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(Kadata sutoringusu) Kadata Strings
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique takes basic puppet strings and basic element infusion and puts them together. The user (without handseals) puts
twice the amount of chakra needed to make normal chakra strings and infuse them with elemental chakra to make them stronger. These strings can be used to attach themselves to puppets and other objects under the user's control that are capable of moving of their own accord (weapons/like chiyo did with the kunai). The object/puppet gains that elemental affinity of the chakra string they are attached with. Each element gives the strings different abilities. The srings can be manipulated however the user sees fit.
Water: gives them erosive property (not acid, more like water erosion)
Wind: gives them more cutting property
Lightning: gives them a paralyzing affect (2 turns if touched) and cutting (if stabbed)
Fire: gives them a burning property
Earth: makes them stronger (harder to break)
-Elemental Affinities include basic 5/CE that the user owns
-Natural Elemental Weaknesses still apply.
-User can control
1 Elemental Affinity Chakra Strings at once (both hands)
-User cannot use Forbidden Ranked Techniques of the Elemental affinity chakra strings that they are using.
-User is limited to a total of three Elemental Chakra String Affinities per battle.
-Can only use
5 times per battle
(once per element).
-Can only be used by Puppet Users.
-Stays in effect for two turns
-Must wait 3 turns to use again.
-Lighting paralyzing last two turns.
-Can be used on existing strings
- Can control puppets while in effect
- Can only be taught be Black Uchiha
||Both Declined|| As I said, similar techniques exist. Also, the second one was not really changed. It seems more like you tried to hide the exclusion of the restrictions by emphasizing smaller numbers. Either way, the second one is OP and has a duration that is far too great for it's level.
(Seigi no kodai no amyuretto to gantoretto) Ancient Amulet and Gauntlet of the Righteous
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Points: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This two part weapon consists of an amulet wore around the neck and a gauntlet that dons the right arm of the user. This combo was said to be forged from the Insect King’s right arm. As the story goes, the Insect King fell into a large river, and on the brink of death was saved by a righteous human (thought to be an Aburame member). Thereafter the Insect King had the weapon combo made and gave it to the man as a sign of his gratitude, his loyalty, and the loyalty of his family and all the insects under his rule. The Insect King told the man to pass these items throughout his bloodline and the insects would be there to help them. This was thought to be the first contract with insects, the Aburame’s insects to be more specific.
Abilities: The Gauntlet can block and deflect normal weapons with ease, it has an extendable blade (kunai sized) above the wrist. It can also absorb 3 A-rank and below techniques of the opponent, and can have the user channel his chakra into it indefinitely. Upon absorption the gauntlet takes on the properties of the absorbed element (Claw of flame= Normal, Phoenix of light= Wind, Morning Jewel= Water, Susanou= Lightning, Abaddon= Earth, Hephaisto= Fire)
The Amulet grants the insects that serve/help the wielder something called chakra sharing, where after absorbing an elemental chakra into the gauntlet, it then is transferred to the insects, that help the user, giving them and elemental coating and the properties of that element. The amulet also makes the user more in tune with his insects,
letting him/her feel/know what they know.
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Notes:
-Can only absorb 3 techs per battle (A-rank & below)
-Can only use chakra sharing 3 times per battle
-Gauntlet change/absorption last 2 turns (infused gauntlet & blade)
-Coating last 2 turns or 1 move
-The coating doesn’t increase power just gives elemental properties
-Absorbtion counts as one of the users 3 moves
-Can only be used/lent by Black Uchiha
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~Declined~ You stacked too many abilities. Take out the whole part about you absorbing attacks and replace it by you infusing a certain elemental chakra in the gauntlet, this way you can keep the rest of the abilities. Define in details what the coating and elemental properties do on the insects. Take out the bold part, this isn't the Rinnegan, you don't share a vision of your bugs and I don't want you to have thousands of insects as your personal eyes on the field. Where are the restrictions? There's no drawbacks whatsoever.