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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

re submitting AN ALREADY APPROVED JUTSU just clearing it up b/c well the description is horrible


flame on mode (honoo oite mo-do)
rank: FORBIDDEN
range: short
type: supplementary
chakra: 50
damage: N/A
description the user will focus fire chakra out of all pours and chant 'flame on' once he does his body will erupt in flames (become flames) and be pretty much immune to most fire attacks b/c of this. furthermore all A rank water jutsu and below (being that forbidden fire beats A water) water jutsu are evaporated when the user gets near them. the user gains the ability to fly and gets the speed of the third gate all fire jutsu require no hand signs and go up 30 in damage points
~once per battle
~lasts 4 turns
~50 damage to the user
~no fire jutsu 3 turns after usage
~no S or A rank water or wind jutsu useable while in flame on mode


please add any restrictions you need to if you think there is more needed

~ Approved ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 40
Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
~could be charged with lightening chakra to make the demon go even faster by only mentioning it
~ strings are connected.
~Declined~ How would you charge the cloth with lightning just by mentioning it?
you said that I must connect it with strings to be able to use it, so i connect it with strings too with the clothes, and being able to charge it with lightening chakra to make it faster is possible i believe and to let the opponent knows that i did i must mention it while battling, what is so hard in that?

Babylon Tower

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description:The user fuses a large amount of his earth chakra into the ground under him. Then with much concentration, the user makes thick earth walls rise around him in a spinning motion which leads to a creation of a tower of very thick walls. The spot that the user stands on rises to the same height as the tower is which would be as high as a small mountain.

Mirror Shields

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks if possible.
~the 3 mirrors are moveable around the user
~they can't reflect forbidden genjutsu
~can only be used twice per battle
~can't stay more than 3 turns
~if the mirrors are damaged, it would stay only for 2 turns
~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack


Tsunami Clash

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense/Attack
chakra: 40
damage: 80 (+5 damages if it hits the opponent from a short range)
description:The user charges a huge amount of his water chakra through the ground and then releases it toward the enemy from underground, creating a huge water wave that clashes upon the enemy harshly damaging them and make them fall unconscious. This jutsu can also be used to protect the user from the enemy’s fire style attacks.
~ can only be used three times per battle
~ the user can't use water jutsu in the same turn
~ can't stop Forbidden rank fire jutsus

~ What the hell happened to all the Japanese names ? ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

you said that I must connect it with strings to be able to use it, so i connect it with strings too with the clothes, and being able to charge it with lightening chakra to make it faster is possible i believe and to let the opponent knows that i did i must mention it while battling, what is so hard in that?

Babylon Tower

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description:The user fuses a large amount of his earth chakra into the ground under him. Then with much concentration, the user makes thick earth walls rise around him in a spinning motion which leads to a creation of a tower of very thick walls. The spot that the user stands on rises to the same height as the tower is which would be as high as a small mountain.

Mirror Shields

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks if possible.
~the 3 mirrors are moveable around the user
~they can't reflect forbidden genjutsu
~can only be used twice per battle
~can't stay more than 3 turns
~if the mirrors are damaged, it would stay only for 2 turns
~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack


Tsunami Clash

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense/Attack
chakra: 40
damage: 80 (+5 damages if it hits the opponent from a short range)
description:The user charges a huge amount of his water chakra through the ground and then releases it toward the enemy from underground, creating a huge water wave that clashes upon the enemy harshly damaging them and make them fall unconscious. This jutsu can also be used to protect the user from the enemy?s fire style attacks.
~ can only be used three times per battle
~ the user can't use water jutsu in the same turn
~ can't stop Forbidden rank fire jutsus
eh you do know that there is a jutsu from the manga exactly like that i have a shining water custom like that and others have made so many tsunami related jutsu right ~_~


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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Raiton: Kono Za Han'i, Kaishoku Motte Raikage!!
Lightning Release: This is The Extent, Dont Mess With The Raikage!!!

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Chakra: 60 (+ 30 Every Turn)
Damage: 120 (+50 to Raiton) (+ 30 To User Every Turn)
Description: As The Raikage is known to have the chakra levels of a Bijuu, by combining more chakra with his Raikage Armor, he creates a huge outer layer of Lightning Chakra which then shapes into the shape of a feral dog as the electricity stands as if it were fur when a dog gets mad. This makes the Raikage appear as if he has his own Bijuu and this Chakra function much like his armor but on a far greater scale.
His Defense
Opponent's lightning does nothing to him regardless of the jutsu.
Uneffected by anything but Wind and Water and Lightning Resistant CE (Unless another Technique permits otherwise)
Control of Lightning
Makes Him Able to utilize any lightning jutsu without seals
Power
Able to cause great craters where ever he steps and it seems as if the world is being pelted by meteors as he runs
Speed
Runs with Same Speed as The Raikage Assualt Armorwith the speed of his Armor..
The main Drawback is the amount of Chakra used and th estrain it puts on the nerves.
(User can't use any technique over C-rank after use)
(User Cant move 2 turns afterwards)
(Usable Once)
(Last 3 turns)
(Raikage Only Technique)

~ Declined, OPed. I do not see how it would withstand Fire, or ANY Combination element, not only Lightning defeating CEs. Remove that. And remove the control how he wants. Except for the Shukaku, no Bijuu can control its attacks once released. Remove the meteor pelting thing. Specify the size of the craters, what damage will occur if the opponent is nearby when the crater forms ? Restrict it to two turns. ~
Re-Submit:
Raiton: Kono Za Han'i, Kaishoku Motte Raikage!!
Lightning Release: This is The Extent, Dont Mess With The Raikage!!!

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Chakra: 60 (+ 30 Every Turn)
Damage: 120 (+50 to Raiton) (+ 30 To User Every Turn)
Description: As The Raikage is known to have the chakra levels of a Bijuu, by combining more chakra with his Raikage Armor, he creates a huge outer layer of Lightning Chakra which then shapes into the shape of a feral dog as the electricity stands as if it were fur when a dog gets mad. This makes the Raikage appear as if he has his own Bijuu and this Chakra function much like his armor but on a far greater scale.
His Defense
Opponent's lightning and Earth does nothing to him regardless of the jutsu. He is however comparatively weaker to wind.
Control of Lightning
Makes Him Able to utilize any lightning jutsu without seals
Power
Able to cause metre wide craters where ever he steps. (opponent takes 20 damge if near Short)
Speed
Runs with Same Speed as The Raikage Assualt Armor with the speed of his Armor..
The main Drawback is the amount of Chakra used and the strain it puts on the nerves.
(User can't use any technique over C-rank after use)
(User Cant move 2 turns afterwards)
(Usable Once)
(User can't use Earth Or Wind while in use)
(Last 2 turns)
(Raikage Only Technique)

~ Approved, I added bits ~

New Submission​
Custom Weapon: Bullet Blade (Soudu Dan)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: (+20 per Blade Extension)
Damage: 30 from each hit.
Description: A sword with four extensions; it has the appearance to look like Hidan's Scythe. These extensions are attached to chains within the inner mechanisms of the sword making the user able to fire off these extentions to accomplish a variety of effects such as grappling objects to pull the user towards it, attacking the opponent or even binding the opponent.
(Can also use Sword-Gun Jutsu)


~ Declined, you already have a custom weapon, right ? ~

Updating Approved Jutsu:

Name: Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 every turn active)
Damage: +30 to taijutsu and +20 to Lightning
Description: The Raikage can Automatically Release Lightning Chakra from every point of his body, giving him a boost in reflexes, speed, and power comparable to Maito Gai in his 8-Gates Mode. He is also resistant to up to 2 lighting techs of equal rank.
(Last 3 Turns)
(Usable 2 times; 1 turn Recharge)
(Only Usable By Raikage)

~ Declined, the old version is enough, do not resubmit ~

Name: Koga Dato-Dan (Great Shark Tooth Sword Bullet)
Rank: B-S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: 40-80
Description: The user creates this attack by swinging his Sword-Gun into a star-like fashion (last about two hand-seals), this creates a sword that can be projected into water and cut almost anything.
By Using: Kyoka Maho-Dan( Enahancment Bullet) the user can increase the Rank of this Jutsu Creating:
A-Rank: (Koga Datori-Dan) Great Shark Tooth Dragon Sword
The sword is now able to move on its own and attack the opponent if it misses.
(Form Usable 3times mode)
(Level 3)
S-Rank: ( Koga Datoriga-Dan) Great Shark Dragon Sword
The sword is about the size of a small summon and is chakra-jet propelled making it move extremely fast and almost unavoidable.
(only usable 2 times in this mode no more Sword-Gun 2 Turns afterwards)
(Level 5)
Name: Kyoka Maho-Dan( Enahancment bullet)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30 (+5 per level increase)
Damage: +10 to +50 damage to any witch bullet used to attack
Desription: User imbues chakra into thier Sword-Gun and twirls it in a starlike fashion (Takes 2 Seals). After Completion the users shoots one of the attacks they have already created (only Sword-Gun Jutsu). By doing so this beefs up the attack with more chakra causing more destructive power and abilities not usable with the base jutsu.
(There are 5 levels of this, Ichishiki, Nishiki, Sanshiki, Yonshiki, Goshiki)


~ Think yourself lucky the sword to bullet got approved already long ago, if you try to resubmit anything it will be declined ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Resubmitting these
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.
Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
Note: Must have 2 swords available.
Note: can be used 3 times per battle.
Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.



~ Approved ~

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 10.)
Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.
Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 40 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.
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~ Declined, OPed ~

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows so fast that it can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.
Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.



~ Approved ~
 
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Resubmitting these
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.
Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
Note: Must have 2 swords available.
Note: can be used 3 times per battle.
Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.



~ Approved ~

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 10.)
Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.
Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 40 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.
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~ Declined, OPed ~

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows so fast that it can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.
Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.



~ Approved ~
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Mid distance for charging
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+40 to whatever elemental jutsu used, If redirected)
Description: User holds his hands up in the form of making a diamond with his thumb and palms open. He then begins to focus his chakra to a required amount and timing to defend against the opposing jutsu. The user will have to collect chakra for this defense in order to be able to defend against the jutsu. The user needs to be far away enough to be able to change his chakra to the specified type to absorb and then redirect the attack back at them. Though it can defend and redirect, the highest rank the user can throw back at the opponent is A rank. S rank or higher will be blocked only, but instead of redirecting the attack the user will get a +10 damage boost to the next 2 elemental jutsus of that type.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to use again.
Note: User will take 10 damage due to impact.


Please add, edit, or give me any advice to help me make this approvable. Please and thanks~<3

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if target is living being)
Description: The user's chakra will instantly change into Ice chakra allowing him to only use Water, Wind, and Ice for the rest of the turn. The user will place his hand on anything nearby to create a purple colored Ice that will never melt due to heat. This ice is manipulated into ice attacks for the Ice user. Anything can be frozen from water to people. The user will have a sort of icy touch on humans and animals. This ice will slowly grow on the victim and will keep growing unless the user lets go. The ice will make the person very cold, give pain, and weigh the person down depending on the amount. The ice can be broken, but it will deliver a sharp pain to the victim. All ice on the field can be used as material for ice attacks or can be manipulated into water to deliver water attacks.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: If ice is broken off when on the victim's body, it will deliver a sharp pain causing 5 damage.
Note: Anything can be frozen, even the ice created.
Note: This can be used as many times as wanted, but user must wait 1 turn to use again.



~ First you add Japanese names, then we will talk xd ~
 
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Water Style; Infinite Dragons Rampage (Suiton; Mugenkyaku Abaremawaru)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; A stronger version of Water Dragon Bullet, the technique requires the user to perform a set of 120 hand seals, whilst the users performing the hand seals, water from nowhere and all sources starts to gather around the user in circular manner surrounding and protection him from incoming attacks, once done the user release a barrage of dragon bullets towards the target which rampage all around the battle field changing its shape, the technique is highly difficult to avoid because of the infinite amount of dragons the users controlling but is balanced with the insane amount of hand seals it consumes.
Note; Usable twice in a battle.
-Does 10 damage and causes fatigue to the user.
-No water jutsu?s until next turn.

~ How long do these bullets rampage ? ~
Water Style; Infinite Dragons Rampage (Suiton; Mugenkyaku Abaremawaru)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; A stronger version of Water Dragon Bullet, the technique requires the user to perform a set of 120 hand seals, whilst the users performing the hand seals, water from nowhere and all sources starts to gather around the user in circular manner surrounding and protection him from incoming attacks, once done the user release a barrage of dragon bullets towards the target which rampage all around the battle field changing its shape, the technique is highly difficult to avoid because of the infinite amount of dragons the users controlling but is balanced with the insane amount of hand seals it consumes.
Note; Usable twice in a battle. The technique last 1 turn.
-Does 10 damage and causes fatigue to the user.
-No water jutsu?s until next turn.
~Declined~ OP
(Ken Sen) Blade Beam
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user focuses his chakra through the 1st blade opening in its core (thus while the sword is open, see picture) and releases it as a destructive beam of white chakra. The point of the beam is shaped into the point of a blade and along the edges of the entire bleam smaller blades appear. These blades are long enough to make deep trenches in the earth along the course of the beam.

*Must have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with the 1st Blade*
*Can only be taught by DS and Caliburn*

~ Needs restricting ~


Omni Slash of the War God (Omuni Kiritateru Henran Tentei)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (-20)
Description: A stronger version of the Omni Slash. The user releases Ken Ki, focuses an enormous amount of chakra into the Buster Sword and launches himself towards the opponent. He does one strike with the Buster Sword and the sword separates into 6 swords during it, all infused with chakra, that start to hoover around the opponent in a circular formation. The user goes from one sword to another and uses his own chakra, that is spread around the sword, as a launching platform without touching the ground and starts to slash the opponent 6 times.
However this time He does it again 6 times, using the speed of Ken Ki at its max, that it looks like he attacks 6 times at the same time with all six swords, leaving 6 after images. The user finishes by attacking from above one last time with the Beam Sword.
Every time the opponent is hit the chakra, that was infused in the sword, explodes on contact. Whatever is left is blasted to the ground with the final attack of the Beam Blade with a Blade Beam-like attack.

*Must Have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with Buster sword*
*-20 damage to the user*
*The user can't use any forbidden-rank jutsu's next two turns*
*The user can't use any jutsu's with the Fusion Swords next two turns*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

~ Declined ~
~i'd like the person checking these to check the sword related jutsus separately (ken ki is one of cali's modes if there's a problem identifying that), also i don't think there should be a problem with this since there is nothing much in this except the jutsu's(which will be submitted momentarily) and the special design which offers different valid techniques in the means of sword combat~
~ Do you have another weapon already ? Tell me on VM ~
(Ken Sen) Blade Beam
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user focuses his chakra through the 1st blade opening in its core (thus while the sword is open, see picture) and releases it as a destructive beam of white chakra. The point of the beam is shaped into the point of a blade and along the edges of the entire bleam smaller blades appear. These blades are long enough to make deep trenches in the earth along the course of the beam.

*Must have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with the 1st Blade*
*Usable 4 times in a battle*
*Can only be taught by DS and Caliburn*
~Declined~ OP
Omni Slash of the War God (Omuni Kiritateru Henran Tentei)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 100 (-20)
Description: A stronger version of the Omni Slash. The user releases Ken Ki, focuses an enormous amount of chakra into the Buster Sword and launches himself towards the opponent. He does one strike with the Buster Sword and the sword separates into 6 swords during it, all infused with chakra, that start to hoover around the opponent in a circular formation. The user goes from one sword to another and uses his own chakra, that is spread around the sword, as a launching platform without touching the ground and starts to slash the opponent 6 times.
However this time He does it again 6 times, using the speed of Ken Ki at its max, that it looks like he attacks 6 times at the same time with all six swords, leaving 6 after images. The user finishes by attacking from above one last time with the Beam Sword.
Every time the opponent is hit the chakra, that was infused in the sword, explodes on contact. Whatever is left is blasted to the ground with the final attack of the Beam Blade with a Blade Beam-like attack.

*Must Have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with Buster sword*
*-20 damage to the user*
*The user can't use any forbidden-rank jutsu's next two turns*
*The user can't use any jutsu's with the Fusion Swords next two turns*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Ken ki will last 1 less turn if this is used*
*Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

~Restricted Ken Sen by usage, and decreased the damage of omni slash v2, also restricted it to consume ken ki a little~
~Declined~ OP
 
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( Neo-Supashian Guro Mossu ) - Neo-Spacian Glow Moss
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
The user pulls out the spore of a Neo-Spacian Glow Moss, which they then infuse with chakra and toss into the ground. Once it touches the ground, the spore instantly turns into a Neo-Spacian Glow Moss.
A Neo-Spacian Glow Moss is famed across the darkest caverns of Kusagakure for its stunning bio-luminescence, producing such intense light that a fragment of its body wrapped in gauze is enough to navigate the darkest reaches of the caverns. Usually harmless, human-shaped plants, the Neo-Spacian Glow Mosses are harvested for their unique ability, leading to them being legally protected.
The effect of a whole Neo-Spacian Glow Moss on an unsuspecting ninja is enough to give him such streaking pain in his eye that he can see only bright patches of purple wherever he turns for up to a minute. The effect on a person with extra-sensitive eyes, such as a Dojutsu wielder, is even more intense, causing effects that last for up to two minutes.
However, the moss loses its bio-luminescence every three seconds, and then takes another five seconds to recharge before it kicks in again. Since the moss is legally protected, the user can carry around only one spore.
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( Raffuresia Sedukushonu ) - Rafflesia Seduction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
The user drops a seed at any point on the ground. This seed is infused with the user's chakra and forced to grow instantly. The seed then turns into a Rafflesia Seduction, which bursts out of the ground.
The Rafflesia Seduction is one of the most ironic names ever given to a plant. Instead of "seducing" humans, the Rafflesia Seduction instead makes them attempt escaping from its vicinity. The reason for this is that the Rafflesia Seduction gives out an extremely pungent and disgusting scent that nauseates any person within a hundred meters. The people in contact with this scent have been noted to be unable to focus on even simple tasks and have passed unconscious from prolonged [ three minute ] contact with the smell. Kusagakure experimented with making a bomb using Rafflesia Seduction, but gave up when they realised their own men were also affected - except for people who were half-plant themselves, like Zetsu and other members of his clan.
Due to the lack of frequency of the pollination of a Rafflesia Seduction, the user may carry around only two seeds.
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~Both Declined~
 
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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Mid distance for charging
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+40 to whatever elemental jutsu used, If redirected)
Description: User holds his hands up in the form of making a diamond with his thumb and palms open. He then begins to focus his chakra to a required amount and timing to defend against the opposing jutsu. The user will have to collect chakra for this defense in order to be able to defend against the jutsu. The user needs to be far away enough to be able to change his chakra to the specified type to absorb and then redirect the attack back at them. Though it can defend and redirect, the highest rank the user can throw back at the opponent is A rank. S rank or higher will be blocked only, but instead of redirecting the attack the user will get a +10 damage boost to the next 2 elemental jutsus of that type.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to use again.
Note: User will take 10 damage due to impact.


Please add, edit, or give me any advice to help me make this approvable. Please and thanks~<3
~Declined~ OP
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if target is living being)
Description: The user's chakra will instantly change into Ice chakra allowing him to only use Water, Wind, and Ice for the rest of the turn. The user will place his hand on anything nearby to create a purple colored Ice that will never melt due to heat. This ice is manipulated into ice attacks for the Ice user. Anything can be frozen from water to people. The user will have a sort of icy touch on humans and animals. This ice will slowly grow on the victim and will keep growing unless the user lets go. The ice will make the person very cold, give pain, and weigh the person down depending on the amount. The ice can be broken, but it will deliver a sharp pain to the victim. All ice on the field can be used as material for ice attacks or can be manipulated into water to deliver water attacks.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: If ice is broken off when on the victim's body, it will deliver a sharp pain causing 5 damage.
Note: Anything can be frozen, even the ice created.
Note: This can be used as many times as wanted, but user must wait 1 turn to use again.


~Declined~ OP
Sorry about that. ^^ I totally forgot to add the japanese name :O. Sorry for the extra postings. I just don't wanna edit something that you guys already edited.
 
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(Genjutsu: Hyoukai Jinniku)-Illusion Technique: Melting Flesh
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will cause an opponent to feel and see the flesh on his bones slowly waste away. The look of this will cause tremendous fear and pain, rendering the enemy useless in combat.
*Note: The genjutsu lasts for 1 turn.
*Note: Cannot get out of it with pain.
*Note: Only 1 handseal is needed.
*Note: Can be used twice in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

(Katon: Shouten Kaen Tama)-Fire style: Focus Flame Shot
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Performing the first handseal and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of leveling almost anything in its path.
*Note: Usable 2 times in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyodan)-Wind Style: Wind Missles
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: This jutsu sends highly long ranged, fast-paced wind missiles at the target. The user will send out five bursts of wind highly concentrated to a point. These are extremely sharp, fast paced, piercing blasts capable of piecing various defences, and even if they are dodged or blocked the shock wave they create will throw the opponent off balance. The user is able to guide these blasts slightly by holding the seal used to create them, however, they move so fast that often a slight turn in the missiles direction is all that can be made even at long distances. They are extremely hard to avoid because they are so fast.
*Note: Usable once per battle.
*Note: 5 missiles are created and they travel at great speed.
*Note: Cause of the great chakra exhaustion the user cannot perform wind, genjutsu, ninjutsu for the next two turns.
*Note: If the wind is blocked, the opponent is thrown off balance cause of the great wind blast.
*Note: The missiles can be controlled only mid range by holding the seal used to create them.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ All Declined ~

(Suiton: Mizu Oni Kuike)-Water Style: Water Demon's Appetite
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A jutsu which utilizing the water around the opponent for it to work. Below the opponent, a head made of water emerges and tries to swallow up the opponent, having sharp dagger like teeth. If the initial chomp misses the opponent, a tongue will emerge to wrap around the opponent to try and pull them back under for a second attempt.
*Note: Must be performed on water.
*Note: Only 4 handseals are needed to perform this.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ Needs restricting ~

(Katon: Re-Za)-Fire Style: Laser
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user forces chakra into his/her palm, then compresses it into a small point, afterward it is blasted out in a heat laser. The start to this attack is slow because it requires a charging time, but it then after being fired moves at incredible speed. This increases in strength by shrinking the size of the attack. This technique burns using the energy of the chakra.
*Note: The laser at start is slow, but then incredibly fast.
*Note: No fire style next turn.
*Note: Can only be used 2 times in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ Declined, jutsu exists. ~
 
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you said that I must connect it with strings to be able to use it, so i connect it with strings too with the clothes, and being able to charge it with lightening chakra to make it faster is possible i believe and to let the opponent knows that i did i must mention it while battling, what is so hard in that?

Earth style: Babylon Tower (Doton: Babylontou)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description:The user fuses a large amount of his earth chakra into the ground under him. Then with much concentration, the user makes thick earth walls rise around him in a spinning motion which leads to a creation of a tower of very thick walls. The spot that the user stands on rises to the same height as the tower is which would be as high as a small mountain.

Ice style: Mirror Shields (hyuuton: miratokou)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks if possible.
~the 3 mirrors are moveable around the user
~they can't reflect forbidden genjutsu
~can only be used twice per battle
~can't stay more than 3 turns
~if the mirrors are damaged, it would stay only for 2 turns
~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack


Water style: Tsunami Clash ( Suiton: Tsunami gachin)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense/Attack
chakra: 40
damage: 80 (+5 damages if it hits the opponent from a short range)
description:The user charges a huge amount of his water chakra through the ground and then releases it toward the enemy from underground, creating a huge water wave that clashes upon the enemy harshly damaging them and make them fall unconscious. This jutsu can also be used to protect the user from the enemy’s fire style attacks.
~ can only be used three times per battle
~ the user can't use water jutsu in the same turn
~ can't stop Forbidden rank fire jutsus

~ What the hell happened to all the Japanese names ? ~
dead in the way before posting :D
i am terribly sorry, i forgot to write them and i was worried about it.

Earth style: Babylon Tower (Doton: Babylontou)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description:The user fuses a large amount of his earth chakra into the ground under him. Then with much concentration, the user makes thick earth walls rise around him in a spinning motion which leads to a creation of a tower of very thick walls. The spot that the user stands on rises to the same height as the tower is which would be as high as a small mountain.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Ice style: Mirror Shields (hyuuton: miratokou)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense
chakra: 40
damage: N/A
description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks [ up to B rank of elements ] if possible.
~the 3 mirrors are moveable around the user
~they can't reflect S rank or above genjutsu
~can only be used once per battle
~can't stay more than 3 turns
~Each time the mirrors are used to defend, their time on the battlefield reduces by one turn.
~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack

~ Approved, I edited some things ~

Water style: Tsunami Clash ( Suiton: Tsunami gachin)

rank: S
range: Short-Long
type: supplementary/defense/Attack
chakra: 40
damage: 80 (+5 damages if it hits the opponent from a short range)
description:The user charges a huge amount of his water chakra through the ground and then releases it toward the enemy from underground, creating a huge water wave that clashes upon the enemy harshly damaging them and make them fall unconscious. This jutsu can also be used to protect the user from the enemy’s fire style attacks.
~ can only be used three times per battle
~ the user can't use water jutsu in the same turn
~ can't stop Forbidden rank fire jutsus

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
 
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( shindaisha choushi seppaku) Sleeper Tone Pressure
Type-Supplementary/Attack
Rank-A
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-30
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user (Must Be Great At wind manipulation) will focus his chakra in the area around him, causing the pressure around him to greatly increase. This causes the muscles of the opponent(if caught) to instantly relax due to the rapidly applied pressure and they fall asleep. This justu is used to only subdue an opponent. it may not be used to kill someone.
*CAn only be taught by icemyster*
*User cannot kill opponent if they use this jutsu to subdue them*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

~ Declined o_O ~

(hi shokushu) Ice Tentacles
Type-Suplementary/attack
Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The user manipulates the water and wind in the air to create up to five ice tendrils that are linked to himself. The user may freely control these tendrils. While they are not exactly hardened ice once they come into contact with an object or opponent they may harden. Lasts four turns
*Can only be taught by icemyster*
*can only be used by ice users*
*Only usable once per Battle*

~ Approved ~

(Hyouton: gyakumodori) Ice release: Reversal
Type-Defense
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user manipulates the water and wind chakra's of an ice jutsu, causing it to deteriorate back into water and air. This can only be done by precise chakra control. Due to the strain of the jutsu, the user cannot use any ice jutsu the turn after.
*Can only Be Taught By Icemyster*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*CAn only be used once if used against a forbidden rank Ice Jutsu*

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Kuchiyose: sukuracchi honoo ga) Summoning: Scratch The Flame Moth
Type-Suppplementary
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage- Depends on jutsu
Description-
After wiping blood across the Mark of The Monarch(Moth Summoning Contract), the user summons Scratch, the flame Moth. In appearance the Moth, About the same size as gamabunta, is A bright red, and covered in flame like hairs. He has the ability to fire these hairs off like senbon, creating a flaming sensation that makies the opponent feel as if he where on fire. He may use fire jutsu up to the rank of the user.
*Can only be Summoned By those with the mark of the monarch*
*Must Be Taught by Icemyster*
*Cannot Be Re-summoned in a battle*

~ Declined ~
 
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(Sanzoku Taijutsu : Banteki Dageki) Bandit Taijutsu : Savage Blow
Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : Savage Blow Is A Combo Attack Made Out Of Six Moves.
1 - The User Fills His Left Fist With Chakra And Then Punches The Opponent's Chest
2 - The User Fills His Other Hand With Chakra And Makes An Upper-cut Punch To The Opponent's Chin
3 - The User Infuses His Right Leg With Chakra And Spins 360 Degrees With The Leg Extended To His Side And During Impact The Leg Is Aimed For The Opponent's Legs Making Him Fall Down
4 - Once Completing The Spin The User Infuses His Left Leg With Chakra And Stomps On The Opponent's Rib
5 - The User Infuses His Other Leg With Chakra Again And Performs A Sweep Kick That Kicks The Opponent Back In Air
6 - Once Sent The Opponent Into Air The User Steps His Left Leg From While Infusing Wind Chakra Into His Right Arm And Strikes The Opponent With An Open Palm - Releasing The Wind Chakra, Sending The Opponent Flying Backwards.
- No Taijutsu During This Turn And The Next Turn After Using This Technique
- Once Per Battle
- Can Only Be Teached By Spade (former Benazz)

~ Approved ~

(Katon : Hotto Jouki) Fire Release : Hot Steam
Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : 50
Description : The User Inhales Focusing Fire Chakra In His Gullet And Then Exhales A Great Wave Of Hot Steam Into The Atmosphere Heating It Up.
- The Steam Lasts For 3 Turns
- +10 To All Fire Release Jutsu During This Steam Is In The Atmosphere.
- Can Be Used To Attract Thunder Clouds.
- Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu

~ Steam is a CE ; Declined ~

(Genjutsu : Kunai Shawa) Illusion Technique : Kunai Shower
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Throws A Kunai At The Opponent And Sends The Opponent At A Genjutsu Where The Opponent Thinks That Once The Kunai Reaches Him Many Other Kunais Start Piercing His Body From All Sides. In Reality If The Opponent Blocks The Real Kunai His Body Only Gets Paralysed Due To The Effects Of The Genjutsu.

~ Restrictions ? ~
 
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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The first thing the user does is rotating a part of his body by using one of his legs as a post while the other one rotates backwards in a circle motion (compare it to a compasses). This way the user can avoid thrusts completely and he can postpone the moment a horizontal slash would hit him (he can't dodge that one). Either way the user turns one of his shoulders 90? backwards, which gives the ideal stance for the attack: The user holds in each hand a sword horizontally, however with a reversed handgrip. One hand is positioned at the users hip, while the other one is positioned just above the head.
Then when the opponents attack is avoided or postponed, the user brings the upper sword down and the lower sword up like a double guillotine untill the users both arms are completely stretched (the lower is now up and vice versa). This way the user can cut of an entire arm, make the opponent drop his sword or even cut half his head off.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a triple guillotine which adds +10 damage*

Position of the swords before the strike:
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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user crosses his two swords across his chest upwards. Then the user focuses katon based chakra into his feet to heet up the space around him, making him and his swords look bending or waving (that effect you see when it's extremely hot). This results in making it extremely difficult to block/avoid the attack as you can't really see it well (unless Byakugan/Sharingan).
After that the user uses the same chakra in his feet to give him a speed-boost, he catapults himself forwards and attacks the target by swinging the swords across his chest, resulting in a descending flat diagonal-crossing slash from both swords while the swords are twisted during the slash for added force, ending in a position with the stretched arms and the swords point forwards behind the opponent. The attack is strong enough to break through opponents thrusts and it can attack multiple targets at the same time.
When used with Yubashiri, due to the friction of the swords and Yubashiri being very flammable, the swords get on fire, increasing the damage with +10 (doesn't count as a fire jutsu) or with a normal sword katon-chakra can be infused with it as you already were doing that to give yourself a boost (in this case it counts as a fire jutsu) and it is called Yaki Oni Giri - Burning Demon Slash -
As last the move can also be done without first making heat, thus making the user attack a bit sooner. Though it will not have any effect on the damage, in this case it's called Oni Giri - Demon Slash -


*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*The fire-combo (with Yubashiri or a normal sword) can only be done once per battle*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a third slash on top of the other two at the same time and adds +10 damage*

Before the attack:
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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence at the same time
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (-20)
Description: This is the ultimate and strongest technique of the Santoryu-style. The user grabs his sword with his left hand in a reversed handgrip and points the tip of the blade diagonally down to the right. The user grabs with his right also a sword with a normal handgrip, points the tip of the blade diagonally up to the right and places the end of the handle at the guard of the other sword, making the hands of the user be close together.
After that the user quickly starts spinning both swords. The one the left counterclockwise, while the one the right clockwise which results in giving the swords extreme momentum.
After that the user goes at max speed (chakra in the feet) towards the opponent (or if the opponent attacks he just steps forwards). The spinning blades can nearly nulify/destroy any incoming sword-based attack and when the user is close at the opponent he makes two incredibly powerful horizontal slashes, using the momentum of the spins. As last, by holding a sword in his mouth, the user can do one more horizontal slash to finish just after the two other slashes and he ends behind the opponent.
It can be used as a defence against jutsu's due to the extreme spinning motion, however it depends on the type and nature of the jutsu (FE it will not defend against a jutsu that attacks the user from all sides).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used when learned the Santoryu-style*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*User takes -20 damage due to the strain on the body*
*When combined with Butai Kyuuen the added strenght will be +40 instead of 20 as the spinning motion creates an enormous blaze of the used element. It will however backfire giving the user another -20 damage + Butai Kyuuen can't be used anymore for 4 turns*
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Can someone please take a look -_-

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Sword Arts: Elemental Sword Finisher (Subeta gegei: soshi subeta shiagari)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damge: 80
Description: The user will make 4 clones and each one will infuse their swords with each element.
*One clone will infuse their sword with lighting chakra making a current of lighting around their sword*
*One clone will infuse their sword with fire makig a current of fire around their sword*
*One clone will infuse their sword with water making a torrent of water around their sword*
*One clone will Infuse their sword with earth making a strong layer of earth around their sword*
*The user will Infuse their sword with wind making a rotating aura of wind around their sword*
Once they infuse their swords witht the elements the clones and the user will circle the opponent and move in high speeds attacking the opponet from all directions making it nearly impossible to react to it.
(Can only be taught by chago)
(Can only be used twice a battle.)
(Must know all 5 of the basic elements)
(Must know shadow clone technique)
(Must have a sword)
(Must wait at last 3 turns in order to re-use)

Sword Arts: Develish Strike (Subeta Gegei: ijin dageki)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will make a stance putting both of his hands in the sword's handle and spreading his/her legs then the user will charge at very high speeds at the opponent making a series of 9 slashes all around the opponent then the user will focus great amount of chakra around the user's sword that will make a powerful slash that can break any barrier tecnique of the opponent up to A-Rank.
(Can only be taugh by chago)
(Can only be used three times a battle)
(Have to wait at least 3 turns in order to re-use)

~ Both Declined ~
 
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ninja art: intense chakra blade (ninjutsu:kitsui chakra ken)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:the user takes a kunai or and concentrates their chakra into it to form a temporary sword out of it.
(this will not still work if the kunai is thrown)
(can only last as long as you chakra because it takes the required chakra per turn not just once)

Ninja Art: chakra claw (ninjutsu: chakra tsume)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user forms his chakra into a pair of claws for two turns in which are as hard as steel and rip through the opponent internaly.

~ Declined ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Name: (Suiton: Atomikku Shin'en: Mittsu Dankai no Suijou Metsubou) Water Style: Atomic Abyss: 3 Stages of Aquatic Destruction
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Close-long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 90
Description: 1st Stage: The user creates several large orbs of quickly spinning water into the air in the area around the user in a way that seas are commonly filled with mines. 2nd Stage: The user then creates several more Orbs of water in a wider radius from him. 3rd Stage: The user then makes 1 hand seal and forces all the orbs to explode simultaneously, destroying all on the field, leaving it an empty abyss of land.
*Must be around a large supply of water*
*when in stage two or three, only 2 moves can be used*
*must know Atomic Abyss*
*can only be used/taught by Lord of Kaos*
*Can only be used once*

Name: How Could You Be So Heartless? (hau kan otaku dakara reiketsukan )
Type: Offensive
Rank: S rank
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: instant death (for user and enemy if hit)
Description: After opening the 8 gates, the user rushes at the enemy at speeds unseen and performs a flying bicycle kick to the chin, knocking him very high into the air. He then jumps into the air, matching the enemy’s height. He then punches as strong as he can at the enemy’s chest., piercing it and grapping the enemy’s heart and squeezes it, causing it to burst. He then grabs the enemy’s head, and turns upside-down, and they both spiral at extreme speeds at about 200 mph towards the ground.
*can only use 1 jutsu the turn this is used*
*Instant Death after use*
*must know the EIG Release*
*Can only be used once per battle*

I know this may sound OP'd but its the last gate opened and it's SUPPOSED to like, kill both the user and opponent

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit either ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Doton : Thuchi Kuro - Earth Release : Earth Clone .
Rank: S
Type : Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User Makes 11 Handseals At Row And Earth In Front Of Them Starts To Form A Living Copy Of Them .

- Clone Can Use A - Rank Earth -
- Usable 2 Times Per Battle -
- Only I Can Teach This -

Yaiba Waza : Hagane Setsudanki - Blade Arts : Steel Cutter .
Rank: S
Type : Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damge: N/A
Description: User Will Focus Their Chakra And Make The Sword To Be Covered On Green Flames , They Can Cut Throught Normal Steel Swords By Just Hitting Them And They Will Be In Half , Due The How Many Hits You Make With It .
- Must Have A Sword -
- Only I Can Teach This -
- Usable 1 Time Per Battle -
- Costs 5 + Damage To User Every Turn Due The Burn On Their Hands -
- Costs 5 Chakra Per Turn -
- Lasts 2 Turns -

Yaiba Waza : Enkou Surasshu - Blade Arts : Flame Slash .
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damge: 50
Description: User Will Consetrate Their Chakra At Their Hands And It Will Turn To Flames , Then User Takes Their Sword And Slashes Opponent With Burning Blade , It Causes Burning .
- Only I Can Teach This -
- Must Have Sword -
- Flame Makes 10 + Damage For 3 Turns -
- Lasts 3 Turns -
- Burn Makes 5 + Damage For 6 Turns -

~ All Declined, do not resubmit any of them ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Fortress Blaze)-Jōkaku Enjō
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
This ability creates an immense wall of flame that surrounds the target and then forms a huge contained sphere of flame in which to imprison enemies, once the enemies are trapped within the fire walls the fire will not allow them to leave if the opponent tries to escape from above as to fly out of the fire wall the flames will attack, and if the opponent remains in the walls for to long they will suffice because the walls will slowly eat away all the oxygen from within the walls until there is none left.
Note: Can be used twice in battle
Note: Last 3 turns
Note: Take 2 turns for all the oxygen to be drained from the within the walls

(Fuuton: Kito Kaze)-Wind Style: Ear Plugs
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulation wind in both of his hands once this is done he will cover his ears with the wind then the wind will continue to spin around his ears in a circling motions causing all sound to be blocked from his ears.
*Note: Can be used twice during battle
*Note: Last for 3 turns
*Note: Can be deactivate at anytime

~ Both declined ~

(Satetsu raitingu ridairekuto) - Iron Sand: Lighting redirect
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: none
Description: The user creates a giant pillar of Iron sand then once the pillar is created the user will magnetize the pillar making it in a big magnet once this is done any lighting jutsu used by either fighter will automatic be drawn in by the pillar making it impossible to fight with lighting jutsu the whole fight
note:This jutsu may be used twice in battle

~ Needs restricting ~

(Sanshoku no Gan'yaku) Three Colored Pills
Type:Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:None
Damage At bottom
Description:The Three Colored Pills are secret medicine used to power up the user . As the name suggests, there are three pills, each with a different color. First is the green Spinach Pill(Hōrengan), next is the yellow Curry Pill ( Karēgan), and last is the red Chilli Pill ( Tongarashigan).
By forcibly converting the body's fat reserves into chakra, each successive pill ingested gives a tremendous power boost. The Chilli Pill is even said to increase one's power a hundred times. However, the pills have a drawback. Each pill damages the body, poisoning it and since the third pill converts all one's fat reserves, the user will become dangerously emaciated. It is said that after the third pill, death is imminent.

Green Spinach Pill: Increases the user speed and power up to the Fourth gate, Backdraw after the user has used this pill any jutsu done two turns after this pill will take longer to perform plus the user will be poisoned it will take 4 turns before the poison takes a full affect and the user becomes unable to fight
Yellow Curry Pill: Doubles the user power once the pill has been used any jutsu done. This turn or the next will be moved up one rank so any B rank jutsus will be A rank now plus the Green pill power ups, Back draw once this pill has been used the turn after the next one any jutsus will drop two ranks, So any A rank jutsu will be C rank now for that turn plus the back draw from the Green pill and instead of the poison taking 4 turns it only takes 3 before the user becomes unable to fight.
Red Chilli Pill: This pill is only to be used of the user doesn’t care about his life anymore and just wants to win. Once the user uses this it will increases reaction times and performance 10 times over,increasing the users speed,power and reactions on par with opening 6 gates. Plus the power ups from the green and yellow pills. Back draw once the pill is used the very next turn you user will fall to the ground and will be unable to fight or move if the user is not taking to the Hospital in time he will die.

Note: each pill can only be used once during battle
Note: if you user uses the pills out of order he may not use the other pill for example(If I use the red pill first I cant use any of the pills same for the yellow if I use the yellow first I can use the green at all)

~ What the hell ? This is a canon, Akimichi tool. Are you an Akimichi ? If yes, Declined, resubmit with giving them only canon effects. If not, Declined and do not resubmit ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Doton: Akuma Kiritateru) – Earth Release: Demon Slayers

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will draw earth around both their arms encrusting them in colossal sized fists that can be used to defend against attacks or use to strike the opponent with a devastating force.
~Declined~ Similar (Multiple) Jutsu Exist

(Doton: Iwa Fuuin Hashira) – Earth Style: Stoned seal pillars

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the needed hand seals manipulates their chakra to create 4 stone pillars rise from the ground and surround the opponent and then with swift movements of their hands the user commands the stone pillars to crash down on the target binding and crushing their arms and legs leaving them restrained to the floor.
~Pending~ Limits?

~Resubmitting Below~
(Katon: Hotaru no Mai) – Fire Release: Dance of the Fire Flies

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user shoots from their mouth multiple fireballs of intense heat shoot out like a storm of fireflies and converge on a large area and leave the surrounding area scorched from the intensity of the flames.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
~Approved~


(Doton: Yuueki Tsuchi no Jutsu) Earth Release: Concrete Earth technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user manipulates their earth chakra to create a patch of earth below the target to change into a cement like state and with the body weight of the opponent will then cause them to sink into the cement like substance and the user will then harden the the cement to become solid again trapping them in place and restricting their movement
~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists
 
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