you're basically saying it's like a C rank jutsu to cover the field, the ENTIRE field at that. The third says that it can deflect weak ninja tools and things, but then says it will break when hit by an A rank jutsu or higher, which basically means it can tank B ranks and lower as well, giving it defense against most jutsu. The fourth ability is essentially several wind based war fan jutsu, some canon already. The fifth is ridiculous; for one, the first half resembles a canon wind fan jutsu as well, not to mention it resembles Adachi Wind Wall CJ and is retarded to think it can counter B rank and below Fire as well as B rank and below lightning. That by itself contradicts the power of the wind jutsu because for it to counter B rank wind, it would need to be at least C rank wind, but for it to counter B rank fire, it would need to be A rank wind. ✦

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(Fuuton: Aeolus no Voido) - Wind Release: Aeolus' Void
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Weaving three hand seals, the users quickly emits chakra to a specific, pinpoint location and forms the chakra into heavy winds. Using these heavy winds to create a giant tornado, the tornado acts as a vacuum and sucks up any material in range of it therefor the user his/herself must be out of the range of the tornado. The suction has a long range reach, but is able to cover short-mid range area and whatever material the tornado sucks up gets shot back at the opponent in pieces and chunks of debris at one rank lower than the opponent's technique. This technique follows the basic elemental strengths and weaknesses and can also suck up material that is non-chakra infused.

Note: Can only be used four times
Note: Can only be taught by Moxxi

Declined, do not resubmit
Way too similar to Danzo's summoning. Brings nothing unique to the table.

 

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(Meiton : Kyūnyū insatsu) - Dark Release : Inhaling Print
Type: Defence/Offence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The User places their palm against a solid surface and releases their dark chakra making a print almost like their Dark Mark onto that surface fuelled with chakra from using Inhaling Maw beforehand. Once the print is made on the surface it stays there for a few turns acting like sort of a trip mine - if a jutsu passes by into short range of the print, it absorbs that said jutsu and becomes fuelled with even more chakra making it glow a light purple. The Print doesn't disappear just yet as it has one more use and that is when an enemy steps within short range of that Print it explodes into light blue flames, engulfing and severely burning anyone within five meters of it.

- Up to two prints can be made per use, power is split between them
- Print lasts 4 turns on the field
- Can only be used 4 times
- Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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Seems simple enough, needs a few clarifications. Exactly how large and noticeable is this print? And if two prints are used, what do you mean that power is split between them? I don't think such a thing is possible if you place them far apart from one another. Also, rank restrictions regarding Dark Release as well as elemental restrictions?

(Doton : Rohirrim no raido) - Earth Release : Ride of the Rohirrim
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user performs a series of 4 hand seals and slams his hands on the ground, which begins to rumble noticeably throughout the whole battlefield. From the earth at about 8 meters from the opponent Horses rode by men rise from the ground and charge towards the opponent or specified target, the men at the front of the charging horses have spears and will skewer specified target before trampling them with their large horses. The Men and horses behind the line of spears launch a volley of arrows rain down from above and then is followed by the brute force of the charge - the Volley of Arrows is A-Rank and so that means the Horses and Spears are that of A-Rank too. The Volley of arrows can be launched whenever the user wills it. Once the Horses have finished with their charge they will crumble to pieces of rock, arrows and spears will remain on the field.

The user can at any time make another hand seal and the horses and men will suddenly become a sticky mud that will cover anything near to them in the sticky stuff, binding it onto the earth. Because of the momentum gained from the charge, the sudden transition to mud will go forward a few meters like a wave and then cover the large area of ground as the large army of Horses stretched back 10 meters and is 15 meters wide. The Mud Source is that of A-Rank.

- Can only be used 2 times
- If the jutsu is used close to the user, he can create an Earthen Horse for himself to charge forward with the army
- Np S-Rank Earth jutsu can be used in the same turn or the next.
- Must be taught by LonelyAssassin

Declined
Whoa, whoa. Hold on here. Too many things going on at once. I totally get what the whole "Lord of the Rings" feel you're going with this, but the way it is now is just going to cause issues during fights. First things first, do these horses charge in one direction only and to a certain degree? You say they disappear after they charge, but what if the opponent chooses to relocate elsewhere? Do they simply stop at where their target originally was? Secondly, that mud part...I'm very hesitant about that. Eight meters from the opponent isn't enough space for momentum to build up and send ten to fifteen meters worth of mod surging at the opponent. Lastly, create an earthen horse for self? Uhhh, no.

(Futon : Gara no sagi) - Wind Release : Hilt Deception
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user channels wind chakra into his sword, the then throws his sword so that it sticks into the ground and the bottom of the hilt points into the direction of the target. The Wind is released out of it in the form of a small, sharp twisting stream that drills straight through the opponent.

-Can only be used three times
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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(Futon : Gara no sagi) - Wind Release : Hilt Deception
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user channels wind chakra into his sword (can also be a Kunai, Spear or anything similar with a blade a hilt/handle), the then throws his sword so that it sticks into the ground and the bottom of the hilt points into the direction of the target. The Wind is released out of it in the form of a small, sharp twisting stream that drills straight through the opponent. The user if they haven't directly fused Wind into the blade can do it from range by performing a hand seal, the Wind will then shoot from the blade's hilt afterwards.

-Can only be used three times
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

Approved
Somewhat hesitantly. A different size blade could mean different amounts of chakra stored and expelled. I trust you to use this update wisely.

 

[Wanheda]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Futon: Erumesunokutsu ) - Wind Release: Shoes of Hermes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather wind chakra and send it in the air around his/her foot area. Through the wind chakra, the user will shape it around the shoe, or anything they wear on their feet (slippers, shoes, sandals, nothing, etc.). Immediately after, two wings on each ankle is materialized, taking the form of winds, of course, which all together equals four mini-wings made of compressed winds. They are about the size of a hand, and they give the user the ability of flight by flapping its wings, as if it were normal wings. Mid-air, the user is capable of flying at normal base speeds, as well as maneuvering skillfully and with precision. The ability of flight can be used for various things, like avoiding attacks coming from below, or gain an aerial advantage. On the ground, the user gains a 2x movement speed from the wind chakra coated around their feet; they are essentially 'gliding' rather than running, which would provide them with fluid and faster movements on the ground. Whilst this technique is active, the user can only perform wind techniques.
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Usable four times with a two turn cooldown between each usage
Note: Each usage lasts three turns or until deactivated
Note: Can only be taught by Draigo

Declined, do not resubmit
Overdone way too many times. Sorry.

(Fuuton: Anemoi no uzu) - Wind Release: Anemoi's Vortex
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 (-15 per turn)
Damage: N/A (+20 to fire technique used)
Description: Through a single hand motion, the user will generate the wind currents around the target and create a seemingly harmless tornado of wind around the target(s). Anyone caught inside will be lifted above the ground, but will sustain no damage from the tornado itself. They will be spun viciously and very quickly, making it hard for them to focus on a target, as well as move around due to the powerful forces of the wind. The user can move the tornado around the battlefield, but wherever it is, it can only go up to mid-range of the user. Because of the rapid and powerful winds, any fire techniques used and applied onto the winds would receive a slight increase in damage and size due to the wind feeding the flame and seemingly 'merging' with the flame to create a wind-fire tornado combination. This, however, can only be used in conjunction with B rank or higher fire techniques, anything lower would simply extinguish the flame before it merges with the vortex.
Notes and Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used three times with a two turn cooldown. Tornado lasts two turns
Note: No wind techniques higher than S-ranks for the same turn
Note: Can only be taught by Draigo

Declined
Need a few clarifications. If you generate wind currents that are seemingly "harmless" around your current, how do they suddenly generate so much power that your victim is then violently spun around? I see the reasoning and motive behind this technique, the execution seems flawed, however.

(Katon: Kumon no honō) - Fire Release: Flames of Agony
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-15 to the user)
Description: The user will position their dominant arm outward, along with their palm, while the opposite arm faced away from their back, with the palms facing the same direction. The user will gather a massive amount of fire chakra in their dominant arm, while releasing a light flame from their opposite hand, which would act as a support and prevent them from flying off once he/she releases the attack from the dominant hand. Once the light flame has been created, the users' dominant hand will glow a bright redish-yellowish and a massive blast of flames taking the form of phoenix with a fifty meter wingspan and a thirty meter body. The wings and beak of the phoenix is manipulated to be as compressed as possible, allowing the fire phoenix to have a certain degree of tangibility to those areas, which would allow for those areas to pierce through and deal damage from force as well as the usual damage inflicted from the heat. The flames are sent out as a stream rather than a projectile, and it is connected to the users' dominant hand through the phoenix's tail. Because of such a high intensity of flames concentrated in one hand, the users' dominant hand will sustain burning damage.

Essentially this with a few differences.

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Notes & Restrictions:
- Can only be used once
- Can only be taught by Draigo
- The user will receive damage because of the intensity of flames concentrated in one hand. The hand will receive burns and the user will be unable to perform handseals for the same and next turn.

Declined
Erm...alright. So, the description is throwing me off a bit in terms of imagery, so I'll assume that you're doing what the guy (insert Hitman Reborn main character name that I forgot?) in the GIF is trying to do, but replacing the final action with a phoenix instead. Firstly, the size of the phoenix is simply unrealistic as of itself. Thirty meters? Yeah, sure, if you want fried human arm as well as exhausted chakra reserves. Also, given the nature of this technique, it just seems to be a massive "explode everything at once with over 9000 power" with not much creativity or thought put behind it. In fact, your drawbacks make it seem more like a F-Rank. Yeah...

 

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(Genjutsu:Helios)-Illusionary Arts|Helios
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the ram handseal as If he is creating the appearance of a bird with his hands. The enemy will then see a screeching eagle fly by which triggers the genjutsu. Immediately after seeing the soaring eagle the enemy will see a ray of light that descends from the sky and entraps the enemy within a 2 meter radius of what looks to be a hollow cylindrical and condensed beam of light. Since the light only blocks the enemy from seeing what is on the outside he can see the small area he is enclosed in. Because the illusion creates a condensed beam, the enemy believes in its physical properties and feels the condensed beam exert its pressure as it shrinks. This shrinking can be noted by the enemy seeing the enclosed space get smaller. They would have limited movements as they believe they are trapped within the area of the hollow beam. As the beam continues to shrink the enemy will pass out from the mental stress due to the intense pain as they experience unimaginable pressure from all around them.

Must be taught by Omega
Can only be used 2 times.
No Genjutsu above B rank next turn

✦ Declined, unique handseal is a noooo. ✦

(Genjutsu:Helios)-Illusionary Arts|Helios
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the snake handseal and cast an illusion upon the oppoenent. The enemy will then see a screeching eagle fly by which triggers the genjutsu. Immediately after seeing the soaring eagle the enemy will see a ray of light that descends from the sky and entraps the enemy within a 2 meter radius of what looks to be a hollow cylindrical and condensed beam of light. Since the light only blocks the enemy from seeing what is on the outside he can see the small area he is enclosed in. Because the illusion creates a condensed beam, the enemy believes in its physical properties and feels the condensed beam exert its pressure as it shrinks. This shrinking can be noted by the enemy seeing the enclosed space get smaller. They would have limited movements as they believe they are trapped within the area of the hollow beam. As the beam continues to shrink the enemy will pass out from the mental stress due to the intense pain as they experience unimaginable pressure from all around them.

Restrictions
-Must be taught by Omega
-Can only be used 2 times.
-No Genjutsu above B rank next turn

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✦ Approved ✦
Dead Zone
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user will channel their smoke deep into the pores of the earth by slamming their hands on the ground. Once it is channeled then it will seep out of the earth almost like a dense fog that rises up to the lower body of the enemy and user. The eerie fog envelops the entire battlefield, but this is not its true purpose. Ghost like skeletons swarm the enemy at the users command. These skeletons will also move to defend the user when the enemy attacks by colliding with the attack sent toward the user.

Restrictions
-Can only be used by smoke bios
-Must be taught by Omega
-Can only be used once
-Dead Zone is only active for 3 turns.

Declined
Firstly, add a handseal or two before channeling chakra. And secondly, you need to clarify certain aspects of this technique. If it's active for so long while being able to summon ghost skeletons at any point and anywhere, this needs to be toned down severely, not to mention it goes up to long range and covers the entire battlefield. Clarify the usage of the skeletons and give it limitations - can they work offensively? If only defensively, there needs to be restrictions and emphasis on the rank and limitations of it.

Blood Moon Dust
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will take pepper smoke packets or bombs and release the smoke by clapping their hands together. The pepper smoke will be released in all directions in an expanding cloud that causes severe irritation to the senses of the enemy. To be specific the eyes and nose are the main sensory areas effected. To avoid its effects the user will manipulate the smoke so that there is a safe radius around themselves and the pepper smoke.

Restrictions
-Must be taught by Omega
-Can only be used by Smoke bios
-The pepper smoke lingers for 2 turns or until countered
-The effects of the pepper smoke lasts for 1 turn
-Can be used 4 times

Declined, do not resubmit
Believe something like this has been done before.

 

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(Genjutsu:Kuracchi) Illusion Arts: Clutch
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user instills a powerful Genjutsu that causes the opponent to experience two large arms that sprout from the bottom of their shoulder blades. The arms form as a whole, not in parts. The arms are long enough to reach up and place their hands on the victim's mouth in the blink of an eye and, with the same speed, pull them back, causing the victim to feel as though their neck and back were broken. The jutsu's damage actually comes from mental fatigue. It also hinders the victim's speed for one turn due to feeling as though their back and neck were broken.
~Can only be taught by Riker Slade~
~Reduces the victim's speed by half~
~Usable three times per battle~

(Genjutsu: Akiresu no yūki) Illusion Arts: Courage of Achilles
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: A technique meant to be used to hinder the user's opponent. The user instills a powerful genjutsu on his target. The Genjutsu works by inducing a burst of bravery in the target, reducing the ability to think rationally due to their newfound sense of bravery lowering their ability to concentrate and their sense of caution by making them extremely cocky. Due to being unable to concentrate and reason as normal, they become unable to mold chakra to perform techniques beyond A-rank.
~Can only be used twice per battle~
~Lasts for two turns~
~Can only be taught by Riker Slade~

Slifer, the Sky Dragon
Type:Summoning Animal
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A(Venomous bite reduces the user's health by 10 and chakra by 20 each turn it is active)
Description: Slifer, the Sky Dragon is a powerful viper bound to the Snake contract. Slifer is red in color, with a black underbelly marked by grey stripes. Like all snakes, it lacks arms and legs. Slifer is peculiar for two striking features: a crest in its head and two mouths. The first, upper layer of its mouth is usually closed, only opening for Slifer's Katon. Slifer's lower mouth is filled with razor sharp teeth that are as strong as steel. Like all vipers, Slifer is venomous, capable of inserting the powerful venom into any living creature through biting it. Due to its powerful teeth, Slifer is capable of biting through almost any material, though stronger materials will render its teeth ineffective. From its upper mouth, Slifer has the ability to use any Katon jutsu up to S-rank so long as the technique is physically able to be launched from his mouth. Slifer's secondary ability is the ability to change size. Slifer can take a form measuring 10 feet, where it is as large as the average viper. Using chakra, Slifer can grow to the size of the largest summoning animals, measuring up to 70 meters long. Slifer can resist A-rank and below techniques, but successive A-rank techniques or S-rank and above will damage it too much, causing him to vanish. On the top of Slifer's head is a crest, in which up to three people can stand or sit in, allowing Slifer to be used for traveling purposes.
~Can perform Katon techniques up to S-rank~
~Venomous bite is a short ranged attack that can only be used when in its shrunken form. The bite infects the opponent for three turns, sapping away at their life force and by extension, their chakra. If bitten, the victim cannot use techniques above A-rank~
~It's bite counts for B-rank in damage, and cannot penetrate armors or other layers A-rank or above. Slifer's body itself is capable of resisting A-rank and below techniques.~
~Biting to release venom, changing its size and its Katon counts towards the summoner's three jutsu per turn limit~
~Lasts for five turns and can only be summoned once~
~Can only be summoned by Riker Slade~

✦ All Declined, resubmit when unbanned ✦

 

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Sanyu's Sakurifaisu / Sanyu's Sacrifice
Type: Custom Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: After a valiant effort at protecting her child during a clash between clans in the Water Country, Sanyu Hozuki of Ganmi bloodline, died after failing to use the hydrofication technique successfully, something that only the elite of the clan could do. Although the technique failed, it was strong enough to protect her child. Sanyu's body stayed in a hydrofication liquid-slime state, unable to turn back, nor function normally. Knowing the great potential their son had as a swordsmen, Sanyu's husband, Kiomono took it upon himself to forge a large blade with his wife's hydrofication remains within the core of the blade. The blade was crafted out of a very rare alloy that could not conduct electricity. The blade's core was created out of the finest of crystals, allowing the liquid-slime to be displayed with great clarity through the entirety of the sword. The sword itself was eight inches wide, consisting of a single sided bladed edge. The sword's blade was five feet in length, having the bandage covered handle being one foot, making the overall length of the sword six feet. The end of the handle consisted of something very similar to a kunai's ring, however this one being shaped in the form of a small rectangle, enough to fit two fingers comfortably. A small chain of six inches in length was attached to the rectangular ring, something that could be used to handle the blade in various ways. At the end of the chain laid a small crest with the symbol of Water, displaying their origins. After the blade's completion, it was stored away for five years and given as a present on Ryogetsu's 17th birthday. It was then that something miraculous began to happen. The crystalline container holding his mother's essence began to glow a bright heavenly blue as it slowly drained chakra from the wielder, her son. It was then that Ryogetsu could sense his mother through the blade itself, it's as if they were once again connected through their bonds. After countless and endless sessions to refine his swordsmanship, Ryogetsu began to unlock the abilities that his mother bestowed upon him.

Abilities:

- By constantly feeding -10 chakra per turn, the sword is able to produce a mist of water vapor in a short range radius around the user. Just like the Hidden Mist technique, this mist can vary in terms of thickness, being able to manipulate it at will with the influx of chakra released, although it will always remain at -10 no matter how thick or thin the mist is. The mist is infused with both the user's chakra as well as his mother's, causing for sensor and Dōjutsu users to be confused through the mix in chakra signatures.

- Although chakra is infused within the mist, it does not bestow any sensing capabilities and the user will be affected by it's thickness, being unable to see through it. The same could be said for the enemies, being unable to see the user through the mist surrounding him.

- The user is able to manipulate the mist at will, creating small weapons made of concentrated vapor, aka water. Due to the mist's properties, the water constructs can not be made too big, having the limit of up to an average sized bear if the entire mist is concentrated. The constructs can range from hands of water, to other limbs around the mist to aid the user, or even projectiles like senbon, kunais, shurikens etc. This technique is equivalent to B rank and the user will be restricted to using only water release up to C rank while the manipulation is in place. If projectiles are released, they are able to travel up to mid range, however their strength would be lowered to that of a C rank, and so would it's chakra usage. (Chakra points corresponding to B and C ranks.)

- Three times per battle, the user is able to release their mist outwards and wrap around a technique B-Rank or below. By using the special properties of the Hidden Mist Village's Chakra draining techniques, the user will be able to use their mist to completely drain the chakra from opposing techniques, either dispersing them or causing them to stop. Logic is to be applied when facing things such as projectiles and such as they would simply continue without chakra inside of them.

Notes:
- Only two limbs can be created with a single usage of the ability, and if so their power would be divided equally.
- The elemental weaknesses and strengths apply to the draining ability of the mist.
- If the drain is used, the mist can not be reformed for two turns after usage.
- All technique count as official techniques except the activation of the maternal mist.

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✦ Declined, parts of this sword would collide with existing mist Water jutsu, notable ones that manipulate mist to form spikes and weapons. Also, your history basically says that you have a Hozuki sealed in a sword. I cant approve that without you being a Hozuki, not Gamni with Hozuki parentage. I'm also not a big fan of chakra draining jutsu either, though the last part you write is similar to one of Kiri's Village CJ. ✦

(Sairento Uchitoru Jutsu) - Silent Strike Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 10 (- 2 per turn)
Damage: /
Description: By using a similar concept to the "Silent Homicide Technique" the user will focus chakra around a projectile-based weapon or even something like the blade of their sword, allowing them to muffle the sound that it makes. For example, being able to drown out the sound as projectiles pierce through the air, or when the blade of a sword cuts through as it is being swung. The chakra coating lasts for as long as the user is releasing chakra into it or for an entire turn should they release it through a projectile.

✦ Declined, I dont think its possible to muffle the sound of something by just channeling chakra around it. It'd also likely be a Sound jutsu, I actually think there is already one like this. ✦

 

[Zaphkiel]

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(Jiton: Hanpatsu-ryoku)- Magnet Release: Repulsive Force
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: With this technique the user will be able to manipulate a Raiton technique using his hand to release a shield like intangible force of magnetic chakra, having no effect on a human body whatsoever, that messes with the electromagnetic forces the lightning naturally carries, bonding it's particles together. THis technique only works on focused lightning techniques as they're molecules are more uniformed and as such easier to manipulate. Depending on the rank the following countermeasures can be made:
C ranked and below: The user can dispel the technique completely by splitting the very electrons and protons that compose the lightning to completely eradicate it.
B ranked: The user can bend the lightning directly towards the attacker with a slower speed than it originally came
A ranked: The user is able to redirect the lightning to the left, right or directly upwards of his postion but not back at the opponent
S ranked: The user is only capable of merely pushing the targetted jutsu to his left or right, slightly changing the trajectory, saving his skin. If the jutsu in question has a broad damage radius, then within reason, the user can be damaged by its after effects.
Note:
- Can only be done 2x
- No other Jiton technique can be used during the turn performed
- Can only be taught by Elyon
- Requires a turn cooldown

Declined. The range bothers me. If you can do it on a jutsu up to mid range, it means you can just stop redirect a jutsu that an opponent uses at mid range. If you can use it once it comes int close range of you, I would see it making more sense.

(Jiton: Hanpatsu-ryoku)- Magnet Release: Repulsive Force
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: With this technique the user will be able to manipulate a Raiton technique using his hand to release a shield like intangible force of magnetic chakra, having no effect on a human body whatsoever, that messes with the electromagnetic forces the lightning naturally carries, bonding its particles together. This technique only works on focused lightning techniques as the molecules are more uniformed and as such are easier to manipulate. Depending on the rank, the following countermeasures can be made:
C ranked and below: The user can dispel the technique completely by splitting the very electrons and protons that compose the lightning to completely eradicate it.
B ranked: The user can bend the lightning directly towards the attacker with a slower speed than it originally came
A ranked: The user is able to redirect the lightning to the left, right or directly upwards of his postion but not back at the opponent
S ranked: The user is only capable of merely pushing the targetted jutsu to his left or right, slightly changing the trajectory, saving his skin. If the jutsu in question has a broad damage radius, then within reason, the user can be damaged by its after effects.
Note:
- Can only be done 2x
- No other Jiton technique can be used during the turn performed
- Can only be taught by Elyon
- Requires a turn cool down

Approved
I like it! Use it well.

(Tokei shikake no dageki) Clockwork Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will advance on the enemy, closing the distance in one powerful lunge using the left leg to anchor himself. He'll then bring the right leg, which would be hanging behind, towards the opponent's ankle(s) in a short, horizontal instep kick sending them off their feet while his left hand in the form of a Shuto strike or a punch will crash down on the opponent's neck or head area from the user's upper left towards the lower right in a diagonal motion. This is done simultaneously and sends the opponent's body spinning in a clockwise motion with great force, capable of up to 4 revolutions spinning on the spot. This blow also knocks them unconscious for a complete turn if performed perfectly.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown

Declined
Asides from the "unconscious" aspect, exactly what is special about this that you can't achieve in freeform?

(Jisshi mohan)- Ten Finger Paragon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will stomp the ground with his dominant foot sending a surge of Doton chakra through it, this will cause segmented chunks of earth to jut up from the ground in a 30 foot radius of the user, ten to be exact each about the size of 4x4m cube with 5 on the user's left and 5 on the user's right. In a fluid motion the user will then span each fingers of each hand while stretching his arms outward in an X shape (right over left) before himself. All this while keeping track of all ten boulders simultaneously through the use of his Doton chakra still embedded in them. A thin string of super resilient web will shoot from each of his ten fingers through the use of his chakra which is closely linked to the spider contract, these web strings will attach to the boulders with their adhesive tips allowing a fundamental level of control. The user will then undo the X pattern his hands had created by yanking the respective arm to its rightful position while pulling the rocks which are now connected via strings. This will cause the rocks to come flying towards each other- and the opponent at such an alarming rate they could be mistaken for earthen bullets. As they collide, the amount of energy being released is enough to crush blade and bone alike making it a very lethal technique capable of affecting multiple targets.

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Note:
- Can only be used by members who possess the spider contract
- No spiders summons must be on the field
- Can only be done 2x

Declined
It's technically two techniques in one. Also, I understand vaguely where you're coming from with this, but I'm having a hard time understanding how ten strings attached to rocks can all be caused to move in one directional and meet in one place. That's not how gravity works, and not especially with so many objects at once.

 

[Joker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Kurasshu Hame) l Wind Release: Coliding Panels
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user channels his chakra into the adjacent spots of his opponent along the ground. Creating two solid and sharp panels made of fuuton, 3m x 3m in size sharp enough to easily cut apart flesh. One is created on the right and the other on the left of the opponent just above the ground. The pannels come together quickly, attempting to cut the opponents feet off, before crashing into one another, when they crash they shatter and send sharp, solid shards of wind chakra flying in every direction up to short range from the collision spot.


Note: Usable twice
Note: Two turn cooldown before it can be used again.
Note: Can only be taught by Joker

(Fuuton: Kyuutai Touza) l Wind Release: Orb of Current
Type: Supplementary/ defensive
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user channels his fuuton chakra all over himself quickly creating a layer of wind chakra all over himself. The chakra layer is thick but greatly condensed and extremely strong. The layer quickly begins to expand and grow taking on the form of a orb with the user being on the inside of it. The sphere is 2 meters in radius and levitates slightly off the ground and moves via a thrust of wind chakra at the running speed of the user. The sphere although moving at same speed as the user is quite powerful. It can push through many objects like tree's, pieces of earth blocking the path, etc. When the layer expands from the skin into the orb, it is capable of pushing away objects that may be burying the user like fallen rocks or trees. It can also be used to strike somebody, dealing blunt force damage capable of damaging bones by making it collide into them at running speed.The orb can thrust in any direction however requires constant focus and the user cannot use any other jutsu while the sphere is in use. The orb is a light green colour and easy to look through.

Note: Orb lasts upto 3 turns
Note: Usable twice a battle
Note: Requires 2 turn cool down before use
Note: No S rank or higher wind jutsu next turn
Note: Can only be taught by Joker

(Ooi no Kumori) - Shroud of Shadows
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: After exploring several methods of augmenting their abilities of stealth, Joker developed a special-made outfit (hooded cloak, gloves and shoes) tailored to those who wish to specialize in the art of assassination. The outfit is made of a special, water-proof material which produces neither sound nor friction, allowing for silent footsteps and the ability to move without generating noticeable disturbances. The pigmentation of the attire is a light blue, specifically the colour of mist. This makes the wearer even harder to see while surrounded by mist or while inside of a water source. The clothes also mask the user's scent and partially conceal chakra emission (in a similar manner to the chakra suppression technique), making it harder for sensory ninja to discern or pinpoint the exact location of the user. The real special ability of this outfit is exhibited only when the cloak comes into contact with substantial amounts of moisture (e.g. rain, mist, submerging one's self in water). This will result in both the cloak and the wearer becoming invisible (Similar to Hiding in Camouflage) as long as contact with the source of moisture is maintained. However, this invisibility will not be initiated due to naturally occurring air moisture.

Note: Can only be Taught by Joker

✦ All Declined, resubmit when unbanned✦

 

[Nathan]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Meiton: Tekunikaru Shintou) - Dark Release: Technical Osmosis
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very rare type of dark release technique only seen by very little people. This technique uses the users diamond marks on their hand to appear on the skin over every Tenketsu on the body. This effectively reverses the normal function of a tenketsu, and instead of releasing chakra, chakra can be effectively absorbed through them. It allows the user to absorb the same as the technique Dark Release: Ultimate Inhaling Maw that come within a range of five feet of the user while still allowing for normal movement.
Notes:
- Once activated, stays active for three turns.
- Follows the elemental strengths and weaknesses.
- While this technique is active. The user cannot use any other absorbing based dark techniques.
- Can only be used three times per-match.
- Must wait one turn before using again.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

✦ Declined, this basically is a way to get around a major weakness of Dark Release, being you have to absorb chakra into the seal on your hand. I cant allow this ✦
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Sakugen | Reduction
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Long (Only if the chain is used.)
Chakra: 40 (+30 for every beam of chakra used.)
Damage: 60 (+20 for every beam of chakra used -5 when the user absorbs raw chakra)
Description:
A blade of the finest quality forged by Castiel and named for its raw chakra stealing abilities. It is exquisite in both form and use, a dual edged blade that mimicked the shape of a roaring flame, a hilt of obsidian, and a long chain hidden within the hilt which would only respond to his chakra. This blade was developed to steal the raw chakra from opponent with every connecting attack, and store them within, making it a “living” but not sentient blade. He crafted it of Crusentu, a metal darker than night and near indestructible. Due to its large size it is worn on Castiel's back and when swung it can deal both slashing damage and blunt bashing damage. With each swing that connects with the opponent chakra is taken and absorbed by the sword. Once raw chakra has been absorbed into the blade it may be used to produce beam of energy that can cut through steel and fly off the blade with each slash, increase the cutting power of the blade, or provide Castiel with chakra. Within the hilt of Sakugen is a chain that can be used to extend the range of the swings and enables Sakugen to be used as a projectile weapon that may be retrieved. The chain has a limit of extending to a distance of twenty meters, and is able to retract at a speed of half a second per meter, meaning it takes ten seconds to retract Sakugen after the chain has been extended to the maximum length which creates a large window from an opponent to counterattack.
Restrictions & notes:
- Using Sakugen and it's absorbing raw chakra both count as 1 of the 3 moves
- Sakugen is on Castiel's back at all times.
- Sakugen can't absorb anything but raw chakra.
- Can only use the absorbing raw chakra from opponent(s) ability three times per-match.
- User takes five damage when absorbing opponent(s) raw chakra.
- Chain only extends to 20 meters and takes 10 seconds to retract the chain/sword.
- Can only be wielded by Nathan and his Castiel bio.

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Getsushō | Moon-Piercer
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Getsushō looks like a katana with an extremely long blade, reminiscent of a nodachi. It sports a red and black coloured, western-looking hand guard and has a traditional yellow and red hilt-wrapping flanked by golden-coloured plates on the hilt, which ends in a very ornate, carved pommel. The sheath belonging to it is lacquered red. Because of its unusually long blade, Getsushō is noted to be difficult to handle, something which is further enhanced due to the hardness of its blade also making it heavier than a normal katana; as such, much training and physical strength are necessary to wield it properly in battle. Getsushō's hardness, however, makes for strong blows and a similarly strong defence, rarely, if ever bending from blocking techniques and even able to absorb the force of an enemy's attack, which can be redirected back at the enemy in the form of a tornado-like blast.

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Getsushō's primary strength, as shown in the hands of Nathan, is its ability to store large amounts of chakra channelled into it at the start of an battle by its wielder. Utilizing this chakra, Nathan can lessen the chakra he uses from his own reserves in battle (The user is able to channel up to S-ranked fire chakra in Getsushō), allowing him to continue fighting for longer periods of time. Particularly, he stores fire natured chakra in Getsushō, and then channels wind chakra into it during a fight, combining these elements for a special form of chakra flow she calls the Wind of the Fire Sword (Hiken no Kaze).

Secondary abilities - Wind of the Fire Sword utilizes Getsushō ability to store chakra over long periods of time, and then combines this stored chakra with chakra she flows into the blade during the heat of battle. Nathan accumulates chakra of the fire nature inside of Getsushō, until the katana possesses a great enough reserve of that chakra, which is necessary for the technique to be used without exhausting the chakra supply. When Nathan flows his wind chakra into the blade, it works together with the stored chakra; first, flames erupt around it, and then the wind comes forth, taming the flames and condensing them against the blade like another layer of metal, just that this one displays an intense orange glow. This has multiple effects: for one, the wind strengthens the fire, resulting in a super-heated blade which can easily meld rock and cauterize the wounds inflicted with it; it also dramatically increases the cutting potential of Getsushō.

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Hiken no Kaze: Issen Hōshutsu/Wind of the Fire Sword: Flash Burst - Utilizing both the fire and wind stemming from her special form of chakra flow, Nathan releases the chakra at the tip of Getsushō's blade as a crescent-shaped projectile at an intended target, appearing like a orange glowing shock wave. It is, however, also possible to release the chakra as thin, barely noticeable waves with precise timing (track-able by normal eyes but with slight difficulty, doujutsu/sensory will be able to see it perfectly), allowing Nathan to increase his cutting range dramatically to cut multi-story opponents such as large summonings with ease.

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Notes & Restrictions:
- Absorbing the force of an enemy's technique counts as a move, and can absorb up A-rank techniques, only. Redirecting also counts as a move, the redirection of the attack gains one rank from what was absorbed.
- The storing of the fire chakra ability counts as a move, and must be done at the start of the match, and it can be stored there for as long as the user needs. But needs to be filled at the starting of every match.
- Wind of the Fire Sword: Flash Burst counts as a move and has a long ranged reach. Can only be used with the Wind of the Fire Sword transformation, and may only be used twice while in said state.
- Wind of the Fire Sword transformation lasts a max of four turns. After that the sword reverts back to it's standard form, and will not be able to channel any more chakra into it for the rest of the match. Also will be unable to use any fire or wind techniques for two turns after the revert.
- Each ability can only be used twice with a one turn cool down each.
- May only be wielded by Nathan, and who he chooses.


☼ Declined ☼

The damage should be N/A. The absorption/redirection isn't approvable, in the first paragraph it sounded like it was only for clashing weapons, but in your notes it makes it sound like its available for every technique. The rest of the abilities needs ranks.
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Getsushō | Moon-Piercer
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Getsushō looks like a katana with an extremely long blade, reminiscent of a nodachi. It sports a red and black coloured, western-looking hand guard and has a traditional yellow and red hilt-wrapping flanked by golden-coloured plates on the hilt, which ends in a very ornate, carved pommel. The sheath belonging to it is lacquered red. Because of its unusually long blade, Getsushō is noted to be difficult to handle, something which is further enhanced due to the hardness of its blade also making it heavier than a normal katana; as such, much training and physical strength are necessary to wield it properly in battle. Getsushō's hardness, however, makes for strong blows and a similarly strong defence.

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Getsushō's primary strength, as shown in the hands of Nathan, is its ability to store large amounts of chakra channelled into it at the start of an battle by its wielder. Utilizing this chakra, the user can lessen the chakra he uses from his own reserves in battle, allowing him to continue fighting for longer periods of time. Particularly, he stores fire natured chakra in Getsushō, and then channels wind chakra into it during a fight, combining these elements for a special form of chakra flow she calls the Wind of the Fire Sword (Hiken no Kaze).

Shottogan Inpakuto | Shotgun Impact - Another one of Getsushō's primary strength is when the blade comes into contact with his opponent, the user can focus their own chakra into his blade and release it. The result is equivalent to the effect of a shotgun blast, ripping apart the nearby flesh. A brief burst of fire also comes from the blade while the jutsu is executed, making the user look as if they had fired a shotgun. This ability is equal to that of a B-rank technique. This ability can be used without the need of transforming into Wind of the Fire Sword form.

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Hiken no Kaze | Wind of the Fire Sword utilizes Getsushō ability to store chakra over long periods of time, and then combines this stored chakra with chakra. The user flows into the blade during the heat of battle. The user accumulates chakra of the fire nature inside of Getsushō, until the katana possesses a great enough reserve of that chakra, which is necessary for the technique to be used without exhausting the chakra supply. When the user flows his wind chakra into the blade, it works together with the stored chakra; first, flames erupt around it, and then the wind comes forth, taming the flames and condensing them against the blade like another layer of metal, just that this one displays an intense orange glow. This has multiple effects: for one, the wind strengthens the fire, resulting in a super-heated blade which can easily meld rock and cauterize the wounds inflicted with it; it also dramatically increases the cutting potential of Getsushō. This ability is equal to that of a S-rank technique.

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Hiken no Kaze: Mōka Tsujikaze | Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind - It uses the fire chakra stored inside Getsushō to release a trail of flames around the blade, which then enhances with wind chakra for attacks. In its most basic form, the user just slashes in the direction of the desired target, resulting in the creation of intense flame waves that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. The user can also completely surround an area with the flames, forming something small like simple walls to trap enemies, or even a massive twister which draws opponents in with its winds to burn them to death; the user can also utilizes this ability defensively, engulfing the immediate area around themselves in such fire. This ability is equal to that of an A-rank technique.

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Hiken no Kaze: Subeta Honoo Kuuki | Wind of the Fire Sword: Sword of Flame & of Air - Using the fire chakra stored within Getsushō the user releases it, and while that is happening the user also channels wind chakra into it, the chakras wraps around the sword in a spiral pattern. While the chakras are on the sword, the chakras move at high speeds around the blade. This is the source of the Wind of the Fire Sword: Sword of Flame & of Air power. The user would then preform a powerful stab while simultaneously releasing all of the chakra at once. If an opponent is hit by it, the foe will receive major damage while being launched off their feet. This ability is equal to that of an B-rank technique.

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Notes & Restrictions:
- The storing of the fire chakra ability does not counts as a move, but must be mentioned in the users first turn of the match, and it can be stored there for as long as the user needs. But needs to be filled on the users first turn.
- Shotgun Impact ability may only be used four times per-match, and has a short ranged reach.
- Wind of the Fire Sword transformation lasts a max of four turns. After that the sword reverts back to it's standard form, and will not be able to channel any more fire or wind chakra chakra into it for the rest of the match. Also the user will be unable to use any fire or wind techniques for two turns after the revert.
- Wind of the Fire Sword: Flash Burst & Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind abilities may only be used twice per-match and are only usable while in the wind of the fire sword form, and has a long ranged reach, each.
- Wind of the Fire Sword: Sword of Flame & of Air ability may only be used twice per-match, and is only usable while in the wind of the fire sword form, and has a short range reach.
- May only be wielded by Nathan, and who he chooses.

✦ Approved ✦
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(Gurifin Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hanuke) – Griffin Summoning Technique: Toothless
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Toothless is young among the Griffin population. Yet his young age does not hinder his abilities in combat nor his personality or intelligence. Toothless is an intelligent Griffin capable of easily communicating with his summoner and his fellow Griffins. He boats a friendly personality with his dry humour, teasing, and playfulness. In his home Toothless is very popular with his friends and children. All appreciate his playful behaviour. In heated combat however Toothless allows his intelligence to take over and put him into a calm and collected state. Toothless boasts a large size with a wingspan of 8.5 meters. His feathers are nearly all black allowing him to easily blend in with dark surroundings such as caves and the night sky. In flight, he is incredibly graceful and can fly as fast as any Griffin regardless of size. As a mature Griffin Toothless is highly capable of manipulating his chakra like any other living being. Toothless is noted for his unique saliva and its properties when he infuses his chakra into it. His saliva offers both offensive and supplementary purposes to the summoner allowing them to access either of its abilities depending on the situation. The first use is the usage of the saliva as a powerful adhesive. Normally, water can take on a glue like state. However, this takes that to the next level. The adhesive properties of Toothless’s saliva make it almost an instant glue (similar to Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field but slightly different) when it connects with the target. The glue is incredibly powerful and makes it nearly impossible to break without the use of a high ranked external technique (S-rank raw chakra based technique, or A-rank elemental technique). In this state his saliva also has a burning property to it, this burning is produced by the 50 different types of bacteria that Toothless has in his saliva. While the glue hardens quickly it will also burn the target causing 2nd degree burns on contact causing immense pain. Toothless’ saliva can also take on a supplementary use as well allowing him to heal his summoner when he covers the summoner’s wounds in the saliva. The saliva is not an accurate or precise heal. It will simply stop the bleeding of surface wounds, anything deeper than that the saliva will have no effect on. It cannot repair severed limbs or anything of that degree. Simply it can stop any immediate danger and allow the summoner to fight on longer. Toothless creates this supplementary saliva by dividing the bad types of bacteria from the good ones, so he doesn't harm the user. Toothless’s final ability is one that allows him to change the colour of his black feathers to anything he wishes allowing him a potent camouflage which takes advantage of his surroundings. This is incredibly versatile and makes it so anyone outside of short range of Toothless makes it impossible to see him without the use of dojutsu or sensory.
Notes:
- Can only be summoned once.
- Will remain on the field for a maximum of four turns.
- Toothless’s saliva ability counts as two different abilities – an offensive burning glue or a supplementary healing technique. Both are S-Rank techniques. Both techniques have a mid-range reach. Each technique can be used twice.
- The camouflage technique is an A-Rank technique. Lasts for two turns unless he uses another one of his abilities.
- Each one of Toothless abilities count as a move.
- Must have signed the Griffin contract.

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☼ Pending ☼

Leaving for another Mod, not sure about all that bacteria.

✦ Declied, yeah 50 types of bacteria is too much. Also be sure to review Lili's CC to make sure this bacteria and such of the saliva doesnt collide with any of her stuff. Also, healing is something that is limited mostly to medical arts, even if minor in it's application. I dont generally approve healing abilities (didnt notice this last time) though in this case, its minor enough to approve. Also, the part about needing an external source to break it is basically saying that if it hits the target, they arent able to break it as their defense would be internal, as it would come from them likely. It would require a third party jutsu to break it, which is too much, given the wording. Also, even if he changes his feathers, through movement, he will cause a ripple like effect that would easily be noticeable should one look or pay attention. ✦
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(Gurifin Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hanuke) – Griffin Summoning Technique: Toothless
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Toothless is young among the Griffin population. Yet his young age does not hinder his abilities in combat nor his personality or intelligence. Toothless is an intelligent Griffin capable of easily communicating with his summoner and his fellow Griffins. He boats a friendly personality with his dry humour, teasing, and playfulness. In his home Toothless is very popular with his friends and children. All appreciate his playful behaviour. In heated combat however Toothless allows his intelligence to take over and put him into a calm and collected state. Toothless boasts a large size with a wingspan of 8.5 meters. His feathers are nearly all black allowing him to easily blend in with dark surroundings such as caves and the night sky. In flight, he is incredibly graceful and can fly as fast as any Griffin regardless of size. As a mature Griffin Toothless is highly capable of manipulating his chakra like any other living being. Toothless is noted for his unique saliva and its properties when he infuses his chakra into it. His saliva offers both offensive and supplementary purposes to the summoner allowing them to access either of its abilities depending on the situation. The first use is the usage of the saliva as a powerful adhesive. Normally, water can take on a glue like state. However, this takes that to the next level. The adhesive properties of Toothless’s saliva make it almost an instant glue (similar to Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field but slightly different) when it connects with the target. The glue is incredibly powerful and makes it nearly impossible to break without the use of a high ranked internal technique (S-rank raw chakra based technique, or A-rank elemental technique). In this state his saliva also has a burning property to it, this burning is produced by the very small amount of fire that resides within his mouth and due to that, the fire and his saliva merge together when Toothless needs it. While the glue hardens quickly it will also burn the target causing 2nd degree burns on contact causing immense pain. Toothless’ saliva can also take on a supplementary use as well allowing him to heal his summoner when he covers the summoner’s wounds in the saliva. The saliva is not an accurate or precise heal. It will simply stop the bleeding of surface wounds, anything deeper than that the saliva will have no effect on. It cannot repair severed limbs or anything of that degree. Simply it can stop any immediate danger and allow the summoner to fight on longer. Toothless creates this supplementary saliva by dividing the bad types of bacteria from the good ones, so he doesn't harm the user. Toothless’s final ability is one that allows him to change the colour of his black feathers to anything he wishes allowing him a potent camouflage which takes advantage of his surroundings. This is incredibly versatile and makes it so anyone outside of short range of Toothless will have great difficulty in seeing him, if one is to pay attention though, they will be able to see the ripples that Toothless will cause though the use of movement.
Notes:
- Can only be summoned once.
- Will remain on the field for a maximum of four turns.
- Toothless’s saliva ability counts as two different abilities – an offensive burning glue or a supplementary healing technique. Both are S-Rank techniques. Both techniques have a mid-range reach. Each technique can be used twice.
- The camouflage technique is an A-Rank technique. Lasts for two turns unless he uses another one of his abilities.
- The fire within Toothless' mouth cannot be used for attacks on its own, it can only be used in conjunction with the saliva.
- Each one of Toothless abilities count as a move.
- Must have signed the Griffin contract.

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✦ Approved ✦

 

[Akuma]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ruri'iro Sakikurue) Split and Deviate | Rod Bone
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: - (40 if used as attack)
Description: The technique follows the concept of Sawarabi No Mai, on a much smaller scale. By stomping either foot against the ground, the Kaguya is rapidly able to grow and shoot bone rods from the ground, no larger than an arm's length. The technique has imaginable uses, such as using it as an alternative method to create a bone sword instead of having to manually remove it from their body. Otherwise using it as spikes to perforate targets from below. These can shoot from the group at diferent angles, thus it can be create to the side of the user but shot at the target.
*It cannot be used in consecutive turns, with atleast a 1 turn interval between uses.*

✦ Declined, needs a usage limit ✦

(Ruri'iro Sakikurue) Split and Deviate | Rod Bone
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: - (40 if used as attack)
Description: The technique follows the concept of Sawarabi No Mai, on a much smaller scale. By stomping either foot against the ground, the Kaguya is rapidly able to grow and shoot bone rods from the ground, no larger than an arm's length. The technique has imaginable uses, such as using it as an alternative method to create a bone sword instead of having to manually remove it from their body. Otherwise using it as spikes to perforate targets from below. These can shoot from the ground at different angles, thus it can be created to the side of the user but shot at the target.
*It cannot be used in consecutive turns, with at least a 1 turn interval between uses.*
*Can be used four times per battle*

Approved

(Tora Kyuushuu) - Tiger Raid
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Executed by performing a simple spinning low kick to throw the target off balance, the user then delivers a barrage of kicks following the initial one. Throwing a second at the stomach and then a subsequent barrage of low and high kicks at the target, each kick striking faster than the previous one. Finishing with a powerful, multi-hit flying side kick (by stretching the leg, the user can strike twice with the same motion). Tiger Raid is available for regular Strong Fist users at 6 hits, Specialist at 7 hits, with the final kick being empowered by a vibrant chakra aura (adding +5 damage) and finally, a Taijutsu Master capable of dealing a 7 hits, the last being a more damaging flaming kick, in which the leg is briefly coiled in flames (adding +10 damage).

Pending, leaving for Chrrissssuuu
✦ Declined, everything outside of the last sentence can be done using Leaf Great Whirlwind at 30 damage, and being an EIG user, you gain a passive +10 damage. Dropping leg weights add another +20, giving it 60 damage, the same as this one. The last sentence is pointless because it implies that the entire jutsu is done without chakra but by adding 30 chakra at the end if you're a specialist, it causes +5 damage and the leg being wrapped in flames collides with a few taijutsu CFS and CJ that make that part unapprovable ✦

(Doton: Dokishindou Tsuyoishukensha) - Earth Release: Wrath of the Earth Sovereign
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Performing four handseals and then focusing a concentrated amount of chakra in his hand, the user will make a fist and slam it onto the surface of the ground to cause an vicinity up to long range to tremor. Distributing dominant shockwaves as to the horizon, knocking down trees if any are in the landscape. This may also be initiated with a stomp of their feet instead, after performing the handseals. Anything that has contact with the ground affected by the jutsu will be flung into the air. The ground within the radius is then made to ascend upwards many meters as a result creating a large mesa (unstable wave-like protrusions of earth). Once the mesa is created, the user will execute one more handseal which will cause the landmass to rupture into countless amounts of debris, nonetheless still holding its shape, using immense chakra reserves to cause the numerous amount of rocks to collide down back to the gruond. Thus causing a decimated landscape which will be irreparable. The destructive force is enough to knock down otherwise built or summoned structures of equal rank.
*The user can only use two jutsu in the turn he uses this technique. (this one and 1 other)*
*Cannot use any other S rank earth in the next two turns*
*Must wait four turns prior using for the second time*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

Declined
Issues with this submission. Firstly, the sheer power and reach of this technique alone deems it as a F-Rank, not a S. Need limitations on exactly how far and wide on the land the shockwaves can affect.

 

[Penguin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kakushi Supaidāātsu: Dōbutsu-teki Gōmon ♔ Hidden Spider Arts: Animalistic Torture
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user begins gathering their chakra and then proceeds to spew out paramount quantities of web through their mouth or fingers. Soon after, with the use of chakra, the web begins to form a huge animal that can reach the size of a boss summon or many small animals of the user's choice. A neat feature to this jutsu is that the animal or animals the user makes from the web can do the same thing the real animal can, while also having the same sticky qualities of web itself. So if the user creates a bird of web, the bird would be able to fly through the sky at the foot speed of the user, or a mole would be able to dig through the earth if chakra was not infused in it. All the animals that are made of web are able to passively spew out web from their bodies to stick onto surfaces or wrap the opponent up to keep the opponent stationary and restricted.

♔ Can only be used by Spider Contract Signers
♔ Can not use any spider ninjutsu during this turn
♔ Can only be used three times per battle
♔ Can only be taught by Penguin.

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✦ Declined, will be a canon jutsu made released like this very soon. ✦

Raiton: Ten Kara no Pengin no Namida Ω Lightning Style: Penguin's Tears from the Heavens
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After performing three hand seals that consist of the Rat -> Tiger -> Bird hand seals, the user channels a vast amount of raiton chakra ten meters above the opponent. By using shape manipulation, the raiton chakra begins to form ten two by two meter penguins made of solid raiton. After the penguins are formed, they shoot down from the sky, hitting everything within five meters of the opponent, leaving nothing but a field of crackling electricity left from it's wake. This makes it to where the only safe spot to avoid this technique is being six meters or so from the desired location.

Ω Can only be used three times per battle
Ω No raiton over A-rank for the next two turns
Ω If the user is caught within the field of electricity, they will be paralyzed for a turn
Ω Can only be taught by Penguin.

Declined. The jutsu is focused lightning and all of a sudden the field of lightning is unfocused, causing the opponent to be paralyzed? Rework it to be unfocused in the first place (and thus paralyzing) or remove the note where it paralyzes the opponent for a turn.

Katon: Furēmingupengin no Būtsu Ω Fire Style: Boots of the Flaming Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn of sustaining)
Damage: N/A (+15 to leg taijutsu, +20 in conjunction with wind based attacks)
Description: The user forms the bird hand seal as they gather a good amount of katon chakra. After gathering the katon chakra, the user channels their katon chakra into both of their feet. By using shape and nature manipulation, boots of fire form around the user's feet and reach all the way up to their shins. Due to the immense heat of the boots, they grant the user a couple of advantages in combat. First and foremost, the boots increase the user's leg taijutsu attacks, simply due to the heat when the opponent gets kicked. The boots could also ignite air based attacks, giving them additional power because the wind would be lit. Another cool perk of the boots is that if the user steps on a muddy surface, the mud would harden near instantly where they wouldn't sink, due to the boot's heat. Lastly, if the user kicks at the opponent, embers from the boots would branch off and go towards the opponent. If the opponent were to be hit with this technique, the embers would light their clothes on fire and eventually burn them to a crisp. This ability has a maximum range of five meters, or can hit anything up to short range within reason.

Ω Can be used twice per battle
Ω Can last up to four turns
Ω No forbidden rank katons in the next two turns
Ω Can only be taught by Penguin.

Declined. +10 maximum, and the wind jutsus won't help you. The wind would ignite the fire out of your control, and hit you on body. I already find it questionable that you would not be hurt by the fire in the first place, but it is possible due to your chakra being in it. The thing is, once you stop channeling chakra into it, the fire becomes regular fire, and it would hurt you. In a close quarter fight, this doesn't matter, but once you release the fire to counter an opponent with an element technique, it does. Also: this wouldn't have a range of five meter, but only short range as in CQC. State that in the notes as well.

Raiton: Ten Kara no Pengin no Namida Ω Lightning Style: Penguin's Tears from the Heavens
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After performing three hand seals that consist of the Rat -> Tiger -> Bird hand seals, the user channels a vast amount of raiton chakra ten meters above the opponent. By using shape manipulation, the raiton chakra begins to form ten two by two meter penguins made of unfocused raiton. After the penguins are formed, they shoot down from the sky, hitting everything within five meters of the opponent, leaving nothing but a field of crackling electricity left from it's wake. This makes it to where the only safe spot to avoid this technique is being six meters or so from the desired location.

Ω Can only be used three times per battle
Ω No raiton over A-rank for the next two turns
Ω If the user is caught within the field of electricity, they will be paralyzed for a turn
Ω Can only be taught by Penguin.

✦ Declined, so ten penguins form around in short range and 10 meters above the opponent. Do they all fall as in, forming a circle around him or do they fall one by one, like actual rain, hitting the opponent or something, and then creating the crackling lightning? If this lands in a 5 meter radius, why does one need to be 6 meters away to be safe? ✦

Katon: Furēmingupengin no Būtsu Ω Fire Style: Boots of the Flaming Penguin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn of sustaining)
Damage: N/A (+10 to leg taijutsu)
Description: The user forms the bird hand seal as they gather a good amount of katon chakra. After gathering the katon chakra, the user channels their katon chakra into both of their feet. By using shape and nature manipulation, boots of fire form around the user's feet and reach all the way up to their shins. Due to the immense heat of the boots, they grant the user a couple of advantages in combat. First and foremost, the boots increase the user's leg taijutsu attacks, simply due to the heat when the opponent gets kicked. Another cool perk of the boots is that if the user steps on a muddy surface, the mud would harden near instantly where they wouldn't sink, due to the boot's heat. Lastly, if the user kicks at the opponent, embers from the boots would branch off and go towards the opponent. If the opponent were to be hit with this technique, the embers would light their clothes on fire and eventually burn them to a crisp. This ability is used in close quarters, nothing longer.

Ω Can be used twice per battle
Ω Can last up to four turns, then disperses
Ω No forbidden rank katons in the next two turns
Ω Can only be taught by Penguin.

✦ Declined, very certain this has been done before, boots of fire to walk on lava or mud. Izuna or Bisha or someone did it, I cant recall who though. Anyway, extended use of this should still cause injury, even if minimal 1st degree burns. Besides that, No S rank and higher Fire after this ends, not forbidden. ✦

 

[Souji]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu: Maindochāji) Ninja Arts: Mind Charge
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (x2 to the jutsu applied on)
Description: An application of precise chakra control, the user will concentrate the chakra within their body, creating a special “reserve” of sorts within their system. This is done subtly and goes unnoticed unless the opponent has sensory abilities or is a dojutsu user, making this a non-offensive action that happens almost immediately. The chakra serves to supplement chakra that’s molded for basic elemental techniques. At any desired moment, whether in the same turn or sometime later in a fight, the user can unleash this reserve, inputting it into already molded chakra for a jutsu, doubling the damage output of the technique. It does not change any other properties of the jutsu such as its speed or performance.

- Can only be used twice per battle
- Pooling the chakra as a reserve counts as a move when performed
- In the turn the damage modifier is applied, the user can only perform one other technique for a total of two moves. Applying damage to a jutsu does not count as a move
- Only works on D to S-rank jutsus that incorporate the basic 5 elements; no elemental KGs or CEs. However, moves that integrate basic elements or combinations (raiton sword jutsus, Earth/Fire combos, etc) can use this
- Cannot be applied to Forbidden Rank techniques
- Cannot be applied to non-offensive jutsus
- Can only be taught by Souji

✦ Declined, while I like the idea behind this, it doesn't work out like this for a few reasons; The most notable reason is that added chakra =/= added damage. Now, that's generally how we do it when creating jutsu that perform damage boosts, understandably, but it doesnt always work like this. Examples are jutsu that increase chakra flow into jutsu but dont necessarily increase damage. Some jutsus cause the opponent to release extra chakra with their attacks but still dont increase the damage as well. In addition to this, I couldnt allow x2 damage as well as that could have some rather exploitable outcomes (i.e. jutsu like S ranks that do 120 damage being doubled). I cant approve this lol ✦

 

[RuckenTM]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Uchiha Zoetic ni Cipher no roddo
Type:Weapon
Rank:N/A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:-10 for release hand-seals activated (-20 total), Short-Range: N/A, Mid-Range:-20, Long Range:-30 (-X to -100 Max. per chakra deposited)
Damage:
Description:Ikiru at the age of 12 traveling through the woods, as he leap to breach to breach the slipped and landed heavily onto the ground which knocked him out. Thus awaking from this fall, he noticed a black like metal for the rock stood right in front beside him which prevented him from seeing the whole rod laid away from him. Though as he had fallen he wondered if his mission was over than his injures which he couldn’t recall in his fall. “Whoa, I really did fall” as he tried to reach for it, a pile of bones engulfed it as he was not shocked of it and as he saw it wasn’t a rod or a be metal as he took hold of it as he had pulled the bones away from in eagerness, “hmm” wondering how a metal could be quite light and not even rust had enliven onto it. Standing up and stretching, he noticed a note as he reached to open it and he read; “‘…I’m enslaved onto this black path of zoetic, pass onto ram, row into serpent, and hide unlike a dragon, cipher is like I die…’” as he stood there in the moment decoding the meaning, “hmm, Uchiha rod of Cipher to Zoetic Ikiru picks the item and heads off onto his mission as his duty required of him.
Abilities:
The sword has a seal implanted into it as it isn’t required for the user to unlock it (while locked and drawn results in 50 chakra drained per battle & none of the effects applied); Ram->Serpent->Dragon as the moment this is pact is accomplished, the black-blade Katana requires the user’s blood onto it. Thus when the user has accomplished this task, he/she is to repeat the hand seals required before backwards. When that task is finished the sealed katana will transform into black Scythe which we will grant the user the ability extend from mid to long range at a cost of A-rank jutsu max. While as metal, this Scythe is quite light. The user of this Scythe has the ability to manipulate the shape and size of the blade on the Scythe to fit their needs. Given it’s demanding of chakra, the user can deposit up to 100 of his/her chakra into the Scythe.
Notice & Restrictions:
-User cannot use any of the abilities of the Scythe when it’s sealed.
-Notice-if different blood is applied during the ritual the user wielding the Scythe will not access the abilities
-The user can keep Scythe in any desired state, but once revered to the original state, the user will have to perform the unsealing ritual.
-Once the Scythe returned to its original state (katana) all collected chakra is released thus starting again from zero.
-If the katana is used when it’s not sealed the release of the Scythe will be cost-less.
- Scythe to be released requires 10 chakra.

✦ Pending, leaving for someone else, Im too confused reading this lol ✦

Lightning Style: Sandāōbu
Type:Defensive/ Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Medium Range
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The User releases a sphere ration chakra in their hand which he/she makes a form of a 2inch-like ration balls. The lightening orbs can be shot into place for hours on, floating without motion. When the orbs make contact with a moving subject, they burst of lightening that shocks anything in 2 meters and paralyzing it.
Note:
The technique will not burst when it makes contact with a subject, unless it moves.
The sphere ration balls will stay in position even with a storm, bursting only when made contacting with a moving subject.
The sphere ration balls will be only active for 3 hours.
The victim will be paralyzed for 2 Minutes, Ineffective against a lightening specialized bio.

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✦ Declined, has been done before. Also, some pointers: The names have to have both an English and Japanese name ( Like Lightning Style: Thousand Birds - Raiton: Chidori ). Jutsu that use Real life time descriptions, such as minute/second, are generally not allowed as well. ✦

 

[Vegeta]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton - Ikkaku wa jutsu no tatakaimasen!) Water Style - Narwhal battle no jutsu!
Type:Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Only usable by signers of the Nawhal contract, the user bites their thumb and presses into into his palm, summoning on his hand the blowhole from a Narwhal. After making 4 seals, the user can release molded suiton chakra from their body out the blowhole that quickly takes the form of a huge Narwhal, twice the size of Narley the Narwhal. The water Narwhal rises into the air before attempting to flop down on the enemy, crushing them and drowning them under intense pressure.
~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down
-The blowhole lasts 2 turns, and can produce either this attack, or water usable for B rank and below Suiton jutsu, but using the Narwhal attack will make the blowhole disappear from the user's palm
-Must have signed the Narwhal contract

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✦ Declined, for one, link to the contract would be nice, that or at least your signing it. Plus, this would be a summoning/human hybrid, something that's not allowed. ✦

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(Raiton - Dōbutsu aigo Ken) - Lightning Style: - Humane Fist
Type: Supplemental
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Defining pleasure itself as "freedom from pain in the body and freedom from turmoil in the soul" birthed the creation of the Humane Fist jutsu. The pleasure center is the set of brain structures, predominantly the nucleus accumbens, which will produce great pleasure when stimulated electrically. By performing the Tiger seal, the user will send a small amount of their Raiton chakra into the targets brain, particularly the pleasure center, allowing the enemy to "Experience Heaven before death", alleviating any pain.

~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
✦ Declined, has been done before, sorry ✦

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(Genjutsu - Yuugen Sho) - Illusionary Arts - Phantasmal Fists
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (if the strike connects)
Description: The user begins by molding chakra and sending it into an opponent's system, putting both hands palms out facing the enemy triggering the illusion. They will then begin to circle both hands outwards like making a sideways 8 as the user disappears from view, only the encircling hands remain as the background goes black and more hands appear encircling the area 360* horizontally around the target. In reality, the user swiftly maneuvers to behind the enemy, molding Futon chakra to the hands and strikes, thrusting with both hands together like a blade hard enough to pierce bone.

~Notes~
-Can be used 2x's per battle
-Must be taught by -Vegeta

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✦ Approved ✦

 

[Gααrα]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Būmubōru) | Earth Release: Boom Ball
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms two quick handseals and concentrates a large amount of chakra in the ground anywhere in range. With a simple motion of his hand, he will raise a huge boulder (size of Giant Chouji) from the ground that would levitate with his command. The user can use this boulder to attack and/or defend against the opponent's techniques. The area from where the boulder was created, will leave a giant creater behind. Anytime he wishes, the user can close his fist and make the boulder explode, violently with high pressure, that would destroy everything (according to elemental interactions) within mid-range from the boulder. The boulder would turn into small and long spikes, when it blasts, to impale the opponent and pierce through his body. The boulder can be swung around with the user's hand movements, in all directions and it would move with the speed as fast as a ninja can run.
Note:
Can only be used thrice.
Cannot use this consecutively
Cannot use Earth techniques above S-Rank in the same turn.

✦ Declined, has been done before ✦

Katon: Hi No Ryouken - (Fire Release: Hounds of Fire)
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Rank : A
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : Gaining inspiration from Earth Style: Mud wolves, this jutsu was created to form an invisible defense against an unsuspecting opponent. The user will form a single handseal and release his katon chakra in a radius of 5 metres around him/her. The chakra activates the moments the source of the foreign chakra (the opponent) comes close to it (2 meters). The moment the opponent is near, the chakra would emerge from the ground to shape itself in the form of two huge hounds made of fire (Size of Pein's Dogs). These hounds will pounce on the opponent and bite off his flesh withv their huge sharp teeth, cause huge burns and unmeasurable pain.
Note:
The hounds stay active for 2 turns after they emerge.
The chakra stays in the ground for 3 turns.
Can only be used thrice.
Can only be taught by Waaiz


Declined: change the size of the dogs. 2 dogs of the Animal path's dog size is too much. Change it to regular lions or something like that. If you would have based your jutsu on the mud wolves tech, you would see they aren't huge either.

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Ikari no Roddo | (Rod of Fury)
Type : Weapon
Rank : A
Range : Short
Chakra : N/A
Damage : N/A
Description : Rod of Fury, is an ancient weapon first used in the first world war. The noble family that first used this weapon passed it down to their successors and it has now found its new master - Waaiz. Rod of Fury is a one meter long rod, pure metal black in color. The rod has a diameter of 2 inches which makes it easy for it to be held in hand. Due to being made of some unknown metal, this rod is actually indestructible. One end of the rod has a semi-spherical end, while the other end is sharp and conical. The rod has in it, some hidden compartments which stores innumerable needles which cannot be distinguished due to its black color. Five times in a battle, by channeling his chakra into this rod, the user can release these barrage of hidden needles from the sides of the rod, none of which are larger than 2 inches. These needles can reach up to mid-range distance when shot and can easily pierce through a huge stone/rock. Additionally, the rod can be channeled with the user's elemental chakra to give it certain properties.
Fire: By channeling his fire chakra, the user can coat the rod in fire. It causes additional damage by giving burn marks at the area of contact.
Lightning: By channeling his lightning chakra, the user can coat the rod in lightning. It causes additional damage by paralysing the limb at the area of contact and/or breaking through Earth defenses of appropriate rank.
Wind: By channeling his wind chakra, the user can coat the rod in wind. It causes additional damage by providing additional cutting ability to the rod. It can be used to fight against lightening swords.
The beauty of this rod is that chakra can be channeled into this rod remotely, and hence giving the user a wide range of options to use it creatively. Also, the needles launched when the rod is being coated with elemental chakra, will have the elemental properties to them.
Note:
- Channeling chakra into the rod is an A-Ranked move. 30 chakra, 60 damage and lasts 3 turns.
- Can only be taught by Waaiz

Declined: most of it is ok, but 5 times using the needles is too much as you're giving it an elemental coating, and the needles need to be visible when fired and 2 inch in the heat of battle is little. Next to that, shooting the needles should cost mana (or coating them), not channeling the chakra into the staff. Take out the reference of the first world war, this is the narutoverse.

Katon: Hi No Ryouken (Fire Release: Hounds of Fire)
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Rank : A
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : Gaining inspiration from Earth Style: Mud wolves, this jutsu was created to form an invisible defense against an unsuspecting opponent. The user will form a single handseal and release his katon chakra in a radius of 5 metres around him/her. The chakra activates the moments the source of the foreign chakra (the opponent) comes close to it (2 meters). The moment the opponent is near, the chakra would emerge from the ground to shape itself in the form of two huge hounds made of fire (slightly larger than African Lions). These hounds will pounce on the opponent and bite off his flesh with their huge sharp teeth, cause huge burns and unmeasurable pain.
Note :
The hounds stay active for 2 turns after they emerge.
The chakra stays in the ground for 3 turns.
Can only be used thrice.
Can only be taught by Sound..

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Ikari no Roddo | (Rod of Fury)
Type : Weapon
Rank : A
Range : Short
Chakra : N/A
Damage : N/A
Description : Rod of Fury, is an ancient weapon first used used in the First Great War. The noble family that first used this weapon passed it down to their successors and it has now found its new master - Waaiz. Rod of Fury is a one meter long rod, pure metal black in color. The rod has a diameter of 2 inches which makes it easy for it to be held in hand. Due to being made of some unknown metal, this rod is actually indestructible. One end of the rod has a semi-spherical end, while the other end is sharp and conical. The rod has in it, some hidden compartments which stores innumerable needles which cannot be distinguished due to its black color. Three times in a battle, by channeling his chakra into this rod, the user can release these barrage of hidden needles from the sides of the rod (costs a move, A rank, 30 chakra, 60 damage) , none of which are larger than 2 inches (due to the diameter of the rod) . These needles can reach up to mid-range distance when shot and can easily pierce through a huge stone/rock. Additionally, the rod can be channeled with the user's elemental chakra to give it certain properties. These needles are visible by naked eyes if you see properly.
Fire: By channeling his fire chakra, the user can coat the rod in fire. It causes additional damage by giving burn marks at the area of contact.
Lightning: By channeling his lightning chakra, the user can coat the rod in lightning. It causes additional damage by paralyzing the limb at the area of contact and/or breaking through Earth defenses of appropriate rank.
Wind: By channeling his wind chakra, the user can coat the rod in wind. It causes additional damage by providing additional cutting ability to the rod.
It can be used to fight against lightening swords.
The beauty of this rod is that chakra can be channeled into this rod remotely, and hence giving the user a wide range of options to use it creatively.
Also, the needles launched when the rod is being coated with elemental chakra, will have the elemental properties to them.
Note :
# Channeling chakra into the rod is and A-Ranked move. 30 chakra, 60 damage and lasts 3 turns.

✦ Both Approved ✦

 

[Flash]

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(Genjutsu: Hausuhae no shinapusu) | Illusion Arts: Synapses Of The House Fly
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When a person touches something really hot, the temperature receptors in the skin sense the high temperature and sends nerve impulses via sensory neurons to the spinal chord and then to the motor neurons. The motor neuron will then send a message to the muscles in the arm telling them to contract so that the hand can untouch the object. This is a quick reflex system deployed by the human body and the muscles involuntarily perform the action. This particular genjutsu is based on the very same concept. By channeling chakra into the opponent's brain, the user can cause the opponent to feel similar effects in his body which would make the opponent to perform the respective involunatry reflexive reactions for it. For example, the target may suddenly feel his sword to be hot and pull his arm back while opening his palm to release the blade. Another example would be that the opponent would feel a sharp pain at the back of his elbow, more like an insect bite or a sting with a needle/senbon which would force him to push his elbow forward. The pain felt due the illusion does not cause any mental damage to the target. The pain can however last for a millisecond to more than few seconds and will depend on the user how he wants to manipulate the genjutsu. The justu does not limit the user by just giving him the ability to cause minor pain. The core ability of this jutsu relies on the fact that it can force the opponents to perform certain small reactions. Hence, creating irritation in the target's eye, forcing him to rub his eye etc. is also possible.
Note:
Can only be used three times.
Can only be taught by Azráel


Declined. Overall it's ok, but the last part where you state that it can force an opponent to perform a certain small reaction, is a no go. You can create an illusion which causes a reaction (=indirect) but you can't force an action (=direct). What if an opponent is very hardy, and has undergone rigorous training and can withstand most pain. This illusion might not work then, for example. Get the difference? Take that part out (I would do it myself, but I'm unsure if you still want the jutsu then).

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(Kage no Sento: Akuma no fujiyu amuzu) | Shadow Combat: Crippled Arms of a Demon
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is one of the abilities that the practioners of Shadow Combat learn when they are introduced to the fighting style. A text book ability that it is, it involves using the user's shadow to shape manipulate it to form huge grey-black demonic hands that emerge from the user's body. The user channels his shadow chakra throught his body before releasing it from the sides of his body and back, to create huge arms that extends from the body. The arms are larger than normal human hands (twice their length) and are located two on the user's either sides and two on his back. They look more like a giant's arm. The arms being composed of shadow chakra, are made quite strong; in a sense that they have similar properties of strength like "Earth Spear Technique" enabling them an upper hand in close range combat. Using a technique to pierce or destroy the arms would be quite difficult. The hands are all webbed, allowing the user to swim in water at very high speeds. Normal human have a very slow swimming speed as their body is not specifically made for such activities. However with these additional webbed limbs, the user can easily compete the fastest mammals in water. Each hand can easily cover up the user's half body, protecting him against the opponent's techniques. Once the user grabs the opponent, he can form a handseal and cause multiple shadow spikes (up to 2 meters) to emerge from these hands that would pierce the opponent's skin, into his body and cause more harm (30 chakra, 60 damage, requires another move slot). These spikes are quite tangible and can bend according to the user's wishes.
Note:
Arms last for 3 turns.
The user needs to wait 3 turns before using it again.
Can only be used twice.
Can only be taught to Shadow Combat Students

✦ Declined, this doesn't need to be S rank, A rank was fine. And you need to clarify the last sentence; it's tangibility as well as what "bend according to the user's wishes" means. ✦

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(Raiton: Tsuchi Maleficarum) Lightening Release: Malleus Maleficarum
Type: Defend/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points : N/A
Description: This is a sister technique to The Outrageous Aura Of Thor; which follows the same principle of influencing the water molecules by creating an aura of lightning chakra around the user. However, the change here is that unlike in previous jutsu, where the user acted as the reference entity, and the water moved around him, here the water will act as the reference entity to allow the user to move. The user will release his lightening chakra throughout his body in a full body surge to form polar charges around his body. Now by adjusting the polarities around his body, he can force a pull or push using the water molecules as reference. This also enables the user to gain flight by pushing him away from the water source. As this technique is based on the laws of attraction and repulsion of electric charges, the technique allows the user to move/push himself at the speed of a released lightening jutsu.
Note:
+ The aura lasts for 3 turns.
+ It can only be used thrice.
+ Can only be taught by Azráel

☼ Declined ☼

I don't think full on flight is going to work here, but something like hovering should work. That way if you're standing on a water source for example, you would be a couple of feet over the water and be able to glide through the air above it. You should also clarify the speed as lightning jutsu have a large variety in how fast they are. That comparison doesn't really tell us anything. I'd set it as twice running speed. And know that this wouldn't let you avoid all water techs, large/strong enough techs would be able to overpower the polarity and reach you.

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(Ninjutsu: Minikui ōrudokamereon no ninshiki) | Ninja Arts: Perception Of An Ugly Old Chameleon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a secret ninjutsu technique created when a Hidden Leaf shinobi got inspired by how the Senseis used a special paper and asked their students to channel their chakra so as to assess a Shinobi's elemental affinity. This jutsu uses the same concept to know what elemental chakra the shinobi is molding, the knowledge which he could use as an advantage in the battlefield. The user begins by channeling his chakra into the atmosphere in the battlefield all around his opponent. This is done similar to how shinobi channel their chakra into the air, to shape manipulate the wind to form any entity. However the difference here is that chakra channeled into the atmosphere remains as chakra (say more like a gas, but invisible to normal eyesight) and does not gain any elemental affinity. This chakra that the user channels into the atmosphere, has similar properties to that of these special papers used by Senseis; in a sense that they change their color when the opponent moulds chakra of a particular element. So for example when the opponent moulds his Lightning chakra, the opponent will have a yellowish shroud around him due to the user's chakra present all around him. When he moulds his Wind chakra, he will have a greenish shroud around him etc. For customs elements or KGs, the opponent will have a mixture of those colours. For example when the opponent moulds his wood chakra, he will have a shroud of bluish brown that represents Water and Earth. The user can control his chakra with his mind, meaning that he can form it around one opponent and neglect other, or form it around both of them, as he wishes. Once the color changes, it can be seen by everyone. This chakra by itself causes no damage to the opponent whatsoever. The reason why this technique comes handy is because the user's chakra reacts instantly, providing him with the knowledge of the user's attack and thus allowing him to react faster.
Note:
Can be used 4 times
Lasts 5 turns max.
Can only be taught by Azráel

Declined. While this is a cool technique, I don't see how your chakra lingering around the opponent would react towards his and show what elemental affinity the attack will have. Also, how would this be useful? Only if you don't have direct sight of the opponent I would get it, but if you don't he must be hidden and I'm pretty sure the chakra in the atmosphere won't show either. The idea is cool, but the description makes no sense.

(Genjutsu: Hausuhae no shinapusu) | Illusion Arts: Synapses Of The House Fly
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When a person touches something really hot, the temperature receptors in the skin sense the high temperature and sends nerve impulses via sensory neurons to the spinal chord and then to the motor neurons. The motor neuron will then send a message to the muscles in the arm telling them to contract so that the hand can untouch the object. This is a quick reflex system deployed by the human body and the muscles involuntarily perform the action. This particular genjutsu is based on the very same concept. By channeling chakra into the opponent's brain, the user can cause the opponent to feel similar effects in his body which would make the opponent to perform the respective involunatry reflexive reactions for it. For example, the target may suddenly feel his sword to be hot and pull his arm back while opening his palm to release the blade. Another example would be that the opponent would feel a sharp pain at the back of his elbow, more like an insect bite or a sting with a needle/senbon which would cause him to push his elbow forward. The pain felt due the illusion does not cause any (or minor damage which can be neglected) mental damage to the target. The pain can however last for a millisecond to more than few seconds and will depend on the user how he wants to manipulate the genjutsu. The justu does not limit the user by just giving him the ability to cause minor pain. The core ability of this jutsu relies on the fact that it can cause the opponents to perform certain small reactions. Hence, creating irritation in the target's eye, causing him to rub his eye etc. is also possible. Physical strength of a person would not matter as it is just an illusion, which can affect anyone who is vulnerable to genjutsu, and it would hence, be up to the opponent to figure out that it's an illusion.
Note:
Can only be used three times.
Can only be taught by Azráel
✦ Approved ✦

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(Raiton: Tōru no tondemonai ōra) | Lightening Release: Outrageous Aura of Thor
Rank: S
Type: Defend/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: It is a common knowledge that water is a huge collection of electric dipoles. By using polarities of charge, we can create an influence on it by making it move away or come near to the charge. Understanding this concept, lead to the development of this jutsu that would help the user to deflect the incoming water jutsus so as to avoid damage.

Attraction: The user concentrates a lot of raiton chakra in his body/ parts of the body. By manipulating his chakra, he concentrates a single polar charge around his body. This charge will force the electric dipoles in the water to align themselves and be attracted to the user's charge. This will help the user to attract water molecules from big sources of water, or from the mist or air in general and stick to his body. The amount of water that sticks to the body directly depends on the user's control and the amount of water present in the source.
Repulsion: Similar to attraction, the user will concentrate single polarity around his body. As and when a body of water comes closer to the user, he instantly changes the polarity so that the water is thrown away from the user's body. To deflect an incoming water of any rank, the user requires a polar charge of similar rank.
Combination: With precise chakra control, the user can constantly keep changing the polarity every millisecond to push and pull the molecules of water and in essence control the flow of water so as to meet his needs. This method requires the user to constantly feed in chakra as long as he controls the target water body by constantly changing the polarities, and so he cannot use anything except taijutsu during that phase.​

Note:
+ This electric energy in itself does not cause any damage. Neither does it add damage when combined with other elements.
+ This jutsu can be performed on opponent's water jutsus
+ Cannot perform Raiton of above S rank in the same turn.
+ Can only be used twice.
+ Can only be taught by Azráel

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☼ Approved ☼

Re-submission:

(Raiton: Tsuchi Maleficarum) Lightening Release: Malleus Maleficarum
Type: Defend/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points : N/A
Description: This is a sister technique to The Outrageous Aura Of Thor; which follows the same principle of influencing the water molecules by creating an aura of lightning chakra around the user. However, the change here is that unlike in previous jutsu, where the user acted as the reference entity, and the water moved around him, here the water will act as the reference entity to allow the user to move. The user will release his lightening chakra throughout his body in a full body surge to form polar charges around his body. Now by adjusting the polarities around his body, he can force a pull or push using the water molecules in the atmosphere as reference. This also enables the user to gain flight (hovering) by pushing him away from the water source, hovering 2 meters above the water. As this technique is based on the laws of attraction and repulsion of electric charges, the technique allows the user to move/push himself at very high speeds.
Note:
+ The aura lasts for 3 turns.
+ It can only be used thrice.
+ Can only be taught by Azráel

✦ Approved, you werent getting 3x speed in any way with this, and edited in a distance to make it clear how high you are floating ✦

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(Ninjutsu: Minikui orudokamereon no ninshiki) | Ninja Arts: Perception Of An Ugly Old Chameleon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a secret ninjutsu technique created when a Hidden Leaf shinobi got inspired by how the Senseis used a special paper and asked their students to channel their chakra so as to assess a Shinobi's elemental affinity. This jutsu uses the same concept to know what elemental chakra the shinobi is molding, the knowledge which he could use as an advantage in the battlefield. The user begins by channeling his chakra into the atmosphere in the battlefield all around his opponent. This is done similar to how shinobi channel their chakra into the air, to shape manipulate the wind to form any entity. However the difference here is that chakra channeled into the atmosphere remains as chakra (say more like a gas, but invisible to normal eyesight) and does not gain any elemental affinity. This chakra that the user channels into the atmosphere, has similar properties to that of these special papers used by Senseis; in a sense that they change their color when the opponent moulds chakra of a particular element. So for example when the opponent moulds his Lightning chakra, the opponent will have a yellowish shroud around him due to the user's chakra present all around him. When he moulds his Wind chakra, he will have a greenish shroud around him etc. For customs elements or KGs, the opponent will have a mixture of those colours. For example when the opponent moulds his wood chakra, he will have a shroud of bluish brown that represents Water and Earth. The user can control his chakra with his mind, meaning that he can form it around one opponent and neglect other, or form it around both of them, as he wishes. Once the color changes, it can be seen by everyone. The user's chakra when it surrounds the target, gets latched to him (similar to how genjutsus work). But the difference is that the chakra stays around him, and does not enter his body (like in genjutsu). Now the user's chakra acts like a part of the opponent's chakra system, which will now receive information instantly about any changes in the opponent's chakra. So when the opponent performs some handseals, he is already molding chakra of a particular element, which the user will be aware of before the opponent launches the jutsu (as soon as he molds the chakra of that element). This can technically help the user be better prepared in a battle. This technique is specially useful in the Ninja World to know if the target will attack or stay neutral. The user's chakra by itself causes no damage to the opponent whatsoever. The user's chakra always has a mental connection with the user. Meaning that, it will notify the user of the changes that happens mentally. However, "change" or "no change" is the only information that it shares (similar to binary). 1 indicating a change, and 0 indicating no change (the user obviously has his own methods). Which is why, it is necessary to have a visual of the opponent to get a detailed knowledge (the color change) of his chakra activity. The reason why this technique comes handy is because the user's chakra reacts instantly, providing him with the knowledge of the user's attack and thus allowing him to react faster.
Note:
Can be used 2 times
Lasts 5 turns max.
Can only be taught by Azráel

✦ Pending, leaving for someone else ✦
Approved but changed duration and usage amounts as battles hardly ever last 20 turns, and this would basically make your bio a permanent sensory in some aspects.

 

[Leathercandle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Elucidator
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Elucidator is a sword colored jet black and silver. The sword was forged using an incredibly powerful steel which has always throughout history been incredibly rare. This steel has been found to be indestructible. The Elucidator has three spikes right above it's handle, one of them alone on a side of the blade and the other two together on the other. The Elucidator has been noted to be quite heavy, which has lead some of it's previous wielders to give up on using it. If the wielder is strong enough and has had enough practice with it though, it is very possible to swing this sword around using a single arm.

Abilities of Elucidator:
By channeling the user's doton chakra into Elucidator, a single object can be turned to stone by making contact with the sword. Entire swords and armor for example can be turned to stone instantly and if the user desires, have them crumble. This ability has been found to have a far less drastic effect on anything alive (excluding things like plants or things not classified as an Animals or unique summonings). If Elucidator after being charged with doton chakra makes contact with human skin, the maximum effected area is 4 centimeters by 4 centimeters by 4 centimeters in a perfect cube shape. Only places which have made contact with the sword can be effected by this, which means if the sword touched the opponent's right forearm, then their left knee cannot be effected. This ability can make solid or liquid objects of lower or equal rank turn to stone and/or crumble as well. This ability is B ranked.

◊This ability can only be used twice per battle
◊Note that this can be used as a normal sword if no chakra is being channeled into it
◊Elucidator will backfire on any users of the sword who aren't Leathercandle or people who have been allowed to use it by Leathercandle when foreign chakra is channeled into it, causing the user's entire body to turn to stone

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✦ Declined, this ability is basically just Added Weight Jutsu applied through a sword, someone created that as a jutsu already. Your sword would just be ripping their idea ✦

 

[Xicer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

R(Doton: Chiri Wan) Earth Style: Dust Bowl
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Description: The user concentrates their doton chakra and stomps their foot on the ground. This causes a line of dust to rise, heading toward your opponent, traveling at a great speed. Once it reaches the target, the dust will erupt into a column of sorts, starting from directly beneath the target. The dust would be fine enough that it would be able to get into the eyes, nose, and mouth of the target. This would cause both vision impairment and breathing issues to arise from the target.
Note: Vision impairment will last 2 turns, unless dust is washed out somehow.
Note: Breathing issues will last 2 turns
Note: Can be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught be Xicer

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(Genjutsu: Haritsuke) Illusionary Art: Crucifixion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Description: The user forms one hand seal and places a target under an illusion. While under this illusion, the target would see and hear a large wooden cross rise out of the ground behind them. As the horizontal piece passes their arm/shoulder height, they would see and feel barbed wire gripping them at their wrist, ankles, and forehead and attaching them to the cross, leaving them suspended. In reality, the target would have their movements restricted would be forced to hold both arms straight at the sides and their head back.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Xicer

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(Katon: Ensho) Fire Style: Heat Wave
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Description: The user forms a single hand seal in order to concentrate their Katon chakra. Using partial nature manipulation, the user converts their chakra into pure heat energy, which they then expel from every chakra release point on their body. This forms a blast of very intense heat, which can easily fatigue anyone caught in the blast radius. Because this is only a heat blast, no damage can be taken from this attack. As the heat blast travels, it will quickly cool, as it does not have a physical form to continue contain the energy. This means that the affected area is limited to short range only, although the heat can be felt up to mid range away.
Note: Fatigue causes 2 jutsu limit for the next 3 turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Xicer

✦ All Declined, wth is up with your template? Where's the damage points parts?? ✦