[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Smirk]

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(Dokubutsu: Doku-Gouben) Posion-Pool
Type: Offensive/Attack Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Mid Range-Long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User with four quick hand seals summons a Pool of Poison directly underneath the Opponent(s) quickly and unexpected causing the Opponent(s) to fall immediately into the Pool of Poison instantly Poisoning them. Around 8 meters deep and around 6 meters wide.
Note: If the Opponent doesn't cure themselves of the poison within 3 turns their body becomes useless rendering them unable to fight allowing the User to decide the opponents(s) fate.
Note: After performing, the user cannot perform any other Poison Jutsu's within 3 turns.
Note: This Jutsu can only be used twice per battle
Note: This Jutsu can only be used by Me [Username: Lazyboi], therefore can only be taught by Me [Username: Lazyboi]




(Kugutsu: Sono-Keiji) Combination of the 5 Basic Releases: The Apocalypse
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User releases Water, Wind, Fire, Lightning, and Earth Chakra into the Puppets controlled by the User causing the puppets bodies to be surrounded in Wind, Lightning, Fire, Water, and Earth chakra-type armor [one element per puppet] and then the user is able to launch the puppets into the Opponent(s) without damaging the puppets but dealing Great damage - if not Killing the Opponents and causing catastrophic damage to the terrain that was hit during the attack.
Note: This Jutsu can only be used once per battle
Note: This Jutsu lasts for 2 turns
Note: After performing this jutsu the user cannot perform any S-rank Ninjutsu for 3 turns
Note: This Jutsu can Only be used by Me [Username: Lazyboi], therefore can Only taught by Me [Username: Lazyboi].


±± Both Declined ±± Do not resubmit. You need medical training to use the first one and the second one has a very similar technique already

 

[Emperor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Divine,Blade of Heaven
Type:Weapon
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:N/A
Damage:80
Description:The Divine Blade of Heaven is a duel wielding sword and Bow at once.The user can split the blade into 2 swords and use both for close range combat.They can also be put together to form a Bow and the user can channel there selected element and fire element enhanced arrows at the enemy.The also can be be twirled at a powerful pace to start tornadoes all over the battlefield.
-Can only be used by XxFallenUchihaxX
-Blade cannot be held by others as there hand will be stung
-Must have training in specific element in order to use arrows
-Tornadoes last 3 turns and blade cannot use ability for 2 turns.

Summoning Animal:Penguins*
Scroll Owner:XxFallenUchihaxX
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Pesgo,Lord of Penguins
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Tenzen,the Fire Penguin
Description and Background:Penguins (order Sphenisciformes, family Spheniscidae) are a group of aquatic, flightless birds living almost exclusively in the southern hemisphere, especially in Antarctica. Highly adapted for life in the water, penguins have countershaded dark and white plumage, and their wings have become flippers. Most penguins feed on krill, fish, squid, and other forms of sealife caught while swimming underwater. They spend about half of their lives on land and half in the oceans.

Penguins exist, they are mine.O_O I got them a year or so ago O_O
Due to my inactivity afterward, I haven't put them on the official list, so I can see how you woud think it free.

( 主 Kamiumi 主 Hisureiya 主 Kaiyo no Ketsuchoryu 主 ) 主 God Creation Myth 主 Fireslayer 主 Blood Tide of the Ocean 主
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50 (+10 per turn )
Damage: 90
Description:
The use of this technique dips his hand into a water source, and withdraws it. As he withdraws it, a dark blue shimmering blade of highly compressed mist forms in his hand, the mist being formed from the water of the water source. There is so much mist compressed in such a small area, that the blade looks nearly as if it were made of solid blue metal.
The blade can thus be used much as a normal katana would, and is much sharper, allowing it to cut through B-ranked techniques and below with ease.
However, the true power of this technique lies in its ability to combat fire. With each slash of the sword, a large amount of cool, dense mist is released in the area of the slash, effectively stopping any and all fire and heat from entering the area. The mist is so dense it actually looks like a flow of water has been released. As it is mist, however, on contact with fire, it not only quenches the heat but recondenses quickly on evaporation due to the presence of other mist particles and repeatedly retards any fire in that area.
With this technique activated, the user can merely slash at an incoming fire technique to harmlessly disperse it. Even if the incoming technique attacks from different directions, slashing around the area of the user prevents the fire from encroaching into it.
With the Blood Tide of the Ocean in hand, the user cannot use any water techniques at all while he holds it, severely limiting his offensive abilities with water to only short-range slashes. Also, the sword is incapable of warding off advanced fire elements beyond A-rank repeatedly, and disperses after defending against one advanced fire technique of a higher rank. Furthermore, it can only be created once, and can be destroyed by a sufficiently powerful earth technique. Also, while the sword is in hand, the user cannot release the EIG, summon or go to Sage Mode, as all these activities cause a sudden large-scale fluctuation in the user's chakra that disrupts the sword.


±± Declined ±± Love the idea and its brilliantly worded. Just need you to define the bolded parts better and its good to go. So B-Rank techniques...regardless of size, natures, kgs, etc? Any fire? CE fires also? Scorch? Advanced fire techniques...how come? do you mean any technique above A-Rank? For me it would make sense some sort of limitation in terms of how many techniques you can stop with this and i'd allow 2 Forbidden rank Fire techniques max, while no limit in its duration for S-ranks and below in terms of fire. Also, to be a Forbidden rank it needs to do damage to yourself. This damage needs to manifest in the form of exhaustion, lack of speed, pain or something similar after the technique ends. Also, you need to define a max duration for this knowing it won't last more than 4 turns.

( 主 Kamiumi 主 Hisureiya 主 Kaiyo no Ketsuchoryu 主 ) 主 God Creation Myth 主 Fireslayer 主 Blood Tide of the Ocean 主
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50 (+10 per turn )
Damage: 90
Description:
The use of this technique dips his hand into a water source, and withdraws it. As he withdraws it, a dark blue shimmering blade of highly compressed mist forms in his hand, the mist being formed from the water of the water source. There is so much mist compressed in such a small area, that the blade looks nearly as if it were made of solid blue metal.
The blade can thus be used much as a normal katana would, and is much sharper, allowing it to cut through B-ranked techniques and below with ease - depending of course on whether or not they have a form ( and are not formless, like lightning or wind ).
However, the true power of this technique lies in its ability to combat fire. With each slash of the sword, a large amount of cool, dense mist is released in the area of the slash, effectively stopping any and all fire and heat from entering the area. There are however, restrictions to what ranks of various fire elements can be stopped; see the end of the technique for details. The mist is so dense it actually looks like a flow of water has been released. As it is mist, however, on contact with fire, it not only quenches the heat but recondenses quickly on evaporation due to the presence of other mist particles and repeatedly retards any fire in that area.
With this technique activated, the user can merely slash at an incoming fire technique to harmlessly disperse it. Even if the incoming technique attacks from different directions, slashing around the area of the user prevents the fire from encroaching into it.
With the Blood Tide of the Ocean in hand, the user cannot use any water techniques at all while he holds it, severely limiting his offensive abilities with water to only short-range slashes. Also, the sword is incapable of warding off advanced fire elements ( SunFire, White Fire, etc. ) beyond A-rank repeatedly, and disperses after defending against one advanced fire technique of a higher rank. The sword can block an unlimited number of S-rank and below normal fire techniques but only two Forbidden rank fire techniques before it disperses; it can block an unlimited number of A-rank and below advanced fire techniques but only one above that; and since Scorch evaporates water, it cannot defend against even B-rank techniques of Scorch. Furthermore, it can only be created once, and can be destroyed by a sufficiently powerful earth technique. Also, while the sword is in hand, the user cannot release the EIG, summon or go to Sage Mode, as all these activities cause a sudden large-scale fluctuation in the user's chakra that disrupts the sword. The user's body comes under severe stress, leaving him in pain and unable to perform Taijutsu above B-Rank for three turns after the sword is destroyed or disperses. The sword can only be wielded for 4 turns max, before dispersing.

( Fuuton: Koshokeidai ) - Wind Release: Gallows Frame
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
A simple but effective wind technique for assassinations, the user makes three handseals causing the wind around the target's throat to form itself into a noose that suddenly binds the target's throat and lifts them up a metre, leaving them dangling - much like they have been hanged. This technique is particularly useful for taking out weak opponents or clones, but any experienced ninja will have enough time even after he is "hanged" to pull off a technique of some sort to free himself. The Byakugan can spot the chakra forming around the throat, and hence Hyuuga have more time to prepare a counter. Also, the Sharingan can spot the chakra forming - but unlike the Byakugan, since they cannot see in every direction and are likely to be staring at their opponent instead of at their own neck, still only have the same time as normal ninja - though this is, as stated before, sufficient.


±± Both Approved ±± Had to edit the first one. Love the second one.

 

[Melizzle]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Hornets
Scroll Owner: Melizzle
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Jaune the Queen
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Lumière and Marée
The summoner can use either a scroll of any size their choose or a tattoo that requires a swipe of their blood to call on the hornets. These hornets are lead by a royal family of fierce warriors that each specialize in an elemental jutsu and a special sting. They can fly as well as speak with humans but Aburame may also communicate with them through the clan secret of their bug communication.

±± Approved ±±


(Suzumebachi Yakujou: Jaune) Hornet Summon: Jaune
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Jaune is the boss and queen of the royal family. She is a black and yellow, very large Hornet about twice the size of Lumière and Marée making her about the size of a city bus. Jaune is an Earth style user and can eat through Earth allowing her to burrow and make large holes. A sting from Jaune to a humanoid will kill however if she stings something closer to her size that being's speed will be slowed to 20% for two turns.
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Lasts three turns
-Can carry up to two people on her back at a time

±± Declined ±± Ok she is an earth user...is her only ability to borrow in the earth? Notice that as a flying summon she'd only be able to use most (almost all) earth technique while in contact with the ground. Also, you forgot the chakra information.


Note: Got permission from scarface who holds a similar contract.

 

[-Tauburn-]

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(Hyouton: Onifea) Ice Release: Demon of Fear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40 (only if hit by explosion)
Description: The user will release water and wind chakra infront of themselves then make two handseals, and create a wall of Ice in the shape of a demons face. The wall will be created in short range of the user, and will beformed by pushing the water towards the opponent while at the same time freezing it, as it flys at the opponent. Once the wall/face is fully created it will drop and hit the ground, Then the user has only to hit the wall to smash through it but if the wall is hit it will explode in a mass of needles which fly at the opponent from the face and stab through the opponent.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- Must be of the Yuki clan.
- No Ice the next turn.

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±± Declined ±± What exactly did you change? Bold the changes you've made. Also, wrong chakra and damage infos

All i did was make it Attack type. and fixed the chakra and damage.

(Hyouton: Onifea) Ice Release: Demon of Fear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (only if hit by explosion)
Description: The user will release water and wind chakra infront of themselves then make two handseals, and create a wall of Ice in the shape of a demons face. The wall will be created in short range of the user, and will beformed by pushing the water towards the opponent while at the same time freezing it, as it flys at the opponent. Once the wall/face is fully created it will drop and hit the ground, Then the user has only to hit the wall to smash through it but if the wall is hit it will explode in a mass of needles which fly at the opponent from the face and stab through the opponent.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.
- Must be of the Yuki clan.
- No water or wind above S-Rank in the same and next turn and no ice in the next turn.

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±± Approved ±±


(Batto: Batto Bomu) Bat Style: Bat Bomb
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user summones multiple bats (in short range) that fly around the opponent (in short, mid or long range of the user), then lach themselves onto the opponent. The user then makes a handseal and then the bats explode (If the user is in short range of the explosion he takes half the damage himself.).
- Must have signed Bat contract.
- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Cannot be used with any other Bat style jutsu in the same turn.

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Summoning Animal: Hagfish
Scroll Owner: -Tauburn-
Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
Summoning Boss if existing: (Will be posted if approved.)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a

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Description and Background: Hagfish are eel-shaped slime-producing marine animals (occasionally called slime eels). They are the only living animals that have a skull but not a vertebral column. Along with lampreys, hagfish are jawless and are living fossils; hagfish are basal to vertebrates, and living hagfish remain similar to hagfish 300 million years ago.
Abilities:
- Hagfish have elongated, eel-like bodies, and paddle-like tails. They have cartilaginous skulls (although the part surrounding the brain is composed primarily of a fibrous sheath) and tooth-like structures composed of keratin.
- Hagfish are long and vermiform, and can exude copious quantities of a slime or mucus of unusual composition. They secrete the microfibrous slime, which expands into a gelatinous and sticky goo when combined with water.


±± Approved ±± You found a cool animal. The slime has endless possibilities

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

~Can only use up to A rank lightning techniques.
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts three turns.

±± Declined ±± a summon the size of Gamabunta and Manda isn't an A-Rank. Also, something that big can only be summoned once and up to 4 turns max. It can use up to S-Rank lightning that you know.

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Summoning Technique: Dimai (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Dimai)
Type: Supplemntary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:* The user cuts his thumb and performs the required handseals summons Dimai the Wind Element mouse. Dimai stands as the same height of his brother Imado. Dimai is white in color

~ Can only use up to A rank wind techniques.
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts three turns.

±± Declined ±± Same as above.

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Weapon: Sulpher (Buki: Sulpher)
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:* The sword sulpher is a sword special of it's kind it is one of a kind because it is the fusion of the cat Sulpher and it's owner Vayne Aurelius of the Inuzuka clan this is a variation of the beast technique used by Akamaru and his owner. The sword is attached to the wielder's shoulder and reaches the user's ankles in length. This sword is made up of a material that is unbreakable. Sulpher also comes with a shield that covers the other side of the user's hand this shield can block lightning and fire techniques up to C rank.

~Can only be used by a Vayne Aurelius bio.
~Must have permission to use it by mangekyo byakugan.
~Can only stop C rank Fire and lightning techniques.
~Must be from Inuzuka clan.
~his counts as two moves due to using combination technique also.
~Must be the owner of Sulpher the cat.

It looks like this

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Note: On the weapon I will keep on putting more restrictions if needed since I really want this weapon.


±± Declined ±± You need to explain the weapon better. It has nothing to do with restrictions. Don't understand the bolded. Also, what does this have to do with inuzuka? Look at the part i bolded and underlined...i don't understand this.

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Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

~Can only use up to S rank lightning techniques that the user knows although without hand seals.
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts Four turns.
~Can only be summoned once.


Summoning Technique: Dimai (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Dimai)
Type: Supplemntary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The user cuts his thumb and performs the required handseals summons Dimai the Wind Element mouse. Dimai stands as the same height of his brother Imado. Dimai is white in color

~ Can only use up to S rank wind techniques that the user knows although without hand seals .
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts Four turns.
~Can only be summoned once.

±± Both Approved ±±

Weapon: Sulpher (Buki: Sulpher)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The "weapon" Sulpher is a combination of Sulphur the cat(ninken) and it's owner vayne Aurelius this weapon is a variation of the combination technique used by the inuzuka clan in this combination Sulpher changes and becomes a sword and a shield(pic below) the shield is strong enough to block B rank water and lightning and A rank Earth techniques.

~Can only be used by a Vayne Aurelius bio.
~Must have permission to use it by mangekyo byakugan.
~Must be from Inuzuka clan.
~the usage of this weapon counts as two moves since the combination technique is used in the process of "fusing" together (Sulpher and vayne)
~Must be the owner of Sulpher the cat.
-must be stated in bio to be used

It looks like this

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±± Declined ±± This weapon is still a mess. Reword the description and explain this better.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

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finally can submitt scorch customs

I have owning rights to this customs weapon and as such i believe i am able to make any variation of it as i want and as i currently don't have my ice bio i will try to make one for my scorch bio note that i am not dropping the one in the link as i want to keep it incase i remake haku ere is the link to said custom:

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but if i have to i guess i'll be droping this custom weapon if the one below is approved.

i have only made minor changes.

yakekoge no Wa | scorch Ring
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
The ring of the Scorch gaint of the sun Its made of a special metal that can channel fire , Wind and scorch chakra. Wielding the ring gives the user greater power for his fire, Wind and scorch jutsu and gives him the unique ability to materialize a weapon made of either one of these elements in the hand the ring is. For example, the user can materialize a hammer, a sword, a whip, a glove, a bow, etc. User must choose which weapon is materialized, and only one weapon may be used per turn.
Abilities:
+5 damage to Wind and fire
+10 damage to scorch
The elemental weapons that can be created are equal to S-Rank elemental jutsu
Restrictions:
Creating the weapons counts as a turn
Weapons maintain themselves until destroyed or released
While wielding an elemental weapon, user can't make hand seals
Weapons can't be thrown but only wielded ( only exception is using a arrow for a bow and arrow or a fuma shuriken/kunai )
Can't channel water chakra while using elemental weapons
only -Haku Yuki- can use
notes: co maker scorps ( he helped me with the original version and so if he wishes he may use this if ever makes a scorch bio same goes with the ice version of the ring)


±± Declined ±± The concept of "weapons" (or in a broad sense, constructs) works great for water and ice and even wind (which have been seen used that way) and we can even use that concept for fire... but not for scorch.




Shakuton saku soukou ( Scorth release scorth traveling )
Type: supp
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make two hand seals dog and tiger and will focus his wind and fire chakra into his mouth and build it up untill he has a large amount of scorch chakra in his mouth he will then blow The chakra out and make a single hand seal allowing the chakra to spread across the entire battle field. Now with the scorth chakra spread throuh out the air the user will need but manipulate teh scorth chakra into the desired scorch jutsu in any range as the chakra will be covering the entire field.
note: chakra lingers for 3 turns only
note: can only be used twice.
note: after jutsu wears off no scorth jutsu above A rank can be used for two turns
note: any scorth jutsu even if short range can be made in long range with this jutsu active.
note: can't be made so close to enemy they have no reaction time also the heat of the chakra can be felt as it spreads across the field.
note: doesn't work for stuff like armor ( just an example tehre is no such jutsu for scorth yet) or on barriers ( an example is right below this custom)


±± Declined ±± do not resubmit. Ridiculous



Shakuton saku kasei ( scorch release scorch barrier )
Type: Defensive/supp
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make 3 hand seals dog, tiger and bird, and will then focus his scorch into every inch of his body and mix the chakra with his very cells he will then make one more hand seal and release the chakra into the air around him in a barrier like fashion but at teh same time will keep a large amount withen in him. with this any attack any mud style jutsu that comes near it will be dried into clay, any water evaporated and any wood dried out and turned brittle when they reach whiten short range fire which will only become stronger. the down side to this jutsu the user must keep the hand seal the entire time for it to work and after use cannot use water jutsu.
note: after use user cannot use water jutsu for two turns
note: can't use scorth above A rank for 2 turns after use
note: can only be used 1 time per every 3 turns
note: must keep hand seal entire time for jutsu to stay active.
can only evaporate water/ dry mud/ make wood brittle jutsu up to A rank
note: jutsu can only stay active for 2 turns per use.

±± Declined ±± You should read the release rules/definitions of scorch. You are making it more powerful than it is. Also, such a technique has been made countless times before for most and all every elements.

 

[System001]

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(Suiton: Mizu Myaku) Water Release: Aqua Pulse
Type:Offensive
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user claps their hands together, before continueing to part their hands as they do so a large water orb begins to generate inbetween their seperated hands the orb swirling at great speeds and being anywhere between the size of a large orange to the size of a large basket ball. The user then quickly slams the water ball forwardly down on the ground infront of them. The orb of spiraling water becoming greater in size as it hits the ground and contining to race towards the opponent as it expands into a exceedingly large orb, rivaling the size of Intense Pain and even Pressure damage, water spraying to its sides as it races towards the opponent at fair speeds.
~No A rank or above water techniques for the rest of the turn.

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Like this but on a much larger scale.

±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists although stronger. Zanji if i'm not mistaken is the owner

I looked in the Inuzuka techniques, and i dont think there is a prefix for inuzuka clan techs.

(Jakou)-Musk
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Type:Supplementry
Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of gas that spreads out across the battle field. The gas reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally.

±± Declined ±± A gas? =_= the urine marker we see actually has some fundament in terms of reality as its an actual way that dogs use to mark things. However, using intestinal gases is just a mockery of the inuzuka clan techniques.

(Jakou)-Musk
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Type:Supplementry
Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of scent secretions mixed with chakra that spreads out across the battle field, the chakra used so as to make the secretions react with human skin. The chakra mixed scent reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off, in a similar way to how dogs mark their territory with the pugent scent that they produce naturally. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally.

Changed to Natural dog odour rather than Methane.

±± Declined ±± Much better choice although you need to change the "scent" with pheromones as its basically what you want to release around the dog. Also, this would only work if its not raining and the nausea part needs to go or some restriction needs to come in. also, dojutsu users will clearly see this.


(Fuuton|Heki Futon) Wind Release|Wind Burst
Type:Offensive
Rank:B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage:40
Description: The user can create a burst of wind that flows in a single direction anywhere on the battle field within mid range of them. The burst of wind can be used to speed up objects, change objects trajectory mid flight, or even be used to buffet reasonably small summons such as Gamakichi in a desired direction.


±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist.

 

[Typhon]

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(Dokou Kata: Igari) | Form of the Earth God: Boulder Eater
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (+5 for earth chakra)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is used to both block an incoming attack and open an enemy's defenses. When faced with an incoming attack the user will position their blade to completely stop the attack. Rather than deflecting it, its positioned so the blades/weapons reach a stalemate and become locked. At this point the user takes a step forward while twisting their blade, pushing their opponent off balance and to the ground while also disarming them of their weapon. This leaves them wide open to a follow up attack. The user, if capable, can channel earth chakra through their blade to increase its defensive capabilities.
-Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
-Can be used three times per battle.
-Can defend against B-rank and below attacks physical attacks (A-rank if used with earth chakra).
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±± Declined ±± It needs a better description because as it is it isn't quite clear. Also, the defend against...does it include ninjutsu?

(Dokou Kata: Igari) | Form of the Earth God: Boulder Eater
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (+5 for earth chakra)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is used to both block an incoming attack and open an enemy's defenses. When faced with an incoming attack the user will position their blade to completely stop the attack. Rather than deflecting it, its positioned so the blades/weapons reach a stalemate and become locked. At this point the user takes a step forward while twisting their blade, pushing their opponent off balance and to the ground while also disarming them of their weapon. This leaves them wide open to a follow up attack. The user, if capable, can channel earth chakra through their blade to increase its defensive capabilities. This technique is only useful against other physical attacks such as kenjutsu or taijutsu. Elemental techniques such as fire, lightning or wind would be un-blockable through this method, though earth and water techniques can be split in half.
-Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
-Can be used three times per battle.
-Can defend against B-rank and below attacks physical attacks (A-rank if used with earth chakra).
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Clarified what could be blocked, basically just physical attacks.

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(Ninjutsu: Hisou no Hyakki Torifogu) | Ninja Art: Flight of 100 Foggy Birds
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: For this technique the user forms a series of four hand seals while gathering smoke in their wrist launcher(s). Once complete they fire off two baseball sized balls of smoke which are highly condensed to the point where they may seem solid. At some point before the balls of smoke reach the opponent the user makes a fifth hand seal and causes the two balls to erupt into fifty pigeon sized birds each that disperse towards the opponent. They rain down on them from various angles, each on hits the target with the strength of a punch and bursts into a small cloud of smoke on contact. Once the attack is complete the target is left bruised and bloodied in a large cloud of smoke.
-Can be used twice per battle.
-Wrist launchers require a turn to refill before being used again.
-Can't use any technique above S-Rank the following turn.


±± Approved ±±

 

[Serpent]

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(Kchuysei: Senpai Fuioseijin Iwaku) Summoning: Elder Sage of the Past
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (60 w/ tornadoes)
Description: Fuioseijin is the Elder Boss of the Eels, although "Dendou Ouja" is now the Summoning Boss of the Eels, many still remain loyal to Fuioseijin. After a fearsome battle that lasted 3 days Fuioseijin lost to Dendou Ouja, although they are the same size and equal in speed and power, Dendou Ouja is younger and was able to out last Fuioseijin. Over time the two Eels became friends, Fuioseijin being the only other Eel aloud to battle along side with Dendou Ouja they make an excellent team for battle. Fuioseijin has the ability to manipulate wind currents, allowing him to create strong winds, causing anything from random winds, preventing flight or tornadoes that equal A-rank in power. Fuioseijin has large razor like fins that are located throughout the sides of his body that can slice close by opponents during battle.
Note:
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Must have signed Eel Contract.
-Fuuton counts as a move.
-Requires a water source.
-Lasts 4 turns.

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(Kchuysei: Unagi Suijun) Summoning: Standard Eel
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands together summoning a standard Unagi. Unagi are large Eels that rival the size of the Basic Kyodaija, which are snakes often summoned by Orochimaru. The Unagi range in looks and color, but have no special ability when it comes to chakra control.
Note:
-Must have signed Eel Contract.
-Requires a water source.

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(Kchuysei: Zetsumei) Summoning: Darkening
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 w/ Feeding Frenzy)
Description: The user will slam his hands together for the summoning. This summons Zetsumei, or Zets for short. when Zets is summoned he turns a water source murky, making it imposible to see withing the water source. A foul smell of death and decay will also fill the air. Zets has the ability to spawn thousands of small Eels from his mouth, these Eels can fill a water source, attacking and feeding on anything within it. this can be devastating for an opponent. The spawn Eels can group together forming large masses for defense that equal A-rank. After his time, the remaining Eels will swim back into Zets mouth as he consumes them. (Doujutsu can see though the murky water)
Note:
-Can only be Summoned once per Battle.
-Must have signed Eel Contract.
-Summon last 4 turns.
-Spawning Eels counts as a move.
-Requires a water source.


±± All Approved ±± Its always a breath of fresh air to read your summons man. Good work. ^^

 

[Omnom]

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(Kuro Itto: Amatama) Dark Threads : Sphere of Linen
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kakuzu releases the dark threads from his body and creates a dense sphere of interlaced threads around his body. The weaving of the threads is done in a way for them to withstand the most impact possible increasing their defensive capabilities to the fullest. This sphere can withstand attacks of the same rank or below.
Notes:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Minimum two turns between usage
-Only usable by Kakuzu
-Must be taught by Omnom

~Declined do not resubmit~ You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for one whole cycle. The reason being is that you do not possess a Kakuzu biography and this technique is a complete ripp off from this custom technique.

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±± Increasing the ban ±± This post may be considered a marker. Markers are forbidden. My first issue was 4 cycles but i'm toning it down a bit. You are hereby banned from this thread for 2 complete cycles. You can post a technique again on the cycle that begins in the 23rd of April

 

[Shinta]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Kangarū (Kangaroo)
Scroll Owner: Shinta
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: King Gangurru (Will submit summon at a later time)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Lord Gangurru, Junior Gangurru (More to come in future)

Description and Background: The Kangaroo summons allows the user to summon the male of the species (Unable to summon females due to there need to carry young in there pouches). These Kangaroos are generally around 12 feet tall, meaning that they can easily carry humans on there back. Due to there powerful leg muscles they can jump as high than the height of larger summons such as Gamabunta. The larger majority od summons specialise in a modified form of taijutsu that heavily utilises there legs and tail. There tails are strong enough to hold there own body height and are 6 feet long.

(Kangarū Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gangurru-Sama) Kangaroo Summoning Technique: Lord Gangurru.
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary seals with the blood sacrifice, the user slams there hand onto the ground to summon Lord Gangurru, the younger brother of the boss King Gangurru. He is a very agile Kangaroo with very little patience. He can carry one person on his back (reluctantly) and can use Lightning jutsu up to B-rank.
Note
- Only remains on field for three turns
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Must have signed Kangarū contract
- Disappears when directly hit with an s-rank wind jutsu.

(Kangarū Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Junia Gangurru) Kangaroo Summoning Technique: Junior Gangurru.
Rank: B
Chakra Coast: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary seals with the blood sacrifice, the user slams there hand onto the ground to summon Junior Gangurru, son of Lord Gangurru. Junior is only half the height of his father and uncle, and as such can not carry anyone on his back. Junior is not a particularly strong summon, only being able to use Earth jutsu up to c-rank.
Notes
- Must have signed Kangarū contract
- Remains on the field for four turns
- Can be summoned twice per battle. (Five turn cool-down)

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[~Yubel~]

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(Fūton: Shippuu Kyouten) - Wind Release: Twister Canon
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A variation of Wind release Twister Shot in which the user releases a stream of wind-infused chakra from their mouth which takes the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.
The difference is that this technique has a secondary surprise attack in which it shoots multiple compact air canons from where the twister is traveling towards the enemy.
Since the Twister is heading towards the opponent with speed the canons shot out would be even faster making it very difficult to react to the canons which would hurt and distract while the twister charges and connects with the target, slicing where it hits in a spinning manner.
-Can only be used thrice
-Can only be taught by Myworldoftsukuyomi


±± Declined ±± This is by no means a B-Rank

 

[-Blade-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Kasai Furaito) Fire Style: Fire Flight
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Deffence
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (20 per fireball)
Description: The user makes 2 handsigns and jumps in mid air and covers their feet(up to calfs) and hands(up to forearms) in flames allowing them to hover and take flight the flames may be shot from the arms or legs as an attack
-Only I may teach this
-Only both hands alone are available for all around movement if flames are just on your feet you.may only hover up and down
-Each fireball shot from this technique is treated as a B Rank fireball and one of 3 moves
-No handsigns can be made while the flames are on the users hands


±± Declined ±± This is a mix of several techniques and is basically a mode, not a technique in itself.

 

[Better]

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Shinsō: God Spear
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: short/mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 70
Description: "Shinso" looks like an ordinary wakizashi.Though from its appearance it may look normal, it actually carries a unique ability like none other before.
In order to activate the ability the user focuses a tremendous amount of chakra into the blade. When the user is ready to release the chakra they say "shoot to kill him/her". The chakra stored inside the blade gets shot outat such enormous speeds that one without a Sharingan would find it hard to track. The movements appear a visual blur to the naked eye, thus making it a lethal weapon. The blade also carries tremendous force when extending. So much force that it can destroy any defenses B rank or lower. Shinsō is capable of reaching a maximum length equivalent to 5times its original length.Thus making the chakra shoot up to mid range. After the chakra hits something it disperses after a few seconds, but if it doesn't come into contact with anything, the user could swing his sword around untilt he chakra comes into contact with something. The chakra has the same cutting power as the blade. The time it takes to release Shinso to its full length is the same amount of time a single handseal, and can retract just as fast as it can be released

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Note: Can only be wielded by Better and anyone he allows it to
Note: Ability can only be used 3 times per battle


±± Declined ±± Chakra and damage info wrong. This ability...does the sword grow or is it simply a chakra blast? Also, you should simplify the description. Its messy.

resubmitting

Shinsō: God Spear
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: "Shinso" looks like an ordinary wakizashi. Though from its appearance it may look normal, it actually carries a unique ability like none other before.
The sword's ability focuses around the user sending a tremendous amount of chakra into the blade of the sword. As soon as the chakra is stored inside the sword the use says "Shoot to kill Shinso", as soon as the user says the last words the sword releases a large amount of chakra outwards from the blade straight forward at such a enormous speed that one without a sharigan would find it hard to track. The chakra released from the blade is white in color, and is incredibly sharp. As the chakra is released from the blade, the user is capable of swinging the sword, sending the chakra still attached to the sword around as if it was a blade. The blade also carries tremendous force when extending. So much force that it can destroy any B-Rank defense or below. Shinsō is capable of reaching a maximum length equivalent to 5times its original length, Thus making the chakra shoot up to mid range. As soon as the chakra hits something it disperses after a few seconds, though if the chakra comes into contact with nothing, the user could swing his blade around continuously like a sword until it makes contact.
The chakra has the same cutting power as the blade, and the time it takes to release Shinso to its full length is the same amount it takes to form a single handseal.

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-Releasing the chakra from the sword counts as one of the users three moves per turn
-Can be used five times per battle
-Can Only be used|taught by Better

-Its a Chakra Blast-

fixed the damage and chakra and made it unmessy lol you can make any edits if necessary


±± Declined ±± On resubmissions you are required to bold any change you made in the technique.

Resubmitting the first one with bolded changes basically

Shinsō: God Spear
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: "Shinso" looks like an ordinary wakizashi. Though from its appearance it may look normal, it actually carries a unique ability like none other before.
The sword's ability focuses around the user sending a tremendous amount of chakra into the blade of the sword. As soon as the chakra is stored inside the sword the use says "Shoot to kill Shinso", as soon as the user says the last words the sword releases a large amount of chakra outwards from the blade straight forward at such a enormous speed that one without a dojutsu would find it hard to track (but not impossible). The chakra released from the blade is white in color, and is incredibly sharp. As the chakra is released from the blade, the user is capable of swinging the sword, sending the chakra still attached to the sword around as if it was a blade. The blade also carries tremendous force when extending. So much force that it can destroy any B-Rank defense or below. Shinsō is capable of reaching a maximum length equivalent to 10times its original length, Thus making the chakra shoot up to mid range. As soon as the chakra hits something it disperses after a few seconds, though if the chakra comes into contact with nothing, the user could swing his blade around in that turn, while it reverts back as soon as the next turn starts. The chakra blast strength is S-Rank.
The chakra has the same cutting power as the blade, and the time it takes to release Shinso to its full length is the same amount it takes to form a single handseal.

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-Releasing the chakra from the sword counts as one of the users three moves per turn
-Can be used 3 times per battle
-Can Only be used|taught by Better

-Its a Chakra Blast-

fixed the damage and chakra and made it unmessy everything bolded is a change from the first quote, i mostly reworded the whole thing though lol

Any edits are welcome


±± Approved ±±

 

[Pervyy]

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(Fuuin: Metsuryū Mahō) - Sealing art: Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Fuuin
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Before the battle the user will have places 5 basic seals in their mouth/throat in preparation. Each of these seals will represent one of the 5 basic elements. In battle, when the user is about to be hit by one of the the 5 basic elements they will perform one handseal activating one of the chosen seals in their mouth as they breath in. In doing so, the element of the seal they activated will be sucking in and sealed into the seal in the users mouth. Much like how Jiraiya sealed Amaterasu. After having sealed the element, the user can then perform one handseal releasing that element from their mouth back at their opponent. An exampe of this jutsu would be if the opponent use a B rank fireball, just when it's about to hit the user, he will perform one handseal, activating the seal as he breaths in, as he does, the fireball will be sealed into the seal in the users mouth, without hurting the user. The user could then perform another handseal releasing the fireball back at the opponent, the fireball would still be B rank.

Note: Each seal can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can only seal one jutsu per seal
Note: Can only seal S rank and below
Note: Must wait 1 turn to use this jutsu again
Note: After a jutsu has been sealed in the users mouth, when they release it back, it counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turns.
Note: Can only seal one element, not elemental combinations.

±± Declined ±± Ok, i will only allow this to seal up to A-Rank techniques and some reasoning needs to be done as size is a factor here. Also, what you release is actually a raw version of that elemental chakra you absorbed as the seal does no shape manipulation to achieve the end result of a jutsu. Also, i will only allow you to seal 3 techniques per battle, not 5. Also, the released elemental "blast" would be mid range tops and in a form of an unfocused stream.

(Fuuin: Metsuryū Mahō) - Sealing art: Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Fuuin
Rank: A
Range: Short (mid range blast when released)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Before the battle the user will have places 5 basic seals in their mouth/throat in preparation. Each of these seals will represent one of the 5 basic elements. In battle, when the user is about to be hit by one of the the 5 basic elements they will perform one handseal activating one of the chosen seals in their mouth as they breath in. In doing so, the element of the seal they activated will be sucking in and sealed into the seal in the users mouth. Much like how Jiraiya sealed Amaterasu. After having sealed the element, the user can then perform one handseal releasing that element from their mouth back at their opponent, in the form of a blast of that chosen element with no shape to it. An exampe of this jutsu would be if the opponent use a B rank fireball, just when it's about to hit the user, he will perform one handseal, activating the seal as he breathes in, as he does, the fireball will be sealed into the seal in the users mouth, without hurting the user. The user could then perform another handseal releasing the fireb back at the opponent as one big blast, the fireball would still be B rank. When the seal is activated, a mass of chakra is released out of the users mouth at high speed, similar to when jiraiya sealed amaterasu in a scroll, but faster. The element would be drawn into this chakra and sealed into the seal in the users mouth.

Note: Each seal can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can only seal one jutsu per seal
Note: Can only seal A rank and below
Note: Must wait 1 turn to use this jutsu again
Note: After a jutsu has been sealed in the users mouth, when they release it back, it counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turns.
Note: Can only seal one element, not elemental combinations.
Note: Useable 3 times


I'm dropping this customs weapon:

(Tensa Zangetsu) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 for fire jutsu
Damage Points: 60 from lightning blast
Description: Ichigo's shrinks is a daitō (Japanese long sword) with a black blade instead. The cross guard has four prongs bent out to form the shape of the manji (which is the kanji for "ban," meaning "full", as in "full release"). The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. Anything above a D rank attack would hit the sword out of the users hand. A short length of chain with a broken link at the end dangles from the base of the hilt. Tensa Zangetsu is a special blade forged in the hawk village with sacred methods that allow the sword to draw in natural energy at half the speed of a normal ninja. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with lightning charka, though this lighning turns to black due to the sword's effect. This lightning increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 3 turns and can be used once per battle.

Note: Can only be used by Ichigo Uchiha
Note: Surrounding the sword with black lightning counts as one of the jutsu per turn, lasts for 3 turns and can only be used once. It adds +10 damage to kenjutsu attacks that are used in short range.
Note: When the user is drawing in natural energy through the sword they can't use kenjutsu techniques

(Igneel's atae) - Igneel's Gift
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra cost: N/a
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Long ago, when Natsu was young and Igneel found him, Igneel gave this special scalf to Natsu. At the time Natsu didn't understand why, but now it's all he has left of his "Father". This scarf has several Kanji seals and formulas said to have been written by a Fire Dragon. Although the full extent of the scarfs power is still unknown, it has been shown that fire techniques used by someone wearing the scarf are slightly more powerful, bigger and faster. The scarf passively feeds on the users chakra to create an aura of fire chakra around him that reduces incoming fire by one rank. The users fire jutsu increase in size and gain +10 damage. Not only this, but the Scalf gives Natsu the determination to fight so that he can meet Igneel again and make him proud, much like Jiraiyas determination. This will increase his will power and will be able to continue to fight even while in pain, such as losing an arm. Natsu always wears this scalf.

Note: The aura reduces only the damage of Katon techniques, not elemental combinations with fire or fire related CE's or KG.


Not sure if this has been made before (if it has do you know by who?). I had a look around and could find it so here:

(Katon: Metsuryū Hokasui) - Fire style: Dragon Slayer Fire Stream
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will focus their fire chakra into their hands or feet. The the user will surround their hands of feet in flames releasing a blast of fire from their hands like when a rocket blasts off. This concerntrated stream will travel up to mid range. Due to the power of the flames, if the user doesn't have his feet firmly on the ground the blast of fire will push him in the opposite direction to which the flames are traveling.

Note: can only make max of 2 blasts per use


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[Lucifer]

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(Raiton/Katon: Kaosu) - Lightning/Fire Release: Chaos
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses a large quantity of raiton chakra into his/her dominant palm and uses nature manipulation to form into the form of a large four pointed shuriken around their dominant hand. Due to the intensity of the lighting chakra the shuriken is visibly much darker almost black in colour. Then the user switches to their highly focused katon chakra channeling it into the four pointed black shuriken and giving it a crimson border. The user throws the lightning shuriken and once it comes into contact with the target it disperses and surrounds the target in a layer of lightning, electrocuting them in the process. And on impact it also releases a surge of katon chakra, coiled around the lightning. Due to the enhanced form of the attack the target gets burned by the fire and shocked by the lightning.

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Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot peform any lightning/fire technique's the next turns.
Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users moves as it's an elemental combo.

±± Declined ±± Two elemental chakras? Were did the fire come from? It appears in the end... Also, you already know that to use 2 elemental chakras at the same time you need Yin/yang training.


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(Suiton: Mizu no Senmetsu) - Water Release: Water Annihilation
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: By making a total of three handseals, the user slams his/her both hands with an enormous might on the ground, by doing so the user releases a large quantity suiton chakra around himself, as the chakra makes a complete circle around the user it will start to materialize into a large amount of water, the water will then surround the user, and create a mighty push from short range to long range destroying most of the forest or stones around, due to the enromous pressure build up by the chakra, pusshing everything away from the user itself leaving a path of destruction behind, and as it calms down it leaves small pools of water behind.

Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any water or lightning technique's the next turn.

±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists. When i say similar i mean "omnidirectional blast of water that destroys everything in its path until long range"


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(Hayatōn: Hayaigeki) – Swift Release: Fast Strike
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user release their swift chakra through their body, allowing the user moves at such a speed where they become unseeable with the naked eye, tho the sharingan (3T) is able to follow the movements made by the user. This technique makes the user move at such a speed that all is seen is a notable line of light. The user can only move forward while using this technique as the momentum makes changing direction almost impossible. The user can deliver a powerful strike with this technique, it's often used as a finishing move.

Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any swift technique's the next turn.


±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.

 

[Baldy]

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(Katon: Higan)- Fire Gun
Type: Attack/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User focuses chakra within the index and middle fingers of both hands, which point towards the opponent likes guns. The tip of their fingers than turn into flames, and afterwards, the user shoots small fire bullets towards the opponent from their fingers. The small fire bullets may be small, but they are potent and incredibly hot. They constantly rotate through the air, building up even more power. They travel towards you at a fairly fast speed, and are hard to notice, but if the user rapidly fires the bullets, it is easy to notice. Due to the size of each bullets, the user can constantly shoot those bullets out, regenerating their chakra and shooting out quickly, although 4 bullets are shot out every time, from each finger. The bullets can be aimed, but you cannot control their path and trajectory. The bullets can be shot for a long time, however, if you lose concentration, the bullets will stop. The bullets can explode upon impact, causing grievous injuries to the opponent. If they hit a vital spot, due to the intense heat, the organ might burst into flames from inside, killing the opponent effectively within several moments.
Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 3 times per battle
• No S-rank Fire/Water for the next turn
• Cooldown period of 2 turns

~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists
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Dropping:

Custom Weapon

(Ransadōru Verude)-Green Lancer
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The Green Lancer is a double-sided lance weapon. (Picture is on the right) The Green Lancer is made of very tough iron, and cannot be broken easily. The ends of the weapon is extremely sharp, and can pierce through human bodies with almost no effort. The greatest ability of this "weapon" is that Nel can throw this lance with great force at the opponent in battle. If Nel focus her chakra into the weapon and throws it at the opponent, The Green Lancer will travel at extreme speeds towards the opponent. The catch is that, as the Green Lancer travels through the air, it starts to spin and build up energy. The energy is raw chakra and it is pink in colour and the Lance continues to build up momentum and power. When it hits the opponent, it acts as a drill and it inflicts extreme piercing damage. Due to the power it got from all the spinning, the Green Lancer is able to pierce through B-rank defences and below. It can travel up to mid-range and it will return to the user after being thrown. It flies back to my hand as there is a chakra link between your palm and the hilt of your weapon when it is thrown and that chakra is only visible to doujutsu

Restrictions
Can only be used or taught by me
Throwing of the Lance counts as 1 move in your turn
Throwing of the Lance can only be used 3 times per battle
Cooldown of 2 turns before you can throw it again

(Tebukuro no Tentei)- Gloves of God
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 at all times, 40 when basic ability is activated, 50 when advanced ability is activated
Damage: 80
Description: The Gloves of God are a very powerful pair of gloves, that were crafted by elite blacksmiths and craftsman. During ancient times, around the time of the Sage of Six Paths, it was rumored that a group of highly skilled weapon makers, blacksmiths, and craftsman, came together to make the ultimate weapon, to be used in times of need. Gathering the finest of materials, including the most reactive and the most destructive, as well as the most self-harming inadvertently, they crafted a pair of gloves, black in color streaked with a horizontal red line on the glove's end. It is made with a seemingly lightweight polyester, that is extremely durable and flexible. These pair of gloves grant the wielder overwhelming power, but in return, comes at a costly price. It constantly leeches and drains a moderately high amount of chakra from the user, in return for cooperation and giving power to the user. The sword's first and most innate ability, its basic ability, is being infused with elemental chakra for a brief amount of time. When the user for example, infuses his gloves with Katon Chakra, he can shoot out a B-ranked Fire attack that is shaped in a fist, similar to that of Hurricane Fist, the Wind counterpart. This can be done with all elements, 5 times per battle only. The next ability, is what grants this weapon its power, and fame. This attack's name is called Negation. As the opponent shoots an attack at you, lets say an S-rank Fire technique, one simply focuses fire chakra in his gloves, and utilizing this ability, he punches the attack straight with his gloves, and negates the chakra within the attack, with his own, neutralizing each other, and thus negating and cancelling the attack. When the user performs Negation, an orb of chakra corresponding to the element, red being fire, blue being water, yellow being lightning, brown being earth, green being wind, surrounds the user's palm. The chakra seeps into the incoming attack, and neutralizes the chakra within, cancelling the attack. This takes a toll on the user's body every time they perform it, but comes in handy in battle.

Restrictions

• Can only be used by Baldy.. and those whom he allows
• First ability can only be used 3 times per battle, and only 1 time per element
• The first ability is B-ranked only
• Cooldown period of 2 turns for the 1st ability to be used again
• Second ability can only be used 3 times per battle
• S-ranks and above can only be negated once per battle
• After negating an attack, one cannot negate the another attack for 2 turns, before being able to again

~Declined~ Seems a bit overpowered, don't you think? Also, define this "overwhelming power." The only thing really special about this glove is the fact that it can negate abilities. The rest can be done through regular jutsus.

Feel free to edit anything, especially my CW, as I really want it ^^

 

[Luther]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ninjutsu: Kaidan no konkyo)Ninja arts: Stairs grounds

Rank: A

Type: Defensive

Range: Mid

Chakra cost:30

Damage points: N/A
Description: The user channels chakra under her feet she then uses shape manipulation while still making use of her chakra under her feet to create thin- non -brittle bricks of stairs which she uses to increase her height temporarily sort of like a stepper which is a gyming machinery used in the gym.

Can only be used 2 times in a battle

(Ninjutsu sutairu: Bentsū)Ninjutsu Style: Bowel movement

Rank: B

Type: Defensive

Range: Supplementary

Chakra Cost:20

Damage points: N/A

Description: The user takes a squatting position and empty his bowels thus releasing feces into the environment he then adds his chakra to it making it become more squishy to touch, then he rubs it around his body giving him a disgusting smell and making him irritating to the opponent up to the point where the opponent is afraid to touch him and land physical attacks or jutsu in short range near him so as to avoid the smell .If the user touches the opponent he bears a strong smell and is easily sensed in battle fields . This works more efficiently against opponents of lower ranks because they have lesser will and spirit power to suppress his irritating presence and try to go hit him.

Note: Can be done three times a battle

Note: Does not affect target of higher ranks (Post Counts)


(Ninjutsu sutairu: Shi Vwink)Ninjutsu style: Death Vwink

Rank: S

Range: Short

Chakra Cost:40

Damage points:80

Description: This jutsu was originally done by iva chan the revolutionary, and partner of monkey d dragon in one piece. This technique tries to reenact it an make it more plausible into the Naruto RP. The user channels their chakra through their body and focuses it on their eye for a long duration of time he then uses shape manipulations and chakra manipulation and give it the shape of a thin like sphere of chakra which gets bigger and is more visible to the naked eye over time. The user then blinks their eyes and release the chakra sphere which when emitted causes a shock wave which blows the opponents harshly and very violently from his default position.

Can only be used once in a fight.


±± All Declined ±± Don't resubmit any of these. You are hereby banned from this thread for 4 complete submission cycles. You can submit techniques again in the cycle that begins on the 14th of May, 2012. Any technique submitted already by you is auto declined. Submit something like that second technique again and you'll be banned from this thread forever.

 

[Luiz]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Samurai Arts: Suicide by Disembowelment ( Bushijutsu: Seppuku Harakiri)

Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique acts in two steps. Upon being affected by a genjutsu or otherwise loosing mental control over his body, the samurai will take his sword and charge chakra in it, ending his life with the chakra tip of the sword. But unlike the normal chakra swords, this one will not penetrate the body physically but affect the chakra pathway directly, killing not the user, but the genjutsu/technique, releasing the user from any genjutsu or similar technique up to one rank above the technique. The whole procedure is heavily psychological to the samurai, so that even inside the genjutsu, the samurai will manipulate it into growing arms (if the technique takes them away) or releasing them (if the technique locks them) and preform the suicide in his mind, effectively releasing it. This jutsu acts almost automatically if the genjutsu is noticeable enough, or if the user looses control of his own body, which is shameful to their pride. The second step is a similar effect to the Killing Intent, where the user affects the opponents with his spirit alone, thus making the opponent that set the technique feel as if he was stabbed in the gut. This is especially harmful if the opponent was mentally/phsyically inside the user (Yamanaka, Soma no Kou, etc) for the stabbing will have real effects on them, otherwise it would just paralyze them for a few moments, depending on how much stronger the opponent is.
The higher the user, the faster the technique, until it goes from mere seconds to fractions of a second.
*Due to the chakra strain, this jutsu counts as two, or, if preferred, the user will only be able to use 2 jutsus the next turn*


±± Pending ±± Leaving for Izuna, Roku, Zen or Alucard

-Declined-
Although the first step seems okay, note that, even though you can create arms, they're still susceptible to the effects of the gengutsu, as you haven't release it yet. Meaning that if a gengutsu slows down time, the arms you're creating are still bound to the gengutsu and they're coming out slowly.
Now about the second part. You're trying to put your opponent under a gengutsu, while at the same time you're disturbing your own chakra flow, which isn't possible. So you'll have to remove that, though if you want, you can say that you also disturb their chakra flow, but only if they're inside you like SnK, Yamanaka. Also remove any reference to the Killing Intent technique as it already creates enough problems.
That last restriction isn't enough as you can release gengutsus up to S-rank and since Samurais can have an entire battle simply by going free-form. Add it can only be used 2 times per battle.

 

[Ryūjin]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ninpō: Kemuri Nenshō Sō) - Ninja Art: Burning Smoke Stream
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is an advanced Smoke Technique however enhanced by the Fire chakra nature, by infusing the user's wrist launcher(s) with Fire chakra, the user releases a wide Stream of Smoke out of his Wrist launcher(s) towards his target, using the Fire chakra's abilities, the user greatly increases the temperature of the smoke when it's released out of the wrist launchers, being equal to some fire technique's temperature or Steam's temperature, burning the opponent on contact with their skin in a similar manner to hot steam or fire.
Note: Can only be used by Smoke users with a Wrist launcher
Note: No Smoke Techniques higher than A-rank the following turn.
Note: Can only be used twice.

±± Declined ±± So you want smoke to be like steam, boil and fire elements? Not going to happen.

(Ninpō: Kemuri Nenshō Sō) - Ninja Art: Burning Smoke Stream
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is an advanced Smoke Technique however enhanced by the Fire chakra nature, by infusing the user's wrist launcher(s) with Fire chakra, the user releases a wide Stream of Smoke out of his Wrist launcher(s) towards his target, using the Fire chakra's abilities, the user greatly increases the temperature of the smoke when it's released out of the wrist launchers, being equal to some fire technique's temperature or Steam's temperature, burning the opponent on contact with their skin in a similar manner to hot steam or fire however not having the proprieties of steam of fire elements, since it's only Smoke with enhanced temperature.
Note: Can only be used by Smoke users with a Wrist launcher
Note: No Smoke Techniques higher than A-rank the following turn.
Note: Can only be used twice.

I didn't say anything about wanting Smoke to be like steam or fire, i said similar to them and having some of the technique's temperatures, but Smoke will still be Smoke and fire will still be fire, Smoke will always have a one rank difference since it's pure chakra manipulation not a nature transformation.

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.


(Ninpō: Ude No Maō) - Ninja Art: The Devil Bringer
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This technique is achieved only through very distinct pure chakra control over Smoke that the user releases out of one of his Wrist launchers, the user gathers a large amount of chakra into one of the Wrist launchers located around his right or left forearm, forming somewhat a shape of a demonic arm that surrounds the user's hand made entirely of Smoke taking on a solid structure through condensing Smoke with the usage of chakra compression, the user can manipulate this hand that's made out of Smoke in many ways, this hand of Smoke follows the user's hand movements through the usage of chakra, and the user has to be making movement patterns with his hand and the Smoke hand will mimic the user's hand movements, the user can extend the hand up to Long/Mid/Short range from him and bring objects back to his location using the hand of Smoke the user is able to use this hand in multiple forms described in the following:

Long form: using the user's chakra, the user causes the Smoke hand to extend up to Long range and increase in size, being able to grab distant objects and drive them back to the user, the Ice hand becomes big enough to grab objects as big as one person, with the hand's diameter equivalent to a person's waist diameter, however this form can only be used for grabbing objects/people from long ranged distance.

Mid form: The user using his chakra to extend the hand up to Mid range, this form is used the same way as the previous form however it's larger than the previous form, being able to grab two people standing next to each other and drive them back to the user, unlike the previous form, this form can be used in attacking the opponent, gaining a speed momentum when the user extends the hand up to Mid range, however this can't be used in order to defend attacks due to it's rather small size, it can only defend from small sized attacks like a small fireball or thrown projectiles.

Short form: Using the user's chakra the user is able to extend the Smoke hand up to Short range from him, like the previous forms this form makes the user able to grab 4 people grouping together, The user can use this form to defend from attacks sent directly at the user due to the Ice hand's large size, or deliver punches to the opponent if he's nearby, the punch of this hand is enough to push a summoning half the size of Gamabunta backwards to Mid range.

Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Can only use one form at a time.
Note: No S-rank Smoke Techniques this or the following turn.
Note: Can only be used by Smoke users with a wrist launcher.
Note: If not destroyed the Smoke hand lasts 1 turn.

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±± Declined ±± Why is this S-Rank? Also, too much for a simple hand of smoke technique. Tone it down and make it fit what it is actually: a simple hand of smoke that you can use in a multitude of ways to support you. All the bolded parts are either too oped or simple don't make sense. Btw, link or quote the original ice jutsu please.


(Katon: Shōjōhi Honō Sono) - Fire Release: Scarlet Rose Garden
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After forming the required handseal Bird → Horse → Tiger the user's hands begin to glow orange-like color as the user stomps with his hands onto the ground releasing a massive amount of Fire chakra into the ground, the Fire suddenly erupts out of the ground underneath the target a burst of fire is released out of the ground that maintains the shape of a rose of fire through precise Fire chakra manipulation, the rose is 10 meters tall and 15 meters wide and has fire streaming through it kept, When this technique collides with a Wind technique it completely devours the wind technique, even if the wind technique has some kind of pressure compression the Fire eats the wind technique like it was never there due to the fast streaming fire that's running through the fire rose, however that's when the Fire and Wind techniques collide from opposite directions the user can also cause the Fire rose to rise upwards into the sky after erupting from the ground, while still having a connection with the ground or in other words "expanding" however it raises only in a straight line upwards.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: No S-rank fire techniques in the same or following turn.


±± Declined ±± Oped and similar to other existing fire techniques